1. AudioLeadIn: set it 1000 ~ 2000? when I test this, I think too early for note appear in beginning

1. Difficulty Setting: Increase AR +1? seems too slow for easy
2. 00:15:725 (5) - add new combo in here. too long combo set for easy diff.
3. 00:22:351 (5) - add new combo for new vocal?
4. 00:33:394 (6) - same as 00:15:725
5. 00:48:854 (2) - add new combo for kiai beginning?
6. 01:03:578 (1) - honestly, this slider seems weird to me. can you change it to more smoother shape?
7. 01:05:050 (2) - the reverse doesn't fit with the vocal. I suggest to change this slider into non-reverse slider for better flow imo.
8. 01:12:412 (6) - add new combo, same reason as 00:15:725

1. Difficulty setting: Decrease the HP drain -1? for balanced with OD..
2. 00:01:738 (1) - why not add finish sound in the beginning? seems too silent for beginning song. beside that, easy already do this.
3. 00:22:719 (1) - add clap in here for consistent hitsounding
4. 00:29:713 (3,4) - these slider shape seems a bit mess to look. try this one maybe?
   

   104,176,29713,2,0,B|72:224|96:280,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
   160,344,30449,2,0,B|184:296|168:248,1,99.9999999999999,0|8

5. 00:40:020 (4) - just a little thing, 1 grid up this for make linear with (3)
6. 00:42:596 (1) - seems you forgot to add clap in here. add for consistent hitsounding of course.
7. 00:52:903 (1) - ^ but in the beginning
8. 00:56:584 (4) - ^
9. 01:10:572 (2) - same as 00:42:596

1. Difficulty Setting: Decrease OD -1 for balanced with HP drain?
2. 00:04:314 (2) - can you lower the finish sound? seems to noisy in here. well, remove that more better to me since in the backsound isn't support for finish sound.
3. 00:05:603 (6) - the finish sound in here seems strange to hear imo. remove that?
4. 00:10:572 (5) - add new combo? I think this is already new vocal..
5. 00:14:805 (5) - same as 00:04:314
6. 00:17:382 (4,5) - I guess you should ctrl+r this. finish sound in (4)'s head seems weird to hear. so, more give better effect if you following drum sound in the 00:17:566. see this picture how display in the timeline add clap in (5)'s head.
7. 00:32:106 (1) - like I mentioned before, finish sound in slider's beginning seems strange in here. remove it?
8. 00:48:670 (4) - this slider doesn't following the song properly. in other word not fit with the vocal. shorter this slider 1/2, then put in 00:48:854 (add new combo in here too for kiai beginning). after that, add a note in 00:48:670.

1. 00:23:823 (1) - add clap for following the drum sound in the end of spinner?
2. 00:54:744 (1) - add finish in here seems not bad too imo
3. 01:05:050 (7) - add new combo in here?
4. 01:12:044 (3) - add clap in here?
5. 01:14:253 (1) - add whistle in beginning? make sound similar with before notes

Yasora wrote:

yo ~

General

1. AudioLeadIn: set it 1000 ~ 2000? when I test this, I think too early for note appear in beginning set 1000~ :3

Easy

1. Difficulty Setting: Increase AR +1? seems too slow for easy Fix~
2. 00:15:725 (5) - add new combo in here. too long combo set for easy diff. Fix~
3. 00:22:351 (5) - add new combo for new vocal? Fix~
4. 00:33:394 (6) - same as 00:15:725 Fix~
5. 00:48:854 (2) - add new combo for kiai beginning? Fix~
6. 01:03:578 (1) - honestly, this slider seems weird to me. can you change it to more smoother shape? Change~
7. 01:05:050 (2) - the reverse doesn't fit with the vocal. I suggest to change this slider into non-reverse slider for better flow imo. Fix~
8. 01:12:412 (6) - add new combo, same reason as 00:15:725 Fix~

