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Ara Potato - Skype x Can Can [Taiko|Osu|CtB]

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Realazy
Elite Mapper
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Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Realazy
Fixed everything o3o
wmfchris
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
(You may want to fix your thread title ---> [taiko|osu|ctb]

[General]
Tag - 00:50:046 - this is flowering night! >w<

[Insane]
Shown by AI mod:
00:28:113 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:28:421 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:28:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:036 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:343 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:651 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:609 (3) - You can place this at (344,424) so that it curves around (1)~
00:19:914 (1,3) - stack these notes properly
00:23:296 (4) - remove whistle because this sentence is similar to the 00:18:376 - ones
00:24:833 - even at AR9 I'm not sure whether they come out after the last one disappear...
00:29:753 - just a little suggestion - you can add more ticks until (8)
00:47:586 (5) - use some whistle like 00:42:667 (1) - do
01:03:114 (2,4) - make a further progression: finish on all 4 notes~

[Hard]
00:30:060 (8) - removing the whistle gives a larger contrast?
00:46:356 (1) - I'll suggest you to reverse the slider to avoid overlapping notes on the ending of another slider... If you want a symmetrical figures you can reverse (3) too.
01:02:960 (1,2) - finish at all four ticks as explained in [insane]
01:33:092 (1,2,3,4) - stack their ending properly

[Normal]
00:10:382 (2,3,4) - stacking (4) is a bit odd because there's no signs of stacking in previous notes... try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/318387 ?
01:41:701 - This spinner would be too short for nomal.

[Easy]
00:27:908 (5) - New combo here? In previous notes you NC every bar, and this one sounds like a new sentence.
01:02:037 - This spinner is too short... start it here
01:35:552 (1) - finish can be considered at the beginning of slider
01:38:011 (1) - ^
and the ending spinner is too short.
This diff may need a bit more hitsound, both whistles and finish to follow the pace of the music.

Solo diff, in overall, has some good ideas on hitsounds to deal with the song. The point I noticed is that in both kiai (esp. the first one) the music goes streadily with 1/2 beats, but you used several 1 beat sliders -- the slidertick is not enough to do the beat and you may want some alternative pattern or slidertick sound.

[Taiko]
00:30:367 (159) - stream it up to the beginning of kiai? kkddddd from 00:29:907 -
01:38:012 - I think the music sounds like triplets, but the current one is fine.
Good in your own style as usual.

[CtB]
Not going to mod as indicated in my queue. Checked autoplay once and I agree with Armin that the jumping logic needs to be unique throughout the song, hyperjumps appearing at position like 00:34:980 (5) - don't make sense for me.
Realazy
Elite Mapper
1,004 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Realazy
Everything fixed, except the tag suggestion; it's only 3 seconds long, I don't think it's needed to have Flowering Night in tags.
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
thanks, armin and wmf ~

Download: Ara Potato - Skype x Can Can (Real) [Ryuu's Easy].osu
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Yup

Download: Ara Potato - Skype x Can Can (Real) [Moody's Normal].osu
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
As per your request from my modding queue.

General

  1. 00:25:448 - You need too add an uninherited timing section here due to a metronome reset (same BPM, though). That's why the kiai time doesn't start on the downbeat. When you do this, you also don't need the timing section at 01:04:805. You're so silly, Real.
  2. I'm pretty sure that the last BPM or offest is off. You should get someone to check that out.
stuff



Ryuu's Easy

  1. +1 AR due to the high BPM would be nice.
  2. 00:05:155 (2) - Remove the slider whistle from the body of the slider. I always thought that they sounded odd.
  3. 00:48:201 (4) - I don't think that a finish belongs on the end of this slider due to the fact that you've been putting them on the downbeat before.
  4. 00:56:810 (2) - Put this note in the same spot as 00:54:351 (4). It looks neater.
Moody's Normal

  1. Oh man, +1 AR pleaaaase. High BPM and high SV.
  2. 00:15:917 (4) - Add a whistle to keep constant with your pattern.
  3. 00:19:299 (2) - Flip this vertically as so. It looks so much better.
  4. 00:24:218 (2) - Move this down one or two grids to be perfectly aligned with (1).
  5. 00:27:908 (1) - It makes sense to put a finish on this slider.
  6. 01:35:575 (1,2) - Make this pattern like the one before but horizontally flipped.
31's Taiko

  1. You need to resnap all notes. There's a lot of them.
  2. 01:42:919 (1) - The timing section here is unsnapped and comes AFTER this note. You need to resnap it if you want the 1.50x slider velocity to be in effect.
CTB Collab

  1. 01:41:689 (1) - I'd suggest adding a finish at this slider to emphasize that that is the final object in the difficulty. It like, relieves the tension. (lol)
Hard

