wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- SB: you to put something instead of totally black at the beginning? I'll see what I can do when I start fiddling with the SB again
- Taiko diff has different offset Fixed
- better mention who mapped the diff in the top of the thread... Will do in the next update
- combo colour 2 and 3 are too similar, consider add one more betwen them or simply use 1,2 only. Made both combo color 2 and 3 more distinctive in all diffs, done
- Better end the solo diff at the same time (just a matter when the spinner ends) Will do
- I would say lower the difficulty a bit for normal and hard. Okay

[Hard]
00:22:268 - the break sounds too short, just remove it. Done
00:23:382 (1) - actually the music haven't start here so remove the whistle. You can even consider muting this note. Done
01:01:439 (8,1) - avoid slider overlapping Done
01:04:697 - shouldn't stay empty taking 01:01:782 - as reference Done
no big problems but you can arrange them to look better.
For example:
00:15:497 (2,3,4) - You may also want to consider (4) doesn't curve around (3) and they looked too close. Done
00:41:382 (3,5) - the overlapping of sliders does not look good Done
00:53:897 (6) - does not curved well Done

[Normal]
00:22:354 - start break exactly here. Also why ending the break eariler? Done. I accidentally made the break ends earlier :<
00:38:811 (2) - Use linear slider corresponding to (1)? Done
00:49:097 (4) - spacing problem with next note; it might look better if the direction of sldier is to the left-bottom side. Fixed

[Easy]
00:22:354 - same problem as normal Fixed

good luck~

wmfchris wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:22:354 - start the break exactly here. - Okay
00:26:640 (5,6) - stack properly? - I'm trying.. It's only on the gameplay because stacking :O but on the edit mode i make it stack (not so perfect but its nearly perfect)
00:31:611 (4,5) - ^ I suppose you're stacking (4,5) on previous slider (1,2). - Actually just copypasta and rotate, fix. (the end of the slider stack with the start of the previous one)
00:58:182 (2,3) - unrankable slider because (3)'s beginning is covered. - MUST. FIX.
00:59:554 - even using the piano as main melody, the clapping should exist as indicated by the background drumbeat. Also muting them like this sounds odd. - Added clap on kickback.
The rhythm is pretty nice (the whistle pattern at the last wows me), but there could be more variation, not repeating notes circle/hexagon many times. - I agree, thanks for reminding me to reduce copypasta because it's so boring, so remapped the last part.

Sprite,Background,BottomRight,"SB\white.jpg",640,480
_S,0,0,,640
_C,0,0,,0,0,0
_F,0,0,,1
_F,0,101684,,1
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"SB\white.jpg",640,480
_S,0,0,,640
_F,0,0,,0
_F,0,11039,11382,1,0
_F,0,21840,22182,1,0
_F,0,24754,25097,1,0
_F,0,47040,47382,1,0
_F,0,70011,70354,1,0

Sprite,0,TopLeft,"bg.jpg",0,0
_F,0,0,,0

DFX

Regou wrote:

ok let me continue my modding :3

[Normal]
00:17:211 (2) - ...It don't play well when I test it. The slider shape? Done
00:40:868 (1,2) - I know a normal diff can accept small jump, but this one is quite senseless imo. Done
01:03:154 (5) - NC? Done
01:25:439 (4) - ^ Done

Good luck~

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General

1. Feels bad when saw tons of inconsistency issue of kiai and combo color D: But meh. No one picked them out, so neither me. Made the kiai time consistent in all diffs.

Normal

1. Feel weird when you ignore those obvious 1/2 from music, but adding 1/2 on other places that music doesn't support. e.g: 00:41:554 (2) - , 00:42:754 -

00:17:211 (2) - Shape's ugly when you try to angle a short slider D: Keep it as a normal shape? Done
00:20:640 - Finish missing. Done
00:31:782 - Just saying, feels unconfortable while missing a beat here.
00:37:782 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 earlier will be better. Done

SPOILER

Rhythm


Pattern

00:54:239 (4,5) - Try not to stack them Done

SPOILER

While testing

00:57:668 (5) - Storyboard, music and rhythm had an obvious changes here. Try new combo? Done
01:22:011 - Remove whistle at this point. Done
Suggestion[/spoilerbox]

Hard

1. Parts of Finish need rearrangement, sounds without a regular pattern.
   
   SPOILER

   00:31:097 (3) - Finish Done
   00:33:840 - Finish at this point. Done
   00:36:240 - Remove finish at this point. Done
   00:37:954 (3) - Finish Done
   00:42:068 - Finish instead of clap. Done
   00:43:440 - Finish Done
   00:44:811 (4) - ^ Done
   00:50:297 (3) - ^ Done
   00:50:811 - ^ Done
   00:51:668 - ^ Done
   00:53:040 - ^ Done
   00:54:411 - ^ Done
   01:05:382 (4) - ^ Done
   01:06:754 (4) - ^ Done
   01:08:125 (6) - ^ Done

00:23:382 - Volume 40% Done
00:24:068 - Add a section with volume 55% Done
　
00:22:010 (5) - Tricky O_O Got 50 here when testing. Though raising up your AR would solved this problem. But, I don't see any reason to keep a blanket beat here 00:21:840 - . The significance of current beat is way lower than 00:21:840 -. Please keep it in mind. Moved it further so the spacing won't be confusing anymore, done
00:27:497 (3) - Fix this silder's shape D: Done

SPOILER

00:37:097 (8) - Remove clap Done

Star for Tsukasa!

