Kawayi Rika wrote:

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[D.N. Angel]

1. 01:12:301 (3) - Stack on 01:12:515 (4) - start point,flow much better.
   //唔，改成這樣的話，我怕在連續跳躍時突然的1/1的急停會導致玩家按快了
   後來我發現01:12:301 (3,4)的間距過大，而且flow不是很好，所以我把01:12:515 (4)轉向，然後把角度略作調整

1. You really should get a better quality picture..

1. You've got a whole bunch of inherited timing points that are unsnapped. Because of this, I'm unsure whether or not you've missed any hitsounds anywhere, so snap them and give a recheck for hitsounds.
2. 00:58:158 (3) - Feels awkward in that this motion starting from 00:55:801 (1) - is all counter clockwise, then you've got this going in the other direction. I would Reverse this and reposition for spacing.
3. 01:09:408 (7) - As I mentioned in my first post, the stream is unevenly spaced here. For this object, Prev: 1.00x and Next: 0.80x. Easy fix.
4. 01:14:444 (1) - A 3.15x jump out of nowhere is asking a bit too much.
5. 01:24:515 (3) - Whistle on slider end since you've got one at 01:27:944 (6) - .
6. 01:29:658 (4) - What is this being mapped to? The music ends at 01:29:872 - and not 01:30:087 -

1. 00:55:801 (1) - Starting from this kiai section, your use of S:C2 clap and finish appears to be random. I can't make out any pattern this is following, but if you are, please enlighten me (and everyone else).
2. 01:29:658 (4) - What is this being mapped to? The music ends at 01:29:872 - and not 01:30:087 -

1. 00:00:944 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - This should follow the (xx xxxx) pattern you've got going.

1. 00:22:372 (1) - This new combo doesn't really make sense. You should either start combo at 00:20:872 (2) - for "nanka" or 00:21:944 (4) - first possible downbeat after.
2. 00:28:372 (1,2) - Were these two meant to be not parallel? You've got 00:29:872 (2,3) - and 00:30:944 (5,2) - as rotation patterns, so it may be better for this to be, as well.
3. 00:37:372 (5) - Anchor this slider at 00:37:587 - to match the music best. Something like this: http://puu.sh/yHyV
4. 01:16:372 (2) - New combo here instead of 01:16:158 (1) - to start new measure and "oshiete".

1. 00:12:944 (1) - This would be best if it was a continuation of the slider patterns before. A random spinner here when the music is still in the intro and doesn't change doesn't match. Compared to Easy, this is very unfitting; you can tell the spinner in Easy is wrapping up the intro because the 1/3 melody is very obvious.

those wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

1. 00:55:801 (1) - Starting from this kiai section, your use of S:C2 clap and finish appears to be random. I can't make out any pattern this is following, but if you are, please enlighten me (and everyone else).
   00:55:801 ~ 01:07:801 is consistent with 01:09:087 ~ 01:20:015,and I think that is good for me
   
2. 01:29:658 (4) - What is this being mapped to? The music ends at 01:29:872 - and not 01:30:087 -
   I just want to be consistent with Insane diff
   waiting for a reply from merchat7,then I decide to whether I fix it

those wrote:

Remember to tell me which mods you applied and which you rejected, along with the reason for rejecting them! Well my english sucks, but will try to do this.


[Sawa's Hard]

1. 00:22:372 (1) - This new combo doesn't really make sense. You should either start combo at 00:20:872 (2) - for "nanka" or 00:21:944 (4) - first possible downbeat after. Don't agree with this, make sense for me because i'm focusing in the instrumental here.
2. 00:28:372 (1,2) - Were these two meant to be not parallel? You've got 00:29:872 (2,3) - and 00:30:944 (5,2) - as rotation patterns, so it may be better for this to be, as well. I think not, i do not think a good idea to do this here. To be honest, when I was starting this diff, I thought about doing that but the spacing and test play was pretty weird, so I will not change that.
3. 00:37:372 (5) - Anchor this slider at 00:37:587 - to match the music best. Something like this: http://puu.sh/yHyV Ugly slider for me, so no i will not change slider shape
4. 01:16:372 (2) - New combo here instead of 01:16:158 (1) - to start new measure and "oshiete". Seems good, fixed.

DarknessAngel wrote:

00:55:801 ~ 01:07:801 is consistent with 01:09:087 ~ 01:20:015,and I think that is good for me

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Ugly slider for me, so no i will not change slider shape

merchat7 wrote:

The place you mention is, my best way to describe it, last place where I can put a hit circle. But listen to the music, there is still sound playing after where you mention. The place where the slider end is where the music completely stop. So two reasons here. Weird to not have anything follow the sound that play after the part you mention to me and due to how the song suddenly cut out. I consider this effect strong enough to warrant something to mark it like the end of this slider here.

