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Utada Hikaru - Hikari (PLANITb Remix)

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YTYuyu
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meiikyuu wrote:


hello ^^ feel free to ignore what u dont like xD

249's Easy
no kiai time? xD ok lol nope :P. it's a kiai burst lol

  1. 00:26:320 (5) - make this slider neater.. try copy and pasting 00:24:936 (4) - and get rid of the reverse ^^ no i actually did this so that this slider can be slightly aligned to (3), and the beginning of (4). i feel that doing that would make me feel uncomfortable.
  2. 00:46:628 (3) - move 3rd point to x:116 y:252 no then it'll ruin the blanket for the end of the previous slider.
  3. 00:50:782 (2) - make better blanket around 3? fine i'll adjust it...
  4. 01:49:859 (1) - add whistle at beginning? sounds empty here no this part focuses on claps, so adding 1 whistle would ruin that consistency pattern.


no big problems here <3

i like this song too o_o, hope it gets ranked! star~~
ty for the mod :D. and DakeDekaane hitsounds are fine to me. if i make it any lower, it'll feel as if the hitsounds are "too" quiet.

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: ~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76372
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Deep River Byakugan249

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Combo4 : 128,128,255

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Yasora
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Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks for mod and star all~

updated :3
popner
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popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[249's Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:19:397 (1) - nazi - spacing
00:57:013 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/NZ7A -> not looks good. This is better: http://puu.sh/NZ8I


[Hard]
00:24:013 (3,4) - use jumps here like 00:16:859 (4,5,6)?
00:28:628 (1,2) - change to a slider?http://puu.sh/NZ0T The 1.83x doesn't make the flow slow down here.
00:42:936 (4) - NC?
01:14:782 (4,1) - NC should be on (4)

[Insane]
00:15:859 - should be an unusual spot in rhythm: http://puu.sh/NYJj or http://puu.sh/NYNH Yes you may need to re-organize the pattern, but the waste of rhythm is just unbearable to me.
00:23:089 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/NYOA
00:32:320 (1) - ^ isn't a triple
01:03:128 (5) - the triple have nothing to follow. So delete (5) or change to triple like 01:00:474 (3,4,5)?
01:04:974 (4) - ^
01:56:089 (3,4,5) - I think use same pattern as 01:54:243 (2,3) is better
02:01:051 (1) - miss a NC?

That's all I can find. GL~
Yasora
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Yasora
thanks for mod~
DakeDekaane
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DakeDekaane
Hi, it's me again .w.

Giving a deeper analysis of the beatmap, the song is too nice and I couldn't resist to make a map for my selfish fun, and I found inconsistence in the beats at the end of the song, so I found a better BPM, in my opinion, 130.034, same offset, you could try it. >w<
Yasora
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Topic Starter
Yasora

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, it's me again .w.

Giving a deeper analysis of the beatmap, the song is too nice and I couldn't resist to make a map for my selfish fun, and I found inconsistence in the beats at the end of the song, so I found a better BPM, in my opinion, 130.034, same offset, you could try it. >w<
but, I think the current timing is fine.. so no change sorry ;_;
Miya
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Joined June 2011
Miya
Timing assistance as requested.
I got -8 in the offset. Using your offset i get 93% acc in insane, but using -8 offset i got 98++% in insane.

:)
Yasora
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Yasora
thank you for timing check \:D/
pimp
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pimp
general

01:16:593 - timeline here, bpm 130 (sounds better imo, please someone confirm it : D)


249's easy

01:02:320 (3) - personaly i don like long sliders with repeat in this case
remove repeat, start another long slider at 01:04:166 end at 01:05:551.. (its consistent to the previous sliders)
and make 3 circles in the next white ticks ??
..........
01:35:089 (1) - maybe end this slider at 01:36:013 and make 1/1 slider at 01:36:474 ?
02:06:474 - spinner end here or in another long white tick?

thats all :?

good luck ★
Yasora
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Yasora
still don't want change timing :'(
I will give you kudos if 249 fix something :3

thank you~
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu

pimpG wrote:

249's easy

01:02:320 (3) - personaly i don like long sliders with repeat in this case
remove repeat, start another long slider at 01:04:166 end at 01:05:551.. (its consistent to the previous sliders)
and make 3 circles in the next white ticks ??
.......... no because it'd make me feel uncomfortable during gameplay, and the blanket between this and (2) at the next combo would be gone.
01:35:089 (1) - maybe end this slider at 01:36:013 and make 1/1 slider at 01:36:474 ? no that bump is good enough to let the player know that the lyrics are gonna change.
02:06:474 - spinner end here or in another long white tick? no the instrumental is still fading out here.

thats all :?

good luck ★
no changes made but ty for the mod.
Niva
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Niva
o/ (bingung mau nulis apa orz ._.)

[General]

-> Actually you need another timing section - I'm very sure the offset shifts around your kiai time, this is what I got:

SPOILER

...this also explains the -8 and another timing issues above (:

[Insane]

  1. 00:20:081 (2,3,4) - I prefer something like this here, it's much tidier ((3) is stacked to (6)) plus the circular movement here plays more natural imo:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:27:005 (2,3,4,5) - To avoid clustering here I prefer to use a triple first, then repeating slider instead of repeating slider first then triple (because on ~x:180 y:288 your free space is very available)
  3. 00:31:158 (3) - (optional) Move to ~x:304 y:87? imo this angle flows better with your (4,5) because it's a straight line >_<
  4. 00:36:005 (1) - Minor stuff, but actually you can move this to ~x:256 y:184 to form a triangle with your previous (6,1) :3
  5. 00:38:543 (3,4,5) - (optional) Uhm, what's with (3)'s curve here >_< - arrange like this perhaps? Placing (5,6,7) in the middle of your two sliders flows better imo:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:42:235 (2) - Move to ~x:130 y:57 to form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) here?
  7. 00:46:505 (8,9) - Perhaps stack (8) to (2) and use a wave on (9) here for a fancier flow? xD
  8. 00:52:620 (1) - ...uhm, if you can curve it more (and more symmetrical as well) it'll fit the vocals better:
    211,149,52620,6,0,B|267:189|346:148|329:80,1,180,4|8
  9. 00:58:620 (2) - (optional) Put in ~x:419 y:127 to make the spacing with (1) looks more natural?
  10. 01:09:005 (4,1,2,3,4) - I think forcing (2) to overlap with (4) doesn't look good here... Again, definitely this part can be made more natural:
    SPOILER
  11. 01:12:235 (3,4) - (optional) Would be awesome imo if the arc is downward instead : (3) in ~x:173 y:359, (4) in ~x:259 y:253
  12. 01:12:928 (1) - Please move your red waypoint upper (~x:438 y:158), currently the red waypoint's placement is reeeeeeeeeally forced >_<
  13. 01:17:543 (3) - (optional) Curve upward instead? I'd rather make the flow continuous with (4) and (1)...
  14. 01:20:081 (6) - Move the whistle from (5) here? The vocal's pitch goes higher here...
  15. 01:31:389 (1) - Starting on this point, idk why but imo it will be a lot fancier if you map following the secondary instrument (bass)... Just what I thought of though >_<
  16. 01:41:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - ...don't really get the pattern here to be honest... Perhaps try this:
    SPOILER
  17. 01:42:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - What are you following here actually... The song goes on nothing here - I suggest to at least remove (2) to follow the bass~
  18. 01:52:158 (2,3) - (optional) Select both and then CTRL+R?
  19. 01:58:158 (4,6) - Why the whistle discontinued here? The synth is still worth-following though...
[Hard]

  1. 00:16:389 (3) - Curve this downward instead to give more power to the following jump?
  2. 00:28:389 (4) - (optional) Put in ~x:321 y:135 to make (3,4,1) in a straight line?
  3. 00:31:158 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ...The jump (especially on (3,4)) looks quite random for me, perhaps arrange like this?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:38:774 (3) - (optional) CTRL+R to make (3,4,5) a circular movement?
  5. 00:45:928 (2,3,4) - Same here, I'd rather CTRL+R for a fancy flow~
  6. 00:47:312 (2,3) - Remove one repeat on (3)? Because the vocal stops on 00:48:120...
  7. 00:53:197 (2) - (optional) I'd curve this to the left instead to make an antagonistic effect with (1), but this is purely optional~
  8. 00:57:005 (2,3,4,5) - Another jump which looks random for me... Try this instead perhaps?
    SPOILER
  9. 01:03:120 (4) - Move the midpoint to ~x:291 y:173? Definitely curved too much compared to (3) here...
  10. 01:09:235 (1) - (optional) Try to use a Z-shaped slider here, to follow the vocals' atmosphere more? (or at least make this more symmetrical orz, currently it's pretty much clear the midpoint is too far to the left)
  11. 01:19:158 (3) - Hmm, actually I prefer to create a slider jump here, but it's not a must (:
  12. 01:28:274 (2) - Err, is this triple intentional? Doesn't fit the rest of the map imo ._.
  13. 01:34:620 (5,6) - Same as Insane - switch the whistle's position?
  14. 01:38:543 (4,1) - Personally I really disliked the overlap here - try this instead?
    SPOILER
    [img][spoilerbox][img]http://i.imgur.com/ATf01.png[/img]
    [/img][/spoilerbox]
  15. 01:39:697 (3) - Why not just copy-paste this from (4) and flip horizontal orz ._.
  16. 01:42:466 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:28:274, but this one makes more sense at least~
  17. 01:43:389 (4,5) - (optional) idk why... I don't really feel right with the whistle's placement here - perhaps use whistle on (4)'s start and end + (5)'s end?
  18. 01:56:774 (4,5) - ...why straight line here >_< - I really recommend a pseudo-pentagon pattern by placing (4) in ~x:370 y:12 and (5) in ~x:279 y:58
[Normal]

  1. 00:18:697 (4) - ...drag midpoint to ~x:412 y:312 to avoid overlap? Minor stuff though >_<
  2. 00:28:620 (1) - ...Why don't you add a circle here and start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after? The damp sound here sounds too dramatic not to be mapped imo ._.
  3. 00:32:312 (1) - Why whistle here? Previously you don't have a consecutive two 1/1 whistles o.o
  4. 00:35:081 (3) - (optional) Actually if you want to be safe you can just encircle 00:32:774 (2)'s start here~
  5. 00:37:851 (1) - Err, to be honest I don't really get your shape here... If you're going for a tilted slider wave I suggest something like this though:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:39:697 (1) - ...isn't the finish supposed to be on the next (1)'s start here? Whistle should be here instead imo xD
  7. 00:50:312 (4) - (optional) Put slightly higher to emphasize the arc from (3)?
  8. 00:50:312 (4,1,2,3) - Uhm, are you forming a diamond or square here? Looks nowhere closer to both imo... Creating a neat square/diamond here won't be hard though (:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:03:005 (3) - (optional) Make this encircle (1)'s start instead?
  10. 01:10:389 (4) - Whistle on slider's end here? Sounds good with the vocals and it also dramatizes your upcoming finish~
  11. 01:12:235 (3,1) - Just a suggestion:
    SPOILER
  12. 01:20:081 (4) - Remove whistle here? Personally I feel better without it as the vocal's main point is on your next (1)'s start here...
  13. 01:23:543 (3) - Same here, I'd leave this with only clap as there's nothing for the whistle to follow here...
  14. 01:25:158 (3) - (optional) imo it's better to face this slider to the right instead, it'll avoid clustering plus it'll also emphasize the triangle (:
  15. 01:36:004 (2,2) - ...remove whistle on both (2)? Sounds better if less noisy imo :3
  16. 01:58:159 (2,3,1,2,3) - I highly recommend to create a pentagon here - yes I can see you're trying to form a symmetry on (1,2,3), but it results in an abrupt angle between (3,1) >_<
[249's Easy]