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

iseng

[General]
> Tags : Seirensen , th12 done

[SB Assist]
"black.jpg" - buang aja ini file, soalnya bisa menuh2in osz. gantinya "white.jpg" yang di kasih "_C,0,0,,0,0,0"
"white.jpg" - resize file ini jadi 1x1px, biar hemat ^^

Sprite,Background,BottomRight,"SB\white.jpg",640,480
_S,0,0,,640
_C,0,0,,0,0,0
_F,0,0,,1
_F,0,101684,,1
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"SB\white.jpg",640,480
_S,0,0,,640
_F,0,0,,0
_F,0,11039,11382,1,0
_F,0,21840,22182,1,0
_F,0,24754,25097,1,0
_F,0,47040,47382,1,0
_F,0,70011,70354,1,0

untuk mengurangi SB Load karena BG yang ditimpa oleh gambar2 lain, gunakan ini

Sprite,0,TopLeft,"bg.jpg",0,0
_F,0,0,,0

Udah dicoba tapi SB Load jadi lewat 5.00x di beberapa tempat

[Hard]
> HP,OD +1? Nope Done
ga ada break ? :\ Ya
01:14:812 (1) - remove NC Done
01:18:068 (1) - ^ Nope
01:19:954 (3,4,5) - patternnya familiar daritadi... hmmm coba dibikin variasinya? kaya bentuk (5) dipake (3) dan sebaliknya... Done

[Normal]
> IMO: sepertinya terlalu banyak menggunakan 1/1 secara terus menerus sehingga star rating meningkat..
> Spinner Speed required 150spm *runs*
00:11:039 (1,3) - stacked @_@ gpp itu stacked ? gpp imo
00:17:211 (2) - shapenya yang bengkoknya jangan tajem ^^; kesannya aneh Done
00:42:925 (1) - remove NC, soalnya terlalu gampang kalo ini diff combo dibawah 5, ntar drainnya bakal penuh terus *lol* Done
00:44:297 (1,1) - o_o spinner endnya ga terlalu deket nih ? soalnya kesannya ngagetin buat gw... jadi kerasa level Hard lol~ Nggak terlalu pendek kok
01:05:982 (1) - remove NC. NC di spinner? @_@
01:38:125 - gw dapetnya ini dimana volume udah rendah banget... gimana kalo panjangin spinner end terakhir kesini? Biar play length konsisten, nope

paling segitu aja =w= ganbatte~

Regou wrote:

[Lunatic loli]
00:49:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The hitsound here is ugly, use soft sound sample - 1&4 with n-hn, 2&5 with s-hc, 3&6 with s-hw
01:30:925 (13) - Can make this smoothier - Fix'ed a bit.
So perfect. But in fact, this is still Hard diff, not insane. - Oh stop it you. But remember that these pattern are insane, I'm not care too much about score but quality is number one XD

Illumined wrote:

Lunatic Loli

1. Actually easy diffs (E/N) get higher priority for using slider tick rate 2. But anyway, Lunatic had a lower score than Hard now O_O An exception here! - hehe!
2. Great!

00:49:697 (2) - Soft hitsound set with whistle+clap (Similar to 00:59:554 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) - Done'd
00:50:125 - Switch back to Normal set. - This is normal set o_o
00:50:382 (5) - Again, Soft with whistle+clap - This is o_o
00:50:811 - Normal set. - This is normal set o_o
01:31:954 - Finish instead of whistle at this point. Besides that, cut off the new combo here 01:28:354 (7) - - imo not fit, unless it was finish with softwhistle-like finish.

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

iseng
[Loli]
/me hugs - /me :*
00:27:497 (1) - kalo bisa slider endnya diarahin ke slider tick 00:28:011 (2), biar lebih bagus aja kesannya~ tau lah siapa yang aku maksud disini -
00:46:611 (4) - majuin ini 1/4 beat.. soalnya ini ga pas buat di slowdown-slider... sama pasang object baru di tempat itu sebagai penggantinya... toh streamnya nambah tebel terus lebih enak diliat ntarnya ^^ - Iya sih, tapi aku lebih pilih yang ini soalnya lebih mengikuti hit di musiknya

Chewin wrote:

[General]
There is Inconsistency in Kiai Times, the 3rd kiai time in the "Hard" and "Yasora's Easy" should end to 01:28:182 like the other diffs. Fixed

