1. Hard (4,74 stars, 236 notes)
2. Insane (4,98 stars, 318 notes)
3. Pie's Easy (2,77 stars, 134 notes)
4. Revy's Normal (3,65 stars, 157 notes)

Thanks to

Thanks to Scorpiour for the and to Aleks719 for - the followed me and helped me, really thanks your help was indispensable ♥
Thanks to La Cataline for the mp3 (Even now I made another mp3 lols)
Thanks to Kiyro for the new background image
Thanks to Katty Pie and Revy for guest diffs!
Thanks to Shiro for helping me to upload the beatmap after my change name

RikiH_ wrote:

Yo.

General:

Imposta un Preview Point!

Easy

01:23:487 (2) - Penso che ci siano troppe ripetizioni in questo slider, è troppo complicato per quelli che non sanno giocare.
01:29:347 (1,2,3,1) - Nelle Easy cerca di non ammassare i beats, altrimenti è troppo complicato.
01:45:987 (3,4,5,6,1) - Stessa cosa di prima :°

easy lasciata come prima

Hard

00:52:550 (1,1,1,1) - Forse 4 spinner di seguito sono un po' troppi...
01:38:487 (2) - Troppe ripetizioni D:
02:55:831 (9) - New Combo?

Gli spinner sono per variare un po', come le ripetizioni nello slider se no viene sempre uguale, new combo fixata

Alcuni slider sono bastardi, francamente non saprei dirti se cambiarli o no, magari chiedi a qualcuno più esperto di me :/ I LIKE THIS AUHAUHAUHA

Insane

00:30:284 (2,3,4) (5,6,7) (8,9,10) (11,12,13) - Vanno bene, però ti consiglio di non metterli staccati perchè fanno sclerare D: (Mi sono spiegato malissimo, sorry. Se non capisci dimmelo xD)
02:45:050 (1) - È figo, però non penso che sia rankabile xD Cambialo.
02:46:225 (3) - Stessa cosa
02:58:878 (7) - Stessa cosa

Sì lo so sono difficili i primi circle ma è il loro bello xD, riguardo agli slider vorrei lasciarli sono troppo fighi poi magari se un mat o un bat mi dice di toglierli li tolgo xD

Non penso di essere stato molto d'aiuto, sono nabbo a moddare, devo imparare xD. La mappa è bella, complimenti. Poi ti posto la guest diff.

Mirry wrote:

Insane:

00:30:284 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Io li attaccherei un po'. Visto che l'avete detto in due, fixato
00:45:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stessa cosa qui e via dicendo con quegli streams successivi.i Preferisco lasciarli così
01:28:643 (11,12,13) - Al posto di questi tre finali magari un minislider che ripete 1 volta? Cambiato il finale, guarda se ti piace
01:41:300 (1,2,3) - Magari i due slider a specchio e il beat finale al centro? Fixato
02:07:550 (1) - Avverti che lo slider va più veloce. Ci lavorerò
02:51:378 (1,2,3,4) - Anziché subito passare dal volume100% a 0% fai una discesa con tutti gli slider: 1 75%; 2 50%; 3 25 %; 4 0%. E' già graduato il volume in discesa..
02:54:425 (1,2,3) - Stessa cosa per sopra però con la velocità. Prova a fare la prima veloce la seconda più lenta e la terza ancora più lenta, come la voce della tizia. Non posso mettere altri timing section..
03:09:425 (1,2,3,4) - Come sopra. ^

Grazie <3<3
Questi sono i miei consigli, divertiti <3

PEPOTTI wrote:

[General]
Why is the timing which starts in every diff although the same person is making different? (AND kiaitime)
Timing is indifferent, every diff have 50 offset, the easy is only shorter than the others, fixed kiai


[Insane]
00:45:050 (1) to 00:56:065 (11) - You should use not only circle but also slider. Fixed
01:11:300 (1) - Remove NC? Fixed
01:12:237 (3) - Add NC Fixed
01:15:050 (1) - Remove NC? Fixed
01:15:987 (4) - Add NC Fixed
01:18:800 (1) - Remove NC? Fixed
01:19:737 (2) - Add NC Fixed
Remove?
Add
Rem...
Ad...
・
・
・
02:54:425 (1,2,3,4) - The place cannot respond, when playing first. It's the better timing I can do..

