Hitomi May wrote:

Хэй, вечар добры ==
Прывитанне!!!

Калi что не зразумееш - пытай)
Вроде все понятно

[Агульнае]
Нешта дзiўны скiн у цябе, я лiчу, што iгракам ён не спадабаеццв :Р I дарэчы, празрыстыя кругi гэта не вельмi добра
Вообще хотел сделать в духе http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UXeq0gaxDIM

[Хард]
Спачатку хiтсаўнды здаюцца мне рандомнымi.. ==
А я так старался :oops:
00:52:799 (1) - я чую тут фiнiш, на другiм канцы +
01:01:371 (6) - можа працягнуць да блакiтнага цiка? Алк гэта толькi "прапанова" +
01:30:514 (7) - можа тут (i у другiх падобных момантах) зрабiць не софт, а нормал фiнiш?
Во точно, как вообще мог пропустить +
01:37:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - хм, штосьцi.. Нечакана.. У цябе амаль што ўсё сiметрычна.. Можна было б и тут так срабiць
(Зкапiпасцiць сюды вось гэта 01:35:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)) +
02:12:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - тут на ўсiх белых цiках змясцiць фiнiшы
хитсаунды тут пока не буду трогать, может придумаю что-нибудь интересное
02:17:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:21:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:38:809 (3) - не ў рытм я думаю подправил +

Добрая песня!
Удачы з мапкай ^^

02:47:237 (1) - In the last timing section, It'd be a nice touch if you lowered the audio of the hitsounds to 5%.

TorNis wrote:

Hi, this is TorNis's Live Stream Queue

Your map is being modding live right now: http://www.twitch.tv/tornis
I will be editing in real time when I found something for modding in this post.

[General]
-Since your map have custom elements(skin), why other skin elements are automatically forced as default skin?
Cuz they forced to default in song setup, you can interpret this as solid full skin.

-Right now, in "Normal" diff, there is fitting kiai time, while on "Hard", there is none. I would love to see same kiai in Hard and other diffs as well. Alternatively, you can remove kiai in every diff, but that would make a map less stylish.
Yep this is hard part, on normal you can put kiai on chorus because all diff is pretty solid but on hard the most hard and hitsound emotional part on middle so... anyway i'll think abot this moment, thanks.

[Yli's Normal]
Flawless. Nice job with slider shapes
Previous modder said:

02:47:237 (1) - In the last timing section, It'd be a nice touch if you lowered the audio of the hitsounds to 5%.

Please be careful with muting hitsounds with 5%, and there is information, that is some cases it's unrankable.

[Hard]
00:52:799 (1) - Why no clap at the end and instead, there is a finish? Maybe remove finish or just add clap because of previous hitsound pattern?
00:53:941 (3) - ^
00:57:942 (2) - missing clap
That made for hitsounds variation not just for booring clap-clap-clap-clap-clap
If you'll try to play few times you'll feel that they fits fine for music.

01:59:095 - maybe put this timing section to 01:57:381 so you can use "normal" claps on 01:57:381 (1,2,3)? Sounds better imo.
+

02:08:238 - after this point, there is no new timing sections which switch N/S and since you are using only S here, "finishes" - "whistles" - "finishes" isn't sound as epic as it was in 1st chrorus.
Nice notice, even if i don't want to copy hitsounds pattern from start i'll check this moment.

Mod is completed.

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^

General
- I'm assuming you're gonna make another diff Nop
- For the skin, don't you think the clear notes will be hard to see? Cool skin though mb a little, idk
- Your BG is over 1 MB, reconpress it please (unless you want me to do it) updated

Yli's Normal
00:51:657 (2) - Curve it upwards instead http://puu.sh/tabs (lol the url name)
01:01:943 (1) - Spacing a little off, use distance snap
01:48:238 (1) - Curve it the other way so the next three notes don't touch the edge
02:20:238 (2,4) - Claps on the beginnings
Nice slider art

Hard
00:23:085 (7) - Finish is a bit loud, keep the whistle only finish 60% -> 35%
01:53:381 (2) - Ctrl + R +
02:09:952 (5) - ^, for flow +
02:12:524 - Add note, maybe stack on (7) or the tail of the slider +
02:08:238 - Use Normal Sample Set for the rest of the song, more powerful 2nd req, eh i'll try
Nice symmetry

Good luck!! Thanks

-Bakari- wrote:

Хэй, вечар добры \:D/



[Colours]
Combo1 : 197,183,198
Combo2 : 111,137,151
Combo3 : 227,196,98
Combo4 : 153,120,100
просто попробуй их ><
No, thanks.