Hard

1. Difficulty Setting: Decrease OD -1 for balanced with HP drain? Okay~ :3
2. 00:04:314 (2) - can you lower the finish sound? seems to noisy in here. well, remove that more better to me since in the backsound isn't support for finish sound. Remove~
3. 00:05:603 (6) - the finish sound in here seems strange to hear imo. remove that? Fix~
4. 00:10:572 (5) - add new combo? I think this is already new vocal.. Fix~
5. 00:14:805 (5) - same as 00:04:314 Fix~
6. 00:17:382 (4,5) - I guess you should ctrl+r this. finish sound in (4)'s head seems weird to hear. so, more give better effect if you following drum sound in the 00:17:566. see this picture how display in the timeline add clap in (5)'s head. Fix~
7. 00:32:106 (1) - like I mentioned before, finish sound in slider's beginning seems strange in here. remove it? Fix~
8. 00:48:670 (4) - this slider doesn't following the song properly. in other word not fit with the vocal. shorter this slider 1/2, then put in 00:48:854 (add new combo in here too for kiai beginning). after that, add a note in 00:48:670. Fix~

That's all
Good luck :3

Yasora wrote:

yo ~

Insane

1. 00:23:823 (1) - add clap for following the drum sound in the end of spinner?
2. 00:54:744 (1) - add finish in here seems not bad too imo
3. 01:05:050 (7) - add new combo in here?
4. 01:12:044 (3) - add clap in here?
5. 01:14:253 (1) - add whistle in beginning? make sound similar with before notes

That's all
Good luck :3

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
add "anime" into tag okay~
delete .osb file? okay~

[Easy]
00:59:897 (2) - delete finish fix~
01:00:633 - add finish fix~
01:16:093 (1) - why not start earlier? fix~

[Hard]
00:04:130 (1) - why jump? fix~
00:24:744 (7,8,9,10) - how about this fix~ :3

SPOILER

00:35:787 (7,8,9,10) - ^ fix~
00:48:854 (1) - why not use finish? fix~
01:14:621 (2) - delete finish fix~~~

--------------------------------------------------
Great Mapset
moe mahjon achiga

Philippines wrote:

• General

1. Remove Sekai in Tags, -Sekai- is enough. Also, change your tags into -Gamu- not Gamu. not remove sekai,just add gamu in tags~ :3
   
   
2. 01:16:737 (1) - I believe this slider should end on 01:19:222. I think 01:19:406 is fine~ :3 so remained that now~

• Easy

1. 00:04:682 (3) - Mark a new combo for this note. Fix
   
   
2. 01:16:093 (1) - I think this should start on 01:15:541. Just change previous note
   
   
3. Bump your Approach Rate +1. Okay~

• Hard

1. 00:01:738 (1,6) - These sliders is definitely unrankable. Please change it to something else. I can see some more, please change them. I don't think that's unrankable o.o; anyway, changed~
   
   
2. 00:25:848 (2) - I don't know if you're trying to make a blanket here, but I suggest you make it look like one. Fix
   
   
3. 00:32:474 (2) - Move this away from the previous note. Make sure you make the spacing consistent. Fix~
   
   
4. 00:35:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Fix this pentagon pattern please. They don't look good. Change

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:14:621 - two clap at this and 00:16:093 - will make it more rhyme..So just consider to change.It makes big different Change that part~
00:31:922 (4,1) - some nazi mod Fix~
00:35:603 (1) - ^ Fix~

[Hard]
00:04:866 (3,6) - actually I don't like there slider hides...(also the same for next Change that part~ :3
01:00:081 - also add some clap at this part will more fit Change some notes and added clap~

that's all.
Star and good luck

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
00:13:517 (2,3,4,5) - the mix of circle and slider is difficult in Easy changed that pattern~

[Hard]
I think AR+1 because of the 163 bpm. okay~
I can't pick out any problem but the diff seems weird..some patterns like 00:26:584 (4,5,1,2) and 00:48:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) seem just putting circle and sliders with constant spacing, but make no sense. The diff should have a better whole design.
This is how i'll map this two section:
00:26:584 (4,5,1,2) - use a symmetry http://puu.sh/wGlW Fix~ o.o
00:48:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - (1,2,3,4) is a passing section so move from right to left, and (3) is a vocal change so you can jump here. Also (3) should be a reverse slider to catch the vocal. At the same time, it is a symmetry of 00:48:854 (1) http://puu.sh/wGoW Fix~ :3

