ISHIDAMITSUNARI wrote:

nice map 石田快来个21*taiko秒杀这图233

1. fine, I think sliders are a little fast 0.0 not a big problem

1. 00:04:439 (2) - sounds not so good
2. 00:55:128 (4) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot434-0.jpg ?

1. generally: this is a Hard diff, so it shouldn't have so many streams/triplets, you should reduce some of them as 1/4-repeat sliders or whatever.
2. for example: 00:04:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - it's too hard for a hard diff.
3. 00:04:266 (4) - move here: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot432.jpg
4. 00:37:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2x repeat arrow sliders stream?
5. 00:48:059 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot433.jpg here? hard to follow this jump for me
6. 01:06:249 (7,8) - change to a slider here? it's not so readable as 3/4, easy to mistake it for a jump 1/2.
7. 01:07:628 (7,8) - ^ this is also too hard imo.

1. 00:22:714 (1) - I think it's better to jump here, (2)'s position is pretty good.
2. Maybe make 00:22:714 (1,2,3,4,5) a pentagon/star? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot435.jpg
3. 00:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - why large spacing in jumps T_T
4. 01:14:697 (6) - remove this note? doesn't feel good
5. this stream at the end..

1. 00:04:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - why close spacing? his doesn't fit the entire map
2. 00:11:594 (16,1) - remove claps here
3. 00:22:714 (1,2) - 1.5x, 1.5x, 1.75x, 1.75x sv? fits music more, imo.
4. 00:25:473 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:28:318 (2,3,4,5) - spacing?
6. 00:48:490 (12) - move up 1 grid?
7. 00:49:869 (12) - down ^
8. 01:27:111 (12) - left / up 1 grid?
9. 01:28:749 (15,16,1) - the shape here looks not so good

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

ISHIDAMITSUNARI wrote:

nice map 石田快来个21*taiko秒杀这图233

my mod:

Rust

1. fine, I think sliders are a little fast 0.0 not a big problem

indeed XD

Bronze

1. 00:04:439 (2) - sounds not so good ok
2. 00:55:128 (4) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot434-0.jpg ?

what's with this? :O

Silver

1. generally: this is a Hard diff, so it shouldn't have so many streams/triplets, you should reduce some of them as 1/4-repeat sliders or whatever.
2. for example: 00:04:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - it's too hard for a hard diff. ok
3. 00:04:266 (4) - move here: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot432.jpg no
4. 00:37:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2x repeat arrow sliders stream? no
5. 00:48:059 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot433.jpg here? hard to follow this jump for me no
6. 01:06:249 (7,8) - change to a slider here? it's not so readable as 3/4, easy to mistake it for a jump 1/2. ok
7. 01:07:628 (7,8) - ^ this is also too hard imo. ok

Gold

1. 00:22:714 (1) - I think it's better to jump here, (2)'s position is pretty good. no
2. Maybe make 00:22:714 (1,2,3,4,5) a pentagon/star? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot435.jpg no
3. 00:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - why large spacing in jumps T_Tno
4. 01:14:697 (6) - remove this note? doesn't feel goodno
5. this stream at the end..yes

Platinum

1. 00:04:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - why close spacing? his doesn't fit the entire map no
2. 00:11:594 (16,1) - remove claps here replaced with whistle
3. 00:22:714 (1,2) - 1.5x, 1.5x, 1.75x, 1.75x sv? fits music more, imo. no
4. 00:25:473 (1,2) - ^no
5. 00:28:318 (2,3,4,5) - spacing?okay
6. 00:48:490 (12) - move up 1 grid?okay
7. 00:49:869 (12) - down ^okay
8. 01:27:111 (12) - left / up 1 grid?okay
9. 01:28:749 (15,16,1) - the shape here looks not so goodokay, fixed a little

nice stream, what a pity cookiezi is afk ;_; .__. star, good luck on ranking this!~ thanks

Emdyion wrote:

Decided to make another Silver.

Of course, like last time, this is only part of what I have, I'll finish the map later~ (if you want if, of course)

Kurokami wrote:

Here is my suggestions.

Emdyion's Silver

1. difficulty settings are unbalanced, try ar7, od6 Fixed.
2. 00:40:128 (4) - x:44, y:204 Done.
3. 00:55:818 (1) - this note is not makes sense Extended previous spinner.
4. 01:11:680 (3) - x:176, y:208 Done.
5. 01:12:887 (3) - x:336, y:208 Done.

Try to finish the spinners at the same time on all difficulty. This is all what I found. If you did this because you are bored, you did a good work. xd

SkyDevil wrote:

Emdyion's Silver
01:03:921 - 3 grids down 1 grid lefT? Why?
01:28:232 - Put it farther away or something >< This was unreadable T_T How was it not? It wasn't blocked by anything..
btw nice hitsounding at the beginning :O Thank you.