  1. Your sliders make me uguu.
  2. 00:05:155 (3) - Touching HP bar.
  3. 00:22:681 (2,3) - Ugly overlap ):<<
  4. 00:34:057 (5) - Put this one grid up as it should be according to distance snap. Also, move up the slider after it for a better blanket.
  5. 00:36:210 (3) - Odd overlap between this note and 00:36:517 (1).
  6. 00:36:825 (2) - ^ Same thing with this slider and 00:37:440 (3). uglllyyy
  7. 00:40:207 (1,2) - This is sexy.
  8. 00:42:667 (1,5) - This overlap is not.
  9. 00:46:203 (4,1) - I usually hate it when mappers do this, but it was easy to see due to different combo colors.
  10. 00:52:352 (2,1) - Spacing is off here.
  11. 00:58:040 (2) - ermgd itz tuching HP bar!!!!!11one (seriously, fix it)
Insane

  1. You and your CS5.
  2. 00:17:454 (1) - Wait, why not just stack this where 00:16:839 (2) started? It looks so much better.
  3. 00:24:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/vsuM
  4. 00:52:506 (1,3,4) - Overlap overlap overlap
  5. The deathstream at the end will aggravate so many players. you evil genius
Have fun reading and applying this super long mod~
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
thanks, jacob ~

Download: Ara Potato - Skype x Can Can (Real) [Ryuu's Easy].osu
Realazy
Elite Mapper
1,004 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Realazy

Jacob wrote:

As per your request from my modding queue.

General

  1. 00:25:448 - You need too add an uninherited timing section here due to a metronome reset (same BPM, though). That's why the kiai time doesn't start on the downbeat. When you do this, you also don't need the timing section at 01:04:805. You're so silly, Real.
  2. I'm pretty sure that the last BPM or offest is off. You should get someone to check that out.
stuff





Ryuu's Easy

  1. +1 AR due to the high BPM would be nice.
  2. 00:05:155 (2) - Remove the slider whistle from the body of the slider. I always thought that they sounded odd.
  3. 00:48:201 (4) - I don't think that a finish belongs on the end of this slider due to the fact that you've been putting them on the downbeat before.
  4. 00:56:810 (2) - Put this note in the same spot as 00:54:351 (4). It looks neater.
Moody's Normal

  1. Oh man, +1 AR pleaaaase. High BPM and high SV.
  2. 00:15:917 (4) - Add a whistle to keep constant with your pattern.
  3. 00:19:299 (2) - Flip this vertically as so. It looks so much better.
  4. 00:24:218 (2) - Move this down one or two grids to be perfectly aligned with (1).
  5. 00:27:908 (1) - It makes sense to put a finish on this slider.
  6. 01:35:575 (1,2) - Make this pattern like the one before but horizontally flipped.
31's Taiko

  1. You need to resnap all notes. There's a lot of them.
  2. 01:42:919 (1) - The timing section here is unsnapped and comes AFTER this note. You need to resnap it if you want the 1.50x slider velocity to be in effect.
CTB Collab

  1. 01:41:689 (1) - I'd suggest adding a finish at this slider to emphasize that that is the final object in the difficulty. It like, relieves the tension. (lol)
Hard

  1. Your sliders make me uguu. :3
  2. 00:05:155 (3) - Touching HP bar.
  3. 00:22:681 (2,3) - Ugly overlap ):<<
  4. 00:34:057 (5) - Put this one grid up as it should be according to distance snap. Also, move up the slider after it for a better blanket.
  5. 00:36:210 (3) - Odd overlap between this note and 00:36:517 (1).
  6. 00:36:825 (2) - ^ Same thing with this slider and 00:37:440 (3). uglllyyy
  7. 00:40:207 (1,2) - This is sexy.
  8. 00:42:667 (1,5) - This overlap is not.
  9. 00:46:203 (4,1) - I usually hate it when mappers do this, but it was easy to see due to different combo colors.
  10. 00:52:352 (2,1) - Spacing is off here.
  11. 00:58:040 (2) - ermgd itz tuching HP bar!!!!!11one (seriously, fix it)
Insane

  1. You and your CS5. :3 :3
  2. 00:17:454 (1) - Wait, why not just stack this where 00:16:839 (2) started? It looks so much better.
  3. 00:24:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/vsuM Well, it's manually stacked so it should be okay
  4. 00:52:506 (1,3,4) - Overlap overlap overlap
  5. The deathstream at the end will aggravate so many players. you evil genius
:3 :3 :3

Have fun reading and applying this super long mod~
Fixed everything k
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]

  1. [Insane] is missing a red line : 01:28:196, BPM of 195.140 and [Hard] is missing a red line : 01:38:027, BPM of 195.140
[Easy]

  1. There are some unsnap notes checked out by AIBat
    SPOILER
    1. 01:38:000 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    2. 01:38:000 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    3. 01:39:229 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    4. 01:39:844 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    5. 01:40:459 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    6. 01:41:074 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    7. 01:41:689 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
    8. 01:41:689 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
[Moody's Normal]

