1. remove letter box in all diff
2. Source:Papa no Iu Koto wo Kikinasai!
3. Add tags ending

1. 01:45:271 (3) - beginner finish duesnt fits clap
2. 02:24:502 (4) - Hard read to rhythm add new combo?
3. 02:30:014 (2) - end clap
4. 03:27:835 (3) - beginner finish

1. 01:01:168 (9) - beginner whistle
2. 01:03:220 (5) - ^
3. 01:05:656 (7) - add clap
4. 01:42:194 (9) - beginner whistle
5. 01:45:271 (1) - beginner finish
6. 01:46:297 (4) - beginner whistle
7. 01:46:681 (5) - clap
8. 01:48:348 (4) - beginner whistle
9. 01:49:373 (1) - beginner finish
10. 01:50:399 (4) - beginner whistle
11. 01:51:425 (1) - beginner and end whistle
12. 01:53:476 (5) - beginner finish
13. 01:57:579 (4) - beginner whistle
14. 01:58:604 (7) - ^
15. 02:01:681 (2) - ^
16. 02:02:707 (5) -
17. 02:03:091 (6) - clap
18. 02:03:732 (2) - beginner whistle
19. 02:04:758 (4) - ^
20. 02:05:784 (3) - ^
21. 02:06:809 (6) - ^
22. 02:07:835 (1) - ^
23. 02:08:861 (2) - ^
24. 02:09:886 (6) - beginner finish
25. 02:24:502 (3) - beginner whistle
26. 02:24:886 (4,5) - whistle
27. 02:29:886 (1) - slider end 02:30:014 - rhythm better also beginner whistle
28. 02:41:681 (3) - beginner whistle
29. 02:42:707 (5) - ^
30. 02:43:732 (1) - whistle
31. 02:44:502 (3) - end finish
32. 02:45:784 (4) - beginner whistle
33. 02:49:886 (3) - ^
34. 02:50:271 (4) - clap
35. 02:50:912 (3) - beginner whistle
36. 02:51:938 (6) - ^
37. 02:53:989 (5) - ^
38. 02:54:373 (6) - clap
39. 02:55:014 (3) - beginner finish
40. 02:58:091 (1) - beginner whistle
41. 02:58:476 (2) - clap
42. 02:59:117 (1) - beginner finish
43. 03:03:220 (5) - ^
44. 03:07:322 (3) - beginner whistle
45. 03:08:348 (6) - ^
46. 03:09:373 (1) - beginner finish
47. 03:10:399 (3) - beginner whistle
48. 03:11:168 (2) - end whistle
49. 03:11:681 (3,5) - whistle
50. 03:12:450 (6) - clap
51. 03:12:835 (7) - whistle
52. 03:13:476 (3) - finish
53. 03:14:502 (5) - beginner whistle
54. 03:15:527 (4) - ^
55. 03:16:553 (7) - ^
56. 03:17:579 (1) - ^ and end
57. 03:19:630 (5) - beginner whistle
58. 03:20:655 (1) - clap
59. 03:22:707 (3) - beginner whistle
60. 03:23:732 (3) - ^
61. 03:24:758 (6) - ^
62. 03:25:784 (1) - ^
63. 03:26:809 (3) - ^
64. 03:27:835 (1) - beginner finish
65. 03:28:861 (4) - beginner whistle
66. 03:29:886 (3) - beginner finish
67. 03:30:912 (5) - beginner whistle
68. 03:31:938 (4) - ^
69. 03:32:963 (1) - ^
70. 03:33:989 (1) - ^ and end
71. 03:36:040 (4) - beginner whistle
72. 03:37:066 (1) - whistle

1. Nice*
   

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested in game.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun .

[General]
The source is incorrect. It's supposed to be "Papa no Iukoto wo Kishinasai!". - Hmm, is that the official way to romanize the title? also I'm quite positive it's still KiKInasai and not shi :p. I'll remove the space if someone or I can confirm it xD
if you can, re-size your BG to 1024x768. as it stands it's at "1026x767". - Huh, it says moe.jpg is 1024x768 for me.
the combo colors should be the same for 1 mapset. the normal diff's combo colors look different compared to the other diffs. - She asked me to remove LolisNormal ;_;
maybe add "ending" in the tags since this is the ending of the anime? - Sure

