Giffen wrote:

hi - Hi~
all sugestion

[Easy, Normal, Hard]
really good map - Yay

[Insane]
01:10:195 (1) - 2 grid down because the only 01:10:195 (4,1) is spread (compared with 00:09:859 (1,2) , 00:26:452 (7,8) and 00:51:591 (1,2) ) - Wow xD Fixed

00:29:804 (3,4,5,6,1) - Why don't you characterize them as like star? ( as if under the picture , and it might be a good idea to exchange (5) for (6)... ) - haha, sure

00:40:027 (9,1) - like under the picture? - Heh, why not

01:06:843 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why don't you characterize them as like under picture ? (exhange (2) for (3) and moved (4) ) - I like the current pattern, so I'll keep it for now ^^

01:09:692 (3) - Why don't you move as if under the picture? i think 01:09:692 (3,4) is more spread is better ) - Sure, didn't do exactly as in the pic, but yeah

really nice map~
give you star~ ~Thanks

1. 00:07:345 (1) - i think better forum is this http://puu.sh/HBwA ( 124,92,7345,6,0,B|80:104|52:160|80:216|124:228,1,180,0|8 )
2. 00:09:859 (1,2) - i think not so good this, gives confusion. how about this ? http://puu.sh/HBtc
3. 00:24:608 (6) - i think this placement are not so good, i hope change this placement
4. 00:32:150 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - i think you should change this, cant first play this to other people. but i like this section
   if you change this, i think better is this http://puu.sh/HBRS
5. 00:45:893 (3) - i think not so good this SV, gives confusion. i think change SV 0.75 or remove silider and add note at 00:45:893 - is better

1. DR-1, AR-1 and OD-1 i think this is better
2. 00:21:591 (4,1) - i think this part is hard to play. i hope change this part
3. 00:32:820 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think this distance gives confusion, so you should change this
4. 00:56:452 (3,1) - i think this part is hard to play. i hope change this part
5. 01:07:345 (4,1) - ^
6. 01:15:306 (3,4) - this stream doesn't match with the overall balance, i hope change this part
7. 01:19:412 - add note
8. 01:20:753 - ^
9. 01:21:088 - ^
10. 01:23:602 (6) - remove whistle and finish

1. i think you should unify all distance
2. i think SV change is not so good, what do you think?
3. 00:24:776 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think this part is hard to play for beginners. i hope change this part

1. OD+1
2. i think you should unify all distance
3. i think SV change is not so good, what do you think?
4. 00:39:021 (2,3) - change slider
5. 00:41:703 (2,3) - ^

Wreath wrote:

from h-728 and Wreath's queue

hi, CXu - Hi~

[Insane]

1. 00:07:345 (1) - i think better forum is this http://puu.sh/HBwA ( 124,92,7345,6,0,B|80:104|52:160|80:216|124:228,1,180,0|8 ) - Yeah, thanks!
2. 00:09:859 (1,2) - i think not so good this, gives confusion. how about this ? http://puu.sh/HBtc - Should be fine to read for an insane imo ^^
3. 00:24:608 (6) - i think this placement are not so good, i hope change this placement - Moved it a wee bit closer, if that helps.
4. 00:32:150 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - i think you should change this, cant first play this to other people. but i like this section - The people I've asked to testplay was able to read this slowdown just fine, so I think there won't be a problem ^^
   if you change this, i think better is this http://puu.sh/HBRS
5. 00:45:893 (3) - i think not so good this SV, gives confusion. i think change SV 0.75 or remove silider and add note at 00:45:893 - is better - Feels awesome to hit these slow sliders though, imo, and they were fine when people tried this, so I'm keeping it. :3

[Hard]

1. DR-1, AR-1 and OD-1 i think this is better - Hmm, I'll keep HP and OD as it is, and I'll wait for more opinion on AR7. Keeping it at AR8 for now~
2. 00:21:591 (4,1) - i think this part is hard to play. i hope change this part - Hmm, I use the later too, and I don't think they are that hard~
3. 00:32:820 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think this distance gives confusion, so you should change this - I'll keep this for now, namely since I think it plays well. If it really is too hard to read, I'll change it around though~
4. 00:56:452 (3,1) - i think this part is hard to play. i hope change this part - I'll keep these as before
5. 01:07:345 (4,1) - ^ - ^
6. 01:15:306 (3,4) - this stream doesn't match with the overall balance, i hope change this part - Yeah, it's the only stream, and I want to keep it because it's the only stream xD
7. 01:19:412 - add note- Following vocals
8. 01:20:753 - ^ - ^
9. 01:21:088 - ^ - ^
10. 01:23:602 (6) - remove whistle and finish - Whoops yeah xD

[Normal]

1. i think you should unify all distance
2. i think SV change is not so good, what do you think?
3. 00:24:776 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think this part is hard to play for beginners. i hope change this part - I'll keep it for now. I think beginners will click the (2) as a stream, then follow the rest as 1/1, and see the stack as another stream.