[Genaral]
с красными точками намудрили -_- это ТикКлик затаймил, вроде нормально.
киаи одинаковыми надо бы сделать

[Hard]
00:17:953 (3) - flip vertical и верни там, где был. получится миленько ух, попробую
00:24:228 (2,4) - стакнуть их? +
00:43:371 (8) - анти джамп. в центр этой "звездочки" +
01:41:371 (1) - давай ка замени на серклы +
01:42:514 (3) - немного не следует ритму? вроде нормально
01:52:809 (1,2) - а нельзя ли сделать их прямо обводящими (3) чтоб аккуратненько обводку :3 можно попробовать
02:07:952 (1,2) - симметрию мб? ага
02:49:952 - тут у спиннера звук как-то меняется. >< софт специально

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

gl~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Star!

selymsivad wrote:

My mod isn't much, but I hope it helps
Sky is over - [Normal]

01:01:943 (1) - Remove New Combo Done
02:11:953 (1) - Remove New Combo Disaggree
02:13:381 (1) - Remove New Combo ^
02:25:667 (1) - Remove New Combo Done
02:39:381 (1) - Remove New Combo Done
02:47:238 (1) - Again, like in hard, you might find it a nice effect to lower the volume of the last hitsound to 5%. Weill, it's already 20%, and I think it's not necessary to lower it to 5%, because there's a sound at the end.

LunarSakuya wrote:

Yli's Normal
00:51:657 (2) - Curve it upwards instead http://puu.sh/tabs (lol the url name) Disaggree
01:01:943 (1) - Spacing a little off, use distance snap Oh, that was because of decreasing from 1,25 to 1,0 --> Fixed
01:48:238 (1) - Curve it the other way so the next three notes don't touch the edge Done
02:20:238 (2,4) - Claps on the beginnings Done
Nice slider art Thanks =)

-Bakari- wrote:

[Normal]
01:30:514 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - a bit hard to read >< Left it for the moment. If more point it out, I'll maybe change it
01:39:943 (3,1,2) - don't cross but stack? :3 I prefer cross
01:45:657 (1,2,1) - mhm.. try remove nc from 01:45:657 and from 01:48:238 (1) / NC should be here 01:47:667 (2) Done
02:10:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - slider and circles! crossing here >, bakari can't read it >< Same as 01:30:514 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1)
02:40:238 (1,3) - they are cute. but i believe you can use red points to make this sliders easier I want them that way
02:44:810 (1) - is it heart? Well, the first three red points are because of the drum. And because I love symmetry, it looks kinda like a heart, but it's not supposed to be one

1. Очисти поле Source, альбом уже есть в тэгах.

1. 00:25:371 (5) - add finish
2. 00:32:228 (1) - finish fits here too, in my opinion
3. 00:48:228 (1) - ^
4. 00:50:514 (1) - forgot whistle at beginning
5. 00:52:800 (1) - add finish to beginning
6. 00:57:371 (1) - ^
7. 00:59:657 (1,3) - why don't you add whistles here?
8. 01:01:943 (5) - add finish from soft sampleset
9. 01:21:371 (1) - you can easily remove NC from here without losing anything
10. 01:23:657 (1) - ^
11. 01:24:800 (1) - it lacks finish on beginning
12. 01:27:086 (1) - ^
13. 01:31:657 (1,2,1,2,1) - it's kinda boring to see the same pattern, even if it's mirrored. What about re-mapping these sliders? Also, too many NCs, in my opinion; I'd remove every second one
14. 01:38:800 (2,3) - the top slider overlaps almost a half of bottom one's beginning. I recommend you to change it somehow, the same goes about next two pairs of sliders
15. 02:01:953 (1,2) - these two notes aren't really comfortable for me, because voice here requires a slider. Think about re-mapping this piece of symmetry into slider + two notes + slider
16. 02:03:667 (1) - don't know if it's a good idea to put finish on beginning
17. 02:08:238 (1) - add finish here, please, and don't forget to add it at 02:10:524 (1) and some other notes on kiai
18. 02:15:381 (1,3) - I'd prefer to re-map it a little and hear claps here
19. 02:24:238 (1) - again; don't lose finishes please
20. 02:47:238 (1) - I advice you to make it two times shorter. If you still disagree, use soft sampleset at very last section to avoid that sound (it interrupts silence and calm end)

