thx ur star!~and suggestion~frans_niko wrote:
here we go from my mod queue
Happy Birthday
02:17:235 maybe remove kiai time *suggest~nope~because kiai time must be the same~
03:50:985 maybe remove kiai time *suggest ^
for timing like hard that no need in happy birthday because it was tripleting (in taiko called triplet)~just do easy~~pro map i still not ability make it~orz
because this is nice beatmap Star for you
thx!~ur mod~TheNutritiousGuy wrote:
3:45.. oh damn..xD...
[General]
The Kiai Time of i_k and Happy Birthday looks pretty nice, the Hard Diff should also do this IMO.
Why is "BIRTHDAY" in your Tags? Does it makes sense in any way?[Happy Birthday!]karenying wrote:
put BIRTHDAY to tag,CD name can't be source
00:44:422 (9) - You could make this Slider nicier.~~fix~~
00:52:860 (3) - ^ (Anyway, for this Slider you just have to do this like here. It fits better with the shapes of other sliders.~~fix~~
01:00:360 (1,3) - This Kicks makes look this Slider ugly IMO.~~fix~~
01:47:235 (3,4) - For this Sliders you can make them nicier if you do them like here.~~fix~~
02:03:172 (3) - The whistle sounds strange IMO.~~fix~~
02:59:422 (4) - Ths Slider looks awful. :<~~fix~~
03:05:750 (6) - You should remove the Clap from the Middle Point.~~fix~~
03:52:625 (5,6) - The patterns looks strange..~~fix~~
04:22:625 (1) - I love this Slider. <3~~thx~~>_<~
\o\
thx~mod!话说我已近糊涂了。。。orz你到底会不会中文啊0.0!!!~这句话是褒义的。。别误会~。orz~~~Illumined wrote:
Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (・∀・)General。。。没说一定要easy所以。。。orz~
- Storyboarding都在哪裡? .osb裡面有代碼, 但沒有看見文件夾內的檔案 ~sor....我在和帮我做SB的修改中~还没确定。。。不小型传上去了吧。。sor~
- spinner-circle.png的大小需要正好在666x666 pixel ~~fix~~
- Normal很明顯不能成為最低難度, 拍子取的太難了, 補上一個簡單點Easy?
Happy Birthday!01:22:860 - Normal~~fix~~
- 音量問題和Normal一樣, 但只需要將所有Normal下降至60%
- Kiai的whistle嚴重不足
- 作為最高難度, jump設置的不太足夠(相對Hard), 排版綁的太緊了
01:00:360 (1,3) - 形狀有點難看 hmm~我也不知道怎样才好看了。。。orz~求pic~
01:49:110 (1) - 不太需要new combo ~~fix~~
那EASY由我补上吧Illumined wrote:
簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<
至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)
至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!
謝謝彩虹君!~Sun Rainbow wrote:
那EASY由我补上吧Illumined wrote:
簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<
至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)
至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!
THX~ur mod!~Hinsvar wrote:
Yo.
ClariS \:D/
*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.
>General>Happy Birthday!
- You might want to cut the last 30 seconds of the .mp3... ~i think i dont need to cut mp3~because~my draining only 3:45 min~no more than 4 min~
SPOILERThe maximum time for a map is 4 minutes. However, this is neither "Total" nor "Draining" time, but rather the time from the first note in the map until the last note. Thus, this is the "Total" time of the mp3 with intro and outro time excluded.- Weird... I got ~30ms early when playing all diffs. Don't know; might be just me.
~me~xD
- 01:01:297 (3) - Don't really think this is the best choice available. Use a shape similar to 01:02:235 (1)? ~i change other form~fix~
- 03:00:360 (1,2) - Eh... I think it's (1) that's supposed to have the repeat and not (2). ~i change other form~fix~
- 04:15:711 (2) - Use 1.2x DS? I'm serious; 3/4 stuff plays far better that way. ~fix~
- 04:22:625 (1) - ...This is magic. Who made this?
Good mapset...
...and I really want to map this now. My God. I should really do it after I am finished with my current pending mapsets.