[Easy]

1. OD+1 - Yeah sure xD
2. i think you should unify all distance
3. i think SV change is not so good, what do you think?
4. 00:39:021 (2,3) - change slider - i think this is okay. Let them beginners click~
5. 00:41:703 (2,3) - ^ - ^

- Regarding different distance and SV in the easier diffs. I don't think a beginner will really see the difference that much, and if there is long enough time, then I think it's better if the notes are a bit closer than what the distance snap says, since travelling longer distances with the cursor is harder than a short distance. I also think the SV changes are readable in both Easy and Normal, although if anyone can prove me wrong, go ahead xD

i like insane, its too interesting
good luck - Thanks~

Muya wrote:

[General]
don't add video? - I will add video from the next episode ^^

[Easy]
00:27:457 (1,2) - hard to read this rhythm in my first try. I think (1)'s end at 00:28:463 is better - Yes, I'll have to agree here. Changed
00:45:893 (1) - maybe this note is not need - I like the feel of it though

[Normal]
00:03:658 (1,1) - can not afford to this for beginner player. - Hmm, I'll change this if one more tells me.
00:25:949 (4,1) - delete (4), and (1)'s start at 00:25:949 - Why didn't I think of this before >< Changed~

[Hard]
00:32:653 - add circle here - Oh! This should make this part easier to read Thanks!

Taiko and Insane is seems fine.

Amule wrote:

^ Hi~
All suggestion

General
01:15:725 (1) ~ 01:16:731 : Sound volume 80~85% is more good imo - Agree. Changed to 80%~

Easy
ughh sorry I cannot point -

Normal
01:07:010 (3) - new combo ? - Yeah, fixed~

Hard
00:32:653 (4) - remove notes because it's difficult to expect - Heh, now that I think about it, this might be easier to read with the antijump, as that would set you up for a slowdown. Removed this note again~ (inb4 I add and remove this every other mod)

Insane
01:23:770 (1) - begin from 01:23:686 - Starting on the same place as the other difficulties, and I think this is fine so, not changing ^^

kusano wrote:

From my queue - Hi~

[Easy]
AR+1? - I'll wait for more input. Isn't low AR ok for the easiest diff tho?

00:19:412 (3) - add NC - Agree xD
00:40:865 (1) - remove NC - ^
00:52:262 (1,1,1) - ^ - Following the same pattern as in the other difficulties, so I'd like to keep this ^^
01:02:988 (1,1,1) - ^ - ^

[Normal]

00:09:021 (6,1) - switch NC - I put the nc on 00:09:692, then removed it from 00:10:697
00:16:060 (1) - remove NC - I'll hear more opinion. I like this 1 combo slider a bit xD
00:35:502 (3) - add NC - Feels weird to have a NC here imo, so keeping.
00:52:262 (1,1,1) - remove NC - Same as in other diffs.
01:02:988 (1,1,1) - ^ - ^

[Hard]

00:07:345 (1) - remove NC - Feels so much like a new pattern that I think NC is okay.
00:10:530 (1) - ^ - Slowdown
00:27:122 (1,2) - switch NC - Yeah, changed.

[Insane]

00:03:239 (6) - remove whistle it's better imo - Yes, changed
00:17:736 (3) - 1gird up the 2nd waypoint, in this way the blanket are good for each slider - Ok~
00:23:770 (1) - remove NC? - Combo would be so long then
00:26:787 (8) - Replace finish with clap? - I just liked this finish for some reason xD
00:48:826 (8) - add note? - I'm not good at making these triples, so sure
00:47:234 (4) - 1gird below the last waypoint, in this way the blanket are good for each slider - Ok~

good luck - Thanks

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~ - Hi~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
none

[Easy]
00:03:993 (1) - start=00:04:664? - Hmm, I think it's better to have more time for a spinner in an Easy difficulty, and the current start should be okay I think ^^
00:09:859 (3) - difficult timing and BPM179(not slow...) - Actually, even if you hit this at 1/1, you will not sliderbreak here, so I think it's fine It's good to not only have 1/1 in easy imo.
00:55:446 (3,4) - short distance. 00:56:619 (4) - NC or resnap? - Ah, this is okay in 1.0x distance snap.

[Normal]
nice map!

[Taiko]
Set Taiko BG - Yeah, will do xD Leaving this for Kinomi to fix
I suggest use bulue and red new combo colors. red=don bule=katt
00:05:837 (21) - katt
00:06:005 (22) - don
00:16:563 (67) - don
00:46:228~ I like it

[Hard]
nice map!

[Insane]
nice map!