  1. 00:59:884 (1) - How about add a finish sound here?
  2. 01:01:114 (3) - ^
  3. 01:02:344 (4) - ^
[Hard]

  1. Unsnap notes
    SPOILER
    1. 01:38:027 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    2. 01:38:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    3. 01:38:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    4. 01:38:488 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    5. 01:38:488 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    6. 01:38:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    7. 01:38:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    8. 01:39:103 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    9. 01:39:103 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    10. 01:39:871 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    11. 01:40:486 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    12. 01:41:101 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    13. 01:41:716 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
    14. 01:41:716 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)
  2. 00:11:305 (1) - Add finish?
  3. 00:35:287 (1) - ^
  4. 01:38:035 (T) - I think you should back to 80% sound volume here
[Insane]

  1. Unsnap notes:
    SPOILER
    1. 01:28:196 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    2. 01:28:272 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    3. 01:28:349 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    4. 01:28:426 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    5. 01:28:503 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    6. 01:28:580 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    7. 01:28:657 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    8. 01:28:810 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    9. 01:28:810 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    10. 01:29:118 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    11. 01:29:425 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    12. 01:29:502 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    13. 01:29:579 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    14. 01:29:656 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    15. 01:29:733 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    16. 01:29:810 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    17. 01:29:887 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    18. 01:29:963 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    19. 01:30:040 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    20. 01:30:040 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    21. 01:30:348 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    22. 01:30:655 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    23. 01:30:732 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    24. 01:30:809 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    25. 01:30:886 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    26. 01:30:963 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    27. 01:31:116 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    28. 01:31:193 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    29. 01:31:270 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    30. 01:31:270 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    31. 01:31:578 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    32. 01:31:885 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    33. 01:31:962 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    34. 01:32:039 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    35. 01:32:116 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    36. 01:32:193 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    37. 01:32:269 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    38. 01:32:346 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    39. 01:32:423 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    40. 01:32:500 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
    41. 01:32:577 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
    42. 01:32:654 (11) - Unsnapped circle.
    43. 01:32:731 (12) - Unsnapped circle.
    44. 01:32:808 (13) - Unsnapped circle.
    45. 01:32:884 (14) - Unsnapped circle.
    46. 01:32:961 (15) - Unsnapped circle.
    47. 01:33:038 (16) - Unsnapped circle.
    48. 01:33:115 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    49. 01:33:115 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    50. 01:33:730 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    51. 01:33:730 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    52. 01:34:345 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    53. 01:34:345 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    54. 01:34:960 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    55. 01:34:960 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    56. 01:35:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    57. 01:35:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    58. 01:36:190 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    59. 01:36:190 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    60. 01:36:805 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    61. 01:36:805 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    62. 01:37:420 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    63. 01:37:420 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  2. 00:11:305 (1) - Add finish here?
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi, sry for long wait

Ryuu's Easy :3
00:08:845 (1) - вистл
00:13:764 - ^
00:16:224 (1) - на конец каждого слайдера такого вистл
00:49:430 - здесь убрать финишь и поставить его на след. слайдер
00:50:660 - вистл
00:56:810 (2) - ^
01:02:037 (1) - финиш же
01:24:482 - вистл
01:41:689 (1) - не ровно на тиках стоит :o

Moody's Normal
00:27:907 (1) - finish
01:21:407 (2) - 3 grids left and 1 down (but spacing there)
01:22:637 (3) - whistle

Hard
00:19:606 - whistle
00:42:051 (3) - ^
00:50:814 (2) - remove it and add circle with this 00:50:353 (3) - slider
01:01:268 - whistle
01:01:883 (2) - ^
01:03:574 (1) - finish
01:09:723 - ^
01:33:576 - this green sections for what? i think no need to use them, or add section there 01:38:035 - with 60% volume

Insane
00:20:221 (1) - remove nc
01:01:729 (1) - remove finish
01:02:037 (3) - and there
01:03:574 (1) - finish
01:09:723 (5) - ^

Good luck
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
thanks, breeze ~
и спасибо за мод, василиса-нян :3

Download: Ara Potato - Skype x Can Can (Real) [Ryuu's Easy].osu
madaoB
madaoB
ctb fun
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Thanks guys :)

Download: Ara Potato - Skype x Can Can (Real) [Moody's Normal].osu
Megastone
Megastone
Rank pls.
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Hello, Reeaaaal >w<

Ryuu's Easy

  1. Реснапни все ноты, есть анснапнутые в конце, а именно: 01:38:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
  2. 00:33:443 (4) - нк сюда, комбо длиннее 3 не рекомендуются на изях
  3. 01:02:037 (1) - заменить вистл на финиш? Припев начинается-то