  1. 00:21:235 (3) - (optional) Not a fan of a wave here actually... Perhaps try this? xD
    SPOILER
  2. 00:22:620 (1) - Finish (instead of whistle) sounds more dramatic on the repeat here imo~
  3. 00:28:620 (1) - I'd rather add another circle here, start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after and form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) - looks fancier before the spinner this way I think :3
  4. 00:34:620 (1,2) - (optional) I get your idea to create a straight line here, but perhaps move (1) to ~x:194 y:288 and (2) to ~x:254 y:362? Will be more elegant imo if (2) is in the center...
  5. 00:36:928 (3,1) - ...err, why your clapping altered here? Previously your claps are consistent on downbeats, now they're 1/1 after downbeats o.o
  6. 00:42:928 (4) - Suggestion, decrescendo here?
  7. 00:49:851 (1) - Whistle on slider's end here won't hurt imo (plus it fits the vocals, really xD)
  8. 00:52:620 (1,2) - (optional) Will be much tidier with slider encircles imo:
    SPOILER
  9. 00:59:081 (4) - Perhaps move it slightly to the left? The arc here fits the vocal's atmosphere imo...
  10. 01:00:466 (2) - ...also here, starting from here where the claps go, actually o.o
  11. 01:09:235 (3) - (optional) To be honest I don't really like how this slider was shaped ("squared" waypoints)... I'd do something like this:
    237,84,69235,2,0,B|155:110|86:57|86:57|100:144|21:192,2,320,2|4|2
  12. 01:22:158 (1) - ...remove finish here? No need for a finish 2/1 before your next one I think >_<
  13. 01:33:235 (4) - I'd encircle (5) instead of (3) here, it'll avoid clustering imo~
  14. 01:35:081 (1) - Same as my previous code, but for this you can just simply move the second bezier waypoint to ~x:80 y:185 to encircle (2) if you don't want to drastically alter the shape :3
  15. 01:53:543 (1) - (optional) Finish on slider's start here, as Yasora did in her diffs?
...imo current mapping is fine, but personally I think it's more fun to map based on the instruments on this song (especially on the higher diffs)...
Good luck then~
Yasora
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Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed timing and some mod
(@byaku-nyan plz fix your timing xD)

makasih ka niva :3
ngg, kayaknya ak lebih sk ikut vocal drpd instrument orz
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu

Niva wrote:

[249's Easy]

  1. 00:21:235 (3) - (optional) Not a fan of a wave here actually... Perhaps try this? xD
    SPOILER
    alright the blanket looks nicer...fixed.
  2. 00:22:620 (1) - Finish (instead of whistle) sounds more dramatic on the repeat here imo~ the vocals aren't loud enough to add the finish so i feel that a whistle is loud enough to match the vocals.
  3. 00:28:620 (1) - I'd rather add another circle here, start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after and form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) - looks fancier before the spinner this way I think :3 no i feel that i'd be rushing this part for beginners in this part of i do add a circle here.
  4. 00:34:620 (1,2) - (optional) I get your idea to create a straight line here, but perhaps move (1) to ~x:194 y:288 and (2) to ~x:254 y:362? Will be more elegant imo if (2) is in the center... then the stack on (3) would be gone if i do move (2) at the center.
  5. 00:36:928 (3,1) - ...err, why your clapping altered here? Previously your claps are consistent on downbeats, now they're 1/1 after downbeats o.o it's because of the lyrics. since it changes and since there's that sound in the instrumental, i want that to represent a new pattern in the song.
  6. 00:42:928 (4) - Suggestion, decrescendo here? alright i've been thinking about this tbh...idk if i should be doing this or not, but alright, to emphasize the vocals.
  7. 00:49:851 (1) - Whistle on slider's end here won't hurt imo (plus it fits the vocals, really xD) i disagree. i use my hitsounds wisely, in this case, if i add a whistle, then i'll find it unfitting and i feel that it doesn't belong there at all since it'll sound odd for me even if it matches the vocals.
  8. 00:52:620 (1,2) - (optional) Will be much tidier with slider encircles imo:
    SPOILER
    alright it looks nice so fixed.
  9. 00:59:081 (4) - Perhaps move it slightly to the left? The arc here fits the vocal's atmosphere imo... moved it to the right. i'd feel uncomfortable if i move it to the left.
  10. 01:00:466 (2) - ...also here, starting from here where the claps go, actually o.o if you're saying that i should align this to (5), then no. i don't want to ruin that small blanket for this slider. although it may look bad, i want the flow to be smooth. making a shape out of this will break the flow during gameplay.
  11. 01:09:235 (3) - (optional) To be honest I don't really like how this slider was shaped ("squared" waypoints)... I'd do something like this:
    237,84,69235,2,0,B|155:110|86:57|86:57|100:144|21:192,2,320,2|4|2
    hmm...alright it works.
  12. 01:22:158 (1) - ...remove finish here? No need for a finish 2/1 before your next one I think >_< that finish is meant to match that sound in the instrumental. i feel that it'd sound odd with both whistles in this part.
  13. 01:33:235 (4) - I'd encircle (5) instead of (3) here, it'll avoid clustering imo~
  14. 01:35:081 (1) - Same as my previous code, but for this you can just simply move the second bezier waypoint to ~x:80 y:185 to encircle (2) if you don't want to drastically alter the shape :3 this one no. i will not ruin my blanket on (2,4) just for this.
  15. 01:53:543 (1) - (optional) Finish on slider's start here, as Yasora did in her diffs? oh Ya-nyan did this? alright for consistency.
...imo current mapping is fine, but personally I think it's more fun to map based on the instruments on this song (especially on the higher diffs)...
Good luck then~
alright then ty for the mod Niva-san ;). fixed the timing as well...i hope i got it correct like the other diffs...

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Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Deep River Byakugan249

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Tsukasa
471 posts
Joined June 2011
Tsukasa
orz too nice...

It'd probably be a map people would go back playing. Here's a star isntead
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

Tsukasa wrote:

orz too nice...

It'd probably be a map people would go back playing. Here's a star isntead
arigatou for your star :'''D
Himesaka Noa
osu! Alumni
3,315 posts
Joined February 2012
Himesaka Noa
Hi, Yasora.

... Sorry, i can't mod this beatmap because this beatmap looks good for me T^T
this is some my suggestions...

[Normal]
- 01:09:248 (1) New Combo
- 01:51:687 (3) New Combo
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

Underflow wrote:

Hi, Yasora.

... Sorry, i can't mod this beatmap because this beatmap looks good for me T^T
this is some my suggestions...

[Normal]
- 01:09:248 (1) New Combo
- 01:51:687 (3) New Combo
sorry not change both x''D because for consistent combo set
but thanks for mod :''3
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
Thank you for request \(^^)/

General

Different Kiai-Times (Really, Easy has no kiai-time? Why?)

249's Easy

01:13:864 (1) - spacing
01:35:072 (1) - move like this? looks better
01:57:226 (1) - ^

Good luck ^^
-Napoleon-
307 posts
Joined January 2011
-Napoleon-
Myyyyy moddddd! (Very noob mod :C) :D
Easy:
01:16:633 - 01:31:380 in kiai part and add preview point in the first timing selection as well
00:20:787 (2) - Remove whistle sound
01:35:072 (1) - This isn't symmetrical and symmetrical is awesome
01:57:226 (1) - ^
Normal:
00:23:094 (1) - Unsnapped (I think)
LOOKS CLEAR! :D
Hard:
01:09:248 (1) - This isn't symmetrical
LOOKS PERFECT! :D
Insane:
NOTHING TO SAY THIS IS AMAZING!

Amazing music + Amazing mapset = Amazing star
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
from my queue ~
allo yasora-san .w.

