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Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player

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Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 3월 15일 수요일 at 오전 12:50:26

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: Futuristic Player
Source: 咲 -Saki- 阿知賀編 episode of side-A
Tags: ending gamu sekai sekai-nyan Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
BPM: 163
Filesize: 12667kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.52 stars, 95 notes)
  2. Gamu's Insane (4.17 stars, 336 notes)
  3. Hard (3.22 stars, 211 notes)
  4. Sekai's Normal (1.95 stars, 130 notes)
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy - Done
Sekai's Normal - Done By Sekaii
Hard - Done
Gamu's Insane - Done By Gamu
Hitcircle, Pause, Score Skin : Me
Providing New Video : AoiX
Spinner-Skin, Comboburst : Megurine Luka
Last edited by Akemi_Homura , edited 157 times in total.
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
help'd BPM and offset set via irc :3

Log
18:26 <-Sekai-> : =3=
18:26 *-Sekai- is editing (Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48141]
18:26 <Akemi_Homura> : =3=
18:27 <-Sekai-> : i can find the timing for you
18:27 <Akemi_Homura> : yeah~ ><
18:27 <-Sekai-> : BPM: 163
18:27 <-Sekai-> : offset
18:28 <-Sekai-> : you want vocals or beat o.o
18:28 <Akemi_Homura> : o.o
18:28 <Akemi_Homura> : vocal is fine I think
18:29 <-Sekai-> : try 1748
18:30 <-Sekai-> : :o
18:30 <Akemi_Homura> : :3
18:32 <-Sekai-> : so?
18:32 <-Sekai-> : is it good o.o
18:32 <Akemi_Homura> : I think it's good o.o
18:33 <-Sekai-> : maybe make it -5 or 10 if it's seems off
18:33 <Akemi_Homura> : yeah =3=
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
yo ~

General
  1. AudioLeadIn: set it 1000 ~ 2000? when I test this, I think too early for note appear in beginning
Easy
  1. Difficulty Setting: Increase AR +1? seems too slow for easy
  2. 00:15:725 (5) - add new combo in here. too long combo set for easy diff.
  3. 00:22:351 (5) - add new combo for new vocal?
  4. 00:33:394 (6) - same as 00:15:725
  5. 00:48:854 (2) - add new combo for kiai beginning?
  6. 01:03:578 (1) - honestly, this slider seems weird to me. can you change it to more smoother shape?
  7. 01:05:050 (2) - the reverse doesn't fit with the vocal. I suggest to change this slider into non-reverse slider for better flow imo.
  8. 01:12:412 (6) - add new combo, same reason as 00:15:725
Normal
  1. Difficulty setting: Decrease the HP drain -1? for balanced with OD..
  2. 00:01:738 (1) - why not add finish sound in the beginning? seems too silent for beginning song. beside that, easy already do this.
  3. 00:22:719 (1) - add clap in here for consistent hitsounding
  4. 00:29:713 (3,4) - these slider shape seems a bit mess to look. try this one maybe?
    104,176,29713,2,0,B|72:224|96:280,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
    160,344,30449,2,0,B|184:296|168:248,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
  5. 00:40:020 (4) - just a little thing, 1 grid up this for make linear with (3)
  6. 00:42:596 (1) - seems you forgot to add clap in here. add for consistent hitsounding of course.
  7. 00:52:903 (1) - ^ but in the beginning
  8. 00:56:584 (4) - ^
  9. 01:10:572 (2) - same as 00:42:596
Hard
  1. Difficulty Setting: Decrease OD -1 for balanced with HP drain?
  2. 00:04:314 (2) - can you lower the finish sound? seems to noisy in here. well, remove that more better to me since in the backsound isn't support for finish sound.
  3. 00:05:603 (6) - the finish sound in here seems strange to hear imo. remove that?
  4. 00:10:572 (5) - add new combo? I think this is already new vocal..
  5. 00:14:805 (5) - same as 00:04:314
  6. 00:17:382 (4,5) - I guess you should ctrl+r this. finish sound in (4)'s head seems weird to hear. so, more give better effect if you following drum sound in the 00:17:566. see this picture how display in the timeline add clap in (5)'s head.
  7. 00:32:106 (1) - like I mentioned before, finish sound in slider's beginning seems strange in here. remove it?
  8. 00:48:670 (4) - this slider doesn't following the song properly. in other word not fit with the vocal. shorter this slider 1/2, then put in 00:48:854 (add new combo in here too for kiai beginning). after that, add a note in 00:48:670.
Insane
  1. 00:23:823 (1) - add clap for following the drum sound in the end of spinner?
  2. 00:54:744 (1) - add finish in here seems not bad too imo
  3. 01:05:050 (7) - add new combo in here?
  4. 01:12:044 (3) - add clap in here?
  5. 01:14:253 (1) - add whistle in beginning? make sound similar with before notes
That's all
Good luck :3
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Yasora wrote:

yo ~

General
  1. AudioLeadIn: set it 1000 ~ 2000? when I test this, I think too early for note appear in beginning set 1000~ :3
Easy
  1. Difficulty Setting: Increase AR +1? seems too slow for easy Fix~
  2. 00:15:725 (5) - add new combo in here. too long combo set for easy diff. Fix~
  3. 00:22:351 (5) - add new combo for new vocal? Fix~
  4. 00:33:394 (6) - same as 00:15:725 Fix~
  5. 00:48:854 (2) - add new combo for kiai beginning? Fix~
  6. 01:03:578 (1) - honestly, this slider seems weird to me. can you change it to more smoother shape? Change~
  7. 01:05:050 (2) - the reverse doesn't fit with the vocal. I suggest to change this slider into non-reverse slider for better flow imo. Fix~
  8. 01:12:412 (6) - add new combo, same reason as 00:15:725 Fix~
Hard
  1. Difficulty Setting: Decrease OD -1 for balanced with HP drain? Okay~ :3
  2. 00:04:314 (2) - can you lower the finish sound? seems to noisy in here. well, remove that more better to me since in the backsound isn't support for finish sound. Remove~
  3. 00:05:603 (6) - the finish sound in here seems strange to hear imo. remove that? Fix~
  4. 00:10:572 (5) - add new combo? I think this is already new vocal.. Fix~
  5. 00:14:805 (5) - same as 00:04:314 Fix~
  6. 00:17:382 (4,5) - I guess you should ctrl+r this. finish sound in (4)'s head seems weird to hear. so, more give better effect if you following drum sound in the 00:17:566. see this picture how display in the timeline add clap in (5)'s head. Fix~
  7. 00:32:106 (1) - like I mentioned before, finish sound in slider's beginning seems strange in here. remove it? Fix~
  8. 00:48:670 (4) - this slider doesn't following the song properly. in other word not fit with the vocal. shorter this slider 1/2, then put in 00:48:854 (add new combo in here too for kiai beginning). after that, add a note in 00:48:670. Fix~
That's all
Good luck :3
Thanks~~ Yasora-chan~~ ><
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
fixed everything thanks Yasora >w<//

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Sekai's Normal].osu
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu

Yasora wrote:

yo ~

Insane
  1. 00:23:823 (1) - add clap for following the drum sound in the end of spinner?
  2. 00:54:744 (1) - add finish in here seems not bad too imo
  3. 01:05:050 (7) - add new combo in here?
  4. 01:12:044 (3) - add clap in here?
  5. 01:14:253 (1) - add whistle in beginning? make sound similar with before notes
That's all
Good luck :3
all fixed~

thanks ><

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Gamu's Insane].osu
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
add "anime" into tag
delete .osb file?

[Easy]
00:59:897 (2) - delete finish
01:00:633 - add finish
01:16:093 (1) - why not start earlier?

[Sekai's Normal]
00:32:658 (3) - delete finish
00:35:603 (3) - ^
00:38:547 (2) - ^
00:41:492 (3) - ^
00:47:382 (2) - ^
00:48:854 (1,2) - what about slider first and circle next?