DarknessAngel wrote:

"It's good for me,I like the pattern"
Is that ok ? :\

those wrote:

The slider I suggested was only an example. However, your anchor should go at the time I suggested, instead of in the middle of nowhere that's not being mapped to the music.

1. 00:20:015 (7,1) - Switch new comboes please for consistencies.
2. 00:37:372 (5,7) - Why the clap on these note suddenly missing. Please add clap at 5 start and also 7 too.
3. 00:45:087 (1,2) - Switch new comboes too here please. Doesn't consistant.
4. 01:21:730 (7,1) - ^
5. 01:22:587 (4) - Remove the whistle at this slider end please. Doesn't sounds good if you join whistle and clap together at this point.
6. 01:23:230- Very low finish sounds for chorus closing. It's not good imo. Try increasing the volume here by 20%.

1. 00:41:444 (5) - Hmm, better to change whistle at this slider end to clap. Sounds more good to me.
2. 00:43:372 (4) - Clap at thi slider end is really odd. Better just remove it.
3. 01:22:372 (6) - Same, it's better to change whistle here at the start into clap.
4. 01:33:515- I think you should move timing point here to 01:33:408- instead to have 5% volume takes effect.

log

19:48 <merchat7> : hey miya, do you accept rebubble request? Self pop a bubble, but can't get any mats to recheck it
19:49 <Miya> : umm, what's wrong?
19:49 <merchat7> : hmm those modded this, however he will not recheck because he disargree with sometihng from guest diff, and kawaki rika won't recheck
19:49 <merchat7> : because of those
19:50 <Miya> : hmm, which map?
19:50 *merchat7 is listening to (Marika - Knowing (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48552]
19:50 <Miya> :
19:51 <Miya> : oh ok, let's see
19:51 <Miya> : redling
19:51 <merchat7> : irc mod?
19:51 <Miya> : sure if you want
19:52 <merchat7> : oh ok, but I"ll only fix stuff for my diff, for the guest, post in thread
19:52 <Miya> : yup :3
19:52 <Miya> : umm
19:53 <Miya> : first, taiko doesn't need refountain on kiai
19:53 <Miya> : just make 1 long kiai
19:53 <merchat7> : hm, not 100% sure about this
19:54 <Miya> : p/1521142
19:54 <Miya> : >.<
19:54 <merchat7> : hmm, just saying because I got wmfchris for exmaple to mod the taiko already
19:54 <merchat7> : and didn't mention this :S
19:55 <Miya> : it doesn't hurt to make kiai on taiko 1 long kiai
19:55 <merchat7> : kayesara is online I'll ask
19:55 <Miya> : ok
19:56 <merchat7> : well feel free to continue modding, I'll tell you when I get a reponse
20:00 <merchat7> : ok kayesara it's fine to change it so I will fix this
20:00 <merchat7> : said*
20:00 <Miya> : ok
20:05 <Miya> : in easy
20:05 <Miya> : 00:21:515 (1) - how about adding a whistle on this slider end?
20:05 <Miya> : i think it's consistant whistle at 00:18:730 (2) - start
20:06 <merchat7> : hmm tihnking about this, because listen to end of 00:23:230 (3) - I feel the end of this slider is more deserving for whistle
20:07 <merchat7> : bit becasuse of the guitar but the other sound
20:07 <merchat7> : that laos appear at the begin of that slider
20:07 <merchat7> : also*
20:07 <merchat7> : not*
20:07 <merchat7> : too many typos today bit = not
20:08 <Miya> : hmm, i think the whistle become more consistant if you do this, but it's up to you, not something major
20:09 <merchat7> : hm I'll think about it for a bit
20:12 <Miya> : umm, easy is fine
20:12 <Miya> : just it >.<
20:13 <Miya> : on normal
20:13 <merchat7> : hmm, actually I"m consider putting whistle at end of 00:16:372 (2) - for consistency with that pattern
20:13 <Miya> : 00:38:015- i think it's more good if you add a note here since it will become consistant with 00:35:230 (1,2,3) -
20:14 <Miya> : also, it's sounds good to the music imo ^
20:14 <merchat7> : hmm I actually want to avoid using too many 1/2 but let me see
20:14 <merchat7> : can you suggestion a rhythm?
20:15 <merchat7> : suggest*
20:15 <Miya> : like this? > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341776
20:15 <Miya> : i think it's not problem if you add 1 more 1/2 to this diff
20:17 <merchat7> : I want to keep the hit circle for the Zut-to , you click once for the zut and once for to, but wait I'll try something
20:19 <merchat7> : two short sliders instead of the repeating slider is ok?
20:19 <merchat7> : http://puu.sh/ASbp
20:20 <Miya> : yup it's fine
20:20 <Miya> : but let me take a look on it
20:20 <Miya> : i want to know the pattern too
20:20 <merchat7> : lol ok really simple http://puu.sh/AScf
20:21 <Miya> : hmm, ok it's good :3
20:21 <merchat7> :
20:23 <Miya> : hmm
20:23 <Miya> : i'm not sure about taiko
20:23 <merchat7> : hm?
20:25 <Miya> : let me ask someone >.<
20:25 <merchat7> : k
20:29 <Miya> : ok, taiko is fine >.<
20:30 <merchat7> : k
21:05 <Miya> : merchat
21:05 <merchat7> : ?
21:05 <Miya> : on insane, how about adding whistle at this slider start 00:26:444 (6) - ?
21:05 <Miya> : feel empty
21:06 <merchat7> : hmm this was intentional, notice I didn't do jump here, wait I"ll look for the reason in one of my replies to a mod post
21:07 <Miya> : 00:44:230 (6,7) -
21:07 <Miya> : orz
21:07 <Miya> : didn't expect this to be 1/2
21:07 <Miya> : i thought it is 1/1 D:
21:08 <merchat7> : hmm
21:08 <Miya> : use 1.2 spacing please merchat
21:08 <merchat7> : what do you suggest?
21:08 <merchat7> : hm lemme test this quickly
21:08 <merchat7> : ok done
21:11 <Miya> : 01:20:658 (1) - i recommend to change combo color to yellow for better readability
21:11 <Miya> : it's quite hard to see if you use dark blue combo color
21:12 <merchat7> : background is quite bright / light here, I think they constrast well
21:12 <merchat7> : background + video *
21:12 <Miya> : but it's very blend with the vid
21:13 <merchat7> : because the image here is the same as the background almost
21:13 <Miya> : it's doesn't hard to just change combo color >.<
21:13 <merchat7> : hmmm, but I think yellow bledns more :/
21:13 <merchat7> : because of what I mention, light color with light image
21:14 <Miya> : nah it's better for reading this note 01:20:872 (2) -
21:14 <Miya> : because the color blend with slider 01:20:230 (5) -
21:14 <Miya> : and the approach circle is dark, makes it quite hard to see
21:15 <merchat7> : ah I see, that reason I understand
21:17 <Miya> : hmm
21:17 <Miya> : that's it >.<

