Philippines wrote:

• General

1. Remove Sekai in Tags, -Sekai- is enough. Also, change your tags into -Gamu- not Gamu. not remove sekai,just add gamu in tags~ :3
   
   
2. 01:16:737 (1) - I believe this slider should end on 01:19:222. I think 01:19:406 is fine~ :3 so remained that now~

• Easy

1. 00:04:682 (3) - Mark a new combo for this note. Fix
   
   
2. 01:16:093 (1) - I think this should start on 01:15:541. Just change previous note
   
   
3. Bump your Approach Rate +1. Okay~

• Hard

1. 00:01:738 (1,6) - These sliders is definitely unrankable. Please change it to something else. I can see some more, please change them. I don't think that's unrankable o.o; anyway, changed~
   
   
2. 00:25:848 (2) - I don't know if you're trying to make a blanket here, but I suggest you make it look like one. Fix
   
   
3. 00:32:474 (2) - Move this away from the previous note. Make sure you make the spacing consistent. Fix~
   
   
4. 00:35:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Fix this pentagon pattern please. They don't look good. Change

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:14:621 - two clap at this and 00:16:093 - will make it more rhyme..So just consider to change.It makes big different Change that part~
00:31:922 (4,1) - some nazi mod Fix~
00:35:603 (1) - ^ Fix~

[Hard]
00:04:866 (3,6) - actually I don't like there slider hides...(also the same for next Change that part~ :3
01:00:081 - also add some clap at this part will more fit Change some notes and added clap~

that's all.
Star and good luck

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
00:13:517 (2,3,4,5) - the mix of circle and slider is difficult in Easy changed that pattern~

[Hard]
I think AR+1 because of the 163 bpm. okay~
I can't pick out any problem but the diff seems weird..some patterns like 00:26:584 (4,5,1,2) and 00:48:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) seem just putting circle and sliders with constant spacing, but make no sense. The diff should have a better whole design.
This is how i'll map this two section:
00:26:584 (4,5,1,2) - use a symmetry http://puu.sh/wGlW Fix~ o.o
00:48:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - (1,2,3,4) is a passing section so move from right to left, and (3) is a vocal change so you can jump here. Also (3) should be a reverse slider to catch the vocal. At the same time, it is a symmetry of 00:48:854 (1) http://puu.sh/wGoW Fix~ :3

GL~

-Bakari- wrote:

yay~

[General]
clear ><

[Easy]
a bit hard. i suggest to try using more 2/1 notes. >< I'll try~ :3
but actually there's no anything wrong :3

[Hard]
you need AR +1. >< AR is 7 now~ ;w;
00:02:474 (2,2) - stack properly Fix~
00:06:707 (8,3) - almost overlap Fix~
00:09:652 (2,1) - overlap Fix~
00:20:511 (5,3) - stack? okay~ :3
00:24:376 (6) - new combo? Fix~
00:30:081 (7,3) - overlap Fix~

gl~

hope it was useful for you >3<


mmmmoooooe! :3

-Bakari- wrote:

hey! now it looks better :3 star!

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Mod requeue from my queue thanks>.<
[Easy]
01:14:621- Whisite?(soft) okay~ :3

Hard And Insane is Fine
My Mod is not good.....
and sorry for my bad english.....

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there


[General]
The last spinner - End at 01:19:222 where is music ends Fix~!


:3

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's mod

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[General]

Remove .osb file and full submission Fix~ :3

lol~ good song, and good map


Have a good time

SakiK wrote:

here my mod from queue

Saki its me's song!

[Easy]

00:03:210 (2) - rm finish slider ends Fix~
00:16:830 (4) - 1 grid down Fix~
01:11:676 (4) - more fit to default finish (volume 55%) Change~

[Hard]

00:03:210 (6) - rm finish or change default finish Fix~ :3
00:30:081 (7) - ^ just reduce volume ;w;
00:50:695 (4) - move x:84 y:356 Fix~
00:51:799 (7,8,1) - suggestion,add finish at slider ends remain that~
01:02:842 (5) - add SC:1 finish ^

nice song and mapset.fight~

Jayel wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 날라왔습니다~
Hello, from my queue~!!

