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ertyukjh010

SkyDevil wrote:

Heres my moddd :3

Easy
00:24:450 I think it sounds great if you use finish hitsound at the whole slider :3 Done

Insane
00:59:450 Definitly way too huge spacing XD I will consider
Thank you :)
Ulysses

SkyDevil wrote:

Nllod's Wings
00:19:867 I think this part kinda looks odd :< Change it? C: :arrow: :D My style is odd.
00:52:992 No new combo needed :3 :arrow: New slider speed change,therefore put NC
01:14:034 Put some spacing here :arrow: Still readable and good
NO Change
MoodyRPG
WUT?

General
  • • Inconsistency in Kiai Times if you can see here:


Easy
  • - 00:41:950 (3) - New combo to follow the music?
    - 00:50:284 (1) - Considered to move this spinner to 1/2 in my opinion,looks nice
Barry
  • -- Looks great
Nlold
  • -- Add a kiai here 00:53:617 for being consistent with the other diffs?
Taiko
  • -- Looks nice but you have a unsnapped section here 00:53:623,resnap then
Insane
  • - 00:27:784 (1) - Remove new combo like you did it here 00:29:450
Saya
  • - 00:25:284 (4) - New combo to follow your pattern
So i'm done with this good luck
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

MoodyRPG wrote:

General
  • • Inconsistency in Kiai Times if you can see here: Nold don't want to change :<
Easy
  • - 00:41:950 (3) - New combo to follow the music? Done
    - 00:50:284 (1) - Considered to move this spinner to 1/2 in my opinion,looks nice X
Insane
  • - 00:27:784 (1) - Remove new combo like you did it here 00:29:450 1 Distance 1 Color
Thank you for your modding
Ulysses
No Long Kiai Time In My Diffculty!
Saya-Honmei_old
只做前兩個mod orz 明天交可以嗎orz..

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [Saya].osu
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
已上傳:3
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions & nazi mod:

[Normal]

01:07:575 (2) - 感觉最好这里有个note

[Nlold's Wings]

00:47:992 (5,6,7) - nazi -往右移一格
01:12:783 (2,3,4,5,1) - 五边形有点歪,(3)和两边都有重合,其他地方却没有

[Saya]

00:12:783 (2,3,4,5,1) - 排成正五边形?
01:00:700 (2,3,4) - 这个三连移到(1)的后面?

[Insane]

00:26:117 (1,2,3,4) - 不是正方形(只是提醒一下)
00:27:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:34:450 (2,3) - 我觉得平行比较好
00:56:742 (5,1) - 包围得不是很好
01:03:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 连着用同一个梗,并且附近都是circle的梗显得有些单调,我觉得重复2次足够了。
01:18:617 (1,2,3,4) - 故意不做成正方形的吗?
01:23:617 (1) - 变音量没必要吧。。直接消声就好了

GL~
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions & nazi mod:

[Insane]

00:26:117 (1,2,3,4) - 不是正方形(只是提醒一下) 已修正成正方形,謝謝指出:3
00:27:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:34:450 (2,3) - 我觉得平行比较好 Done
00:56:742 (5,1) - 包围得不是很好 orz
01:03:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 连着用同一个梗,并且附近都是circle的梗显得有些单调,我觉得重复2次足够了。 Done
01:18:617 (1,2,3,4) - 故意不做成正方形的吗? Done
01:23:617 (1) - 变音量没必要吧。。直接消声就好了 既然做了就沒差:3

GL~
謝謝mod :)
Ulysses
All fixed
Saya-Honmei_old
MOD累積太多 我就不一一回覆了>< 感謝各位MOD 以上除了HP AR OD 等難度沒變 其他都照MOD的改了

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [Saya].osu
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ertyukjh010
已上傳
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ has per your requeue ~ only check Hard diff.

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]


  1. 00:41:534 - Add clap.
  2. 00:43:200 - ^
  3. 00:44:867 - ^
  4. 01:05:908 (4,5,6,7,8) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.