[Easy]
00:18:091 (3) - face this slider straight or align this to the end of the previous slider because this threw me off guard and beginners might find this confusing.- Fixed
00:18:091 (3,1) - keep the spacing consistent. for easy diffs, the spacing should be consistent throughout the whole map. - While I agree there shouldn't be random spacing changes in an Easy, I honestly doubt any newbie will notice the difference here.
00:23:476 (1,2,3,4) - 2 problems: same as above and unstack these notes because since the hitburst is covering the 2nd note, it'd be hard for beginners to know where the note is or when to hit the note. - Stacks are a big part of osu! mapping, so I don't believe they should be absent from a map just because it's an easy. I mean, at some point, they'd have to practice reading them anyway :p
00:29:630 (1,2) - i understand that this is an easy diff, but beginners might not know when this kick slider will end due to the number of repeats on each slider. try to do something easier than this because as it stands, it looks hard for beginners. - Idk, doing something else in a 1/4 rhythm like this might be even harder to read than this, so no change yet.
00:41:681 (3,1) - same as 00:23:476 about the stacking. - Same reasoning; stacks doesnt need to be absent from Easy diffs imo.
01:05:527 (2,3) - ^ - ^
01:10:399 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
01:14:245 (3,4) - ^ - ^
01:27:066 (1,2,3) - i don't think beginners would alternate this quick. try to do something easier for beginners to clear. - I'll think about this part, but they are sliders, so the player is only required to click 3 times.
01:39:117 (1) - OMG this heart :3
01:46:553 (2,3) - same as 00:41:681.
02:07:835 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:23:220 (1,2) - ^ or replace this for a 1/1 slider to make it easier for beginners.
02:28:604 (1,1) - make these curved slider like the first 2 sliders to continue the flow. these sliders break the flow of the pattern. - It's boring imo when they're all the same xD
03:05:271 (1) - this would throw off beginners because it suddenly - ~ I might chagne this later. Leaving it now cuz it's awesoem xD
03:33:989 (1) - same as 00:29:630. - I think this is fine. Also, the last part is supposed to be harder than the rest of the diff
i like this diff, but some of the patterns look too hard for beginners to clear, and try to stick with 1 DS. for example i noticed a DS of 1.20 so use a DS of 1.20 throughout the whole map so that it'd be easier for beginners, and remember what i said about stacking? either space it out, or place it for a 1/1 slider because stacking looks too hard for beginners.


[Insane]
03:21:681 (1,2,3,4) - hmm idk...these sliders might be hard to read because it's almost overlapping the beginning. i suggest changing the look of these slider so that it'd be less confusing for players. - These can be cleared by basically hitting in the middle of the slider, so I think they're fine~~ xD
other than that this is a pretty nice diff.

I guess that's it. GL

S o r d a wrote:

from in-games

[overall]:

1. remove letter box in all diff - Hmm, I think it's fine for now, but I'd like to find some SBer, so I'll remove it then xD
2. Source:Papa no Iu Koto wo Kikinasai! - Oh hey that exclamation mark! I'll add it xD
3. Add tags ending - Yupp, waiting for kriers' update before adding tags and stuff \o\

[Insane]:

1. 01:45:271 (3) - beginner finish duesnt fits clap - Agreed.
2. 02:24:502 (4) - Hard read to rhythm add new combo? - Actually, yes, why the hell didn't I do that already. It follows the pattern from the other part of the map so xD.
3. 02:30:014 (2) - end clap - <3
4. 03:27:835 (3) - beginner finish - Yes~

[Easy]:

1. Nice*
   

I think need more works hitsound in Hard
Good luck CXu~

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
[Hardiers]
AR-1~2. too fast for such a low BPM AR6 looks silly to me. Set it -1. Although I'd like to argue that the SV counts for more than the BPM
00:17:066 (1) - add finish? i can hear it clearly in the music ok
00:22:707 - add note and clap ok
00:25:271 (1) - add finish
00:32:963 (5) - add finish at the end? just suggestion sounds alright
00:35:527 - finish doesnt fit here fixed
00:27:322 (1,2) - it'll look better if the spacing between (1) and (2)'s end looks same as the normal spacing(0.8x)
http://puu.sh/wPvj fixed. Nice suggestion.
00:44:245 (2) - add clap to this note? i guess you forget to put it >_< yes
00:49:373 (5) - add finish at the end ok
00:56:681 - add note here? just suggestion no, thx
01:05:656 (7) - remove clap please, it doesnt fit here. if you'd like to put it somewhere, 01:05:784 - is better fixed
01:20:655 (1) - add clap at the end? ok
01:21:425 (4) - ^ ok
01:46:681 (5) - same as 01:05:656 (7) - . i's suggest to add note and clap at 01:46:809 - fixed
02:09:886 (6,7) - i think this pattern looks bad and hard to read ;w; this was a mistake by me ;w; it's not supposed to look like that
02:11:168 (1) - this is still rankable, but it is too short and doesnt fit here
i suggest to remove it and remap here removed return and increased spinner length
02:20:143 (1) - mute this spinner's end or delete note at 02:23:220 - and extend spinner to there extended
02:29:886 (1) - remove whistle from the end add it to (2)? i think it sounds better fixed
03:30:399 (4,5) - how about making them symmentrical like this? :3 :3 ok
http://puu.sh/wPEo


that's all, good luck!