[General]
Nothing

[Easy]
00:03:210(2) - 슬라이더 끝 부분에 피니시 소리 없애는게 나아 보입니다. Fix~
00:45:909 - 이 곳 스피너... 이지에 비해 짧다는 생각이 드는 건 저 뿐인가요... 음..; 일단 남겨둘게요~ 같은 지적 또 들어오면 한번더 생각해보겠습니다~ :3
00:48:486(1) - 스피너 이후 충분한 스페이스가 있다는 거엔 태클 걸고 싶진 않는데...
이지에서 이른바 '못갖춘 마디'(음...?) 형식으로 노트를 놓는 건 플레이어가 하다가 선뜻 당황할 듯 합니다. 이것도 마찬가지~~~
[Hard]
노트들 사이 간격이 약간 일정하지 못하다는 것만 빼면 괜찮은 난이도 입니다.

네, 끝입니다. 행운을 빕니다~!
That's all, good luck, guys~!!

1. Source : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
2. Offset -20
3. end #1 kiai 01:00:265 - start #2 kiai 01:00:633 -
4. hitwhistle for 'ring' sound like here 00:01:738 - http://puu.sh/xboo

1. 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - due to long combo, downbeat, changed melody, combo like this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:241 (6,1,2) - your combos are really strange, just wondering, what did you follow, if i were you, i'd NC 00:28:241 (6) - because of downbeat and changed melody, remove useless NC 00:30:449 (1) - and start combo from 00:31:185 (2) -

1. 00:26:768 (4) - not fit at all now imo, NC here and remove 00:27:504 (1) - and start next combo from 00:28:609 (3) - , or remove NC 00:27:504 (1) - and start combo from 00:28:609 (3) -
2. 00:41:124 (1) - why didn't you started this combo from 00:40:020 (6) -
3. 00:53:271 - with this finish, adding finish 00:54:007 - and 00:54:744 - will be really exciting finish pattern, or at least add finish at 00:54:744 - because you did it at 01:00:633 (3) -
4. 00:59:897 - ^
5. 00:58:057 (3,4) - not symmetry, copy/paste from 00:57:320 (1,2) - and ctrl+r
6. 01:15:357 (7) - because i can hear a drum sound from 01:16:277 - , i'd replace with a circle at 01:15:357 - and a slider from 01:15:725 - to 01:16:277 - and start spinner from 01:16:645 -

1. i really can't understand your combos, what did you followed for ._.
2. 00:51:799 (7) - NC due to pitch and downbeat
3. 01:15:725 - feels empty, add note like Normal diff

1. 00:42:964 (1,2) - its movement is really hard, keep your jump, stack 00:42:964 (1) - on 00:42:596 (2) - and 00:43:149 (2) - on 00:42:412 (1) - will be more playable and soft
2. 00:46:277 (2) - 1 grid right to stack on 00:45:541 (4) - ?
3. 00:47:382 (1) - in Insane diff, i'd use more dynamic beat, add a circle at 00:47:382 - and 1/2 slider from 00:47:566 - with 1 arrow
4. 01:15:725 - same as Hard diff

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]

1. Source : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A Fix~
2. Offset -20 Fix~ :3
3. end #1 kiai 01:00:265 - start #2 kiai 01:00:633 - Fix~
4. hitwhistle for 'ring' sound like here 00:01:738 - http://puu.sh/xboo Thank you~ :3 but Not changed now~

[Easy]

1. 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - due to long combo, downbeat, changed melody, combo like this Fix~
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:241 (6,1,2) - your combos are really strange, just wondering, what did you follow, if i were you, i'd NC 00:28:241 (6) - because of downbeat and changed melody, remove useless NC 00:30:449 (1) - and start combo from 00:31:185 (2) - Fix~

[Hard]

1. i really can't understand your combos, what did you followed for ._.
2. 00:51:799 (7) - NC due to pitch and downbeat Fix~
3. 01:15:725 - feels empty, add note like Normal diff Fix~

Good luck with rank~

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General

1. Are you sure the source and tag is right?The true OP of <Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A> is http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48435You can ask Kawayi Rika for more help It's my mistake.. orz It's ending. so delete opening tags, and add ending~
2. You have use a Video with a terrible setting.also the audio does't has enough quality.If you have the source video you can ask me to encode a new one