[Normal]
00:16:525 (7) - You should to add NC here and remove from 00:16:868 (1) Done
00:37:440 (7) - Grid snap it to y:232 plz Done
00:38:811 (2) - Asymmetric slider >; Move the red waypoint to x:256 y:324 and 3rd to x:212 y:304 Done
00:39:497 (3,4,5) - 2 grid up for symmetry with 00:37:440 (7) Done
00:44:297 (1) - The circle after this spinner is too soon from it. So, you should to reduce this spinner to 00:46:011 like the easy diff Done
00:57:668 (1) - Finish Done
01:05:982 (1) - This spinner should end to 01:08:640 with 5% volume Done

[Hard]
00:40:011 (5) - 2nd waypoint at x:400 y:104 Done
00:52:011 (4) - 2nd waypoint at x:140 y:88 Done
00:53:554 (5) - 1 grid left for consistency with 00:53:211 (3,4) Done
01:03:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - What spacing. Accelerated spacing?
This diff really needs more work. Especially you should to improve all blankets ;3 It's my first try with blankets so yeah xD

Good luck ;3

Chewin wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]
00:20:640 (8) - New combo - 'u'
01:19:611 (7) - Overap with 01:19:097 (4) and use NC - It's a triangle pattern so no, but I'll change when someone point this thing again, or if I change my mind.
01:20:468 (10) - Overlap with (7) - Again, same with above.
01:23:040 (7) - Hidden slider - Fix'ed. Not sure if looks good now..

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"bg.jpg",0,0

ykcarrot wrote:

Hello there


[General]
Inconsistency in PreviewTime: fixed
- [1811's Taiko Oni] : 24689
- [Hard] : 24689
- [Lunatic Loli] : 24754
- [Normal] : 24689
- [Yasora's Easy] : 24689


[SB]
Use this code instead of "black.jpg". This way reduces SB load. done

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"bg.jpg",0,0

Related thread : t/55177


[Lunatic Loli]
Disable countdown, it doesn't fit nicely. Fixed


[Hard]
00:21:840 - Add a circle here or add a repeat to 00:21:497 (4) Done
00:24:754 (1) - Default soft-finish is much better Done
00:35:725 (4) - ^ Done
00:43:097 (4) - http://puu.sh/EbT3 Done
00:44:982 (5) - Similar with ^ Done
00:53:382 (4,5) - Move right by 1 grid Done
00:57:497 (3) - (tail) Default soft-finish is much better Done
01:10:011 (1) - ^ Done

There were some tiny overlaps with sliders due to its spacing. It was not everthing that I mentioned.
If you fixed their shape, it will look handsome. :3 I've fixed some of them, should be better for now


[Normal]
00:24:754 (1) - Default soft-finish Done
00:35:725 (3) - (head) ^ Done
00:47:039 (1) - ^ Done
00:57:668 (1) - ^ Done
01:10:011 (1) - ^ Done
01:22:697 (3) - Move right by 1 grid Done

Nice mapset, good luck!

KersiTyan wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]

00:24:754 (1,2) - stack better - In other words, ctrl+r? I'm not sure.
00:32:982 (1,2) - ^ - Again, does it means ctrl+r?

If the answer is yes, I won't. Sorry

KersiTyan wrote:

Oh hi~ >w< Hello

[Hard]

00:16:011 - remove clap and add finish Done
00:49:440 - remove finish and add whistle? o.o Done
00:52:182 - ^ Done
00:59:725 - whistle Done
01:20:982 - soft finish Done
01:25:440 - add clap Done
01:26:811 - ^ Done
01:28:182 - ^ Done
01:29:554 - ^ Done
01:30:925 - ^ Done
01:31:611 (3) - ^ I'll keep it with whistle

Others diffs are fine :3

Good luck~

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Hi, edited the taiko a little - 1811's Taiko Oni
not able to online much these days =.=

Frostmourne wrote:

M4M here :3 , nice instrument ~ I love it !

Yasora's Easy
00:35:382 (3) - nazi , move down 1 grid , will balance more with 00:35:725 (1) - Done under Yasora's request

Normal
00:38:811 (2,3,4,5) - not good , not balance = ='' , place them more balance :3 (edit tail's slider a bit) Done

SPOILER

00:39:840 (5) - maybe make repeat slider instead? for better sound , if you choose, you would have to fix spacing once Done

SPOILER

00:53:554 (2,3,4) - feel better if you try to make it zigzag a bit :3 Done

SPOILER

00:55:954 (1,2) - move these 2 notes out from current position a bit because touched notes look not beautiful at this point Done
00:58:525 (3,4) - how about note placing like this ? cuz you can add clap which makes better sound and be not empty this way. Done

SPOILER

01:00:069 (2) - nazi move tail to x:256 y:76 so the slider would look better for now Done

Hard
01:02:468 (2) - move this slider to 01:02:297 (2) - instead cuz it follows the sound better Done
01:02:811 (3) - then add normal note here is ok Done
01:08:468 (8,1) - from many previous notes you have added which you use the distance like between these (8) (1)
it probably confuses people a bit (they would hit it early before the note comes) Done

Overall it's ok !
Good luck for ranking :3

Frostmourne wrote:

Lunatic Loli
00:26:640 (5,6,1) - I'm not sure is this unrankable or not because the hitburst from 5 covered between 6 and 1 also 6 and 1 look like 1 slider without connecting. try to avoid them I think - Made them separated, trying to make it nicer... spread (6) to make a nice curve, manual stacking for (1). What about it? Don't ask me to copypasta 3 next notes after (1)'s pattern, http://puu.sh/EjhX
01:30:925 (1) - able to new combo here with no reason :p - Usually I skip things with no reasons, but this slider is separated pattern from the other so, yes. NC'ed.