1. Some Inherited Points are useless, since they don't make any changes.

DoKoLP wrote:

General

• 
  
  
  [Hardiers]
  

  1. 1. 00:52:194 (4) - New Combo ok
     2. 00:55:271 (4) - New Combo ok
     3. 02:10:399 (7) - Placing looks akward. Place it right to (6) prev mod
     4. 02:20:143 (1) - Make that spinner silent or almost silent (20-30% + soft) prev mod
  
  [

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
i think volume is boring and should be more intoned
so i'd suggest to make kiai time louder or the rest quieter - Sure~

[Easy]
pattern is too complex and there are a lot of 1.5 rhythm, they are hard for beginner
you should make them simple and constant in an easiest diff
for example;00:19:373 (1) - . you should move it to 1/2 earlier - I'm not entirely sure about this. I did have the white tick mapped to begin with, but for me, it doesn't make sense to not follow the vocals, and I think following the vocals more closely is better for an easy diff, because clicking before the vocal would feel unintuitive imo. Well, that's me, and I can add them if this is a problem.

00:28:348 - finish is too much, whistle is enough. also Insane doesnt have it. - Whoop fixed
00:41:681 (3,1) - switch these newcombos because of a downbeat
also stacking with different color looks bad to me. if you fix it, looks much better - I had this good reason to keep it like this, but I forgot the reason, so fixed.
01:05:527 (2) - compare with (3), i think (2) should be softer than (3) so remove whistle - Actually, yes! This feels better imo xD Changed.
01:09:886 - clap is better here, also no need to reduce volume - I'm keeping this default soft-hitwhistle. I kinda like it xD
01:10:399 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern is hard to read for beginner, but maybe it's just me. - They are just in 1/1. Even though they're stacked, I think it should be okay.
01:10:912 (2,4) - finishes are too much, and whistle sounds better - But I like my finishes :<
01:12:194 (1) - after continuity of 1/1 rhythm, you should not use 1/2 rhythm suddenly
beginner wont be able to get rhythm well so try something like these to solve it - I did your 2nd suggestion. Thanks!

01:14:502 (4) - add finish here, insane has it. - Did a default soft-hitwhistle instead. Felt better imo
01:21:168 - listen music carefully, percussion sounds on 01:21:040 - and 01:21:425 - .
so try this instead http://puu.sh/wPlH - I agree. Changed
at least you should remove clap from (1)'s end. it really sounds bad
01:22:707 (3,1) - switch these newcombos because of a downbeat? it also matches music better - Yeah sure xD
01:33:989 - finish is too loud. whistle is better - Fixed
01:34:373 - remove whistle, it follows nothing and sounds not good. - Feels way too empty for my taste if I leave them out-
01:36:809 - ^ - ^
01:39:117 (1) - <3 - <3
01:50:912 - clap is better here imo - Same as before, I like them whistle xD
01:51:425 (1,2,3,4) - same as previous one - keeping
02:02:963 (2) - try to remove whistle from the beginning, it'll sound better to me :3 - Actually, added clap instead
02:07:322 - add clap instead of whistle - Same as before
02:08:348 (2,4) - whistle is enough for these notes - ^
02:46:809 (1) - start this at 02:47:066 - ? it will fit vocal better but just sugesstion - I agree. Changed
03:02:963 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - consider simplifying them it's really hard
try something like this instead i think it's enough

03:05:271 (1) - it would be better to avoid using 0.5x slider especially in an easiest diff
this slider looks same as 1.0x one so it may be confusing for beginner
^ The above pattern: Fine, I've changed it around a bit xD
03:12:707 (2) - remove whistle from the beginning - Fixed
03:35:784 (2) - curve this slider a bit for better flow? - Sure, fixed :3