[General]
  1. add "game" on the tags?
[249's Easy]
~~~
and yes, no kiai at here?

[Normal]
  1. 02:00:457: I think its better to move the spinner to 02:00:918 since the vocal starts there
[Hard]
  1. 00:48:248: add clap on the slider head?
  2. 00:50:787: clap on the slider tail?
  3. 00:53:787: clap on the head?
  4. 00:55:633: ^
  5. 00:57:710: ^ slider tail
  6. 01:49:611: clap?
  7. 01:51:226: ^ on the tail?
  8. 01:58:611: ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:710: clap on the slider end?
  2. 00:26:094: ^
  3. 00:39:018: clap on the reverse and at the slider end?
itu aja :3
good luck~ ^w^)//~
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you all~ fixed some
also @kurohana I will give you kudos if byaku use your mod ^^



new page as always
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/

Xavier18488 wrote:

Myyyyy moddddd! (Very noob mod :C) :D

Easy:
01:16:633 - 01:31:380 in kiai part and add preview point in the first timing selection as well no i don't like kiai times.
00:20:787 (2) - Remove whistle sound no that whistle is to emphasize the instrumental.
01:35:072 (1) - This isn't symmetrical and symmetrical is awesome
01:57:226 (1) - ^ fixed on the last mod.

Amazing music + Amazing mapset = Amazing star
Ya-nyan give kurohana kd since i fixed everything "but" the kiai. kiai times can be inconsistent if there's a guest diff in the map. ty for the mods everyone.

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Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Deep River Byakugan249

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V E
187 posts
Joined March 2011
V E
hi yasora, req from mod queue

hee, sorry agak telat, kemaren2 susah bgt ngedonlot beatmap apa aja ~_~
+lagi banyak kerjaan hari ini, jadi ngemodnya agak cepet

[249's Easy]
i think you have to follow yasora kiai times,
i prefer any note that placing just on white tick on 1/2 beat snap divisor, coz it easy diff...
i'm a little bit uncomfortable hearing about changing clap pattern, although the lyric vocal is changing too
but it's fine... no problem,

[Insane]
00:42:941 > 00:45:479 - klo mau lebih enaknya sih, mulai dari detik ini, pokoknya yg kombo nomor 5,3,3,3 ke kombo 1 spacingnya samain 1,2x, trus yg kombo nomor 2,2,2 diliat spacing prev sama nextnya samain biar pas, yg sebelumnya kan 1,9 ; 1,9 ; 2,3... klo mau bertahap naik disesuaikan aja... klo bingung tanya aja nanti XD

~
normal sama hard gk masalah sih, udah bagus dimaenin, enak dimaenin pake DT+HR 22nya :P
soal hitsound lagi males ngecek, tapi udah bagus sih didenger sma dites ditaiko XD...

semoga dirank ya... XD
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

selova wrote:

hi yasora, req from mod queue

[249's Easy]
i think you have to follow yasora kiai times, nope kiai times can be different if there's a guest diff in the map
i prefer any note that placing just on white tick on 1/2 beat snap divisor, coz it easy diff... no if i do that, i'll find that boring and not fun for beginners.
i'm a little bit uncomfortable hearing about changing clap pattern, although the lyric vocal is changing too yes that's true but my hitsounding here is intentional...it mainly focuses on consistency and the vocals...the instrumental however not so much.
but it's fine... no problem,
Ty for checking.
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,565 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
Taken from #modreqs:

[General]

Tags: Remove Utada's album "Deep River" from there, because the PLANITb Remix of Hikari doesn't appear there... Just the original Hikari belongs to that album (WIKI INFO).

[249's Easy]

00:19:402 (1) - Seeing how you made the next slider (3), placing a corner down the beat of the music, I'd suggest you to do it in this slider as well. It'll fit pretty well to the melody.
00:52:633 (1,2) - In this case, it seems that the curvy one should be (1) and the sharp one (2).
00:56:787 (1,2) - You were probably trying to follow the lyrics placing 2 1/2 notes there, though the correct placement of (1) would be 00:56:90 in that case (1/4 distance in the timeline). Nevertheless, I'd suggest you to remove (1), or add a new note 00:57:941 (3) to balance those 2 sliders and make it more comfortable for new players.
01:02:325 (3) - This slider is extremely long imo, because it covers 2 sentences of the lyrics while (1) just cover 1. To fix this, you can remove the repetition of (3) and place another slider (1) from 01:04:171 to 01:05:556, removing the current note (1).

[Normal]

00:57:018 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of that objects in timeline, it's better to use these ones for this level, to avoid that 1/2 beat spam (which is not really necessary here).
01:45:226 (2,3) - According to the 2 beats you can here in this part, I'd place a circle (2) at 01:45:226 and a 1/2 slider (3) at 01:45:687, instead of the slider-circle pattern you have right now.

[Hard]

01:38:534 (4) - I strongly recommend to change the place of this note. It's not easy to read due to (2)'s hitburst, and the fact that it's completely in the middle of (1)'s slider track don't help at all.

[Insane]

00:29:325 (2) - Due to the slowdown of the sliders (1) and (3), this jump seems to be out of place. If it wasn't intentional, please move that note a bit to the left to avoid it.
00:46:979 (10) - It's possible to remove this note and add a small jump between (9) and (1) to emphasize the 2 different phrases, like you did with 00:48:479 (9,1).
01:09:018 (4,1) - A jump fits perfectly here. You can try something like THIS, for example: It'll create a jump according to the mapping style, and the Finish you placed at the beginning of (1) will make more sense.
01:12:941 (1) - I bet you can make the small curve of that slider more soft, to match better with (5)'s hitcircle shape.
01:15:941 (1,2,3) - As you did in the previous 3 notes, a jump (1,2) would be better according to the music.
01:44:303 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion: Seeing the flow of the whole map with such a big amount of slight curves, it's odd to see now 4 straight consecutive sliders. Consider curving them to fit with the rest of the map.

Good luck!
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
removed tags in all diff (@byaku, you can update before fix X''D)
most fixed all thing~
thanks for mod and star >w<!
Behon
Elite Mapper
1,380 posts
Here since the beginning
Behon
Yay, Kingdom Hearts.

General:
Consider changing the preview point to 01:00:018.

Easy:
00:49:864 (1): This is the only slider this short in this difficulty. It might throw novice players off.
01:32:303 (2): Move this down a little so it's on the same horizontal plane as 1.
01:37:841 (3): Same here.
02:00:918 (Spinner): Why doesn't this end at 02:02:764 like the other difficulties?

Normal:
Fine.

Hard:
01:39:687 (3): End at 01:40:034.

Insane:
01:22:149 (1): Either curve this more or just make it straight. It looks weird as it is.
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
changed slider shape in insane o.o/
thank you~
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
Hi~

General
Inconsistant Kiai time
Good rythem

Insane
If you have whistle 02:00:918 - you should have one 00:15:248 - since they sound the same
00:57:248 (4) - Bad design
00:58:171 (1,2) - Better as http://puu.sh/QFnW
01:22:610 (2,3) - Better as http://puu.sh/QFoC
01:30:918 (6) - 0.5X speed slider would fit the music nicely here like you did at 00:28:633 (1) - and 02:00:457 (1) -
01:41:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5 notes = 5 slided shape = pentagon? lol
02:00:457 (1) - Jump to this slider feels random

Hard
01:45:226 (3,4) - Better as http://puu.sh/QFvm ?

Normal
wow big spacing XD
00:58:171 (3,4,5) - Inconsistant spacing orz
01:58:149 (2,3,1,2,3) - Please make nice pentagon?

249's Easy
00:34:633 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:13:402 - Add note
01:35:072 (1) - Fix 3rd (third) point on this slider trail to up 1 grid
01:46:149 - Green line here isnt snapped. Is this the right sound effect? Please fix if not.
01:57:226 (1) - Again with point, but this time it is the first because of CTRL+R ~
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed some
thank you~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,473 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Hi~ Request from CLANNAD Mod queue~

[General]
Nothing

[249]
  1. Fix if you want.
    Unsnapped Inherited Lines
    01:31:402 -
    01:46:171 -
    01:46:402 -
    02:06:941
    Fine then.
[Normal]
  1. 00:44:787 (4) - Put at 228,228? More square imo. (Nazi)
  2. 01:08:556 (2,3) - I'd like to do like this. (A little bit change *o*) http://puu.sh/QGFT (Nazi)
  3. 01:30:918 (3) - Add clap?
[Hard]
  1. 01:35:995 (3) - Do like this? http://puu.sh/QGKn
[Insane]
  2. 01:15:018 (1) - Remove NC?
  3. 01:20:072 (6) - I dislike this where you put ._. Maybe put at 100,164?
All nazi ;_;!
Good luck to you~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,473 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Hi~ Request from CLANNAD Mod queue~

[General]
Nothing

[249]
  1. Fix if you want.
    Unsnapped Inherited Lines
    01:31:402 -
    01:46:171 -
    01:46:402 -
    02:06:941
    Fine then.
[Normal]
  1. 00:44:787 (4) - Put at 228,228? More square imo. (Nazi)
  2. 01:08:556 (2,3) - I'd like to do like this. (A little bit change *o*) http://puu.sh/QGFT (Nazi)
  3. 01:30:918 (3) - Add clap?
[Hard]
  1. 01:35:995 (3) - Do like this? http://puu.sh/QGKn
[Insane]
  2. 01:15:018 (1) - Remove NC?
  3. 01:20:072 (6) - I dislike this where you put ._. Maybe put at 100,164?
All nazi ;_;!
Good luck to you~

*oops double post sorry ;w;
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
lol do-post with different 30 min 8''D

thank you for mod~

@byaku-nyan: I fix the unsnapped timing point at your diff :''3
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

Deif wrote:

Taken from #modreqs:

[249's Easy]

00:19:402 (1) - Seeing how you made the next slider (3), placing a corner down the beat of the music, I'd suggest you to do it in this slider as well. It'll fit pretty well to the melody. no i don't wanna be that complex...in this part i want to be simple, and straightforward to the point. so i feel that a curved slider would fit here, also the instrumental changes when (3) is hit.
00:52:633 (1,2) - In this case, it seems that the curvy one should be (1) and the sharp one (2). no the sharp slider is to emphasize the vocals...the curvy one is to emphasize the other part in the vocals.
00:56:787 (1,2) - You were probably trying to follow the lyrics placing 2 1/2 notes there, though the correct placement of (1) would be 00:56:90 in that case (1/4 distance in the timeline). Nevertheless, I'd suggest you to remove (1), or add a new note 00:57:941 (3) to balance those 2 sliders and make it more comfortable for new players. alright removed (1).
01:02:325 (3) - This slider is extremely long imo, because it covers 2 sentences of the lyrics while (1) just cover 1. To fix this, you can remove the repetition of (3) and place another slider (1) from 01:04:171 to 01:05:556, removing the current note (1). which is why i did this. if i remove the repeat, i'd feel as if something is missing here. i tried adding the sliders there and it just doesn't fit to my taste at all.


Good luck!

Behonkiss wrote:

Yay, Kingdom Hearts.

Easy:
00:49:864 (1): This is the only slider this short in this difficulty. It might throw novice players off. i wanna challenge beginners if they can hit this or not.
01:32:303 (2): Move this down a little so it's on the same horizontal plane as 1. then there would be no flow to this part of the song.
01:37:841 (3): Same here. ^. i did this intentionally to align this to the bump of (1)
02:00:918 (Spinner): Why doesn't this end at 02:02:764 like the other difficulties? oh she ended it there? alright for consistency.

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

249's Easy
00:34:633 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed. just realized that the hold is still going.