Frizz, http://puu.sh/Ejj2

1. 00:34:354 (2) - Allign this with 00:32:982 (1) - ? (pretty much nazi,so you can ignore it if you want)
2. 01:11:725 (4) - Move this 2 grids down (spacing)

1. 00:35:040 (1) - Put this at x:268 y:244 to avoid the overlap with the hitburst of 00:33:840 (4) - ?
2. 01:00:069 (2,3) - The blanket here is not really correct, moving the note 3 1 grid left would fix this.

1. The diff itself is really naziable,since there are a lot of blanketing issues,like at 00:14:125 (2) -,00:24:925 (2) - or again at 00:44:297 (2) -,but if you want you can freely leave them as they are
2. 00:12:411 (5) - New combo here and remove the one at 00:12:582 (1) - ,since it fits better with the song and since you will use the same New combo patterns in the end
3. 00:15:154 (5) - ^
4. 00:17:897 (5) - ^
5. 00:20:640 (5) - ^
6. 01:13:097 (3) - Same as 00:14:125 (2) -

1. There is an unsnapped point at 00:53:550. Remember to snap this to 00:53:554!
2. 01:11:725 (6) - Now that I see,the spacing that divides 01:11:725 (6,8) - is not the same one that divides 01:12:754 (1,2) -,therefore you could place 01:11:725 (6) - at x:316 y:220 just to make them the same!

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi!

[Normal]

1. 00:35:040 (1) - Put this at x:268 y:244 to avoid the overlap with the hitburst of 00:33:840 (4) - ?
2. 01:00:069 (2,3) - The blanket here is not really correct, moving the note 3 1 grid left would fix this.

[Hard]

1. The diff itself is really naziable,since there are a lot of blanketing issues,like at 00:14:125 (2) -,00:24:925 (2) - or again at 00:44:297 (2) -,but if you want you can freely leave them as they are
2. 00:12:411 (5) - New combo here and remove the one at 00:12:582 (1) - ,since it fits better with the song and since you will use the same New combo patterns in the end
3. 00:15:154 (5) - ^
4. 00:17:897 (5) - ^
5. 00:20:640 (5) - ^
6. 01:13:097 (3) - Same as 00:14:125 (2) -

Really good map,indeed. I really hope this gets ranked!

-kevincela- wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]

1. There is an unsnapped point at 00:53:550. Remember to snap this to 00:53:554!
2. 01:11:725 (6) - Now that I see,the spacing that divides 01:11:725 (6,8) - is not the same one that divides 01:12:754 (1,2) -,therefore you could place 01:11:725 (6) - at x:316 y:220 just to make them the same!

OnosakiHito wrote:

Taiko mod request from my queue~

[Taiko]

Generel: The kiai times has been placed wrong, but that's due to the hard finding climax parts in this song.
Kiai time should be places just here: 00:47:040~01:08:468
All other kiai's would take the effect or are just placed wrong because of no-climax part.

Hitcircles:
00:30:240~00:32:811 - You have used just one time kd dk. Because of this the following coming patterns dosen't fit anymore so well, especially the dk kd.
Try to use this: kkd kd dk d k d kd dk ddk d kkd - better to have 2x the pattern kd dk. done
00:41:554~00:43:954 - same problem as before ^
00:50:382 - k? nope ._.
00:51:582 - k nope ._.
00:52:611 (1) - move it one forward to 00:52:697 ok
00:53:554~00:55:440 - hm... dosen't sound that well I guess... how about this: ddk kkd ddk kdk d kkd k ? used ddk kkd dkd kdk d kkd k pattern
01:03:582 (1) - move one forward to 01:03:668 nope ._.
01:03:754 (2,1) - delete? nope ._.

Yes, that's it.
Hm. The map overall is okay, but there are some two-plets wrong placed which dosen't sound well. Look through all of them one more time to be sure everything is allright.

Good luck o/

Snepif wrote:

Hi! Request from my queue.
Let's see what we can find here :3

[General]

Folder seems okay! All files are correct..
Apart from that, it seems that you Normal's kiai time is inconsistent with the rest of the diffs. It ends on 01:08:554 - when it should end on the previous red tick. Missed that one D: fixed

[Normal]

The diff is very good too, but I disagree with some combos. Just suggestions though.

