Yasora wrote:

about nc in spinner p/1601041

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

1. offset-8 Done
2. sb\black.jpg is not used. Could've sworn I've removed it and did full-submission. Will full-submit again later.
3. When you use pure color image, you'd better to use png. (change white.jpg to a png)
4. Pay attention on the shape of sliders: For example in Normal 01:00:069 (6) - http://puu.sh/FKl3 change to this: http://puu.sh/FKlt The final point should be at center of the slider end, and all points should be symmetric.

[Normal]
00:17:211 (3,6) - make them symmetric? Done
01:10:011 (1) - add NC after spinner Done

[Hard]
00:21:326 (4,6) - 1 grid down and it will looks much better Done
00:33:497 (6,3) - try to avoid the overlap? Done
00:46:354 (7,1) - not symmetric. Done
01:02:982 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a round? Changed them to back-and-forth
01:04:525 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

That's all I can find. GL~

popner wrote:

[Insane]
00:30:240 (1,4) - stack their end? - Done.
00:30:240 (1,5) - stack their head? - Done.
00:41:211 (1) - make the slider symmetric? http://puu.sh/FK8g - I'm afraid that I can't do it. So code, maybe?
00:41:725 (2,4,5) - ^ - ^~
01:03:668 (3,5) - not symmetric. Use Ctrl+H to adjust them?
01:30:925 (7) - not looks so good. Use a note to adjust? http://puu.sh/FKax - Make it (quite) bigger so it won't look messy.

http://puu.sh/FNmr

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Normal]
00:18:574 (6) - Flip horizontally (ctrl+H) for better flow? Done
00:31:945 (4) - Extend this slider to white tick. You seems miss this part, I guess.... Done
00:36:402 (2) - This spacing doesn't looks right... Done
00:37:431 (5) - ^ Done



That's all I got, sorry

Katty Pie wrote:

Lunatic

00:20:974(3,4,5,6,7,8) - make so http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362139 looks better - I'm making a spiral with no overlapping notes here. In other words, fixed but not this way,
00:30:746(2,3) - stack better - Okay.
00:43:089(5,6,1) - stack it better - How's now?
00:49:689(2,5) - remove claps - Absolutely, no. It's perfect just now D:
01:05:717 - remove whistle - Nope, hitsound pattern.
01:06:917(spin) - remove clap/ not sound here - Again, hitsound pattern. Plus, I like the way it sounds, rather than empty.

Marcin wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]
GREAT HITSOUNDS /o/
but new combos feels strange. - I'm sorry

iroseka wrote:

Hi~ mod from my queue~

General
Great map and SB. deserve a star. Thanks~

Timing Section
01:37:346 - make the section to 01:37:432 Tried this and it no longer silences the spinner end so no.

Normal
this level sounds boring with just don-pa-don-pa, I suggest you change note arrangement to make it less boring.
00:44:288 (1) - silence the spinner end? Done

Hard
00:48:231 (3) - can be easily misread. put a bit further. For the sake of spacing, no
00:49:774 (1) - DS. Done
00:51:317 (1,2) - DS. No need snapping the previous note because even you do so it will be stacked. Done
01:02:802 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit too messy. Arranged them to something else
01:07:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a sudden DS increasing will just make it feel awkward. try to make the arrangement look better. The pattern is already as good as it is however I made the spacing increases much less sudden
01:10:002 (1) - This final jump is easy to miss. maybe use a slider here? No but I arranged it a bit, should be better now
01:15:831 (2) - DS? Done
01:24:745 (8,9,10) - ^ Done

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

•Correct size pics SB >.< size should be 800x600 and less
Pretty sure it's okay if it's above 800x600. I'll ask around.

Hard

00:30:403 - i think better add note here Done
00:47:032(1,3) - stack better Done

good luck~~

Marcin wrote:

[Normal]
00:28:859 (3,4,5) - spacing Done

So short mod :/
GO GO GO RANKED

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Lunatic Loli:
00:34:346 (4) - This anti jumps feels off, maybe a bit larger spacing (to like 1.1 or something instead of .9). - But there are jump after this, If I'm using even 1.0x, doesn't it will make the jump bigger?
00:35:374 (6) - You'll prob get yelled at by some Bats for this, I would put the end of this slider on the end of 5. - Done.
01:18:231 (1) - Please stop stacking slider underneath other sliders. This is hard to read and again will probably get yelled at by a BAT. - Actually, I'm a bit agree, but you may want to suggest me some pattern instead of bragging it. It will be more helpful. Really. For now no changes. I don't know what to do because after this slider it has a pattern. Instead, I rotate 01:17:546 (7,8) - . I actually scared of that 'yelled at by a BAT' but meh, you know that word is sometimes not a good thing to put at mod.
01:30:917 (7) - Spacing. It's too close to 6 considering the spacing between all of 01:29:717 (4,5,6,7) - is the same, people are going to think this is also 1/2 like 4-5-6. - How about stack?

