Aleks719 wrote:

General
Turn off letterboxes in all diffs. You don't have a breaks + you will add video - Done
things like this are forbidden: - Will fix when I need to re-adjust offset


Hard
00:20:083 (3,4,5) - 1,0x spacing seems strange here - Changed to 1,1x Should look better now~

Easy
00:45:893 (1) - i'd remove this note - Meh, I just like the feel of it for some reason xD So yeah, if possible, I'd like to keep it~

Philippines wrote:

I'm guessing a fast rank ~ On the other hand, please tell me a reason if you don't agree on my suggestions. - Hi~ Well, I do want this to be ranked soon, but well, if I need to, I'll use the time

General

1. Your source should be "Sword Art Online", not "SWORD ART ONLINE". - Isn't this fixed already?
   
   
2. Folder seems clean. Less worries ^^

Easy

1. This diff would look better with AR 3. Try it and see if it's better. - Ok.
   
   
2. 00:03:993 (1) - This spinner I believe is misplaced. I highly suggest that you should start your spinner on 00:03:658 so that this spinner will flow smoothly with the ascending volume effect on your song. - Well, that's the thing. I believe the ascending volume effect basically starts at 00:03:993 :p
   
   
3. 00:12:709 (3) - I'm not really sure if you're trying to make this slider a mini beat blanket for the previous note. If you are, it's not looking good. What about move the 3rd point 2 grids to the right? Looks better. - It is a mini-blanked. If you meant the 2nd point, thenn changed, if not, then nope, because the 3rd point would look weird xD
   
   
4. 00:24:440 (3) - The spacing is between the notes of this circle is not consistent. Please fix this little problem. This suggestion also applies to the note in 00:26:452 (2). - Moved 00:24:105 (2) closer, as well as 00:26:787 (3).
   
   
5. 00:46:228 (1) - If you will look closely, this slider is not symmetrical. Moreover, the slider doesn't even look great for my perspective. Try to make a perfect circle out of this one. I think it would be better. - Scaled it a bit. Should be a bit more symmetrical now. The shape will stay though.
   
   
6. 00:51:591 (1,1,1,1) - New combo abuse is not really appropriate for an Easy diff in my opinion. I suggest use (1,2,1,2) combo pattern instead, although (1,2,3,4,) would be better. - I want these to be consistent over all the difficulties, so I'm keeping this.
   
   
7. 00:56:954 (1) - The same opinion I told you about the slider in 00:46:228. Please fix this one and make sure they're symmetrical for better gameplay. - Did the same as earlier
   
   
8. 01:02:317 (1,1,1,1) - Another combo abuse >< Try (1,2,1,2) or (1,2,3,4,) instead. - Same as earlier.
   
   
9. 01:07:010 (1) - Fix the spacing here for better gameplay. They don't look good. - Herpderp fix xD
   
   
10. 01:09:692 (2) - Move the 2nd point one grid left and the 3rd point one grid up for better slider blanket. - Done

Normal

1. 00:01:982 (2) - Inconsistent spacing. Fix this one for better gameplay. - This is totally fine to read when you're playing.
   
   
2. 00:03:491 (1) - This spinner ended so late in my opinion. I highly suggest that you try to find a way to move the note on 00:06:340 near to the center so that the players can hit it easily even after they finish spinning. - 00:06:340 (1) is already near the center, and putting it closer would make a overlap from the hitburst from the spinner.
   
   
3. 00:14:049 (3,4,5) - This beat blanket needs more improvement. Try to make it look like this. - Click me
   
   
4. 00:18:072 (1) - I don't think a new combo for this note is not necessary. Please remove it. - Not necessary, but I like it and it wont hinder gameplay, so I'm keeping it.
   
   
5. 00:32:820 ~ 00:37:848 - The "slow down" on in this section is too slow. I think x.7~x.8 would fit this one. - Yes, 0.7x~0.8x would probably fit too, but same goes for 0.5x imo.
   
   
6. 00:51:591 (1,1,1,1) - Another one of your new combo things. Choose between these two combo patterns: (1,2,1,2) / (1,2,3,4). - Same reasoning as before.
   
   
7. 01:02:317 (1,1,1,1) - Another weird new combo pattern. ^ - ^
   
   
8. 01:23:435 (5) - Weird ending. I highly suggest you change this one with a 1/2 slider. It plays better. Don't forget to move your spinner 1/2 too if you followed this suggestion. - Heh, why not~

Hard

1. 00:48:910 (5) - The part of this slider is already off grid. Please try to move it away from the side. - Off grid, yeah, but it's not off screen, so it's fine
   
   
2. 00:59:133 (5) - Fix spacing by moving this note 1 grid down. I know it's nazi, but it doesn't look good on gameplay. - Moved (5) 2 grids down and (6) 1 grid down. Should be fine now.
   
