RikiH_ wrote:

Yo.

General:

Imposta un Preview Point!

Easy

01:23:487 (2) - Penso che ci siano troppe ripetizioni in questo slider, è troppo complicato per quelli che non sanno giocare.
01:29:347 (1,2,3,1) - Nelle Easy cerca di non ammassare i beats, altrimenti è troppo complicato.
01:45:987 (3,4,5,6,1) - Stessa cosa di prima :°

easy lasciata come prima

Hard

00:52:550 (1,1,1,1) - Forse 4 spinner di seguito sono un po' troppi...
01:38:487 (2) - Troppe ripetizioni D:
02:55:831 (9) - New Combo?

Gli spinner sono per variare un po', come le ripetizioni nello slider se no viene sempre uguale, new combo fixata

Alcuni slider sono bastardi, francamente non saprei dirti se cambiarli o no, magari chiedi a qualcuno più esperto di me :/ I LIKE THIS AUHAUHAUHA

Insane

00:30:284 (2,3,4) (5,6,7) (8,9,10) (11,12,13) - Vanno bene, però ti consiglio di non metterli staccati perchè fanno sclerare D: (Mi sono spiegato malissimo, sorry. Se non capisci dimmelo xD)
02:45:050 (1) - È figo, però non penso che sia rankabile xD Cambialo.
02:46:225 (3) - Stessa cosa
02:58:878 (7) - Stessa cosa

Sì lo so sono difficili i primi circle ma è il loro bello xD, riguardo agli slider vorrei lasciarli sono troppo fighi poi magari se un mat o un bat mi dice di toglierli li tolgo xD

Non penso di essere stato molto d'aiuto, sono nabbo a moddare, devo imparare xD. La mappa è bella, complimenti. Poi ti posto la guest diff.

Mirry wrote:

Insane:

00:30:284 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Io li attaccherei un po'. Visto che l'avete detto in due, fixato
00:45:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stessa cosa qui e via dicendo con quegli streams successivi.i Preferisco lasciarli così
01:28:643 (11,12,13) - Al posto di questi tre finali magari un minislider che ripete 1 volta? Cambiato il finale, guarda se ti piace
01:41:300 (1,2,3) - Magari i due slider a specchio e il beat finale al centro? Fixato
02:07:550 (1) - Avverti che lo slider va più veloce. Ci lavorerò
02:51:378 (1,2,3,4) - Anziché subito passare dal volume100% a 0% fai una discesa con tutti gli slider: 1 75%; 2 50%; 3 25 %; 4 0%. E' già graduato il volume in discesa..
02:54:425 (1,2,3) - Stessa cosa per sopra però con la velocità. Prova a fare la prima veloce la seconda più lenta e la terza ancora più lenta, come la voce della tizia. Non posso mettere altri timing section..
03:09:425 (1,2,3,4) - Come sopra. ^

Grazie <3<3
Questi sono i miei consigli, divertiti <3

PEPOTTI wrote:

[General]
Why is the timing which starts in every diff although the same person is making different? (AND kiaitime)
Timing is indifferent, every diff have 50 offset, the easy is only shorter than the others, fixed kiai


[Insane]
00:45:050 (1) to 00:56:065 (11) - You should use not only circle but also slider. Fixed
01:11:300 (1) - Remove NC? Fixed
01:12:237 (3) - Add NC Fixed
01:15:050 (1) - Remove NC? Fixed
01:15:987 (4) - Add NC Fixed
01:18:800 (1) - Remove NC? Fixed
01:19:737 (2) - Add NC Fixed
Remove?
Add
Rem...
Ad...
・
・
・
02:54:425 (1,2,3,4) - The place cannot respond, when playing first. It's the better timing I can do..

REALLY THANKS PEPOTTI

Xgor wrote:

Pointed out stuff about speed-ups and tick rate and so on in IRC. Fixed

Chewin wrote:

[Easy]
01:21:847 (1) - Siccome questa è la difficoltà più facile, rimuovi questo circle. E' sempre difficile per i beginners colpire un circle 1/2 subito dopo lo spinner Fixato
01:23:487 (2) - Troppi repeat per una easy ed i beginners non sanno quando lasciare. Quindi ti consiglio di fare una cosa del genere: Fixato

02:08:487 (2) - ^ Fixato
02:12:237 (2) - ^ Fixato
02:15:987 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Assolutamente una cosa del genere per una easy no.. Prova a fare qualcos'altro, tipo degli sliders 1/1 Fixato
02:19:737 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ Fixato

[Hard]
AR+1 o +2 credimi, pezzi come questi 01:23:487 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) sono difficili da leggere per una hard con questo AR Fixato
01:08:487 (3) - Non mi piace sto circle sovrapposto con 01:08:018 (2). Intendo che con questo AR basso potrebbe essere difficile da leggere specialmente in dt + hd Beh uno se la impara prima di farla in hd.. Comunque lo lascio quello
02:08:018 (2) - Se usi una SV diversa dovresti avvertire in qualche modo. Forse usando una new combo? Fixato
02:11:768 (2) - ^ Fixato
02:15:518 (2) - ^ Fixato
02:21:143 (5) - Overlapped sliders, illegibile. Fixa muovendolo da un'altra parte Fixato
02:26:768 (2) - Stesso che ho scritto sopra^ Fixato
02:45:050 (1) - Fermati qui come nella easy, non mappare sto pezzo :\ Che secondo me è mappato un po' maluccio. In effetti l'ho fatto un po' male nella hard...

[Insane]
AR +1
01:08:487 (2,8) - Overlapped sliders, illegibili. Fixato
02:08:956 (3) - CTRL R Fixato
02:09:893 (5) - ^ Fixato
02:45:050 (1) - Stessa cosa della Hard Non credo sia fatto male come pezzo.. Se nella insane lo lasciassi?
Boh, i pattern sono buoni e rankabili però i jump sono... "leggermente" esagerati? xD Prendila come una sfida auahuaha

Buona fortuna :3

1. Dovresti pensare a creare un Normal,visto che lo spread ora come ora non è un granchè
2. Nella Hard mancano le tag "Genshin lrsmstr" mentre nell'Insane mancano tutte le tag,aggiungile

1. Prima di iniziare con la mod,ti ricordo che hai usato molti jump e antijump che potrebbero benissimo far confondere un player che inizia a giocare a osu,come nei pattern 00:37:550 (1,2,3,4) - e 00:48:800 (1) - (se me lo chiedi,dopo te li elenco pure se vuoi). Ti consiglio di rifare questi patterns evitando di far ciò
2. 00:59:581 (2,3) - Perchè non li posizioni così?
3. 01:22:081 (1) - Metti un New Combo su questa nota,che manca a causa di un bug creato con l'inserimento dello spinner
4. 01:26:300 (1) - Potresti flipparlo verticalmente per creare un blanket con 01:25:597 (1,2) -
5. 01:40:597 (1,2) - 1 grid a destra per evitare la sovrapposizione con lo slider 01:38:487 (3) - ?
6. 01:51:847 (1) - Perchè non lo curvi così? Oltre a fare un blanket con 01:49:737 (2) - ,eviteresti di nuovo la sovrapposizione con questo slider
7. 02:03:331 - Una nota qui ci starebbe bene,imho

1. 00:39:893 (3) - 1 grid a sinistra per fixare lo spacing
2. 00:40:362 (6) - 1 grid a destra,stesso motivo di sopra
3. 01:26:300 (1,2) - La fine dello slider 2 è nascosta sotto lo slider 1,rendendolo quindi difficile da leggere. Potresti fixare flippando semplicemenete lo slider 1 orizzontalmente
4. 01:38:487 (2) - 4 grid a destra per mantenere la simmetria con 01:37:550 (1) - ?
5. 01:52:550 (2) - Stack sotto lo slider 1?
6. 02:48:331 (5) - Magari muoverla così per far in modo che 02:48:800 (6) - non rimanga nascosto sotto questo slider?