That's all ~ fight go ranked ~
Verdisphena
Insane

00:40:284 (1,2,3) - Follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/mfZO also add a note in 00:40:075 -
01:01:950 (1,2) - Those sliders doesn't make any sense with the rhythm

Saya

00:27:784 (1) - 1 grid right
X_X

Taiko
HP+1 or OD +1
01:23:513 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:28:617 -

Easy, Normal and Hard are fine
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ has per your requeue ~ only check Hard diff.

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]


  1. 00:41:534 - Add clap. Done
  2. 00:43:200 - ^ Done
  3. 00:44:867 - ^ Done
  4. 01:05:908 (4,5,6,7,8) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better. 不想碰太多藍線,對於Hard

That's all ~ fight go ranked ~
謝謝日卡 :)

Verdisphena wrote:

Insane

00:40:284 (1,2,3) - Follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/mfZO also add a note in 00:40:075 - Done
01:01:950 (1,2) - Those sliders doesn't make any sense with the rhythmDone

Easy, Normal and Hard are fine
Thank you for mod :)
10nya
suggestion ~
[Saya]
- 01:11:950 (5) - add whistle ewe"v
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

vwxcrossover wrote:

suggestion ~
[Saya]
- 01:11:950 (5) - add whistle ewe"v
Thank you for mod :)
Dino99
幫你看了下~~

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:325 - 加個圈?
  2. 00:20:284 ~ 00:25:284 - 感覺在這邊clap就加2.4拍有點太早了>_< 在00:25:284以後加好些@w@
  3. 00:37:784 (5) - 這邊感覺節奏有點怪.. 試試這樣的節奏:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274189
    如果不要的話.. 那也希望能在00:38:409加個圈:3 不然感覺突然停了一下呢~
  4. 00:50:596 - clap
  5. 00:51:429 - ^
  6. 00:52:367 (1,2,3) - 這邊anti-jump間距要不要在小一點試試看? 感覺有點大:3...小點比較有感覺lol 建議0.3~
  7. 01:06:117 (5,6,7,8) - 試試看全加clap~~
  8. 01:08:617 (1) - finish
  9. 01:16:533 (4,5) - 我覺得排成這樣好些:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274183
  10. 01:23:200 (2) - 最後這個我覺得往外比較好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274192
  11. 01:23:409 - finish
加油唄:3
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

12BARRY21 wrote:

幫你看了下~~

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:325 - 加個圈? 空著來作為靜音部份吧:3
  2. 00:20:284 ~ 00:25:284 - 感覺在這邊clap就加2.4拍有點太早了>_< 在00:25:284以後加好些@w@
  3. 00:37:784 (5) - 這邊感覺節奏有點怪.. 試試這樣的節奏:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274189 空著吧
    如果不要的話.. 那也希望能在00:38:409加個圈:3 不然感覺突然停了一下呢~ 漸入減速階段~
  4. 00:50:596 - clap Done
  5. 00:51:429 - ^ Done
  6. 00:52:367 (1,2,3) - 這邊anti-jump間距要不要在小一點試試看? 感覺有點大:3...小點比較有感覺lol 建議0.3~ 嗯,我再後慮看看吧,因為前面是0.5x的說~;第一次做這種減速有點沒經驗:>
  7. 01:06:117 (5,6,7,8) - 試試看全加clap~~ 太吵了XDD 評評評評!!!!
  8. 01:08:617 (1) - finish 跟著第一段一樣沒Finish好了;因為不想太響(其實是以前我亂加Fibnish導致有恐懼症)
  9. 01:16:533 (4,5) - 我覺得排成這樣好些:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274183 Done
  10. 01:23:200 (2) - 最後這個我覺得往外比較好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274192 Done,向左邊吧?上面都碰到生命線了XD
  11. 01:23:409 - finish 真仔細++ Done
加油唄:3
謝謝Barry的Mod ><
wmfchris
[General]
are you sure there's a fullstop after wings?

