ignorethis wrote:

<Hard>
First impression: good
the use of custom hitsound in the fist kiai time is inconsistent, it's like oxoxoxox and then changes to xoxoxoxo for no reason... (dunno if you could understand ) Made on purpose.
the use of finish in the second kiai time is inconsistent too It isn't...?
00:18:684 (1,2) - move the ending of the sliders to make them on horizontal lines with the beginning Fixed.
00:23:603 (1) - ^ ^
01:33:092 (1,2,3,4) - i don't see why there's a decrease in the volume? The song's volume decreases between each 1/1.

<Insane>
First impression: good
has similar problem in hitsound usage as Hard
01:27:557 (5) - why leave a blank after this slider ._.? Fixed.

Total impression: Nice, clean and fun mapset.
Rating: A- o3o

00:28:113 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:28:421 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:28:728 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:036 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:343 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:651 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).

1. 00:25:448 - You need too add an uninherited timing section here due to a metronome reset (same BPM, though). That's why the kiai time doesn't start on the downbeat. When you do this, you also don't need the timing section at 01:04:805. You're so silly, Real.
2. I'm pretty sure that the last BPM or offest is off. You should get someone to check that out.

stuff

1. +1 AR due to the high BPM would be nice.
2. 00:05:155 (2) - Remove the slider whistle from the body of the slider. I always thought that they sounded odd.
3. 00:48:201 (4) - I don't think that a finish belongs on the end of this slider due to the fact that you've been putting them on the downbeat before.
4. 00:56:810 (2) - Put this note in the same spot as 00:54:351 (4). It looks neater.

1. Oh man, +1 AR pleaaaase. High BPM and high SV.
2. 00:15:917 (4) - Add a whistle to keep constant with your pattern.
3. 00:19:299 (2) - Flip this vertically as so. It looks so much better.
4. 00:24:218 (2) - Move this down one or two grids to be perfectly aligned with (1).
5. 00:27:908 (1) - It makes sense to put a finish on this slider.
6. 01:35:575 (1,2) - Make this pattern like the one before but horizontally flipped.

1. You need to resnap all notes. There's a lot of them.
2. 01:42:919 (1) - The timing section here is unsnapped and comes AFTER this note. You need to resnap it if you want the 1.50x slider velocity to be in effect.

1. 01:41:689 (1) - I'd suggest adding a finish at this slider to emphasize that that is the final object in the difficulty. It like, relieves the tension. (lol)

1. Your sliders make me uguu.
2. 00:05:155 (3) - Touching HP bar.
3. 00:22:681 (2,3) - Ugly overlap ):<<
4. 00:34:057 (5) - Put this one grid up as it should be according to distance snap. Also, move up the slider after it for a better blanket.
5. 00:36:210 (3) - Odd overlap between this note and 00:36:517 (1).
6. 00:36:825 (2) - ^ Same thing with this slider and 00:37:440 (3). uglllyyy
7. 00:40:207 (1,2) - This is sexy.
8. 00:42:667 (1,5) - This overlap is not.
9. 00:46:203 (4,1) - I usually hate it when mappers do this, but it was easy to see due to different combo colors.
10. 00:52:352 (2,1) - Spacing is off here.
11. 00:58:040 (2) - ermgd itz tuching HP bar!!!!!11one (seriously, fix it)

1. You and your CS5.
2. 00:17:454 (1) - Wait, why not just stack this where 00:16:839 (2) started? It looks so much better.
3. 00:24:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/vsuM
4. 00:52:506 (1,3,4) - Overlap overlap overlap
5. The deathstream at the end will aggravate so many players. you evil genius

Jacob wrote:

As per your request from my modding queue.

General

1. 00:25:448 - You need too add an uninherited timing section here due to a metronome reset (same BPM, though). That's why the kiai time doesn't start on the downbeat. When you do this, you also don't need the timing section at 01:04:805. You're so silly, Real.
2. I'm pretty sure that the last BPM or offest is off. You should get someone to check that out.

stuff

Ryuu's Easy

1. +1 AR due to the high BPM would be nice.
2. 00:05:155 (2) - Remove the slider whistle from the body of the slider. I always thought that they sounded odd.
3. 00:48:201 (4) - I don't think that a finish belongs on the end of this slider due to the fact that you've been putting them on the downbeat before.
4. 00:56:810 (2) - Put this note in the same spot as 00:54:351 (4). It looks neater.