1. 00:25:371 (4) - финиш на начало, новое комбо
2. 00:34:514 (1) - финиш на начало вместо свистка. Кроме этого, свистков подряд слишком много. Не надо их спамить, распределяй звуки равномерно, а то у тебя в одном месте их куча, а в другом — просто пустые ноты без озвучки
3. 00:41:371 - начиная отсюда, звук слишком громкий. Убавь везде на 15-20%, бьёт по ушам, особенно на киае во время хлопков
4. 00:52:799 (1,3) - убери финиши с концов и добавь хлопки
5. 00:57:942 (2) - куда дел хлопок?
6. 00:59:657 (2) - добавь хлопок в середину. Чтобы это сделать, выбери слайдер на шкале времени и выдели серединку
7. 01:01:942 (7) - поставь тут секцию с (S), мне кажется, лучше звучит
8. 01:22:514 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - слишком много свистков, опять слишком много свистков. Опять же, дальше громкий звук, урежь его
9. 01:30:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - убери лишние свистки, предыдущий кусок звучит лучше, красивее этого; ещё лучше, если ты будешь чередовать тот паттерн, что у тебя перед этим (пусто, свисток, пусто, пусто, свисток, пусто, финиш), с похожим (свисток на четвёртую ноту)
10. 01:38:514 - слишком громко после относительно тихой части. -15%
11. 01:47:667 (5) - киай закончи прямо здесь, на красной полоске. Выбери её в меню тайминга и сними галочку, как с зелёной
12. 01:52:809 (1,2) - небольшая мелочь: концы у них находятся не в одной точке. Исправь, пожалуйста, если не лень
13. 02:01:667 (1) - я бы его начал с 02:03:666 (до этого лучше нот добавить, спиннер там на голосе не подходит) и закончил на следующем белом тике
14. 02:07:952 (1) - не люблю такие моменты, когда «пропускается» начало киая или большой белый тик. Как будто ничего не делаешь
15. 02:07:952 (1,2,3,4,5) - я бы финиш делал не на последней четвертинке, а на третей, т.е. пусто, хлопок, финиш, хлопок. Подумай об этом
16. 02:10:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - куда хлопки дел? Ритм лучше всего держать постоянным, не мотаться туда-сюда и не пропускать ожидаемых звуков
17. 02:16:380 (6) - если будешь возвращать хлопки, добавь сюда один. Хороший эффект получается
18. 02:24:237 (1) - финиш на начало, т.к. новая часть музыки
19. 02:34:809 (4,1) - понизь спейсинг до нуля, отключи сетку и положи эти ноты ровно под концы слайдеров
20. 02:40:238 - пожалуй, тут можно подыграть треку и поставить хлопки сюда: 02:40:237 (1,4,3,1,4,3)
21. 02:47:237 (1) - я бы укоротил его вдвое

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server. Nah, that decrease size by 0.000001 kb what a point to do this?
Timing points and Kiai Time is inconsistent across both diffs. Yep, but this is not a big deal, since middle part on hard deserves kiai.
I have offset (+12) of yours, where the first one is 255. Idk, i'll check. But I believe timing is ok.

Good luck :3

TicClick wrote:

Ok, here's my normal mod:

General

1. Очисти поле Source, альбом уже есть в тэгах.

Ага все время вспоминал про это после апдейтов.

Просмотрел мод впал в депрессию, все мои задумки с хитсаундами так ужасны на самом деле? Нахуй все, на кладбище!
Hard

1. 00:25:371 (4) - финиш на начало, новое комбо +
2. 00:34:514 (1) - финиш на начало вместо свистка. Кроме этого, свистков подряд слишком много. Не надо их спамить, распределяй звуки равномерно, а то у тебя в одном месте их куча, а в другом — просто пустые ноты без озвучки
   + Переделал паттерн для слайдеров, поставил (- систок - свисток) на все 3 комбо, вроде звучит мило
3. 00:41:371 - начиная отсюда, звук слишком громкий. Убавь везде на 15-20%, бьёт по ушам, особенно на киае во время хлопков
   окей
4. 00:52:799 (1,3) - убери финиши с концов и добавь хлопки +
   