REALLY THANKS PEPOTTI

Xgor wrote:

Pointed out stuff about speed-ups and tick rate and so on in IRC. Fixed

Chewin wrote:

[Easy]
01:21:847 (1) - Siccome questa è la difficoltà più facile, rimuovi questo circle. E' sempre difficile per i beginners colpire un circle 1/2 subito dopo lo spinner Fixato
01:23:487 (2) - Troppi repeat per una easy ed i beginners non sanno quando lasciare. Quindi ti consiglio di fare una cosa del genere: Fixato

02:08:487 (2) - ^ Fixato
02:12:237 (2) - ^ Fixato
02:15:987 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Assolutamente una cosa del genere per una easy no.. Prova a fare qualcos'altro, tipo degli sliders 1/1 Fixato
02:19:737 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ Fixato

[Hard]
AR+1 o +2 credimi, pezzi come questi 01:23:487 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) sono difficili da leggere per una hard con questo AR Fixato
01:08:487 (3) - Non mi piace sto circle sovrapposto con 01:08:018 (2). Intendo che con questo AR basso potrebbe essere difficile da leggere specialmente in dt + hd Beh uno se la impara prima di farla in hd.. Comunque lo lascio quello
02:08:018 (2) - Se usi una SV diversa dovresti avvertire in qualche modo. Forse usando una new combo? Fixato
02:11:768 (2) - ^ Fixato
02:15:518 (2) - ^ Fixato
02:21:143 (5) - Overlapped sliders, illegibile. Fixa muovendolo da un'altra parte Fixato
02:26:768 (2) - Stesso che ho scritto sopra^ Fixato
02:45:050 (1) - Fermati qui come nella easy, non mappare sto pezzo :\ Che secondo me è mappato un po' maluccio. In effetti l'ho fatto un po' male nella hard...

[Insane]
AR +1
01:08:487 (2,8) - Overlapped sliders, illegibili. Fixato
02:08:956 (3) - CTRL R Fixato
02:09:893 (5) - ^ Fixato
02:45:050 (1) - Stessa cosa della Hard Non credo sia fatto male come pezzo.. Se nella insane lo lasciassi?
Boh, i pattern sono buoni e rankabili però i jump sono... "leggermente" esagerati? xD Prendila come una sfida auahuaha

Buona fortuna :3

1. Dovresti pensare a creare un Normal,visto che lo spread ora come ora non è un granchè
2. Nella Hard mancano le tag "Genshin lrsmstr" mentre nell'Insane mancano tutte le tag,aggiungile

1. Prima di iniziare con la mod,ti ricordo che hai usato molti jump e antijump che potrebbero benissimo far confondere un player che inizia a giocare a osu,come nei pattern 00:37:550 (1,2,3,4) - e 00:48:800 (1) - (se me lo chiedi,dopo te li elenco pure se vuoi). Ti consiglio di rifare questi patterns evitando di far ciò
2. 00:59:581 (2,3) - Perchè non li posizioni così?
3. 01:22:081 (1) - Metti un New Combo su questa nota,che manca a causa di un bug creato con l'inserimento dello spinner
4. 01:26:300 (1) - Potresti flipparlo verticalmente per creare un blanket con 01:25:597 (1,2) -
5. 01:40:597 (1,2) - 1 grid a destra per evitare la sovrapposizione con lo slider 01:38:487 (3) - ?
6. 01:51:847 (1) - Perchè non lo curvi così? Oltre a fare un blanket con 01:49:737 (2) - ,eviteresti di nuovo la sovrapposizione con questo slider
7. 02:03:331 - Una nota qui ci starebbe bene,imho

1. 00:39:893 (3) - 1 grid a sinistra per fixare lo spacing
2. 00:40:362 (6) - 1 grid a destra,stesso motivo di sopra
3. 01:26:300 (1,2) - La fine dello slider 2 è nascosta sotto lo slider 1,rendendolo quindi difficile da leggere. Potresti fixare flippando semplicemenete lo slider 1 orizzontalmente
4. 01:38:487 (2) - 4 grid a destra per mantenere la simmetria con 01:37:550 (1) - ?
5. 01:52:550 (2) - Stack sotto lo slider 1?
6. 02:48:331 (5) - Magari muoverla così per far in modo che 02:48:800 (6) - non rimanga nascosto sotto questo slider?

1. Ci sono vari slider unsnappati,fixa ciò ricalcolando la lunghezza degli slider (dal menu Timing scegli "Recalculate Slider Lenghts")
2. 01:34:971 (2) - Allinealo bene con 01:34:737 (1) - ,e fai lo stesso con gli slider seguenti
3. 01:38:018 (6) - Perchè non stacki questa nota sotto 01:37:784 (5) - ?
4. 01:48:565 (3) - Potresti muovere questo 3 grids in su e 01:49:268 (6) - 3 grids in giù per creare un "effetto stacking"
5. 02:03:565 (3) - Fixa lo spacing muovendo questa nota 1 grid sotto
6. 02:09:425 (4,5) - Per me qui un CTRL+R ci starebbe bene,e sicuramente migliorerebbe il flow di questi slider rispetto agli altri
7. 02:30:401 (2) - 2 grids left per allinearlo con 02:30:050 (1) -
8. 02:30:753 (3) - 2 grids up per allinearlo con 02:30:401 (2) -
9. 02:31:104 (4) - 2 grids a destra per allinearlo con 02:30:753 (3) -
10. 02:58:175 (5,6) - Posizionali su x:216 y:304 per mantenere il loro spacing equidistante a 02:57:471 (1,2,3,4) -

