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jossieP

GiNa wrote:

[i_k's Normal]
-I think you should use soft-sliderslide.wav
-AR and OD +1 would be good
01:04:110 (1,2) – I don’t quite like how they are overlapping right now, consider moving them
-There are some more overlapping notes, well .. anyways, just saying overlap? where
01:22:156 (1) – I think you should start this spinner at 01:21:922 (still end it at 01:23:797), sounds better a spinner that start late is moar soft to beginners, Im not moving it
01:35:516 (1) – maybe finish at the end ?
01:53:328 (1) – 100% volume is too loud, change it to 90% Ill add moar 100% instead
02:04:344 (4) – this doesn’t fit, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347759 no
02:23:211 (4) – since this is the easiest diff, I don’t think this is a good idea to have this kind of rhythm. Most beginners can’t read this well if this where a circle Ill be totally according to you, a person with a minimum musical sense and that obviously can listen the vocal will easily hit this slider
03:07:860 (2) – repeat might be a little cover by 03:05:985 (4) k, now this slider is the most booriing ever
03:40:438 (1) – this doesn’t fit, maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347766 cant listen the song?
04:04:461 (2) – same as 02:23:211 (4) god
all Leo's mod changed, lazy to quote byakugan, some of your suggest was about unconcistant, but then you point the concistant


http://puu.sh/CslX
jesse7419
Hi :)
from m4m ~
依你要求就不mod Normal了

[General]
>SB沒有用到吧? 沒用到的話.osb檔就刪了吧.
>有自製skin請在所有難度記事本加上這段
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
>combo顏色有些滿相近的 只用2個顏色的話也不錯啊~

[Happy Birthday!]
00:08:563 (2) - 滑條頭上whistle?
00:13:250 (5) - 滑條尾上whistle
00:17:000 (3) - 排好一點 有點歪了
00:19:110 (3) - 移到x:364 y:196 比較整齊
00:19:813 (4) - 感覺這滑條開頭加whistle比後面加還聽的順耳0.0
00:37:391 (x) - 綠線刪了吧 沒用到
00:37:860 (1) - 消NC
01:00:125 (7) - 01:01:063 (2) - 01:02:000 (5) - 01:02:938 (2) - 01:04:578 (2) - 01:05:047 (3) - 看要不要上whistle在鋼琴的音效上? (滑條是尾巴上) 如果覺得會打亂整首節奏就忽略吧~
01:18:641 (6) - 這個有點怪怪的說 01:18:172 (5) - 這個改成滑條到01:18:641 (x) - 結束代掉(6)改覺比較好 或者 01:18:641 (6) - 上whistle
01:19:110 (3) - 滑條頭上finish
01:20:048 (3) - ^
01:20:750 (4) - 也挺怪的note單獨擺這裡 -0- 建議去掉 把spinner移到這邊吧
01:20:985 (1) - 結束在01:22:860 -
01:31:063 (6,7,1) - 額..這也分太開了 整首只有這邊這樣擺 開的話以你01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這種就OK了
01:51:453 (2) - 距離改1.4x
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 加條綠線設定音量小一點 然後上clap音效上去吧
02:34:110 (4) - 滑條頭上whistle?
02:43:485 (3) - 滑條頭換成finish
02:44:423 (6) - ^
02:46:297 (1,2,3) - 被滑條檔到了 會影響打圖 (我試的時候也只有這邊miss了)
03:03:172 (x) - 這條綠線我覺得應該是要消kiai的 但忘記消了 不然03:04:110 (x) - 這條多餘了
03:50:516 (3) - 上whistle
03:56:375 (5) - 尾上whistle
03:57:313 (7) - 上whistle
04:04:110 (1) - 整個都上whistle感覺不錯 總之這部分3個點最好有點音效~
04:17:235 (1) - 消NC
04:19:110 (5) - NC
04:22:977 (x) - 04:23:445 (x) - 這兩條綠線做什麼用的0.0?

[lucyfly's Hard]
AR+1 OD-1 感覺比較好一點

00:09:266 (8) - fix距離1.6x
00:37:860 (1) - 去NC
00:41:141 (6) - NC
00:41:610 (1) - 去NC
00:56:610 (1) - ^
01:01:766 (3) - NC (跟前面一樣)
01:21:688 (1) - 在01:22:860 (x) - 這邊結束比較好
01:23:797 (1,3) - 上whistle?
01:30:125 (1) - 這1.4速度改成0.5...速度整整掉了快3倍.. 建議1.0就好!! (後面副歌這種地方都建議改了)
01:39:735 (x) - 綠線無用
01:50:516 (6) - 距離1.05x很短 加上AR慢恨容易讀圖錯誤 改遠一點吧
02:02:235 (1) - 去NC
02:11:141 (3) - NC
02:13:016 (3) - ^
02:13:485 (1) - 去NC
02:17:235 (1) - ^
02:20:516 (6) - NC
02:20:985 (1) - 去NC (話說這些部份的NC 我會修是因為不太統一 你可以不用我這NC去改 但要去統一他們的NC比較好 我看了這部分NC不一致)
02:26:141 (3) - 去NC(這也是同狀況 00:46:766 (x) - 這邊的不統一)
03:17:235 (3) - 上finish
03:17:703 (x) - 綠線無用