5. 00:57:942 (2) - куда дел хлопок?
6. 00:59:657 (2) - добавь хлопок в середину. Чтобы это сделать, выбери слайдер на шкале времени и выдели серединку
   Ну типо чтоб было не однообразно, а втопку добавил оба
   
7. 01:01:942 (7) - поставь тут секцию с (S), мне кажется, лучше звучит
   надо что-ли тарелку кастомную поискать, просто мне кажется, что с софтом тарелка тут со слишком коротким звуком как-то так
   
8. 01:22:514 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - слишком много свистков, опять слишком много свистков. Опять же, дальше громкий звук, урежь его +
9. 01:30:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - убери лишние свистки, предыдущий кусок звучит лучше, красивее этого; ещё лучше, если ты будешь чередовать тот паттерн, что у тебя перед этим (пусто, свисток, пусто, пусто, свисток, пусто, финиш), с похожим (свисток на четвёртую ноту)
   Переделал
10. 01:38:514 - слишком громко после относительно тихой части. -15%
    +
11. 01:47:667 (5) - киай закончи прямо здесь, на красной полоске. Выбери её в меню тайминга и сними галочку, как с зелёной
    он вроде и заканчивается на красной
12. 01:52:809 (1,2) - небольшая мелочь: концы у них находятся не в одной точке. Исправь, пожалуйста, если не лень
    Не лень, но у меня не получается
13. 02:01:667 (1) - я бы его начал с 02:03:666 (до этого лучше нот добавить, спиннер там на голосе не подходит) и закончил на следующем белом тике
    Да можно, попробую так сделать.
14. 02:07:952 (1) - не люблю такие моменты, когда «пропускается» начало киая или большой белый тик. Как будто ничего не делаешь
    Попробую починить это.
    
15. 02:07:952 (1,2,3,4,5) - я бы финиш делал не на последней четвертинке, а на третей, т.е. пусто, хлопок, финиш, хлопок. Подумай об этом
16. 02:10:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - куда хлопки дел? Ритм лучше всего держать постоянным, не мотаться туда-сюда и не пропускать ожидаемых звуков
17. 02:16:380 (6) - если будешь возвращать хлопки, добавь сюда один. Хороший эффект получается
18. 02:24:237 (1) - финиш на начало, т.к. новая часть музыки
    Переделал хитсаунды во 2й части
    
19. 02:34:809 (4,1) - понизь спейсинг до нуля, отключи сетку и положи эти ноты ровно под концы слайдеров
    Вроде это запрещено, стек должен быть виден.
    
20. 02:40:238 - пожалуй, тут можно подыграть треку и поставить хлопки сюда: 02:40:237 (1,4,3,1,4,3)
    +
21. 02:47:237 (1) - я бы укоротил его вдвое мне тут подлиннее нравится

S i e g wrote:

1. 02:34:809 (4,1) - понизь спейсинг до нуля, отключи сетку и положи эти ноты ровно под концы слайдеров
   Вроде это запрещено, стек должен быть виден.

Zelvis wrote:

Инс тут не нужен.

Zelvis wrote:

Привет.Решил посмотреть хард :
00:49:942 (7) - имхо следует добавить еще одну нотку после этой , тобишь http://puu.sh/tCWl
ага, можно
01:51:524 (4,5,6,7) - не очень хорошо выглядит , да и хреново играется (http://puu.sh/tCXw может так?)
не вижу разницы, но почему бы и нет
02:01:667 (1) - до белого тика продлить бы.
Ага, это место я уже изменил, просто жду пока проверят нормал прежде чем обновлять.
Все что увидел.Удачи с картой , хочется отметить верный выбор дифф , инс тут не нужен.Спасибо.

TicClick wrote:

S i e g wrote:

1. 02:34:809 (4,1) - понизь спейсинг до нуля, отключи сетку и положи эти ноты ровно под концы слайдеров
   Вроде это запрещено, стек должен быть виден.

Он и будет виден, проверь сам в тестмоде, стек создаётся автоматически. Впрочем, ты можешь не трогать эти ноты, поскольку они всего лишь чуть-чуть выпали из-под слайдеров. Запрещено выкручивать в настройках карты Stack Leniency в ноль, тогда стопочек не будет.
А я значит не так просто понял тебя, все окей.