[Hard]
00:04:130 (1) - why jump?
00:24:744 (7,8,9,10) - how about this
SPOILER
00:35:787 (7,8,9,10) - ^
00:48:854 (1) - why not use finish?
01:14:621 (2) - delete finish


[Gamu's Insane]
00:20:879 (1,2,3,4) - a bit band,make them more straight
00:22:351 (1) - extend to 00:23:639
00:37:995 (1) - spacing error..
01:12:780 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - so many whistle , sounds noisy :(
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Great Mapset
;) moe mahjon achiga
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
add "anime" into tag okay~
delete .osb file? okay~

[Easy]
00:59:897 (2) - delete finish fix~
01:00:633 - add finish fix~
01:16:093 (1) - why not start earlier? fix~

[Hard]
00:04:130 (1) - why jump? fix~
00:24:744 (7,8,9,10) - how about this fix~ :3
SPOILER
00:35:787 (7,8,9,10) - ^ fix~
00:48:854 (1) - why not use finish? fix~
01:14:621 (2) - delete finish fix~~~

--------------------------------------------------
Great Mapset
;) moe mahjon achiga
Thanks~~ :3
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Remove Sekai in Tags, -Sekai- is enough. Also, change your tags into -Gamu- not Gamu.

  2. 01:16:737 (1) - I believe this slider should end on 01:19:222.

  • Easy
  1. 00:04:682 (3) - Mark a new combo for this note.

  2. 01:16:093 (1) - I think this should start on 01:15:541.

  3. Bump your Approach Rate +1.

  • Normal
  1. Hmm, no big error but I can see some potential on some sliders. Particularly sliders that have potential to become a Slider Blanket for better gameplay. Lemme list them. (: Okay so Here's what I found: 00:05:050 (2) -, 00:14:253 (2) -, 00:34:498 (2) -. Keep in mind that they are not a huge problem but when they get fixed, the diff would be more smoother to play. (:

  2. 00:38:179 (1) - Spacing. Fix it please. Make sure the spacing is consistent.

  3. 00:46:277 (3) - Same as what I stated above.

  4. 00:57:320 (1,2,3,4) - Please try to fix this square pattern for better gameplay.

  • Hard
  1. 00:01:738 (1,6) - These sliders is definitely unrankable. Please change it to something else. I can see some more, please change them.

  2. 00:25:848 (2) - I don't know if you're trying to make a blanket here, but I suggest you make it look like one.

  3. 00:32:474 (2) - Move this away from the previous note. Make sure you make the spacing consistent.

  4. 00:35:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Fix this pentagon pattern please. They don't look good.

  • Insane
  1. 00:06:891 (2) - Please try not to overlap the slider end of this slider on the slider start of the next note. Looks strange.

  2. 00:14:069 (2) - Move 2nd and 3rd point one grid up so it blankets the previous slider.

  3. 00:19:406 (1) - Can you try to fix the curve of this slider? Looks weird.

  4. 01:11:676 (2) - Move 3rd point one grid down so it blankets the upcoming circles.
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
thanks for modding :3

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Sekai's Normal].osu
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Philippines wrote:

  • General
  1. Remove Sekai in Tags, -Sekai- is enough. Also, change your tags into -Gamu- not Gamu. not remove sekai,just add gamu in tags~ :3

  2. 01:16:737 (1) - I believe this slider should end on 01:19:222. I think 01:19:406 is fine~ :3 so remained that now~

  • Easy
  1. 00:04:682 (3) - Mark a new combo for this note. Fix

  2. 01:16:093 (1) - I think this should start on 01:15:541. Just change previous note

  3. Bump your Approach Rate +1. Okay~

  • Hard
  1. 00:01:738 (1,6) - These sliders is definitely unrankable. Please change it to something else. I can see some more, please change them. I don't think that's unrankable o.o; anyway, changed~

  2. 00:25:848 (2) - I don't know if you're trying to make a blanket here, but I suggest you make it look like one. Fix

  3. 00:32:474 (2) - Move this away from the previous note. Make sure you make the spacing consistent. Fix~

  4. 00:35:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Fix this pentagon pattern please. They don't look good. Change
Thanks~~! and Happy Birthday~ :3
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
thank you for guys~

some fixed!

