Leorda wrote:

[Pie's Easy]
* AR +1? <--- not think

00:55:884 (5) - New combo? <--- no. It's inot necessary here
01:08:540 (1) - The sliderpath is overlapped by spinner-osu, so beginners are hard to see this slider <--- you kidding me? there is enough distance to a slider. it is easily read.
01:38:540 (1) - ^, also new combo, since this note after spinner. You seems forgot them <-- NC added
02:27:290 (4) - Add clap at tail slider <--- added

Thx for mod

Gabe wrote:

don't kudo this right now, I just lost my mod because my computer crashed. But don't worry, I will finish it soon!

Sorry for the long delay.
I love this song♥♥

General
There's an incconsistency in timing and Kiai times.
Every difficulties are okay, but not Revy's one. The red timing start at 00:00:100 which it supposed to start at 00:26:353, and for the Kiai Time, add +3 on every timings for Revy.
For the Storyboard, you should add a loop/pulse at 01:18:853

Easy

New combo
01:38:540 - Add a new combo here to prevent a spinner bug.

Circle emplacement
01:18:853 - This one is completly nazi. Move the second point one grid to the right and the last one, one grid up. So it will make the slider centered.
01:32:446 (5) - For this slider, you should add a reverse arrow and make like this:

Screenshot+Code

280,112,92446,6,0,B|292:52,2,60,8|0|0

Hitsounds
02:27:759 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency.

Normal

Circle emplacement
00:37:600 (1) - This slider looks ugly. I am suggesting you to curve it more. Like this:

Screenshot+Code

120,128,37600,2,0,B|64:160|64:240|120:272,1,170

Copy/Paste it for the next slider, if you want to make it consistent.

There's lots of problem with the spacing... To make it rankable, try to use AiMod or even, use the distance snap.

Hitsounds
Add a clap on every 2/4 not at 1/3, it will sound pretty bad. If you ever need help with hitsounds, try to analyse Pie's Easy which the hitsounds are really good.

^Try to fix this, and call me back for a remod.^

Hard
Hitsounds
00:53:071 - Add a clap here to first: keep the consistency, second; even if the song has a kindof clap, you should add a clap too. Do the same for 00:54:946, 00:56:821, 00:58:696.

Insane

Circle emplacement
00:46:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm suggesting you to start the first circle somewhere else and make another stream.

Hitsounds
Don't overuse the Whistle hitsounds. You should add more Clap at 2/4. Actually, delete 50% of whistle. It like... so annoying to only hear the whistle hitsound. Also, as I said for Revy, try to use the clap hitsound as Katty Pie did or you did for Hard. (Hope you can understand) Call me back to remod Insane.

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[Skinning]
* default-1 seems for off-center for me.... Fixed


[Revy's Normal]
* Make sure that there is no jump pattern in normal diff (e.g. 00:56:818 (1,2,3,4))
* Set the red timing section to 00:26:353 for consistency on each diff

00:56:818 (1) - New combo, since this note after spinner. You seems forgot them
01:12:287 (1,2,3,4) - It is just me or this spacing is kinda random for me....
Fixing

[Insane]
00:48:853 (1) - The repeating slider is overlapped by hitbursts. So it's hidden for pro players Fixed


Good luck

ChrisITA wrote:

A volte sono fiero di essere italiano La easy è fatta benissimo, ora provo le altre (almeno fino alla hard) e vi dico

Edit: Normal ben fatta
Hard stupenda pure, mi fermo qui dato che ho fatto 85.25%, quindi alla insane avrei fatto 0,50% xD Spero diventi ranked

Jebok wrote:

Hi there, mod as requested...

[Pie's Easy]
02:04:790 (4) - Make y same as (2) so y:164

[Revy's Normal]
00:39:009 (2) - Clap here and then do claps every 4 white bars so the next one will be at 00:40:884, then at 00:42:759, 00:44:634 and so on...
01:10:649 (5,6,7) - Distance Snap x1.00
01:13:931 (6,7,8) - ^
01:18:384 (5,6,7) - ^
Check AiMod for spacing fixes. If you e.g. have x1.50 whole combo thats' OK but not thing like x1.68, x2.11 and the x1.83 or something. And there is a point alike that soon after 01:18:384.

[Hard]
02:27:524 (2,3) - Do two same shapes and then (4) different.