00:18:240 (1) - In order to follow the previous combo pattern, this NC should be removed, and add new combo on 00:19:268 (7) -. Then remove NC from 00:19:611 (1) - , of course. It seems that you tried to make this new combo follow the piano-ish sound, but that makes it inconsistent with the previous combos. Alright I got it, done

Woow looking at it again I would like to see pretty much all NCs remade D: well I'm just trying to help. Just remember this: only put new combo when the music changes, when you feel like it's different from before. Also, most of the new combos land on big white ticks, because this is how the music is composed and made. All melodies and rhythms tend to follow and land on big white ticks. But sometimes they don't, of course.
I'll try to point out the NCs I would use:

00:26:982 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:27:497 (2) - Add NC ^
00:28:868 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:30:582 (4) - Add NC ^
00:31:955 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:32:982 (2) - Add NC ^
00:35:040 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:35:725 (3) - Add NC (this one is pretty much of a must, the music has a complete upbeat there with finish and stuff) ^
00:50:811 (8) - Add NC ^
00:51:154 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:53:039 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:53:554 (2) - Add NC ^
00:55:954 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:56:297 (2) - Add NC ^
00:59:383 (1) - Ooops, distance between this note and the previous should be a little longer~~ Also remove NC ^
01:00:754 (7) - Add NC ^
01:01:439 (1) - Remove NC ^
01:11:725 (1) - If you want this pattern to have 2 separate combos, remove NC here and add it to the previous note. If not, just remove it, but you must add NC here 01:12:754 (1) - and remove it from here 01:13:097 (1) - ^ did the same thing to others to keep them consistent

Well that's all. Even though my suggestions are not "necessary omgomgomg unrankeable wtfffffffff" stuff, I think the map looks sightly better with them, and flows better as well. Please try them.

[Hard]

There are some weird NC too, and also weird inconsistent and unpolite spacings (and I don't mean jumps)

00:18:754 (5) - Here's and example of weird spacing. Why did you separate these notes a little bit more than the rest? Was done by mistake, fixed
00:23:554 (2) - Same here ^
00:37:097 (8) - Add NC Done
00:37:268 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:38:468 (5) - Add NC ^
00:38:811 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:42:240 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:42:582 (2) - Add NC ^
00:45:325 (6) - Add NC ^
00:45:497 (1) - Remove NC ^
01:04:525 (8) - Add NC ^
01:04:868 (1) - Remove NC ^
01:09:840 (6,1,2) - This is confusing. Distance between these 3 notes is almost the same, but the first ones are 1/2 while the 2nd and the 3rd are 1/1 apart. I'll keep it that way. Reason: 01:10:011 (1,2) are supposed to be an anti-jump. I was also trying to make the spacing to fit the music.
01:12:754 (2) - NC should be here instead of the previous note. Done
01:15:497 (2) - ^ Done
01:18:239 (2) - ^ Done

Meh.. sorry for so many NC stuff.. I'm just trying to help D:

[Lunatic]

Really nice n' clean. I'm not a fan of storyboarded hitsounds but I like the diff, well done. Wish I had something to say lol. There's no SB'd hitsound though, maybe because the tick uses normal-hitnormal sound sample (you can tell from how many inherited points in it)

That's all. Really sorry for so many annoying NC stuff ;_;

Snepif wrote:

[Lunatic]

Really nice n' clean. I'm not a fan of storyboarded hitsounds but I like the diff, well done. Wish I had something to say lol.

ikari_kyon wrote:

wush hello
hmm Tsukasa... http://osu.ppy.sh/b/24733
well one of few tou*ou arrangers that I "like" or at least dont hate 3: but I preffer Tsukasa like this http://osu.ppy.sh/b/72705

[General]

1. Im not sure if SB images are oversized or not, well common size is 640x480, so I think you should use one of those max size, I mean use "XXX"x480 or 640x"XXX" Im not sure, tell me if Im wrong
   A plus of using 640x480 images is that you dont need to re-scale them Tried to rescale them down but only to find that the images were blurry so I keep them the way they were. Also the SB Load doesn't exceed 5.00x so I guess it should be fine.

[SB]

Im not so experienced on SBing but Ill try

1. 00:46:697 - the transition from SB\sanae to black bg is a bit sudden, maybe use your white effect or add a fade-out in this part Done
2. SB\marisa - well this image is ovesized, I mean you are not using all the image on SB scale, maybe use all the image on transition or crop it About 90% part of the image are used at the first place so I guess I'll keep the way it was. Not going to crop to prevent unwanted part of the black background showing up.
3. SB\reimu - same as avobe, also end the fade-in effect on 00:58:011? Tried and it faded in way too fast. I'll keep it the way it was.
4. SB\girls_c - not fully image used, again... Edited the SB a bit for this part so it uses the whole image.