Хитсаунды твои не ужасны, просто тебе нужно расставлять их.. не знаю, чуть постабильней, что ли, и не забывать про громкость. Резкие изменения всегда отпугивают, а сам я свои первые карты тоже не ахти ХСил.
Дак вот, боюсь от стабильности перейти к однообразности.

Zelvis wrote:

Инс тут не нужен.

Да, но может возникнуть другая проблема, слишком большой прыжок по сложности с нормала на хард; точней, она уже возникла. А теперь бегом на основу, или пацаны за мод засмеют?
Эм, вроде даже мой раковый скил позволяет одним пальцем хард проходить.

S i e g wrote:

Эм, вроде даже мой скил позволяет одним пальцем хард проходить.

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Finally I can mod it..


[Hard]
01:42:514 (6) - I would remove Whistle from the Slider. But hold the Whistle at the End and Start Point. It sounds stronger that way.
02:05:952 - Reduce the Volume from the Inherited Point to 50%. +
02:38:809 (3) - I personally don't like the Finish at the End Point. It feels odd to hear at this moment. Yep, indeed

Dammit, moar Stars for it. o3o

Maddy wrote:

Wow never expected to find this beautiful song
Map too

iMercurial wrote:

Random Mod 'cuz I want to.
Nice

Inconsistency on Kiai times: http://puu.sh/tYxk
That ok, from current ranking rules

Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.

Inconsistency on Timing Red Timing Sections: http://puu.sh/tYyf
Oh, i belive i fix this long ago, thats strange.

Nice map

iMercurial wrote:

Normal

00:41:371 (1,2,3,4) Maybe you could add more space between that circles and sliders, Like that: http://puu.sh/tYAg. No, I never ignore Distance Snap on Normal
01:38:799 (2,3) Like this http://puu.sh/tYBC Same
01:41:085 (1,2) Like this http://puu.sh/tYBZ Same
I'm totally against the little space between the next note... but I dunno, it's your map, not mine.

[general]

1. osb. should be removed ?

[Yli's Normal]

1. 00:19:076 (3) - NC?
2. 00:23:657 (2) - ^
3. 00:29:657 (4) - ^
4. 00:55:086 (5) - ^
5. 01:45:657 (3) - get 2nd point on x:192 y:52
6. 01:54:524 (4) - NC
7. 02:11:953 (1,3) - (1) remove NC and (3) NC
8. 02:17:381 (4) - NC
9. 02:42:524 (3) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:45:371 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
2. 01:30:514 (7,7,7,7,7,7,7) - NC ?

l1106188 wrote:

Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

[Hard]

1. 00:45:371 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC No. Combo follows jumps\spacing here.
2. 01:30:514 (7,7,7,7,7,7,7) - NC ? I dont see why there should be new combos.

Fenya wrote:

General:
I think you should make a Easy o.o Difficulty spread is fine.
One question... Why have so many BPM? For better timing.
The circles are very dark, sometimes not seen. Dx

Hard:
Many Sliderticks unsnapped eh?
02:40:237 (1,2,3,4) - Not have same distance jumps
02:41:380 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:42:523 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:43:666 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Leorda wrote:

[General]
* For all diff, you have to map the part at 01:11:085. So far the break space is too long. Also, I think this part is mappable, I think It may be mappable, but it's still hard to map it, because the voice isn't following a constant rhythm. Aditionally I asked some other MATs/BATs, and they all said the length is okay.

[Yli's Normal]
02:02:524 (3) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, could be hidden for beginners who play this diff while gameplay http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/316211 Flipped 02:01:953 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - vertically and replaced 02:07:096 (3,4) - because of spacing

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO
Hi Hi

[General]
* [Hard] is too hard for hard diff. You need to make another hard diff. So it makes a good difficulty spread
Ok. Middle stream cropped to 1\2, although I don't agree with this. I'll wait for more mods before taking action on this.
* For all diff, you have to map the part at 01:11:085. So far the break space is too long. Also, I think this part is mappable,
^
I think * Invisible hitcircleoverlay.png is UNRANKABLE
Invisible hitcircleoverlay.png or invisible center part of hitcircle.png?

S i e g wrote:

Charles445 wrote:

[Quick Overview]

Overview by request, no KD needed.
np

[General]
The skin is very interesting, but it needs to have the boundaries of the circles clear. Otherwise the player doesn't know exactly where to hit. Also the center shouldn't be completely transparent - it should reflect the color of the object a little.
skin updated

[Hard]
Beat gets very repetitive with so much 1/2. The difficulty could use more interesting elements like more streams (especially the piano part, playing that all 1/2 felt strange). The spacing is awkward as well, varying from very close together to all the way across the map (this is frustrating to play)
1\4 in the piano part are back.
Spacing.