Hard

1. 00:36:319 (1) - add a clap on first circle, to show the beat Fix~
2. 01:08:711 (5,3) - not stack well Fix~ :3

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~♪~♪~~


[Easy]
00:48:466 - 1 and 00:49:570 (2) - X-axis alignment~ Fix~ :3
00:33:374 - remove nc~ remained now =3=
00:37:055 - nc~ ^
00:39:264 - remove nc~ ^
00:40:000 - nc~ ^

[Hard]
very nice!!!~

Nice song!!and Nice mapset!~
star☆♪~Good Luck~

sreader wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]
offset is real fast
I think +25or30 better

LKs wrote:

From wmf's queue

[General]

personally, offest -6. +25 makes it a bit late Fix~ o.o

[Hitsound]

normal-hitfinish sounds too heavy blended with normal-hitnormal. such as, you don't need a normal-hitclap sound here
00:09:088 (1) - Easy

In my opinion you should rename it as soft-hitfinish2 or you can keep the normal-hitfinish as well. You just judge which of them you should use in different places rename it 'soft-hitfinish2', and fix some timng points~ :3

[Easy]

00:06:880 (3) - remove nc, and nc the next slider Fix~
00:42:217 (5) - a finish doesn't make sense here, remove hitsound plz (or use a soft whistle) Fix~
00:42:585 (1) - no whistle Fix~
00:04:314 remove the useless section Remove~
00:36:339 Remove~

[Hard]

00:10:555 (1) - whistle at the end? Fix~
00:35:217 (4,5,6) - no drum sounds here, why u you set such a triplet? maybe make it start at red line or remove the on at the blue tick remove on at the blue tick~
00:42:211 (1) - spacing Fix~
00:48:653 (4) - no whistle Fix~
01:15:340 (3) - http://puu.sh/y29i Fix~
01:16:260 (1) - fix this as well Fix~
00:04:314 remove the useless section Remove~
00:36:339 Remove~

GL

Leorda wrote:

Anyeonghaseyo

[Hard]
00:30:064 (7) - Why finish? Delete Finish,add clap~
00:37:058 (3) - Add finish at head slider? Okay~
00:40:003 (2) - ^ Okay~


Sorry for my poor mod orz

Sekai's Normal

Hard

Gamu's Insane

kurohana wrote:

mod req <3

Gamu's Insane

01:00:800 (3) - hidden note >.<

I'm not sure about this hidden note >.<
otherwise, good map :3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Akemi_Homura ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 01:12:395 - I think kiai time should end to here. Fix~:3

[Hard]

1. 00:36:322 - Remove clap. Fix~
2. 00:49:941 - Remove finish. Fix~
3. 00:51:414 - ^ Fix~
4. 01:10:187 (3) - Same as Insane. Changed that,slider end 01:10:463, and add note 01:10:555

[Easy]

1. 00:37:058 (3) - Add new combo and Remove 00:39:267 (1). Fix~
2. 00:40:003 (2) - Add new combo. Fix~

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Akemi_Homura ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Gamu's Insane]

1. 01:10:187 (2) - This slider should end to 01:10:463.

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~

Rika-chan

sorry, no change. ):

I don't think so.

but. thank you for modding ><

Megurine Luka wrote:

OMG sorry for late. I went back to my hometown where the network is not available T_T

But anyway here it is. :O

I also made a comboburst for you :O

btw I found your map doesn't have a break after I finished section fail and section pass.. So del them from the folder OTZ..

http://puu.sh/zhKk

232,288,14420,2,0,B|184:304|144:280,1,90,0|8
80,216,14788,1,0

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
00:40:739 (4) - stack with (1) properly Fix~
01:15:340 (3,1) - Similar to [insane] try to mute ending of (4) and whistle at (1). (currently the whistle at ending of (4) does not go well with the clapping at (1)) Fix~~ :3

[Easy]
00:45:892 (1) - the spinner might be too short for an easy. Fix~ now end is 00:47:733
no errors but in general they looks better with fewer 1/1 overlapping (i.e. the spacing can be raised a bit) Change Spacing o.o

In general quite nice and good luck :3

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:14:420 (4,5) - [Nazi] You can adjust the position of (4) so that (5) stacks on previous (2) sorry....