[Insane]
00:48:617 (1) - slider略醜

[Saya]
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4) - 排列不太好看 orz 不過想不到別的方法

[Taiko]
00:53:617 - start kiai here
01:23:617 - leave 1/2 blank before spinner
* kiai之前一大段感覺overmap 也沒大必要一大堆3連 重複ddk kkd ddk也不太好
* 前面該finish的地方沒有finish
===========================
把[Normal], [Hard]的難度拉低一格吧

*在TWC final期間mod,結果呢個mod仲廢過隻豬 : <
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
are you sure there's a fullstop after wings?
再翻查了一下Wiki,有FullStop沒錯


wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:48:617 (1) - slider略醜 換成對稱吧,這種Slider是我早期比較喜歡畫,現在也覺得很醜Orz

*在TWC final期間mod,結果呢個mod仲廢過隻豬 : < 這對我應該是有利啊:3
謝謝Wmf~ :)
因為沒泡泡所以沒KD
KayeSara
哟 抱歉妹妹,最近事情多啊(好像我每次都是这个理由
反正不管那么多了这改了些

>wmf
改了一些重复性节奏和finish的增加,不过你的mod为什么越来越简单了....

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
姐姐大活躍

慢慢做就好了,我又不急Rank~

謝謝姐姐抽空上來改^^
Jayel
Alright, let's see what I can find.
All suggestion.

[General]
Nothing

[Easy]
Good enough.

[Barry's Normal]
00:16:534(3) - Moving this slider a little up
so that the slider looks colinear with the previous one.
00:22:575(2) - ^
00:31:534(6) - ^
00:45:909(2) - The hitsound of the end point of slider sounds a little weird...

[Hard]
01:05:770(3,4,5,6,7) - Looks a bit confused.... for me.
Nothing else.

[Saya]
Good enough.

[Insane]
00:09:034(1,2,3,4,5) - Put these circles with consistent distance.
Am I the only one who thinks this diff looks easier than "Saya"? :)
Nothing else.

Alright... nothing much to be fixed from me.
Maybe it looks nonchalant.. but that's all. Your map is great.

Alright, thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Jayel wrote:

[Hard]
01:05:770(3,4,5,6,7) - Looks a bit confused.... for me. :3
Nothing else.

[Insane]
00:09:034(1,2,3,4,5) - Put these circles with consistent distance. My mistake
Am I the only one who thinks this diff looks easier than "Saya"? :) I would like to define the same difficulty
Thank you for mod
abalee
[Taiko]
01:23:617 (1) - consider to draw it to 01:28:617 (x) - and silent the end like others'? or it is special for not doing it because it's Taiko? :?

others are fine.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thank you abalee :)

abalee wrote:

[Taiko]
01:23:617 (1) - consider to draw it to 01:28:617 (x) - and silent the end like others'? or it is special for not doing it because it's Taiko? :? Fixed for KS
others are fine.
Thank you again :)
KayeSara
>abalee
Fixed by mapper
Thx for your modding :3
旧电脑把密码找回来了 囧rz
DJPop
~Easy~
00:43:617 (2) - add clap at 00:44:034
00:48:617 (1) - add clap at the end
01:01:950 (2) - remove finish
01:05:283 (2) - ^
01:15:283 (2) - ^

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336

~Hard~
Fine

~Saya~
00:20:284 (3) - add clap at the end

~Insane~
00:20:284 (1) - remove whistle (compared to patterns around)
00:27:992 (2,3) - wrong clap
00:33:617 (1) - remove finish
00:35:284 (1) - ^
00:59:242 (4,5) - swap their positions

~KS's Taiko~
- I don't think speed changes are a good idea (just opinion)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:43:617 (2) - add clap at 00:44:034 done
00:48:617 (1) - add clap at the end done
01:01:950 (2) - remove finish done
01:05:283 (2) - ^ done
01:15:283 (2) - ^ done

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336

~Hard~
Fine

~Saya~
00:20:284 (3) - add clap at the end

~Insane~
00:20:284 (1) - remove whistle (compared to patterns around) done
00:27:992 (2,3) - wrong clap done. My mistake
00:33:617 (1) - remove finish done
00:35:284 (1) - ^ done
00:59:242 (4,5) - swap their positions done, Good job