Mapset has potential, but the skin needs to be more understandable and the Hard needs to be made more interesting / less repetitive.

Thanks for quick overview! \\ updated

1. Break in this diff. is way too long, it's even inconsistent to normal, at least make them the same, ends break when 01:17:942
2. 01:20:228 (1) - Slider start, remove finish better imo, there's no such feeling in background music
3. 01:22:514 (1) - Slider start, add finish here would be better
4. 01:24:799 (1) -
5. 01:47:667 (5) - (nazi) 1 grid right, it's not in a row with 01:47:371 (4)
6. 01:48:238 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest use normal hitsound to those notes, if you want keeping soft hitsound, at least add whistle sound to 01:48:238 (1,2,3) - that fit music more
7. 01:52:809 (1,2,3,4) - ^
8. 02:07:666 (x) - Start normal hitsound here
9. 02:19:666 (1) - Add finish here (slider head)
10. 02:24:237 (1) - ^
11. 02:28:809 (1) - ^
12. 02:27:666 (4) - Seems no need add finish here
13. 02:29:952 (4) - ^
14. 02:31:095 (1) - Slider head, remove clap seems better, why add clap here?
15. 02:33:381 (1) - Slider head, add finish would be nice
16. 02:34:238 (3) - Slider end, idk why you like add finish in the middle of a bar, that sounds weird for me, remove this would be better. Generally, finish sound should at the beginning or end of a bar :/
17. 02:36:809 (1) - ^
18. 02:37:952 (1) - Add finish
19. 02:40:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The clap you used here seems ruleless, maybe you can try 2-4 clap, which mean add clap at 2nd and 4th white line in a bar (Count from the long white line, there are 4 white lines in a bar)

1. 02:07:667 (4) - How about use normal hitsound to this note?
2. 02:19:667 (1) - Add finish
3. 02:37:953 (1) - ^
4. 02:40:238 (1) - ^
   pretty sliders <3

Breeze wrote:

[Hard]

+all exept

Half of break time is mapped so it seems more sense in this finish now.
01:20:228 (1) - Slider start, remove finish better imo, there's no such feeling in background music

idk, yep they not follow standart, but sounds so cute as for me.
02:40:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The clap you used here seems ruleless, maybe you can try 2-4 clap, which mean add clap at 2nd and 4th white line in a bar (Count from the long white line, there are 4 white lines in a bar)[/list]

nice song and also nice skin, map itself is fine though, I'm hoping it has more strong sound effect like finish and whistle in hard diff., that would make your map more perfect!

Thanks.

BonkuraChan wrote:

Star

Breeze wrote:

A quick recheck here, no need to kudos this post

[Hard]

About the break part you mapped, I think it's not a good idea to map this part with following lyric, follow drum sound or create your own rhythm would be better

I'd to say I love this song, star for you

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 02:07:667 (4) - How about use normal hitsound to this note? Done
2. 02:19:667 (1) - Add finish Done
3. 02:37:953 (1) - ^ Done
4. 02:40:238 (1) - ^ Done
   pretty sliders <3 Thanks =)

Wiinter wrote:

starring it cuz the song is awesome <3 (and I really like the map and skin~)

Thank you.

ErufenRito wrote:

Hello

[General:]

Love the skin, although the lack of combo numbers did disappoint, consider adding something of this style http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/318165
Yep, nice style for combo numbers but eh... people so often whine they didn't see a thing. Anyway I'll try to find something suitable.

[Hard:]

01:38:514 (1) - Should end at 01:38:799, if you do this, also add a circle at 01:38:942 - and 01:39:085 -
01:39:657 (7) - End it at 01:39:942 - and then add a circle at 01:40:085 -
01:40:800 (5) - Same as above
02:39:381 (4) - Please, end it at 02:39:666 - and then add another beat at 02:39:952 -
+all. Why not?

Nice song choice, and the map is good too, nothing really wrong to fix

Thanks.
ps I love your maps.

Crok425 wrote:

Sorry, man. The map is way to good to mod, so to compensate, I'll give the map a star.