Sorry. such short modding...
☆～
Good luck!! - Thanks for star~

1. 00:09:859 (3) - Hmm I don't think that sliders at red ticks in Easy diff is a good idea. I recommend you to replace 00:09:357 (2) with a slider with repeat at 00:09:859 and end at 00:10:362. Sounds good and avoids this little issue. This is just to make this diff more friendly for beginners, you know~
2. 00:16:396 (3) - I suggest you to unstack this note to make this spacing more friendly (same thing that I already mentioned above). It's better to leave this kind of patterns to Normal diffs.
3. 00:21:424 (2,3) - ^ I also suggest you to remove (3) to keep an easy and more suitable rhythm for beginners (1/1).
4. 00:24:440 (3) - ^ Same thing as above about removing this kind of notes.
5. 00:26:452 (2) - ^
6. 00:27:457 (1,2) - (Aesthetically) Those slider don't look good. They have weird shapes but they aren't placed in a intuitive way, which makes them look bad. How about trying another better pattern? I tried to make another pattern there, and this is what I've got. It looks better than your previous one (imo, obviously).
7. 00:32:150 (2) - Why did you leave that empty space after this slider? If you pay attention and listen, the singer is still singing, so this slider should have a repeat to follow better the music.
8. 00:38:183 (1,2,3) - I personally dislike a lot this rhythm. You were doing 1/1 rhythms so, why would you make a 1/2 rhythm here? I understand that you did it to follow exactly the voice, but It would be confusing for beginners. I suggest you to remake this part, making it more simple (1/1).
9. 00:46:228 (1) - Hm not a so necessary nc. It's better if you remove it imo. I get its purpose but since you didn't mapped when the singer started to sing that part (00:45:558) it doesn't make sense at all.
10. 00:49:580 (4) - To avoid that long combo (6), add a nc here to keep following the vocals. Also, if you do this, remove 00:51:591 (1) nc, it's really unnecessary. After that, remove nc of 00:52:932 (1) and 00:53:602 (1) (they're just unnecessary too. You should avoid short combos. They might be confusing, because beginners may doubt when to click the note).
11. 00:56:619 (4) - I suggest you to add nc to 4 and remove nc of 00:56:954 (1). (Same reasons that I told you already about 00:46:228 (1))
12. 01:00:306 (4) - If you accepted my combo suggestions, to keep them consistent, add a nc here, remove nc of 01:02:317 (1), 01:03:658 (1), and 01:04:328 (1).
13. 01:10:865 (3,4) - Moar notes at red ticks. :l
14. 01:18:407 (1,2,3,4) - You should rearrange this pattern. Every slider of this pattern gets its end overlapped by the hitburst of another slider. That would be confusing and, that would cover a lot the view of the player. Beginners are slow to read patterns. They'll not have chance to check if any of those slider has a repeat arrow or not (they don't have but while playing the player might consider it anyway). Also, you didn't used distance snap here so you'll have to fix those spacings.
15. 01:27:792 - I cannot hear the end of this spinner. I have my pc's volume at max and I cannot hear it. That may be an unrankable issue (hitsounds must be audible). Just in case, you should consider raising the volume of this green line a bit.
    
    A bit challenging.. but good, overall.

1. 00:19:412 (1) - Spacing. Sometimes, a change of spacing in a Normal diff is acceptable. But, this song is fast and the overall rhythm of this diff is a bit fast too, so I find it better to avoid changes of spacing.
2. 00:30:139 (1) - ^
3. 00:30:809 (2,3,4) - ^
4. 00:32:820 (1) - It's not a good idea to change the slider velocity in a normal diff. It makes sense, yup, but I personally think that it's better to leave this kind of things to hard and insane diffs.
5. 00:42:876 (1,2,3) - And, if you changed of spacing before, why not here? it sounds slow as 00:32:820 (1) part, so I don't see why not.
6. 00:52:262 (1,1,1) - They're the same unnecessary nc that I pointed out already in your easy. I suggest you to remove them.
7. 01:02:988 (1,1,1) - ^
8. 01:15:725 (1) - Spacing again.
9. 01:16:228 (2,3) - ^
10. 01:20:418 (4) - ^ o.o
    
    So many jumps, and quite challenging :l I personally dislike this difficulty.

1. 00:26:452 (5) - This slider looks so weird and out of place. I found this placement way better.
2. 00:42:876 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing that I pointed out in your normal. If you had a slowdown before, and here the song sounds slow too, why u didn't made another slowdown here?
3. 00:47:904 (4) - To follow better the voice, I suggest you to add a nc here.
4. 00:52:764 (1) - Although this is a hard diff, I still find those nc unnecessary. I suggest you to remove them (this one here, and 00:53:435 (1) nc).
5. 00:56:452 (3) - Those claps sound sooo loud. They hurt my ears. lol. I suggest you to add a green line here with lower volume or something.
6. 01:02:820 (1) - Moar unnecessary nc (imo).
7. 01:15:306 (3) - I think that this part sounds better if you remove claps of this note.
   
   Great difficulty~ I really like it how it is.

1. 00:21:591 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This sounds so loud. I suggest you to add a green line with less sample's volume.
2. 00:32:150 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
3. 00:42:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - No slowdown here neither? I pointed this out .. 2 times, If I'm not wrong so I'll not explain it again.
4. 00:45:893 (3) - OH! No slowdown at ^, but here, yeaaah here's a slowdown.
5. 00:56:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This volume still rape my ears.
6. 01:14:887 (2) - This slider looks so out of place. I think that it should have the same shape as 01:14:385 (1) to make the pattern more prettier.
7. 01:15:306 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - My ears. .-.
8. 01:23:267 (8) - This combo is way too long. To shorten it, try adding a nc here. It fits with the vocals. :3
   
   Awesome :3 You did so many interesting patterns here.

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.

[Taiko]
Set Taiko BG - Putting red font on this text makes me think that you are saying that I'm not using Taiko BG is unrankable. Not really.
I suggest use bulue and red new combo colors. red=don bule=katt - Oh my god, this is unnecessary and going to take a lot of time to do this now.

(none applied)
00:05:837 (21) - katt
00:06:005 (22) - don
00:16:563 (67) - don
00:46:228~ I like it - Thank you.

Sorry. such short modding...
☆～
Good luck!!