1. Ci sono vari slider unsnappati,fixa ciò ricalcolando la lunghezza degli slider (dal menu Timing scegli "Recalculate Slider Lenghts")
2. 01:34:971 (2) - Allinealo bene con 01:34:737 (1) - ,e fai lo stesso con gli slider seguenti
3. 01:38:018 (6) - Perchè non stacki questa nota sotto 01:37:784 (5) - ?
4. 01:48:565 (3) - Potresti muovere questo 3 grids in su e 01:49:268 (6) - 3 grids in giù per creare un "effetto stacking"
5. 02:03:565 (3) - Fixa lo spacing muovendo questa nota 1 grid sotto
6. 02:09:425 (4,5) - Per me qui un CTRL+R ci starebbe bene,e sicuramente migliorerebbe il flow di questi slider rispetto agli altri
7. 02:30:401 (2) - 2 grids left per allinearlo con 02:30:050 (1) -
8. 02:30:753 (3) - 2 grids up per allinearlo con 02:30:401 (2) -
9. 02:31:104 (4) - 2 grids a destra per allinearlo con 02:30:753 (3) -
10. 02:58:175 (5,6) - Posizionali su x:216 y:304 per mantenere il loro spacing equidistante a 02:57:471 (1,2,3,4) -

-kevincela- wrote:

[General]

1. Dovresti pensare a creare un Normal,visto che lo spread ora come ora non è un granchè Mi servirebbe una guest, non le voglio fare tutte io le diff..
2. Nella Hard mancano le tag "Genshin lrsmstr" mentre nell'Insane mancano tutte le tag,aggiungile

Tag aggiornate


[Easy]

1. Prima di iniziare con la mod,ti ricordo che hai usato molti jump e antijump che potrebbero benissimo far confondere un player che inizia a giocare a osu,come nei pattern 00:37:550 (1,2,3,4) - e 00:48:800 (1) - (se me lo chiedi,dopo te li elenco pure se vuoi). Ti consiglio di rifare questi patterns evitando di far ciò
2. 00:59:581 (2,3) - Perchè non li posizioni così?
3. 01:22:081 (1) - Metti un New Combo su questa nota,che manca a causa di un bug creato con l'inserimento dello spinner
4. 01:26:300 (1) - Potresti flipparlo verticalmente per creare un blanket con 01:25:597 (1,2) -
5. 01:40:597 (1,2) - 1 grid a destra per evitare la sovrapposizione con lo slider 01:38:487 (3) - ?
6. 01:51:847 (1) - Perchè non lo curvi così? Oltre a fare un blanket con 01:49:737 (2) - ,eviteresti di nuovo la sovrapposizione con questo slider
7. 02:03:331 - Una nota qui ci starebbe bene,imho

All fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:39:893 (3) - 1 grid a sinistra per fixare lo spacing
2. 00:40:362 (6) - 1 grid a destra,stesso motivo di sopra
3. 01:26:300 (1,2) - La fine dello slider 2 è nascosta sotto lo slider 1,rendendolo quindi difficile da leggere. Potresti fixare flippando semplicemenete lo slider 1 orizzontalmente
4. 01:38:487 (2) - 4 grid a destra per mantenere la simmetria con 01:37:550 (1) - ?
5. 01:52:550 (2) - Stack sotto lo slider 1?
6. 02:48:331 (5) - Magari muoverla così per far in modo che 02:48:800 (6) - non rimanga nascosto sotto questo slider?

Fixed

[Insane]

1. Ci sono vari slider unsnappati,fixa ciò ricalcolando la lunghezza degli slider (dal menu Timing scegli "Recalculate Slider Lenghts") Li avevo già aggiustati, ci sono solo due slider che non sono snappati e si tratta degli slider 02:55:128 (3) - 03:10:128 (3), comunque ho ricalcolato la lunghezza degli slider
2. 01:34:971 (2) - Allinealo bene con 01:34:737 (1) - ,e fai lo stesso con gli slider seguenti
3. 01:38:018 (6) - Perchè non stacki questa nota sotto 01:37:784 (5) - ?
4. 01:48:565 (3) - Potresti muovere questo 3 grids in su e 01:49:268 (6) - 3 grids in giù per creare un "effetto stacking"
5. 02:03:565 (3) - Fixa lo spacing muovendo questa nota 1 grid sotto
6. 02:09:425 (4,5) - Per me qui un CTRL+R ci starebbe bene,e sicuramente migliorerebbe il flow di questi slider rispetto agli altri
7. 02:30:401 (2) - 2 grids left per allinearlo con 02:30:050 (1) -
8. 02:30:753 (3) - 2 grids up per allinearlo con 02:30:401 (2) -
9. 02:31:104 (4) - 2 grids a destra per allinearlo con 02:30:753 (3) -
10. 02:58:175 (5,6) - Posizionali su x:216 y:304 per mantenere il loro spacing equidistante a 02:57:471 (1,2,3,4) -

All fixed

Grazie mille

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello! c: M4M Request from my Queue ^^

Easy

01:30:050 (1) - Slider to 01:30:284 & repeat Fixed

SPOILER

02:03:097 (1) - Soft Sound Slider Fixed

SPOILER

02:06:847 (1) - ^ Was deleted

SPOILER

02:07:550 (2) - Remove NC Fixed yet

Hard

01:38:487 (2) - 1 Repeat All fixed
01:39:190 (3) - Circle @ x:176 y:248
01:39:425 (4) - Circle @ x:336 y:184
01:39:659 (5) - Circle @ x:176 y:184
01:39:893 (6) - Circle @ x:336 y:120
01:40:128 (7) - Circle @ x:176 y:120

SPOILER

01:40:596 (1) - Circle @ x:256 y:224
01:40:831 (2) - Circle @ x:256 y:304
01:41:065 (3) - Circle @ x:256 y:144 (on the slider) Fixed, but I like the circle 3 in the position of the 1

SPOILER

Insane

00:31:573 - Add Circle
00:31:807 - Remove Circle
00:31:924 (13) - Move it to Center

SPOILER

00:33:096 (3) - Repeat 2 times
00:33:565 (4) - Slider

SPOILER

I don't really like it... And it would be overmapped I think xD

The map is perfect and with those changes it looks better at least for me ^^ I hope you like it c:
Favoutire part - 02:22:550 - XDD

I'm glad you like it

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

Mod4mod here!

General

1. Storyboard elements' size shouldn't be over 800*600 pixels Check the rule from wiki
2. Great, I made a slidertick sound and used twice in the same day. Anyway! Now replace this hitsound to your own tick.wav. Added a base sound (hit-normal) for it. http://puu.sh/CLGF
3. Add sliderborder to other two (Easy, Normal) diffs, too.

Easy

1. So much slider jumps

00:57:287 - Consider using a gradual progressive volume from here, 48~50%
00:58:225 - 52~55%
00:59:162 - ~60% Fixed

00:30:100 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:33:850 (1,2,3,4) - Unify hitsounds of these notes, first half are using whistles on 3rd beats. And second half are 4th beats. :\ I recommand to follow 3rd beats' one.
00:39:475 (3,4) - I wonder is it an acceptable jump for easiest diff. Plus it's stacked under previous slider.
01:27:756 (3) - Clap instead.
01:28:225 (4) - Whistle instead.
01:38:537 (3,4) - This kind of stackings aren't approved for easiest difficulty. 3 reverse+a circle stacked under slider's end :\ Try a better pattern instead!
01:42:287 (3,4) - ^
01:47:443 (6,1) - Wha..tricky spacing. It would be fine for Normal/Hard difficulties though. But please keep Easy sight-reading.
01:49:787 (2,3) - Again with this stacking, hehe
02:17:443 - Clap instead? Much things fixed
02:21:896 (1) - Which track's this slider following O.O? Sounds like a random 1/6 slider here. I don't really agree with this. That was an error, lol, fixed

Hard
00:57:287 - Same as Easy
02:07:550 - Stack this section to downbeat.