[Insane]
00:27:963 (4,5) - it'll be look much better if (4) perfectly overlaps over (5)'s slider path
http://puu.sh/wPFs - Agreed. Changed
00:44:502 - add note here or add repeat to previous slider? - Nah, I like this "stop" feeling, following vocals~
00:56:040 (5) - add clap at the end - Yeah, sure.
01:09:886 (5) - add clap at the beginning? just suggestion - I like the whistle only thing here
01:18:604 - add note - Vocals
01:29:373 (2) - clap is better than whistle imo - Lol why not xD
01:37:963 - add note to follow music better - I was going to, but the flow feels much better without a note here, so keeping it like it is.
02:36:297 (2,3) - add newcombos like you did at 02:33:989 (1,1,1) - ? - Nah, I have the new combos mostly because of the antijump, so I think it's fine.
01:44:245 (6,7) - i prefer stacking the end of them perfectly - Fine imo.
02:42:066 (5) - remove whistle from the beginning, because it follows nothing - Feels too empty for my taste.
02:43:732 (5) - ^ from repeat of this - ^
02:46:168 (4) - ^ - ^
02:47:835 (3) - increase volume step by step? it sounds really nice - Why not Fixed~

that's all, good luck!

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Normal]
00:18:091 (3) - fix the spacing here - Woops
00:28:348 (2) - make it fit the head of 00:29:630 (1)? http://puu.sh/wQYQ - Yeah sure :3
00:41:681 (3) - NC and remove NC from 00:41:938 (1)? - Fixed already~
00:45:784 (1) - fix the spacing here? - Intentional. feels too cramped if I make the spacing smaller.
00:47:066 (3) - ^ - ^
00:48:091 (1,2,3) - i think continue using 1.0x here is better - I like this ;w;
01:22:707 (3) - NC and remove NC from 01:22:963 (1)? - Already fixed~
01:20:655 (1) - 02:23:220 (1) - why not back to use 1.0x main DS in this two section? - Nah, I think it's fne xD
03:05:271 (1) - changing SV is difficult in Normal, use some other partern? - Already fixed~

[Insane]
02:34:245 (1,1) - remove NC? - It's for marking the anti-jump :3
02:40:656 (1) - NC here to make consistent with 02:42:707 (1)? - Idk, feels so weird if I do that ;w;

I think this map deserve a star. GL~

DoKoLP wrote:

General

1. Some Inherited Points are useless, since they don't make any changes. - Really? Which ones? xD

[Easy]

1. 01:39:117 (1) - <3 - <3
2. 01:53:220 (1,2,3) - I prefer something like this:
   
   It fits the rhythm a little better, imo. - B-B-But it's kool to click ;w;
3. 02:20:143 (1) - Every diff has a spinner here. Why doesn't have this diff one, too? - Well, I didn't want to for some reason xD I think it's fine though.
4. 03:05:271 (1) - 0,5x SV is a little hard for Easy diffs. It would be better, if you make it 0,8~ - Already fixed to x1.0~

[Insane]

1. 01:39:117 (1,2,3) - <3 - <3
2. 02:20:143 (1) - I prefer reducing the volume a bit more. - I think it's fine?

Good Luck! <3

GiNa wrote:

[Easy]
-This should be a Normal, since the rhymes are hard to beginners. Well ... imo.
-Please use Distance Snap all the time and keep spacings the same (spacing for the first half of the map is a mess).
01:39:117 (1) – <3
There is really nothing to say other than your spacing issues
^I'll rename it to Normal then. Spacing should be okay for a Normal I guess? xD

[Insane]
-HP -1 - I think HP 8 is alright? ;w;
01:33:604 (2) – stack this perfectly - I think I got it right?
02:20:143 (1) – same as Hardiers - Yeah sure~
02:54:886 (2) – 1 grid down ? - I didn't want a straight line xD
03:37:194 (1) – may be a little short - Auto can 2000 it, and it's on Insane, so I think it's fine~

Good luck ^-^ - Thanks~

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi, here is my mods - Hi~


[Insane]
01:17:579 (1) - Remove NC - Fixed
02:34:245 (1,1) - Adding NCs isn't necessary - Meh, okay then, I'll remove the NC spam xD
02:42:963 (2,3) - Switch them? - Intentional


[Easy]
Its name should be Normal. - Yeah, I'll rename it xD
Also I suggest HP 2 / OD 2 / AR 3
02:20:271 - Remove Break Time? - I changed it to a spinner like the other diffs~
Others are fine :3


Good luck ;D - Thanks~

haha5957 wrote:

[Normal]
02:22:963 : this is timing point being used? if so, then my mistake but if not, it's unrankable to have this
^ Nope, but it's supposed to do something. I forgot to add the decrease in volume in easy xD

[Insane]