Kei wrote:

Random modding. Request taken from #modreqs. - Hi~

[Easy]

1. 00:09:859 (3) - Hmm I don't think that sliders at red ticks in Easy diff is a good idea. I recommend you to replace 00:09:357 (2) with a slider with repeat at 00:09:859 and end at 00:10:362. Sounds good and avoids this little issue. This is just to make this diff more friendly for beginners, you know~ - It's a slider that you can hit even if you hit it 1/2 late. I think having few sliders/notes on red ticks helps beginners getting accustomed to other rhythms than 1/1.
2. 00:16:396 (3) - I suggest you to unstack this note to make this spacing more friendly (same thing that I already mentioned above). It's better to leave this kind of patterns to Normal diffs. - Moderate amounts of stacks should be okay, even in easy difficulties. Imagine a beginner playing only Easy difficulties, and then starting on Normal. Having seen atleast some stacks would definetly help more than never having seen them before.
3. 00:21:424 (2,3) - ^ I also suggest you to remove (3) to keep an easy and more suitable rhythm for beginners (1/1). - These are in 1/1
4. 00:24:440 (3) - ^ Same thing as above about removing this kind of notes. - ^
5. 00:26:452 (2) - ^ - ^
6. 00:27:457 (1,2) - (Aesthetically) Those slider don't look good. They have weird shapes but they aren't placed in a intuitive way, which makes them look bad. How about trying another better pattern? I tried to make another pattern there, and this is what I've got. It looks better than your previous one (imo, obviously). - I like the look of the current ones.
7. 00:32:150 (2) - Why did you leave that empty space after this slider? If you pay attention and listen, the singer is still singing, so this slider should have a repeat to follow better the music. - Following a sound by not mapping it is also possible. Having a longer part with nothing mapped is also good for reading the slider velocity change.
8. 00:38:183 (1,2,3) - I personally dislike a lot this rhythm. You were doing 1/1 rhythms so, why would you make a 1/2 rhythm here? I understand that you did it to follow exactly the voice, but It would be confusing for beginners. I suggest you to remake this part, making it more simple (1/1). - No because clicking between vocals, which is the most natural thing to do for a beginner, feels weird and silly.
9. 00:46:228 (1) - Hm not a so necessary nc. It's better if you remove it imo. I get its purpose but since you didn't mapped when the singer started to sing that part (00:45:558) it doesn't make sense at all. - It does for me, so I'm keeping it.
10. 00:49:580 (4) - To avoid that long combo (6), add a nc here to keep following the vocals. Also, if you do this, remove 00:51:591 (1) nc, it's really unnecessary. After that, remove nc of 00:52:932 (1) and 00:53:602 (1) (they're just unnecessary too. You should avoid short combos. They might be confusing, because beginners may doubt when to click the note). - Except the combo goes up to (5), and no it's not long. And new combos has the same pattern as the other difficulties, and in general also looks better.
11. 00:56:619 (4) - I suggest you to add nc to 4 and remove nc of 00:56:954 (1). (Same reasons that I told you already about 00:46:228 (1)) - No.
12. 01:00:306 (4) - If you accepted my combo suggestions, to keep them consistent, add a nc here, remove nc of 01:02:317 (1), 01:03:658 (1), and 01:04:328 (1). - No.
13. 01:10:865 (3,4) - Moar notes at red ticks. :l - Yes indeed more red ticks.
14. 01:18:407 (1,2,3,4) - You should rearrange this pattern. Every slider of this pattern gets its end overlapped by the hitburst of another slider. That would be confusing and, that would cover a lot the view of the player. Beginners are slow to read patterns. They'll not have chance to check if any of those slider has a repeat arrow or not (they don't have but while playing the player might consider it anyway). Also, you didn't used distance snap here so you'll have to fix those spacings. - I doubt beginners will be considering and trying to check if there is a repeat there. It's much more common, atleast when I look, that beginners don't read a repeat. Well, if this poses a problem, I'll change it later. Also, the distance here is consistently 0.87x.
15. 01:27:792 - I cannot hear the end of this spinner. I have my pc's volume at max and I cannot hear it. That may be an unrankable issue (hitsounds must be audible). Just in case, you should consider raising the volume of this green line a bit. - I hear it completely fine. 5% volume is not unrankeble.
    
    A bit challenging.. but good, overall.

[Normal]

1. 00:19:412 (1) - Spacing. Sometimes, a change of spacing in a Normal diff is acceptable. But, this song is fast and the overall rhythm of this diff is a bit fast too, so I find it better to avoid changes of spacing. - If I were playing a Normal diff, as a normal-diff-player, I wouldn't even notice such a spacing change. If more people complain, I'll change it, but really, I doubt it's a problem.
2. 00:30:139 (1) - ^ - Patterns are easy to read, even when there is a spacing change.
3. 00:30:809 (2,3,4) - ^ - ^
4. 00:32:820 (1) - It's not a good idea to change the slider velocity in a normal diff. It makes sense, yup, but I personally think that it's better to leave this kind of things to hard and insane diffs. - Same reasoning as 1/2 in easy. If you never change sliderspeeds in Normal, then a normal->hard player would go "wtf why dis slider slow D:" as he have never experienced it before. Experiencing these things in a more familiar environment/difficulty is better imo. Also, the speed change makes enough sense for me to be alright, even in Normal.
5. 00:42:876 (1,2,3) - And, if you changed of spacing before, why not here? it sounds slow as 00:32:820 (1) part, so I don't see why not. - Because it doesn't sound slow to me.
6. 00:52:262 (1,1,1) - They're the same unnecessary nc that I pointed out already in your easy. I suggest you to remove them. - No.
7. 01:02:988 (1,1,1) - ^ - ^
8. 01:15:725 (1) - Spacing again. - No.
9. 01:16:228 (2,3) - ^ - ^
10. 01:20:418 (4) - ^ o.o - ^
    
    So many jumps, and quite challenging :l I personally dislike this difficulty.
    ^ What you are essentially calling jumps in this difficulty is just notes that are a bit farther away, something I don't consider a jump.