[Hard]

that custom hitsound 3:

1. 00:18:754 (5) - ctrl+h~ctrl+r this? current flow dont feels so good, 00:20:983 (3,4,5) - is good Done
2. 00:54:925 (1) - placement with 00:53:554 (5) - looks a bit dirty, can you clean it a bit? Done
3. 00:57:839 (4) - stack on 00:56:811 (4) - looks moar clean Done
4. 00:58:868 (7) - ↑ Done
5. 01:02:297 (2) - blanket can be better Done
   SPOILER

   

   188,204,62297,2,0,B|212:160|272:156|304:188|312:212,1,140,0|0

   you may refuse since Im not so good at blanketing stuffs
6. 01:06:068 (1) - 1 grid up for perfect blanket Done
7. 01:09:668 (5) - stack on 01:08:297 (7), your spacing is irregular anyways Done
8. 01:12:240 (5) - simmilar flow stuff as first pointed Done
9. 01:14:983 (5) - ↑ Done
10. 01:17:725 (5) - ↑ ~ 01:19:954 (3) - Done

[Normal]

1. 00:15:154 (4) - looks dirty with 00:13:440 (5), maybe place it over the previous slider, dunno why you like Placed it on 00:13:440 (5) and edited some of the objects nearby, done
2. 00:22:354 - dont move the break or simply dont use it? explained a bit on [Lunatic Lololololo] Removed break and done
3. 01:28:183 (1,1) - 2 looooong spinners in a row may be tyring and maybe booring to players, fill with some long sliders instead? Replaced the first spinner with slider art, done

I have no much to say here, but I personally dislike stack/backstacks on easiest diffs

ikari_kyon wrote:

[Yasora \o/]

1. just wanna say one thing: asdfasdfasdflkjjlaskdf ;3

ikari_kyon wrote:

[Lunatic Lololololo]

wait did I wrote the diff name bad? - Don't make me want to rape you.

1. 00:22:354 - hmm not move the break? the distance between the end of notes and start break is no so long I think and not so noticable - Okay, reduced...
2. 00:24:754 (1,2,3) - stack on end of sliders is not perfect, lets see if I can make it
   SPOILER

   - used
   

   77,80,24754,6,0,B|28:148|84:228,1,160,4|10
   242,229,25268,2,0,B|162:205|84:228,1,160,0|0
   85,306,25782,2,0,B|97:265|84:228,1,80

3. 00:26:640 (5) - stack where 00:25:268 (2) stars? - ( owo)b
4. 00:26:640 (5,6,1) - not perfect stack.. hmm Ill lose many time if I star to fix all your stack/sliders, can you take your time to fix them? also using 0,0x is not enough to having perfect stacks.. it just works sometimes - Eh? I think I've fix this part with other kind of variation.
5. 00:32:125 (5) - the hitburst of 00:30:754 (2,3) - makes (5) looks unsymmetrical, I cant think on a good suggest, maybe ctrl+r 00:31:611 (4) - since it start is almost good stacked on 00:30:754 (2)'s start and ctrl+r 00:32:125 (5) - having the end of slider covered by hitbursts will be less ehmm weird - Well it actually unsymmetrical, though it looks ugly, yeah. Fixed.
6. 00:32:982 (1,2,3) - take care of stacks, you wanna use them? use them better, is nice but make them perfect or they will looks weird - Actually idk what do you want to say, either make the stack perfect or remake the pattern, but for now I'll fix the stack first as you talk about stacks.
7. 00:37:097 (4) - ctrl+r this? the start currently is a bit covered by 00:36:240 (2) - and dont looks so good and this way there is no hitburst on 00:38:468 (1) - start - I prefer remake, but thank you for pointing this out.
8. 00:49:697 ~ use 70% for soft soundsets? the volume difference is pretty noticable with 00:47:725 (2), 00:48:411 (4) - ah, yes. Thank you for remind me.
9. 00:56:811 (8) - copy paste from 00:56:125 (6), shapes are different right now - Remake the slider shape so it will be easier to ctrl+r'ed.
10. 00:59:725 (3) - use normal soundset for repeat, sounds less weird than current clap - perhaps done? Not sure what are you saying though
11. 01:01:097 (5) - ↑ on start of slider - Again, done.
12. 01:04:868 (6) - new combo? my god what Im sayin >_< well combo is long and that way 01:04:868 (6,7,8,9,10,11) as they are jumping circles they will got the same colour and wwww - you're right. nc'ed.
13. 01:05:725 (11) - finish? - Strongly no since there's no cymbal sound at the music.
14. 01:08:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not a big jump instead anti-jump? the almost silent part and that hmm piano effect? will give a highlight to the jump and then back to your regular spacing before this and after it - I prefer anti-jump because it fits more to the music, imo. Plus, adding anti-jump will make a more variety of pattern instead of jumpy notes here and there. I'm pretty sure this all was based on personal taste but if you want me to make the spacing bigger, I will.
15. 01:20:982 (1) - normal soundset to slider start/body? to follow the previous sasdfas, and keep the finish the emphase that it have with that effect of song sounds interesting - Agree. Done.