01:13:402 - Add note no the hold in the vocals is still going so adding a note here wouldn't fit here.
01:35:072 (1) - Fix 3rd (third) point on this slider trail to up 1 grid i don't see a difference during gameplay so no.
01:46:149 - Green line here isnt snapped. Is this the right sound effect? Please fix if not. yea it is...look again.
01:57:226 (1) - Again with point, but this time it is the first because of CTRL+R ~ same as 01:35:072.

Flask wrote:

Hi~ Request from CLANNAD Mod queue~

[249]
  1. Fix if you want.
    Unsnapped Inherited Lines
    01:31:402 -
    01:46:171 -
    01:46:402 -
    02:06:941
    Fine then.
hmm? they're all snapped.

All nazi ;_;!
Good luck to you~
ty for the mods everyone :D

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Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
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Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
Hi~
Request from In-game.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[249's Easy]

  1. 00:21:248 (3) - 4th point on x:76 y:192
  2. 00:22:633 (1) - 2th point on x:136 y:324 , 3rd point on x:180 y:320
  3. 00:46:633 (3) - x:20 y:232 ?~
  4. 00:50:787 (2) - 3th point on x:188 y:140
  5. 01:47:995 (3) - 2th point on x:208 y:96

[Normal]

  1. 00:25:864 (3) - x:136 y:164 ?~
  2. 01:31:380 (1) - x:52 y:224 ?~
  3. 01:45:226 (2) - x:300 y:324 ?~

[Hard]

  1. 00:49:864 (3) - x:364 y:144 ?~
  2. 00:39:710 (1) - ctrl + R ?~ flow will smooth ?~
  3. 00:52:633 (1) - not pretty ;w;
  4. 01:47:995 (1) - 3rd point on x:44 y:200 ,4th point on x:32 y:140

[Insane]

  1. 00:48:479 (9) - last point on x:16 y:320
reason mostly are i think more pretty~
good song & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English
Kin
Beatmap Nominator
2,629 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin
Hi ~
From My modding queue ~
Here is a newbie modder i can be wrong ^_^

general :

Why 2 red timing section ?
Use same kiai time on all diff

249's Easy :

Nothing here for me

Normal

same

Hard :

00:25:748 (4) - Add clap here i think it's sound better
00:47:325 (2) - add clap here

Insane :

Can't find anything
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks all 0.0
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
yea uhh no changes for me...it won't make a difference during gameplay, and the kiai times can be inconsistent if there's a guest diff in the map.
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
byaku, I check this beatmap with aibat, and I found unsnapped timing point in your diff (already fixed now)
just make sure you update it :3
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,737 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
slow modding here..

as requested from my modding queue

249's Easy
fine

Normal
01:59:995 (3) - make this as slider and end at 02:00:457 (4) - , slider will follow the background music and start spinner at 02:00:918 (1) - (follow sound of spinner also)

Hard
00:16:864 (4,5,6) - I don't get this jump , since you haven't used "jump" at 00:24:018 (3,4) - for consistency
01:05:556 (1,2) - CTRL+R sounds better , use slider as vocal and single note as normal sound

Insane
fine

Good luck for ranking~
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed all~
thank you :3
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp

pimpG wrote:

general

01:16:593 - timeline here, bpm 130 (sounds better imo, please someone confirm it : D)

Niva wrote:

[General]

-> Actually you need another timing section - I'm very sure the offset shifts around your kiai time, this is what I got:

SPOILER
confirmed !? :>

have another ★

GL
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Meru
hello =w=b
sorry if my mod wasn't helpful

[249's Easy]
can't find anything else =w=b but the kiai are inconsistent, well you said it's fine if it was GD so.. nvm lol

[Normal]
the star spread is 4 is quite far from easy =w=b

00:32:325 (1) - add finish? it sounds better IMO

00:40:633 (3) - Ctrl+H Ctrl+J Ctrl+R this and move up 1~2 grid for a better looking since it a little covered by hitburst *nazi

00:43:864 (2,3,4) - I think these clap aren't needed it has low vocal here also the whistle you may don't need it I think it would be more fit this way

01:15:018 (2,3) - *gak kuat* dibagian ini whistle lebih cocok di pasang hanya di kepala slider karena whistle punya suara yang lebih tinggi ketimbang normal hitsound jadinya akan lebih pas karena mengikuti intrumennya

[Hard]
01:06:710 (4) - Ctrl+R this? also avoiding (1) covered by reverse arrow (well, I playtest it with osu! skin default) I think a little jump is acceptable in Hard

01:23:072 (3) - Why don't try adding whistle here? it would fit the song IMO just like 01:26:764 (5,7) you add whistle to both right?

01:31:841 (1,3) - I tried to remove the whistles on the slider tail and it was not bad also it follow the vocal

01:35:995 (3) - I still don't know why it won't fit if you put whistle here maybe same reason as above? also a better slider anchor? :P http://puu.sh/Xzn4

[Insane]
01:20:072 (6) - try move it to x:120 y:176 so it wouldn't covered by (4)'s hitburst or you can stack it with 01:21:226 (3) head slider

that's all I can find, you're experience mapper so I can't find too much =w=
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
let's reply this =v=

Matoryoshika wrote:

hello =w=b
sorry if my mod wasn't helpful

[Normal]
the star spread is 4 is quite far from easy =w=b

00:32:325 (1) - add finish? it sounds better IMO sure

00:40:633 (3) - Ctrl+H Ctrl+J Ctrl+R this and move up 1~2 grid for a better looking since it a little covered by hitburst *nazi I know the current was cover by hitburst, but that's already has consistent spacing

00:43:864 (2,3,4) - I think these clap aren't needed it has low vocal here also the whistle you may don't need it I think it would be more fit this way just removed in (3). the other for following the drum sound.

01:15:018 (2,3) - *gak kuat* dibagian ini whistle lebih cocok di pasang hanya di kepala slider karena whistle punya suara yang lebih tinggi ketimbang normal hitsound jadinya akan lebih pas karena mengikuti intrumennya ga ga kuat.. nvm ntahlah-- aku lebih suka ikutin suara2 dibelakangnya (?)

[Hard]
01:06:710 (4) - Ctrl+R this? also avoiding (1) covered by reverse arrow (well, I playtest it with osu! skin default) I think a little jump is acceptable in Hard umm-- i guess this is still playable altough that stacked with reverse arrow

01:23:072 (3) - Why don't try adding whistle here? it would fit the song IMO just like 01:26:764 (5,7) you add whistle to both right? following the instrument?

01:31:841 (1,3) - I tried to remove the whistles on the slider tail and it was not bad also it follow the vocal just removed in (1). because in (3) for following the instrument in bg music

01:35:995 (3) - I still don't know why it won't fit if you put whistle here maybe same reason as above? also a better slider anchor? :P http://puu.sh/Xzn4 so remove that and change shape right--

[Insane]
01:20:072 (6) - try move it to x:120 y:176 so it wouldn't covered by (4)'s hitburst or you can stack it with 01:21:226 (3) head slider ngg aku sengaja itu stack nya kyk gitu :v

that's all I can find, you're experience mapper so I can't find too much =w=
thank you mato-chan ;)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there


[249's Easy]
00:31:402 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This clap pattern are not in upbeat. Please add clap the object when the note at upbeat (2nd and 4th tick)
01:02:325 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider and map that part?
01:09:248 (3) - ^


[Normal]
01:09:248 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern?


[Hard]
00:22:633 (5) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next note with perfect timed?
00:47:787 (3) - ^
01:59:072 (1) - ^

Ganbatteh
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks leo~
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
i thought i--mou~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[249's Easy]
00:31:402 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This clap pattern are not in upbeat. Please add clap the object when the note at upbeat (2nd and 4th tick) nope the whistles are already at the 2nd and 4th downbeat.
01:02:325 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider and map that part? no the flow going back flows smoothly to the vocals.
01:09:248 (3) - ^ ^

Ganbatteh
sorry no changes made but ty for the mod.
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Nyaan :3~

General
  1. Fine~
249's Easy
  1. 00:33:710 (2) - Oh please don't do this on easy. The hitburst from 00:32:325 (3) - is almost entirely cover up this slider body. It will be makes newbie confuse and rage because not seeing the slider body. Think of another pattern.
  2. 00:42:941 (4) - You missing a clap here. Not consistant with your previous clap.
  3. 00:57:018 (1) - This slider is having very bad polarity. You suddenly switch from white tick to red and then white again in the next note. This is hard to read especially for beginner. Try use this pattern, it won't change your rythim but it more easy to read http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/418249
  4. 01:00:479 (2) - From here continue your clap rythim until 01:31:841 (1) - The claps suit the song from that point.
Normal
  1. 00:41:556 (1) - Hmm, i think you should change the whistle here into finish. More nice to hear and more consistant to your finish rythim.
  2. 00:57:018 (1) - Hmm, i think finish doesn't suit here. There's no sounds from the song that can support finish.
  3. 01:06:248 (2) - Same, this whistle doesn't suit here, better to remove it.
  4. Nothing else, nice diff >.<
Hard
  1. 00:18:479 (3,4,5) - Do little jump here since you make a jump at 00:16:864 (4,5,6) -
  2. 00:27:710 (3) - This jump is very high and too sudden. Doesn't follow the music very well too. Ctrl + R it please.
  3. 00:32:094 (5,1) - Reduce the distance please, very high for a hard diff.
  4. 00:35:094 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:35:325 (4,1) - Make this jump too. Not consistant with previous note.
  6. 00:39:248 (4,5) - Reduce.
  7. 00:39:479 (5,1) - Jump.
  8. 00:42:941 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend this pattern for a hard diff. Besides is quite hard to read, also it's a bit messy with many hitburst.
  9. 01:05:787 (2,3,4) - If you want, you can make this slider a bit jumpy since the vocal is quite heavy in this spot.
  10. 01:19:380 (4,5) - If you do a jump at 01:23:072 (3,4) - the this note should be a jump too.
  11. 01:26:995 (6,7) - Same as above.
  12. Nothing wrong with the hitsounds and rythim. Just the jump is inconsistent in some part.
Insane
  1. 00:53:210 (2) - A bit overmapped. Better to remove it. No vocal in 1/4 here.
  2. 00:53:556 (3) - Hmm, since you following vocal at previous spot. This slider head is a bit overmapped then. Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:53:787-
  3. 01:15:018 (1) - What's the purpose of new combo here? Better to remove it.
  4. 01:28:264 (2,4) - This stream is a bit overmapped and not quite good to hear imo. Better to remove these circle.
  5. 01:33:226 (1) - You should add another whistle at this slider end, not consistant with previous whistle.
  6. 01:35:072 (1) - ^
  7. 01:38:303 (6) - ^
  8. 01:40:610 (1) - It's better if you put another finish at this slider start. The heavy beat from the song really fit for finish.
That's all nyaan~ @@
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

Miya wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:41:556 (1) - Hmm, i think you should change the whistle here into finish. More nice to hear and more consistant to your finish rythim. ok
  2. 00:57:018 (1) - Hmm, i think finish doesn't suit here. There's no sounds from the song that can support finish. ok
  3. 01:06:248 (2) - Same, this whistle doesn't suit here, better to remove it. nope, for follow the vocal like (4)
  4. Nothing else, nice diff >.< asek owob
Hard
  1. 00:18:479 (3,4,5) - Do little jump here since you make a jump at 00:16:864 (4,5,6) - no, different rhythm in the music 0.0