   
3. To be honest, this diff is a bit perfect but let's try to look on the other side. I'm not really sure about your spacing. Don't try to think that this one is a huge problem. But the whole diff's spacing ranges from x1.0 to 1.25 (please tell me if I'm wrong). I hope you can try to make the spacing between the notes consistent. I know it will take some time but fixing this will make your map more readable and fun to play. (: - The map is already readable. It's not like different spacing like this, especially in a hard diff, would be unreadable.

Insane

1. 00:24:357 (4,5) - Move (4) 1 grid left and (5) 2 grids right. Nazi lol ^^ - This is supposed to be straight
   
   
2. 00:28:798 (1) - There is a great opportunity of turning this slider into a beat blanket. Do it for the sake of better gameplay ^^. - Already blankets previous slider.
   
   
3. 00:29:301 (2) - Weird structure of a slider. Also, the point part is off grid. Fix this one please. - Not offscreen, and the structure is just one of my preferences^^
   
   
4. 00:29:804 (3) - Fix this beat blanket effect. Doesn't look good. On the other hand, is this meant to be a blanket or not? lol - It's supposed to be in the middleground between blanketing both 00:28:798 (1) and 00:30:306 (4).
   
   
5. 00:34:161 (4) - Copy this one on 00:35:167 then press Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R. Trust me, It'll look better. - Lol, done.
   
   
6. 01:01:815 (4,5,6) - Please try to make the spacing consistent on this part. They're so hard to hit imo. - Really? I can do them just fine though x.x I'll keep this for now, since it's the same as 00:51:088 (4,5,6)
   
   
7. 01:22:429 (4) - Weird slider curve. Why not copy the slider 01:21:926 (2) instead and do a Ctrl+R? - It already is, the (4) is a copy of (2). I did a ctrl+R on the (2), then did it again to fix this. Probably okay now.
   
   
8. 01:23:267 (8,9,10,11,12) - What about this pattern instead? I think it's better to start the stream in the top part. - Nah, the pattern is going counter-clockwise ^^
   
   
9. Btw, your HP Drain for this diff is a pain >< Try to reduce it by 2. :O - Let them burn!! Well not really, but I don't think the HP-drain really is an issue here xP Also, reducing HP by even 1 tick would result in star ratings rating Insane easier than Hard xD

End of my Mod | PM me back after you fix my suggestions for a recheck (: - Ok, Thanks

MMzz wrote:

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Aleks719 wrote:

General
Turn off letterboxes in all diffs. You don't have a breaks + you will add video
things like this are forbidden:

nold_1702 wrote:

Hi! - Hi~


[General]
You didn't snap kiai the kiai times correctly in all diffs.
Snap them all 46420 -->snap to46421 - Ok fix

[Normal] ~ [Insane] 00:00:164 (1,2,3) - (1)>Whistle (2)>soft (3)>whistle? - Lol YES! xD

[Easy]
AIBAT told me this map full of unsnapped objects.

SPOILER

Click "Resnap all notes please" - Oh snap (no pun intended) Fixed

No other problems.Sorry

1. nothing wrong here.

1. 00:30:918 - Add green line 40%?
2. 00:32:259 - Add green line 60%?
3. 00:41:057 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376461 looks better to me
4. 00:46:923 (4,1) - wrong here. please check note
5. 01:23:459 (8) - Add new combo looks beautiful

1. 00:30:918 - same as insane
2. 00:32:259 - ^
3. 01:08:376 - Add note here?

1. 00:18:934 (2,1) - spacing too faraway
2. 00:30:331 (1,2,3,4) - ^

1. 00:10:052 (3,1) - too close?
   

S o r d a wrote:

from in-games - Hi~
SAO<3 - <3

[overall]:

1. nothing wrong here.

[Insane]:

1. 00:30:918 - Add green line 40%? - Feels very weird for me
2. 00:32:259 - Add green line 60%? - ^
3. 00:41:057 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376461 looks better to me - Hitburst from (7) has already faded away, so I think it's fine ^^
4. 00:46:923 (4,1) - wrong here. please check note - omg fixed
5. 01:23:459 (8) - Add new combo looks beautiful - Meh, so many have told me this now xD Fixed

[Hard]:

1. 00:30:918 - same as insane - Same as Insane
2. 00:32:259 - ^ - ^
3. 01:08:376 - Add note here? - Haha sure xD Added.

[Normal]:

1. 00:18:934 (2,1) - spacing too faraway - Might be, but I think the pattern itself is readable enough for this ^^
2. 00:30:331 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^

[Easy]:

1. 00:10:052 (3,1) - too close? - I think should be fine. ^^
   

All diff Nice map most is a suggestion
sorry for the delay
and Good luck! - Thanks!

rickyboi wrote:

Nice map onii-san

go for rank!