00:30:100 - to 00:45:100 - Please keep claps on 2nd/4th beats only. It's nonsense to spam claps to each white ticks.
00:58:225 (1) - Finish
01:09:943 (7) - Copy 01:09:240 (5) - and paste it on, press Ctrl+>+>. Fix it's position. And you get a balanced pattern!

01:24:475 (8,9) - Spacing error, move 2 grid right
01:24:943 (10,11) - Spacing error, 2 grid left
01:42:756 (3) - Again, copy 01:42:287 (2) - and paste it on. Use Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R this time.
01:43:225 (4,5) - ^ (Fix the hitsounds too)
01:48:850 (1) - Shape is weird D: Try this?


02:33:850 (1) - Finish.

All fixed

Insane

1. Pretty nice!

00:46:037 - Consider using a gradual progressive volume from here, 40%
00:46:975 - 45%
00:50:725 - 50%
00:57:287 - Same as Easy
01:52:650 - Again, snap this to downbeat.

00:56:350 (1) - Finish.
02:03:381 (2) - Delete finish.
02:33:850 (1) - Finish instead.
All fixed

Good luck

CDFA wrote:

THE ORIGINAL MIX

THIS AIN'T NO REMIX

Skin:
Maybe make a reversearrow.jpg?

Insane:
00:54:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Move this pattern up a little bit so (2) stacks with (7)
01:51:896 (1) - I don't like this random speed-up ;~;
02:10:646 - WOAH HOLD IT THERE PARTNER THIS IS A PRETTY WEIRD SPEED-UP

Hard:
00:52:600 (1,1,1,1) - Having a bunch of spinners in a row generally isn't a good idea
02:08:068 (1) - Plays weirdly o-o
02:11:818 (1) - ^
02:15:568 (1) - ^
02:23:068 (1) - ^
02:26:818 (1) - ^

Easy:
A lot of issues here are just spacing. In easies, the spacing should generally always stay consistent, so newer players can actually play it.
00:37:600 - Sliderspeed changes for an easy are 95% of time a big no no
01:30:803 - Random break o-o
01:46:506 (4,5,6) - Anti-Jumps are also a big no no

So much things fixed, now I think the easy it's ok.. Really thanks!

desu

pimpG wrote:

hi there

general

Multiple .osb Files There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).

offset 86


easy

00:37:600 (1,2,3,4) - using 0,6x and 1,1x spacing here
00:48:381 (2,1) - spacing
00:52:600 (1,2,1) - using 1,8x here
00:56:350 (1,2,3) - 1,5x
01:09:943 (5,6,1,2) - unstack, btw this pattern is a bit hard for an easy diff (imo)
01:11:350 - remove nc ?
01:13:693 (6,7,1,2) - unstack, btw this pattern is a bit hard for an easy diff (imo)
01:22:600 - remove nc?
01:24:475 (3,4,1,2) - too hard for an easy?
01:28:693 (5,6) - unstack
01:32:443 (5,6,1,2) - unstack, btw this pattern is a bit hard for an easy diff (imo)
01:33:850 - remove nc
01:37:600 - spacing

there are more of this errors but you can find by yourself

i did not found nothing in the other diffs

thats all

Much things fixed, now I think the easy it's okay...

• Inconsistency on Kiai times: http://puu.sh/EBoz
  Seems like you need a Normal diff, there's no point between Easy and Hard Diff.
  Epilepsy Alert on All Diffs, Please.

• 00:40:881 (4,1) I don't like inconsistent spacing on Easy diffs http://puu.sh/EBpP
  00:59:631 (2,3) Maybe this? http://puu.sh/EBrD Looks better.
  02:10:646 (1,2,3,4) Too much better http://puu.sh/EBtR

• 00:44:865 (2) Remove Tail Slider Clap, please.
  00:52:131 (6) Remove Tail Slider Clap and add it on the Slider's Start.
  01:00:100 (3) NC.

• 02:04:878 (1,2,3,4) Since you have too many jupms, one more doesn't hurt this map http://puu.sh/EBAK
  Too much Copy Paste in this diff

iMercurial wrote:

As request.

General

• Inconsistency on Kiai times: http://puu.sh/EBoz
  Seems like you need a Normal diff, there's no point between Easy and Hard Diff.
  Epilepsy Alert on All Diffs, Please.

Easy

• 00:40:881 (4,1) I don't like inconsistent spacing on Easy diffs http://puu.sh/EBpP
  00:59:631 (2,3) Maybe this? http://puu.sh/EBrD Looks better.
  02:10:646 (1,2,3,4) Too much better http://puu.sh/EBtR

Hard

• 00:44:865 (2) Remove Tail Slider Clap, please.
  00:52:131 (6) Remove Tail Slider Clap and add it on the Slider's Start.
  01:00:100 (3) NC.

Insane

• 02:04:878 (1,2,3,4) Since you have too many jupms, one more doesn't hurt this map http://puu.sh/EBAK
  Too much Copy Paste in this diff

Good luck.

All fixed, thanks!

1. 00:33:850 (5) - NC? You have switched to another pattern here, and going for eight objects in a combo for an Easy diff sounds... somewhat ridiculous.
2. 01:18:850 (1) - You should actually use circles and sliders instead of using a spinner just for the sake of using a spinner here.
3. 02:15:100 (2,3,4) - Hmm... I guess you can remove the Whistle from (2) and apply it to (3,4). Sounds better, IMO.
4. 02:18:850 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 02:21:428 (3) - Whistle?

1. 00:41:584 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is perfectly fine, IMO, but (oh wait didn't I say perfect) it's boring to have the same pattern throughout these combos. Making a windmill's fan or some other stuff would do, but again, I think this pattern is pretty boring.
2. 02:08:537 (3) - NC? I'm sure enough the song 'demands' it... kind of.

1. Too much copy-paste and symmetrical patterns I suppose? Going symmetry is fine to make your beatmap look tidy, but too much of them... I don't know what to say.
2. 01:08:537 (2) - NC? Reason is the same as 02:08:537 (3) on Hard.
3. 01:31:037 (3) - ^
4. 01:35:021 (5) - ^
5. 02:01:037 (4) - ^
6. 02:08:537 (2) - ^
7. 02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...Not sure what are you mapping to here. Maybe you should remap this part and follow the louder parts of the song.

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
F,0,...

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Let's get to mod this.

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

Before I start, I think you'll need a Normal diff, but it's up to you; it should be rankable with these diffs, anyway.

>Easy

1. 00:33:850 (5) - NC? You have switched to another pattern here, and going for eight objects in a combo for an Easy diff sounds... somewhat ridiculous. Fixed
2. 01:18:850 (1) - You should actually use circles and sliders instead of using a spinner just for the sake of using a spinner here. Fixed
3. 02:15:100 (2,3,4) - Hmm... I guess you can remove the Whistle from (2) and apply it to (3,4). Sounds better, IMO. I think it's better like now
4. 02:18:850 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 02:21:428 (3) - Whistle? Fixed

>Hard

1. 00:41:584 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is perfectly fine, IMO, but (oh wait didn't I say perfect) it's boring to have the same pattern throughout these combos. Making a windmill's fan or some other stuff would do, but again, I think this pattern is pretty boring. Fixed, do you like it now?
2. 02:08:537 (3) - NC? I'm sure enough the song 'demands' it... kind of. Fixed

>Insane

1. Too much copy-paste and symmetrical patterns I suppose? Going symmetry is fine to make your beatmap look tidy, but too much of them... I don't know what to say.
2. 01:08:537 (2) - NC? Reason is the same as 02:08:537 (3) on Hard. Fixed
3. 01:31:037 (3) - ^ Fixed
4. 01:35:021 (5) - ^ Fixed
5. 02:01:037 (4) - ^ Fixed
6. 02:08:537 (2) - ^ Fixed
7. 02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...Not sure what are you mapping to here. Maybe you should remap this part and follow the louder parts of the song.

