Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size)‬ · forum‬

Virrus

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Virrus 2012-04-23T11:20:45+00:00

Hi
00:27:766- whistle? (Only for the end of the slider)
00:29:883- whistle? (Only for the end of the slider)
00:31:985- whistle? (Only for the start of the slider)
00:34:080- whistle? (Only for the end of the slider)
00:36:185- whistle?
00:38:310- whistle?
00:44:082- Add reverse slider? (Although, any is fine)

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-23T11:35:12+00:00

for what diff your is your mod?

@baka HeatKai : you told that someone will ask a taiko diff.. lol, so its you. Okay,if it is what you want

Yasora

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Yasora 2012-04-23T14:58:36+00:00

mbak miya \:D/

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-23T16:20:07+00:00

Yasora :3

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2012-04-25T11:43:31+00:00

done!

I will make the taiko bg later

Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (Miya) [HeatKai's Taiko].osu

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-25T12:42:56+00:00

ok, thank you HeatKai

ertyukjh010

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ertyukjh010 2012-04-25T16:14:54+00:00

Hello,

[General]

Inconsistency Lead-In. Change it to 1500 of taiko diff.

[Easy]

01:22:509 (3) - Unsnap
01:23:035 (1) - Unsnap at Slider and end
01:24:614 (2) - Unsnap
01:25:140 (3) - Unsnap
01:25:272 (1) - Unsnap at Slider and end

[Normal]

Fine

[Hard]

Okay

that all

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-25T16:46:59+00:00

oh god, i didn't notice that unsnapped note. Thank you for the mod and the star (i didn't notice it before, orz)

suzutsukikanade

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suzutsukikanade 2012-04-26T01:07:25+00:00

Star, i love this music

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-26T04:38:05+00:00

thank you for the star

regenz

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regenz 2012-04-26T21:01:58+00:00

This is very nice clam song

General
use soft-sliderslide.wav plz

http://puu.sh/rE8S

and Add heatkai to tag?

Easy
Fine

Normal

01:00:922 (2) - whistle like hard?

Hard
Fine

can't point anything much map is close to perfect word for me

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-27T03:41:09+00:00

Thank you so much for the mod and the star

Lol, i'm still forget about the tags, and baka HeatKai didn't mention it too, so i'm double forget.
Fixed all regenz

Starry_old

Starry_old 2012-04-27T05:12:50+00:00

[Easy]

00:59:870 (1) - I suggest you curve this. http://puu.sh/rI9m
01:04:080 (3) - Can you whistle the beginning?
01:06:186 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:28:817 (5) - Remove new combo
00:29:870 (1) - Put it here.
01:03:554 (4) - Same as in Easy
01:06:186 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:40:922 (6) - Do you mind putting this below the note before to keep the rhythm consistent?
01:03:554 (4) - Same as in Easy
01:06:186 (1) - ^
01:23:554 (5) - New Combo

Good map.
Good luck on rank

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2012-04-27T07:37:31+00:00

Miya wrote:
Thank you so much for the mod and the star
Lol, i'm still forget about the tags, and baka HeatKai didn't mention it too, so i'm double forget.
Fixed all regenz

wahahaha I forgot too, sorry!

EDIT: I fix something!

Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (Miya) [HeatKai's Taiko].osu

Last edited by HeatKai 2012-04-27T07:55:08+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-04-27T07:43:01+00:00

hi

[Easy]
the current SV is 0.900000005960464, fixed it plz~
00:43:028 (5,1) - switch newcombos
00:45:133 (2) - add newcombo

[Hard]
00:09:344 ~ 00:26:186 - volume is too loud imo, use 50% plz (all diffs)
00:41:186 - add a note here
00:41:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase volume step by step?
01:18:422 - add a note?
01:22:501 (4) - this finish doesnt fit well imo ><

that's all p_q

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-27T14:28:34+00:00

Thank you for the mod Melo, Starry. Fixed some :3
And uploaded HeatKai update too!

JauiPlaY

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JauiPlaY 2012-04-28T04:22:00+00:00

Hi.
Some suggestions:

[General]
Seems fine.

[Easy]
00:46:186 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:15:133 (1,2) - Change those whistles into claps.

[Normal]
01:00:922 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:17:765 (1,2) - Remove claps from (1)'s beginning and (2), add clap to (1)'s end.

[Hard]
00:13:817 (1) - Remove this one could be better...for me.
00:40:133 (4) - Ctrl+R could make this more interesting.
00:59:870 - Move the timing point to 01:01:844.
01:04:344 (1) - Make it a circle and move to 01:04:607.
01:13:817 - Add a note.