    Молодец!
Moody's Normal

  1. 00:06:385 (1) - finish on the beginning
  2. 01:28:196 (1) - ^
  3. 01:33:115 (1) - ^
  4. 01:35:575 (1) - ^
  5. 01:41:101 (4) - and finish here

    Gooooood!
Hard

  1. 00:03:925 (1) - ctrl+r? To keep flow C:
  2. 00:06:385 (1) - finish
  3. 00:45:126 (1) - ^
  4. 00:53:274 (4) - whaaaa D: move it to 00:53:351 - and move 00:53:581 (5) - further
  5. 00:54:657 (5) - ^ move to 00:54:580 -
  6. 00:56:656 (3) - move to 00:56:579 - >:C
  7. 00:57:425 (1) - ctrl+r again? :O
  8. 01:05:419 - finish madness! Maybe remove some? >.< from 01:06:649 (1,2) - here and 01:07:879 (5,6,7) -
  9. 01:08:494 (1) - and here add one
  10. 01:11:568 (3,4) - remove finishes? 01:12:798 (3,4) - and from here D:
  11. 01:14:643 (1) - add here!
  12. 01:17:103 (3) - and add here to the beginning and reverse like here 01:15:873 (5) -
  13. 01:19:562 (1) - finish
  14. 01:33:115 (1) - ^ also, don't like the volume decreasing :<
  15. 01:35:575 (1) - ^
Insane

  1. 00:06:385 (1) - finish!
  2. 00:17:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe ctrl+r? 00:16:839 (2) - overlaps the first circles and it's hard to read :<
  3. 00:28:445 (3) - this slider is hidden by 00:27:600 (2) - 's hitburst. So, change the order, like here?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:54:965 (1) - finish
  5. 01:06:034 - this part~ again, remove some finishes as in previous part C:
  6. 01:33:115 (1) - again, maybe delete decreasing in volume? :<
  7. 01:33:115 (1) - finish
  8. 01:35:575 (1) - ^
THIS IS AWSUM! Your style is awesome! I looooove it <333
Want to see it ranked now
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
спасибо, рейджик ;____;

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Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Ohmygod Real, I love you this map!! :O

  2. Remove the following tags: Catch the Beat mapper_31 ctb collab collaboration.

  3. Did I just heard a night of knights? :O

  • Easy
  1. 01:02:037 (1) - This spinner should be at 01:02:344.

  • Normal
  1. 01:30:655 (5) - New combo.

  2. 01:38:027 (3) - ^.

  • Hard
  1. 00:53:120 (3,4) - What? D: Move (4) closer please.

  2. 01:32:500 (5) - New combo.

  • Insane
  1. Perfect!

  • Taiko
  1. Inconsistent Kiai Time. 1st Kiai should end on 00:49:739.

  • CTB Collab
  1. Inconsistent Timing Section. 3rd Timing Section should be at 01:28:196.
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
thanks.

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Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
And here's my nazi-whistle-modding. Mod requested on Friday in #french.
Je te prévient, surment que certain truc on déjà été fix avant que je poste mon mod. J'ai pas pu update si t'avais eu des mods paravant, j'avais pas le net pour la fin de semaine...
I won't mod CTB & sorry if my english is bad. I'm still learning it.

[Ryuu's Easy]

As I said in french, maybe some things has been already fixed before I post my mod.
  1. 00:08:845 - Add a whistle here, to keep the consistency.
  2. 00:13:764 (1) - ^
  3. 00:14:994 - ^

[Moody's Normal]

  1. (This should be fixed) 00:14:379 - Add a whistle & delete the whistle @00:14:687
  2. 00:15:609 - Whistle
  3. 00:27:293 - This one should be in the same y: axis as 00:26:063. So : y:101 (or maybe 100 for both.)
  4. (This should be fixed) 01:12:799 - Add a whistle & delete the whistle @01:13:106 if not, it doesn't keep the consistency.
  5. 01:25:713 - Instead of adding a whistle, maybe you could add a finish? It sounds better because of this one ; 01:23:253
  6. 01:41:074 - For this one (It's only a suggestion) it would be great if you deplace this circle for x:64 y:160, so it will do a Star Pattern.

[Hard]

C'est drôle comment le début ressemble tellement au début du Insane. (y)
  1. 00:15:763 & 00:15:917 - Peut-être un Whistle pour ses deux là? Ça suit la chanson. Comme t'as fait pour se combo : 00:19:914
  2. 00:42:052 / 00:42:359 / 00:42:667 - Un beau whistle pour chaqu'un. T'as fait pareil plus loin. Donc, pourquoi ne pas le faire là?
  3. 01:09:724 - Finish?
  4. (Commentaire) 01:33:115 to 01:37:727 - J'adore la nuance des sons. '-'

[Insane]

Je déteste le AR! D:
  1. J'ai remarqué que dans la Hard 00:07:769 / 00:08:076 / 00:08:384 à des Whistles mais il y en n'as pas dans la Insane. Ça serrais bien de les mettres... en même temps : 00:08:537 - Whistle.
  2. 00:19:914 - Mais pourquoi il y a que se petit combo? Il est useless. Met le avec le Combo qui est après.
  3. 00:32:828 / 00:33:135 / 00:33:443 - Whistle. "It keeps the consistency."
  4. 00:38:055 - Whistle (^)
  5. 00:38:208 - Delete whistle (^)
  6. 00:38:362 - Whistle (^)
  7. 00:51:276 - Whistle
  8. 00:51:430 - Delete Whistle
  9. 00:51:430 - Whistle
  10. 01:09:724 - Finish
  11. (Commentaire) 01:28:196 - DEATH STREEAAAMMMMMM.