I followed another part, delete them and listen. Sorry but I don't want to delete this :c

I guess just that.

Good luck on the way

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
You can try offset+3 Fixed

[SB]
I think you should use Avicii - Levels.jpg as BG. You can use

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
F,0,...

to fade out BG. This is so because preview image in webpage will be 'Avicii - Levels.jpg' It wouldn't change pulses?

[Easy]
Don't change slider velocity in easy diff.
Also, always keep a main DS in easy.
^ Maybe you need to take time to remap same patterns to follow these, but it is necessary.
00:39:006 (2) - 1 grid down and it will looks much better Fixed

[Hard]
00:44:396 (1,2) - the space between them should be same as 00:43:459 (1,2) Edited yet
02:23:537 (1,2) - stack them? Fixed

[Insane]
00:41:467 (1) - end at 00:44:631 or player can't have enough time to prepare Fixed
02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - the music is in 4x(1/4) groups but there are 3x(1/4) groups here. That's why 02:24:357 empty. Fixed

That's all I can find. GL~

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

hi there
mod time via my queue

[General]
you must made a normal/rename easy~
resnap ALL green timing section in ALL diffs (open diff in editor => timing => timing setup panel => click at the second (not first) section => press Shift => click at the last section => write here: 3 => click "move" => click "ОК") sorry if you know about that \:'D/ Damn I forgotted it, thianks!

[Easy]
i don't know, maybe you want to rename diff, but i mod this diff as Easy ofc
01:09:946 (5,6,1,2) - this may confuse beginners, try this => http://puu.sh/FhJo
here's the places like that:
01:13:696 (4,5,1,2)
01:16:040 (1,2,1,2)
01:19:790 (1,2)
01:24:478 (3,4,1,2)
01:47:446 (4,1)
and etc. check the map and remap this.
but, if you rename this on Normal, i suggest you CS, HD +1, OD, AR +2 and this looks clean. Fixed, it'll stay easy

[Hard]
00:43:462 (1,2,3,4) - i personnaly dislike this pattern D: another one

214,134,43462,6,0,B|110:134,1,85,0|8
299,197,43931,2,0,B|395:197,1,85
216,264,44399,2,0,B|131:264,1,85,0|8
301,327,44868,2,0,B|389:327,1,85

Fixed thanks

it's all, i'm so lazy and insane seems clean imo. /me runs

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hi~！ Here's my modding~!

In general
i like your mapping style~ But some shape of the sliders are not good to me, im gonna point it out later.

Insane

SPOILER

OD+1~2 Fixed
00:32:212 (1,3) - you may wanna switch them since 1 is blocking the previous pattern Fixed
00:45:103 (1) - from here the streaming shape is kinda wierd... heres the code i made, hope you like it Too much spaced :c

256,60,45103,5,2
236,124,45220,1,2
240,192,45337,1,0
184,168,45454,1,0
120,192,45571,1,2
184,212,45688,1,2
240,192,45806,1,2
236,252,45923,1,0
256,316,46040,1,2
276,252,46157,1,2
276,192,46274,1,2
332,212,46392,5,0
396,192,46509,1,2
332,168,46626,1,0
276,192,46744,1,2
276,124,46860,1,0
256,60,46978,5,2
192,84,47095,1,2
144,128,47212,1,0
120,192,47329,1,2
148,252,47446,1,2
196,300,47563,1,0
256,320,47681,1,2
320,300,47798,1,2
368,252,47915,5,0
396,192,48032,1,2
364,132,48149,1,0
320,80,48267,1,2
256,64,48384,1,0
256,128,48501,1,2
256,188,48618,1,2

01:22:603 (4) - move to the right by 1 grid Fixed
02:31:860 (8) - better at the center Fixed

Hard

SPOILER

OD+1 Fixed

Easy

SPOILER

01:22:134 (1) - better to use DS to place the note
others are fine to me Fixed

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Hard

SPOILER

Change the offset to 26353. It's a good idea to make it the first beat, but it's not required. Fixed

01:14:399 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps from 1.0x spacing to 1.6x spacing.
01:16:509 (2) - Random 1.3x spacing.
01:18:853 (2,3) - 1.2x spacing.
01:27:290 (1,2,3,4) - Might be unrankable since you can't see the slider beginnings.
02:30:571 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You jump from mapping the melody to the synth riff. It's hard to understand the jump without a break or something in between.[/color]

Insane

SPOILER

Change the offset to 26353. It's a good idea to make it the first beat, but it's not required. Fixed

It's the same as [hard]. You need to differentiate your maps.

gamerrox wrote:

Hey, I really liked your map. Thanks Had fun testing it out! Not too good at the whole modding thing, so forgive me if some of my advice isn't entirely appropriate.

Hard:
01:36:899 (1,2,3) Random 0.5x spacing in the middle of the chorus when everything else is 1.0x. A bit adjusted, now is x0.7 :/

Insane:
00:35:962 (4,1) Confusing jump between the combos. Spacing seems way too wide. Fixed

- t e n n y a - wrote:

nyahai from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestions

[General]
fine o v o b

[Easy]
maybe 1.0 distance?
- 00:55:884 until 01:00:103 : distance too far its hard for an easy player A bit fixed
- 01:12:290 : remove note, its more fit to the song c: Fixed
- 01:18:149 : maybe change it to slider Fixed
- 01:22:603 : remove nc Fixed
- 01:23:540 : add nc Fixed
- for 1/2 beat, I suggest you use slider, like 01:18:149 Fixed
- 02:03:853 : move the spinner to 02:04:790 and end at 02:06:431 Fixed

[Hard]
- I don't suggest hard diff using 1.70 sv otl Now I can't change D:
- 01:45:103 : distance, i meant its too far o v o" Fixed
- 02:22:603 : ^ I think it's ok D:
- 02:27:290 : remove clap? Fixed
- 02:30:103 : remove nc Fixed
- 02:30:571 : add nc Fixed

[Insane]
- Slider tick rate 1 ? Fixed
- 01:11:704 : add note? Not fixed
- 01:31:978 : 3 & 4 slider tail didn't meet perfectly Fixed
- increasing slider velocity multiplier orz mind to change it? Q v Q What? lool

Thats all I can found, rank gl ! cx

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Storyboarding

Points of lines SB don't correspond points of time line. You should fixed this. Desing ---> +13 ms +3ms, thanks xD

Insane

AR -1

00:31:274 - NC Fixed
01:19:790(1,2,3,4) - make this sliders more symmetric http://puu.sh/FyJc Fixed
01:20:259(2) - better replace on short double slider. it's really sound better Fixed
01:22:603(4) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/FyVs Fixed
01:26:353(2,3) - stack better Fixed

Hard

01:33:149 - this slider not sound here/ replace on slider 1\2 and note Fixed
01:43:696(4) - 1 grid up and right Fixed
02:07:603(1,2,3,4) - make this sliders more symmetric http://puu.sh/Fz1r Fixed
02:21:899(1) - http://puu.sh/Fz34 Fixed

Easy

• Better rename in Normal, bcz it is desirable intermediate diffs should to be.
• Slider velocity is very big for this dif >.< you should put 1.0 -1.4 and remap siders
• Slider Tick Rate put 1

00:30:103(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it's very big jups for easy >.< correct spacing between this notes
01:24:478(2) - replace on slider 1/1 it's can confused beginners
01:28:696(4,5) - replace on slider
01:32:446(4,5) - ^
etc.
this diff very difficult for beginners, plz make it easier

Good luck~~

Regou wrote:

Hi! From CLANNED modding queue(Yes, I am too slow D:, sorry for being late)

[Insane]
A bit overmapped. Mmm,,,maybe just for me.
AR-1
01:14:399 (1) - Remove finish?
01:31:978 (3,4,1) - I am not really satisfied with this placement. D:
01:51:899 (1) - Move this far far away from 01:51:196 (4) please D:

[Hard]
00:50:962 (2,4) - Remove clap?
00:51:196 (3) - Then add one here
01:47:446 (4) - Ctrl+R?
02:24:712 (4) - Ugly overlap D: at least few grids down please

[Normal]
Please use grid size 3 or 4, using size 1 just make the spacing sucks
00:37:600 (1,2) - What the- huge jumps in normal diff?
00:39:475 (3,4) - ^ just no.
00:45:100 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:46:037 (3,4,5) - You know, jumps D:
01:12:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing
01:31:037 (1) - Remove NC
...Bad spacing. Considering remap some part...sorry.