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Gamu's Insane].osu
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:14:621 - two clap at this and 00:16:093 - will make it more rhyme..So just consider to change.It makes big different
00:31:922 (4,1) - some nazi mod
00:35:603 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:05:050 (2,3,4) - feels not very well designed..but it depends on you
00:19:406 - finish here?
00:59:897 - ^
01:10:940 (3) - nazi mod

[Hard]
00:04:866 (3,6) - actually I don't like there slider hides...(also the same for next
01:00:081 - also add some clap at this part will more fit

[Insane]
00:05:971 (5) - place it in the middle of (4) and (1)
00:37:627 (3,1) - a little confused for player

that's all.
Star and good luck
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
just fixed the nazi mod :3

thanks for modding ~

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Sekai's Normal].osu
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:14:621 - two clap at this and 00:16:093 - will make it more rhyme..So just consider to change.It makes big different Change that part~
00:31:922 (4,1) - some nazi mod Fix~
00:35:603 (1) - ^ Fix~

[Hard]
00:04:866 (3,6) - actually I don't like there slider hides...(also the same for next Change that part~ :3
01:00:081 - also add some clap at this part will more fit Change some notes and added clap~

that's all.
Star and good luck
Thanks for modding and star~ =3=/
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
00:13:517 (2,3,4,5) - the mix of circle and slider is difficult in Easy

[Normal]
00:10:204 (1,2,3,4) - make the square better?

[Hard]
I think AR+1 because of the 163 bpm.
I can't pick out any problem but the diff seems weird..some patterns like 00:26:584 (4,5,1,2) and 00:48:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) seem just putting circle and sliders with constant spacing, but make no sense. The diff should have a better whole design.
This is how i'll map this two section:
00:26:584 (4,5,1,2) - use a symmetry http://puu.sh/wGlW
00:48:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - (1,2,3,4) is a passing section so move from right to left, and (3) is a vocal change so you can jump here. Also (3) should be a reverse slider to catch the vocal. At the same time, it is a symmetry of 00:48:854 (1) http://puu.sh/wGoW

[Insane]
00:05:971 (5,1) - like this? http://puu.sh/wFLy sounds better
00:07:259 (4) - shorten by 1/4 tick? I think it is not good to use two 3/4 sliders at a time
00:11:308 (3) - looks a little ugly. http://puu.sh/wFMu
00:35:971 (4) - like this? http://puu.sh/wFN8
00:39:099 (4,1) - the spacing between this two notes should be similar to 00:37:627 (3,1)
00:57:320 (1) - the spacing is confusing

GL~
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
00:13:517 (2,3,4,5) - the mix of circle and slider is difficult in Easy changed that pattern~

[Hard]
I think AR+1 because of the 163 bpm. okay~
I can't pick out any problem but the diff seems weird..some patterns like 00:26:584 (4,5,1,2) and 00:48:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) seem just putting circle and sliders with constant spacing, but make no sense. The diff should have a better whole design.
This is how i'll map this two section:
00:26:584 (4,5,1,2) - use a symmetry http://puu.sh/wGlW Fix~ o.o
00:48:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - (1,2,3,4) is a passing section so move from right to left, and (3) is a vocal change so you can jump here. Also (3) should be a reverse slider to catch the vocal. At the same time, it is a symmetry of 00:48:854 (1) http://puu.sh/wGoW Fix~ :3

GL~
Thank you~~ popner~~ =v=
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
no changes ~ but thanks for modding :3
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
yay~

[General]
clear ><

[Easy]
a bit hard. i suggest to try using more 2/1 notes. ><
but actually there's no anything wrong :3

[Normal]
00:03:210 (3) - try something like this
00:09:099 (4) - x140 y360
00:10:204 (1,2,3,4) - hm.. actually its not looks like perfect q\square for me ><
00:13:517 (4) - 00:10:204 (1) - stack? :3
00:14:253 (2) - x68 y196
00:20:142 (1) - x304 y252
00:29:713 (3) - whistle for big white line?
00:32:658 (3) - ^
00:34:498 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/wPmm
01:00:633 (1) - move NC to (2)

[Hard]
you need AR +1. ><
00:02:474 (2,2) - stack properly
00:06:707 (8,3) - almost overlap
00:09:652 (2,1) - overlap
00:20:511 (5,3) - stack?
00:24:376 (6) - new combo?
00:30:081 (7,3) - overlap