[31's Taiko]

I wanted to mod it... but everything is fine for me.
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
nyan.

@real
to make it safer when going to update my diff, you should first delete the old one, and then add a new one.
thanks ~

Download: Ara Potato - Skype x Can Can (Real) [Ryuu's Easy].osu
Mercurial
Mercurial
General
Nothing can be founded.

Easy

AIBat wrote:

01:38:000 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:38:000 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:39:229 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:844 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:40:459 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:074 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:689 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
01:41:689 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).

Normal
00:35:287 (6) Circles under sliders could be messy for easy/normal players, and this circle could be NC.
00:39:899 (4) Circle under slider.
00:40:206 (5) NC.
00:44:818 (4) Same as 00:39:899.
00:45:126 (5) NC

CTB
OD: -1

If y'all want to know my suggestions, contact me in-game.

Hard
00:53:581 (5) This spacing feels really annoying.


Yey /o/
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
dagasdghfzsbg

Download: Ara Potato - Skype x Can Can (Real) [Moody's Normal].osu
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
:) Hi~Real
From our Challenge Queue ;3

[Insane]
00:04:540 (3) - x264 y164 (keep the same spacing with ①&② xP
00:04:848 (4) - x324 y352 ^
00:05:770 (3,4) - Ctrl+R ? the spacing is suitable and it is more comfortable to play IMO.
00:07:154 (4,5,6) - how about overlaps 00:07:461 (6) - with 00:06:693 (2) - ? like this
Click me
00:10:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - from the suggestion above,notes are inclined :O straighten them out?
00:18:069 (5,6,7) - make them symmetry with 00:17:454 (1,2,3) - just for better looking? you can ctrl+h then ctrl+r to make it.
Click me
00:34:210 (1) - add new combo

[Hard]
00:35:287 (1) - (nazi)up 2 grid of the end point of the slider.
00:37:439 (3) - (nazi)it is overlap a bit with 00:36:824 (2) - .
01:06:649 (1) - remove the new combo plz. to same as 01:11:568 (3) - and 01:12:798 (3) -

[Normal]
move 00:01:466 (1) - to x132 y76 00:02:080 (2) - to x60 y240 00:02:695 (3) - to x180 y220 (make them have the same spacing.
00:39:899 (4) - i think this is hard to read for beginner.
00:44:818 (4) - ^

[Ryuu's Easy]
00:16:224 (1) - maybe this shape? (remember to fix the spacing
Click me

funny map><
deserves a star~
Realazy
Elite Mapper
1,004 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Realazy
Fixed some of your suggestions, thanks !
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Hi Real.

  • [Insane]
    _______________________

    00:01:466 (1) - This long repeat is kinda boreing, why not make it 2 sliders instead of 1, and do some fun placement with it. http://puu.sh/x9TD This works better, and is a little more interesting.

    00:12:534 (7) - new combo

    00:55:426 (3,4) - move these 2 notes farther apart, there is almost 0 movement to hit both of these, so someone farther apart would be more interesting.

    01:03:574 (1) - I personally think you should end the spinner on the beat at 01:04:496, and then resume mapping at 1:03:574. That pause is really akward. :o

    01:09:723 (5) - move this note right more so it's even with the start of 4 and the beginning of the next combo. And also the next combo should start here not on 01:09:877 (1) -.

    01:12:798 (3,4,5) - instead of 3 notes stacked why don't you stack 5 ontop of 01:13:259 (6) - . This will fit/play better.

    01:36:190 (2) - and 01:37:420 (4) - look really ugly and out of place, maybe try a different slider shape?

  • [Hard]
    _______________________

    00:01:466 (1) - Same issue with this slider like the Insane diff.

    00:50:660 (1) - remove combo

    00:51:275 (4) - add combo and remove ccombo from 00:51:429 (1) -

    00:52:044 (1) - remove combo. Seriously that comboing is werid as hell.

    01:03:574 (1) - Same issue with this slider as Insane.

    01:05:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all this new combo spam is uneeded.

    01:10:953 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

    01:28:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

  • [31's Taiko]
    _______________________


    01:38:257 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - This is the only thing that bothers me in this diff, the music has triplets, yet you have the akward doubles. They really should be triplets.