Smooth map, can't find major problems.
Good luck.

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-28T04:39:55+00:00

Thank you for your mod JauiPlaY. Fixed some

Kuria

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Kuria 2012-04-28T05:32:14+00:00

Coming here from here
hope i can found something here^^

General:
looks fine here and there, just some suggestion.
Ini think it will be ok if you set the AudioLeadIn for 1000 instead of 1500 on all diff (especially easy and normal), since the intro are just begin on 00:00:923, and it was quite long for the player to prepare before play

Easy:
looks fine here and there too, so i just give some fix for a small parts
00:38:817 (1,2,3) - move (3) above a bit, the problem is the position of (2) to (3) are kinda too narrow since you suddenly must move your movement back after moving straight, and this is kinda hard for some kind of player (back jump? if i'm not wrong).
it should be looks like this later:

SPOILER

01:17:765 (1) - make this a normal curved slider instead of custom curved? it seems that the pattern kinda off if you make it that way
01:25:133 (3) - same with what i mention above, i think move this to up a bit would be better since for the newbie player, a kind of back jump/tapping are kinda hard to play.

SPOILER

Normal:
00:09:344 (1) - make this into fixed curved like 00:10:396 (2)? The pattern are kinda off on that part/whole map since only that slider have a different shape compared with others
00:15:659 (3) - make it less curving? so it will be looks more to wide V than tight V
01:18:554 (2,3) - move this 2 down a bit, make the (3) on a symmetrical position with (1) and place (2) right on the middle of that 2 slider, it can make the pattern flow better, it should be looks like this:

SPOILER

Hard:
nice :3

sorry can't mod taiko since i'm not understand taiko orz

i think that's all, good luck Miya!
here's a star, as promised^^

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-04-28T05:51:26+00:00

Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
+500 ~ 1000 lead-in

00:00:396 - kkd here (remove the d at the beginning) sounds more natrual
00:06:975 (22) - I don't see the reason to put finish here orz
00:40:396 - K
00:46:975 - k d?
01:25:133 - try to make the spinner softer.

I appreciate pretty much how you put the patterns and dd---------k / dd---d---k are nice idea.
The biggest problem is you'll need a taiko BG seriously >: 3 recently the head of the character in the BG is "cut" by the taiko playing bar.

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-28T06:02:18+00:00

@Envi : Thank you for your mod and star. Well, suggestion for your next mod. Don't often do nazi mod. Many people don't like nazi mod, unless you notice some pattern that break map aesthetical. Search for another thing, like hitsound, flow, spacing, general thing, etc.

@wmf : thank you for your taiko mod. Waiting for HeatKai response. About bg, HeatKai said he will make it, but he not make it until now. =3=

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2012-04-28T06:59:39+00:00

Miya wrote:
@wmf : thank you for your taiko mod. Waiting for HeatKai response. About bg, HeatKai said he will make it, but he not make it until now. =3=

hehe sorry :p
I'll get to it soon!

ryuu

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ryuu 2012-04-28T09:27:47+00:00

hi ~
from our queue.

[Easy]

00:19:344 (2) - maybe this?
00:21:975 (4) - 1 grid left => 00:22:501 (1) - too
00:55:659 (1) - maybe this?

[Normal]

00:55:659 (4) - put on the middle?

[Hard]

00:46:449 (4,5) - put on the middle?

nyan.
very good and cute map ~
star and good luck :3

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-28T09:47:33+00:00

thank you for your mod and star ryu :3
fixed some of your mod~

hillaryzx

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hillaryzx 2012-04-28T11:14:19+00:00

Hello, start greeting with nyan~ :3

General

- nothing to say, skip this...

Easy

00:09:344(1) - moved this circle to 00:09:607?
00:41:975(4) - ok, this will be long. First, delete this note from here. Then make a slider starting from 00:41:449 to 00:42:501
01:17:765(1) - remove clap here and replace it with whistle. It should be better.

Normal

Maybe AR -1?
00:14:607(2) - I don't think repeated slider suits here. Just a normal slider would Ok.

Hard

00:16:449(2) - remove this circle?

For taiko diff., I'm sorry to say but I not an expert in taiko mod T.T

anyway, good map you have, Miya...
well, I'll take my leave...

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2012-04-29T03:09:35+00:00

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.

[General]
replace the red combo color for a sky blue combo color. the sky blue combo color fits with the song as she's singing about if she'll be loved by someone which is a sad thing.