• how about add hitsounds to slidertick?

• AR -1 or -2
  00:58:517 (3,4) - I think these notes are too hard for beginner player. replace with reverse slider.
  01:05:974 (1) - I think you shouldn't to silent here.
  01:11:031 (3,3) - I guess newbie player will miss these note, because they are covered with hitburst.

1. first of all, is this really Hard?
   continual circles looks so hard. reduce some of them.
   for example, in 00:12:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6), you should remove 2 and 6.
   whole the map, I think you need to recheck of them.
2. I wonder why you put notes so randomly.
   for example, 00:12:745 (3,4) and 00:13:259 (5,6). these note have same rhythm.
   if you want to blanket a circle, you should do it perfectly. it is a trivial thing, but it will give your map looks very well.
   00:33:488 (5,6,1) - keep a certain distance

• 00:35:717 (1) - upside down to make a good flow
  00:36:232 (2) - ^
  00:45:831 (5,1) - I don't like this stacking
  01:08:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I don't like this distance. more farther
  01:25:089 (5,2) - same as 00:45:831
  01:26:460 (3,4) - ^
  01:30:917 (7) - how about use this one
  SPOILER

  

  200,96,90917,2,2,B|260:52|368:60|456:192|368:324|260:332|200:288,1,480,2|4

meiikyuu wrote:

feel free to ignore whatever you don't like

◘ btw i read Katty Pie's mod, and no the max. size is not 800x600, 1024 x 768 is max. js xD

Normal
00:43:602 (6) - one grid down, might look neater next to 5 Done

that's all from me :< sry i couldn't find much, seems like a solid map to me

tsukasa ~~ good luck <3

h-728 wrote:

from queue

[Normal]

• AR -1 or -2 Set to AR4
  00:58:517 (3,4) - I think these notes are too hard for beginner player. replace with reverse slider. Done
  01:05:974 (1) - I think you shouldn't to silent here. Done
  01:11:031 (3,3) - I guess newbie player will miss these note, because they are covered with hitburst.

that's all. gl

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

asdf

[Normal]
00:40:859 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:41:545 (2) - NC Done
00:58:517 (3,4) - Could irritate the new players. Done
01:01:088 (2) - Place it at x:204 y:180 Done
01:01:431 (3) - Place it at x:152 y:228 (This small curve looks pretty and gives more flow instead of a straight line) Done
01:28:174 (1) - Set the last Sliderpoint at x:284 y:256, looks a bit better. Done

orz :3

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]
00:57:317 (9) - Strg+J it for a better transition from (9) to (10). - Done.
00:59:717 (3) - Err.. I would make like this. http://puu.sh/Ho7O (Also add at 01:00:232 a Circle) and remove Whistle and set Clap there. - I want to follow the piano here >_<
01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to make the Distance of the Circles bigger. - If it's because it has a smaller spacing than other pattern, I reject.
01:20:117 (8,9,10,11) - ^ - ^

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Lunatic Loli

00:25:774 put end of 3 it exactly into the end of slider 2 - I do.
00:53:546 new combo ? Looks better to me - Done.
01:12:232 put it exactly into the slider end of 6 - Done.
01:16:174 put it exactly into end of slider 1 - Done.
01:17:546 ^ start of slider 1 - That was on purpose

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Hi ^w^

Here I am from my modding queue


General :

delet .osb file in beatmap foler and full submit It seems I missed that, fixed

I am only making suggestion and when you like some , than I did a good job ^^

Normal

00:14:117 make the slider a bit nicer like this http://puu.sh/HGSe Can't see the slider points but I tried to make it as close as it is, done
00:26:974 I think a jump like that isn`t allowed , or is it ? But may change that ^^ ? I accidentally missed that D: thanks for noticing, done
00:45:917 Why not put timeing point at the end of spinner at 00:46:003 ?Doesn't really matter though but done
00:49:260 maybe new combo ? Um, it's NC already
01:03:146 you can put it like spacing is near to combo 6 befor and than make it like this http://puu.sh/HH4u than spacing is correct at every combo at that moment and it looks good =) I don't really get it but if you mean putting 01:03:146 (1) inline with 6 then done
01:26:117 stack it correctly in the end of 3 Done
01:37:346 Why not put the timeing point exactly at the end 01:37:432 ^^ ? Same as 00:45:917 but then again, done