-kevincela- wrote:

[General]

1. Dovresti pensare a creare un Normal,visto che lo spread ora come ora non è un granchè Mi servirebbe una guest, non le voglio fare tutte io le diff..
2. Nella Hard mancano le tag "Genshin lrsmstr" mentre nell'Insane mancano tutte le tag,aggiungile

Tag aggiornate


[Easy]

1. Prima di iniziare con la mod,ti ricordo che hai usato molti jump e antijump che potrebbero benissimo far confondere un player che inizia a giocare a osu,come nei pattern 00:37:550 (1,2,3,4) - e 00:48:800 (1) - (se me lo chiedi,dopo te li elenco pure se vuoi). Ti consiglio di rifare questi patterns evitando di far ciò
2. 00:59:581 (2,3) - Perchè non li posizioni così?
3. 01:22:081 (1) - Metti un New Combo su questa nota,che manca a causa di un bug creato con l'inserimento dello spinner
4. 01:26:300 (1) - Potresti flipparlo verticalmente per creare un blanket con 01:25:597 (1,2) -
5. 01:40:597 (1,2) - 1 grid a destra per evitare la sovrapposizione con lo slider 01:38:487 (3) - ?
6. 01:51:847 (1) - Perchè non lo curvi così? Oltre a fare un blanket con 01:49:737 (2) - ,eviteresti di nuovo la sovrapposizione con questo slider
7. 02:03:331 - Una nota qui ci starebbe bene,imho

All fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:39:893 (3) - 1 grid a sinistra per fixare lo spacing
2. 00:40:362 (6) - 1 grid a destra,stesso motivo di sopra
3. 01:26:300 (1,2) - La fine dello slider 2 è nascosta sotto lo slider 1,rendendolo quindi difficile da leggere. Potresti fixare flippando semplicemenete lo slider 1 orizzontalmente
4. 01:38:487 (2) - 4 grid a destra per mantenere la simmetria con 01:37:550 (1) - ?
5. 01:52:550 (2) - Stack sotto lo slider 1?
6. 02:48:331 (5) - Magari muoverla così per far in modo che 02:48:800 (6) - non rimanga nascosto sotto questo slider?

Fixed

[Insane]

1. Ci sono vari slider unsnappati,fixa ciò ricalcolando la lunghezza degli slider (dal menu Timing scegli "Recalculate Slider Lenghts") Li avevo già aggiustati, ci sono solo due slider che non sono snappati e si tratta degli slider 02:55:128 (3) - 03:10:128 (3), comunque ho ricalcolato la lunghezza degli slider
2. 01:34:971 (2) - Allinealo bene con 01:34:737 (1) - ,e fai lo stesso con gli slider seguenti
3. 01:38:018 (6) - Perchè non stacki questa nota sotto 01:37:784 (5) - ?
4. 01:48:565 (3) - Potresti muovere questo 3 grids in su e 01:49:268 (6) - 3 grids in giù per creare un "effetto stacking"
5. 02:03:565 (3) - Fixa lo spacing muovendo questa nota 1 grid sotto
6. 02:09:425 (4,5) - Per me qui un CTRL+R ci starebbe bene,e sicuramente migliorerebbe il flow di questi slider rispetto agli altri
7. 02:30:401 (2) - 2 grids left per allinearlo con 02:30:050 (1) -
8. 02:30:753 (3) - 2 grids up per allinearlo con 02:30:401 (2) -
9. 02:31:104 (4) - 2 grids a destra per allinearlo con 02:30:753 (3) -
10. 02:58:175 (5,6) - Posizionali su x:216 y:304 per mantenere il loro spacing equidistante a 02:57:471 (1,2,3,4) -

All fixed

Grazie mille

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello! c: M4M Request from my Queue ^^

Easy

01:30:050 (1) - Slider to 01:30:284 & repeat Fixed

SPOILER

02:03:097 (1) - Soft Sound Slider Fixed

SPOILER

02:06:847 (1) - ^ Was deleted

SPOILER

02:07:550 (2) - Remove NC Fixed yet

Hard

01:38:487 (2) - 1 Repeat All fixed
01:39:190 (3) - Circle @ x:176 y:248
01:39:425 (4) - Circle @ x:336 y:184
01:39:659 (5) - Circle @ x:176 y:184
01:39:893 (6) - Circle @ x:336 y:120
01:40:128 (7) - Circle @ x:176 y:120