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]
OD + 1 ? - I'll increase it once it pointed out again by another people.
- 00:22:011 - consider removing break since all diff didn't use break o v o - It won't allow me D: I've tried but even the drain is quite little I'm not sure it's comfortable, and plus it looks ugly because it's totally empty. (no notes, black background, what do we expect?)
- 00:32:125 - combo 3 didn't overlap cutely o v o http://puu.sh/FhgP - Changed.
- 01:09:497 (12) - add whistle? - k, and more for 2 next notes.
Sweet overlap c: - My thank you

- t e n n y a - wrote:

Yahooo from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestions

[General]
Nothing found Great

[Normal]
- 01:26:640 - consider using decreasing volume like hard diff .3. Done

[Hard]
- 00:32:486 - Trap distance .3. It's one of those accelerated spacing jumps :c
- 01:03:154 - ^ ^

thats all I can found ~ Good luck for the rank cx

+39 (34 maps higher on the list)

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

SPOILER

Lunatic Loli
wow so many time lines lol - I like it >w<
00:11:039 (1) - its not that symmetrical, you may want to move the second tick 1 grid right and replace all the copied sliders. - Done'd but using my way
00:38:468 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/FsQk much better? - ( owo)b
nice - thank you >w<

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hi~!
here's my mod~!

Hard

SPOILER

00:49:097 (5) - remove clap at the end Done
no other major problems~!

Normal

SPOILER

01:28:182 (1) - may be add a clap at the beginning? Done

good luck!~

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:19:776 - snap to 00:19:782 - ( owo)b
01:07:268 (1) - newcombo - ( owo)b
00:21:497 (6) - a bit sharp here - I don't know what you mean. Sorry
01:17:897 (8) - move to x:252 y:224 (do a better effect) - I don't get it. I mean, do you want this to be stacked with 01:16:525 (4) - or what? If yes, then this pattern should have a remake.But since when this pattern begin, 01:16:525 (4) - has disappear. I prefer to make 01:17:897 (8) - end slider stack with 01:16:868 (5) - 's, but thank you for pointing this out.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203

- [Lunatic Loli] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 109,109,254 Fixed
Combo4 : 128,85,186

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203

- [Yasora's Easy] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203

[Normal]
01:10:011 (1) - newcombo Um, it's NC already o.o
00:35:040 (5) - spacing Fixed
01:01:097 (2) - spacing Fixed

[Hard]
00:14:640 (3) - umm...spacing? Fixed
00:27:497 (3) - use 4 points to make this slider Done
00:44:640 (3) - not stack with 00:43:097 (3) completely Fixed
01:04:525 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - oh..it's not for a hard diff :< I see. Made the spacing constant, done.
01:26:811 (1) - spacing? Fixed
01:28:182 (1) - ^ ^
01:29:554 (1) - ^ ^
01:30:925 (1) - ^ ^

OK that's all .Good song!
Excellent Mapset

1. offset-8
2. sb\black.jpg is not used.
3. When you use pure color image, you'd better to use png. (change white.jpg to a png)
4. Pay attention on the shape of sliders: For example in Normal 01:00:069 (6) - http://puu.sh/FKl3 change to this: http://puu.sh/FKlt The final point should be at center of the slider end, and all points should be symmetric.

Yasora wrote:

about nc in spinner p/1601041

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

1. offset-8 Done
2. sb\black.jpg is not used. Could've sworn I've removed it and did full-submission. Will full-submit again later.
3. When you use pure color image, you'd better to use png. (change white.jpg to a png)
4. Pay attention on the shape of sliders: For example in Normal 01:00:069 (6) - http://puu.sh/FKl3 change to this: http://puu.sh/FKlt The final point should be at center of the slider end, and all points should be symmetric.

[Normal]
00:17:211 (3,6) - make them symmetric? Done
01:10:011 (1) - add NC after spinner Done

[Hard]
00:21:326 (4,6) - 1 grid down and it will looks much better Done
00:33:497 (6,3) - try to avoid the overlap? Done
00:46:354 (7,1) - not symmetric. Done
01:02:982 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a round? Changed them to back-and-forth
01:04:525 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

That's all I can find. GL~

popner wrote:

[Insane]
00:30:240 (1,4) - stack their end? - Done.
00:30:240 (1,5) - stack their head? - Done.
00:41:211 (1) - make the slider symmetric? http://puu.sh/FK8g - I'm afraid that I can't do it. So code, maybe?
00:41:725 (2,4,5) - ^ - ^~
01:03:668 (3,5) - not symmetric. Use Ctrl+H to adjust them?
01:30:925 (7) - not looks so good. Use a note to adjust? http://puu.sh/FKax - Make it (quite) bigger so it won't look messy.

http://puu.sh/FNmr

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Normal]
00:18:574 (6) - Flip horizontally (ctrl+H) for better flow? Done
00:31:945 (4) - Extend this slider to white tick. You seems miss this part, I guess.... Done
00:36:402 (2) - This spacing doesn't looks right... Done
00:37:431 (5) - ^ Done



That's all I got, sorry

Katty Pie wrote:

Lunatic

00:20:974(3,4,5,6,7,8) - make so http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362139 looks better - I'm making a spiral with no overlapping notes here. In other words, fixed but not this way,
00:30:746(2,3) - stack better - Okay.
00:43:089(5,6,1) - stack it better - How's now?
00:49:689(2,5) - remove claps - Absolutely, no. It's perfect just now D:
01:05:717 - remove whistle - Nope, hitsound pattern.
01:06:917(spin) - remove clap/ not sound here - Again, hitsound pattern. Plus, I like the way it sounds, rather than empty.