    Otherwise amazing as always 31.

Good mapset <3
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
i've no change.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
GET DAT YTP NND ON.

Overall:
Claps on 2 and 4?
I'm not sure if the last 2 timing points are needed.

Insane:
00:01:466 (1) - You could probably just make this into 2 sliders
01:14:643 (1) - Add finish at beginning of slider
01:18:948 (3) - Add finish on end of slider

Hard:
00:01:466 (1) - Probably just make this into 2 sliders
00:23:603 (1) - ^

CtB:
kawaii

Nurmul:
00:17:454 (3) - Not the most moe of sliders
00:19:914 (3) - ^
00:35:902 (1) - ^
00:38:361 (3) - ^

Easy:
00:59:885 (3) - Probably make this into 2 sliders

kawaii~
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
i've no change again.
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Challenge Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
:< so nice filename, but I think ppl who open the folder will still delete it and give you 1 vote at once


[Moody's Normal]
00:04:233 (4) - NC
00:06:385 (1) - finish?
00:13:149 (3) - spacing
00:26:062 (4) - NC
00:57:425 (4) - ^
01:02:344 (4) - ^
01:12:798 (4) - ^
01:26:327 (3) - spacing
01:31:578 (6) - add a note here
01:30:655 (5,6,7) - you should keep the rhythm the same as the previous since the music
01:38:027 (3) - NC plz


[Hard]
00:30:367 (1) - should start on the right
00:34:057 (5,6,7,8,9) - should be like this
00:43:896 (5,1,2,3) - ^
01:08:494 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
00:51:583 (2) - why not use 1/4?
01:03:113 (2) - delete finish
01:03:420 (3) - ^


[Insane]
00:14:994 (1) - separate from 00:14:687 (5,6)
00:27:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why reduce the spacing :<?
01:31:578 (10) - so large spacing ...
01:39:871 (1) - ok I cant find it when the first time I see
--------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset
;) Good Luck
Realazy
Elite Mapper
1,004 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Realazy
Fixed some of your suggestions on Hard and Insane, thanks guys !

Snowy Dream: 00:27:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing is reduced because it looks better imo. It's not like people would miss it with the spacing I've had before.
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
Hi real :D
mod from wcx's eggpain queue
i'm a new modder >////<
all suggestions,feel free to ignore them,and forgive my poor english plz~

[General]
GREAT FILE NAMES!!!
00:25:448 - i wonder why there is a red line...orz...it seemed you didn't change BPM,sound samples or volume...
1466,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
25448,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
30368,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
49739,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
64805,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
83253,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
88196,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
98027,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
and i didn't see any difference here.if they are really useless,delete them plz...however if you don't think so,plz tell me the reason~thx
01:08:196 - ^
01:38:027 - ^
oh why you use 80% vol all the time...

[Ryuu's Easy]
00:21:144 (1) - consider removing the last tick?

ok i didn't see anything else~

[Moody's Normal]
*don't you think the SV is a little fast for normal diff?? i think it's difficult for beginners...
*OD-1?
00:22:374 (3) - the begining tick and the ending tick isn't on the same height...set Grid Level4 and you can see it clearly
SPOILER
00:46:663 - add note?
00:47:893 - ^
btw i think clap is more suitable than whistle

[Hard]
00:45:126 (1) - make the begining of the slider the same location as 00:43:896 (5)

[Insane]
*OD-1?
00:27:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why not change to 1/2 sliders...too hard to read D:
00:36:824 (2) - Ctrl+R?
01:02:037 (3) - NC?
01:02:652 (3) - ^
01:03:267 (3) - ^
01:28:196 - from here,this part is too hard...considering use 1.0x DS?

Oh that's all I can find~Great mapset~
Here's my star~!Good luck with rank and the challenge!
Realazy
Elite Mapper
1,004 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Realazy
Didn't apply any of them, sorry ! Thanks for modding though.

About the timing sections, if they weren't here, the notes would sound too early. (Around 40ms early iirc)
Bobo_old
492 posts
Joined February 2011
Bobo_old
Hey there Real, really sorry about the huge delay.
I'll be honest, I haven't been busy or anything. I'm just lazy as f**k :(

Okay first of all, your map has improved greatly since I last looked at it, glad to see that ;3

[General]

.. Seems fine \:D/

[Insane]