~KS's Taiko~
- I don't think speed changes are a good idea (just opinion)
Thank you for the mod~ :)
KayeSara
>DJPop
lol........keep it, and add a note to fit the rhythm.
Thanks for your modding :3

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
兩個笨蛋的難度都上傳了 :)
Dino99

DJPop wrote:

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap fixed
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336
Thx mod~~
Sorry I only fix this ><
Because I think the others are fine :>
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Help to fix~
DJPop
Bubble
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thank very much :)
Flask
泡了好快快rank

我都來不及mod QAQ
Makar
You have audio in the video and Kiai is not snapped in KS's Taiko, please fix.

[Easy]
00:43:617 (2) - Not really recommended to use multiple repeats on short sliders like this in an easy.

[Normal]
00:26:117 (2) - Start this slider at 00:25:909 to match the vocals, much like you did here 00:21:950 (1,2) It fits much better imo and plays well for a normal~
00:27:784 (5) - Same thing as mentioned above
00:39:450 (2) - ^
00:42:367 (2,3,4) - I think you should just use 1/1 here. The use of redticks doesn't fit the music imo (doesn't follow anything that I can hear)

[Hard]
00:32:575 (2) - Can you please not stack this under the slider? usually stacks like this indicate 1/4 gaps in timing, so I end up hitting this note early.
Nice Hard~
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
okay I will fixed when Bat come
Megurine Luka
O3O坐等
Colin Hou
popped for:

1.un-muted video
2.un-snapped KIAI section in Taiko diff.

suggestion:

add a blank normal-sliderslide.wav.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Colin Hou wrote:

popped for:

1.un-muted video 嘛,正在找人幫忙處理~
2.un-snapped KIAI section in Taiko diff. Fixed

suggestion:

add a blank normal-sliderslide.wav. Fixed
謝謝CH的mod

都處理再過來密您~
AoiX
http://puu.sh/wv25
done~

EDIT:plz adjust Video offset by yourself
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
感謝AoiX
Flask
Colin Hou快泡

EDIT:還真泡了
Colin Hou
returned
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
謝謝CH
Garven
Yo.

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best (looking at the easy/normal here).

[Easy]
00:24:450 (3,1) - Might be a bit tough for an easy
00:43:617 (2) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on short sliders for an easy diff.
00:50:075 (1) - Start this at 00:50:284 -
01:19:659 (2) - Hrm. I think it would be betterif you deleted 2 and added 1 repeat to 1 and add a note at 01:20:284 -

[Normal]
00:53:617 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal.


[Hard]
00:10:284 (2) - Kind of lame to be on this long slider when the music has changed and has two strong beats while you're just sliding away. AND it ends half a beat late. :/ Change this please.
00:48:617 (1) - I don't understand why you did a slowdown here. You can't see the ticks either. If you -must- have a slowdown, just do .75x
00:52:783 (3) - Remove that extra anchor point please. It's made this into a burai slider.

[Taiko]
01:16:950 - The return to 1x is wierd since the intensity of the song doesn't really change here.

[Saya]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song.
00:49:450 (4,5,6,7) - That's uh, some crazy spacing changes suddenly. Not realy feeling them at this point.
00:50:283 (1,2,3,4) - And why jumps here but not at 00:47:575 (2,3,4) - ? At 50: it's more of a descending phrase anyway - I don't understand why there are jumps.
01:19:450 (2) - This is fairly obscured by the spinner finish stuff.


[Insane]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song.
00:48:617 (1) - Such a drastic slow down for zero change in pace in the music. Please don't. Especially since you follow it up with huge jumps.
01:14:867 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - This spacing sucks to play after all that larger spacing.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Garven wrote:

Yo. Hello ><

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best (looking at the easy/normal here). Fixed in Easy and Normal

[Easy]
00:24:450 (3,1) - Might be a bit tough for an easy Fixed
00:43:617 (2) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on short sliders for an easy diff. Fixed
00:50:075 (1) - Start this at 00:50:284 - Fixed
01:19:659 (2) - Hrm. I think it would be betterif you deleted 2 and added 1 repeat to 1 and add a note at 01:20:284 -
I think both are in compliance with the rhythm, so there is no change.