[Insane]
00:15:725 (3,2) - stack better?
00:19:406 (1) - 2nd point: 1 grid right
00:30:081 (7) and 00:31:185 (1) - stack?
00:37:627 (3,1) - stack or something ><
00:48:854 (3) - new combo here (remove NC at 1)

~~~~~~~~~~

gl~

hope it was useful for you >3<


mmmmoooooe! :3
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

-Bakari- wrote:

yay~

[General]
clear ><

[Easy]
a bit hard. i suggest to try using more 2/1 notes. >< I'll try~ :3
but actually there's no anything wrong :3

[Hard]
you need AR +1. >< AR is 7 now~ ;w;
00:02:474 (2,2) - stack properly Fix~
00:06:707 (8,3) - almost overlap Fix~
00:09:652 (2,1) - overlap Fix~
00:20:511 (5,3) - stack? okay~ :3
00:24:376 (6) - new combo? Fix~
00:30:081 (7,3) - overlap Fix~

gl~

hope it was useful for you >3<


mmmmoooooe! :3
Thanks~~ Bakari~ ><
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
hey! now it looks better :3 star!
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
Mod requeue from my queue thanks>.<
[Easy]
01:14:621- Whisite?(soft)

[Normal]
00:54:744 (1) - And Finish for(with) start?

Hard And Insane is Fine :)
My Mod is not good.....
and sorry for my bad english.....
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

-Bakari- wrote:

hey! now it looks better :3 star!
Yay~ >< Thank you~ Bakari~~!

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Mod requeue from my queue thanks>.<
[Easy]
01:14:621- Whisite?(soft) okay~ :3

Hard And Insane is Fine :)
My Mod is not good.....
and sorry for my bad english.....
Thank you for mod~ :3
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Hi there :D


[General]
The last spinner - End at 01:19:222 where is music ends


[Gamu's Insane]
00:37:995 (1) - This is the only spacing that bother me.
00:42:964 (4) - NC


[Hard]
Fine


[Sekai's Normal]
00:13:517 (4) - NC
00:13:885 (1) - Remove NC
00:16:093 (1) - Remove NC
00:16:461 (2) - NC
00:17:934 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:406 (4) - NC
...
I see your comboing pattern.
Making every combos to be 4 doesn't make sense.
Add NC when vocal(lyrics) changed or bar changed.


[Easy]
Fine


:3
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
thank you for modding <3

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Gamu's Insane].osu
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there :D


[General]
The last spinner - End at 01:19:222 where is music ends Fix~!


:3
모딩 감사합니다~ :)
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
thanks for modding >w</

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Sekai's Normal].osu
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang
Hi
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's mod

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[General]

Remove .osb file and full submission

[Easy]

good '^'d

[Sekai's Normal]

00:11:308 (4) - (288,248) -> (296,248) ?
00:58:425 (4) - (328,160) -> (280,132) and adjust next notes?

[Hard]

what the good map ;A;

[Insane]

00:40:940 (3,4,5) - Why don't you try make to straight on grid size 4?


lol~ good song, and good map


Have a good time :D
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's mod

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[General]

Remove .osb file and full submission Fix~ :3

lol~ good song, and good map


Have a good time :D
모딩 감사합니다 닭빵님~ :3
SakiK
376 posts
Joined June 2010
SakiK
here my mod from queue

Saki its me's song!

[Easy]

00:03:210 (2) - rm finish slider ends
00:16:830 (4) - 1 grid down
01:11:676 (4) - more fit to default finish (volume 55%

[Sekai's Normal]

CS+1?
00:40:020 (6) - NC here and 00:41:124 (1) - rm here?
01:15:357 (7) - rm clap

nice mapset

[Hard]

00:03:210 (6) - rm finish or change default finish
00:30:081 (7) - ^
00:50:695 (4) - move x:84 y:356
00:51:799 (7,8,1) - suggestion,add finish at slider ends
01:02:842 (5) - add SC:1 finish

[Gamu's Insane]

I can't find a ploblem... only two suggestion
00:31:185 (1) - move x:212 y:196

00:37:995 (1) - its to be too close before...stack (3)?