GL~

-Bakari- wrote:

yay~

[General]
clear ><

[Easy]
a bit hard. i suggest to try using more 2/1 notes. >< I'll try~ :3
but actually there's no anything wrong :3

[Hard]
you need AR +1. >< AR is 7 now~ ;w;
00:02:474 (2,2) - stack properly Fix~
00:06:707 (8,3) - almost overlap Fix~
00:09:652 (2,1) - overlap Fix~
00:20:511 (5,3) - stack? okay~ :3
00:24:376 (6) - new combo? Fix~
00:30:081 (7,3) - overlap Fix~

gl~

hope it was useful for you >3<


mmmmoooooe! :3

-Bakari- wrote:

hey! now it looks better :3 star!

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Mod requeue from my queue thanks>.<
[Easy]
01:14:621- Whisite?(soft) okay~ :3

Hard And Insane is Fine
My Mod is not good.....
and sorry for my bad english.....

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there


[General]
The last spinner - End at 01:19:222 where is music ends Fix~!


:3

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's mod

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[General]

Remove .osb file and full submission Fix~ :3

lol~ good song, and good map


Have a good time

SakiK wrote:

here my mod from queue

Saki its me's song!

[Easy]

00:03:210 (2) - rm finish slider ends Fix~
00:16:830 (4) - 1 grid down Fix~
01:11:676 (4) - more fit to default finish (volume 55%) Change~

[Hard]

00:03:210 (6) - rm finish or change default finish Fix~ :3
00:30:081 (7) - ^ just reduce volume ;w;
00:50:695 (4) - move x:84 y:356 Fix~
00:51:799 (7,8,1) - suggestion,add finish at slider ends remain that~
01:02:842 (5) - add SC:1 finish ^

nice song and mapset.fight~

Jayel wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 날라왔습니다~
Hello, from my queue~!!

[General]
Nothing

[Easy]
00:03:210(2) - 슬라이더 끝 부분에 피니시 소리 없애는게 나아 보입니다. Fix~
00:45:909 - 이 곳 스피너... 이지에 비해 짧다는 생각이 드는 건 저 뿐인가요... 음..; 일단 남겨둘게요~ 같은 지적 또 들어오면 한번더 생각해보겠습니다~ :3
00:48:486(1) - 스피너 이후 충분한 스페이스가 있다는 거엔 태클 걸고 싶진 않는데...
이지에서 이른바 '못갖춘 마디'(음...?) 형식으로 노트를 놓는 건 플레이어가 하다가 선뜻 당황할 듯 합니다. 이것도 마찬가지~~~
[Hard]
노트들 사이 간격이 약간 일정하지 못하다는 것만 빼면 괜찮은 난이도 입니다.

네, 끝입니다. 행운을 빕니다~!
That's all, good luck, guys~!!

1. Source : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
2. Offset -20
3. end #1 kiai 01:00:265 - start #2 kiai 01:00:633 -
4. hitwhistle for 'ring' sound like here 00:01:738 - http://puu.sh/xboo

1. 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - due to long combo, downbeat, changed melody, combo like this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:241 (6,1,2) - your combos are really strange, just wondering, what did you follow, if i were you, i'd NC 00:28:241 (6) - because of downbeat and changed melody, remove useless NC 00:30:449 (1) - and start combo from 00:31:185 (2) -