232,288,14420,2,0,B|184:304|144:280,1,90,0|8
80,216,14788,1,0

00:17:549 (4,5) - again fix the placement so that (2,3,4,5) forms a rhombus, like (4) (464,144), (5) (328,240) ok!
00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - looks placed randomly... just for reference http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/336577 sorry...
00:47:365 (1) - In the first glance I thought the slider come across two gituar note instead of the muting point. Therefore I'll suggest a 1.5x speed 1/2 slider here sorry...
00:51:046 - sound a bit odd when the triplet is placed after the vocal. Try to place the triplet just after the slider? Then it's symmetrical with (1,2,3) as well. sorry....
01:00:248 (1,3) - this is highly not recommended because the slider head is covered by another slider sorry....
01:03:377 (1,2) - somehow I'll suggest putting these on the left hand side of the slider so that the flow of movement sounds smooth and reduce overlapping ok!
01:16:260 (1) - use whistle instead of clap? This provides a larger contrast with coming notes. ok!
(The finish sound sounds too heavy for such a soft song imo.)

In general quite nice and good luck :3

Jacob wrote:

Heyo! A mod request from my bubble ready map queue.

[General]

Everything is in order.

[Easy]

00:45:892 (1) - It would make more sense for this spinner to end at 00:47:365. It's where the guitar part and the vocals stop. Fix~ and now start is 00:45:708 because spin is too short~ :3
01:03:561 (1) - The curves on this slider are pretty tight, making it less visually appealing. Try re-making it to be a bit less tight. Fix~

[Hard]

Add +1 to either the HP drain or OD. 5 for both on a hard difficulty is much to low in my opinion. OD +1~ :3

Wonderful job.

CDFA wrote:

Allright let's do this

Timing:
Offset: 1721. This is just so the first note isn't before the first red section Offset is 1721 now~ O.O

Hard:
01:11:659 (2) - This is really loud and I don't know why ;~; ;~;

Easy:
01:03:561 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Fix~~ :3

Whee >3<`

-Sekai- wrote:

Akemi kawaiii~ >w<

-Gamu- wrote:

homura-chan kawaii ><

1. Use an offset of 1730, which is (+9) of what you have.
2. If possible, please find the no credit version of this video; all that text in the way is so not moe ;w;

1. 00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - Seeing how the melody is a continuous 1/4 rhythm, I'd would extend the kickbacks on these to get
   
2. 00:37:610 (3,1) - Use a 1.30x spacing instead of stacking; this causes a stall in the flow which isn't very pleasant. You should treat this like 00:39:0982 (4,1) - .
3. 00:43:112 (2) - Because of the way 00:42:763 (3,1,2) - is positioned, this isn't in a very good spot. In addition, the spacing is irregular, so a greater angle would work better. Try something like this:
   
4. 00:45:892 (1,2,3,4) - First thing: copy and pasting this pattern is not recommended. Second: 00:45:524 (4,1) - the fact that these are parallel created a very awkward play for me.
5. 00:57:303 (1) - Space to 1.20x; maybe try something like this:
   
6. 01:09:082 (7) - Expected a triple here to match 01:07:242 (5,6,7) - ; seeing how you chose to overlap 01:06:690 (2,3,4) - with 01:08:162 (3,4,5) - , I expected two phrases to match in rhythm, with the triple at the last syllable of the phrase.
7. 01:16:721 (1) - Make the volume decrease more gradual?

-Gamu- wrote:

those :3

thank you for modding

some fix~

those wrote:

-Gamu- wrote:

those :3

thank you for modding

some fix~

Hey -Gamu- P:
Would love to know which suggestions you didn't use so I can try to explain to you more in-depth why I think it's a problem, if you don't understand. Thanks.

those wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]

1. 00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - Seeing how the melody is a continuous 1/4 rhythm, I'd would extend the kickbacks on these to get You are a nice rhythm. But I think that the current rhythm better
   