  2. 00:27:710 (3) - This jump is very high and too sudden. Doesn't follow the music very well too. Ctrl + R it please. ok
  3. 00:32:094 (5,1) - Reduce the distance please, very high for a hard diff. ok stack at (5)
  4. 00:35:094 (3,4) - ^ move (3)
  5. 00:35:325 (4,1) - Make this jump too. Not consistant with previous note. ngg- nope-- I want make this seems symmetry
  6. 00:39:248 (4,5) - Reduce. fine
  7. 00:39:479 (5,1) - Jump. no--
  8. 00:42:941 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend this pattern for a hard diff. Besides is quite hard to read, also it's a bit messy with many hitburst. k change into another pattern
  9. 01:05:787 (2,3,4) - If you want, you can make this slider a bit jumpy since the vocal is quite heavy in this spot. I guess-- no
  10. 01:19:380 (4,5) - If you do a jump at 01:23:072 (3,4) - the this note should be a jump too. following the vocal Q_Q
  11. 01:26:995 (6,7) - Same as above. ^
  12. Nothing wrong with the hitsounds and rythim. Just the jump is inconsistent in some part.
Insane
  1. 00:53:210 (2) - A bit overmapped. Better to remove it. No vocal in 1/4 here. no, for following the vocal "ri"
  2. 00:53:556 (3) - Hmm, since you following vocal at previous spot. This slider head is a bit overmapped then. Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:53:787- change into another rhythm
  3. 01:15:018 (1) - What's the purpose of new combo here? Better to remove it. k
  4. 01:28:264 (2,4) - This stream is a bit overmapped and not quite good to hear imo. Better to remove these circle. k
  5. 01:33:226 (1) - You should add another whistle at this slider end, not consistant with previous whistle. nope-- not fit with the vocal imo
  6. 01:35:072 (1) - ^ ^
  7. 01:38:303 (6) - ^ already added--
  8. 01:40:610 (1) - It's better if you put another finish at this slider start. The heavy beat from the song really fit for finish. ok
That's all nyaan~ @@
makasih~
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

Miya wrote:

Nyaan :3~ Miya-nya~~~~

249's Easy
  1. 00:33:710 (2) - Oh please don't do this on easy. The hitburst from 00:32:325 (3) - is almost entirely cover up this slider body. It will be makes newbie confuse and rage because not seeing the slider body. Think of another pattern. alright did something else, but i want to keep the notes.
  2. 00:42:941 (4) - You missing a clap here. Not consistant with your previous clap. i did this intentionally. since the vocals are fading out in this part, a clap would ruin that moment and feeling in this part.
  3. 00:57:018 (1) - This slider is having very bad polarity. You suddenly switch from white tick to red and then white again in the next note. This is hard to read especially for beginner. Try use this pattern, it won't change your rythim but it more easy to read http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/418249 yea i ran out of ideas when i did this. added.
  4. 01:00:479 (2) - From here continue your clap rythim until 01:31:841 (1) - The claps suit the song from that point. i have a clap pattern in mind, but the problem is that the claps are at the sliderticks and that'll sound bad with the whistles in his part of the song during gameplay, so i can't do this.
That's all nyaan~ @@
ty for the mod :D

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[Metadata]
Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Byakugan249

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BeatofIke
Beatmap Nominator
4,245 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Mod Request. Here's what I've found:

General
-> You're clean!

249's Easy
00:45:710 (2,3) - Blanket?
00:49:864 (1) - Beginners might mistake this short slider as 2 hit circles XD. I remember missing these notes back when I first played osu! (lol)

Normal
00:37:864 (1) - I thought this slider shape was kind of random. Otherwise, nothing wrong here.

-> Your Hard and Insane difficulties are fine!

Map is excellent! Why is this map not bubbled yet?
I would, but I'm no MAT (lol). Anyway, good luck with this map!
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
ok changed slider shape in normal diff =w=
thank you~
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
M4M, and I'm here.

[Insane]
  1. Normal is quite well done, but when I start playing this diff, the very start is already confusing me.
  2. 00:15:825 - I thought there should be something here, to cover the keyboard. it would be fun to play if you follow the keyboard and bass mainly imo. and if I keeping this thing all along the map, there would be a wall modding you'd not want to see, so I just point this out.
  3. 00:22:633 (5,6,7,8,1) - good
  4. 00:27:941 (6,7,8,1) - consider making this a increasing spacing pattern? that would be cool when the slowdown happen
  5. 00:54:479 (1,2) - make 1 shorter and another tail-slider? it fits the breathing point.
  6. 01:30:918 (6,1) - the ends are not snapped properly
  7. 01:33:226 (1) - you shouldn't use this as if you decide to tracking the vocal here, end at blue or find something else
  8. 01:36:918 (1) - ^
  9. 01:45:226 (3,4) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:633 (5) - clap at the beginning
  2. 01:36:918 (1,2,3) - the notes goes nowhere compared with either vocal or instrument
  3. 01:45:572 (4) - cancel the whistles?
[Easy]
  1. 00:18:017 (3,1,2,3) - claps on wrong ticks, use slidertick-replacement or just leave them blank.
  2. 00:31:402 ~ 00:41:556 - claps on wrong ticks.
Insane is the best stage to impress how the song is. but normal did much better than it.
need more work, and good luck
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you for mod~
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

Colin Hou wrote:

M4M, and I'm here.

[Easy]
  1. 00:18:017 (3,1,2,3) - claps on wrong ticks, use slidertick-replacement or just leave them blank. alright i'll apply the slidertick file. i hope Ya-nyan doesn't mind.
  2. 00:31:402 ~ 00:41:556 - claps on wrong ticks. don't forget about the whistles. i added a clap at (1) as a start of the hitsound pattern in both the claps and whistles.
Insane is the best stage to impress how the song is. but normal did much better than it.
need more work, and good luck
ty for the mod :D. take this file for the sliderticks since i used it for my diff. if you want you can use this file for your other diffs.

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[Metadata]
Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Byakugan249

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Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Me like kingdom Hearts better

[General]
  1. Use slider tick 2 . You're using 0.5x slider multiplier and this make the half speed 1/1 beat slider to have the same length as normal speed 1/2 beat slider. This could be fatal especially on Insane diff
[249's Easy]
  1. The custom slider tick sounds louder compare to the rest. Try using timing sections to lower all the tick sounds by 10%
  2. 00:31:402 (1) - According to your hit sound pattern, shouldn't the slider end is whistle not clap?
  3. 00:41:094 - It's almost inaudible but I can still heat the drum roll from the slider slide. I don't know if this intentional though
  4. 00:49:864 (1) - The short slider will easily confuse newbie who relies on vision, not to mention that this is the only 1/2 beat slider throughout the map
  5. 01:44:764 - The custom sound for the slider tick sounds to conspicuous. It's better to remove this as the next 2 clap (on 01:45:226 & 01:45:687) are enough
[Normal]
  1. SPOILER
    1. 00:21:248 (3) - This should be NC'ed
    2. 00:56:325 (4) - NC this
    3. 00:57:018 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 00:58:171 (5)
    4. 01:09:248 (3) - NC this
    5. 01:40:610 (3) - ^
    6. 01:51:687 (3) - ^
  2. 00:43:402 (1,2,3,4) - Rather than the sharp clap, try using whistle or any other softer hit sound here. As you can hear the vocal gradually fade out here so the loud clap kinda ruin the song. You can gradually decrease the volume of each circle too
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:556 (1) - Maybe continue the previous jump and increase the spacing to this slider? It's on the downbeat so it'll give more accent to the slider if you make it into a jump too
  2. 00:24:479 (4) - I can't rally feel the jump because of the nature of the slider. Try changing it into circles to make the jumps more fun?
  3. 00:40:633 (4,5,1) - Um... maybe mirror the slider so it'll be symmetry. It's looks awkward because the pattern are almost centered but the sliders aren't symmetry at all
  4. 01:19:149 (3,4) - Rather than giving a jump only on these 2, it's better if you give jumps to all of 01:19:149 (3,4,5,6,7) that way you can give more emphasize on the whole phrase. Even if there is a stress on that place the jump looks bad, heck it looks like a spacing error first time I see it
  5. 01:26:995 (6) - Try to increase the spacing to 1.6 here too. The whole jumps on 01:25:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) become awkward because of this small one
  6. 01:55:149 (5) - Maybe use 1.6 spacing for the jump?
  7. 02:00:457 (1) - Finish or maybe no hit sound like on insane diff?
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:171 (5) - I suggest to change the jump to 1.5x then adjust the next jump to 1.5x too so the jumps are equal or make it into an increased jump like what you did on 00:24:248 (4,5,6)
  2. 01:26:995 (3,4,5) - The jump then change back to normal spacing is very sudden and it plays awkward. If you want to give a jump here, try to make all of those 3 objects into jump. That way will make the jump more balance and it'll emphasized the current phrase of the vocal
  3. 01:32:764 (6) - Normal spacing suited better here. There's no change what so ever on the music to warrant a jump
  4. 01:43:611 (4) - ^
  5. 01:48:803 (3) - This kick slider is hard to see because of the previous slider's hit burst. You can try readjust 01:47:995 (1) to make 3 more visible
That's all from me. Good Luck with the map :3
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed all~
thank you ^^
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

Sallad4ever wrote:

Me like kingdom Hearts better

[General]
  1. Use slider tick 2 . You're using 0.5x slider multiplier and this make the half speed 1/1 beat slider to have the same length as normal speed 1/2 beat slider. This could be fatal especially on Insane diff
no not for me. i have a low SV in this diff and i don't want to see the sliderticks cluttered in 1 slider.

[249's Easy]
  1. The custom slider tick sounds louder compare to the rest. Try using timing sections to lower all the tick sounds by 10% for now i'l keep it. i want to hear opinions about this.
  2. 00:31:402 (1) - According to your hit sound pattern, shouldn't the slider end is whistle not clap? no because since i have a finish on the spinner, it shows that a new pattern is coming.
  3. 00:41:094 - It's almost inaudible but I can still heat the drum roll from the slider slide. I don't know if this intentional though oh this is intentional for consistency. i also did this for more effect in the drums.
  4. 00:49:864 (1) - The short slider will easily confuse newbie who relies on vision, not to mention that this is the only 1/2 beat slider throughout the map ooh...alright i'll make this a 1/1 slider instead.
  5. 01:44:764 - The custom sound for the slider tick sounds to conspicuous. It's better to remove this as the next 2 clap (on 01:45:226 & 01:45:687) are enough alright i'll remove it. it might bother beginners as well.
That's all from me. Good Luck with the map :3

ty for the mod :D.

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Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Byakugan249

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Aurele
Global Moderator
7,606 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Hi Yasora and Byakugan.
Actually, this was a mod request from my one hour modding queue, so I'm sorry for the really big delay. o/

Easy
Well, that's a pretty good difficulty. I only have two things to say..