SPOILER

01:40:596 (1) - Circle @ x:256 y:224
01:40:831 (2) - Circle @ x:256 y:304
01:41:065 (3) - Circle @ x:256 y:144 (on the slider) Fixed, but I like the circle 3 in the position of the 1

SPOILER

Insane

00:31:573 - Add Circle
00:31:807 - Remove Circle
00:31:924 (13) - Move it to Center

SPOILER

00:33:096 (3) - Repeat 2 times
00:33:565 (4) - Slider

SPOILER

I don't really like it... And it would be overmapped I think xD

The map is perfect and with those changes it looks better at least for me ^^ I hope you like it c:
Favoutire part - 02:22:550 - XDD

I'm glad you like it

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

Mod4mod here!

General

1. Storyboard elements' size shouldn't be over 800*600 pixels Check the rule from wiki
2. Great, I made a slidertick sound and used twice in the same day. Anyway! Now replace this hitsound to your own tick.wav. Added a base sound (hit-normal) for it. http://puu.sh/CLGF
3. Add sliderborder to other two (Easy, Normal) diffs, too.

Easy

1. So much slider jumps

00:57:287 - Consider using a gradual progressive volume from here, 48~50%
00:58:225 - 52~55%
00:59:162 - ~60% Fixed

00:30:100 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:33:850 (1,2,3,4) - Unify hitsounds of these notes, first half are using whistles on 3rd beats. And second half are 4th beats. :\ I recommand to follow 3rd beats' one.
00:39:475 (3,4) - I wonder is it an acceptable jump for easiest diff. Plus it's stacked under previous slider.
01:27:756 (3) - Clap instead.
01:28:225 (4) - Whistle instead.
01:38:537 (3,4) - This kind of stackings aren't approved for easiest difficulty. 3 reverse+a circle stacked under slider's end :\ Try a better pattern instead!
01:42:287 (3,4) - ^
01:47:443 (6,1) - Wha..tricky spacing. It would be fine for Normal/Hard difficulties though. But please keep Easy sight-reading.
01:49:787 (2,3) - Again with this stacking, hehe
02:17:443 - Clap instead? Much things fixed
02:21:896 (1) - Which track's this slider following O.O? Sounds like a random 1/6 slider here. I don't really agree with this. That was an error, lol, fixed

Hard
00:57:287 - Same as Easy
02:07:550 - Stack this section to downbeat.

00:30:100 - to 00:45:100 - Please keep claps on 2nd/4th beats only. It's nonsense to spam claps to each white ticks.
00:58:225 (1) - Finish
01:09:943 (7) - Copy 01:09:240 (5) - and paste it on, press Ctrl+>+>. Fix it's position. And you get a balanced pattern!

01:24:475 (8,9) - Spacing error, move 2 grid right
01:24:943 (10,11) - Spacing error, 2 grid left
01:42:756 (3) - Again, copy 01:42:287 (2) - and paste it on. Use Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R this time.
01:43:225 (4,5) - ^ (Fix the hitsounds too)
01:48:850 (1) - Shape is weird D: Try this?


02:33:850 (1) - Finish.

All fixed

Insane

1. Pretty nice!

00:46:037 - Consider using a gradual progressive volume from here, 40%
00:46:975 - 45%
00:50:725 - 50%
00:57:287 - Same as Easy
01:52:650 - Again, snap this to downbeat.

00:56:350 (1) - Finish.
02:03:381 (2) - Delete finish.
02:33:850 (1) - Finish instead.
All fixed

Good luck

CDFA wrote:

THE ORIGINAL MIX

THIS AIN'T NO REMIX

Skin:
Maybe make a reversearrow.jpg?

Insane:
00:54:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Move this pattern up a little bit so (2) stacks with (7)
01:51:896 (1) - I don't like this random speed-up ;~;
02:10:646 - WOAH HOLD IT THERE PARTNER THIS IS A PRETTY WEIRD SPEED-UP

Hard:
00:52:600 (1,1,1,1) - Having a bunch of spinners in a row generally isn't a good idea
02:08:068 (1) - Plays weirdly o-o
02:11:818 (1) - ^
02:15:568 (1) - ^
02:23:068 (1) - ^
02:26:818 (1) - ^

Easy:
A lot of issues here are just spacing. In easies, the spacing should generally always stay consistent, so newer players can actually play it.
00:37:600 - Sliderspeed changes for an easy are 95% of time a big no no
01:30:803 - Random break o-o
01:46:506 (4,5,6) - Anti-Jumps are also a big no no

So much things fixed, now I think the easy it's ok.. Really thanks!

desu

pimpG wrote:

hi there

general

Multiple .osb Files There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).