[Hard]

1. 00:26:452 (5) - This slider looks so weird and out of place. I found this placement way better. - but I don't.
2. 00:42:876 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing that I pointed out in your normal. If you had a slowdown before, and here the song sounds slow too, why u didn't made another slowdown here? - Because it doesn't.
3. 00:47:904 (4) - To follow better the voice, I suggest you to add a nc here. - None of the other difficulties have this, and I don't think it makes sense anyway.
4. 00:52:764 (1) - Although this is a hard diff, I still find those nc unnecessary. I suggest you to remove them (this one here, and 00:53:435 (1) nc). - No.
5. 00:56:452 (3) - Those claps sound sooo loud. They hurt my ears. lol. I suggest you to add a green line here with lower volume or something. - Sure.
6. 01:02:820 (1) - Moar unnecessary nc (imo). - No.
7. 01:15:306 (3) - I think that this part sounds better if you remove claps of this note. - Sure.
   
   Great difficulty~ I really like it how it is.

[Insane]

1. 00:21:591 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This sounds so loud. I suggest you to add a green line with less sample's volume. - No.
2. 00:32:150 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ - ^
3. 00:42:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - No slowdown here neither? I pointed this out .. 2 times, If I'm not wrong so I'll not explain it again. - And, again, no.
4. 00:45:893 (3) - OH! No slowdown at ^, but here, yeaaah here's a slowdown. - Indeed there is.
5. 00:56:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This volume still rape my ears. - Lowered a little bit.
6. 01:14:887 (2) - This slider looks so out of place. I think that it should have the same shape as 01:14:385 (1) to make the pattern more prettier. - No.
7. 01:15:306 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - My ears. .-. - Here's your 60%.
8. 01:23:267 (8) - This combo is way too long. To shorten it, try adding a nc here. It fits with the vocals. :3 - Long combo's arent a problem really.
   
   Awesome :3 You did so many interesting patterns here.

I hope this was helpful. Good luck :3!!

Dark Fang wrote:

Hai~ - Hi~
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's go

[General]

offset +10 (652) - I will fix offset and similar things when I get another .mp3 and a video

[Easy]

I think that's good '^'d

[Normal]

nothing special

[Hard]

AR -1? - Ok, a lot of people have said this, so changing~
01:04:999 (2) - why don't you try make like this? - I just like this slider xD

[Insane]

AR -1 cuz that's awkward for 179 BPM - AR8 feels too slow for this map imo. And it's not because I can only read AR9 or anything like that, I just think it fits more xD
HP-1?
OD -1?
^Keeping these settings too.
01:23:267 (8,9,10,11,12) - why don't you try make like this? cuz that's too confusion for play. and NC - I like this pattern and how it plays, so I'm keeping it, and I'll also keep the combo as it it~

[Kinomi's Taiko]

00:43:547 ~ 00:44:552 - why don't you follow vocal?

good maps :3
good luck

Have a good time - Thanks

Netsukawa wrote:

Your source should be fix.

Sword Art Online SWORD ART ONLINE

Melophobia wrote:

A quick mod~ - Hi~

[General]
mp3quality is so poor imo, try to find better one - I got this from the episode though... I'll see if I can get a better one.
sliderslide is really noisy especially on the beginning of this song. consider adding muted one. - Sure.

[Easy]
00:09:859 (3) - i'd suggest to remove finish from the end of this slider, the drum sound is not as strong as 00:09:859 - - Yeah ok.
00:11:368 (1) - add finish here, i can hear it in the music - Sure.
00:35:502 (2) - ^ -
01:09:692 (2) - add finish at the end - Ok.
01:10:865 (3,4,5) - add finishes - Nah, that would be noisy imo.
01:23:770 (1) - this should start at 01:23:602 - - Heh, yes you're right.


[Normal]
00:03:658 (1) - start this at 00:03:491 - -
00:06:340 (1) - way too soon after a spinner, beginners need at least 2 beats recovery time - It's normal. You should be a bit more than a beginner at this point. Also, it's close to the center of the spinner, so I think it's fine.
00:09:859 (2) - same reason as Easy, remove finish from the end - Yes
00:35:502 (3) - add finish at the beginning - Yes
00:42:876 (1) - ^ at the end - ^
00:55:446 (2) - finish at the end? fits vocal/music better - I like the clap xD
01:06:172 (2) - ^ - ^
01:10:865 (2,3) - ^ - ^
01:23:770 (1) - same as Easy - K

[Hard]
00:21:591 (4) - this slider is too loud, try to reduce the volume by 20% - Added a gradual increase
00:56:452 (3) - ^ - ^
01:10:865 (3,5) - add finishes at the beginning of them - Too many finishes makes me go bleh.