00:18:017 (3) - I don't understand the hitsounds here... It's not consistent and it should be. My suggestion is to add a clap to the first note of the slider and the end to make the claps consistent. Also, on the reverse arrow, I'm suggesting you to replace the clap by a whistle.
01:16:611 - To make every Kiai time consistent, you should really add a Kiai time here and it would ends at 01:31:380 like the other difficulties. Also, I won't understand if you refuse this suggestion..

Normal
Pretty good~
00:32:325 (1) - This finish should be deleted since you're adding finishes to every 2 big-white-lines. So I guess this one is useless.

Hard
00:43:171 (2,1) - Shouldn't be these circles aligned?
00:44:787 (3) - one grid up to get this circle aligned with 00:44:325 (1) - .
01:35:995 (3) - The part after the red-dot, it's way more curved than the first part. Maybe you could try to make them more curved.

Insane
00:17:094 (5) - I don't know how to explain it but, stack this circle with 00:16:864 (4) - and then do ctrl+H
00:19:402 - There's no finish here? I guess you should add one here to keep the consistency.
01:00:248 (2) - Maybe you could add a new combo here so the previous combo will be the slowdown and the song seems to be more "loud" to this point.
01:31:611 (2) - Same as the previous point, but instead, the song is more soft.

It's a really nice mapset. It deserve to be ranked really soon (:
Yasora
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thank you~ fixed some
YTYuyu
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omg sorry about the delay. i'll see if i can get to his mod reply tomorrow :(
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Byakugan249 wrote:

omg sorry about the delay. i'll see if i can get to his mod reply tomorrow :(
Going to do a recheck soon anyways.
YTYuyu
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Gabe wrote:

Hi Yasora and Byakugan.
Actually, this was a mod request from my one hour modding queue, so I'm sorry for the really big delay. o/

Easy
Well, that's a pretty good difficulty. I only have two things to say..
00:18:017 (3) - I don't understand the hitsounds here... It's not consistent and it should be. My suggestion is to add a clap to the first note of the slider and the end to make the claps consistent. Also, on the reverse arrow, I'm suggesting you to replace the clap by a whistle. this is 100% intentional because the whistles are meant to match the hard beats in this part of the song, which is why the whistles are at every 1st downbeat, and for the claps...well that part alone is for consistency in that combo only...the rest is at every 2nd and 4th downbeat because the beat changes in the combo.
01:16:611 - To make every Kiai time consistent, you should really add a Kiai time here and it would ends at 01:31:380 like the other difficulties. Also, I won't understand if you refuse this suggestion.. i don't like kiai times. i find them boring and not exciting for me. i'd prefer kiai bursts because i want to give off a "bang", like fireworks shooting out of the sky.

It's a really nice mapset. It deserve to be ranked really soon (:
no changes made but ty for the mod.
Deni
Deni

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General

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
  - [249's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:16:726    ( I think you have messed up something here?)

  - [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:31:380

  - [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:31:380

  - [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:31:380

Folder seems fine.. ;)

249's Easy

01:21:687 (4) - New Combo
01:22:149 (1) - Remove New Combo if ^
01:55:380 (3,1) - Overlap

Insane

00:22:633 (5) - Add NC here?
01:53:072 (5) - ^

I left out Hard and Normal because they were fine! :)

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.
YTYuyu
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Deni wrote:


----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

General

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [249's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:16:726 ( I think you have messed up something here?) nope kiai times can be different if there's a guest diff in the map.


Folder seems fine.. ;)

249's Easy

01:21:687 (4) - New Combo no because the vocals in (1) are like the bass. basically, i'm following the melody.
01:22:149 (1) - Remove New Combo if ^ didn't follow the suggestion, so ignored.
01:55:380 (3,1) - Overlap this is intentional for a smoother transition to the next note.
I left out Hard and Normal because they were fine! :)

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.
no changes made but ty for the mod.
Yasora
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ok fixed
thank you~
Rei Hakurei
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indri agaaaain

irc log
05:17 Yasora: eh kan yang 249 aku liat di osu notepad nya "osu file format v9" gapapa tuh?
05:17 Rei_Fan49: gpp
05:17 Rei_Fan49: sekarang udah v11
05:17 Rei_Fan49: km kalo save, ntar ke overwrite itu
05:17 Yasora: ahahaahaha
05:17 Yasora: ketinggalan..
05:18 Rei_Fan49: LOLOLOL
05:18 Rei_Fan49: itu udah berlaku dari dulu kali :v
05:18 Yasora: yasudahlah..
05:18 Rei_Fan49: mau spec ?
05:18 Yasora: apaan
05:18 Rei_Fan49: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/169180 Silver Forest - Phantasm Brigade (KaNa Phantasm Phantasma Remix)]
05:18 Yasora: ga bawa
05:18 Rei_Fan49: lol
05:19 Rei_Fan49: sizenya cuman 8MB gt :\
05:19 Yasora: emohh
05:19 Rei_Fan49: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/189884 a-TTTempo - Flandre March (Hard)]
05:19 Yasora: ntar aja di rumah
05:19 Rei_Fan49: itu cuman 2~4MB
05:19 Rei_Fan49: kalo yang di rumah, jangan di update :v
05:19 Rei_Fan49: ntar gw minta deh :v
05:19 Yasora: itu..
05:19 Yasora: apa sih
05:19 Rei_Fan49: apaan ?
05:19 Yasora: jadi lupa -_-
05:19 Rei_Fan49: osu!.nya
05:19 Yasora: itu kalo ngasih tau yang salah2
05:20 Rei_Fan49: maksud ?
05:20 Yasora: duhh apaan sih
05:20 Yasora: ohhh
05:20 Yasora: mod
05:20 Rei_Fan49: ohhh
05:20 Rei_Fan49: gw kira apa
05:20 Yasora: sampe lupa -_-
05:20 Rei_Fan49: btw, kl km udah play suatu map
05:20 Rei_Fan49: km bisa cek accuracy timingnya
05:20 Rei_Fan49: gw baru tau itu
05:20 Rei_Fan49: ntar muncul -20ms ~ +20ms
05:21 Yasora: terus apa..
05:21 Rei_Fan49: ya itu fiturnya bisa tau mistiming :v
05:23 Yasora: mod map akuhh >3<
05:23 Rei_Fan49: lel
05:23 Yasora: udah luntur ni cara ngemod aku hiks
05:23 Yasora: gimana mau dapet kudos ya ;A;
05:24 Rei_Fan49: mod map akuhh >4<
05:24 Yasora: gimana cara ngemod itu gimana wOAO)w
05:24 Rei_Fan49: feeling.
05:24 Yasora: wat
05:24 > yang ngelanggar rules *kalo bisa point*
05:25 Yasora: bukann
05:25 Rei_Fan49: > dari style, penempatan, alur, etc.
05:25 Yasora: nyusun kata2nya QAQ
05:25 Yasora: jadi lupa ew
05:25 Rei_Fan49: gak usah kaya niva juga kali :v
05:25 Rei_Fan49: Remove/Add NC
05:25 Yasora: nc..
05:25 Rei_Fan49: Remove/Add Circle/Spinner/Slider here
05:25 Yasora: oh new combo
05:25 Yasora: oh ohhh iya inget..
05:25 Rei_Fan49: move Nth slider point to here etc.
05:26 Yasora: mau liat post sendiri dulu dah..
05:26 Rei_Fan49: gw tadinya mau ngomong itu :v
05:26 Rei_Fan49: cek yang udah pernah dilakuin biar inget :v
05:26 Yasora: oke :v
05:26 Yasora: is listening to Utada Hikaru - Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
05:26 Rei_Fan49: (seperti membuka materi jadul)
05:26 Yasora: ini ini ini >3<
05:26 Rei_Fan49: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1077 a-TTTempo - Scarlet Beat (Hard)]
05:26 Rei_Fan49: eh salah
05:29 Yasora: kok ini tiap ganti map, bg nya jadi asa ngelag ya -3-
05:29 Rei_Fan49: ya itulah osu!
05:30 Yasora: aih tae banget
05:30 Rei_Fan49: finishnya kok familiar ya
05:30 Rei_Fan49: bunyi yang diulang2 lol
05:31 Yasora: apanya
05:32 Rei_Fan49: soft-finish
05:32 Rei_Fan49: terus itu bunyi clapnya, bisa diganti sama normal
05:32 Rei_Fan49: soalnya identik itu
05:33 Rei_Fan49: [Insane] 00:41:556 (1) - ujungnya geser 1 keatas coba, lebih bagus itu
05:34 Yasora: bentar
05:34 Yasora: lagi fix gd nih
05:34 Rei_Fan49: ohhh mod dari gd km ?
05:35 Yasora: dah beres~
05:35 Yasora: yoiyo
05:40 Rei_Fan49: 00:55:402 (2) - kasih whistle like disini ? (slider body)
05:40 Rei_Fan49: 00:57:248 (3) - geser ujungnya 2 ke atas
05:41 Yasora: udeh
05:41 Rei_Fan49: 01:16:402 (3) - kok unsnapped timing di deket sini :(
05:42 Yasora: wew
05:44 Yasora: ada lagi ga yang unsnapped?
05:44 Rei_Fan49: gak
05:44 Rei_Fan49: coba deh itu bpm
05:44 Rei_Fan49: diganti jadi 130.06
05:44 Rei_Fan49: gw gak tau ya
05:44 Rei_Fan49: masih coba2
05:46 Yasora: udah di fix yang unsnapped nya kok..
05:47 Yasora: tapi ya yang ini pas -3-
05:48 Rei_Fan49: spinnernya gak mau di geser sampe 99.8% ya ?
05:48 Yasora: mana
05:49 Rei_Fan49: yang terakhir
05:49 Yasora: emoh kelamaan
05:49 Yasora: en pas disono wehe
05:49 Rei_Fan49: [H] 00:17:556 (1) - kurang ngeblanket ini
05:49 Yasora: okie
05:50 Rei_Fan49: 00:36:941 (4) - ganti jadi P slider aja ? (3 pointed Circle Slider)
05:50 Yasora: masalah blanket2 an mah sebenernya pas naro slidernya ngasal, jadi..
05:50 Rei_Fan49: lol, tapi style lah
05:50 Yasora: yang (4).. ndak ah ehe
05:51 Rei_Fan49: 00:37:864 (1) - tarik titik seudah yang merah 1 grid bawah
05:51 Rei_Fan49: :v
05:51 Yasora: kela
05:51 Yasora: mouse warnet edan -_-
05:51 Rei_Fan49: 00:52:633 (1) - P-ify slider ?
05:51 Rei_Fan49: lol sabar eaph
05:52 Yasora: kalem
05:52 Rei_Fan49: santai aja, gw ngelist yang kurang aja
05:53 Yasora: p-ify itu apa..
05:53 Yasora: ehe
05:53 Yasora: #plak
05:53 Rei_Fan49: di ganti sama model yang 3 titik
05:53 Yasora: ohhh
05:53 Yasora: gitu aja deh.. udah keliatan rapih kok -3-;
05:53 Rei_Fan49: [N] 00:16:864 (4) - lel masih bezier , jaman kapan ini
05:54 Rei_Fan49: titik tengahnya 2 grid bawah , biar psuedoblanket
05:54 Yasora: udaahh
05:54 Rei_Fan49: hmmm
05:54 Rei_Fan49: btw ini kenapa di normal tick 2 ?
05:54 Rei_Fan49: yang lain keliatan tick 1
05:54 Rei_Fan49: or nope ?
05:54 Yasora: iya gitu?
05:54 Rei_Fan49: yup
05:55 Yasora: cuma yang easy yang 1 o3o
05:55 Yasora: ew
05:55 Yasora: unrankable ga tuh kalo beda2?
05:55 Rei_Fan49: gak
05:55 Rei_Fan49: santai aja itu cuman masalah konsisten kagaknya, (not neccess and near useless to mod)
05:56 Yasora: jadi enakan konsisten apa ndak
05:56 Rei_Fan49: terserah lw :v
05:56 Yasora: kalo ga konsisten namanya labil
05:56 Yasora: #apaam
05:56 Rei_Fan49: lol
05:56 Yasora: *apaan
05:56 Yasora: typo lah -.-
05:56 Rei_Fan49: santai aja
05:57 Yasora: di yang normal samain aja slidertick nya jadi 1?
05:57 Rei_Fan49: gak tau,
05:57 Rei_Fan49: gw kira 1 itu yang lain :v
05:57 Yasora: ya udahlah robah aja jadi satu -.-
05:57 Yasora: toh speednya ga ada yang robah2
05:58 Yasora: tapi bener loh yeh ga unrankable..
05:58 Rei_Fan49: gak
05:58 Rei_Fan49: santai aja
05:58 Rei_Fan49: gw bakal tick 0.5~1 kalo suruh konsisten
05:58 Yasora: siplah
05:58 Yasora: terus apalagi
05:58 Yasora: kalo yang easy post aje
05:59 Rei_Fan49: wait, paling ini minor doang sih
05:59 Rei_Fan49: gw curiga
05:59 Rei_Fan49: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/169250 Utada Hikaru - Hikari (PLANITb Remix) [249's Easy]]
05:59 Rei_Fan49: sama snap 1/2
05:59 Yasora: apa maksudnya..
06:00 Rei_Fan49: sebenernya gw pengen nitip disini aja, ya udah, gw post aja easynya
06:00 Yasora: sekalian log ini =3=
06:00 Yasora: kudosuu
06:00 Rei_Fan49: iya

[Easy]
AR-1, HP/OD-1 ?
(most of them are suggestion)
00:42:018 (2,3) - form them into like this one http://puu.sh/1YLSl ? the previous one looked so awkward lol
00:50:787 (2) - can you move 1 grid up for the last node? (it can make better blanket-looking imo)
00:57:479 (2) - kinda feel better with this slider end is at very close position with 00:54:479 (2)'s start. (move last node 1 grid right) *suggest
01:55:380 (3) - even with AR2&AR3, still overlaps 01:57:226 (1) :( it doesn't looks good; can you change the slider path into something like http://puu.sh/1YLZf that? (as long as its first wave blankets over previous (4) and didn't overlap (3) in any case)

this one even with a DS over 1.0 but i can tolerate it, since it was good looking slow (paced) map :)