[Easy]
00:26:712 (1) - hmm how about flipping it like this? as it stands the path would be hard for beginners to get to the next note. doing this makes it easier for beginners.
00:34:607 (1) - a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume. i think a finish here fits with the song.
00:45:133 (3) - maybe make this a NC because the lyrics change?
00:49:344 (3) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals. if you say it's too loud, add a green line to reduce the volume of the finish.
01:10:396 (1) - same as above but replace the whistle for a finish. if you ignore this, then add a finish with the whistle.
01:25:265 (1) - space out this spinner because this might surprise beginners.

[Normal]
try a slider tick rate of 2? i think it flows to the song as there some ticks that follow vocals and instrumental.
00:09:344 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning and reduce the volume to 20% to match the piano?
00:17:765 (5) - ^
00:33:028 (1) - remove the NC because the lyrics are still going.
00:34:607 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, make this a NC because of new lyrics.
01:09:870 (1) - add a finish at the end. it feels empty without a finish and it matches with the vocals.
01:25:265 (1) - same as easy.

[Hard]
here too. try a slider tick rate of 2? same reason as before.
00:43:028 (7) - align this to (5) so that (4-7) is shaped like a diamond.
00:43:554 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this? i see that it's a triangle, but IMO the last note looks like it's just placed there. i think doing this make it a fun and a gives a nice challenge for players.
00:57:765 (6) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:23:554 (5) - make this a NC because the lyrics change.

i guess that's it. Star and GL

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2012-04-29T05:20:42+00:00

ahhh the background =w= I forgot again

Download: Nazuka Kaori - Nageki no Tenshi (TV Size) (Miya) [HeatKai's Taiko].osu

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-29T05:38:42+00:00

Thank you for the mod guys and the star 249

Fixed some of the mod :3

lol, you forgot again about bg, baka HeatKai

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2012-04-29T05:48:00+00:00

jeng jeng >:3

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-29T05:52:02+00:00

yay +8, please ask some MAT HeatKai

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2012-04-29T05:54:03+00:00

Miya wrote:
yay +8, please ask some MAT HeatKai

I will try but isn't it too fast? XD
later got some people angry or something =w= wait 2 more days ok ;p ?

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-29T05:55:53+00:00

ok ok, no need to rush :3

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2012-04-29T06:00:54+00:00

here

remove video from taiko x)

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-29T06:52:21+00:00

of course, thank you HeatKai

Nichiyouki

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Nichiyouki 2012-04-29T21:52:35+00:00

Hi, Miya

My mod from request

General

Nothing

Easy

00:55:659 (1,2) - Move 2nd point of (1) to down 3 grids, and move (2) to right 1 grid, will be more beautiful.

Normal

00:50:396 (1,2,3) - Move (1,2) to up 2 grids, and move (3) to left and up 1 grid.

Hard

00:02:238 (3,5) - Move (3) to right and down 1 grid, and move (5) to up and right 1 grid.

That's all, that I can find them.
nice song and map.

Good luck~

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-30T02:46:32+00:00

Thank you for mentioning the minor stuff. Fixed them all

Mystica

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Mystica 2012-04-30T02:54:31+00:00

here comes my mod.

[Easy]
01:15:133 (1,2) - clap also on this two?
01:25:265 (1) - consider to reduce the volume not just from the beginning (all diff

[Normal]
01:18:817 (3) - about clap on the beginning?

[Hard]
00:23:291 (3) - whistle at end
00:23:817 (4) - ^

Good map XD

Miya

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Miya 2012-04-30T03:07:09+00:00

Thank you for the mod, fixed some

Backstep

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Backstep 2012-05-01T08:31:47+00:00

from Bakastep's modding queue. >3

Easy

01:15:133 (1,2) - Remove whistle. (For same Hard difficulty)

Normal

01:15:133 (1,2) - Remove whistle. (Same above)

Hard

00:12:765 (x) - Add note here ?
00:58:817 (2) - 1 grid right.
01:00:396 (1) - Remove whistle.
01:01:186 (4) - ^

HeatKai's Taiko Oni

00:40:922 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - ddkdkkk

I suggest you should use only one sound for one note. (When I listen, I feel weird.)

Good luck Miya

Miya

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Miya 2012-05-01T09:15:23+00:00

Thank you for the mod bakastep

Fixed some~

a32

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a32 2012-05-01T09:48:50+00:00

Hi~

[General]
Nothing found~
[Easy]
Also nothing~
[Normal]
00:28:817(1,2,3,4) - put them like this may make more sense?