[Insane]
00:30:571 (4) - Clap instead of whistle
00:31:509 (3) - ^
00:32:446 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:33:384 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:34:087 (1,2,3) - ^ at the end of them sliders.
00:35:962 (1,2,3) - ^ at the end of them sliders.
00:38:071 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:39:009 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:39:946 (1) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:40:649 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:45:103 (1) - Clap instead of whistle
00:46:040 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:46:978 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:47:915 (7) - New combo + ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:48:853 (1) - ^ at the beginning of this slider.
00:49:790 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:50:728 (1) - ^ beginning.
00:51:665 (3) - ^ end.
00:53:071 (3) - Clap
00:54:946 (3) - Clap
02:01:978 (3) - y:80 like (1)
02:02:446 (4) - y:264 like (2)
02:05:728 (3) - y:104 like (1)
02:06:196 (4) - y:264 like (2)
02:09:009 (2) - When selection reversed, y should be the same as for (1).

• • Apri tutti i file .osu e cambia... (6 colori per le combo sono troppi imo, usa questi 3 che si abbinano meglio con lo sfondo)
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 142,169,133
  Combo2 : 255,218,91
  Combo3 : 159,97,173
  SliderBorder : 255,255,255

  • 01:07:603/01:22:603 (kiai) - Rimuovi questa sezione Kiai (o al limite falla partire a 01:22:603 e falla finire a 01:37:485. Se fai così, aggiungi un'altra sezione Kiai che inizia a 02:22:603 e che finisce a 02:30:103)

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1

• • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 4
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1
  • Why didn't you start mapping at 00:30:103 like the other did? You should start mapping there.
  • 02:33:853 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:33:384

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  • 01:22:603 (4,5) - Rendi lo spacing costante, qua è leggermente diminuito rispetto a quello dei cerchi precedenti.

• • HP Drain Rate: 8

Jordan wrote:

Non ti vergogni a mappare roba plagiata?

>:|

1. 00:46:978 (4) - NC?
2. 01:33:384 (6) - NC here and remove the NC on next note
3. 02:21:431 - i feel like you should add a note here, or at least make 4 a slider and extend it to this point
4. 02:22:134 - add note?

1. 01:45:103 (2) - idk if this slider should be so curvy, when all other sliders around it are straight or less curvy

1. 01:10:649 (1,2,3) - putting finishes in each of these notes doesn't sound fitting , er..in my opinion xD
2. 01:37:603 (1,2,3) - move these out a little to the left to continue the stream? might flow better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:48:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern here seems plain compared to the other combos, try making some cool shape pattern with them? o.o
4. 02:01:040 (1) - whistle needs to be at the beginning

sry thats all i found for now xd, good luck

1. What's your distance spacing used for Insane? Hard? Normal? I see none. All you have are symmetrical objects, and this isn't very attractive, nor can I mod them.
2. Because of the bpm, each beat is not an integer number of ms, and when you use long loops, events get more and more mistimed, as seen in this picture:
   
   Consider breaking down your loops into 2, or even 4 smaller loops to achieve the best pulsing effect.

1. 00:41:823 (1,3) - These look flat.
2. 00:55:886 (5) - Anchor at 00:56:355 - for maximum effect.
3. 01:22:605 (2) - What's with the slider nodes, they don't look too great.
   

those wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:41:823 (1,3) - These look flat. <--- and? f there were simply direct sliders it it would look even more flat :3 I do not think what need to change it
2. 00:55:886 (5) - Anchor at 00:56:355 - for maximum effect. <--- nope, but i correct this place
3. 01:22:605 (2) - What's with the slider nodes, they don't look too great. <--- oops, fixed
   

those wrote:

[General]

1. What's your distance spacing used for Insane? Hard? Normal? I see none. All you have are symmetrical objects, and this isn't very attractive, nor can I mod them.
2. Because of the bpm, each beat is not an integer number of ms, and when you use long loops, events get more and more mistimed, as seen in this picture:
   Fixed
   Consider breaking down your loops into 2, or even 4 smaller loops to achieve the best pulsing effect.

1. Hitsounds would probably sound better if they followed the song like Pie's Easy. For example clap following the clap in the music 01:23:542 (1) - clapping end instead of start etc.
2. Agree with those, spacing changes due to the style are not really great, just compare things like 01:14:401 (6,7,8) - with 01:19:792 (1,2,3) - with 01:21:901 (6,7,8) - where's the consistency? They are all 1/2 sliders and this is supposed to be a Normal.

1. Why no clap at the end in places like 00:30:573 (4) - and 00:31:511 (3) - and 00:32:214 (1) - etc whistle spam doesn't sound great.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Avicii - Levels.jpg",320,240
 L,67605,4
  F,1,0,3750,0.5,0
  S,1,0,3750,1,1.02
 L,82605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,90105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,97605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,105105,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,127605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,135105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,142605,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02

BounceBabe wrote:

Note: I map and mod for quality, not quantity. Keep this in mind!