00:01:466 (1) - This looks a little odd in this position, I don't reccomend using these sorts of slider shapes unless you have hit objects to compliment. Perhaps you could just place this somewhere else. Perhaps you could do something like this?
SPOILER
00:16:224 (1,2) - These two look nice if you couple them together like this. Gives a nice overlap whilst having symmetry with the y axis.
SPOILER
00:33:596 (2,4) - You haven't added claps onto these two hitcircles, it breaks consistancy with the hitsound pattern. Is this done on purpose?
00:40:821 (1) - From this point onwards, you've placed clap hitsounds on every white tick, where's in the patterns before you've placed claps on the red ticks. I suggest choosing either red ticks or white ticks to use throughout the whole chorus to keep consistancy. In my opinion, the white ticks sound the best.
00:50:968 (7,8,9,10,11) - You could use this stream to make a blanket around (1). Like this
SPOILER
00:53:120 (3,4) - I suggest moving these a couple grids down so that they aren't so close to (2)'s startpoint. It'll make a nice triangle formation with (2)'s startpoint and (3)'s endpoint.
00:53:504 (6,7,8,9) - Use this to make a blanket like formation around (2) like I showed you earlier.
01:05:419 (1) - You've stopped using the clap pattern altogether from this point, why not add it? :D
01:09:877 (1) - This slider seems to start too late to me. I suggest making it one 1/2 longer and then making it start at (5). (Therefore replacing (5) to make the slider begin earlier.)
01:23:252 (1,2,3,4) - The (2) in the previous pattern heads towards the (1) slider after these antijumps, how about stacking these 4 notes on that (1) slider so it flows better?
01:27:403 (4,5,6,7) - This square doesn't seem evenlly spaced, I suggest tweaking it a little.

Very nice diff sir ~

[Hard]

00:01:466 (1) - As I pointed out earlier in [Insane], these sorts of sliders look odd without other hitobjects to compliment. How about placing it here to fix that? (Startpoint is on the bottom.)
SPOILER
00:46:356 (1) - I suggest reversing this slider so that the map flows better. The map seems to flow in this one direction, and all of a sudden this (1) comes along and makes you turn the other way.
01:38:180 (2,3,4,5) - How about repositioning these sliders so that they surround (1)?
01:39:871 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could make a triangle pattern like in [Insane], except easier.

I like this diff alot, the patterns flow nicely.

[Normal]

01:39:871 (1,2,3) - I'd put a NC here, and erase the NC at 01:39:256 (1) -
01:39:871 (2) - And then put a NC here.

Very clean diff here, can't really find anything major.

[Easy]

00:59:885 (3) - A lot of newer players tend to let go after the first repeat, how about replacing that last repeat with a hitcircle?

Also a very clean diff, nice use of shape formations.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Well there you go, again I'm really sorry for the delay.
Good luck getting ranked.

You gave kuds to my previous mod, do not give kuds to this one please.
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
thank u, bobo.
http://puu.sh/yx8m
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
CAN CAN

http://puu.sh/zNkx
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Bonjour

[Ryuu's Easy]
00:27:908 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying


[Moody's Normal]
* AR +1?

00:17:454 (3) - Make a slider like this to make better symetric slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340422
01:12:798 (4) - New combo for following stanza?


[Hard]
00:07:307 (4) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar
00:11:920 (4) - ^
00:37:593 (4) - Spacing error


[Insane]
00:39:899 (1,2) - If you do this, some players confusing about which is the head slider and tail slider
01:03:574 (1) - Snap at 01:04:496 for following *pop* sound?


[CTB Collab]
* The 2nd red timing section should snap at 00:25:448 for consistent on each diff


Good luck~
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: ELSE I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU IF YOU DELETE THEM.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 30368
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Skype x Can Can
Artist:Ara Potato
Creator:Real
Version:Ryuu's Easy
Source:Nico Nico Douga
Tags:MoodyRPG Mapper 31 Mapper_31 samiljul Serval Deif CTB Catch the Beat Collab Collaboration Mutsuhiko Izumi Tengoku to Jigoku jubeat [Ryuu]

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"So you are looking at my map's folder.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1466,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
25448,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
30368,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
49739,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
64805,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
83253,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
88196,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
98027,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 89,255,94
Combo2 : 155,205,255
Combo3 : 233,233,243
Combo4 : 253,228,55
Combo5 : 255,94,94