[Easy]
01:09:478 (2,3) - Don't use 1/2 beat note in easy diff? D:
01:12:759 (4,5) - ^
Not a big problem here, just need to remove those 1/2 note

Anyway, good luck!

Regou wrote:

[Easy]
01:09:478 (2,3) - Don't use 1/2 beat note in easy diff? D:
01:12:759 (4,5) - ^
Not a big problem here, just need to remove those 1/2 note

BakaHuang wrote:

Hi sorry for my laziness and my poor English :3

Pie's Easy

open aiMod , there are 3 spacing problems , plz fix them

because [Easy] is the easiest diff in this mapset , so you'd better don't have some spaicng problems

Revy's Normal

you can add some nor-whis like [Hard] ?

Insane

I think ar8 is fine?

00:30:806(5,7)-I think change the place of notes is fine , at the beginning of song don't be difficult , (4,5) has a bit far
00:31:743(4,6)-^
00:45:103(1)-~00:46:743(7)-you can make this pattern like this ? http://puu.sh/GkCq
00:46:978(1)-~00:48:618(7)-^

I love this song and mapset <3

Leorda wrote:

[Pie's Easy]
* AR +1? <--- not think

00:55:884 (5) - New combo? <--- no. It's inot necessary here
01:08:540 (1) - The sliderpath is overlapped by spinner-osu, so beginners are hard to see this slider <--- you kidding me? there is enough distance to a slider. it is easily read.
01:38:540 (1) - ^, also new combo, since this note after spinner. You seems forgot them <-- NC added
02:27:290 (4) - Add clap at tail slider <--- added

Thx for mod

Gabe wrote:

don't kudo this right now, I just lost my mod because my computer crashed. But don't worry, I will finish it soon!

Sorry for the long delay.
I love this song♥♥

General
There's an incconsistency in timing and Kiai times.
Every difficulties are okay, but not Revy's one. The red timing start at 00:00:100 which it supposed to start at 00:26:353, and for the Kiai Time, add +3 on every timings for Revy.
For the Storyboard, you should add a loop/pulse at 01:18:853

Easy

New combo
01:38:540 - Add a new combo here to prevent a spinner bug.

Circle emplacement
01:18:853 - This one is completly nazi. Move the second point one grid to the right and the last one, one grid up. So it will make the slider centered.
01:32:446 (5) - For this slider, you should add a reverse arrow and make like this:

Screenshot+Code

280,112,92446,6,0,B|292:52,2,60,8|0|0

Hitsounds
02:27:759 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency.

Normal

Circle emplacement
00:37:600 (1) - This slider looks ugly. I am suggesting you to curve it more. Like this:

Screenshot+Code

120,128,37600,2,0,B|64:160|64:240|120:272,1,170

Copy/Paste it for the next slider, if you want to make it consistent.

There's lots of problem with the spacing... To make it rankable, try to use AiMod or even, use the distance snap.

Hitsounds
Add a clap on every 2/4 not at 1/3, it will sound pretty bad. If you ever need help with hitsounds, try to analyse Pie's Easy which the hitsounds are really good.

^Try to fix this, and call me back for a remod.^

Hard
Hitsounds
00:53:071 - Add a clap here to first: keep the consistency, second; even if the song has a kindof clap, you should add a clap too. Do the same for 00:54:946, 00:56:821, 00:58:696.

Insane

Circle emplacement
00:46:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm suggesting you to start the first circle somewhere else and make another stream.

Hitsounds
Don't overuse the Whistle hitsounds. You should add more Clap at 2/4. Actually, delete 50% of whistle. It like... so annoying to only hear the whistle hitsound. Also, as I said for Revy, try to use the clap hitsound as Katty Pie did or you did for Hard. (Hope you can understand) Call me back to remod Insane.

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[Skinning]
* default-1 seems for off-center for me.... Fixed


[Revy's Normal]
* Make sure that there is no jump pattern in normal diff (e.g. 00:56:818 (1,2,3,4))
* Set the red timing section to 00:26:353 for consistency on each diff

00:56:818 (1) - New combo, since this note after spinner. You seems forgot them
01:12:287 (1,2,3,4) - It is just me or this spacing is kinda random for me....
Fixing

[Insane]
00:48:853 (1) - The repeating slider is overlapped by hitbursts. So it's hidden for pro players Fixed


Good luck

ChrisITA wrote:

A volte sono fiero di essere italiano La easy è fatta benissimo, ora provo le altre (almeno fino alla hard) e vi dico

Edit: Normal ben fatta
Hard stupenda pure, mi fermo qui dato che ho fatto 85.25%, quindi alla insane avrei fatto 0,50% xD Spero diventi ranked

Jebok wrote:

Hi there, mod as requested...

[Pie's Easy]
02:04:790 (4) - Make y same as (2) so y:164

[Revy's Normal]
00:39:009 (2) - Clap here and then do claps every 4 white bars so the next one will be at 00:40:884, then at 00:42:759, 00:44:634 and so on...
01:10:649 (5,6,7) - Distance Snap x1.00
01:13:931 (6,7,8) - ^
01:18:384 (5,6,7) - ^
Check AiMod for spacing fixes. If you e.g. have x1.50 whole combo thats' OK but not thing like x1.68, x2.11 and the x1.83 or something. And there is a point alike that soon after 01:18:384.

[Hard]
02:27:524 (2,3) - Do two same shapes and then (4) different.

[Insane]
00:30:571 (4) - Clap instead of whistle
00:31:509 (3) - ^
00:32:446 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:33:384 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:34:087 (1,2,3) - ^ at the end of them sliders.
00:35:962 (1,2,3) - ^ at the end of them sliders.
00:38:071 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:39:009 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:39:946 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:40:649 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:45:103 (1) - Clap instead of whistle
00:46:040 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:46:978 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:47:915 (7) - New combo + ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:48:853 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:49:790 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:50:728 (1) - ^ beginning.
00:51:665 (3) - ^ end.
00:53:071 (3) - Clap
00:54:946 (3) - Clap
02:01:978 (3) - y:80 like (1)
02:02:446 (4) - y:264 like (2)
02:05:728 (3) - y:104 like (1)
02:06:196 (4) - y:264 like (2)
02:09:009 (2) - When selection reversed, y should be the same as for (1).

• • Apri tutti i file .osu e cambia... (6 colori per le combo sono troppi imo, usa questi 3 che si abbinano meglio con lo sfondo)
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 142,169,133
  Combo2 : 255,218,91
  Combo3 : 159,97,173
  SliderBorder : 255,255,255

  • 01:07:603/01:22:603 (kiai) - Rimuovi questa sezione Kiai (o al limite falla partire a 01:22:603 e falla finire a 01:37:485. Se fai così, aggiungi un'altra sezione Kiai che inizia a 02:22:603 e che finisce a 02:30:103)

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1

• • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 4
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1
  • Why didn't you start mapping at 00:30:103 like the other did? You should start mapping there.
  • 02:33:853 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:33:384

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  • 01:22:603 (4,5) - Rendi lo spacing costante, qua è leggermente diminuito rispetto a quello dei cerchi precedenti.