1. 00:26:768 (4) - not fit at all now imo, NC here and remove 00:27:504 (1) - and start next combo from 00:28:609 (3) - , or remove NC 00:27:504 (1) - and start combo from 00:28:609 (3) -
2. 00:41:124 (1) - why didn't you started this combo from 00:40:020 (6) -
3. 00:53:271 - with this finish, adding finish 00:54:007 - and 00:54:744 - will be really exciting finish pattern, or at least add finish at 00:54:744 - because you did it at 01:00:633 (3) -
4. 00:59:897 - ^
5. 00:58:057 (3,4) - not symmetry, copy/paste from 00:57:320 (1,2) - and ctrl+r
6. 01:15:357 (7) - because i can hear a drum sound from 01:16:277 - , i'd replace with a circle at 01:15:357 - and a slider from 01:15:725 - to 01:16:277 - and start spinner from 01:16:645 -

1. i really can't understand your combos, what did you followed for ._.
2. 00:51:799 (7) - NC due to pitch and downbeat
3. 01:15:725 - feels empty, add note like Normal diff

1. 00:42:964 (1,2) - its movement is really hard, keep your jump, stack 00:42:964 (1) - on 00:42:596 (2) - and 00:43:149 (2) - on 00:42:412 (1) - will be more playable and soft
2. 00:46:277 (2) - 1 grid right to stack on 00:45:541 (4) - ?
3. 00:47:382 (1) - in Insane diff, i'd use more dynamic beat, add a circle at 00:47:382 - and 1/2 slider from 00:47:566 - with 1 arrow
4. 01:15:725 - same as Hard diff

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]

1. Source : Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A Fix~
2. Offset -20 Fix~ :3
3. end #1 kiai 01:00:265 - start #2 kiai 01:00:633 - Fix~
4. hitwhistle for 'ring' sound like here 00:01:738 - http://puu.sh/xboo Thank you~ :3 but Not changed now~

[Easy]

1. 00:12:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - due to long combo, downbeat, changed melody, combo like this Fix~
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:241 (6,1,2) - your combos are really strange, just wondering, what did you follow, if i were you, i'd NC 00:28:241 (6) - because of downbeat and changed melody, remove useless NC 00:30:449 (1) - and start combo from 00:31:185 (2) - Fix~

[Hard]

1. i really can't understand your combos, what did you followed for ._.
2. 00:51:799 (7) - NC due to pitch and downbeat Fix~
3. 01:15:725 - feels empty, add note like Normal diff Fix~

Good luck with rank~

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General

1. Are you sure the source and tag is right?The true OP of <Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A> is http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48435You can ask Kawayi Rika for more help It's my mistake.. orz It's ending. so delete opening tags, and add ending~
2. You have use a Video with a terrible setting.also the audio does't has enough quality.If you have the source video you can ask me to encode a new one

Hard

1. 00:36:319 (1) - add a clap on first circle, to show the beat Fix~
2. 01:08:711 (5,3) - not stack well Fix~ :3

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~♪~♪~~


[Easy]
00:48:466 - 1 and 00:49:570 (2) - X-axis alignment~ Fix~ :3
00:33:374 - remove nc~ remained now =3=
00:37:055 - nc~ ^
00:39:264 - remove nc~ ^
00:40:000 - nc~ ^

[Hard]
very nice!!!~

Nice song!!and Nice mapset!~
star☆♪~Good Luck~

sreader wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]
offset is real fast
I think +25or30 better

LKs wrote:

From wmf's queue

[General]

personally, offest -6. +25 makes it a bit late Fix~ o.o

[Hitsound]

normal-hitfinish sounds too heavy blended with normal-hitnormal. such as, you don't need a normal-hitclap sound here
00:09:088 (1) - Easy

In my opinion you should rename it as soft-hitfinish2 or you can keep the normal-hitfinish as well. You just judge which of them you should use in different places rename it 'soft-hitfinish2', and fix some timng points~ :3

[Easy]

00:06:880 (3) - remove nc, and nc the next slider Fix~
00:42:217 (5) - a finish doesn't make sense here, remove hitsound plz (or use a soft whistle) Fix~
00:42:585 (1) - no whistle Fix~
00:04:314 remove the useless section Remove~
00:36:339 Remove~

[Hard]