nice song and mapset.fight~
Jayel
846 posts
Joined August 2010
Jayel
안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 날라왔습니다~
Hello, from my queue~!!

[General]
Nothing

[Easy]
00:03:210(2) - 슬라이더 끝 부분에 피니시 소리 없애는게 나아 보입니다.
00:45:909 - 이 곳 스피너... 이지에 비해 짧다는 생각이 드는 건 저 뿐인가요...
00:48:486(1) - 스피너 이후 충분한 스페이스가 있다는 거엔 태클 걸고 싶진 않는데...
이지에서 이른바 '못갖춘 마디'(음...?) 형식으로 노트를 놓는 건 플레이어가 하다가 선뜻 당황할 듯 합니다.


[Sekai's Normal]
00:10:940(3,4) - 개인적으로 노트 배치가 왠지 자연스러워 보이지 않습니다.
This hitcircle placements looks bad IMO. Try to make it better by placing the third one at (x:256, y:140) and the fourth one at (x:292 y:232)
00:46:645(7,8) - 이 노트들을 이전 노트와 대칭되게 놓으면 더 나을 듯 합니다.
Make those notes symmetrical with 00:45:909(5).

[Hard]
노트들 사이 간격이 약간 일정하지 못하다는 것만 빼면 괜찮은 난이도 입니다.

[Gamu's Insane]
00:01:553(1) - 흠... 이 노트에서 십중팔구 박자를 놓칠 거란 생각이 강하게 듭니다.
Well... I suggest you to remove this note because some players might be confused to guess the correct rhythm and hit it.

Nothing else.

네, 끝입니다. 행운을 빕니다~!
That's all, good luck, guys~!!
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

SakiK wrote:

here my mod from queue

Saki its me's song!

[Easy]

00:03:210 (2) - rm finish slider ends Fix~
00:16:830 (4) - 1 grid down Fix~
01:11:676 (4) - more fit to default finish (volume 55%) Change~

[Hard]

00:03:210 (6) - rm finish or change default finish Fix~ :3
00:30:081 (7) - ^ just reduce volume ;w;
00:50:695 (4) - move x:84 y:356 Fix~
00:51:799 (7,8,1) - suggestion,add finish at slider ends remain that~
01:02:842 (5) - add SC:1 finish ^

nice song and mapset.fight~
Thank you~ ><

Jayel wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 날라왔습니다~
Hello, from my queue~!!

[General]
Nothing

[Easy]
00:03:210(2) - 슬라이더 끝 부분에 피니시 소리 없애는게 나아 보입니다. Fix~
00:45:909 - 이 곳 스피너... 이지에 비해 짧다는 생각이 드는 건 저 뿐인가요... 음..; 일단 남겨둘게요~ 같은 지적 또 들어오면 한번더 생각해보겠습니다~ :3
00:48:486(1) - 스피너 이후 충분한 스페이스가 있다는 거엔 태클 걸고 싶진 않는데...
이지에서 이른바 '못갖춘 마디'(음...?) 형식으로 노트를 놓는 건 플레이어가 하다가 선뜻 당황할 듯 합니다. 이것도 마찬가지~~~
[Hard]
노트들 사이 간격이 약간 일정하지 못하다는 것만 빼면 괜찮은 난이도 입니다.

네, 끝입니다. 행운을 빕니다~!
That's all, good luck, guys~!!
모딩 감사합니다~ :3
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
thank you for modding <3

some fixed~

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Gamu's Insane].osu
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
Hi o/

[Easy]
00:01:738 - ~00:11:308 - i dont think the logic of putting whistles on 2nd and 4th ticks is a good idea in easier diffs, because you can't add them consistently due to the lack of note and long sliders
so you should add whistles by another logic (for example; putting them every 1st and 3rd white ticks)
00:03:210 - volume is too loud, i think 30% is enough..
00:27:504 (4) - finish doesnt fit here
00:30:449 - ^
00:36:339 - ^ same, add it to beginning of (3) instead
01:10:572 - this clap sounds weird to me because percuttion sounds on blue and red tick
remove it or at least reduce volume
01:13:885 - finish is too much, whistle is enough
01:15:357 (3) - i dont get why you use slider here but i think a circle is enough because the end of this slider doesnt follow anything.

[Sekai's Normal]
volume is kinda boring, so try to make Kiai time louder~
try to use custom normal hitfinish for some part (ex.00:03:210 - )
00:12:412 (2) - i'd suggest remove whistle from the end and add it to the repeat to follow music better
00:13:885 (2) - clap is enough and better
00:13:149 (3) - add whistle here
00:16:461 (1) - add whistle at the beginning
00:25:296 (1) - in this combo, the accent is too complicated (percussion sounds on blue and red ticks) try something like this
http://puu.sh/x4UG
01:15:357 - same as easy

[Hard]
00:09:099 (1,2,3) - i prefer placing like this so that they make triangle for better flow
http://puu.sh/x4ZP
00:30:081 (7) - volume 30% is too low to hit, 50% is better
00:32:474 - this finish doesnt fit here..
00:39:468 (1) - ^
00:42:228 (1) - ^
00:45:909 (5) - add newcombo? 8combos are too much for Normal diff imo
00:54:744 (1) - end this at 00:55:112 - to add clap consistently