• • HP Drain Rate: 8

Jordan wrote:

Non ti vergogni a mappare roba plagiata?



>:|

1. 00:46:978 (4) - NC?
2. 01:33:384 (6) - NC here and remove the NC on next note
3. 02:21:431 - i feel like you should add a note here, or at least make 4 a slider and extend it to this point
4. 02:22:134 - add note?

1. 01:45:103 (2) - idk if this slider should be so curvy, when all other sliders around it are straight or less curvy

1. 01:10:649 (1,2,3) - putting finishes in each of these notes doesn't sound fitting , er..in my opinion xD
2. 01:37:603 (1,2,3) - move these out a little to the left to continue the stream? might flow better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:48:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern here seems plain compared to the other combos, try making some cool shape pattern with them? o.o
4. 02:01:040 (1) - whistle needs to be at the beginning

sry thats all i found for now xd, good luck

1. What's your distance spacing used for Insane? Hard? Normal? I see none. All you have are symmetrical objects, and this isn't very attractive, nor can I mod them.
2. Because of the bpm, each beat is not an integer number of ms, and when you use long loops, events get more and more mistimed, as seen in this picture:
   
   Consider breaking down your loops into 2, or even 4 smaller loops to achieve the best pulsing effect.

1. 00:41:823 (1,3) - These look flat.
2. 00:55:886 (5) - Anchor at 00:56:355 - for maximum effect.
3. 01:22:605 (2) - What's with the slider nodes, they don't look too great.
   

those wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:41:823 (1,3) - These look flat. <--- and? f there were simply direct sliders it it would look even more flat :3 I do not think what need to change it
2. 00:55:886 (5) - Anchor at 00:56:355 - for maximum effect. <--- nope, but i correct this place
3. 01:22:605 (2) - What's with the slider nodes, they don't look too great. <--- oops, fixed
   

those wrote:

[General]

1. What's your distance spacing used for Insane? Hard? Normal? I see none. All you have are symmetrical objects, and this isn't very attractive, nor can I mod them.
2. Because of the bpm, each beat is not an integer number of ms, and when you use long loops, events get more and more mistimed, as seen in this picture:
   Fixed
   Consider breaking down your loops into 2, or even 4 smaller loops to achieve the best pulsing effect.

1. Hitsounds would probably sound better if they followed the song like Pie's Easy. For example clap following the clap in the music 01:23:542 (1) - clapping end instead of start etc.
2. Agree with those, spacing changes due to the style are not really great, just compare things like 01:14:401 (6,7,8) - with 01:19:792 (1,2,3) - with 01:21:901 (6,7,8) - where's the consistency? They are all 1/2 sliders and this is supposed to be a Normal.

1. Why no clap at the end in places like 00:30:573 (4) - and 00:31:511 (3) - and 00:32:214 (1) - etc whistle spam doesn't sound great.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Avicii - Levels.jpg",320,240
 L,67605,4
  F,1,0,3750,0.5,0
  S,1,0,3750,1,1.02
 L,82605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,90105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,97605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,105105,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,127605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,135105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,142605,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02

BounceBabe wrote:

Note: I map and mod for quality, not quantity. Keep this in mind!

Mod4Mod Mod:

General

Use this for the SB:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Avicii - Levels.jpg",320,240
 L,67605,4
  F,1,0,3750,0.5,0
  S,1,0,3750,1,1.02
 L,82605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,90105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,97605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,105105,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,127605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,135105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,142605,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02

Fixed
Easy

02:33:386 (1) - New combo needed?


Normal

Distance spacing has 0,6, thats why there is a whole list of distance mistakes in the AiMod... try to fix this

01:07:605 - Spacing changes
01:41:355 (5) - Here should start a new combo Fixed
01:44:636 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:48:386 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:22:136 (1) - Remove combo Fixed


Hard


Its a Hard not Insane, it acts like an Insane diff... imo its too hard

00:32:214 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this? Changed

00:47:448 (1,2,3,4) - Use symmetry for this pattern, it looks better and plays better (as in square) Not changed
00:52:605 (1) - Flip this one to the other side (Ctrl + H) 00:54:480 (2) - and this one too Fixed
01:14:401 (1,2,3) - Look at the distance
01:29:401 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this? Changed
01:39:245 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better to not use this in a Hard difficutlie, fits better in Insane's Not changed
01:42:292 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Not changed
01:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Not changed
02:07:605 - Now the slider speed is up to 1,5 which is a sudden change and can confuse player, i would suggest to keep a constant speed. You're right, but the change is not so big.. From 1,3x to 1.5x
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What about this pattern? Not changed

02:25:651 (1,2,3) - Too close to the preview slider Not changed
02:30:105 - The distance changes suddenly, too sudden
02:37:605 - Mapp the part till here, it looks so interrupted, like the Easy and Normal difficultie I want to end mapping here °3°


Insane

2,7 Slider Velocity o.O for such a slow and grooving song I think its okay °3°

01:08:542 (1) - Remove combo Fixed
01:18:855 (2) - Please dont overlapp it :s Why? °^°
01:31:980 (3,4) - Move them a bit more down Fixed
01:37:019 (4) - From now on there are no sounds for this stream, dont mapp sounds which dont exist There are only 3 circle that in the song doesn't exist sounds, and it's not an error to make parts that doesn't exist o.o
02:00:339 (2) - One Grid left (Nazi) Fixed
02:03:855 (4,5,6) - Make symmetry with ^ Fixed
02:06:198 (4,5) - Change this to one slider ending here 02:06:433 - like you did before, because 02:06:667 - here is no sound Not fixed
02:09:011 - Maybe make a warning for the sudden slider speed change? Not fixed
02:20:730 (5,6,7,8,1) - Delete these and place a spinner? Would fit a lot better since you have a stream which follows Not fixed
02:31:042 (1,2,3) - This pattern is abit hard to play, maybe find another solution? It's insane diff °^°
02:37:605 - And again, mapp till here and start the spinner at the end I want to end mapping here °3°

Overall *thumps up* i've seen badder

Contact me ingame or write me a PM and we will make out which map you mod

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

thank you mod❤
Nice Map~❤Star

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256,308,41823,6,0,B|184:340|128:308|84:264|88:200,1,240,8|8

152,92,43698,2,0,B|224:60|280:92|324:136|320:200,1,240,8|8

Gabe wrote:

Do, not, make, this, map, graveyard.

Anyways, In Insane 02:37:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
I saw in the Wiki that you can't have more than 21 combos. (Something around this) Also, it's prefered to delete it since it's pretty repetitive and the combo is unrankable. The other difficulties ends at 02:37:605 without anything after this spinner. So make it consistent.

Do not kudo this.

Laurier wrote:

Easy
01:29:636 (1,2,3,4) - like this? http://puu.sh/1524N <--- Not think
02:15:573 (3) - make blanket http://puu.sh/15265 <--- fixed

64,128,84468,2,0,B|132:92,1,63.7500024318696,0|0
172,64,84936,2,0,B|248:76,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
192,192,85639,2,0,B|272:192,1,63.7500024318696,0|8

184,88,99468,2,0,B|260:88,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
216,176,100171,2,0,B|304:176,1,63.7500024318696,0|0
248,264,100874,1,8

Buona fortuna!