2. 00:37:610 (3,1) - Use a 1.30x spacing instead of stacking; this causes a stall in the flow which isn't very pleasant. You should treat this like 00:39:0982 (4,1) - . OK
3. 00:43:112 (2) - Because of the way 00:42:763 (3,1,2) - is positioned, this isn't in a very good spot. In addition, the spacing is irregular, so a greater angle would work better. Try something like this: OK
   
4. 00:45:892 (1,2,3,4) - First thing: copy and pasting this pattern is not recommended. Second: 00:45:524 (4,1) - the fact that these are parallel created a very awkward play for me. I like this placement. I don't want to change
5. 00:57:303 (1) - Space to 1.20x; maybe try something like this: OK
   
6. 01:09:082 (7) - Expected a triple here to match 01:07:242 (5,6,7) - ; seeing how you chose to overlap 01:06:690 (2,3,4) - with 01:08:162 (3,4,5) - , I expected two phrases to match in rhythm, with the triple at the last syllable of the phrase. I don't think so.
7. 01:16:721 (1) - Make the volume decrease more gradual? no. The current volume is very good

sorry. I'm poor at English

1. Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.
2. Audio Lead-in +500 please. Current audio lead-in is too fast, and quite surprising to player.

1. 00:09:091 (1) - I think it will be more consistant if you remove new combo here.
2. 00:23:815 (2) - Remove whistle at this slider end. Doesn't follow anything at the back and breaking your whistle consistencies.
3. 00:25:288 (1,3) - I think it's good to keep whistle consistencies here. Try to add whistle at 1 end and 3 start.
4. 00:27:496 (4) - I don't think lowering whistle sound here is good. The music volume is not down here. Better to turn back the volume to 70% here.
5. 00:35:595 (4) - I think whistle at this slider end should be on slider start. 00:34:490 (1,2,3,4) - sounds empty and inconsistant without whistle.
6. 00:39:460 & 00:39:644- What's the purpose of timing point here? I don't think you need to lower volume of clap here. If you want to lower clap volume the timing position is wrong too, because timing point 00:39:644 should be on 00:39:736-.
7. 00:42:220- Same, no need to turn down volume here.
8. 00:54:736 (1,2) - I think because you suddenly follow vocal here the rythim sounds awkward. How about making rythim like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341644 , i think it's more good, and keep following the drum which not awkward to hear.. Rearrange the hitsound if you do this.

1. 00:29:705 (4,3) - The whistle here is awkward since you didn't continue your whistle rythim. Either continue your whistle rythim, or just delete whistle here.
2. Quite good, but Sekai, you use 1/1 too much. Try to adding more variation in the rythim next time you map a song.

1. 00:10:564 (1) - For combo consistencies, i suggest you to remove new combo here.
2. 00:23:631 (4) - This whistle break the consistencies of your whistle rythim. Just remove whistle here.
3. 00:23:815 (5) - No need to turn down volume of whistle at this slider start. If you want to turn down volume, don't turn down it to 40%, it's too low. Turn down by 10% is more good.
4. 00:35:595 (6) - Clap at this slider start iis very awkward to hear and breaking consistencies of your clap rythim. Remove it please.
5. 01:16:085- I suggest you add note here for better readibilty since you suddenly swith polarity in a long gap.
6. 00:53:263 (1) - Same reason as above, better to remove new combo here for consistencies.
7. 01:02:098 (3,5,2,3) - Orz, your whistle pattern here suddenly missing. Add whistle here at both 3, 5 start and circle 2 and 3 end. It will be consistant to your previous whistle rythim at same rythim like these.
8. 01:16:269 (5) - No need new combo here because the rythim is still same. Remove it.

1. 00:06:147 (1,2) - use 1.0x spacing please. Didn't expect this to have 1/1 gap since the spacing is incosistant.
2. 00:09:828 (3) - Move this note further away from 00:09:460 (2) - since you suddenly lower the spacing which is not intuitive.
3. 00:31:177 (1) - For consitencies it's better remove new combo here.
4. 00:53:999 (3,1) - Make the spacing between this note 1.2 please. It's more readable if you use 1.2 spacing here.
5. 01:14:245 (1) - I think clap here at the slider start is awkward. Better to remove it.