Moody's Normal

1. Oh man, +1 AR pleaaaase. High BPM and high SV.
2. 00:15:917 (4) - Add a whistle to keep constant with your pattern.
3. 00:19:299 (2) - Flip this vertically as so. It looks so much better.
4. 00:24:218 (2) - Move this down one or two grids to be perfectly aligned with (1).
5. 00:27:908 (1) - It makes sense to put a finish on this slider.
6. 01:35:575 (1,2) - Make this pattern like the one before but horizontally flipped.

31's Taiko

1. You need to resnap all notes. There's a lot of them.
2. 01:42:919 (1) - The timing section here is unsnapped and comes AFTER this note. You need to resnap it if you want the 1.50x slider velocity to be in effect.

CTB Collab

1. 01:41:689 (1) - I'd suggest adding a finish at this slider to emphasize that that is the final object in the difficulty. It like, relieves the tension. (lol)

Hard

1. Your sliders make me uguu. :3
2. 00:05:155 (3) - Touching HP bar.
3. 00:22:681 (2,3) - Ugly overlap ):<<
4. 00:34:057 (5) - Put this one grid up as it should be according to distance snap. Also, move up the slider after it for a better blanket.
5. 00:36:210 (3) - Odd overlap between this note and 00:36:517 (1).
6. 00:36:825 (2) - ^ Same thing with this slider and 00:37:440 (3). uglllyyy
7. 00:40:207 (1,2) - This is sexy.
8. 00:42:667 (1,5) - This overlap is not.
9. 00:46:203 (4,1) - I usually hate it when mappers do this, but it was easy to see due to different combo colors.
10. 00:52:352 (2,1) - Spacing is off here.
11. 00:58:040 (2) - ermgd itz tuching HP bar!!!!!11one (seriously, fix it)

Insane

1. You and your CS5. :3 :3
2. 00:17:454 (1) - Wait, why not just stack this where 00:16:839 (2) started? It looks so much better.
3. 00:24:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/vsuM Well, it's manually stacked so it should be okay
4. 00:52:506 (1,3,4) - Overlap overlap overlap
5. The deathstream at the end will aggravate so many players. you evil genius

:3 :3 :3

Have fun reading and applying this super long mod~

1. [Insane] is missing a red line : 01:28:196, BPM of 195.140 and [Hard] is missing a red line : 01:38:027, BPM of 195.140

1. There are some unsnap notes checked out by AIBat
   
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   1. 01:38:000 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   2. 01:38:000 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   3. 01:39:229 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   4. 01:39:844 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   5. 01:40:459 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   6. 01:41:074 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   7. 01:41:689 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
   8. 01:41:689 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).

1. 00:59:884 (1) - How about add a finish sound here?
2. 01:01:114 (3) - ^
3. 01:02:344 (4) - ^

1. Unsnap notes
   
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   1. 01:38:027 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   2. 01:38:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   3. 01:38:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   4. 01:38:488 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   5. 01:38:488 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   6. 01:38:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   7. 01:38:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   8. 01:39:103 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   9. 01:39:103 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   10. 01:39:871 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   11. 01:40:486 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   12. 01:41:101 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   13. 01:41:716 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
   14. 01:41:716 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)
2. 00:11:305 (1) - Add finish?
3. 00:35:287 (1) - ^
4. 01:38:035 (T) - I think you should back to 80% sound volume here