1. Perchè flo rida come tag? Dovrebbe essere Florida o è proprio così? O:

1. Why 1.00x spacing for an easy diff? :\
2. 00:30:093 (1) - Add finish to emphasize the cymbals in the song
3. 00:41:811 (1,3) - Personally I think that sliders like this break the flow of your map. What about to make this pattern like this? I think it's more flowing and enjoyable to play:
   
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   224,303,41811,6,0,B|154:329|76:281|63:211|97:150,1,240,8|8
   208,184,43218,1,0
   184,68,43686,2,0,B|253:42|331:89|344:159|310:220,1,240,8|8

4. 00:57:280 (2) - CTRL + R flows much better IMO http://puu.sh/1bToN
5. 01:27:280 (3) - ^
6. 02:15:093 (2,3) - This pattern looks odd to me. Listening the music I think this one would fit the song much better: http://puu.sh/1bTti

1. Attualmente la tua mappa è unrankabile. Affinchè una mappa sia rankabile devi mappare almeno l'80% della song. Detto questo devi iniziare a mappare da dove ha iniziato katty
2. Perchè hai mappato l'intera mappa in 0.75x e solo la fine in 1.00x? Nope.. Riduci il DistanceSpacing dal .osu se pensi che lo spacing sia troppo grande con 1.00x per l'intera mappa
3. 00:48:139 (4) - Questo slider confonde parecchio visto che stai usando un timing con 0.50x. Siccome dovrebbe esserci un clap sulla tick bianca rimuovi questo slider e aggiungi solamente un circle con clap su 00:48:374 per mantenere il ritmo 1/1
4. 01:13:218 (3,4,5) - Non mi piace come hai posizionato questi circle :\ Fai qualcosa così che secondo me flowwa molto meglio:
   
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   316,204,73218,2,0,B|252:184|184:204,1,127.500004863739,0|8
   136,236,73921,1,0
   184,92,74389,2,0,B|184:24,1,63.749998100102,0|8

5. 01:14:389 (5,6,7) - Usa lo stesso spacing che hai usato per 01:10:639 (5,6,7)
6. 01:26:343 (1) - Siccome è una normal invece di usare sempre il solito 1/1 ritmo nel ritornello usa uno slider 1/2 con un repeat invece, che segue la musica molto meglio:
   
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   428,260,86343,6,0,B|464:324,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
   448,128,87280,2,0,B|384:128|352:96|320:64,1,127.499996200204,0|8

7. 01:28:686 (4,5,1) - Non mi piace come hai posizionato questi 3 circle ed inoltre con questo spacing sono davvero brutti da vedere. Per seguire meglio il ritmo fai qualcosa come questo invece:
   
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   96,116,88686,2,0,B|92:156|60:172,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
   132,280,89389,6,0,B|144:240|184:216,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
   288,256,90093,2,0,B|416:256,1,127.499996200204,0|8

8. 01:31:968 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Guarda, non mi piacciono proprio il ritmo e i pattern che hai usato qui xD Ti ho fatto un ritmo e un pattern fighissimo, usalo plz (Non ho screenato ogni singola parte perchè mi annoiavo, ma è figherrimo fidati nabbo <3):
   
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   84,104,92436,2,0,B|124:104|148:72,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
   256,24,93139,6,0,B|256:88,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
   370,80,93843,2,0,B|388:104|428:104,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
   320,196,94780,2,0,B|256:224|192:196,1,127.500004863739,0|8
   136,84,95718,1,0
   256,40,96186,2,0,B|256:104,1,63.749998100102,8|0

9. 01:38:061 (3) - Usi 1/2 slider quando non seguono la musica? xD Mh, rimuovi questo slider e usa solo un circle. Oppure uno slider 1/1 che inizia qui e finisce su 01:38:530 rimuovendo (1)
10. 01:39:468 (3,4,5,6,1) - Non usare sempre lo stesso ripetitivo ritmo 1/1. Usa questo pattern invece che segue la musica ed è anche scorrevole e piacevole da giocare:
    
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    184,88,99468,2,0,B|244:112|312:88,1,127.500004863739,0|8
    364,52,100171,1,0
    416,168,100639,2,0,B|408:204|440:236,1,63.7500024318696,0|8
    364,336,101343,2,0,B|300:356|236:336,1,127.500004863739,0|8
    300,224,102280,5,0
    416,168,102749,1,8

11. 01:43:686 (4,5) - Eh, già lo sai.. Usa qualche 1/2 slider (Ti ho sistemato anche i circle successivi) :
    
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    284,84,103686,2,0,B|268:120|224:124,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
    116,84,104389,6,0,B|132:48|176:44,2,63.7500024318696,0|8|0
    56,52,105093,1,4
    56,180,105561,5,8
    120,288,106030,1,0
    248,296,106499,1,8
    312,172,106968,1,0

12. 01:47:436 (1) - Di nuovo çç
    
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    384,84,107436,6,0,B|400:120|456:128,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
    448,248,108139,2,0,B|476:264|480:304,2,63.7500024318696,0|8|0
    400,208,108843,1,0
    324,312,109311,5,8
    256,204,109780,1,0
    324,96,110249,1,8
    204,60,110718,1,0

13. 02:07:593 (1) a 02:32:436 (4) - Segui gli stessi 1/2 ritmi che ti ho detto sopra plz.. Se hai bisogno di una mano chiedi in game.

1. Tutta la song mappata in 1.30x? Che bisogno c'è? Apri il file con il notepad ed imposta DistanceSpacing: 1
2. 00:30:327 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sinceramente non capisco il motivo per il quale hai mappato tutta questa parte solo con un ritmo 1/4.
3. 01:14:389 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing come questo è veramente fastidioso da giocare, credimi :\ Potresti mappare qualcosa tipo così: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452175
4. 01:21:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Meh, che brutto spacing da giocare :\
5. 01:49:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Questo pattern confonde visto che non hai usato piu lo stesso spacing per 01:51:186 (7,8) mettendoli vicini.
6. 02:25:639 (1,2,3,4) - Questi elements dovrebbero essere più lontani da 02:24:702 (4).

1. 00:32:202 (1) - Reverse arrow completamente coperto dall'hitburst 00:30:796 (5,3). Unrankabile\
2. 01:27:280 (1,2,3,4) - Why square.
3. 01:46:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non sai quanto possa essere brutto e rompipalle questo pattern da giocare, lol.

Chewin wrote:

[Pie's Easy]

1. Why 1.00x spacing for an easy diff? :\ <--- bcz for Easy diffs It's ok~
2. 00:30:093 (1) - Add finish to emphasize the cymbals in the song <--- added
3. 00:41:811 (1,3) - Personally I think that sliders like this break the flow of your map. What about to make this pattern like this? I think it's more flowing and enjoyable to play:
   
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   224,303,41811,6,0,B|154:329|76:281|63:211|97:150,1,240,8|8
   208,184,43218,1,0
   184,68,43686,2,0,B|253:42|331:89|344:159|310:220,1,240,8|8

   <--- no, I like my slider forms~
4. 00:57:280 (2) - CTRL + R flows much better IMO http://puu.sh/1bToN <--- fixed
5. 01:27:280 (3) - ^ <--- fixed
6. 02:15:093 (2,3) - This pattern looks odd to me. Listening the music I think this one would fit the song much better: http://puu.sh/1bTti

<---- sounds the same~

NoHitter wrote:

[Pie's Easy]
- Pretty well made Easy. <--- thx ^.^
- 00:38:061 (1) - I suggest not having an overlap with 00:36:186 (3). It doesn't look good IMO. <--- fixed

Konei wrote:

[Hard]

00:26:343 (1) - Add clap to the Spinner, in the music is a clap _Fixed
00:34:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - Decrase the Spacing for this stream, it's too large for a Hard, you should remove them anyway, because streams like this are more Insane stuff Not fixed I think it's ok for a hard
00:36:069 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:51:655 (5,6) - I don't like this touching. Either Stack them or space them out so that they don't touch each other _Fixed
01:10:639 (1) - Whistles and claps on this Slider are much better than finish, sounds too loud _Fixed
01:14:389 (1,2,3) - Finishes sound noisy ._. _Fixed
01:19:780 (1,2,3) - Space them out, the touching is a bit annoying to play _Fixed
01:21:889 (1,2) - Again, noisy finishes _Fixed
01:43:218 (3) - Ctrl + G o.o letting this go into this circle plays sooo strange _Fixed
02:11:343 (4) - You shouldnt make this Slider a strange line, plays oddly _Fixed
02:16:264 (2,3) - Space them out _Fixed
02:18:843 (4) - This direction also plays really strange _Fixed
* This also needs some cleaning up and removing from strange straight Sliders




This is all for now :3

Good luck for this ~

Snepif wrote:

Hello! M4M here~~

Lets see.