Good luck on the way
kyuten wrote:
Hi~Request from my queue
[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~
00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~
01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse,然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些?【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~
01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~
03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~
=_=let me practise english again~.....
never mine~xD~kyuten wrote:
∑O.O...忘记了看GD的国家Tv T
sorry...i forgot to use english for GDTv T
THX!~STAR!~AND!~MOD!~Flask wrote:
Request from IRC o.o~
[General]
.osb 不見了 (SB會用到)
Tags要不要考慮加上 'happy'
[你的diff]
01:20:985 (1) - 這裡應該要N然後上Finish ~FIX~
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這邊全clap有點吵又不適合 可能放(5)就好 ~FIX~
02:13:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有點像在硬塞滿歌詞 支持(4,5)變slider ~FIX~
04:22:977 (x) - 為啥要5% 0.0~xD~>_<~@_@~
感覺滿不錯的 不過這diff一開始像Hard後面像Insane是什麼意思ˋˊ @_@~0.0~xD~>_<~
Star ! 加油 !
THX~MOD~~~由于彩虹君的SB还没有fix~所以~~~~~祝彩虹君早点考完试!!!~kyuten wrote:
Hi~Request from my queue
[Happy Birthday!]
-Beatmap-
04:20:047 (7) - 这个第一次没读出来... XD~
04:22:625 (1) - XDDD 不过稍微有一点不对称ww调整一下ww 借某MAT的话~把想表达的表达给player就好了~xD~~~我也改了下~xD~~FIX~
[Overall]
竟然还没rank╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭ 快找MAT吧ww
ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)
thx ur mod!~ertyukjh010 wrote:
Request from Game-pm/Forums-pm/Modding Queue
[General]~fix~
- Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use. this is bug....fix~
- Inconsistency in Tags:
ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)
[Happy Birthday!]
[Layout]ORZ.....吐槽again~FIX~
- 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.
[Opinion]这个。。。。。呜呜呜。。。现在改觉得会。。。orz~MAT说不行的话我就remap去。。或者开个新diff好了。。。orz加难什么的。。。>~<~><><><><><~
- I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.
that all
thanks Athena <3 <3Athena Tennos wrote:
kyuten wrote:
oh god that avatar x_x
[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~ unconcistant spacing www
00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~ no, moar soft spinner for beginners ;3
01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse,然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些?【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~ wuut?
01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~ so what is this? 01:18:641 (2) -
03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~ Ill think about this if its pointed later
=_=let me practise english again~.....
asdfdfsdffdFlask wrote:
[i_k]
00:20:985 (5) - move to 00:21:219 - there is no sound where you are pointing 3:
01:05:046 (2) - move left 1 gird (gird level 4)
01:16:766 (x) - add a note , and ctrl+R (1)
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - a little bit messy ._>. try this looks the same
01:39:266 (4) - finish
02:53:211 (1) - remove whistle (blue tick)
02:54:149 (2) - ^ what blue tick?
03:40:438 (1) - move to 03:40:203 - then try this no *3*
\O/THX!ur star!!!~and mod~xDxXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:
Haii ~
You requested in game ~
ClariS ! >w<
[General]
- Remove the bookmarks. ~I think no necessary, but fix~xD~~~
- At the end of the SB, its " beatmap " not " bestmap ". ~~~~wait rainbow done his exam~then, fix it~
- You should add Lucyfly to the SB credit as well since the person helped make it ~ ^~
- Add Sun Rainbow to the tags for the SB. ~FIX~
- Kadono Toshikazu composed the song so maybe add that to the tags as well ? ~FIX~
[Happy Birthday!]
- HP Drain +1 FIX~
01:21:219 (1) - End spinner at 01:23:328 ? I think rhythm is good, now~xD
01:29:891 (3) - Place under 01:28:485 (1) properly ~ fix~
01:37:860 (7) - Place under 01:36:688 (3) fix~
02:38:563 (2) - Place under previous note properly ~fix~
03:38:094 (2) - Watch your placement. xDfix~
04:22:625 (1) - Such a nice slider. >w< thx~xD
Nice song and well mapped !
Good luck and 2 stars ~ ;D
thx~mod!~and~star!~Snowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Unused Image Files
sb\bg01.jpg
sb\bg08.png
sb\bg09.png
spinner-background.jpg fix~
kiai不同...由于乃用了一堆线....所以...自己检查orz (↓找不同)
fix~
[Happy Birthday!]