Last edited by Rei Hakurei , edited 1 time in total.
Yasora
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maacih~ /w\
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu

Yasora wrote:

maacih~ /w\
yay you're back omg ;___; //hugs
Flask
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Flask
owo I remember this, good luck Yasora-chan !!! *w*
YTYuyu
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fixed everything but the 3rd suggestion. i don't see a difference in this part so i'm gonna leave it. ty for the mod :D. also add "宇多田 ヒカル" at the artist for Utada Hikaru and "光" for Hikari. it should look like this.

SPOILER
osu file format v11

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76372
Countdown: 0
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Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
TitleUnicode:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
ArtistUnicode:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Byakugan249
BeatmapID:169250
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Aurele
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Aurele
Eww, that mod sucks ;-;
Yasora
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Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks everyone \owo/
also, /me hugs back byaku-nyan~
Teru21
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Teru21
hi :D from the modding queue

and to be honest >_> I don't like this version ;A; its like the original one + NC++remix and with the SB moving faster makes it looks so in hurry ;A; I like the original one.. this one just feel strange ;A; so, I'm sorry If I can't mod much here..

> 249 easy
You need to redo some slider like 00:49:864 (1,2) copy paste them please.. to make it more beautiful
01:00:479 (2) - was hoping something like http://puu.sh/20r8x
01:02:325 (3) - this does sounds weird ;A; change into something like http://puu.sh/20rbk ?

Normal , Hard and Insane looks good to me.. find MAT/Bat already o3o

so short lolol @A@

~Good Luck

~Star got so many kds >w<
Yasora
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Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you for mod and star~
also, if byaku change something from your mod, I will give you kudos later
padahal aku suka yang remix ini 8''D
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu

Teru21 wrote:

hi :D from the modding queue

> 249 easy
You need to redo some slider like 00:49:864 (1,2) copy paste them please.. to make it more beautiful sliders like that are intentional because it's for the sake of making the flow steady.
01:00:479 (2) - was hoping something like http://puu.sh/20r8x leaving this. i don't like the look of that slider. when it comes to wave sliders at the time i made this, i focus on symmetry, no matter how rough the arcs are.
01:02:325 (3) - this does sounds weird ;A; change into something like http://puu.sh/20rbk ? i don't see a problem with this tbh. it gives off a smooth feeling to the vocals and BGM and because of the sliderticks on this loop, it's more effective during gameplay.

Normal , Hard and Insane looks good to me.. find MAT/Bat already o3o

so short lolol @A@

~Good Luck

~Star got so many kds >w<
no changes made but ty for the mod.
No_Gu
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Joined January 2011
No_Gu
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

[General/All diffs]
After discussing with my partners.Artist sould be 宇多田ヒカル (I mean no space between 宇多田 and ヒカル
lagi niat\7.png is unused
Kiai time in 249's diff is diffrent from other diffs

[249]
00:16:633 (1) - why not move it to center directly?that will be better for beginners
00:19:864 - as we hear,tick sound is louder than clap sound even though they have the same volume in file.changing tick line to 50% sounds best imo
00:44:787 - why not start a slider from here to 00:45:248 with sliderwhistle to follow the wind sound?that must be fun
01:09:248 (3) - Idk why you start such a long slider here..I don't think a sharp slow down for this part is good
02:00:457 (4) - hmm this clap sounds abrupt

[Normal]
00:16:171 (2,3,4,1) - Let's see the distance.2-3 a little overlap.3-4-1 non-overlaped.I think the spacing like 3-4-1 is better.maybe change other spacings like 2-3 to the spacing like 3-4-1?ahh this is a little nazi so changing or not are both ok
01:54:457 (2,1) - I don't think such paattern with high SV is easy to read for new players

[Hard]
00:17:325 (6) - I think unify the sapcing of 5-6-1 is better
00:28:633 (1) - This isn't easy to read imo.maybe change another way to show this pattern
01:09:941 (2) - spacing

[Insane]
00:43:171 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why do you set NC like this?..if you do this so that players can read..I think it's unnecessary.or you have some other thoughts?
01:23:995 (1,2) - 。。maybe remake these sliders?
01:40:611 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as above
02:00:457 (1) - I think it' better to set a jump than reducing the spacing here
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu

No_Gu wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

[249]
00:16:633 (1) - why not move it to center directly?that will be better for beginners no it won't because the hitburst will be covering the circle making it harder for beginners to find the note during gameplay.
00:19:864 - as we hear,tick sound is louder than clap sound even though they have the same volume in file.changing tick line to 50% sounds best imo no to me, it sounds too soft if i decrease it to 50%.
00:44:787 - why not start a slider from here to 00:45:248 with sliderwhistle to follow the wind sound?that must be fun i wanna makes things easier by following the vocals only. ik what you're saying but with this volume and mood, it may sound inaudible for beginners during gameplay and that may catch them off guard.
01:09:248 (3) - Idk why you start such a long slider here..I don't think a sharp slow down for this part is good it's my own perference. i find this slider fitting to follow to the vocals because of the sliderticks and that arc which follows the vocals smoothly during gameplay for me. the only i thing i did is flip it and adjusted it myself.
02:00:457 (4) - hmm this clap sounds abrupt yea i guess i'll remove it.
ty for the mod :D.

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Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
ok fixed almost all
thank you!

also reduce space in title
Sonnyc
7,776 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
m4m

Uhh.. I heard this song recently in osu and,, this is a remix xD

249's Easy:

00:22:633 (1) - Custom Clap at the start?
00:31:402 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Imo, swapping claps and whistles will be better.
00:35:094 (4) - 1 Grid Right
00:36:018 (1,2,3) - Similar hit sound suggestion. Whistle in downbeat, Clap at upbeat please.
00:42:941 (4) - Clap instead of Whistle in Start and end.
00:59:094 (3) - Add Whistle?
02:00:457 (4) - Imo, placing up at 01:56:764 (4) will be nice. Adjust (3)'s spacing afterwards.

Normal:

00:51:248 (2) - (336,60) will be a better spot for the distance.
01:01:864 (1) - 1 Grid up?
01:06:248 (2) - I hope you to make something like 1.13x as you did before.
01:18:457 (1) - Similar to ^. 1 Grid up?
01:42:918 (2) - Delete Whistle at the end
01:45:226 (2) - Uhh... 1 Grid left?

Hard:

01:37:380 (2) - No reverse makes sense with the song, imo.

Insane:

00:47:902 - Add a note like 00:46:056 (6).
00:59:556 (3) - NC. Slider tick gets hidden with the Slider color, so it won't help with understanding the velocity change.
01:01:171 (4) - Make this a triplet?
01:23:995 (1,2) - Uhh.. I expect the curves more rounder.
01:30:918 (4) - NC for slow velocity.
01:45:687 (4) - ^
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Re-mod. For M4M and just because I feel like it.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.
  • >General
  1. Offset -10?
>Storyboard
  1. The fade-to-black-ish (?) effect at 00:43:402 - 00:45:248 is nice, but I would like it better if the fade is accelerated (not equally gradual from 43402 until 45248) from 00:45:018.
>249's Easy
  1. 00:18:018 - Add clap to follow Yasora's hitsound on her diffs?
>Normal
  1. 00:42:710 - ...Considering there's already a whistle at 00:42:479 (2) and 00:43:171, I think the whistle here is unnecessary, so remove it?
  2. 01:05:556 (1,2) - Uhm, make this look similar to 01:06:479 (3,4)?
  3. 01:09:018 - Unnecessary whistle, IMO; can't see any reason to place one there, so remove?
>Hard
  1. 00:35:787 - Add a circle? There's a sound on the music that, I think, will feel very awkward if it's not mapped.
>Insane
  1. 00:35:787 - Same as Hard.
...Can't find lots of things as always orz

Good luck on the way 8-)
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
ok fixed some~
I will mod your map later
thank you!
UnitedWeSin
892 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Hi Yasora!
Here is my mod, sorry so late. -.-

[General]

  1. I feel that your chosen clap is really unfitting with this song. It's just super loud and stands out from the music so much that it takes a ton away from the song and really takes a lot of playability away from the mapset imo. Can I recommend a different clap?
    http://puu.sh/263xH
    This clap fits SO much better with the song imo. Please try it and please consider changing this. If you do, don't forget to make the slidertickclap the same clap.

  2. I feel that outside of the kiai time the hitsounding is too loud and stands out above the music too much.
Here are my volume suggestions:

  1. 00:30:941 to 00:45:133 - 60%

  2. 00:45:364 to 00:59:902 - 50%

  3. 01:46:149 to 01:59:995 - 70%
    This is the same section as 00:15:941 to 00:28:633. They should be the same volume and the 70% sounds really nice with this new clap.
Honestly these maps sound incredible with that clap and these volume changes, hopefully you agree.

[249's Easy]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:02:325 (3) - I recommend using a different slider shape here. I don't think this loop looks very nice at all because the SV is too low to create a tear. That and it's a bit awkward to read it as is imo. I would recommend a shape but sliders seem to be bugged atm. -.-

  2. 01:42:457 (5,1,2) - The pause is a bit awkward to me. Maybe instead you could have a spinner to hit with vocal hold, that might be nice. Consider this:

    Delete the 01:42:457 (5,1). Then put a spinner at 01:42:457 and ending at 01:44:303. Also add a circle at 01:45:226 and remove NC from 01:45:687. Here we have a nice spinner instead of a weird pause, also we have this nice 01:45:226 (1,2) which follow those two base hits in the music before the finish at 01:46:149 and play very well imo. There is also plenty of time after the spinner and the spinner ends just as the vocal hold ends so it fits nice.
Hitsounds

  1. 01:00:018 to 01:31:380 - I'm really confused as to why you didn't include any sort of clapping in this part even though it's the busiest part of the song in terms of clapping in the music. And then you start up claps again at 01:31:380 which is when the music slows down and there really aren't claps in the music. -.- It's not a huge deal, just strange that you would include clapping in the more quite parts and not include it in the louder parts such as the kiai and just before it.

  2. 00:31:402 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Why on-beat clapping? It doesn't fit at all imo. Maybe switch the claps so they fall on the offbeats instead. At 00:37:864 you switch to offbeat. o.o

  3. 01:30:457 (4) - Better to have the custom finish on the end and not a whistle imo. The finish accents the idea in the music better.

  4. 00:59:556 (4) - Maybe instead of a whistle here, put the custom finish to accent the fade out effect that is presented by the music.

  5. 01:31:380 to 01:46:149 - Maybe remove all the claps from here. I'm not sure why you chose to having clapping here because it's the softest part of the song. It better for clapping to begin again at 01:46:149 just like in the music.