02:47:835 (3) - I think this brokes both music and map's flow O.O/ at least split some sliders so me can actually click on lyrics
(ex : like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326811 , sure you will have to replace next 1,2,3s to somewhere else if you do this O.O)
^ I'm keeping this, I kinda like it xD And it would be boring to use the same pattern as earlier, so yeah \o\

deserve your second star since i see barely no problem on this map :3 good luck~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Hellowww~
You requested in my queue ^^


[General]
- .osb is not in use? So remove it. - I'll be looking for someone to make a SB for this at some point, so leaving it there for now
- Remove " Coloing " from the tags. - "Colouring" is in tags to satisfy UK people \o\
- Watch your placement ~


[Normal]
01:03:220 (3) - Line with (1) - Tilted square, so intentional
01:03:732 (4) - Line with (2) - ^
03:15:014 (3) - Line with (1) - Ops. Fixed xD


[Insane]
- Distance spacing is 0 ... O_O - Oh I just tried to stack something with that xD
- End the 4th kiai time on 03:05:143 to match the other diffs. - Actually, kiai should end at 03:05:271, so I changed that in both diffs xD


Really well mapped ! >w<
Good luck and 2 stars ~

Sync wrote:

[Hardiers]
00:28:348 (3) - This slider isn't following anything. Or at least, that's what it feels like when you're playing. I know it's following those beeps, but it's totally random and out of nowhere. Remove it and make it into a 3/4ths slider that repeats once. Or you can just use some 1/2 notes/sliders like you've been doing. Do as you wish, just get rid of it. alright

00:58:604 (2) - Ditch this repeat. The slider is ending on a beat where a hit circle or slider should start. Add a 1/2-beat slider at 00:59:117 (3).

01:10:399 (1) - Same thing, basically. It'd follow the music so much better if you removed the repeat and added a 3/4th slider at 01:11:425. fixed

02:46:168 (5) - Not sure what's up with this sudden 1/4 -- if you can justify it then I have no problems with it but you haven't been doing it in the previous measures which are more or less the same thing musically. removed

03:17:579 (1) - see 01:10:399 (1) ok

03:33:989 (1) - see 03:17:579 (1) ok

Sync wrote:

[Insane]
nice
02:42:707 (1,2) - remove the combo on (1) and add it on (2) because you've been following the vocals most of the time
02:44:758 (1) - ^
^Both fixed
[Normal]
It's a bit high end, despite the star rating... Oh well. For next time, I'd make sure your spread is a bit more solid.
^ Oh well

call me back for a recheck - I'll call you back after I find someone to make some kool SB for me <3

rEdo wrote:

as requested by CXu, even though I suck at modding - Hello you notbadatmoddingperson

[Normal]
00:29:630 (1,2) - you can make them a bit more neat by moving the middle sliderpoint by 2 grid points lower at (1), and analogously. - Yeah ok.
00:44:758 (2) - unnecessary finish there - Changed to whistle.
00:44:758 (2) - spacing - Nah, looks kinda clustered with closer spacing
01:14:245 (3) - (nazi) move them to the same place as red (4), they keep some nice flow like that - Gee, why not
01:25:784 (4) - unnecessary finish, again - Changed to whistle
01:30:912 (3,1) - swap new combos - Fixed
01:39:117 (1) - the colors quite repeat, before the spinner you've got a red+yellow combo, and after it - the same, red+yellow. you can start at red color at 1:20:656 (1), should be quite better imo - Good point. Fixed
03:05:271 (1) - ctrl+h perhaps? - No <3
03:23:732 (1) - finish spam :c - Changed to whislte
03:27:835 (1) - ^ - Idd ^
03:35:784 (2) - maybe give up on that slider and start the spinner at the big white tick? - Nah <3

[Insane]
00:46:809 (2) - place it at the same place as red (1), plays a lot better like that - Sure
01:46:553 (6,7,8) - this is quite too much, decrease the snap to 1.1x at least in that pattern. - No, it's cool <3
02:27:835 (1) - this slider could look a lot better - Show me~~
02:56:040 (5,6,7) - once again, that's too much. - no


well, I'll be adamant with the fact that most of my suggestions are useless, but I hope they'll help at least a little bit. - Why u tell me you suck at modding

rockleejkooo wrote:

hello - Hello~
after-mat modding here o/
as you wish ._.