That is it for Normal


Hard

00:30:232 put it correctly into the end of slider 6 Done
00:42:232 put it correctly into the end of slider 1 Done
01:02:289 try to put end of slider 2 exactly into slider 7 from befor Done

That is it for Hard

Like the song and the beatmap ^^ Star ~
Good Luck =D

Fenya wrote:

Hi n.n)/

General:
In the diff "Lunatic Loli" there is a combo colours different from the other diff, please check it~ Fixed

Normal:
00:53:888 (2) - (nazi) move to x:180 y:340 Done

Hard:
00:43:774 (9) - Remove finish, add whistle Sounds better, done

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! Mod Request from my Queue.

[General:]

- Epilepsy Warning: Are you sure about the use of this option? Because I can't see any kind of weird flash lights to be added, really. You should ask to a BAT about that. Will ask around
- Break Time: 00:22:003 (B): On Loli's diff. you have a break time in this position but on the other difficulties you didn't add it. For consistency, it's better if you Remove this Break time from Loli's diff. or if you want you can add a Break Time on the other difficulties.
- Tags: Yasora, it's already on Yasora-Chan, so this make the tag Yasora useless, with Yasora-Chan in tags is more than enough because you can find him/her adding Yasora on the web, etc.For example you can check this map (that only has Yasora-Chan in tags), and I could find her/him without any kind of problem. So, Remove Yasora from tags. Removed

[Normal:]

• 00:22:003 (5): This finish doesn't fit fine here, sounds really low and this is the highest reason to say that it sounds bad. If you want to add a Finish in this Note is better if you add a Normal Finish custom 1 like you did on your Hard difficulty. Done
• 00:27:317 (x): Sounds a bit empty here, in General is a Normal diff. so a Note in 1/2 could be Ok. So, try to add a Note here Added
• 00:29:546 (4): Two Things in this Slider:
1- I think that it's ok where is it the Slider, but can work better with the music if you move this Slider 1/2 back (Red Tick, 00:29:374) and then you have to make it bigger on 1/2 to finish with this Slider on 00:30:232. Is more benefit to the Rhythm, really.
2- (NAZI)- A bit nazi, but in general your Sliders are curve (you only make stright Sliders when it's a short Slider), so for consistency, would be better if you do a Simple Curve in this Slider. Nothing Hard, just a simple curve to follow with your previous Slider. All done
• 00:35:374 (3): This Whistle on this note sounds very alone around a lot of Claps. To mantain the consistency and because sounds better in my opinion, would be better if you Replace the Whistle to a Clap in this Note. Agreed and done
• 00:46:003 (T): As I said on Easy, this change in the Volume is too high and to be sincere the music doesn't need that. It's better if you increase the Volume at least 20/25 % Was supposed to silence the spinner end but okay
• 00:49:260 (1): You have to consider to add a Clap at the beginning of this Slider. Plays preety fine and it's consistent with your previous Clap's Patterns. Done
• 01:05:889 (5, Spin): It's a Normal difficulty, and I also think that the Rhythm doesn't need a high emphatisize like you gave with the Note (5). On another hand, this kind of things can cause confusion in Normal players because the Spinner appear too sudden after the Note. In this case is better if you Remove the Note (5), and then the Spinner should start where was (5). Done
• 01:08:460 (T): Same as 00:46:003 Done
• 01:24:746 (3): To keep consistency on Hitsounds, it's better if you add a Normal Hitsound on the end of this Slider. You have to add a Inherited Timing Point (Green Line) with Normal Hitsounds on 01:25:089 Done

[Hard:]

• 00:23:374 (1): There is no music here, the music start on the next note. You can listen better that if you listen the music on 25/50%. So, to follow the music properly, it's better if you remove this Note. Done
• 00:26:289 (x): Feels kinda empty, and also it's a Hard difficulty. So, would be a good idea if you add a Note here. Done
• 00:32:632 (7,8): (NAZI)- To stack these Notes properly with (3,4,5) you should move these Notes to x: 273 y: 250. To make that you have to disable the option Grid Snap. Done
• 00:35:203 (7): To be sincere, this Note feels unnecesary and sometimes this diff. becomes difficult to a Hard difficulty. For this reason, is better if you delete this Note Done
• 00:43:089 (5,6,7,8,9): This pattern looks preety bad at the hour to play the map because is very overlaped by hitbursts, especially the Notes (8,9). Try this formation for a better flow and better visual. I'll give you the Screenshoot and the Code if you want to fix it easily Done