00:10:555 (1) - whistle at the end? Fix~
00:35:217 (4,5,6) - no drum sounds here, why u you set such a triplet? maybe make it start at red line or remove the on at the blue tick remove on at the blue tick~
00:42:211 (1) - spacing Fix~
00:48:653 (4) - no whistle Fix~
01:15:340 (3) - http://puu.sh/y29i Fix~
01:16:260 (1) - fix this as well Fix~
00:04:314 remove the useless section Remove~
00:36:339 Remove~

GL

Leorda wrote:

Anyeonghaseyo

[Hard]
00:30:064 (7) - Why finish? Delete Finish,add clap~
00:37:058 (3) - Add finish at head slider? Okay~
00:40:003 (2) - ^ Okay~


Sorry for my poor mod orz

Sekai's Normal

Hard

Gamu's Insane

kurohana wrote:

mod req <3

Gamu's Insane

01:00:800 (3) - hidden note >.<

I'm not sure about this hidden note >.<
otherwise, good map :3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Akemi_Homura ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 01:12:395 - I think kiai time should end to here. Fix~:3

[Hard]

1. 00:36:322 - Remove clap. Fix~
2. 00:49:941 - Remove finish. Fix~
3. 00:51:414 - ^ Fix~
4. 01:10:187 (3) - Same as Insane. Changed that,slider end 01:10:463, and add note 01:10:555

[Easy]

1. 00:37:058 (3) - Add new combo and Remove 00:39:267 (1). Fix~
2. 00:40:003 (2) - Add new combo. Fix~

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Akemi_Homura ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Gamu's Insane]

1. 01:10:187 (2) - This slider should end to 01:10:463.

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~

Rika-chan

sorry, no change. ):

I don't think so.

but. thank you for modding ><

Megurine Luka wrote:

OMG sorry for late. I went back to my hometown where the network is not available T_T

But anyway here it is. :O

I also made a comboburst for you :O

btw I found your map doesn't have a break after I finished section fail and section pass.. So del them from the folder OTZ..

http://puu.sh/zhKk

232,288,14420,2,0,B|184:304|144:280,1,90,0|8
80,216,14788,1,0

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
00:40:739 (4) - stack with (1) properly Fix~
01:15:340 (3,1) - Similar to [insane] try to mute ending of (4) and whistle at (1). (currently the whistle at ending of (4) does not go well with the clapping at (1)) Fix~~ :3

[Easy]
00:45:892 (1) - the spinner might be too short for an easy. Fix~ now end is 00:47:733
no errors but in general they looks better with fewer 1/1 overlapping (i.e. the spacing can be raised a bit) Change Spacing o.o

In general quite nice and good luck :3

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:14:420 (4,5) - [Nazi] You can adjust the position of (4) so that (5) stacks on previous (2) sorry....

232,288,14420,2,0,B|184:304|144:280,1,90,0|8
80,216,14788,1,0

00:17:549 (4,5) - again fix the placement so that (2,3,4,5) forms a rhombus, like (4) (464,144), (5) (328,240) ok!
00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - looks placed randomly... just for reference http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/336577 sorry...
00:47:365 (1) - In the first glance I thought the slider come across two gituar note instead of the muting point. Therefore I'll suggest a 1.5x speed 1/2 slider here sorry...
00:51:046 - sound a bit odd when the triplet is placed after the vocal. Try to place the triplet just after the slider? Then it's symmetrical with (1,2,3) as well. sorry....
01:00:248 (1,3) - this is highly not recommended because the slider head is covered by another slider sorry....
01:03:377 (1,2) - somehow I'll suggest putting these on the left hand side of the slider so that the flow of movement sounds smooth and reduce overlapping ok!
01:16:260 (1) - use whistle instead of clap? This provides a larger contrast with coming notes. ok!
(The finish sound sounds too heavy for such a soft song imo.)

In general quite nice and good luck :3

Jacob wrote:

Heyo! A mod request from my bubble ready map queue.

[General]

Everything is in order.