Philippines wrote:

EDIT: I doubt Emdyion won't change a thing so I already submitted. lol XD

1. Sorry that I can't get all difficulties after downloading this beatmap.You should do a full submission to fix this.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:11:508 (91,92,93,94) - I would remove this 1/6 and then change it to 1/4 instead.It's quite hard to read with 1/4.
2. 00:34:439 (300) - A kat here would be nice.
3. 00:38:232 (329,330,331,332) - It fits the music but this is quite hard to read.I think it ruins the playflow
4. 01:18:232 (730) - Big kat here.

Emdyion wrote:

SPOILER

00:46:163 : Finish (All your difficulties) Didn't check

[Rust] Good

00:55:990 : Do you want this spinner to be silent?

01:22:370 (1) : Remove finish

[Bronze]

00:22:714 (1,2,3) : Different than 00:25:473 (1,2,3). <---- Perhaps make this one the same as 00:22:714?
00:25:818 (1) : Finish (on end of slider, hence timing)
00:26:508 (3) : Remove finish

01:16:508 - 01:22:025 : No clap+finish at 2nd and 4th beats? Like the other difficulties? Where's the claps? Don't remove the claps! 0_0

[Silver]

00:22:714 (1,2,1,2) : Seems a bit too spaced out (first 1.34x, then 1.76x). Don't really know how you want to fix that. Perhaps start with 1.00x? Your choice. No need to change, I guess...?

00:25:473 (1,2,1,2) : ^

01:05:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) : <Comment> WHOA WHERE DID THE 5-STREAMS COME FROM
Also, it seems like there's a weird pattern here. Not complaining to change it and all, but this difficulty is supposed to be Hard.

01:06:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) : ^ btw, you don't have to change these, just saying
^^^

01:30:301 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) : Any hitsounds here? No? Checked.

The five-streams with the pattern seems a bit unusual in this difficulty.

[Gold] Good

00:22:714 (1,2,3,4,5) : Make the hitsounds like 00:25:473 Checked.

01:00:990 (1) : I think it's better without the clap. Checked.

[Platinum] Good

00:04:783 (1) : Finish?

00:26:163 (1) : This section is still 30% volume.

00:28:232 (1) : Finish

00:33:749 (1) : ^

Emdyion wrote:

Note to SkyDevil: For your future mods, make sure you place the combonumber for the selected time, otherwise I have no idea what you're talking about XD ~too lazy--- kaay i will remember XD

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:

[General]

1. Sorry that I can't get all difficulties after downloading this beatmap.You should do a full submission to fix this.
   
   SPOILER

   

[Wmf's Taiko]

1. 00:11:508 (91,92,93,94) - I would remove this 1/6 and then change it to 1/4 instead.It's quite hard to read with 1/4.Agreed. There's no 1/6 in fact.
2. 00:34:439 (300) - A kat here would be nice. k
3. 00:38:232 (329,330,331,332) - It fits the music but this is quite hard to read.I think it ruins the playflow I think it's fine there
4. 01:18:232 (730) - Big kat here.k

ok.Not that much to talk.

1. 00:55:990 (1) - why don't you remove it and make break on this difficulty longer?

1. 00:01:680 (2,3,2,3) - I don't think you should start Normal with 1/2 notes; better introduce them later
2. 00:45:473 (2) - I expected it to be 1/2 later, like previous sliders
3. 01:13:059 (4,5,6) - I hope it won't confuse players
4. 01:28:921 (1,2,3,1,2) - I'm afraid there are too many things in this area. Space them out a little

1. 00:27:542 (1,2,3,4) - I really don't like how it plays here due to relatively low AR and pattern itself
2. 00:28:921 - I wouldn't skip beat here

1. 00:30:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it's too many. Add a slider somewhere because it's almost 9s of smashing 1/2 mixed with 1/4. Give people a little bit of rest even on your 'Silver'

1. 01:05:818 (4) - excuse me, I think 3.5x and 4.3x jumps mixed with streams are the way too far. Don't put two diffs with that amount of retardness difficulty in the same set, please; you better reduce it
2. 01:08:749 (4,1) - the same
3. 01:10:473 (6,1) - I'd swap them
4. 01:17:542 (6) - the same about jump(s)

1. Nothing to talk about. I mean, I don't see any real errors here. Then only thing I can suggest is to reduce volume on streams, because I can barely hear music behind that sound of smashing notes.