offset 86


easy

00:37:600 (1,2,3,4) - using 0,6x and 1,1x spacing here
00:48:381 (2,1) - spacing
00:52:600 (1,2,1) - using 1,8x here
00:56:350 (1,2,3) - 1,5x
01:09:943 (5,6,1,2) - unstack, btw this pattern is a bit hard for an easy diff (imo)
01:11:350 - remove nc ?
01:13:693 (6,7,1,2) - unstack, btw this pattern is a bit hard for an easy diff (imo)
01:22:600 - remove nc?
01:24:475 (3,4,1,2) - too hard for an easy?
01:28:693 (5,6) - unstack
01:32:443 (5,6,1,2) - unstack, btw this pattern is a bit hard for an easy diff (imo)
01:33:850 - remove nc
01:37:600 - spacing

there are more of this errors but you can find by yourself

i did not found nothing in the other diffs

thats all

Much things fixed, now I think the easy it's okay...

• Inconsistency on Kiai times: http://puu.sh/EBoz
  Seems like you need a Normal diff, there's no point between Easy and Hard Diff.
  Epilepsy Alert on All Diffs, Please.

• 00:40:881 (4,1) I don't like inconsistent spacing on Easy diffs http://puu.sh/EBpP
  00:59:631 (2,3) Maybe this? http://puu.sh/EBrD Looks better.
  02:10:646 (1,2,3,4) Too much better http://puu.sh/EBtR

• 00:44:865 (2) Remove Tail Slider Clap, please.
  00:52:131 (6) Remove Tail Slider Clap and add it on the Slider's Start.
  01:00:100 (3) NC.

• 02:04:878 (1,2,3,4) Since you have too many jupms, one more doesn't hurt this map http://puu.sh/EBAK
  Too much Copy Paste in this diff

iMercurial wrote:

As request.

General

• Inconsistency on Kiai times: http://puu.sh/EBoz
  Seems like you need a Normal diff, there's no point between Easy and Hard Diff.
  Epilepsy Alert on All Diffs, Please.

Easy

• 00:40:881 (4,1) I don't like inconsistent spacing on Easy diffs http://puu.sh/EBpP
  00:59:631 (2,3) Maybe this? http://puu.sh/EBrD Looks better.
  02:10:646 (1,2,3,4) Too much better http://puu.sh/EBtR

Hard

• 00:44:865 (2) Remove Tail Slider Clap, please.
  00:52:131 (6) Remove Tail Slider Clap and add it on the Slider's Start.
  01:00:100 (3) NC.

Insane

• 02:04:878 (1,2,3,4) Since you have too many jupms, one more doesn't hurt this map http://puu.sh/EBAK
  Too much Copy Paste in this diff

Good luck.

All fixed, thanks!

1. 00:33:850 (5) - NC? You have switched to another pattern here, and going for eight objects in a combo for an Easy diff sounds... somewhat ridiculous.
2. 01:18:850 (1) - You should actually use circles and sliders instead of using a spinner just for the sake of using a spinner here.
3. 02:15:100 (2,3,4) - Hmm... I guess you can remove the Whistle from (2) and apply it to (3,4). Sounds better, IMO.
4. 02:18:850 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 02:21:428 (3) - Whistle?

1. 00:41:584 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is perfectly fine, IMO, but (oh wait didn't I say perfect) it's boring to have the same pattern throughout these combos. Making a windmill's fan or some other stuff would do, but again, I think this pattern is pretty boring.
2. 02:08:537 (3) - NC? I'm sure enough the song 'demands' it... kind of.

1. Too much copy-paste and symmetrical patterns I suppose? Going symmetry is fine to make your beatmap look tidy, but too much of them... I don't know what to say.
2. 01:08:537 (2) - NC? Reason is the same as 02:08:537 (3) on Hard.
3. 01:31:037 (3) - ^
4. 01:35:021 (5) - ^
5. 02:01:037 (4) - ^
6. 02:08:537 (2) - ^
7. 02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...Not sure what are you mapping to here. Maybe you should remap this part and follow the louder parts of the song.

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
F,0,...

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Let's get to mod this.

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

Before I start, I think you'll need a Normal diff, but it's up to you; it should be rankable with these diffs, anyway.