[Easy]

00:45:892 (1) - It would make more sense for this spinner to end at 00:47:365. It's where the guitar part and the vocals stop. Fix~ and now start is 00:45:708 because spin is too short~ :3
01:03:561 (1) - The curves on this slider are pretty tight, making it less visually appealing. Try re-making it to be a bit less tight. Fix~

[Hard]

Add +1 to either the HP drain or OD. 5 for both on a hard difficulty is much to low in my opinion. OD +1~ :3

Wonderful job.

CDFA wrote:

Allright let's do this

Timing:
Offset: 1721. This is just so the first note isn't before the first red section Offset is 1721 now~ O.O

Hard:
01:11:659 (2) - This is really loud and I don't know why ;~; ;~;

Easy:
01:03:561 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Fix~~ :3

Whee >3<`

-Sekai- wrote:

Akemi kawaiii~ >w<

-Gamu- wrote:

homura-chan kawaii ><

1. Use an offset of 1730, which is (+9) of what you have.
2. If possible, please find the no credit version of this video; all that text in the way is so not moe ;w;

1. 00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - Seeing how the melody is a continuous 1/4 rhythm, I'd would extend the kickbacks on these to get
   
2. 00:37:610 (3,1) - Use a 1.30x spacing instead of stacking; this causes a stall in the flow which isn't very pleasant. You should treat this like 00:39:0982 (4,1) - .
3. 00:43:112 (2) - Because of the way 00:42:763 (3,1,2) - is positioned, this isn't in a very good spot. In addition, the spacing is irregular, so a greater angle would work better. Try something like this:
   
4. 00:45:892 (1,2,3,4) - First thing: copy and pasting this pattern is not recommended. Second: 00:45:524 (4,1) - the fact that these are parallel created a very awkward play for me.
5. 00:57:303 (1) - Space to 1.20x; maybe try something like this:
   
6. 01:09:082 (7) - Expected a triple here to match 01:07:242 (5,6,7) - ; seeing how you chose to overlap 01:06:690 (2,3,4) - with 01:08:162 (3,4,5) - , I expected two phrases to match in rhythm, with the triple at the last syllable of the phrase.
7. 01:16:721 (1) - Make the volume decrease more gradual?

-Gamu- wrote:

those :3

thank you for modding

some fix~

those wrote:

-Gamu- wrote:

those :3

thank you for modding

some fix~

Hey -Gamu- P:
Would love to know which suggestions you didn't use so I can try to explain to you more in-depth why I think it's a problem, if you don't understand. Thanks.

those wrote:

[Gamu's Insane]

1. 00:34:849 (1,2,3,4) - Seeing how the melody is a continuous 1/4 rhythm, I'd would extend the kickbacks on these to get You are a nice rhythm. But I think that the current rhythm better
   
2. 00:37:610 (3,1) - Use a 1.30x spacing instead of stacking; this causes a stall in the flow which isn't very pleasant. You should treat this like 00:39:0982 (4,1) - . OK
3. 00:43:112 (2) - Because of the way 00:42:763 (3,1,2) - is positioned, this isn't in a very good spot. In addition, the spacing is irregular, so a greater angle would work better. Try something like this: OK
   
4. 00:45:892 (1,2,3,4) - First thing: copy and pasting this pattern is not recommended. Second: 00:45:524 (4,1) - the fact that these are parallel created a very awkward play for me. I like this placement. I don't want to change
5. 00:57:303 (1) - Space to 1.20x; maybe try something like this: OK
   
6. 01:09:082 (7) - Expected a triple here to match 01:07:242 (5,6,7) - ; seeing how you chose to overlap 01:06:690 (2,3,4) - with 01:08:162 (3,4,5) - , I expected two phrases to match in rhythm, with the triple at the last syllable of the phrase. I don't think so.
7. 01:16:721 (1) - Make the volume decrease more gradual? no. The current volume is very good

sorry. I'm poor at English

1. Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.
2. Audio Lead-in +500 please. Current audio lead-in is too fast, and quite surprising to player.