• Changelog

1. I'd assume Emdyion won't change anything. Since he's trying to make the patterns consistent with the other patterns so he won't add a note on 00:28:921. Also on tic's first suggestion on his diff. Please tell me If I'm wrong. XD
   
2. On the other hand, [Silver] has been changed to [Silver +] due to it's difficulty. It's hard for a hard diff but easy for an insane diff so I guess I'll just go half way. (:
   
3. Didn't made any changes on tic's mod except reducing the volume on [Platinum].

• You should increase the AudioLeadIn to 2000. 1000 makes the first object come onto screen a bit too quickly.
  01:32:542 (1) - On all difficulties, make the timing section at this spinner 5%. 10% makes it too audible. If you plan on keeping 10%, at least make the hitsound soft so you can't really hear the spinner.

• 00:05:473 (2) - Remove the finish from the beginning of this slider. It's not in the music.
  00:23:404 (2) - Remove the finish from the end of this slider for the same reason.
  00:26:163 (2) - ^ Also, remove the whistle at the end of this slider for consistency.
  00:26:852 (3) - Make this slider the same exact shape as 00:24:094 (3), just reversed. It makes more sense.
  00:31:680 (2) - Remove all whistle from this slider for consistency.

• 00:08:921 (1) - Whistle at the beginning of this slider for consistency.
  00:39:439 (2,3) - I really love how you made this overlap. It looks really nice.
  00:44:266 (2) - Move this up a bit to be aligned with 00:43:404 (1).

• In all of the timing sections with custom hitsounds, make them normal. Taiko difficulties really shouldn't have custom hitsounds.

• 00:14:266 - Add a note here to keep the flow going.
  01:19:611 (3) - The sudden slider speed change starting with this slider is totally unpredictable and unreadable. This is mainly because of the fact that the first sliders during the speed change were scrunched up sliders (which are harder to notice speed change in). I read this slider as 1/2 repeat slider before finally getting it after the fifth try.
  01:30:990 (1) - The whistle on this slider burns my eardrums.

• 00:06:163 (1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of this slider along with the finish for consistency.
  01:06:249 (7) - Moving this back by one tick and extending it to be a 1/2 slider makes a lot more sense, is more readable, and keeps the flow going strong.

• 01:09:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Call me retarded, but I read these notes as a stream. Since the spacing in the 1/4 sliders was large and the song's speed was increasing at the same time, I expected a stream to be here. Try spacing them further apart or making them a stream.

• 00:22:714 (1,2,1,2) - Absolutely not in a map going for ranking. No way. If this was for approval, it might be okay.
  00:25:473 (1,2,1,2) - ^
  00:39:266 (1) - Don't use an anti-jump here. Players hate it when people do this with streams (same case with stacking). They might hit an extra button on accident and miss the first note of the stream.
  01:05:646 (3,4) - The spacing between this stream and others like it is about 4.0x (not saying this is unrankable, but this isn't fun to play).

Jacob wrote:

General

• You should increase the AudioLeadIn to 2000. 1000 makes the first object come onto screen a bit too quickly. Agree
  01:32:542 (1) - On all difficulties, make the timing section at this spinner 5%. 10% makes it too audible. If you plan on keeping 10%, at least make the hitsound soft so you can't really hear the spinner. Agree

Emdyion's Silver

• 00:14:266 - Add a note here to keep the flow going. No, keeping pattern.
  01:19:611 (3) - The sudden slider speed change starting with this slider is totally unpredictable and unreadable. This is mainly because of the fact that the first sliders during the speed change were scrunched up sliders (which are harder to notice speed change in). I read this slider as 1/2 repeat slider before finally getting it after the fifth try. What sudden slider speed change?
  01:30:990 (1) - The whistle on this slider burns my eardrums. Note to Philippines: Keep whistle on hitcircles, but remove the whistle sound

And yes, Chrome would be a good idea for a diff name.

Philippines wrote:

• Changelog

1. I'd assume Emdyion won't change anything. Since he's trying to make the patterns consistent with the other patterns so he won't add a note on 00:28:921. Also on tic's first suggestion on his diff. Please tell me If I'm wrong. XD Agree, but I'll change the first part of Tic's mod. Later.

• Changelog

1. Changed my Silver to Chrome. Decided to keep Emdyion's as Silver.
   
2. Renamed Wmf's Taiko to Wmf's Platinum Taiko to go with the diff name scheme. (:
   
3. Changed Audio Lead-in to 2,000.
   
4. Followed all hit sound suggestions.
   
5. No change on Platinum and Gold.

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Ohi~~

[General]
00:00:646 - 00:11:508 - This part should get soft Hitsounds, in all Difficults. Because the soft Finish sounds way better then normal Finish.
You could delete the .osb File. Uh..I'd somewhat agree with this, but I've already made my part with soft hitsounds already. Maybe Philippines can just use my inherited points...?