Miya wrote:

Hi Akemi :3

Gamu's Insane

1. 00:06:147 (1,2) - use 1.0x spacing please. Didn't expect this to have 1/1 gap since the spacing is incosistant.
2. 00:09:828 (3) - Move this note further away from 00:09:460 (2) - since you suddenly lower the spacing which is not intuitive.
3. 00:31:177 (1) - For consitencies it's better remove new combo here.
4. 00:53:999 (3,1) - Make the spacing between this note 1.2 please. It's more readable if you use 1.2 spacing here.
5. 01:14:245 (1) - I think clap here at the slider start is awkward. Better to remove it.

Good map. But i still not sure at some point. Try to search 2 more mods, then call me back. :3
Good luck~

Miya wrote:

Hi Akemi :3

General

1. Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.
2. Audio Lead-in +500 please. Current audio lead-in is too fast, and quite surprising to player.

Easy

1. 00:09:091 (1) - I think it will be more consistant if you remove new combo here.
2. 00:23:815 (2) - Remove whistle at this slider end. Doesn't follow anything at the back and breaking your whistle consistencies.
3. 00:25:288 (1,3) - I think it's good to keep whistle consistencies here. Try to add whistle at 1 end and 3 start.
4. 00:27:496 (4) - I don't think lowering whistle sound here is good. The music volume is not down here. Better to turn back the volume to 70% here.
5. 00:35:595 (4) - I think whistle at this slider end should be on slider start. 00:34:490 (1,2,3,4) - sounds empty and inconsistant without whistle.
6. 00:39:460 & 00:39:644- What's the purpose of timing point here? I don't think you need to lower volume of clap here. If you want to lower clap volume the timing position is wrong too, because timing point 00:39:644 should be on 00:39:736-.
7. 00:42:220- Same, no need to turn down volume here.
8. 00:54:736 (1,2) - I think because you suddenly follow vocal here the rythim sounds awkward. How about making rythim like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341644 , i think it's more good, and keep following the drum which not awkward to hear.. Rearrange the hitsound if you do this.

Hard

1. 00:10:564 (1) - For combo consistencies, i suggest you to remove new combo here.
2. 00:23:631 (4) - This whistle break the consistencies of your whistle rythim. Just remove whistle here.
3. 00:23:815 (5) - No need to turn down volume of whistle at this slider start. If you want to turn down volume, don't turn down it to 40%, it's too low. Turn down by 10% is more good.
4. 00:35:595 (6) - Clap at this slider start iis very awkward to hear and breaking consistencies of your clap rythim. Remove it please.
5. 01:16:085- I suggest you add note here for better readibilty since you suddenly swith polarity in a long gap.
6. 00:53:263 (1) - Same reason as above, better to remove new combo here for consistencies.
7. 01:02:098 (3,5,2,3) - Orz, your whistle pattern here suddenly missing. Add whistle here at both 3, 5 start and circle 2 and 3 end. It will be consistant to your previous whistle rythim at same rythim like these.
8. 01:16:269 (5) - No need new combo here because the rythim is still same. Remove it.

Good map. But i still not sure at some point. Try to search 2 more mods, then call me back. :3
Good luck~

1. Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.

414,51,10564,2,0,B|468:91|449:158,1,120,2|2

140,360,9091,2,0,B|92:312|116:240,2,99.9999999999999,4|0|2

352,292,1730,2,0,B|424:256|405:172,1,140,4|2

204,120,3202,2,0,B|127:151|145:232,1,140,4|2
132,316,3754,2,0,B|96:308|72:276,1,70

392,336,2650,2,0,B|336:344|304:312,2,90

Loli Cjj wrote:

From pm

=General=
Clean, though those 300g, 300k, and 100k are hard to compare with 300 and 100 with a slight look, but It's nice and moe. >w</

=Easy=
1. 00:10:564 (5) - So tiny mistakes, but it's not curve enough to blanket 00:10:196 (4) - so here is the thing I do to make it as curve as possible - http://puu.sh/AUKh Fix~ :3

414,51,10564,2,0,B|468:91|449:158,1,120,2|2

2. 00:22:343 (1) - Move the endpoint to (264,308) to make it like going to 00:23:815 (2) - if epanded. Fix~ :3

=Hard=
1. 00:01:729 (1) - Perhaps fix this with 00:02:650 (3) - 's approach circle? Fix~ :3