嗯~好長的歌 mod到眼花了
skin部分很有特色!!
That's all GL and have my star~☆
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

jesse7419 wrote:

Hi :)
from m4m ~
依你要求就不mod Normal了

[General]
>SB沒有用到吧? 沒用到的話.osb檔就刪了吧.hmm~老是会自动生成~~~QAQ~
>有自製skin請在所有難度記事本加上這段
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
~fix~
>combo顏色有些滿相近的 只用2個顏色的話也不錯啊~这个~。。。考虑下~xDfix!~

[Happy Birthday!]
00:08:563 (2) - 滑條頭上whistle?~~fix~~
00:13:250 (5) - 滑條尾上whistle~~fix~~
00:17:000 (3) - 排好一點 有點歪了~~fix~~
00:19:110 (3) - 移到x:364 y:196 比較整齊~~这个。。。上次就被鸠过~囧~
00:19:813 (4) - 感覺這滑條開頭加whistle比後面加還聽的順耳0.0 ~~fix~~
00:37:391 (x) - 綠線刪了吧 沒用到~~fix~~
00:37:860 (1) - 消NC~~fix~~
01:00:125 (7) - 01:01:063 (2) - 01:02:000 (5) - 01:02:938 (2) - 01:04:578 (2) - 01:05:047 (3) - 看要不要上whistle在鋼琴的音效上? (滑條是尾巴上) 如果覺得會打亂整首節奏就忽略吧~~~~hmm~~~nope~
01:18:641 (6) - 這個有點怪怪的說 01:18:172 (5) - 這個改成滑條到01:18:641 (x) - 結束代掉(6)改覺比較好 或者 01:18:641 (6) - 上whistle~~fix~~
01:19:110 (3) - 滑條頭上finish~~fix~~
01:20:048 (3) - ^ ^
01:20:750 (4) - 也挺怪的note單獨擺這裡 -0- 建議去掉 把spinner移到這邊吧~~fix~~
01:20:985 (1) - 結束在01:22:860 - ~~fix~~
01:31:063 (6,7,1) - 額..這也分太開了 整首只有這邊這樣擺 開的話以你01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這種就OK了~~fix~~
01:51:453 (2) - 距離改1.4x~~fix~~
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 加條綠線設定音量小一點 然後上clap音效上去吧 ~~fix~~
02:34:110 (4) - 滑條頭上whistle?~~fix~~
02:43:485 (3) - 滑條頭換成finish~~fix~~
02:44:423 (6) - ^ ^
02:46:297 (1,2,3) - 被滑條檔到了 會影響打圖 (我試的時候也只有這邊miss了)~~fix~~
03:03:172 (x) - 這條綠線我覺得應該是要消kiai的 但忘記消了 不然03:04:110 (x) - 這條多餘了~~fix~~
03:50:516 (3) - 上whistle~~fix~~
03:56:375 (5) - 尾上whistle~~fix~~
03:57:313 (7) - 上whistle~~fix~~
04:04:110 (1) - 整個都上whistle感覺不錯 總之這部分3個點最好有點音效~~~fix~~
04:17:235 (1) - 消NC~~fix~~
04:19:110 (5) - NC~~fix~~
04:22:977 (x) - 04:23:445 (x) - 這兩條綠線做什麼用的0.0?~~xD消掉第一个hitsound~。。。

嗯~好長的歌 mod到眼花了~thx!!!~。。。。辛苦了~
skin部分很有特色!!~xD~
That's all GL and have my star~☆
THX!~Hard mod and Star!!~
Sun Rainbow
Niko-nyan
here we go from my mod queue

i_k's normal
Kiai in last spinner? :D it was nice
01:38:211 maybe dont remove the kiai *suggest only
02:32:235 maybe remove kiai? *suggest again
03:03:332 maybe dont remove kiai *suggest again (sorry to many suggest)

lucyfly's hard
03:50:981 maybe kiai remove like normal *suggest part

Happy Birthday
02:17:235 maybe remove kiai time *suggest
03:50:985 maybe remove kiai time *suggest
for timing like hard that no need in happy birthday because it was tripleting (in taiko called triplet)

because this is nice beatmap Star for you :D
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

frans_niko wrote:

here we go from my mod queue

Happy Birthday
02:17:235 maybe remove kiai time *suggest~nope~because kiai time must be the same~
03:50:985 maybe remove kiai time *suggest ^
for timing like hard that no need in happy birthday because it was tripleting (in taiko called triplet)~just do easy~~pro map i still not ability make it~orz

because this is nice beatmap Star for you :D
thx ur star!~and suggestion~
Stefan
3:45.. oh damn..
[General]
The Kiai Time of i_k and Happy Birthday looks pretty nice, the Hard Diff should also do this IMO.
Why is "BIRTHDAY" in your Tags? Does it makes sense in any way?