Miya wrote:

[b]D.N.Angel

1. 00:41:444 (5) - Hmm, better to change whistle at this slider end to clap. Sounds more good to me. //ok
2. 00:43:372 (4) - Clap at thi slider end is really odd. Better just remove it. //hmm... I changed to whistle
3. 01:22:372 (6) - Same, it's better to change whistle here at the start into clap. //3 claps are odd for me ><
4. 01:33:515- I think you should move timing point here to 01:33:408- instead to have 5% volume takes effect. // !! yeah you're right lol

Miya wrote:

recheck asked by merchat >.<

Sawa's Hard

1. 00:20:015 (7,1) - Switch new comboes please for consistencies. Removed NC in (1) and added NC in 00:20:872
2. 00:37:372 (5,7) - Why the clap on these note suddenly missing. Please add clap at 5 start and also 7 too. Okay
3. 00:45:087 (1,2) - Switch new comboes too here please. Doesn't consistant. Okay
4. 01:21:730 (7,1) - ^ ^
5. 01:22:587 (4) - Remove the whistle at this slider end please. Doesn't sounds good if you join whistle and clap together at this point.
6. 01:23:230- Very low finish sounds for chorus closing. It's not good imo. Try increasing the volume here by 20%.

DarknessAngel wrote:

I have never seen those rebubble any maps ...

merchat7 wrote:

@DarknessAngel
Your rar file has the old background in it, not sure what you want me to do with it.

1. 00:38:658 (1) - Please move this somewhere else. The hitburst from 00:37:372 (4) - is covering 00:38:658 (1) - start. This can cause normal player to confuse and ended miss at that note. Why not trying new pattern like this > http://puu.sh/Bvqf ? It's more readable and easier to play.

1. 00:26:444 (6) - Whistle at the start? I think it's more good and consistant.
2. 00:37:587 (4) - This slider almost touch the edge of the screen. The hitburst is cutted partly because of this. Please move this slider a bit up.

Miya wrote:

Insane

1. 00:26:444 (6) - Whistle at the start? I think it's more good and consistant. Already mention in irc why I didn't change. Recap of reason. I put whistle here 00:16:158 (4) because I have a certain pattern I want to do. I find it weird to play a big jump without hitsound thus the hitsound on it. Since this part, I don't have any particular jump pattern I want to do, plus I feel the singing here become a bit calmer (don't feel jump fit as much) I decide to do this. I feel that whistle fit best at 00:26:658, but no note there.
2. 00:37:587 (4) - This slider almost touch the edge of the screen. The hitburst is cutted partly because of this. Please move this slider a bit up. Move up a bit