>Easy

1. 00:33:850 (5) - NC? You have switched to another pattern here, and going for eight objects in a combo for an Easy diff sounds... somewhat ridiculous. Fixed
2. 01:18:850 (1) - You should actually use circles and sliders instead of using a spinner just for the sake of using a spinner here. Fixed
3. 02:15:100 (2,3,4) - Hmm... I guess you can remove the Whistle from (2) and apply it to (3,4). Sounds better, IMO. I think it's better like now
4. 02:18:850 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 02:21:428 (3) - Whistle? Fixed

>Hard

1. 00:41:584 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is perfectly fine, IMO, but (oh wait didn't I say perfect) it's boring to have the same pattern throughout these combos. Making a windmill's fan or some other stuff would do, but again, I think this pattern is pretty boring. Fixed, do you like it now?
2. 02:08:537 (3) - NC? I'm sure enough the song 'demands' it... kind of. Fixed

>Insane

1. Too much copy-paste and symmetrical patterns I suppose? Going symmetry is fine to make your beatmap look tidy, but too much of them... I don't know what to say.
2. 01:08:537 (2) - NC? Reason is the same as 02:08:537 (3) on Hard. Fixed
3. 01:31:037 (3) - ^ Fixed
4. 01:35:021 (5) - ^ Fixed
5. 02:01:037 (4) - ^ Fixed
6. 02:08:537 (2) - ^ Fixed
7. 02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...Not sure what are you mapping to here. Maybe you should remap this part and follow the louder parts of the song.

I followed another part, delete them and listen. Sorry but I don't want to delete this :c

I guess just that.

Good luck on the way

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
You can try offset+3 Fixed

[SB]
I think you should use Avicii - Levels.jpg as BG. You can use

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
F,0,...

to fade out BG. This is so because preview image in webpage will be 'Avicii - Levels.jpg' It wouldn't change pulses?

[Easy]
Don't change slider velocity in easy diff.
Also, always keep a main DS in easy.
^ Maybe you need to take time to remap same patterns to follow these, but it is necessary.
00:39:006 (2) - 1 grid down and it will looks much better Fixed

[Hard]
00:44:396 (1,2) - the space between them should be same as 00:43:459 (1,2) Edited yet
02:23:537 (1,2) - stack them? Fixed

[Insane]
00:41:467 (1) - end at 00:44:631 or player can't have enough time to prepare Fixed
02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - the music is in 4x(1/4) groups but there are 3x(1/4) groups here. That's why 02:24:357 empty. Fixed

That's all I can find. GL~

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

hi there
mod time via my queue

[General]
you must made a normal/rename easy~
resnap ALL green timing section in ALL diffs (open diff in editor => timing => timing setup panel => click at the second (not first) section => press Shift => click at the last section => write here: 3 => click "move" => click "ОК") sorry if you know about that \:'D/ Damn I forgotted it, thianks!

[Easy]
i don't know, maybe you want to rename diff, but i mod this diff as Easy ofc
01:09:946 (5,6,1,2) - this may confuse beginners, try this => http://puu.sh/FhJo
here's the places like that:
01:13:696 (4,5,1,2)
01:16:040 (1,2,1,2)
01:19:790 (1,2)
01:24:478 (3,4,1,2)
01:47:446 (4,1)
and etc. check the map and remap this.
but, if you rename this on Normal, i suggest you CS, HD +1, OD, AR +2 and this looks clean. Fixed, it'll stay easy

[Hard]
00:43:462 (1,2,3,4) - i personnaly dislike this pattern D: another one

214,134,43462,6,0,B|110:134,1,85,0|8
299,197,43931,2,0,B|395:197,1,85
216,264,44399,2,0,B|131:264,1,85,0|8
301,327,44868,2,0,B|389:327,1,85

Fixed thanks

it's all, i'm so lazy and insane seems clean imo. /me runs

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hi~！ Here's my modding~!

In general
i like your mapping style~ But some shape of the sliders are not good to me, im gonna point it out later.

Insane

SPOILER

OD+1~2 Fixed
00:32:212 (1,3) - you may wanna switch them since 1 is blocking the previous pattern Fixed
00:45:103 (1) - from here the streaming shape is kinda wierd... heres the code i made, hope you like it Too much spaced :c

256,60,45103,5,2
236,124,45220,1,2
240,192,45337,1,0
184,168,45454,1,0
120,192,45571,1,2
184,212,45688,1,2
240,192,45806,1,2
236,252,45923,1,0
256,316,46040,1,2
276,252,46157,1,2
276,192,46274,1,2
332,212,46392,5,0
396,192,46509,1,2
332,168,46626,1,0
276,192,46744,1,2
276,124,46860,1,0
256,60,46978,5,2
192,84,47095,1,2
144,128,47212,1,0
120,192,47329,1,2
148,252,47446,1,2
196,300,47563,1,0
256,320,47681,1,2
320,300,47798,1,2
368,252,47915,5,0
396,192,48032,1,2
364,132,48149,1,0
320,80,48267,1,2
256,64,48384,1,0
256,128,48501,1,2
256,188,48618,1,2

01:22:603 (4) - move to the right by 1 grid Fixed
02:31:860 (8) - better at the center Fixed