[i_k's Normal]
00:20:985 (5) - Add Finish?
00:51:453 (1) - I don't like the Spinner. They're two options: 1. Remove it and map this Part. 2. Delete 00:50:985 (3) - and move the Spinner to this Point.
01:02:235 (3) - The Kick (where the red Sliderpoint is) looks awful and could mislead the player.
01:14:422 (3) - Remove the Whistle at the Middle Point and set it at the Start Point.
01:45:360 (2,3,4,5) - This feels weird to play. You could try this out.
01:50:985 (2,3,4) - The thing is that (3) stays really close to (2) and (4). I suggest to move (2) and (4) over Ctrl+H.
02:02:235 (2) - Same thing as on 01:02:235 (3) with the Kick.
02:07:860 (4,5,6,7) - It looks ugly and could confuse new player. Try something different here.
02:09:031 (7) - ^If you don't want, you should remove it and set where the Start and End point is a Circle.
03:01:766 (3) - Add on all except of the Start Point Finish (Like you did on 01:37:860 (1,2,3))
03:17:703 (1) - The Whistle sounds strange. You should remove it.
04:11:610 (1,2,3,4) - You could do something similar like I explained at 01:45:360 (2,3,4,5).
04:21:922 (2) - Remove Finish and set Whistle, sounds better.
04:22:860 (3) - Remove this and move the Spinner to this point. The Spinner would be not too short and it fits with the voice.

[lucyfly's Hard]
AR -1, it looks way too fast for the Diff.
The Spacing is very unconfortable and makes the Diff looks like a easy Insane.
The areas with the SV of x1,40 feels very fast and you should not use this SV in anywhere of the Map.
00:37:391 (1,2) - The jump is IMO too big.
00:50:985 (1) - Spinner seems very short and I think it's also unrankable. The minimum of a Spinner lenght must be 2000, yours is 1000.
01:21:688 (1) - Please extend the Spinner to 01:23:328.
01:23:797 (1,2,3,4) - Very big distance between of the circles..
01:30:125 (1) - The Slow feels strange if it comes suddenly.
01:38:797 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:23:797 (1,2,3,4)
01:41:375 (5) - Set NC
01:45:125 (1) - Same as 01:30:125 (1)
02:01:766 (1,2) - Too big jump.
02:15:360 (1) - Spinner's too short.

[Happy Birthday!]
00:44:422 (9) - You could make this Slider nicier.
00:52:860 (3) - ^ (Anyway, for this Slider you just have to do this like here. It fits better with the shapes of other sliders.
01:00:360 (1,3) - This Kicks makes look this Slider ugly IMO.
01:47:235 (3,4) - For this Sliders you can make them nicier if you do them like here.
02:03:172 (3) - The whistle sounds strange IMO.
02:59:422 (4) - Ths Slider looks awful. :<
03:05:750 (6) - You should remove the Clap from the Middle Point.
03:52:625 (5,6) - The patterns looks strange..
04:22:625 (1) - I love this Slider. <3

\o\
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

3:45.. oh damn..xD...
[General]
The Kiai Time of i_k and Happy Birthday looks pretty nice, the Hard Diff should also do this IMO.
Why is "BIRTHDAY" in your Tags? Does it makes sense in any way?

karenying wrote:

put BIRTHDAY to tag,CD name can't be source
[Happy Birthday!]
00:44:422 (9) - You could make this Slider nicier.~~fix~~
00:52:860 (3) - ^ (Anyway, for this Slider you just have to do this like here. It fits better with the shapes of other sliders.~~fix~~
01:00:360 (1,3) - This Kicks makes look this Slider ugly IMO.~~fix~~
01:47:235 (3,4) - For this Sliders you can make them nicier if you do them like here.~~fix~~
02:03:172 (3) - The whistle sounds strange IMO.~~fix~~
02:59:422 (4) - Ths Slider looks awful. :<~~fix~~
03:05:750 (6) - You should remove the Clap from the Middle Point.~~fix~~
03:52:625 (5,6) - The patterns looks strange..~~fix~~
04:22:625 (1) - I love this Slider. <3~~thx~~>_<~

\o\
thx!~ur mod~
Illumined
Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (・∀・)

General
  1. Storyboarding都在哪裡? .osb裡面有代碼, 但沒有看見文件夾內的檔案
  2. spinner-circle.png的大小需要正好在666x666 pixel
  3. Normal很明顯不能成為最低難度, 拍子取的太難了, 補上一個簡單點Easy?