00:20:750 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个摆的不好看...至少感觉不顺 fix~
01:02:235 (1) - 换成粉色的 否则(2)根本看不见嘛=-= fix~?有点不明白0.0~
01:28:485 (1) - ctrl+r fix~
01:49:110 (1) - slider的头建议不要被遮住 呜呜呜。。。感觉skin的原因没完全挡住吧~xD~其实我不知道怎么改orz
02:45:360 (8) - 开头finish fix~
02:45:828 (1) - spacing fix~
04:11:610 (7) - 总感觉ctrl+r更好点 fix~
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Wonderful Mapset
SB挺给力
给星
fix~wait ur easy。。。Sun Rainbow wrote:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BS.png",320,240
M,0,264735,,206,248
S,0,264735,264759,0.8975999
F,0,264735,266610,0,1
F,0,266610,270360,1
F,0,270360,272235,1,0
...Snowy Dream wrote:
[i_k's Normal]
00:19:813 (4) - delete finish
00:50:047 (2) - ^
I feel that you abuse finish a bit :< some can use whistle instead I love finishes, what a shame that you dont
01:16:766 (5) - add a note? there is an object here
01:31:297 (4) - try ctrl+r? why? spacing is perfect
01:49:813 - delete finish
02:03:641 (3) - end at the next red tick and then add a slider at 02:04:110 (a return at 02:04:461)
03:46:297 (3,5) - use whistle instead finish
thx!~ur mod~pieguy1372 wrote:
hi there, sorry for late~
General:
-offset +10? this..idk..let XBT check it...orz
Happy Birthday!:
01:10:672 (1) - remove NC ~fix!~
01:35:985 (1) - add finish on start to be consistent with previous part?
01:43:485 (1) - add finish on start?
01:47:235 (3) - add finish on start?
01:52:860 (8) - add finish?
02:52:860 (1) - add finish on start?
02:56:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:00:360 (1) - add finish on start?
03:07:860 (1) - add finish on start?
03:11:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:15:360 (1,2) - add finish on start?
04:09:735 (1) - add finish on start?
04:13:485 (5) - add finish on start?
04:21:688 (2,3) - add finish?
04:22:625 (1) - hm, mute the sliderticks on this slider? sounds a lot better IMO
almost fix~
nice map~
thx! ur mod!~eikkaleyd wrote:
来太晚了抱歉~
话说ClariS那个声音比较成熟的,声音辨识度好低噗
——看上去配置不错哈~看到skin和SB我就忽然懒得mod了觉得很漂亮……
[Happy Birthday!]
00:11:610 (2) - 第二个点往里收点,x112 y260这样 ~fix!~
00:44:422 (9) - 这个形状也很奇怪啊 ~fix!~
01:14:656 (5) - ^,我就挑我一眼看去很别扭的好了 ~fix!~
01:26:375 (4) - CTRL+R,理由有,和12的flow相同(相反方向)以及因为音高是从高到低的(sore-zore这句) ~fix!~
01:47:235 (3,4) - 推荐先是往下凹的拖条,再是往上凸的(因为12都是往下凹的) ~fix!~
02:50:281 (5) - CTRL+R,也是跟音高(modo是从低到高) ~fix!~
——我的跟音高拖条习惯,主要集中在重音上面,不过不知道A碳认不认可;_; ~才不会!~表示学习了!~下次我也注意一下@!
For normal, looked through it, but found nothing special~
In fact I think you have got enough mods, just check some sliders' shape and New combo if you like.
It's a reaaaaaaaally good map. Must be ranked soon~!
thx~Star!~jesse7419 wrote:
多了美美的SB 又更讚了
加油!!快rank吧 >w<
。。。。。教练你妹!~aho!~不过~thx star~~~cx040156 wrote:
教练我来了,您的教导真是令我内牛满面感动涕零,我现在就把第一颗星射给你><
Happy Birthday! : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
i_k's Normal : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
lucyfly's Hard : ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara
Rainbow's Easy : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
thx~xD[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
SB挺美的0.0
THX!~ur mod~ertyukjh010 wrote:
Request from Game-pm
[General]fix!~
- Inconsistency in Tags:
Happy Birthday! : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
i_k's Normal : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
lucyfly's Hard : ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara
Rainbow's Easy : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
要吃午餐去, 而且還有GD趕著做QQ
所以只是很隨便mod了~ That all
thx ur mod!~Mystica wrote:
some random checks.
[I]
00:07:860 (1,2) - 對稱放多好看現在真心搓 瞎~我不知道怎么对称。。。orz~
01:31:063 - 倒是沒覺得這三連意義很大 fix~
01:31:297 (1,2,3) - 以後注意下design現在擺放真心不好看 fix~
01:49:110 - 這段還是填充點3/4更符合rhyme fix~
02:16:766 - 這個五連感覺是硬塞進去的 有鼓点的说~
02:21:922 (2) - 往上拉幾個grid可以更好看 fix~
02:35:047 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這兩串沒看出感覺 fix~
後面偷懶了大概就是對rhyme還是有些掌握不夠不過作為新手很好了 thx~
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