352,292,1730,2,0,B|424:256|405:172,1,140,4|2

2. 00:03:202 (6) - Why? this has a big potential to make a star pattern along with 00:02:466 (2,3,4,5) - , so please fix this. Here, I give you the code for 00:03:202 (6,7) - and some snapshot! http://puu.sh/AUZu (Oh, and please move 00:02:466 (2) - to 228,204) Fix~ :3

204,120,3202,2,0,B|127:151|145:232,1,140,4|2
132,316,3754,2,0,B|96:308|72:276,1,70

3. 00:50:687 (4) - End point 1 grid tiny to the right to make it neater Fix~ :3
4. 01:12:772 (2,3,4) - Where's the clap? I don't want use clap this part~ ;_;

That's all from me, great art.
Star & Good luck

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

hey ^^

[Easy]

SPOILER

1. 00:42:588 (1,2) - sounds strange, i think it would be better if u replace them http://puu.sh/B3oT , fits better with vocal (and put finish on 00:42:956 , same with I/H diffs) Fix~ :3
2. 00:48:110 - add note with soft whistle Fix~
3. 00:35:595 (4) - put finish on the tail o.o? (ur hard diff have it) Fix~

[Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:04:858 (3) - a bit incorrect spacing, all previous notes have 1.2 this one 1.1 Fix~
2. 00:06:883 (1) - just saying, if u want to use blanket tehnique on low spacing, use sliders with 2 waypoints to make it more curve http://puu.sh/B2Z9 , because 1 waypoint looks a bit ugly Fix~
3. 00:50:687 (4) - adding reverse arrow to this slider and deleting this note 00:51:423 (5) - sounds better for me remain this~ ;_;
4. 00:54:736 (1) - same here, reverse fits much better then breaking flow o.o ^
5. 00:59:889 (8) - i think whistle sounds better then clap o.o! Fix~
   

and some offtop

SPOILER

1. 1- why not start patern with whistle sound instead of finish? BGm sound totally match with soft whistle but not with finish, or at least reduce volume for that finish Reduce volume~
2. 2- 00:31:177 (1) - and 00:33:386 (5) - only sekai diff have finish here, just saying xD okay~ add finish~ :3
3. 3- very big difference in volume in Sekai diff orz..
4. 4- Sekai clap sounds better (◕‿◕✿) QAQ...
5. 5- In Gamu diff i would like to see same hitsounds as [Hard] diff o.o!
6. 6- Why there is 2 *Gamu* and 2 *Sekai* in tags but only 1 *ending* o.o?
7. 7- And yeah 4+ star N diff should have much more variation istead of 1/1 spam (¬‿¬)

1. Tag should be '-Sekai- and Sekai' not '-Sekai- and -Sekai-'. I told you double -Sekai- will not work >.<

1. 00:41:484 (3) - Whistle at the start? It will be consistant to your whistle rythim.

1. 00:35:595 (1) - Adding a finish at this circle is good and your finish sounds rythim will become more consistant.
2. 00:47:190 (1) - This slider should move 1/2 tick earlier. It will follow the electric guitar more acurately if you move this slider 1/2 tick earlier.
3. 00:48:386- How about adding a circle at this time? I think it's good and follow vocal more accurate.

1. 00:41:208 (4,5) - For better flow, how about stacking this below 00:40:932 (3) - end point?

Miya wrote:

Recheck~

Gamu's Insane

1. 00:41:208 (4,5) - For better flow, how about stacking this below 00:40:932 (3) - end point?

That's all for now. Call me back once you're done with this mod :3

sorry~ no changed

I think the current placement is good

thank you~ Miya ><

Miya wrote:

Recheck~

General

1. Tag should be '-Sekai- and Sekai' not '-Sekai- and -Sekai-'. I told you double -Sekai- will not work >.<

Where is two -Sekai-~? QAQ I can't find.. I can see just "ending, gamu, -gamu-, sekai, -sekai-" orz.. maybe I fixed unconsciously~

Easy

1. 00:41:484 (3) - Whistle at the start? It will be consistant to your whistle rythim. Fix~

That's all for now. Call me back once you're done with this mod :3