i_k's Normal
  1. Hitsounds are too harsh D: Especially continuous finishs and Normal hitsounds. Try to reduce volume on non-kiai parts : soft by 10~15, Normal by 20.
00:42:078 (4) - Move the whistle from reverse to head
00:47:000 (3,4) - Spacing error

lucyfly's Hard
  1. 不錯的, 但相對Insane的jump有點多
  2. 音量太太太太太高了, Finish聽著十分刺耳, Soft hitsound 在非kiai部份至少要調低至75%, 尤其在這裡03:50:985 -
00:15:360 (1) - 這裡還是前奏部份, 應該繼續用0.50x/0.75x?
00:17:235 (5) - ^
01:05:047 (1,2,3) - 用個大點的jump
01:30:125 - 加上Whistle比較好聽
01:45:125 - ^
02:54:500 - ^
03:05:750 (5) - 或 03:07:156 (8) - New combo, 這裡的combo有點長了
03:09:500 - Whistle
04:11:375 - ^

Happy Birthday!
  1. 音量問題和Normal一樣, 但只需要將所有Normal下降至60%
  2. Kiai的whistle嚴重不足
  3. 作為最高難度, jump設置的不太足夠(相對Hard), 排版綁的太緊了
01:22:860 - Normal

01:00:360 (1,3) - 形狀有點難看
01:49:110 (1) - 不太需要new combo
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (・∀・)

General
  1. Storyboarding都在哪裡? .osb裡面有代碼, 但沒有看見文件夾內的檔案 ~sor....我在和帮我做SB的修改中~还没确定。。。不小型传上去了吧。。sor~
  2. spinner-circle.png的大小需要正好在666x666 pixel ~~fix~~
  3. Normal很明顯不能成為最低難度, 拍子取的太難了, 補上一個簡單點Easy?
。。。没说一定要easy所以。。。orz~

Happy Birthday!
  1. 音量問題和Normal一樣, 但只需要將所有Normal下降至60%
  2. Kiai的whistle嚴重不足
  3. 作為最高難度, jump設置的不太足夠(相對Hard), 排版綁的太緊了
01:22:860 - Normal~~fix~~

01:00:360 (1,3) - 形狀有點難看 hmm~我也不知道怎样才好看了。。。orz~求pic~
01:49:110 (1) - 不太需要new combo ~~fix~~
thx~mod!话说我已近糊涂了。。。orz你到底会不会中文啊0.0!!!~这句话是褒义的。。别误会~。orz~~~
Illumined
簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<

至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)

至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!
Sun Rainbow

Illumined wrote:

簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<

至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)

至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!
那EASY由我补上吧
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Illumined wrote:

簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<

至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)

至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!
那EASY由我补上吧
謝謝彩虹君!~
xD....不過果然還是覺得不太需要吧。。。~

hmm~~~果然還是XAT們說的算吧~。。。orz~
Hinsvar
Yo.

ClariS \:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. You might want to cut the last 30 seconds of the .mp3...
  2. Weird... I got ~30ms early when playing all diffs. Don't know; might be just me.
>i_k's Normal
  1. 02:32:235 (1) - I've known and am respecting your somewhat frequent (can't really use occasionally here) usage of stylized sliders, but this one... making it similar to 02:49:110 (1) should do, IMO.
>lucyfly's Hard
  1. 00:18:641 (6) - NC here and remove the one on 00:19:110 (1)?
  2. 01:18:875 (1,2,3) - Converting this triplet into a 1/4 slider that repeats once should do better.
  3. 01:19:813 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 02:43:250 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 02:44:188 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 02:45:125 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 03:41:375 (3) - NC?
>Happy Birthday!
  1. 01:01:297 (3) - Don't really think this is the best choice available. Use a shape similar to 01:02:235 (1)?
  2. 03:00:360 (1,2) - Eh... I think it's (1) that's supposed to have the repeat and not (2).
  3. 04:15:711 (2) - Use 1.2x DS? I'm serious; 3/4 stuff plays far better that way.
  4. 04:22:625 (1) - ...This is magic. Who made this?
Good mapset...

...and I really want to map this now. My God. I should really do it after I am finished with my current pending mapsets.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

ClariS \:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. You might want to cut the last 30 seconds of the .mp3... ~i think i dont need to cut mp3~because~my draining only 3:45 min~no more than 4 min~
    SPOILER
    The maximum time for a map is 4 minutes. However, this is neither "Total" nor "Draining" time, but rather the time from the first note in the map until the last note. Thus, this is the "Total" time of the mp3 with intro and outro time excluded.
  2. Weird... I got ~30ms early when playing all diffs. Don't know; might be just me.
>Happy Birthday!
  1. 01:01:297 (3) - Don't really think this is the best choice available. Use a shape similar to 01:02:235 (1)? ~i change other form~fix~
  2. 03:00:360 (1,2) - Eh... I think it's (1) that's supposed to have the repeat and not (2). ~i change other form~fix~
  3. 04:15:711 (2) - Use 1.2x DS? I'm serious; 3/4 stuff plays far better that way. ~fix~
  4. 04:22:625 (1) - ...This is magic. Who made this?
~me~xD

Good mapset...