[HitObjects]
88,288,1466,1,2
120,168,2080,1,0
208,256,2695,1,2
240,136,3310,1,0
312,40,3925,6,0,B|368:80|364:160,1,120,2|0
464,208,5155,2,0,B|424:268|340:260,1,120,2|2
256,200,6385,5,4
152,256,7000,1,0
40,224,7615,2,0,B|64:160|128:144,1,120,2|0
192,48,8845,5,2
240,160,9460,1,0
296,264,10075,2,0,B|321:314|393:326,1,120,2|0
400,208,11305,6,0,B|444:148|408:84,1,120,4|0
304,136,12534,2,0,B|268:196|300:260,1,120,2|0
192,312,13764,6,0,B|132:308|72:264,2,120,2|0|2
256,208,15609,1,0
136,196,16224,6,4,B|160:88|252:40,1,180,4|2
292,68,17454,1,0
288,188,18069,1,2
216,284,18684,6,0,B|108:304|28:244,1,180,4|2
48,196,19914,1,0
152,136,20529,1,2
164,256,21144,6,0,B|214:226|255:255|296:283|349:244|349:244,1,180,4|2
364,196,22374,1,0
412,88,22989,1,2
292,84,23603,6,0,B|192:72|120:136,1,180,4|2
116,192,24833,1,0
188,288,25448,5,2
256,192,26063,1,2
324,288,26678,1,2
396,192,27293,1,2
456,88,27908,6,0,B|396:56|332:92,2,120,2|2|2
396,192,29753,1,2
312,280,30368,6,0,B|264:316|188:312,1,120,4|0
80,288,31598,1,2
72,168,32213,2,0,B|128:128|136:40,1,120,0|2
248,44,33443,5,0
244,164,34057,2,0,B|216:220|228:292,2,120,2|0|6
304,60,35902,6,0,B|364:100|364:176,1,120,0|2
436,256,37132,2,0,B|376:296|304:268,1,120,0|2
216,216,38362,1,0
132,300,38977,1,2
100,184,39592,1,0
188,100,40207,6,0,B|252:96|308:64,1,120,4|0
420,100,41437,2,0,B|400:168|344:208,1,120,2|0
392,312,42667,2,0,B|324:332|272:284,1,120,2|0
160,304,43897,2,2,B|112:256|112:120|172:64,1,240,2|4
232,172,45741,6,0,B|284:128|276:52,1,120,0|2
388,112,46971,1,0
420,228,47586,1,2
340,316,48201,2,0,B|288:340|221:332,2,120,0|2|0
312,200,50046,6,0,B|384:180|444:252,1,120,4|2
456,112,51276,2,0,B|384:132|324:60,1,120,0|0
228,96,52506,5,0
108,92,53121,1,2
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168,280,54351,1,2
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168,280,56810,1,2
80,200,57425,6,0,B|56:136|80:84,1,120,4|0
188,140,58655,2,0,B|199:72|246:39,1,120,4|0
312,140,59885,2,4,B|355:87|412:82,2,120
416,196,61729,1,4
256,192,62344,12,4,64804
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217,82,77718,1,0
264,193,78333,1,2
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IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
hi!

I've found inconsistency in kiai,but seems like both kiai sections are unsnapped by 1 ms (late) in all diffs - it's not a big deal,but you could fix that

[Ryuu's Easy]
00:25:448 (1,2,3,4) - вообще,в музыке тарелки отчетливо слышны. я бы добавил финишы,но на твое усмотрение :р
00:49:738 - вот тут проблемка - нужна нота.потому,что киаи заканчивается. вообще в игре это не так уж заметно,как фонтан,например,так что если тебе совсем не захочется делать как на картинке - ну,видимо,опустим эту проблемку
SPOILER
00:54:966 (1) - финиш пропустила?
01:41:716 (1) - коротковат,конечно. лучше бы слайдер - ну,на твое усмотрение

[Moody's Normal]
00:11:305 (1) - add a finish to follow cymbals?
00:25:448 and 00:26:062 (1,2,3) - the same as above

can't find anything wrong with it,great job ;)

[31's Taiko]
01:14:336 (62,63) - shouldn't there be some finishes or one,cause you placed finishes in similar places before (00:39:899 (218))

great taiko

[CTB Collab]
oh guys,I can't pass it,but I hope it's okay.the only thing I could suggest is to work with finishes better,at least in kiai
why finishes accidently dissapear from 01:17:103 (1,2) and till the end of a chorus? :(

and you could add more to 01:04:804 - 01:09:723 - 01:14:643 - 01:19:562 - and 01:23:252 whole part sounds much better with finishes
well,and the same for the first kiai,you could add finishes to the start of each repeating loop

[Hard]
00:53:120 (3,4) - this is too complicated for hard,I think. you could make it easier and more readable:
SPOILER
00:54:350 (4,5) - ^ same
01:01:729 (1,2,3) - would be more rhythmically logical if you removed this finishes from these,so it would flow into 1/1 finishes and then into 1/2 part

very stylish :o

[Insane]
01:01:729 (1,2,3) - as in Hard
01:17:103 (3) - why double finishes dissappear from this point? :o
01:20:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it could flow more naturally..maybe do something like this or work out something new?
SPOILER
01:26:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - err..not sure if they supposed to be squares,but I wish they looked like it :x

again a really decent map,I like your stlye

so,um
the map is really good,call me back again if you fixed anything,but before that - please make sure your timing is right (better to call some timing expert)
first offset was a little out when I tested the mapset and the rest of red lines make me even more uncertain about it
Realazy
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IceBeam wrote:

01:17:103 (3) - why double finishes dissappear from this point? :o
Music changes here so I don't get why I should keep the double finishes :<
Deif
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Oh man... I accidentally got this thread unsuscribed ;__;

I'll try to apply everything asap, so expect a difficulty reduction of the Collab.
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