SPOILER

[352,68,43089,1,0
432,92,43260,1,0
436,176,43432,1,8
364,216,43603,1,8
308,148,43774,1,4

• 00:50:803 (1): There is a Stop in the music, so you have to remark that and not only follow a simple pattern. Would be better if you move this Slider to 00:50:974 to remark this Stop and then this Slider should finish on 00:51:146 Replaced 00:50:632 (6) with a slider that ends at 00:51:146 since it sounds better for me
• 00:58:174 (2): Well, this Slider looks very overlaped by hitburst. This is preety bad at the hour to play the map, anyways I can't find a good suggestion here, so if you can make a better thing would be great Done
• 01:05:889 (7): Seriously, do you listen any sound in the music? there is no sound here, it's better if you Remove this Note and then move the Spinner to here where appear the long sound in the Instrumental. After that make the Spinner bigger to finish on 01:08:460 Done
• 01:25:432 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3): You could strive a bit more with the Rhythm and not just copy/paste the same things. But ok, this is a personal opinion. Remapped that part so done

Well, I'm tired to mod the Taiko but in General aspects looks fine.
That's all, Good Luck with your map

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Lunatic Loli:]

• 00:23:546: Since it's the Hardest difficulty on the mapset, it's better if you start to map since here like the Hard difficulty. Consider that, please - Spinner added instead of notes because it fits better.
• 00:30:060 (x): It's an Insane diff. it's a good idea if you strive with the Rhythm a bit more. Since sounds empty this section, would be better if you add a Note here - Added notes.
• 00:32:117 (5): Meh, 1/1 doesn't fit at all here, and plays on awkward form to this difficulty. In this case I prefer to Reduce the length of this Slider by 1/2 (so will finish on White Tick, 00:32:289) and then add a Note on the blank space in 00:32:460. Just broke a bit the symetry, the Rhythm is the most important thing. - I would like to, but I have no idea what should I make.
• 00:32:803 (x): Add a Note here too. - ^
• 00:38:460 (1,2,3): This pattern can have a better flow if you Unstack (3) from these Sliders (1,2). Something like that would look great:

SPOILER

- Er, like what o_o
• 00:39:832 (4,5,6): (^) - I don't see any picture D:
• 00:43:774 (x): I'm preety sure that you need a Note here. Sounds preety good in my opinion. - Added stacked circle.
• 00:58:174 (2,3,4): (NAZI)- You can make a better edge to (2) if (3,4) are Curve instead of Stright Sliders. Try to make something like that, I'll provide you the Code too. - Do want.

SPOILER

216,264,58689,2,0,B|256:272|256:272|296:264,1,80,10|2
176,336,59031,2,0,B|256:352|256:352|336:336,1,160,0|10

• 01:08:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1): In my opinion, there is no a Stop to add an antijump in this place, so would be better if you increase the Spacing between these Notes (maybe 1,20 it's Ok) and at the end you can add a little jump between (7,1). You can try something like that - I'll think twice.

SPOILER

• 01:19:603 (7): You can add a New Combo here, looking 2 Reasons. The first one because it feels a change in the music so you can remark that with a New Combo and the second one is to avoid 12 Notes on a Combo. - Added.

- Sometime I would like to see more variety in the Rhythm and not just some 1/1 + Claps on the SliderTicks. It's an Insane, so you can use more 1/2 patterns. But, it's Ok. - Seriously, I focused on slider because that's my plan on the first time. This to proves that even we can make a lot of variation with 1/1, not just random stream like we pretend don't know how to map. Plus, my opinion says that 1/1 fits on most places, so I reduce using 1/2.

Loli Cjj wrote:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Lunatic Loli:]
• 00:38:460 (1,2,3): This pattern can have a better flow if you Unstack (3) from these Sliders (1,2). Something like that would look great:

SPOILER

- Er, like what o_o
• 00:39:832 (4,5,6): (^) - I don't see any picture D

SPOILER

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Whoops, I don't know what's happend here. I thought in something like that

SPOILER

Sorry for the inconvenience, Loli! Hope it fixed the problem with the BG now