[General]
• Kiai #4: Starts on 02:48:861, ends on 03:05:143 (Hardiers)
should finish at 03:05:271 like in other diffs? :о

Normal
• starting from here 01:20:656 (1) - i dunno if you can use another spacing in normal with same music speed :c - Hopefully it's fine xD
anyway, beautiful diff

Insane
• 02:47:835 (3) - aaaaawesomeness *-------------* - Lol haha, thanks? xD
pure awesome! i love every second of it!!!

star! and good luck! i wanna see it ranked TOMORROW!!! - That's quite optimistic xD

rEdo wrote:

I guess you know that hitsounding isn't your good side

Ryu wrote:

From mod queue~ :3

[Normal]

01:02:707 (2) - x:120 y:188
01:03:220 (3) - x:176 y:296
01:03:732 (4) - x:232 y:188
^ No change. i like the current pattern
01:20:527 - movу it to 01:20:656 - It's so you dont get the wrong hitsound if you click early
01:54:630 - move to 01:54:758 - ^
01:55:399 - remove - ^
02:33:861 - move to 02:33:989 - ^
02:34:630 - move to 02:34:502 - ^
03:04:373 - move to 03:04:502 - ^
03:05:143 - move to 03:05:271 - ^
03:33:925 - move to 03:33:989 - ^

[Insane]
nothin wrong -

/o/ Good luck bro \o\

Leorda wrote:

Hi there - Hi~

[Normal]
00:29:630 (1) - Too much repeating slider can be confusing for beginners who play this diff - Well, I think it's the easiest solution for a red->blue->white->blue->red rhythm, so I'm keeping it
00:31:681 (2) - ^ - ^
02:23:732 (1) - Almost overlapped by spinner-osu, it may be hidden for beginners for some cases. ALSO, new combo here for preventing of new combo bug - Moved down a bit. Hope that helps? Also, added nc


[Insane]
00:28:348 (5) - The head slider is almost offscreen - Moved a tad bit up. It's not offscreen anyways, so I think it's fine
00:57:066 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Make a curve pattern like this?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328050 - Nah, I like how it is right now xD
02:47:835 (3) - Too much repeating slider can makes boring for experience players, split them into two slider? - I think it's alright even for experienced players to hold down a button for 1 second without getting bored


That's all I can find, sorry

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. osb. should be removed~

[Normal]

1. 00:35:784 (1,2) - (1)'s 2nd point on x:388 y:120 ,(2)'s 2nd point on x:388 y:276 and 3rd point on x:352 y:220 (I think look much pretty)
2. 01:54:758 (3) - NC ?~
3. 03:04:502 (3) - If you follow the overhead , this also NC

[Hardiers]

1. 00:35:014 (5) - 2nd point on x:480 y:96 ? (I think look much pretty)

[Insane]

1. 01:25:014 (1) - 3rd point on x:288 y:328 ( it about touch (2) )
2. 01:42:963 (1,2) - (1) re NC and (2) NC

l1106188 wrote:

Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. osb. should be removed~ - I want an SB, so it's not important to remove this yet xD

[Normal]

1. 00:35:784 (1,2) - (1)'s 2nd point on x:388 y:120 ,(2)'s 2nd point on x:388 y:276 and 3rd point on x:352 y:220 (I think look much pretty) - Sure~
2. 01:54:758 (3) - NC ?~ - I think it's fine
3. 03:04:502 (3) - If you follow the overhead , this also NC - ^

[Insane]

1. 01:25:014 (1) - 3rd point on x:288 y:328 ( it about touch (2) ) - This should be fine
2. 01:42:963 (1,2) - (1) re NC and (2) NC - Fixed

good song & good luck & star ~
and sorry to my poor English

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~~ >w</ From this queue~!
Horie Yui~~ <3

• [General]

1. Use this soft-hitfinish~~~! :3 This is fit perfectly~ >< - No.
2. Delete .osb file and full-submit
3. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: Kiai #4: Starts on 02:48:861, ends on 03:05:271 [Norma]
   　　　　　　　　　　　　 Kiai #4: Starts on 02:48:861, ends on 03:05:143 [Hardiers]
   　　　　　　　　　　　　 Kiai #4: Starts on 02:48:861, ends on 03:05:271 [Insane]

• [Normal]

1. 00:23:476 (1,2) - I recommend don't overlap this two notes.because 2nd note hidden by score.This is Hard to beginner~ :3
2. 00:24:502 (3,4) - ^ - I think both are fine. Stacks in moderate amount is okay even for beginners imo.
3. 01:04:245 (1) - remove whistle, add finish~ - Becomes a bit too busy with so many finishes imo
4. 01:05:527 (2,3) - Seperate this two notes like 01:07:579 (2,3) - Read above about stacks
5. 01:14:245 (3,4) - Seperate this two notes~ :3 - ^
6. 02:23:732 (1) - move this note~ ;_; hidden by osu. - Shit, I moved it inside xD Fixed
   