  6. 01:46:149 (1) - I think it would be better to have a soft finish here rather than the custom finish due to the loud finish in the music and the return of the base line in the music.

  7. 02:00:457 (4) - Consider adding the custom finish here for a nice effect.
[Normal]

Hitsounds

  1. 01:30:918 - Maybe add a green line and reduce volume by 20% or so for the slider here like the other diffs to accent the idea in the music better.

  2. 02:00:457 - Reduce volume to 5% for slider end? It creates a nice effect, and this is the only diff that it could be done in. It might be fun.
Fantastic Normal diff.

[Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:37:380 (2) - This can be a bit awkward in play. I think it's best to ignore trying to follow the vocals here at all. Extend this slider so that it's a 1/2 slider instead of 1/4.

    Just an example placement, it plays well to me but you could come up with something better.
Hitsounds

  1. 00:59:094 (1) - Maybe add the custom finish to the end. I think it makes a nice effect, just like the normal diff.
[Insane]

Great map, just a few suggestions.

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 00:32:094 (6,1) - I feel like we need larger spacing to the 1. Consider placing the 1 so that it completes the diamond made by 00:31:633 (4,5,6).

  2. 01:30:918 (4) - Consider adding a NC here to make the change in SV a little more clear. Just like you do at 02:00:457 (1).

  3. 01:45:687 (4) - Same, consider a NC for the same reason as above.
Ehh, I'll stop here because sliders seem to be bugged atm and I can't edit them. You can pm me if you'd like a more thorough mod, but I'll probably be back to check on my own. :3

Honestly after changing that clap and the volumes, I'm falling in love with these maps. (: I'm happy to see you mapping again Yasora, your maps are very nice.

Anyways, I hope this is helpful to you, and please change the clap. ;w;
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Insane]

Great map, just a few suggestions.

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:30:918 (4) - Consider adding a NC here to make the change in SV a little more clear. Just like you do at 02:00:457 (1).
    if I add nc in here, will make the patterns (1,2,3,4) weird because different colour :'(
  2. 01:45:687 (4) - Same, consider a NC for the same reason as above. same
others fixed including change the clap
thank you XD!
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hi Yasora!
Here is my mod, sorry so late. -.-

[249's Easy]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:02:325 (3) - I recommend using a different slider shape here. I don't think this loop looks very nice at all because the SV is too low to create a tear. That and it's a bit awkward to read it as is imo. I would recommend a shape but sliders seem to be bugged atm. -.- no the loop fits to the song due to the feeling and emphasis. the top part of the loop represents the highest point in the vocals, in other words...the vocal pitch rises here. and the sliderticks so along with the BGM(not vocals) during gameplay for me.

  2. 01:42:457 (5,1,2) - The pause is a bit awkward to me. Maybe instead you could have a spinner to hit with vocal hold, that might be nice. Consider this:

    Delete the 01:42:457 (5,1). Then put a spinner at 01:42:457 and ending at 01:44:303. Also add a circle at 01:45:226 and remove NC from 01:45:687. Here we have a nice spinner instead of a weird pause, also we have this nice 01:45:226 (1,2) which follow those two base hits in the music before the finish at 01:46:149 and play very well imo. There is also plenty of time after the spinner and the spinner ends just as the vocal hold ends so it fits nice. i guess...fixed.
Hitsounds

  1. 01:00:018 to 01:31:380 - I'm really confused as to why you didn't include any sort of clapping in this part even though it's the busiest part of the song in terms of clapping in the music. And then you start up claps again at 01:31:380 which is when the music slows down and there really aren't claps in the music. -.- It's not a huge deal, just strange that you would include clapping in the more quite parts and not include it in the louder parts such as the kiai and just before it. just my own preference. i don't wanna do the same clap pattern over and over again other wise it'd be boring for me, so i figured to have no hitsounds in this part

  2. 00:31:402 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Why on-beat clapping? It doesn't fit at all imo. Maybe switch the claps so they fall on the offbeats instead. At 00:37:864 you switch to offbeat. o.o yea after giving a lot of thought on this, fixed.

  3. 01:30:457 (4) - Better to have the custom finish on the end and not a whistle imo. The finish accents the idea in the music better. yup fixed.

  4. 00:59:556 (4) - Maybe instead of a whistle here, put the custom finish to accent the fade out effect that is presented by the music. i prefer the whistle. i don't want to overuse the finishes.

  5. 01:31:380 to 01:46:149 - Maybe remove all the claps from here. I'm not sure why you chose to having clapping here because it's the softest part of the song. It better for clapping to begin again at 01:46:149 just like in the music. it'd be boring to have no claps here. i want to raise the mood and feeling of the song.

  6. 01:46:149 (1) - I think it would be better to have a soft finish here rather than the custom finish due to the loud finish in the music and the return of the base line in the music. fixed.

  7. 02:00:457 (4) - Consider adding the custom finish here for a nice effect. it'll sound inconsistent with 01:45:226 (1,2) - since it follows the same phrase in the BGM.

Anyways, I hope this is helpful to you, and please change the clap. ;w;

Sonnyc wrote:

m4m

Uhh.. I heard this song recently in osu and,, this is a remix xD

249's Easy:

00:22:633 (1) - Custom Clap at the start? it'll ruin the feeling in the vocals if i do add the clap.
00:31:402 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Imo, swapping claps and whistles will be better. yup fixed.
00:35:094 (4) - 1 Grid Right moved it somewhere else.
00:36:018 (1,2,3) - Similar hit sound suggestion. Whistle in downbeat, Clap at upbeat please. fixed.
00:42:941 (4) - Clap instead of Whistle in Start and end. same reply as 00:22:633.
00:59:094 (3) - Add Whistle? fixed.
02:00:457 (4) - Imo, placing up at 01:56:764 (4) will be nice. Adjust (3)'s spacing afterwards. fixed.
ty for the mods, and applied the timing points, also Hinsvar, she has her own patterns, i have mine, so no change on that.

SPOILER
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ArtistUnicode:宇多田ヒカル
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
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Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Hey!

249's Easy

  1. 00:16:633 (1) - at first you have claps on every 3rd beat, but then there are claps on every 2nd. So, remove clap from here
  2. 00:18:017 (3) - add clap to the beginning and end, remove from the reverse
  3. 00:30:479 ~ 00:43:864 - why this claps are on every 1st beat? They sound really annoying, move it to every second beat, please
  4. 00:56:325 (1,2) - these notes are the only which have red tick rhythm. They were confusing for me at first play, so I suggest to make this rhythm:
    SPOILER
  5. 01:00:018 - add claps to this part?
Normal

  1. 00:12:017 (1) - add whistle, I think it sounds good
  2. 00:17:556 (1) - change finish to whistle to alternate finish-whistle on downbeats. Sounds better, really
  3. 00:24:941 (1) - same here
  4. 01:47:995 (1) - and same here too
  5. 01:55:380 (1) - ^
Hard

  1. AR -1, please. AR8 don't fit this song
  2. 00:28:633 (1) - change finish to whistle
Insane

  1. AR -1. AR9 IS REALLY TOO FAST for this kind of song
  2. 00:28:633 (1) - change finish to whistle?
  3. 00:43:171 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - no flow jumps are boring jumps! (but I like yours, though). Butttt, try this, please:
    SPOILER
    Square flow aaand
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  4. 00:47:902 - add a note? I miss it :<
  5. 00:59:556 (1) - maybe new combo? To pick out slowdown
  6. 01:31:380 - this is slow part in music. So soft and slooow, so why not 0,75 slowdown? It will be awesome
Sooo good! *^*
YTYuyu
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Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hey!

249's Easy

  1. 00:16:633 (1) - at first you have claps on every 3rd beat, but then there are claps on every 2nd. So, remove clap from here fixed.
  2. 00:18:017 (3) - add clap to the beginning and end, remove from the reverse ^
  3. 00:30:479 ~ 00:43:864 - why this claps are on every 1st beat? They sound really annoying, move it to every second beat, please ^
  4. 00:56:325 (1,2) - these notes are the only which have red tick rhythm. They were confusing for me at first play, so I suggest to make this rhythm:
    SPOILER
    ^
  5. 01:00:018 - add claps to this part? no i find it boring using the same pattern over and over again, so for this one i stick to the whistles for this.
Sooo good! *^*
ty for the mod :D.

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Aurele
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I'll give it a look tonight.
Yasora
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updated all..
thanks 4 mod reiji~!
Aurele
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I'm going to start by saying: The AR of Insane is a bit.. ridiculous. I've talked with Pokie yesterday, we both agreed that it should be changed to one tick lower (AR8).
If you change this or not, pm me to get a mod!

donotkudothispost,thnx

it was already done, orz. I'll edit this with suggestions :D!
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Only one thing before letting it go:

On Insane, I think there's missing a whistle to 01:43:841 (3) - . On the other difficulties, you've added a whistle at this point to keep the consistency with your previous upbeat. I think it would also sound better with the whistle.
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Gabe wrote:

Only one thing before letting it go:

On Insane, I think there's missing a whistle to 01:43:841 (3) - . On the other difficulties, you've added a whistle at this point to keep the consistency with your previous upbeat. I think it would also sound better with the whistle.
done, thank you!
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Bubbled~
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Hi ~ Yasora ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]


  1. 01:37:611 (3) - Move this on 01:37:495 - ,sound much better.
  2. 00:19:171 (8,3) - Move 1 grid right,00:18:710 (6) - symmetrical.
  3. 01:01:171 (4,5,2,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
  4. 01:02:787 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  5. 01:34:380 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]


  1. OD+1 for better diff spread.

OK ~ That's all ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back ~ ;)
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gogo Yasora ~
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Kurai wrote:

gogo Yasora ~
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Kurai wrote:

gogo Yasora ~
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Kurai wrote:

gogo Yasora ~
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Yasora

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Yasora ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]


  1. 01:37:611 (3) - Move this on 01:37:495 - ,sound much better.
  2. 00:19:171 (8,3) - Move 1 grid right,00:18:710 (6) - symmetrical.
  3. 01:01:171 (4,5,2,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
  4. 01:02:787 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  5. 01:34:380 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]


  1. OD+1 for better diff spread.

OK ~ That's all ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back ~ ;)
fixed all
thanks rika~ '-')/
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