[Insane]
00:21:591 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as Hard. reduce volume a bit~ -
00:40:195 (1) - adjust spacing to make triangle? - Haha yes!
http://puu.sh/IhvN
00:45:893 (3) - add newcombo to warn change of SV? - I think this should be okay to read.
00:56:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as Hard - Added a gradual increase.
01:10:865 (1,1) - add finishes at the beginning - Nah.
01:23:267 (8,9,10,11,12) - kinda hard for me to hit.. it'd be better to decrease spacing a bit - I can hit it just fine (the motion I mean xD) and I like it, so I'll keep it ^^

nice map, good luck! - Thanks!

Dark Fang wrote:

Hai~
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's go

[Kinomi's Taiko]

00:43:547 ~ 00:44:552 - why don't you follow vocal? I don't see why I should. Taiko is meant to follow the drums and beats, not vocals. So everything is currently okay in that part, so no changes, sorry.

good maps :3
good luck

Have a good time

Melophobia wrote:

mp3quality is so poor imo, try to find better one - I got this from the episode though... I'll see if I can get a better one.

Nidert wrote:

[General]
Since it's an opening, maybe video? (Derp, didn't read your first post. Well, w/e xD)
[Easy]
00:03:993 (1) - Maybe end it the spinner at 00:05:669 - and add a slider at 00:06:005 - like this

SPOILER

but maybe since it's an easy, it's better the way it is. - It's probably better, to have more time to react to the next note
00:45:893 (1) - I'd much rather have it placed at 00:45:558 - but as the thing above, since it's an easy it may be too early :l - Idk, I like it xD And yeah, Easy~

[Normal]
00:03:993 (1) - Well I won't go on about this, but I still think the spinner should end at 00:05:669 - and then have a note added at 00:06:005 - - xD Keeping for now.
00:45:633 - This one feels kind of forced, it would be better if you'd remove it. - You mean the triple? I think it should be alright.
00:45:558 (1,2,3) - This might be too difficult for a normal, maybe if you remove the second one it would be better. - It's one of those parts I want the feel of having to click a lot, because it's the end of the build-up to the chorus Well, I'll remove it if it poses a problem, but keeping it for now~
00:56:284 (1,2,3) - ^ - ^

[Hard]
00:03:155 (5) - This sounds very weird, maybe you should replace it with a triple or a note that goes from 00:03:155 - to 00:03:323 - - Trying to keep streams away from Hard as much as possible, so only 1 part of the map has a stream, really. Not quite sure how to fix this though. Tried reducing volume a bit, if that's better.
00:03:993 (1) - You know the drill. - :p
00:18:072 (1,2) - Sup with these funny looking sliders? - They are totemo kool.
00:21:591 (4) - Remove the last repeat. - Hah, yes why not xD
00:22:094 (1,2,3,4) - This part can be very confusing while playing, I'd recommend removing the repeat on the first slider and add a note on 00:22:429 - - I'll keep it in mind, but no changes for now.

SPOILER

00:24:776 (1,2,3) - I would say it for this one too, but it's easier to read since there is no fast repeat slider before it. - :p
00:56:452 (3) - Remove the last repeat. - Yesh.

[Insane]
I love this map as it is, so to find faults for it is really hard :3 -
00:04:329 (1) - Why not begin the spinner at 00:04:329 (1) - - You probably copied the time when you had the spinner selected xD But yeah, starting the spinner here because that's where I hear that sound starting (that sound being very descriptive)
00:26:452 (7,8) - Instead of ending the slider at 00:26:452 (7) - it plays better with ending it at 00:26:619 - - Nah, 1/4 <3

Well, hopefully this helped in someway xD - It was, Thanks

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Hi =D - Hi~

Here I am from my modding queue ^^


General:

Nothing =)


Please remember I am only making suggestions but please try them out and when you like them than I mae a good job ^^


Easy:

Question : Is it allowed to use so many different spacings in an Easy ? Never saw that befor. - We'll see xD I just find that as long as the diffspacingchanges doesn't really feel forced, they should be allright.

00:27:457 suggestion http://puu.sh/Iqwx if you make it put a finish at the start o lideer 5 and a whistle at the end and at start and end of slider 6 whistle .
Sounds good and looks good ^^ - I like funnylooking sliders~
00:40:195 put first combo on middle line for same spacing and than like this ? http://puu.sh/IqDJ - I didn't quite understand this
00:49:245 put combo 3 until 5 like spacing is. It looks good either, dunno why u use spacing 1,06 - 1,07. - Well, to make the blanketting better xD
01:00:306 ^ - ^
01:09:524 why use spacing 1,09 ? http://puu.sh/IqHN the orignal spacing u used looks good there, too. - Eh, good question. Fixed.
01:19:748 put end of slider 2 exactly in end of first slider. - Sigh, I'll work on this more in a bit xD
01:21:088 put end of slider 3 exactly in end of slider 2. - ^
01:22:429 ^ same like befor - ^

