1. 00:00:257 (1,2) - I would like to remove this two note because there are no any instruments/ music/ bass to support that so it doesn't sound a good effect.
2. 00:04:306 (26) - k?
3. 00:04:490 (27,28) - d d please.
4. 00:26:392 (136) - Change it back to small note? I don't think a big kat is suitable here because there is no accent point to fit with finish sound, a simple note can fit the music very well.
5. 00:47:374 (263) - d here would be nice.
6. 01:13:325 (407,408,409,410) - I can't see any reason that it needs a 2plets pattern here. They don't fit the music very well. Simple 1/2 is much better imo.
7. 01:14:521 (418) - k?

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
orz I have forgot to mod for 1 month..sorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorry That's okay~ lol
color2 and 3 are nearly the same with this hitcircle.add 1 more color between them? Colour Fixed~ :3
something about hitsound
soft-hitfinish2.wav : I don't think it can fit this song.I can't hear it in music I think this sound not bad.. I'm sorry about this individual difference..
soft-hitclap.wav : soft-hitclap2.wav is the real drums.not this.If you really want to use this. at least turn down its volume okay~ volume is little down~

[Easy]
00:45:717 (1) - why not start at 00:45:901 to follow vocal? I consider Beginner's reaction velocity, then Think this spin is too short.. ;_; So Start eailier.

[Hard]
00:07:619 (3) - finish is too noisy Reduce volume~ (Easy Diff too)
00:48:110 (1,2,3,4,1) - seems need some work umm..orz I don't know where is need some work~ ;_; Hit sounds..? Placement...?
01:16:269 (5) - remove whistle and finish then add clap I think current sounds and your suggestion both are fine~ but I want consistency with Insane diff. So If Gamu-chan change that sounds I'll fix that too~ :3

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[Gamu]
00:47:374 (1) - end at 00:47:558 sounds better no~
00:48:110 (1) - whistle not good ok~
01:16:269 (1,2) - clap is better (1) - Clap changed. (2) - no changed
I personally suggestting adding whistle at 1,3 in kiai time. sounds much better.hmm... I don't think so

1. 00:30:451 (2) - Add a whistle here at slider start to follow up your previous whistle rythim?
2. 00:31:187 (1) - I fell you don't need to reduce the volume of this finish in here. Just remove the timing section that reduce the volume of the finish sounds.
3. 00:33:396 (5) - You should add a finish here at this slider end to follow up finish at 00:31:187 (1) -
4. 00:40:022 (1) - Add a whistle here too at the slider end. Not consistant for your whistle rythim.
5. 00:48:120 (1,2) - Increase both of this circle volume by 10% please. It's too low imo. So 1 will have 40% volume and 2 will have 50% volume.

1. I think overal volume in this diff is very low. Please add another 10%-20% to the overal volume.
2. 00:26:770 (1) - What's the point of new combo here? Doesn't neccesary and ruin your combo consistencies. Just remove the new combo.
3. 00:35:605 (1) - I don't think finish2 is fit here. Sounds awkward to me since in your previous and next section, you just use defaut finish sounds. So please change this finish sounds into the default one.
4. 00:38:549 (4) - It would be good too if you add another default soft finish at this circle to make hitsounds more consistant.
5. 00:41:126 (2) - It would be good if you add default finish sounds at this slider end since it follow up previous finish rythim nicely.
6. 00:46:647 (3,1) - Still, it's sounds weird for me. And i'm suprised that this slider 00:46:647 (3) - has more repeat than other 1/2 repeat slider. It can surprised most of normal player. I suggest you reduce the repeat at this slider 00:46:647 (3) - then move 00:47:200 (1) - to 00:47:200- since it's follow the music better.
7. 00:49:592 (2) - It's better to remove this finish sounds since it's not consistant to your finish rythim.
8. 01:00:267 (7) - This combo is very very long. I suggest you add a new combo here to reduce it. Also, add a finish at this slider end since it's very fit with the cymbal sounds from the music.

1. 00:17:752 (6) - Miss a whistle at this slider start?
2. 00:37:077 (3) - Aw, the whistle and finish sound here at the start of the slider is very loud and doesn't good to hear. Just remove the whistle to fix this.