Hard

SPOILER

OD+1 Fixed

Easy

SPOILER

01:22:134 (1) - better to use DS to place the note
others are fine to me Fixed

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Hard

SPOILER

Change the offset to 26353. It's a good idea to make it the first beat, but it's not required. Fixed

01:14:399 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps from 1.0x spacing to 1.6x spacing.
01:16:509 (2) - Random 1.3x spacing.
01:18:853 (2,3) - 1.2x spacing.
01:27:290 (1,2,3,4) - Might be unrankable since you can't see the slider beginnings.
02:30:571 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You jump from mapping the melody to the synth riff. It's hard to understand the jump without a break or something in between.[/color]

Insane

SPOILER

Change the offset to 26353. It's a good idea to make it the first beat, but it's not required. Fixed

It's the same as [hard]. You need to differentiate your maps.

gamerrox wrote:

Hey, I really liked your map. Thanks Had fun testing it out! Not too good at the whole modding thing, so forgive me if some of my advice isn't entirely appropriate.

Hard:
01:36:899 (1,2,3) Random 0.5x spacing in the middle of the chorus when everything else is 1.0x. A bit adjusted, now is x0.7 :/

Insane:
00:35:962 (4,1) Confusing jump between the combos. Spacing seems way too wide. Fixed

- t e n n y a - wrote:

nyahai from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestions

[General]
fine o v o b

[Easy]
maybe 1.0 distance?
- 00:55:884 until 01:00:103 : distance too far its hard for an easy player A bit fixed
- 01:12:290 : remove note, its more fit to the song c: Fixed
- 01:18:149 : maybe change it to slider Fixed
- 01:22:603 : remove nc Fixed
- 01:23:540 : add nc Fixed
- for 1/2 beat, I suggest you use slider, like 01:18:149 Fixed
- 02:03:853 : move the spinner to 02:04:790 and end at 02:06:431 Fixed

[Hard]
- I don't suggest hard diff using 1.70 sv otl Now I can't change D:
- 01:45:103 : distance, i meant its too far o v o" Fixed
- 02:22:603 : ^ I think it's ok D:
- 02:27:290 : remove clap? Fixed
- 02:30:103 : remove nc Fixed
- 02:30:571 : add nc Fixed

[Insane]
- Slider tick rate 1 ? Fixed
- 01:11:704 : add note? Not fixed
- 01:31:978 : 3 & 4 slider tail didn't meet perfectly Fixed
- increasing slider velocity multiplier orz mind to change it? Q v Q What? lool

Thats all I can found, rank gl ! cx

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Storyboarding

Points of lines SB don't correspond points of time line. You should fixed this. Desing ---> +13 ms +3ms, thanks xD

Insane

AR -1

00:31:274 - NC Fixed
01:19:790(1,2,3,4) - make this sliders more symmetric http://puu.sh/FyJc Fixed
01:20:259(2) - better replace on short double slider. it's really sound better Fixed
01:22:603(4) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/FyVs Fixed
01:26:353(2,3) - stack better Fixed

Hard

01:33:149 - this slider not sound here/ replace on slider 1\2 and note Fixed
01:43:696(4) - 1 grid up and right Fixed
02:07:603(1,2,3,4) - make this sliders more symmetric http://puu.sh/Fz1r Fixed
02:21:899(1) - http://puu.sh/Fz34 Fixed

Easy

• Better rename in Normal, bcz it is desirable intermediate diffs should to be.
• Slider velocity is very big for this dif >.< you should put 1.0 -1.4 and remap siders
• Slider Tick Rate put 1

00:30:103(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it's very big jups for easy >.< correct spacing between this notes
01:24:478(2) - replace on slider 1/1 it's can confused beginners
01:28:696(4,5) - replace on slider
01:32:446(4,5) - ^
etc.
this diff very difficult for beginners, plz make it easier

Good luck~~

Regou wrote:

Hi! From CLANNED modding queue(Yes, I am too slow D:, sorry for being late)

[Insane]
A bit overmapped. Mmm,,,maybe just for me.
AR-1
01:14:399 (1) - Remove finish?
01:31:978 (3,4,1) - I am not really satisfied with this placement. D:
01:51:899 (1) - Move this far far away from 01:51:196 (4) please D:

[Hard]
00:50:962 (2,4) - Remove clap?
00:51:196 (3) - Then add one here
01:47:446 (4) - Ctrl+R?
02:24:712 (4) - Ugly overlap D: at least few grids down please

[Normal]
Please use grid size 3 or 4, using size 1 just make the spacing sucks
00:37:600 (1,2) - What the- huge jumps in normal diff?
00:39:475 (3,4) - ^ just no.
00:45:100 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:46:037 (3,4,5) - You know, jumps D:
01:12:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing
01:31:037 (1) - Remove NC
...Bad spacing. Considering remap some part...sorry.