Mod4Mod Mod:

General

Use this for the SB:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Avicii - Levels.jpg",320,240
 L,67605,4
  F,1,0,3750,0.5,0
  S,1,0,3750,1,1.02
 L,82605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,90105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,97605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,105105,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,127605,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,135105,16
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02
 L,142605,17
  F,0,0,469,0.5,0
  S,1,0,469,1,1.02

Fixed
Easy

02:33:386 (1) - New combo needed?


Normal

Distance spacing has 0,6, thats why there is a whole list of distance mistakes in the AiMod... try to fix this

01:07:605 - Spacing changes
01:41:355 (5) - Here should start a new combo Fixed
01:44:636 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:48:386 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:22:136 (1) - Remove combo Fixed


Hard


Its a Hard not Insane, it acts like an Insane diff... imo its too hard

00:32:214 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this? Changed

00:47:448 (1,2,3,4) - Use symmetry for this pattern, it looks better and plays better (as in square) Not changed
00:52:605 (1) - Flip this one to the other side (Ctrl + H) 00:54:480 (2) - and this one too Fixed
01:14:401 (1,2,3) - Look at the distance
01:29:401 (1) - You wanted this combo row like this? Changed
01:39:245 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better to not use this in a Hard difficutlie, fits better in Insane's Not changed
01:42:292 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Not changed
01:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Not changed
02:07:605 - Now the slider speed is up to 1,5 which is a sudden change and can confuse player, i would suggest to keep a constant speed. You're right, but the change is not so big.. From 1,3x to 1.5x
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What about this pattern? Not changed

02:25:651 (1,2,3) - Too close to the preview slider Not changed
02:30:105 - The distance changes suddenly, too sudden
02:37:605 - Mapp the part till here, it looks so interrupted, like the Easy and Normal difficultie I want to end mapping here °3°


Insane

2,7 Slider Velocity o.O for such a slow and grooving song I think its okay °3°

01:08:542 (1) - Remove combo Fixed
01:18:855 (2) - Please dont overlapp it :s Why? °^°
01:31:980 (3,4) - Move them a bit more down Fixed
01:37:019 (4) - From now on there are no sounds for this stream, dont mapp sounds which dont exist There are only 3 circle that in the song doesn't exist sounds, and it's not an error to make parts that doesn't exist o.o
02:00:339 (2) - One Grid left (Nazi) Fixed
02:03:855 (4,5,6) - Make symmetry with ^ Fixed
02:06:198 (4,5) - Change this to one slider ending here 02:06:433 - like you did before, because 02:06:667 - here is no sound Not fixed
02:09:011 - Maybe make a warning for the sudden slider speed change? Not fixed
02:20:730 (5,6,7,8,1) - Delete these and place a spinner? Would fit a lot better since you have a stream which follows Not fixed
02:31:042 (1,2,3) - This pattern is abit hard to play, maybe find another solution? It's insane diff °^°
02:37:605 - And again, mapp till here and start the spinner at the end I want to end mapping here °3°

Overall *thumps up* i've seen badder

Contact me ingame or write me a PM and we will make out which map you mod

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

thank you mod❤
Nice Map~❤Star

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256,308,41823,6,0,B|184:340|128:308|84:264|88:200,1,240,8|8

152,92,43698,2,0,B|224:60|280:92|324:136|320:200,1,240,8|8

Gabe wrote:

Do, not, make, this, map, graveyard.

Anyways, In Insane 02:37:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
I saw in the Wiki that you can't have more than 21 combos. (Something around this) Also, it's prefered to delete it since it's pretty repetitive and the combo is unrankable. The other difficulties ends at 02:37:605 without anything after this spinner. So make it consistent.

Do not kudo this.

Laurier wrote:

Easy
01:29:636 (1,2,3,4) - like this? http://puu.sh/1524N <--- Not think
02:15:573 (3) - make blanket http://puu.sh/15265 <--- fixed

64,128,84468,2,0,B|132:92,1,63.7500024318696,0|0
172,64,84936,2,0,B|248:76,1,63.7500024318696,8|0
192,192,85639,2,0,B|272:192,1,63.7500024318696,0|8

184,88,99468,2,0,B|260:88,2,63.7500024318696,0|0|8
216,176,100171,2,0,B|304:176,1,63.7500024318696,0|0
248,264,100874,1,8

Buona fortuna!