[Hard]
00:10:284 (2) - Kind of lame to be on this long slider when the music has changed and has two strong beats while you're just sliding away. AND it ends half a beat late. :/ Change this please. Fixed
00:48:617 (1) - I don't understand why you did a slowdown here. You can't see the ticks either. If you -must- have a slowdown, just do .75x Change to 0.75x
00:52:783 (3) - Remove that extra anchor point please. It's made this into a burai slider. My mistake, Fixed

[Insane]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song. It was made when I'm new mapper. Sorry :P
00:48:617 (1) - Such a drastic slow down for zero change in pace in the music. Please don't. Especially since you follow it up with huge jumps. Spinner instead
01:14:867 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - This spacing sucks to play after all that larger spacing. Do not see a serious problem, I think that can keep
thank you garven :)
Just tell you in pm when the GD was fixed
KayeSara
>Mr Garven
Sorry, I haven't change it because I feel 01:16:950 (1) - is a new stage. And the reason why I slow down here is I want make a incremental effect 01:18:409 (1,1,1,1) -
Dino99

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:53:617 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal Sorry but I think it's okay. The spinner can turn 5000 X3
Thanks mod~
Garven
BARRY:

I'm talking about the note -after- the spinner. It comes too soon and doesn't offer enough recovery time for a player of that level to hit the note in time.

Edit:

Rebubbled~
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thank Garevn
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
looks good

[Barry]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Taiko]
looks good

[Saya]
00:19:867 (5) - jump feels wrong
00:21:742 (1) - ^
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't make sense
01:04:450 (7) - jump feels wrong
01:19:867 (3) - line this up better under or beside 2

[Insane]
looks good
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks good

[Barry]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Taiko]
looks good

[Saya]
00:19:867 (5) - jump feels wrong
00:21:742 (1) - ^
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't make sense
01:04:450 (7) - jump feels wrong
01:19:867 (3) - line this up better under or beside 2

[Insane]
looks good
All fixed in "Saya" diff. :)
Thank you Saturos-fangirl
Yuukari-Banteki
Ok rebubbled then.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thank Saturos-fangirl
wmfchris
hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________-

[Saya]
00:10:075 (6) - You used soft whistle in the rest of the pattern corresponding to the whistle like sound in the background, so to maintain consistancy use soft whistle here
00:17:992 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi but according to the music the vocal ended during the slider so the spacing (5,1) should be larger than (1,2)
00:27:784 (4) - right 1 grid lv4
00:49:450 (1,2,3,4,1) - the anti-jump (3,4) is misleading. Also there's no need to stack hardly on notes long time ago, equal spacing can be made. Try sth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/339319
01:13:617 (1) - whistle at the beginning like you've done before

other looks fine. find me when they're fixed
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

wmfchris wrote:

hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________- 我比較想吐糟您點解又用英文=3=

All fixed :)

Thx Wmf
wmfchris

ertyukjh010 wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________- 我比較想吐糟您點解又用英文=3=
一般我都用英文架啦你唔明咪問囉

ranked!
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ertyukjh010
Thank wmf
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congratulations(´ω`)/
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It's official. i'm gonna continue this anime :P. congratz on the rank ;).
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恭喜rank :)
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congratulations! :oops:
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瞎了

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Omedeto~ ww
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gratz~
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Congratz ~ ^^
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congrats~
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ertyukjh010
thank everone :)
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遲來的祝賀
恭喜ERT ~
好像放挺久的,終於ranked了
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ertyukjh010
謝謝DNA :)
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恭喜ERT>~<
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congrats on ranked map
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妹妹好哦 wwww
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ertyukjh010
thank you everyone 除了姐姐不想多謝lol
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