...and I really want to map this now. My God. I should really do it after I am finished with my current pending mapsets.

Good luck on the way 8-)
THX~ur mod!~
kyuten
Hi~Request from my queue

完成度很高了ww我就说一下自己的想法吧ww

[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的
00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz
01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse,然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些?
01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww
03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww

[lucyfly's Hard]
-Beatmap-
01:07:860 - 这里也闪一下><

[Happy Birthday!]
-Beatmap-
04:20:047 (7) - 这个第一次没读出来...
04:22:625 (1) - XDDD 不过稍微有一点不对称ww调整一下ww

[Overall]
竟然还没rank╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭ 快找MAT吧ww
Flask
Request from IRC o.o~

[General]
.osb 不見了 (SB會用到)
Tags要不要考慮加上 'happy'

[i_k]
00:20:985 (5) - move to 00:21:219 -
01:05:046 (2) - move left 1 gird (gird level 4)
01:16:766 (x) - add a note , and ctrl+R (1)
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - a little bit messy ._>. try this
01:39:266 (4) - finish
02:53:211 (1) - remove whistle (blue tick)
02:54:149 (2) - ^
03:40:438 (1) - move to 03:40:203 - then try this

[lucyfly]
AR略高 -1 (反正下面還有最難的diff)
沒啥好挑剔的 ...

[你的diff]
01:20:985 (1) - 這裡應該要N然後上Finish
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這邊全clap有點吵又不適合 可能放(5)就好
02:13:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有點像在硬塞滿歌詞 支持(4,5)變slider
04:22:977 (x) - 為啥要5%

感覺滿不錯的 不過這diff一開始像Hard後面像Insane是什麼意思ˋˊ

Star ! 加油 !
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~

00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~

01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse,然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些?【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~

01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~

03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~

=_=let me practise english again~.....
kyuten
∑O.O...忘记了看GD的国家Tv T
sorry...i forgot to use english for GDTv T
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

kyuten wrote:

∑O.O...忘记了看GD的国家Tv T
sorry...i forgot to use english for GDTv T
never mine~xD~
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Flask wrote:

Request from IRC o.o~

[General]
.osb 不見了 (SB會用到)
Tags要不要考慮加上 'happy'

[你的diff]
01:20:985 (1) - 這裡應該要N然後上Finish ~FIX~
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這邊全clap有點吵又不適合 可能放(5)就好 ~FIX~
02:13:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有點像在硬塞滿歌詞 支持(4,5)變slider ~FIX~
04:22:977 (x) - 為啥要5% 0.0~xD~>_<~@_@~

感覺滿不錯的 不過這diff一開始像Hard後面像Insane是什麼意思ˋˊ @_@~0.0~xD~>_<~

Star ! 加油 !
THX!~STAR!~AND!~MOD!~


kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[Happy Birthday!]
-Beatmap-
04:20:047 (7) - 这个第一次没读出来... XD~
04:22:625 (1) - XDDD 不过稍微有一点不对称ww调整一下ww 借某MAT的话~把想表达的表达给player就好了~xD~~~我也改了下~xD~~FIX~

[Overall]
竟然还没rank╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭ 快找MAT吧ww
THX~MOD~~~由于彩虹君的SB还没有fix~所以~~~~~祝彩虹君早点考完试!!!~
早点挂科吧~偶呵呵呵呵呵~~~~ 我黑了。。
ertyukjh010


Request from Modding Queue

[General]

  1. Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use.
  2. Inconsistency in Tags:
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)
[lucyfly's Hard]

  1. AR-1
[Layout]
  1. 00:09:500 (1) - Use the same slider velocity with 00:07:860 (5) ?
[Happy Birthday!]

[Layout]
  1. 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.
[Opinion]
  1. I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.
that all :)
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Request from Game-pm/Forums-pm/Modding Queue

[General]

  1. Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use. this is bug....fix~
  2. Inconsistency in Tags:
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)
~fix~

[Happy Birthday!]

[Layout]
  1. 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.
ORZ.....吐槽again~FIX~
[Opinion]
  1. I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.
这个。。。。。呜呜呜。。。现在改觉得会。。。orz~MAT说不行的话我就remap去。。或者开个新diff好了。。。orz加难什么的。。。>~<~><><><><><~

that all :)
thx ur mod!~
jossieP

Athena Tennos wrote:

kyuten wrote:

oh god that avatar x_x
[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~ unconcistant spacing www

00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~ no, moar soft spinner for beginners ;3

01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse,然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些?【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~ wuut?