1. 00:44:347- Reduce timing point here by 5% please, it's very loud imo.
2. 00:45:819- ^ Reduce by 10%

Miya wrote:

Recheck~

Easy

1. 00:30:451 (2) - Add a whistle here at slider start to follow up your previous whistle rythim?
2. 00:31:187 (1) - I fell you don't need to reduce the volume of this finish in here. Just remove the timing section that reduce the volume of the finish sounds.
3. 00:33:396 (5) - You should add a finish here at this slider end to follow up finish at 00:31:187 (1) -
4. 00:40:022 (1) - Add a whistle here too at the slider end. Not consistant for your whistle rythim.
5. 00:48:120 (1,2) - Increase both of this circle volume by 10% please. It's too low imo. So 1 will have 40% volume and 2 will have 50% volume.

Hard

1. 00:17:752 (6) - Miss a whistle at this slider start?
2. 00:37:077 (3) - Aw, the whistle and finish sound here at the start of the slider is very loud and doesn't good to hear. Just remove the whistle to fix this.

That's all >.<

Miya wrote:

Recheck~

Gamu's Insane

1. 00:44:347- Reduce timing point here by 5% please, it's very loud imo. Changed to 75%
2. 00:45:819- ^ Reduce by 10% Changed to 80%

That's all >.<

1. Some objects before Red Timing Section , is it unrankable? , If you scared MAT pop this when bubbled , Use Offset 267 in stead of 1,740

1. 00:04:316 (24,25,26) - kkk sounds not good and it's strange here...
2. 00:04:868 (27,28) - Delete these circles , because there is nothing in the music , and you should add a circle 00:05:052 - to follow the vocal ^_^
3. 00:09:101 (43) - Use D or d insteal of K , K sounds very strange here >_<
4. 00:29:531 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - A long stream here? why? I feel uncomfortable while I playing
5. 01:03:580 (352) - d or k is enough , K here sounds to loud for me
6. 01:14:899 (415) - Move 1 tick forward sounds better
7. This taiko diff seems good , but I think you need to follow some drum , vocal or any others , Some Random beats are uncomfortable

Miya wrote:

Why graved? i was going to recheck this. :/
Well, if you don't want to revive this, i will delete this map from my list.

Gamu wrote:

omg..I am really glad about that.

But very old map D:
So I want to remap my diff if you are aiming for Rank

1. 00:00:267 (1) - ここはwhislte必要ないのでは？　バスが鳴り出すのが00:00:635 - ここからなので
2. 00:42:966 (7,1) - NCが逆のような
3. 00:47:383 (1) - 音が無いようなのでリピート消したほうがいいと思います。
4. 00:48:119 - ボーカルに合わせてnote追加しませんか？次の1/8スライダーに入りやすくなると思います。
5. 00:59:898 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - なんだか歪んでいるように見えたのでもう少し整えてみてはどうでしょうか？ 具体的にはnote間が詰まって見えたのでストリームの開始をもう少し下の位置からにすると改善できると思います。
6. 01:07:628 (6,7,8,9,1) - 01:09:101 (9,10,1) - この2つの場所は裏でバスがはっきり聞こえるのでwhislteを入れてみてはどうでしょうか？
   
   nice map :3

Guy wrote:

Hi! Gamu's request :3 check only Insane diff~

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[Gamu's Insane]

1. 00:00:267 (1) - ここはwhislte必要ないのでは？　バスが鳴り出すのが00:00:635 - ここからなので
   ほんまや、消します。
2. 00:42:966 (7,1) - NCが逆のような
   omg...
3. 00:47:383 (1) - 音が無いようなのでリピート消したほうがいいと思います。
   音は微妙にあるけど、聞こえづらいし、ないほうがいいか。
4. 00:48:119 - ボーカルに合わせてnote追加しませんか？次の1/8スライダーに入りやすくなると思います。
   ボーカル無視してbackの音だけで取ってる部分だから、ボーカルに合わせておくと次のリピートスライダーﾀｲﾐﾝｸﾞがとりづらいと思うので、入れませんでした。（ちなみに1/6ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰ ﾎﾞｿｯ)
5. 00:59:898 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - なんだか歪んでいるように見えたのでもう少し整えてみてはどうでしょうか？ 具体的にはnote間が詰まって見えたのでストリームの開始をもう少し下の位置からにすると改善できると思います。
   超適当においてました。綺麗に整えます。
6. 01:07:628 (6,7,8,9,1) - 01:09:101 (9,10,1) - この2つの場所は裏でバスがはっきり聞こえるのでwhislteを入れてみてはどうでしょうか？
   入れときまーす。
   
   nice map :3

Good luck!