   Click~

   
7. 02:55:013 (1) - remove whistle, add finish~ - Same as before
8. 02:56:297 (2,3) - Seperate this two notes~ - ^
9. 03:27:835 (1) - remove whistle, add finish~ - ^
10. 03:35:784 (2) - remove this slider, and add note 03:36:040 with whistle - I like this slider though

• [Insane]

1. 00:54:245 (1) - move this slider. it's almost meet scoreboard . I believe this should be fine for an insane. I'll change it a bit if I need too though, but I like how it plays currently
   
   Click~

   
   
   Good Diff~ :3 just check Hit sounds please~ - Hitsounds are fine, no changes

Generally, mapset is nice~
Just need to fix some hitsounds~
GL to your map~ =3=/

xsrsbsns wrote:

This thread keeps appearing to me on the forum front page.. - \o\

[Insane]
00:33:091 (6) - Whistle (not conventional, but I like it) - Yeah why not~
02:47:835 (3) - (Nazi) weird 1/8 repeating slider, you could do plenty here (like following the vocals with four 1/2 sliders before the chorus) - Holding a button for 1 second is kool \o\

Good luck!

Beren wrote:

Lyrics
http://www.mediafire.com/?99ck3lb5nsfyhw5

Beren wrote:

Lyrics
http://www.mediafire.com/?99ck3lb5nsfyhw5

Sync wrote:

[General]
-- Add KinomiCandy to the tags
-- Remove LetterBoxing from Kinomi's taiko
^ Ops
[Kinomi's Taiko]
-- Why are you using 1.6 SV? It's just plain-out ugly. Besides, the BPM isn't *that* low. Use 1.4.

[Insane]
02:09:886 (9) - Add a new combo here instead of at 02:10:143 (1) to be consistent - Fixed
03:24:758 (6,7) - I'm totally all for slider jumps but this is a huuuuuuge jump. I'd definitely change it. OK, change of heart. you can keep this but if somebody else brings it up (e.g. a BAT/MAT) you shouldn't be reluctant to change. It's very easy to slider break there. To the BAT/MAT that looks at this: On the other hand, it's pretty damn cool and considering the overall difficulty of the map I think it's only pushing the limits just a little.

Sync wrote:

[Kinomi's Taiko]
-- Why are you using 1.6 SV? It's just plain-out ugly. Besides, the BPM isn't *that* low. Use 1.4.

Cause' you are very stupid and an awful liar for not holding your promise about playing Pangya.

Forced

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[normal]
00:35:784 (1,2) - why you change your spacing here? - because that would look ugly
not very good imo.because you often change 1/2 notes' distance.I think it's good that you use a unity distance in normal diff.
^I disagree. Just because it's one of the easier difficulties doesn't mean that the whole map needs to be completely the same throughout the whole map. There is no fun in that.

[hard]
00:31:168 (5) - no drums here.so remove whistle
00:36:040 (2,3) - drums are the end of 2 sliders.not beginning
don't want to point out these problems above.hope you can check the whistles of the map carefully
00:43:220 (5) - move this farther away from 4?
02:02:066 (3) - I personally like this rhythm http://puu.sh/zuRZ
02:56:681 add a note to follow beginning vocal
hmmm I don't think a slider with only 1 red points fits this song

[Insane]
ehhh SV 3.0 with 1/4 jumps....hard to say anything
^Not really but ok

Keep volume at a constant level (e.g. 80%) with the beat still somewhat audible. Use the "Normal" audio sample set.

OnosakiHito wrote:

Requested Taiko mod from my queue

[Kinomi's Taiko] (All applied)

Generel
AudioVolumen:
Normal - 60%

soft is here way too quiet. It's hard to hear/listen to some patterns.
Since 80% is loud for such a song, 60% should be fine.
soft 90% is somewhere equal to normal ~30%

Refering from the taiko guidelines:

Keep volume at a constant level (e.g. 80%) with the beat still somewhat audible. Use the "Normal" audio sample set.