01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~ so what is this? 01:18:641 (2) -

03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~ Ill think about this if its pointed later

=_=let me practise english again~.....
thanks Athena <3 <3

Flask wrote:

[i_k]
00:20:985 (5) - move to 00:21:219 - there is no sound where you are pointing 3:
01:05:046 (2) - move left 1 gird (gird level 4)
01:16:766 (x) - add a note , and ctrl+R (1)
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - a little bit messy ._>. try this looks the same
01:39:266 (4) - finish
02:53:211 (1) - remove whistle (blue tick)
02:54:149 (2) - ^ what blue tick?
03:40:438 (1) - move to 03:40:203 - then try this no *3*
asdfdfsdffd
Kanari
Haii ~
You requested in game ~
ClariS ! >w<


[General]
- Remove the bookmarks.
- At the end of the SB, its " beatmap " not " bestmap ".
- You should add Lucyfly to the SB credit as well since the person helped make it ~
- Add Sun Rainbow to the tags for the SB.
- Kadono Toshikazu composed the song so maybe add that to the tags as well ?


[i_k's Normal]
- Overall Difficulty -1
01:06:453 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:06:219 ?
01:22:156 (1) - Start this at 01:21:922
02:45:711 - Add a note ?
02:45:828 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:46:063 and end it at 02:48:172
03:47:703 (1) - Start this at 03:47:469


[lucyfly's Hard]
- HP Drain +1
02:34:813 (1) - Place under 02:32:938 (2) - properly.
03:06:688 (7) - Place under 03:05:281 (3)
03:13:250 (4) - Place where 03:10:906 (3) was?


[Happy Birthday!]
- HP Drain +1
01:21:219 (1) - End spinner at 01:23:328 ?
01:29:891 (3) - Place under 01:28:485 (1) properly ~
01:37:860 (7) - Place under 01:36:688 (3)
02:38:563 (2) - Place under previous note properly ~
03:38:094 (2) - Watch your placement. xD
04:22:625 (1) - Such a nice slider. >w<


Nice song and well mapped !
Good luck and 2 stars ~ ;D
jossieP
not moving spinners, also OV is low enough I think
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in game ~
ClariS ! >w<


[General]
- Remove the bookmarks. ~I think no necessary, but fix~xD~~~
- At the end of the SB, its " beatmap " not " bestmap ". ~~~~wait rainbow done his exam~then, fix it~
- You should add Lucyfly to the SB credit as well since the person helped make it ~ ^~
- Add Sun Rainbow to the tags for the SB. ~FIX~
- Kadono Toshikazu composed the song so maybe add that to the tags as well ? ~FIX~

[Happy Birthday!]
- HP Drain +1 FIX~
01:21:219 (1) - End spinner at 01:23:328 ? I think rhythm is good, now~xD
01:29:891 (3) - Place under 01:28:485 (1) properly ~ fix~
01:37:860 (7) - Place under 01:36:688 (3) fix~
02:38:563 (2) - Place under previous note properly ~fix~
03:38:094 (2) - Watch your placement. xDfix~
04:22:625 (1) - Such a nice slider. >w< thx~xD


Nice song and well mapped !
Good luck and 2 stars ~ ;D
\O/THX!ur star!!!~and mod~xD
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Unused Image Files
sb\bg01.jpg
sb\bg08.png
sb\bg09.png
spinner-background.jpg

lighthole ←这个效果用的时候太边上了 没什么感觉..试着靠近中心


kiai不同...由于乃用了一堆线....所以...自己检查orz (↓找不同)



[i_k's Normal]
00:19:813 (4) - delete finish
00:50:047 (2) - ^
I feel that you abuse finish a bit :< some can use whistle instead
01:16:766 (5) - add a note?
01:31:297 (4) - try ctrl+r?
01:49:813 - delete finish
02:03:641 (3) - end at the next red tick and then add a slider at 02:04:110 (a return at 02:04:461)
03:46:297 (3,5) - use whistle instead finish


[lucyfly's Hard]
04:17:938 (2) - reduce a return and add a ntoe at 04:19:110
04:22:625 (6) - delete finish at the start


[Happy Birthday!]
00:20:750 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个摆的不好看...至少感觉不顺
01:02:235 (1) - 换成粉色的 否则(2)根本看不见嘛=-=
01:28:485 (1) - ctrl+r
01:49:110 (1) - slider的头建议不要被遮住
02:45:360 (8) - 开头finish
02:45:828 (1) - spacing
04:11:610 (7) - 总感觉ctrl+r更好点
--------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset
SB挺给力
给星
Sun Rainbow
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BS.png",320,240
M,0,264735,,206,248
S,0,264735,264759,0.8975999
F,0,264735,266610,0,1
F,0,266610,270360,1
F,0,270360,272235,1,0
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Unused Image Files
sb\bg01.jpg
sb\bg08.png
sb\bg09.png
spinner-background.jpg fix~