1. 00:09:091 (1) - I think it will be more consistant if you remove new combo here.
2. 00:23:815 (2) - Remove whistle at this slider end. Doesn't follow anything at the back and breaking your whistle consistencies.
3. 00:25:288 (1,3) - I think it's good to keep whistle consistencies here. Try to add whistle at 1 end and 3 start.
4. 00:27:496 (4) - I don't think lowering whistle sound here is good. The music volume is not down here. Better to turn back the volume to 70% here.
5. 00:35:595 (4) - I think whistle at this slider end should be on slider start. 00:34:490 (1,2,3,4) - sounds empty and inconsistant without whistle.
6. 00:39:460 & 00:39:644- What's the purpose of timing point here? I don't think you need to lower volume of clap here. If you want to lower clap volume the timing position is wrong too, because timing point 00:39:644 should be on 00:39:736-.
7. 00:42:220- Same, no need to turn down volume here.
8. 00:54:736 (1,2) - I think because you suddenly follow vocal here the rythim sounds awkward. How about making rythim like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341644 , i think it's more good, and keep following the drum which not awkward to hear.. Rearrange the hitsound if you do this.

1. 00:29:705 (4,3) - The whistle here is awkward since you didn't continue your whistle rythim. Either continue your whistle rythim, or just delete whistle here.
2. Quite good, but Sekai, you use 1/1 too much. Try to adding more variation in the rythim next time you map a song.

1. 00:10:564 (1) - For combo consistencies, i suggest you to remove new combo here.
2. 00:23:631 (4) - This whistle break the consistencies of your whistle rythim. Just remove whistle here.
3. 00:23:815 (5) - No need to turn down volume of whistle at this slider start. If you want to turn down volume, don't turn down it to 40%, it's too low. Turn down by 10% is more good.
4. 00:35:595 (6) - Clap at this slider start iis very awkward to hear and breaking consistencies of your clap rythim. Remove it please.
5. 01:16:085- I suggest you add note here for better readibilty since you suddenly swith polarity in a long gap.
6. 00:53:263 (1) - Same reason as above, better to remove new combo here for consistencies.
7. 01:02:098 (3,5,2,3) - Orz, your whistle pattern here suddenly missing. Add whistle here at both 3, 5 start and circle 2 and 3 end. It will be consistant to your previous whistle rythim at same rythim like these.
8. 01:16:269 (5) - No need new combo here because the rythim is still same. Remove it.

1. 00:06:147 (1,2) - use 1.0x spacing please. Didn't expect this to have 1/1 gap since the spacing is incosistant.
2. 00:09:828 (3) - Move this note further away from 00:09:460 (2) - since you suddenly lower the spacing which is not intuitive.
3. 00:31:177 (1) - For consitencies it's better remove new combo here.
4. 00:53:999 (3,1) - Make the spacing between this note 1.2 please. It's more readable if you use 1.2 spacing here.
5. 01:14:245 (1) - I think clap here at the slider start is awkward. Better to remove it.

Miya wrote:

Hi Akemi :3

Gamu's Insane

1. 00:06:147 (1,2) - use 1.0x spacing please. Didn't expect this to have 1/1 gap since the spacing is incosistant.
2. 00:09:828 (3) - Move this note further away from 00:09:460 (2) - since you suddenly lower the spacing which is not intuitive.
3. 00:31:177 (1) - For consitencies it's better remove new combo here.
4. 00:53:999 (3,1) - Make the spacing between this note 1.2 please. It's more readable if you use 1.2 spacing here.
5. 01:14:245 (1) - I think clap here at the slider start is awkward. Better to remove it.

Good map. But i still not sure at some point. Try to search 2 more mods, then call me back. :3
Good luck~

Miya wrote:

Hi Akemi :3

General

1. Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.
2. Audio Lead-in +500 please. Current audio lead-in is too fast, and quite surprising to player.