01:11:676 - volume is too low..

[Gamu's Insane]
00:01:553 ~ 00:13:517 - ちょっと全体的にhitsoundが少なくて寂しいです
00:47:750 - 音量下げた方がいいかな
00:49:406 (1) - newcombo不要かと
01:04:682 (6,1) - 流れが良い配置のあとでこのspacingはちょっと詰まってる感じがして叩きにくいかも
01:05:787 (3) - 01:05:050 (1) - と同じ形の方がキレイです
01:10:204 (2) - http://puu.sh/x54h　こんな感じで音とってみては？
01:12:964 (3,4,5,6,7) - whistleが多すぎて結構煩いです　いくつか消すか最低でもちょっと音量下げた方がいいです

hmm not much to say, star~
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
thank you~ Melo-chan :D

some fixed~

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Gamu's Insane].osu
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
All Fixed~~
ありがとう~ Melo chan~ ><
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
Melo-chan thanks for modding and fixed some stuff~ :3

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Futuristic Player (TV Size) (Akemi_Homura) [Sekai's Normal].osu
Star Stream
2,039 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
From my queue

[General]
  1. Source : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
  2. Offset -20
  3. end #1 kiai 01:00:265 - start #2 kiai 01:00:633 -
  4. hitwhistle for 'ring' sound like here 00:01:738 - http://puu.sh/xboo
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - due to long combo, downbeat, changed melody, combo like this
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:241 (6,1,2) - your combos are really strange, just wondering, what did you follow, if i were you, i'd NC 00:28:241 (6) - because of downbeat and changed melody, remove useless NC 00:30:449 (1) - and start combo from 00:31:185 (2) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:768 (4) - not fit at all now imo, NC here and remove 00:27:504 (1) - and start next combo from 00:28:609 (3) - , or remove NC 00:27:504 (1) - and start combo from 00:28:609 (3) -
  2. 00:41:124 (1) - why didn't you started this combo from 00:40:020 (6) -
  3. 00:53:271 - with this finish, adding finish 00:54:007 - and 00:54:744 - will be really exciting finish pattern, or at least add finish at 00:54:744 - because you did it at 01:00:633 (3) -
  4. 00:59:897 - ^
  5. 00:58:057 (3,4) - not symmetry, copy/paste from 00:57:320 (1,2) - and ctrl+r
  6. 01:15:357 (7) - because i can hear a drum sound from 01:16:277 - , i'd replace with a circle at 01:15:357 - and a slider from 01:15:725 - to 01:16:277 - and start spinner from 01:16:645 -
[Hard]
  1. i really can't understand your combos, what did you followed for ._.
  2. 00:51:799 (7) - NC due to pitch and downbeat
  3. 01:15:725 - feels empty, add note like Normal diff
[Insane]
  1. 00:42:964 (1,2) - its movement is really hard, keep your jump, stack 00:42:964 (1) - on 00:42:596 (2) - and 00:43:149 (2) - on 00:42:412 (1) - will be more playable and soft
  2. 00:46:277 (2) - 1 grid right to stack on 00:45:541 (4) - ?
  3. 00:47:382 (1) - in Insane diff, i'd use more dynamic beat, add a circle at 00:47:382 - and 1/2 slider from 00:47:566 - with 1 arrow
  4. 01:15:725 - same as Hard diff
Good luck with rank~
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. Source : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A Fix~
  2. Offset -20 Fix~ :3
  3. end #1 kiai 01:00:265 - start #2 kiai 01:00:633 - Fix~
  4. hitwhistle for 'ring' sound like here 00:01:738 - http://puu.sh/xboo Thank you~ :3 but Not changed now~
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - due to long combo, downbeat, changed melody, combo like this Fix~
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:241 (6,1,2) - your combos are really strange, just wondering, what did you follow, if i were you, i'd NC 00:28:241 (6) - because of downbeat and changed melody, remove useless NC 00:30:449 (1) - and start combo from 00:31:185 (2) - Fix~
[Hard]
  1. i really can't understand your combos, what did you followed for ._.
  2. 00:51:799 (7) - NC due to pitch and downbeat Fix~
  3. 01:15:725 - feels empty, add note like Normal diff Fix~
Good luck with rank~
모딩 감사합니다~ :3