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Taiko_Ranking_Criteria

Hitcircles - (just a little note: I'm not sure if you half followed beat and half made some own beats, so I don't know if I changed your own beats or little issues)
00:20:784 (95) - k, because of higher "peep"-sound then the tripplet before?
00:28:348 (134,135,136,137,138,139,149) - kdddkdk or kddddkk
00:31:938 (152) - move one forward and delete (153) because the one "peep"-sound drowned out the other little sounds?
00:47:322 - Nice try with the 1/6. It wasn't bad, but I would suggest you to use kkkkd instead because of some reasons:
1.) diff. spread (well, probably not a big problem here)
2.) It's confusing in the first trys
3.) kkkkd follows the beat better since at 00:47:835 - is a bass sound, perfectly for don
4.) generelly no 1/6 hearable.
01:24:758 (271) - d - there was one kat too much in this timeline, also as you can hear, there is a bass in the background.
01:36:553 - okay, this 1/6 fits better. But also here, suggesting to use kkkkd.
01:49:502 (x) - k?
01:52:835 (x) - k
01:55:399 - this kiai cut is allready too short. You should leave it move on.
02:24:373 (x) - k
03:18:604 (291,292,293,294,295,296) - I don't understand this. First you followed the voice and now...? Move 294 one backwards please.
03:21:553 - this kiai cut is allready too short. You should leave it move on. (03:05:143 - is reasonable)

In the last kiai you could make a SV changed like x1 -> x1.1 -> x1.2 or similiar ways. Not necessary.

The map is well mapped. But I don't understand some of the pattern constalations. It follows the voice, the beat, some other sounds which appears and somtimes it feels like some parts are a bit like freestyle mapped(instead using dk kd for the beat, kd dk appears). This dosen't make it unconfortable for playing. But when you listen to it, it has a different influence on us. It depends on my mood, I usually map after vocal, but now I'm trying my best to map after the drums and other stuff besides from the vocal. When I'm out of idea or don't know how to map the next part, I just continue mapping this with vocal.

All in one it's okay~ : )

Hope I could help you with this.

Andrea wrote:

[Normal]

00:46:040 (2,3) - Spacing is too far. - Rearranged this part then. Hopefully this is alright now.

[Kinomi's Taiko]

00:33:732 (2) - Missing new combo.
03:05:143 (219) - Remove the kiai time section.
03:05:784 (220) - ^
^ Fixed that for him~

[Hardiers]

01:43:220 (1,2) - This spacing is weird to see. - Fixed I think.
02:29:886 (4) - Add a new combo at least so this anti-jump is easily readable. - Yes
03:05:143 (x) - This kiai should end at 03:05:271 like the other difficulties. - Huh I thought I fixed that.
03:37:579 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing. - Fixed this.

[Insane]

HP Drain -1, it's too high right now. - Aww ok xD

Good luck! - Thanks

1. 00:31:681 (2) - This slider should have a new combo mark since it is in another bar than (1), And you added a new combo for each new phrase.
2. 00:52:450 (3) - ^

1. Increase the hitsound volume to 80% ? 60% isn't loud enough in my opinion, I prefer when beats are loud, that sound better and it is more agreable to play.

1. 00:25:784 (3) - The reverse arrow is partially hidden by 00:25:014 (4) and 00:25:527 (2)'s hitbursts. That may disturd the player, so try to make it more visible please.

1. 00:38:604 (3,4,5) - They are not correctly aligned lol.
2. 03:21:681 (1,2,3,4) - Ah, no.. don't do 1/4 jums please, that is so unexpected and not intuitive at all. @.@

Kurai wrote:

Hai hai ~ random modding. - Hi~

[Normal]

1. 00:31:681 (2) - This slider should have a new combo mark since it is in another bar than (1), And you added a new combo for each new phrase.
2. 00:52:450 (3) - ^

- Right, fixed xD
[Kinomi's Taiko]

1. Increase the hitsound volume to 80% ? 60% isn't loud enough in my opinion, I prefer when beats are loud, that sound better and it is more agreable to play. - Kinomi asked me to put it on 75%. Hope that's better~

[Hardiers]

1. 00:25:784 (3) - The reverse arrow is partially hidden by 00:25:014 (4) and 00:25:527 (2)'s hitbursts. That may disturd the player, so try to make it more visible please. - Made the slider go the other way. Should be allright now

[Insane]

1. 00:38:604 (3,4,5) - They are not correctly aligned lol. - Weeeeell derp. I have no idea what you're talking about haha xD
2. 03:21:681 (1,2,3,4) - Ah, no.. don't do 1/4 jums please, that is so unexpected and not intuitive at all. @.@ - Actually, my thought is something like this: Every time this chorus has appeared in the song, I've had 1/4 sliderjumps. The only difference this time is that all of them are 1/4 instead of 2. Now, the music sounds a biiit different here, which is why it's also a bit "harder" than the rest. Well, that's my view anyhow. And I find them intuitive, although that could very well just be because it's my map xD I can try ask people around a bit about it, but if possible, I'd rather keep this

BounceBabe wrote:

Hopefully better than the other version