That is it for Easy ^w^


Normal

00:15:055 ( combo 4 and 5 )Put them like this ? http://puu.sh/IqJN - They're slightly shifted because of stacking in-game.
00:22:429 make them like spacing is ? http://puu.sh/IqL0 looks almost like befor to me. - I think this is fine~
00:30:820 until 00:36:843 are jumps allowed in Normal and a spacing like that ? There are more changing spacing sometimes but i don`t know if that has to be changed. - I think patterned small jumps like these should be allright, as they're intuitive. Well, I'll keep them until people nudge me xD

That is it for Normal ^^


Hard

Only one thing to say =D
01:10:195 I like that pattern x3 http://puu.sh/IqP5 - haha, Thanks xD

Nothing more x3 It is a great ^^


Insane

00:21:591 new combo ?
00:32:150 ^
01:07:345 ^
01:23:267 ^
^Stream NC's, so I didn't change any, as I like it this way xD
That is it =D

I like the song and the beatmap x3 Good Luck ^^ - thanks

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Turn off letterboxes in all diffs. You don't have a breaks + you will add video - Done
things like this are forbidden: - Will fix when I need to re-adjust offset


Hard
00:20:083 (3,4,5) - 1,0x spacing seems strange here - Changed to 1,1x Should look better now~

Easy
00:45:893 (1) - i'd remove this note - Meh, I just like the feel of it for some reason xD So yeah, if possible, I'd like to keep it~

Philippines wrote:

I'm guessing a fast rank ~ On the other hand, please tell me a reason if you don't agree on my suggestions. - Hi~ Well, I do want this to be ranked soon, but well, if I need to, I'll use the time

General

1. Your source should be "Sword Art Online", not "SWORD ART ONLINE". - Isn't this fixed already?
   
   
2. Folder seems clean. Less worries ^^

Easy

1. This diff would look better with AR 3. Try it and see if it's better. - Ok.
   
   
2. 00:03:993 (1) - This spinner I believe is misplaced. I highly suggest that you should start your spinner on 00:03:658 so that this spinner will flow smoothly with the ascending volume effect on your song. - Well, that's the thing. I believe the ascending volume effect basically starts at 00:03:993 :p
   
   
3. 00:12:709 (3) - I'm not really sure if you're trying to make this slider a mini beat blanket for the previous note. If you are, it's not looking good. What about move the 3rd point 2 grids to the right? Looks better. - It is a mini-blanked. If you meant the 2nd point, thenn changed, if not, then nope, because the 3rd point would look weird xD
   
   
4. 00:24:440 (3) - The spacing is between the notes of this circle is not consistent. Please fix this little problem. This suggestion also applies to the note in 00:26:452 (2). - Moved 00:24:105 (2) closer, as well as 00:26:787 (3).
   
   
5. 00:46:228 (1) - If you will look closely, this slider is not symmetrical. Moreover, the slider doesn't even look great for my perspective. Try to make a perfect circle out of this one. I think it would be better. - Scaled it a bit. Should be a bit more symmetrical now. The shape will stay though.
   
   
6. 00:51:591 (1,1,1,1) - New combo abuse is not really appropriate for an Easy diff in my opinion. I suggest use (1,2,1,2) combo pattern instead, although (1,2,3,4,) would be better. - I want these to be consistent over all the difficulties, so I'm keeping this.
   
   
7. 00:56:954 (1) - The same opinion I told you about the slider in 00:46:228. Please fix this one and make sure they're symmetrical for better gameplay. - Did the same as earlier
   
   
8. 01:02:317 (1,1,1,1) - Another combo abuse >< Try (1,2,1,2) or (1,2,3,4,) instead. - Same as earlier.
   
   
9. 01:07:010 (1) - Fix the spacing here for better gameplay. They don't look good. - Herpderp fix xD
   
   
10. 01:09:692 (2) - Move the 2nd point one grid left and the 3rd point one grid up for better slider blanket. - Done

Normal

1. 00:01:982 (2) - Inconsistent spacing. Fix this one for better gameplay. - This is totally fine to read when you're playing.
   
   
2. 00:03:491 (1) - This spinner ended so late in my opinion. I highly suggest that you try to find a way to move the note on 00:06:340 near to the center so that the players can hit it easily even after they finish spinning. - 00:06:340 (1) is already near the center, and putting it closer would make a overlap from the hitburst from the spinner.
   
   
3. 00:14:049 (3,4,5) - This beat blanket needs more improvement. Try to make it look like this. - Click me
   
   
4. 00:18:072 (1) - I don't think a new combo for this note is not necessary. Please remove it. - Not necessary, but I like it and it wont hinder gameplay, so I'm keeping it.
   
   
5. 00:32:820 ~ 00:37:848 - The "slow down" on in this section is too slow. I think x.7~x.8 would fit this one. - Yes, 0.7x~0.8x would probably fit too, but same goes for 0.5x imo.
   
   
6. 00:51:591 (1,1,1,1) - Another one of your new combo things. Choose between these two combo patterns: (1,2,1,2) / (1,2,3,4). - Same reasoning as before.
   
   
7. 01:02:317 (1,1,1,1) - Another weird new combo pattern. ^ - ^
   
   
8. 01:23:435 (5) - Weird ending. I highly suggest you change this one with a 1/2 slider. It plays better. Don't forget to move your spinner 1/2 too if you followed this suggestion. - Heh, why not~

Hard

1. 00:48:910 (5) - The part of this slider is already off grid. Please try to move it away from the side. - Off grid, yeah, but it's not off screen, so it's fine
   
   
2. 00:59:133 (5) - Fix spacing by moving this note 1 grid down. I know it's nazi, but it doesn't look good on gameplay. - Moved (5) 2 grids down and (6) 1 grid down. Should be fine now.
   