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
sorry... no change

but,thank you for modding ><
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General
  1. Are you sure the source and tag is right?The true OP of <Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A> is http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48435You can ask Kawayi Rika for more help
  2. You have use a Video with a terrible setting.also the audio does't has enough quality.If you have the source video you can ask me to encode a new one
Gamu's Insane
  1. All fine
Hard
  1. 00:36:319 (1) - add a clap on first circle, to show the beat
  2. 01:08:711 (5,3) - not stack well
Normal
  1. All fine
Easy
  1. seems fine
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General
  1. Are you sure the source and tag is right?The true OP of <Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A> is http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48435You can ask Kawayi Rika for more help It's my mistake.. orz It's ending. so delete opening tags, and add ending~ :P
  2. You have use a Video with a terrible setting.also the audio does't has enough quality.If you have the source video you can ask me to encode a new one
Hard
  1. 00:36:319 (1) - add a clap on first circle, to show the beat Fix~
  2. 01:08:711 (5,3) - not stack well Fix~ :3
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,737 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Hi , From my queue

Easy
01:10:552 (2) - add whistle at the end of this slider , sounds better

-Sekai-'s Normal
00:02:822 (2) - move down 1 grid for better spacing
00:36:319 (3) - use slider instead note , drag a note for her voice , like this
SPOILER
00:45:889 (5) - new combo here cuz it starts with finish sound , and its position looks great to new here, also amount of combo isn't a good for normal diff
01:15:337 (7) - whistle is too low, use something like clap or finish is better (recommend finish)

Hard
00:33:374 (4,5,6,7) - I will use this rhythm instead cuz it sounds very good for using triplet stream here
SPOILER
00:49:386 (3) - placement like this makes better flow imo
SPOILER
01:12:392 (3) - new combo
01:16:257 (1) - It's too short from (3) , you use 1/2 1/2 1/2 almost in the song but this point will distract much while playing
maybe move up more than 1.2 ?

Gamu's Insane
00:59:877 (3) - under the slider makes it harder to look but it's fine. just mention
01:16:257 (1) - reduce volume a bit , it's kinda tough from this sound.

Good Luck :oops:
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
All fixed~ :3 Thank you for modding~
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~♪~♪~~


[Easy]
00:48:466 - 1 and 00:49:570 (2) - X-axis alignment~
00:33:374 - remove nc~
00:37:055 - nc~
00:39:264 - remove nc~
00:40:000 - nc~

[Sekai's Normal]
00:35:951 - distance not uniform~
00:42:944 (1,3) - Y-axis alignment~

[Hard]
very nice!!!~

[Gamu's Insane]
00:04:662 (1,3) - y-axis of symmetry?
00:06:871 (2,3) - ^
00:34:846 (1,2,3,4) - a little mess~maybe u can change to more beautiful~

Nice song!!and Nice mapset!~
star☆♪~Good Luck~ :oops:
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~♪~♪~~


[Easy]
00:48:466 - 1 and 00:49:570 (2) - X-axis alignment~ Fix~ :3
00:33:374 - remove nc~ remained now =3=
00:37:055 - nc~ ^
00:39:264 - remove nc~ ^
00:40:000 - nc~ ^

[Hard]
very nice!!!~

Nice song!!and Nice mapset!~
star☆♪~Good Luck~ :oops:
Thank you for modding & star ~~ :3
Highslider
58 posts
Joined September 2009
Highslider
[Gamu's Insane]
offset is real fast
I think +25or30 better
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

sreader wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]
offset is real fast
I think +25or30 better
Thank you~ :3
offset +25~
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
mark~~ so that I won't forget :3
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Thanks~ Luka~<3
If you don't mind, you can make other-sets too~ ;)
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