Easy

1. 00:09:091 (1) - I think it will be more consistant if you remove new combo here.
2. 00:23:815 (2) - Remove whistle at this slider end. Doesn't follow anything at the back and breaking your whistle consistencies.
3. 00:25:288 (1,3) - I think it's good to keep whistle consistencies here. Try to add whistle at 1 end and 3 start.
4. 00:27:496 (4) - I don't think lowering whistle sound here is good. The music volume is not down here. Better to turn back the volume to 70% here.
5. 00:35:595 (4) - I think whistle at this slider end should be on slider start. 00:34:490 (1,2,3,4) - sounds empty and inconsistant without whistle.
6. 00:39:460 & 00:39:644- What's the purpose of timing point here? I don't think you need to lower volume of clap here. If you want to lower clap volume the timing position is wrong too, because timing point 00:39:644 should be on 00:39:736-.
7. 00:42:220- Same, no need to turn down volume here.
8. 00:54:736 (1,2) - I think because you suddenly follow vocal here the rythim sounds awkward. How about making rythim like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341644 , i think it's more good, and keep following the drum which not awkward to hear.. Rearrange the hitsound if you do this.

Hard

1. 00:10:564 (1) - For combo consistencies, i suggest you to remove new combo here.
2. 00:23:631 (4) - This whistle break the consistencies of your whistle rythim. Just remove whistle here.
3. 00:23:815 (5) - No need to turn down volume of whistle at this slider start. If you want to turn down volume, don't turn down it to 40%, it's too low. Turn down by 10% is more good.
4. 00:35:595 (6) - Clap at this slider start iis very awkward to hear and breaking consistencies of your clap rythim. Remove it please.
5. 01:16:085- I suggest you add note here for better readibilty since you suddenly swith polarity in a long gap.
6. 00:53:263 (1) - Same reason as above, better to remove new combo here for consistencies.
7. 01:02:098 (3,5,2,3) - Orz, your whistle pattern here suddenly missing. Add whistle here at both 3, 5 start and circle 2 and 3 end. It will be consistant to your previous whistle rythim at same rythim like these.
8. 01:16:269 (5) - No need new combo here because the rythim is still same. Remove it.

Good map. But i still not sure at some point. Try to search 2 more mods, then call me back. :3
Good luck~

1. Just use Sekai on the tags. Double -sekai- on the tags doesn't work.

414,51,10564,2,0,B|468:91|449:158,1,120,2|2

140,360,9091,2,0,B|92:312|116:240,2,99.9999999999999,4|0|2

352,292,1730,2,0,B|424:256|405:172,1,140,4|2

204,120,3202,2,0,B|127:151|145:232,1,140,4|2
132,316,3754,2,0,B|96:308|72:276,1,70

392,336,2650,2,0,B|336:344|304:312,2,90

Loli Cjj wrote:

From pm

=General=
Clean, though those 300g, 300k, and 100k are hard to compare with 300 and 100 with a slight look, but It's nice and moe. >w</

=Easy=
1. 00:10:564 (5) - So tiny mistakes, but it's not curve enough to blanket 00:10:196 (4) - so here is the thing I do to make it as curve as possible - http://puu.sh/AUKh Fix~ :3

414,51,10564,2,0,B|468:91|449:158,1,120,2|2

2. 00:22:343 (1) - Move the endpoint to (264,308) to make it like going to 00:23:815 (2) - if epanded. Fix~ :3

=Hard=
1. 00:01:729 (1) - Perhaps fix this with 00:02:650 (3) - 's approach circle? Fix~ :3

352,292,1730,2,0,B|424:256|405:172,1,140,4|2

2. 00:03:202 (6) - Why? this has a big potential to make a star pattern along with 00:02:466 (2,3,4,5) - , so please fix this. Here, I give you the code for 00:03:202 (6,7) - and some snapshot! http://puu.sh/AUZu (Oh, and please move 00:02:466 (2) - to 228,204) Fix~ :3

204,120,3202,2,0,B|127:151|145:232,1,140,4|2
132,316,3754,2,0,B|96:308|72:276,1,70

3. 00:50:687 (4) - End point 1 grid tiny to the right to make it neater Fix~ :3
4. 01:12:772 (2,3,4) - Where's the clap? I don't want use clap this part~ ;_;

That's all from me, great art.
Star & Good luck