[Easy]
01:09:478 (2,3) - Don't use 1/2 beat note in easy diff? D:
01:12:759 (4,5) - ^
Not a big problem here, just need to remove those 1/2 note

Anyway, good luck!

Regou wrote:

[Easy]
01:09:478 (2,3) - Don't use 1/2 beat note in easy diff? D:
01:12:759 (4,5) - ^
Not a big problem here, just need to remove those 1/2 note

BakaHuang wrote:

Hi sorry for my laziness and my poor English :3

Pie's Easy

open aiMod , there are 3 spacing problems , plz fix them

because [Easy] is the easiest diff in this mapset , so you'd better don't have some spaicng problems

Revy's Normal

you can add some nor-whis like [Hard] ?

Insane

I think ar8 is fine?

00:30:806(5,7)-I think change the place of notes is fine , at the beginning of song don't be difficult , (4,5) has a bit far
00:31:743(4,6)-^
00:45:103(1)-~00:46:743(7)-you can make this pattern like this ? http://puu.sh/GkCq
00:46:978(1)-~00:48:618(7)-^

I love this song and mapset <3

Leorda wrote:

[Pie's Easy]
* AR +1? <--- not think

00:55:884 (5) - New combo? <--- no. It's inot necessary here
01:08:540 (1) - The sliderpath is overlapped by spinner-osu, so beginners are hard to see this slider <--- you kidding me? there is enough distance to a slider. it is easily read.
01:38:540 (1) - ^, also new combo, since this note after spinner. You seems forgot them <-- NC added
02:27:290 (4) - Add clap at tail slider <--- added

Thx for mod

Gabe wrote:

don't kudo this right now, I just lost my mod because my computer crashed. But don't worry, I will finish it soon!

Sorry for the long delay.
I love this song♥♥

General
There's an incconsistency in timing and Kiai times.
Every difficulties are okay, but not Revy's one. The red timing start at 00:00:100 which it supposed to start at 00:26:353, and for the Kiai Time, add +3 on every timings for Revy.
For the Storyboard, you should add a loop/pulse at 01:18:853

Easy

New combo
01:38:540 - Add a new combo here to prevent a spinner bug.

Circle emplacement
01:18:853 - This one is completly nazi. Move the second point one grid to the right and the last one, one grid up. So it will make the slider centered.
01:32:446 (5) - For this slider, you should add a reverse arrow and make like this:

Screenshot+Code

280,112,92446,6,0,B|292:52,2,60,8|0|0

Hitsounds
02:27:759 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency.

Normal

Circle emplacement
00:37:600 (1) - This slider looks ugly. I am suggesting you to curve it more. Like this:

Screenshot+Code

120,128,37600,2,0,B|64:160|64:240|120:272,1,170

Copy/Paste it for the next slider, if you want to make it consistent.

There's lots of problem with the spacing... To make it rankable, try to use AiMod or even, use the distance snap.

Hitsounds
Add a clap on every 2/4 not at 1/3, it will sound pretty bad. If you ever need help with hitsounds, try to analyse Pie's Easy which the hitsounds are really good.

^Try to fix this, and call me back for a remod.^

Hard
Hitsounds
00:53:071 - Add a clap here to first: keep the consistency, second; even if the song has a kindof clap, you should add a clap too. Do the same for 00:54:946, 00:56:821, 00:58:696.

Insane

Circle emplacement
00:46:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm suggesting you to start the first circle somewhere else and make another stream.

Hitsounds
Don't overuse the Whistle hitsounds. You should add more Clap at 2/4. Actually, delete 50% of whistle. It like... so annoying to only hear the whistle hitsound. Also, as I said for Revy, try to use the clap hitsound as Katty Pie did or you did for Hard. (Hope you can understand) Call me back to remod Insane.

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[Skinning]
* default-1 seems for off-center for me.... Fixed


[Revy's Normal]
* Make sure that there is no jump pattern in normal diff (e.g. 00:56:818 (1,2,3,4))
* Set the red timing section to 00:26:353 for consistency on each diff

00:56:818 (1) - New combo, since this note after spinner. You seems forgot them
01:12:287 (1,2,3,4) - It is just me or this spacing is kinda random for me....
Fixing

[Insane]
00:48:853 (1) - The repeating slider is overlapped by hitbursts. So it's hidden for pro players Fixed


Good luck

ChrisITA wrote:

A volte sono fiero di essere italiano La easy è fatta benissimo, ora provo le altre (almeno fino alla hard) e vi dico

Edit: Normal ben fatta
Hard stupenda pure, mi fermo qui dato che ho fatto 85.25%, quindi alla insane avrei fatto 0,50% xD Spero diventi ranked