kiai不同...由于乃用了一堆线....所以...自己检查orz (↓找不同)
fix~

[Happy Birthday!]
00:20:750 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个摆的不好看...至少感觉不顺 fix~
01:02:235 (1) - 换成粉色的 否则(2)根本看不见嘛=-= fix~?有点不明白0.0~
01:28:485 (1) - ctrl+r fix~
01:49:110 (1) - slider的头建议不要被遮住 呜呜呜。。。感觉skin的原因没完全挡住吧~xD~其实我不知道怎么改orz
02:45:360 (8) - 开头finish fix~
02:45:828 (1) - spacing fix~
04:11:610 (7) - 总感觉ctrl+r更好点 fix~ :o
--------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset
SB挺给力
给星
thx~mod!~and~star!~

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BS.png",320,240
M,0,264735,,206,248
S,0,264735,264759,0.8975999
F,0,264735,266610,0,1
F,0,266610,270360,1
F,0,270360,272235,1,0
fix~wait ur easy。。。
jossieP

Snowy Dream wrote:

[i_k's Normal]
00:19:813 (4) - delete finish
00:50:047 (2) - ^
I feel that you abuse finish a bit :< some can use whistle instead I love finishes, what a shame that you dont
01:16:766 (5) - add a note? there is an object here
01:31:297 (4) - try ctrl+r? why? spacing is perfect
01:49:813 - delete finish
02:03:641 (3) - end at the next red tick and then add a slider at 02:04:110 (a return at 02:04:461)
03:46:297 (3,5) - use whistle instead finish
...
pieguyn
hi there, sorry for late~

General:

-offset +10?

i_k's Normal:

02:01:766 ~ 02:09:735 - IMO it seems really empty without whistles like the other parts, perhaps add whistles and just lower the volume 20%-30%? maybe try it like this (x = whistle): oxo x oo x oxox x o x ooxooox

lucyfly's Hard:

00:14:422 ~ 00:20:750 - I think you could continue using 0.5x here..
04:08:094 (2) - add whistle on start?
04:17:938 (2) - add whistle on end?

Happy Birthday!:

01:10:672 (1) - remove NC
01:35:985 (1) - add finish on start to be consistent with previous part?
01:43:485 (1) - add finish on start?
01:47:235 (3) - add finish on start?
01:52:860 (8) - add finish?
02:52:860 (1) - add finish on start?
02:56:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:00:360 (1) - add finish on start?
03:07:860 (1) - add finish on start?
03:11:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:15:360 (1,2) - add finish on start?
04:09:735 (1) - add finish on start?
04:13:485 (5) - add finish on start?
04:21:688 (2,3) - add finish?
04:22:625 (1) - hm, mute the sliderticks on this slider? sounds a lot better IMO

nice map~
eikkaleyd
来太晚了抱歉~
话说ClariS那个声音比较成熟的,声音辨识度好低噗

——看上去配置不错哈~看到skin和SB我就忽然懒得mod了觉得很漂亮……

[Happy Birthday!]
00:11:610 (2) - 第二个点往里收点,x112 y260这样
00:44:422 (9) - 这个形状也很奇怪啊
01:14:656 (5) - ^,我就挑我一眼看去很别扭的好了
01:26:375 (4) - CTRL+R,理由有,和12的flow相同(相反方向)以及因为音高是从高到低的(sore-zore这句)
01:47:235 (3,4) - 推荐先是往下凹的拖条,再是往上凸的(因为12都是往下凹的)
02:50:281 (5) - CTRL+R,也是跟音高(modo是从低到高)
——我的跟音高拖条习惯,主要集中在重音上面,不过不知道A碳认不认可;_;

[lucyfly's Hard]
00:37:860 (3,4) - 第一次出来这个节奏最好换成反弹的拖条
00:40:672 (x) - 加个圈压一下节奏,或者说这才是她唱音的结束点
00:44:422 (x) - ^
00:58:485 (7) - 换成和之前一句一样的3个circle好了
01:37:860 (1) - 没必要NC
02:28:485 (3,4) - 形状形状233
02:38:563 (7) - x184 y120……
02:50:985 (1) - 这个删掉
03:45:360 (3,1) - 3加个折返,spinner放到03:46:180 的蓝线上
变速拖条有点多,不过那还好,主要是这HARD其实不需要那么多NC提示,嗯可以考虑检查下NC~

For normal, looked through it, but found nothing special~
In fact I think you have got enough mods, just check some sliders' shape and New combo if you like.
It's a reaaaaaaaally good map. Must be ranked soon~! :)
Sanae Kochiya_old
BEST MAP EVER RANK FOR SHIZ NIGGARRRR
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there, sorry for late~

General:

-offset +10? this..idk..let XBT check it...orz

Happy Birthday!:

01:10:672 (1) - remove NC ~fix!~
01:35:985 (1) - add finish on start to be consistent with previous part?
01:43:485 (1) - add finish on start?
01:47:235 (3) - add finish on start?
01:52:860 (8) - add finish?
02:52:860 (1) - add finish on start?
02:56:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:00:360 (1) - add finish on start?
03:07:860 (1) - add finish on start?
03:11:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:15:360 (1,2) - add finish on start?
04:09:735 (1) - add finish on start?
04:13:485 (5) - add finish on start?
04:21:688 (2,3) - add finish?
04:22:625 (1) - hm, mute the sliderticks on this slider? sounds a lot better IMO

almost fix~

nice map~
thx!~ur mod~

eikkaleyd wrote:

来太晚了抱歉~
话说ClariS那个声音比较成熟的,声音辨识度好低噗

——看上去配置不错哈~看到skin和SB我就忽然懒得mod了觉得很漂亮……

[Happy Birthday!]
00:11:610 (2) - 第二个点往里收点,x112 y260这样 ~fix!~
00:44:422 (9) - 这个形状也很奇怪啊 ~fix!~
01:14:656 (5) - ^,我就挑我一眼看去很别扭的好了 ~fix!~
01:26:375 (4) - CTRL+R,理由有,和12的flow相同(相反方向)以及因为音高是从高到低的(sore-zore这句) ~fix!~
01:47:235 (3,4) - 推荐先是往下凹的拖条,再是往上凸的(因为12都是往下凹的) ~fix!~
02:50:281 (5) - CTRL+R,也是跟音高(modo是从低到高) ~fix!~
——我的跟音高拖条习惯,主要集中在重音上面,不过不知道A碳认不认可;_; ~才不会!~表示学习了!~下次我也注意一下@!

For normal, looked through it, but found nothing special~
In fact I think you have got enough mods, just check some sliders' shape and New combo if you like.
It's a reaaaaaaaally good map. Must be ranked soon~! :)
thx! ur mod!~
jesse7419
多了美美的SB 又更讚了
加油!!快rank吧 >w<
cx040156
教练我来了,您的教导真是令我内牛满面感动涕零,我现在就把第一颗星射给你><
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

jesse7419 wrote:

多了美美的SB 又更讚了
加油!!快rank吧 >w<
thx~Star!~


cx040156 wrote:

教练我来了,您的教导真是令我内牛满面感动涕零,我现在就把第一颗星射给你><
。。。。。教练你妹!~aho!~不过~thx star~~~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
SB挺美的0.0
ertyukjh010


Request from Game-pm

[General]

  1. Inconsistency in Tags:
    Happy Birthday! : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
    i_k's Normal : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
    lucyfly's Hard : ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara
    Rainbow's Easy : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
[Rainbow's Easy]

  1. Ar+2
[Layout]
  1. 00:13:485 (3,4) - 疊起來了, 分開它們
  2. 00:54:735 (1) - 同樣是不同顏色重疊,這個節拍比 00:37:391 (1,1) 慢了一倍,新玩家容易混淆它們
  3. 01:02:703 (3,4,1) - ^
  4. 01:26:610 (3) - 距離
  5. 01:34:110 (1) - Ez裡不要用折返兩次以上的滑條,新玩家會miss掉最後一下
  6. 02:11:610 (2) - 向下移動2格 Grid Lv4
  7. 02:20:985 (1) - 它跟 02:19:110 (2) 重疊了
  8. 02:22:391 (2) - 重疊在 02:20:516 (3) 的位置會比較好
[rhythm]
  1. 01:43:485 (1) - 對我來說 01:43:953 折返比較適合
  2. 01:47:235 (3) - ^
  3. 01:50:985 (1,1) - 組合成1個轉盤,因為第2個轉盤長度太短,不合符標準
  4. 02:24:735 (1) - 同樣地在 02:25:203 折返
  5. 02:51:922 (5) - 在 02:52:391 折返
  6. 02:54:735 (1) - 在 02:55:203 或者 02:55:672 結束,不然不合符Voice
  7. 03:08:797 (2) - 03:09:266 折返;我不懂為甚麼要Easy用藍線,既不合Voice也不合難度要求
  8. 03:15:360 (1) - 跟著"Yo~~" 所以結束在 03:20:985
  9. 03:47:235 (1) - 同樣地 03:46:531 開始比較適合
  10. 04:22:860 (1) - 對我來說 04:26:610 結束會比較好,只是這會浪費了 04:24:735 這個Finish;我的做法會刪掉這個轉盤,用Note、Sliider取替,然後到 04:24:735 之後繼續做下去 :)
[Hitsound]
  1. 01:24:735 (1) - Finish代替;就像您的 02:49:110 這樣
  2. 04:05:985 (1) - ^
要吃午餐去, 而且還有GD趕著做QQ
所以只是很隨便mod了~ That all :)
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