1. Unsnap notes:
   
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   1. 01:28:196 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   2. 01:28:272 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   3. 01:28:349 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   4. 01:28:426 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   5. 01:28:503 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   6. 01:28:580 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   7. 01:28:657 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   8. 01:28:810 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   9. 01:28:810 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   10. 01:29:118 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   11. 01:29:425 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   12. 01:29:502 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   13. 01:29:579 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   14. 01:29:656 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   15. 01:29:733 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   16. 01:29:810 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   17. 01:29:887 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   18. 01:29:963 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   19. 01:30:040 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   20. 01:30:040 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   21. 01:30:348 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   22. 01:30:655 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   23. 01:30:732 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   24. 01:30:809 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   25. 01:30:886 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   26. 01:30:963 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   27. 01:31:116 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   28. 01:31:193 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   29. 01:31:270 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   30. 01:31:270 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   31. 01:31:578 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   32. 01:31:885 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   33. 01:31:962 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   34. 01:32:039 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   35. 01:32:116 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   36. 01:32:193 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   37. 01:32:269 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   38. 01:32:346 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   39. 01:32:423 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   40. 01:32:500 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
   41. 01:32:577 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
   42. 01:32:654 (11) - Unsnapped circle.
   43. 01:32:731 (12) - Unsnapped circle.
   44. 01:32:808 (13) - Unsnapped circle.
   45. 01:32:884 (14) - Unsnapped circle.
   46. 01:32:961 (15) - Unsnapped circle.
   47. 01:33:038 (16) - Unsnapped circle.
   48. 01:33:115 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   49. 01:33:115 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   50. 01:33:730 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   51. 01:33:730 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   52. 01:34:345 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   53. 01:34:345 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   54. 01:34:960 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   55. 01:34:960 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   56. 01:35:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   57. 01:35:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   58. 01:36:190 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   59. 01:36:190 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   60. 01:36:805 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   61. 01:36:805 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   62. 01:37:420 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   63. 01:37:420 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
2. 00:11:305 (1) - Add finish here?

1. Реснапни все ноты, есть анснапнутые в конце, а именно: 01:38:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
2. 00:33:443 (4) - нк сюда, комбо длиннее 3 не рекомендуются на изях
3. 01:02:037 (1) - заменить вистл на финиш? Припев начинается-то
   
   Молодец!

1. 00:06:385 (1) - finish on the beginning
2. 01:28:196 (1) - ^
3. 01:33:115 (1) - ^
4. 01:35:575 (1) - ^
5. 01:41:101 (4) - and finish here
   
   Gooooood!

1. 00:03:925 (1) - ctrl+r? To keep flow C:
2. 00:06:385 (1) - finish
3. 00:45:126 (1) - ^
4. 00:53:274 (4) - whaaaa D: move it to 00:53:351 - and move 00:53:581 (5) - further
5. 00:54:657 (5) - ^ move to 00:54:580 -
6. 00:56:656 (3) - move to 00:56:579 - >:C
7. 00:57:425 (1) - ctrl+r again? :O
8. 01:05:419 - finish madness! Maybe remove some? >.< from 01:06:649 (1,2) - here and 01:07:879 (5,6,7) -
9. 01:08:494 (1) - and here add one
10. 01:11:568 (3,4) - remove finishes? 01:12:798 (3,4) - and from here D:
11. 01:14:643 (1) - add here!
12. 01:17:103 (3) - and add here to the beginning and reverse like here 01:15:873 (5) -
13. 01:19:562 (1) - finish
14. 01:33:115 (1) - ^ also, don't like the volume decreasing :<
15. 01:35:575 (1) - ^

1. 00:06:385 (1) - finish!
2. 00:17:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe ctrl+r? 00:16:839 (2) - overlaps the first circles and it's hard to read :<
3. 00:28:445 (3) - this slider is hidden by 00:27:600 (2) - 's hitburst. So, change the order, like here?
   
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4. 00:54:965 (1) - finish
5. 01:06:034 - this part~ again, remove some finishes as in previous part C:
6. 01:33:115 (1) - again, maybe delete decreasing in volume? :<
7. 01:33:115 (1) - finish
8. 01:35:575 (1) - ^

[Ryuu's Easy]

[Moody's Normal]

[Hard]

[Insane]

[31's Taiko]

1466,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
25448,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
30368,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
49739,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
64805,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
83253,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
88196,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0
98027,307.471558880804,4,2,1,80,1,0

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