some random checks.
[SB]
04:05:985 - 直接flash出來多好
[Rainbow]
00:10:906 (3,1) - actually this rhyme not fit in a easy diff.
00:13:485 (3,4) - about this?
00:37:391 (1,1) - nc not a good choice
00:37:860 (1,2) - rhyme a little rapid not like the next pattern
00:57:547 - add a note really fit
01:24:735 (1,2,3) - why (1) and (2) is 1.0 but (2) and (3) is 0.7 dis
01:26:610 (3,4,1) - consider to stack them
01:37:156 (3) - according to your patterns I think it may put at 01:37:391 -
01:41:610 (3) - nazi mod
01:43:485 (1) - not fit
03:03:172 (1,2) - not good for noob
break time not feels very good...but it depends on you
[IK]
00:51:453 (1) - spinner a little short....um...but ok here
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - place not very beauty to see..consider it's place?
03:15:360 (2) - make it symmetrical.
[hard]
你不覺得太跳了么
00:37:860 (3) - 尼瑪sv
懶得看的大概應該是感覺不飽滿感
[I]
00:07:860 (1,2) - 對稱放多好看現在真心搓
01:31:063 - 倒是沒覺得這三連意義很大
01:31:297 (1,2,3) - 以後注意下design現在擺放真心不好看
01:49:110 - 這段還是填充點3/4更符合rhyme
02:16:766 - 這個五連感覺是硬塞進去的
02:21:922 (2) - 往上拉幾個grid可以更好看
02:35:047 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這兩串沒看出感覺
後面偷懶了大概就是對rhyme還是有些掌握不夠不過作為新手很好了
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