Hi !
Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.
[General]
I feel a bit weird about kiai time.Only has more than one kiai time but other don't.[/color]
The end time in is weird too,it's spinner end is unsnapped.
And the sound end at 01:36:163 .Spinners end at 01:36:163 in all diff ?[/color]
[Platinum]
00:33:404 (10) - Spacing larger,since your sliders spacing isn't small like that.But it's still readable.
00:36:852 (5) - A clap is missed here?Or it's intentional?
01:03:921 (15) - It's spacing is totally different,fix it.
01:05:301 (15) - ^
I suggest using identically spacing in these two streams.
01:09:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - AHO's new world o.0 (Nothing wrong here)
01:32:370 (1) - Del NC?
[Gold]
00:18:232 (4) - A clap is missed here?Or it's intentional?
00:22:714 (1) - Stack it better at the end of 00:22:025 (3)~New coordinate:x238,y194(NAZI)
00:28:577 (2) - I suggest put it on spacing to show it 's a 1/4 beat.like that:
00:29:956 (2) - ^
00:31:335 (2) - ^
01:10:646 (1) - Stack it ,the spacing is misleading.
01:32:370 (1) - Try del NC?
01:32:542 (1) - Slience it as you did in Extra.
[Silver]
Even though you rejected the AR+1 suggest,I still think I have to suggest you once again.
Reason:AR7 doesn't mean it's easier to play,the AR is toooo slow for this diff.
For example,Seeing you use AR2 in your easy diff,you can't set AR0 in this easy diff then tell someone"it's a easy!" AR rating is depended in how the mapset,BPM,melody.Therefore,try AR8,it's easier to play with,to mod with,to enjoy with.
00:01:335 (3) - Don't put huge 1/1 spacing in hard orz.
00:37:025 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pentagon isn't congruent.
00:55:990 (1) - Slience this spinner as you did in [/color]
01:32:370 (1) - Del NC?
01:32:542 (1) - Slience it as you did in Extra.
[Bronze]
00:09:956 (2) - Add whistle?
00:17:887 (2) - Add clap at the end?
00:55:990 (1) - Slience this spinner as you did in [/color]
01:02:714 (3) - Add NC?
01:32:370 (1) - Del NC?
01:32:542 (1) - Slience it as you did in Extra.
This diff needs more works.Seems a bit confuse for a Normal.
[Rust]
01:22:370 (2) - NC?
01:32:542 (1) -
01:32:370 (1) - Del NC?
01:32:542 (1) - Slience it as you did in Extra.
Get more works in your easy,normal diffs
Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.
[General]
I feel a bit weird about kiai time.Only has more than one kiai time but other don't.[/color]
The end time in is weird too,it's spinner end is unsnapped.
And the sound end at 01:36:163 .Spinners end at 01:36:163 in all diff ?[/color]
[Platinum]
00:33:404 (10) - Spacing larger,since your sliders spacing isn't small like that.But it's still readable.
00:36:852 (5) - A clap is missed here?Or it's intentional?
01:03:921 (15) - It's spacing is totally different,fix it.
01:05:301 (15) - ^
I suggest using identically spacing in these two streams.
01:09:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - AHO's new world o.0 (Nothing wrong here)
01:32:370 (1) - Del NC?
[Gold]
00:18:232 (4) - A clap is missed here?Or it's intentional?
00:22:714 (1) - Stack it better at the end of 00:22:025 (3)~New coordinate:x238,y194(NAZI)
00:28:577 (2) - I suggest put it on spacing to show it 's a 1/4 beat.like that:
00:29:956 (2) - ^
00:31:335 (2) - ^
01:10:646 (1) - Stack it ,the spacing is misleading.
01:32:370 (1) - Try del NC?
01:32:542 (1) - Slience it as you did in Extra.
[Silver]
Even though you rejected the AR+1 suggest,I still think I have to suggest you once again.
Reason:AR7 doesn't mean it's easier to play,the AR is toooo slow for this diff.
For example,Seeing you use AR2 in your easy diff,you can't set AR0 in this easy diff then tell someone"it's a easy!" AR rating is depended in how the mapset,BPM,melody.Therefore,try AR8,it's easier to play with,to mod with,to enjoy with.
00:01:335 (3) - Don't put huge 1/1 spacing in hard orz.
00:37:025 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pentagon isn't congruent.
00:55:990 (1) - Slience this spinner as you did in [/color]
01:32:370 (1) - Del NC?
01:32:542 (1) - Slience it as you did in Extra.
[Bronze]
00:09:956 (2) - Add whistle?
00:17:887 (2) - Add clap at the end?
00:55:990 (1) - Slience this spinner as you did in [/color]
01:02:714 (3) - Add NC?
01:32:370 (1) - Del NC?
01:32:542 (1) - Slience it as you did in Extra.
This diff needs more works.Seems a bit confuse for a Normal.
[Rust]
01:22:370 (2) - NC?
01:32:542 (1) -
01:32:370 (1) - Del NC?
01:32:542 (1) - Slience it as you did in Extra.
Get more works in your easy,normal diffs