[Emdiyon's Silver]
00:19:956 (10) - NC Agree, Philippines can do that
00:20:128 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:30:128 (3) - The current lenght doesn't fit well. Do . This fits fine. Huh? I don't get this..
00:32:370 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this is ok for a Hard Diff. ...I think it should be fine.
01:10:301 (5) - Extend this until to the End Point of (6). So make a 1/4 repeater to 1/2? Hmm...
01:10:646 (6) - Delete it if you follow this^. ...Not changing for now.
01:30:990 (1) - I don't know. I don't see the reason why you should set the clap here. ?

• A few infos..

1. Didn't changed TNG's Soft Hitsound Suggestion.
2. Changed all TNG's Suggestion for [Rust].
3. Decreased Circle Size in [Bronze] by 1 to remove those ugly overlaps.
4. Fixed the little white line on the Background of taiko diff.
5. OD +1 for [Gold].
   
   To TNG, If I added OD +1 on [Platinum], max score would be 20M which will make it run for approval, so no.

eddieee wrote:

hmmm streams... so creative..

1. 00:14:094 (3) - missed a clap?
2. 00:55:990 (1) - eh, you still keep this spinner?

1. 00:01:680 (2,3) - you better use half-beat notes later, not at the very beginning
2. 00:15:301 (2) - to be honest, I don't like when people skip beat(s), especially big white ones. Also, you did it a lot on this diff
3. 00:54:439 (3,4) - uncomfortable for playing
   
   Also, I recommend you to reduce spacing here since it's Normal, make it at least 1.0.

1. 00:28:232 (1) ~ 00:36:335 (9) — I dislike it again, too many notes in a row, in my opinion. Even if it's Hard, you shouldn't spam that much

1. 01:06:508 (6,6) - again? It's too far from next and previous streams. Also, it doesn't seem that you followed my suggestions before

• 
  All I'd say here was already said before me. The only thing I can post is my personal opinion: I don't think that constant streaming fits this music. Yeah, it might be associated w/ piano play or something, but not with streaming.

1. Inconsistency in the slider tick rate. If you're going to use 2 tick rate on your diffs then please use it for every diff that you made. Currently Gold and Platinum have 1 tick rate

1. Increase OD by 1 to make it balanced with the next diff
2. 00:55:990 (1) - The spinner doesn't fit the current place. Xgor have given a good reason and I agree with him. It's better to just remove it
3. 01:32:370 (2) - NC to this note

1. I feel iffy about the difficulty jump from Rust to Bronze. I'll just say it here, let's see if others agree with me or not
2. Increase HP and OD by 1
3. 00:55:990 (1) - Same problem as the above diff

1. 00:55:990 (1) - I'm starting to sound like a parrot here but again the same problem as above
2. 01:31:680 (5) - NC this note

1. 00:38:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - At first this plays nice but you're using it way too much and it become too repetitive. Try not to use the same pattern over and over in a short time span as it may quickly become boring. For this pattern I suggest to just use it until 00:41:680 (6) and starting from 00:42:025 you should use a different pattern. Maybe something like 1/4 sliders stream then a circle. Here's an example
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Same problem as above. A stream pattern that were used many time it became repetitive.
3. 00:55:990 (1) - Yup, the spinner
4. 01:17:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Repetitive pattern, but for this one I suggest to use it 4 times until 01:19:611 (6) then change to other pattern (maybe using kick slider stream) on 01:19:783. Of course you can use your own idea but please avoid using the same pattern again
5. 01:24:783 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This one is a very long stream, too long maybe. Try to tone it down a little, maybe stop the stream on 01:28:232 (1) then use 1/1 beat until 01:28:921 then start the stream again from 01:29:266. Oh and try to use different pattern too for the next stream
6. 01:32:370 (2) - NC this

1. Now this is where everything goes wrong. As I said before, there are no rules that forbid using streams but a 5 second stream of 1/4 beat again and again is just silly.There's nothing I can suggest for this diff other than re-map or scrap the diff
2. 00:22:714 (1,2,1,2) - Another tedious pattern. This super fast slider is very sudden you won't know that they are 1/4 beat slider until you miss it

LifestreamEyenine wrote:

Wow, you really shot almost all of your kudosu on this map...

Good luck! Looking forward to seeing this map ranked

eddieee wrote:

hmmm streams... so creative..

Jacob wrote:

Uguu.

Philippines wrote:

i guess this'll be the new record for lowest star rating. XD but thanks everyone!

Blue Dragon wrote:

No need to troll, guys.

Derekku wrote:

Happy belated birthday!