   
3. To be honest, this diff is a bit perfect but let's try to look on the other side. I'm not really sure about your spacing. Don't try to think that this one is a huge problem. But the whole diff's spacing ranges from x1.0 to 1.25 (please tell me if I'm wrong). I hope you can try to make the spacing between the notes consistent. I know it will take some time but fixing this will make your map more readable and fun to play. (: - The map is already readable. It's not like different spacing like this, especially in a hard diff, would be unreadable.

Insane

1. 00:24:357 (4,5) - Move (4) 1 grid left and (5) 2 grids right. Nazi lol ^^ - This is supposed to be straight
   
   
2. 00:28:798 (1) - There is a great opportunity of turning this slider into a beat blanket. Do it for the sake of better gameplay ^^. - Already blankets previous slider.
   
   
3. 00:29:301 (2) - Weird structure of a slider. Also, the point part is off grid. Fix this one please. - Not offscreen, and the structure is just one of my preferences^^
   
   
4. 00:29:804 (3) - Fix this beat blanket effect. Doesn't look good. On the other hand, is this meant to be a blanket or not? lol - It's supposed to be in the middleground between blanketing both 00:28:798 (1) and 00:30:306 (4).
   
   
5. 00:34:161 (4) - Copy this one on 00:35:167 then press Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R. Trust me, It'll look better. - Lol, done.
   
   
6. 01:01:815 (4,5,6) - Please try to make the spacing consistent on this part. They're so hard to hit imo. - Really? I can do them just fine though x.x I'll keep this for now, since it's the same as 00:51:088 (4,5,6)
   
   
7. 01:22:429 (4) - Weird slider curve. Why not copy the slider 01:21:926 (2) instead and do a Ctrl+R? - It already is, the (4) is a copy of (2). I did a ctrl+R on the (2), then did it again to fix this. Probably okay now.
   
   
8. 01:23:267 (8,9,10,11,12) - What about this pattern instead? I think it's better to start the stream in the top part. - Nah, the pattern is going counter-clockwise ^^
   
   
9. Btw, your HP Drain for this diff is a pain >< Try to reduce it by 2. :O - Let them burn!! Well not really, but I don't think the HP-drain really is an issue here xP Also, reducing HP by even 1 tick would result in star ratings rating Insane easier than Hard xD

End of my Mod | PM me back after you fix my suggestions for a recheck (: - Ok, Thanks

MMzz wrote:

boink http://puu.sh/Iya3
taiko map for u

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Turn off letterboxes in all diffs. You don't have a breaks + you will add video
things like this are forbidden:

nold_1702 wrote:

Hi! - Hi~


[General]
You didn't snap kiai the kiai times correctly in all diffs.
Snap them all 46420 -->snap to46421 - Ok fix

[Normal] ~ [Insane] 00:00:164 (1,2,3) - (1)>Whistle (2)>soft (3)>whistle? - Lol YES! xD

[Easy]
AIBAT told me this map full of unsnapped objects.

SPOILER

Click "Resnap all notes please" - Oh snap (no pun intended) Fixed

No other problems.Sorry

1. nothing wrong here.

1. 00:30:918 - Add green line 40%?
2. 00:32:259 - Add green line 60%?
3. 00:41:057 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376461 looks better to me
4. 00:46:923 (4,1) - wrong here. please check note
5. 01:23:459 (8) - Add new combo looks beautiful

1. 00:30:918 - same as insane
2. 00:32:259 - ^
3. 01:08:376 - Add note here?

1. 00:18:934 (2,1) - spacing too faraway
2. 00:30:331 (1,2,3,4) - ^

1. 00:10:052 (3,1) - too close?
   

S o r d a wrote:

from in-games - Hi~
SAO<3 - <3

[overall]:

1. nothing wrong here.

[Insane]:

1. 00:30:918 - Add green line 40%? - Feels very weird for me
2. 00:32:259 - Add green line 60%? - ^
3. 00:41:057 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376461 looks better to me - Hitburst from (7) has already faded away, so I think it's fine ^^
4. 00:46:923 (4,1) - wrong here. please check note - omg fixed
5. 01:23:459 (8) - Add new combo looks beautiful - Meh, so many have told me this now xD Fixed

[Hard]:

1. 00:30:918 - same as insane - Same as Insane
2. 00:32:259 - ^ - ^
3. 01:08:376 - Add note here? - Haha sure xD Added.

[Normal]:

1. 00:18:934 (2,1) - spacing too faraway - Might be, but I think the pattern itself is readable enough for this ^^
2. 00:30:331 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^

[Easy]:

1. 00:10:052 (3,1) - too close? - I think should be fine. ^^
   

All diff Nice map most is a suggestion
sorry for the delay
and Good luck! - Thanks!

rickyboi wrote:

Nice map onii-san

go for rank!

CDFA wrote:

inb4 someone complains about the BG

I asked someone about it but they told me "lol go away fgt" so I'm assuming that means that it's a-ok