[Hard]
00:32:238(6) - add a reverse here?
00:35:396(2) - add a whistle?
00:50:396(4) - ^
00:54:870(4) - ^
Well...Nice map~I can't find many things.I think you may use more whistle to make the hitsound much interesting~Good luck to you~

Miya

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Miya 2012-05-01T13:15:49+00:00

sorry, but i'm not fan of mixing clap and whistle. >.<
Thank you for your mod~

Leorda

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Leorda 2012-05-03T15:35:11+00:00

Hey

[Easy]
00:45:133 (3) - New combo?

[Normal]
00:49:344 (5,1) - Swap new combo?

That's all I got orz

Miya

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Miya 2012-05-03T15:38:26+00:00

Thank you for the mod leo. Fixed all.

S o r d a

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S o r d a 2012-05-04T08:44:22+00:00

request from queue

[overall]:

Nothing wrong here.

[Hard]:

00:05:133 (4) - whistle
00:24:607 (1) - ^
01:10:396 (3) - finish

[Normal]:

00:05:133 (1) - beginning whistle
01:09:870 (1) - end finish

[Easy]:

Fine

Over all nice map
Nothing find problem
Good luck ranked soon

Miya

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Miya 2012-05-04T09:04:23+00:00

Thank you for the mod.

I think this map is really ready for a MAT check >.<

kosiga

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kosiga 2012-05-04T11:43:00+00:00

hi Miya :3

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

fine

[Easy]

00:25:133 (4) - add clap instead to whistle to start of the slider. I thought that clap matched than a whistle here as other diff
00:43:554 (2) - add whistle instead to clap to end of the slider. i prefer whistle here like other diff :3
01:13:554 (4) - my suggestion form pattern: http://puu.sh/sRnJ code↓
```
256,176,73554,2,0,B|276:220|256:264|236:308|256:352,1,180,2|0
```

[Normal]

01:00:922 (2) - one gird left. (little nazi) Symmetric form.
01:11:975 (1) - remove NC ( short NC ) Is this intentional?

others fine. but only this diff 00:09:344~00:26:186 - Placement of the whistle is different from the other diff. Is this intentional o.o?

[Hard]

00:05:659 (1,4) - one grid left. Symmetric form.
00:24:607 (1) - add whistle ?
00:25:396 (4,5) - one grid left and down. ( nazi ) Square form
00:41:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - my suggest hitsound pattern ↓
00:41:449 (1,3,4,6) - none. 00:41:712 (2) - whistle. 00:42:501 (5) - clap
01:23:554 (5) - add NC ?

only nazi mod ..orz
Please do not throw kudosu Unless you want to change

Good map & Star ☆~

Good luck~

Miya

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Miya 2012-05-04T12:41:30+00:00

thank you for the mod and the star kosiga

fixed some~

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2012-05-05T09:11:18+00:00

/Queue

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

[General]

Clean

[Easy]

00:34:607 (1,3) - hmm, try add whistle on both head of the sliders
00:38:817 (1) - ^

[Normal]

hmmm, suggest Circle Size-1

Nothing really to poke at

[Hard]

Nothing really need to mention.

Hmm nice mapset! Don't need to kd me cuz I didn't find something useful :<

Good Luck!

Miya

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Miya 2012-05-07T16:16:06+00:00

orz, i didn't realize there was a mod in this 2 days >.<
Thank you for the mod, fixed some~

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2012-05-12T04:14:57+00:00

From my queue.

[Normal]
00:50:922 (4) - (nazi) Move one grid right. (Sorry but it really took my attention xD)

[HeatKai's Taiko]
01:01:975 () - Remove the refountain here, and make the kiai just one whole.

Good map! That's all. Contact me for a recheck afterwards.
No kd for this.

Miya

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Miya 2012-05-12T04:24:54+00:00

fixed all >.<
really no kd?
thank you for modding, and i well contact you soon

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2012-05-12T04:26:48+00:00

Bubbled. Good luck!

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2012-05-21T08:23:56+00:00

Hard
HP+1

Timing

It's kinda fun story, timing was checked by me, Niva, kioukiou, Star Stream and Miya as creator
After some simple arithmetic actions... was decided to leave timing as is, cuz testers got (+..ms) and (-..ms).

Edit : Ranked~

Miya

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Miya 2012-05-21T09:51:31+00:00

Fixed the hp drain :3

Aaaa, thank you very much Aleks xD

SciSSorS_old

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SciSSorS_old 2012-05-21T10:01:24+00:00

Congratulations!