Marcin wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]
GREAT HITSOUNDS /o/
but new combos feels strange. - I'm sorry

iroseka wrote:

Hi~ mod from my queue~

General
Great map and SB. deserve a star. Thanks~

Timing Section
01:37:346 - make the section to 01:37:432 Tried this and it no longer silences the spinner end so no.

Normal
this level sounds boring with just don-pa-don-pa, I suggest you change note arrangement to make it less boring.
00:44:288 (1) - silence the spinner end? Done

Hard
00:48:231 (3) - can be easily misread. put a bit further. For the sake of spacing, no
00:49:774 (1) - DS. Done
00:51:317 (1,2) - DS. No need snapping the previous note because even you do so it will be stacked. Done
01:02:802 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit too messy. Arranged them to something else
01:07:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a sudden DS increasing will just make it feel awkward. try to make the arrangement look better. The pattern is already as good as it is however I made the spacing increases much less sudden
01:10:002 (1) - This final jump is easy to miss. maybe use a slider here? No but I arranged it a bit, should be better now
01:15:831 (2) - DS? Done
01:24:745 (8,9,10) - ^ Done

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

•Correct size pics SB >.< size should be 800x600 and less
Pretty sure it's okay if it's above 800x600. I'll ask around.

Hard

00:30:403 - i think better add note here Done
00:47:032(1,3) - stack better Done

good luck~~

Marcin wrote:

[Normal]
00:28:859 (3,4,5) - spacing Done

So short mod :/
GO GO GO RANKED

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Lunatic Loli:
00:34:346 (4) - This anti jumps feels off, maybe a bit larger spacing (to like 1.1 or something instead of .9). - But there are jump after this, If I'm using even 1.0x, doesn't it will make the jump bigger?
00:35:374 (6) - You'll prob get yelled at by some Bats for this, I would put the end of this slider on the end of 5. - Done.
01:18:231 (1) - Please stop stacking slider underneath other sliders. This is hard to read and again will probably get yelled at by a BAT. - Actually, I'm a bit agree, but you may want to suggest me some pattern instead of bragging it. It will be more helpful. Really. For now no changes. I don't know what to do because after this slider it has a pattern. Instead, I rotate 01:17:546 (7,8) - . I actually scared of that 'yelled at by a BAT' but meh, you know that word is sometimes not a good thing to put at mod.
01:30:917 (7) - Spacing. It's too close to 6 considering the spacing between all of 01:29:717 (4,5,6,7) - is the same, people are going to think this is also 1/2 like 4-5-6. - How about stack?

• how about add hitsounds to slidertick?

• AR -1 or -2
  00:58:517 (3,4) - I think these notes are too hard for beginner player. replace with reverse slider.
  01:05:974 (1) - I think you shouldn't to silent here.
  01:11:031 (3,3) - I guess newbie player will miss these note, because they are covered with hitburst.

1. first of all, is this really Hard?
   continual circles looks so hard. reduce some of them.
   for example, in 00:12:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6), you should remove 2 and 6.
   whole the map, I think you need to recheck of them.
2. I wonder why you put notes so randomly.
   for example, 00:12:745 (3,4) and 00:13:259 (5,6). these note have same rhythm.
   if you want to blanket a circle, you should do it perfectly. it is a trivial thing, but it will give your map looks very well.
   00:33:488 (5,6,1) - keep a certain distance

• 00:35:717 (1) - upside down to make a good flow
  00:36:232 (2) - ^
  00:45:831 (5,1) - I don't like this stacking
  01:08:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I don't like this distance. more farther
  01:25:089 (5,2) - same as 00:45:831
  01:26:460 (3,4) - ^
  01:30:917 (7) - how about use this one
  SPOILER

  

  200,96,90917,2,2,B|260:52|368:60|456:192|368:324|260:332|200:288,1,480,2|4

meiikyuu wrote:

feel free to ignore whatever you don't like

◘ btw i read Katty Pie's mod, and no the max. size is not 800x600, 1024 x 768 is max. js xD

Normal
00:43:602 (6) - one grid down, might look neater next to 5 Done

that's all from me :< sry i couldn't find much, seems like a solid map to me

tsukasa ~~ good luck <3

h-728 wrote:

from queue

[Normal]

• AR -1 or -2 Set to AR4
  00:58:517 (3,4) - I think these notes are too hard for beginner player. replace with reverse slider. Done
  01:05:974 (1) - I think you shouldn't to silent here. Done
  01:11:031 (3,3) - I guess newbie player will miss these note, because they are covered with hitburst.

that's all. gl

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

asdf

[Normal]
00:40:859 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:41:545 (2) - NC Done
00:58:517 (3,4) - Could irritate the new players. Done
01:01:088 (2) - Place it at x:204 y:180 Done
01:01:431 (3) - Place it at x:152 y:228 (This small curve looks pretty and gives more flow instead of a straight line) Done
01:28:174 (1) - Set the last Sliderpoint at x:284 y:256, looks a bit better. Done

orz :3