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hello! From my Queue

Sorry, but Your map is perfect, xD, I can't mod
For your good job, take my star ;D

1. GamuさんのdiffだけAudioleadin:2000ですけどOK?
2. 00:04:132 (4) - あまり良いflowじゃないので、stackさせるより上の方に配置させるのはどうでしょう？
3. 00:07:260 (5) -　melodyに合ってないように感じました。普通のcurved sliderでも良いような気がします
4. 00:27:506- ここはslider-head かcircleが合うような気がします。たとえばこんな感じとか
   
5. 01:11:309 (3) - SV変えてもおもしろいかも

gxytcgxytc wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]
00:13:518 (1) - MISS finish? No.

RandomEffect wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]

1. GamuさんのdiffだけAudioleadin:2000ですけどOK? ルールではなくガイドラインに書かれていますので、絶対というわけではなないので大丈夫だと思います。　私のdiffだけ最初の部分を置いてるので、その分audio lead-inで時間伸ばさないと開始時間が早くなっちゃうんですよね。それを避けるために増やしています。
2. 00:04:132 (4) - あまり良いflowじゃないので、stackさせるより上の方に配置させるのはどうでしょう？ 確かにそうですね。流れを良くしました。
3. 00:07:260 (5) -　melodyに合ってないように感じました。普通のcurved sliderでも良いような気がします　 そればっかだとちょっとアレかなぁ・・・って思い少し形を工夫したつもりでいます。特に違和感がない（？）と自分は思いますので、このままにさせてもらいます。しかし、何度も指摘がきた場合、再度検討していきたいと思います。
4. 00:27:506- ここはslider-head かcircleが合うような気がします。たとえばこんな感じとか そうかな。私は曲に合ってると思う！
   
5. 01:11:309 (3) - SV変えてもおもしろいかも SVを変える所とか、まだ私にはハッキリと理解できていません。そのため、SVを変えないほうがいいと思うので、このままに。

良いdiffです～
あまり指摘するところありませんでした。。。

waxman wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]
00:17:002 (3,5) - 少々近いので直してください そこまで気にならない程度だと思う！
00:29:517 (1) - まっすぐに伸びるスライダーのほうがいいのでは？　00:29:333 (4)の流れにマッチしますが、がむさんのも悪くないです＞ｗ＜
逆にまっすぐになるのが嫌で、ずらした感じはあります。 ９０度のまっすぐスライダーは滅多に使わないです。微妙にずらすのが大好きなので、このままで。
00:31:726 (2) - 00:32:278 (4)のblanketに合わせてみては？　きれいに見えるので別にそこまで問題じゃないです。 意識はしてるのですが、そこまで・・・って感じなので、修正は必要ないと思いますが、私は直しときます。

bad image

00:48:198 (1) - 00:48:106にしてほしいです。 HDでやるとあれ？って感じになるかもしれません。(High recommedned) ずれていました。直しときます。
01:03:934 (4,6) - 平行ではないので気になりました平行だと思います～
01:15:346 (1) - hit sound強調するためのNCですが、01:16:266 (1)でNCされてるのでいらないと思いました(個人的に 消しときます。

素晴らしいマップです。　僕にもきれいなマップの作り方を教えてほしいものです＞ｗ＜

• General

  좋네염!
  
  
  

  • Easy

    00:06:143 (2) - 약간 어색한 것 같네요. 아래처럼 모양을 바꿔주시는 건 어떠실지?? ㅎㅎ
    

    SPOILER

    

    00:10:192 (4,5) - 담요가 약간 어긋난 것 같아요!
    00:37:063 (1,2,3) - 개인적인 제안이에요!!
    

    SPOILER

    

    01:03:566 (1,2) - Blanket (개인적인 제안입니다)
    
    
    

    • Sekai's Normal

      00:04:671 (1,2) - blanket better
      00:08:720 (3,4) - ^
      00:05:039 (2,4) - Make to same shape
      00:20:867 (3,4) - ^
      00:28:229 (1,2) - I'm not recommend overlapping
      00:34:487 (6,1) - blanket?
      
      I recommend you that blanket better.
      Please try to fix that.
      
      
      

      • Hard

        00:02:646 (3) - NC
        00:05:959 (7) - 을 지워주시고 00:06:143 (8) - 를 00:05:959 - 에서 시작하게 해 주세요. 그리고 00:06:511 - 서클추가.
        

        SPOILER

        

        00:32:094 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리의 사각형을 (80,96)으로 이동시켜주세요!
        00:33:842 (6) - 지워도 괜찮을 것 같습니다.
        00:35:591 (6) - NC
        01:00:622 (4) - ^
        
        
        

        • Insane

          It is good to me
          
          I'm suck at on Insane ._.

HabiHolic wrote:

메타 데이터 체크하러 왔습니다.

Artist : Futuristic Player

SPOILER

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