[General]

Offset 26348 (+5 on current) sounds much better to me.
Remember to resnap all lines and notes after doing this.

[Easy]

00:30:093 (3) - New combo here, kind of a must.

*try to keep your combos under 5-ish in easy diffs. Also I don't really suggest to use NC on pattern shape changes, but in MUSIC changes, for example, using NCs in big white ticks. But now it's already done though, just remember this for the future.

00:41:811 (1,2) - make this blanket better:

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00:46:030 (2) - Then stack this slider's end to the previous long slider's end.
00:46:968 (3) - This shape is too sharp and doesn't fit with the previous curved stuff, maybe make it more curved and less sharp (and the next slider too)
01:08:530 (1) - This should be more centered, because in easier diffs, every note after a spinner must be close to the center so the player doesn't screw up (beginners use to screw up if you don't do this)
01:22:129 (1) - Clap here, for consistency with the previous notes.
01:40:874 (1) - Move the middle point a bit up so it isn't so sharp (http://puu.sh/1kfaP)
01:42:749 (4) - ^
01:48:374 (1) - http://puu.sh/1kfch?
02:23:530 (1) - Maybe move a bit closer to the center for the same reason

[Normal]

00:30:093 (x) - - Start the map here as Easy diff for concistency... you waste a lot of the mp3 otherwise.
00:45:561 (2) - Make it not overlap (4)
01:09:936 (5) - This looks ugly, make these 2 sliders touch a little less with each other.
02:07:593 (1) - Same as I said on easy, move this more to the centre of the playfield
02:12:280 (2) - NC here and remove NC from the last slider

[Hard]

00:41:577 (1) - These sliders should start on WHITE ticks. That is where the upbeat is. Move all of them 1 tick backwards so they start at white ticks and remove 00:41:343 (6) -
01:17:202 (4) - Why such a weird shape? Make a simple curve instead
01:18:139 (1) - Make it not touch 01:17:671 (5) -
All updated XD

[Insane]

00:30:327 (2) - I don't understeand why did you put so many random triplets here. Better put nice and catchy streams like hard... this doesn't fit Not fixed
01:14:389 (1) - Very unnecessary and unfitting jump. Use jumps only when the music sounds like there should be a jump. Also this is too huge, decrease its distance. Fixed
01:24:936 (6) - BANANA SLIDERRRRRRR make this better: BANANA FIXEEEEED

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02:18:843 (3) - BANANA SLIDERRRRR fix it, make it perfect >:C BANANA FIXEEEEED XD

That is all, but I didn't like this diff that much. It's too linear and sharp idk.. like so symmetryc and straight and squares and asdifjaisdjfasf xDDD but now it's to late though D: try to make it a bit more curve in your next maps.. more... like with more flow. Thanks :3 It's only my "first" map I have done much better works XD

Good luck!! :3

1. Inconsistent TitleUnicode & ArtistUnicode, you must make them same as Title/Artist if your title/artist is English or other alphabetical language.
2. Tags: Capitalize first letter
3. About slider tick rate: 2 in Easy but 1 in Normal is ... weird.. you know, and then also 2 in Hard but 1 in Insane.... i'd like to suggest a better spread like STR1 to E/N and 2 to N/I, or all 1 or all 2 .. etc.
4. About Kiai Time: from 01:37:598 - to 01:52:598 - is much better than 01:22:598 - imo, i'd like to choose only a fountain at 01:22:598 - , and move first kiai to 01:37:598 -

1. 01:10:639 (6) - suggest a NC here to avoid long combo.
2. 01:14:389 (5) - ^
3. 01:18:374 (5) - ^
4. 01:21:889 (6) - ^. Generally, it is better to make the combo length of E/N no more than 6 :>
5. 02:11:343 (6) - Move next NC to here
6. 02:30:561 (2,3,4) - the right angles are looks odd... try to make it more smooth? e.g. add an extra node like this:
   
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1. 00:34:199 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suppose this kinda stream is too hard for a hard diff. Also 00:36:074 (2,3,4,5,6) - etc. Perhaps, kick slider is a good choice to instead?
2. 00:51:660 (5) - clap at end is unnecessary imo
3. 01:19:316 (4) - add a whistle here?
4. 01:34:316 (6) - ^ at head?

1. Stack Leniency: I can understand why you choose such a low value, but it require a leniency if the interval of two note at same position no more than 1/1 beat. So i think you must choose 7.
2. 00:30:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ugly shapes... to be honest it's a bad placement, i think you have lots of better choices. Compare with the other patterns following, it's looked worse...
3. 00:32:676 (2) - here's a hidden reverse arrow due to the scoreburst. Anyway, it could be resolved easily if you choose to remake prev pattern :>
4. 01:36:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can make an increasing volumn here
5. 02:13:691 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
6. 02:16:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a Star shape here

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Inconsistent TitleUnicode & ArtistUnicode, you must make them same as Title/Artist if your title/artist is English or other alphabetical language. Fixed
2. Tags: Capitalize first letter Fixed
3. About slider tick rate: 2 in Easy but 1 in Normal is ... weird.. you know, and then also 2 in Hard but 1 in Insane.... i'd like to suggest a better spread like STR1 to E/N and 2 to N/I, or all 1 or all 2 .. etc. Fixed
4. About Kiai Time: from 01:37:598 - to 01:52:598 - is much better than 01:22:598 - imo, i'd like to choose only a fountain at 01:22:598 - , and move first kiai to 01:37:598 - Fixed

[Revy's Normal]

1. 01:10:639 (6) - suggest a NC here to avoid long combo. Fixed
2. 01:14:389 (5) - ^ Fixed
3. 01:18:374 (5) - ^ Fixed
4. 01:21:889 (6) - ^. Generally, it is better to make the combo length of E/N no more than 6 :> Fixed
5. 02:11:343 (6) - Move next NC to here Fixed
6. 02:30:561 (2,3,4) - the right angles are looks odd... try to make it more smooth? e.g. add an extra node like this: Fixed
   
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[Hard]

1. 00:34:199 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suppose this kinda stream is too hard for a hard diff. Also 00:36:074 (2,3,4,5,6) - etc. Perhaps, kick slider is a good choice to instead? Fixed
2. 00:51:660 (5) - clap at end is unnecessary imo Fixed
3. 01:19:316 (4) - add a whistle here? Not fixed sorry
4. 01:34:316 (6) - ^ at head? Not fixed sorry

[Insane]

1. Stack Leniency: I can understand why you choose such a low value, but it require a leniency if the interval of two note at same position no more than 1/1 beat. So i think you must choose 7. Fixed
2. 00:30:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ugly shapes... to be honest it's a bad placement, i think you have lots of better choices. Compare with the other patterns following, it's looked worse... Fixed
3. 00:32:676 (2) - here's a hidden reverse arrow due to the scoreburst. Anyway, it could be resolved easily if you choose to remake prev pattern :> Fixed
4. 01:36:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can make an increasing volumn here Fixed
5. 02:13:691 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow? Fixed
6. 02:16:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a Star shape here Fixed

That's all.

Generally the quality is okay, so i'd like to give you a chance in spite of those issues. Give me a call when you're ready :>

Kiosk14 wrote:

AMAZING, RANK THIS SONG NAO

But seriously, great job.