1. What a beautiful skin; very fitting for the map.
2. According to wiki, this song is alternative rock and progressive metal specifically. Do what you will, but I suggest you at least tag metal since you already have rock tagged.
3. I see you tagged system. If you're going to do this, also tag: of a down and SOAD.
4. You must include a difficulty under 3 stars. Without this, your map is currently unrankable, so please include an easy diff.
5. Other than that, the song folder looks clear~

1. Nice use of slider art and symmetry; it really fits the music!
2. Usually the whistle hitsound is horrifying to hear, but it's used very pleasantly here~
3. What a splendid difficulty to play! It's fun and creative, and I can't mod it at all.

1. 01:29:657 - The accents in these next few streams would play awesome with jumps, considering this is the hardest difficulty in the mapset. For example, stacking (7) under (1) of the next stream might be fun in the first 3 [line] streams, and last 3.
2. 01:38:514 (1) - What you did in this whole lalala part was great.

S i e g wrote:

SPOILER

Haruka wrote:

What an interesting choice of song to map; Serj's work both solo and with System of a Down is just amazing.
I'm here on behalf of this queue. Makar and I swapped a mod each due to problems, so I hope I'll suffice!

[General]

1. What a beautiful skin; very fitting for the map.
2. According to wiki, this song is alternative rock and progressive metal specifically. Do what you will, but I suggest you at least tag metal since you already have rock tagged.
3. I see you tagged system. If you're going to do this, also tag: of a down and SOAD.
4. You must include a difficulty under 3 stars. Without this, your map is currently unrankable, so please include an easy diff.
5. Other than that, the song folder looks clear~

[Yli's Normal]

1. Nice use of slider art and symmetry; it really fits the music!
2. Usually the whistle hitsound is horrifying to hear, but it's used very pleasantly here~
3. What a splendid difficulty to play! It's fun and creative, and I can't mod it at all.

[Hard]

1. 01:29:657 - The accents in these next few streams would play awesome with jumps, considering this is the hardest difficulty in the mapset. For example, stacking (7) under (1) of the next stream might be fun in the first 3 [line] streams, and last 3.
2. 01:38:514 (1) - What you did in this whole lalala part was great.

Very fun and cleverly composed mapset; seems close to bubbling, so goodluck on your ventures!
Also, sorry this mod wasn't very helpful. I would like to earn my kd if you feel I don't deserve it by looking at that easy when you're done~

I'll fix general things with tags. Thanks. As for 3 stats, normal is 3 stars.

1. 00:16:774 (1,3) - Add whistle sounds great imo, or here sounds empty
2. 00:19:076 (1,4) - ^
3. 00:27:942 (2,4) - ^
4. 00:32:799 (1) - Slider end, ^
5. 00:33:942 (5) - ^
   The break part you remaped looked nice now

Breeze wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:16:774 (1,3) - Add whistle sounds great imo, or here sounds empty
2. 00:19:076 (1,4) - ^
3. 00:27:942 (2,4) - ^
4. 00:32:799 (1) - Slider end, ^
5. 00:33:942 (5) - ^
   Yep you rights, +whistles.
   The break part you remaped looked nice now Thanks

fabriciorby wrote:

[general]
Really nice map and song, Serj is really awesome!

SPOILER

[normal]
02:47:238 (1) - Maybe it can ends with a soft timing section?
02:05:953 (1) - Soft timing section here?

[hard]
00:24:228 (2) - whistle
00:26:514 (3,4) - remove whistle
00:27:085 (5) - add whistle?
01:28:228 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+<?
02:03:666 (1) - normal timing section maybe
02:05:952 (1) - whistle
02:06:524 (2) - whistle
02:07:095 (4) - ^
02:07:381 (5) - ^
02:41:380 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl + >
02:42:523 (1,2,3,4) - if ^, ctrl + >

that's it haha

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, from Queue

SPOILER

Yli's Normal:

00:36:799 (1): Unnecesary NC imo, remove it.

Hard:

00:24:228 (2): This ?
00:45:371 (1): Remove NC.
00:45:942 (2): NC.
01:13:371 (4): Add Finish?
01:14:514 (1): Finish at the end of slider.
01:42:514 (6): Remove Whistle at the body and in repeat.
02:36:809 (1): Remove NC.

That's all for me. Awesome map, take a star and good luck!

LKs wrote:

DLed and played your map, sadly your map doesn't meet my criteria, but the skin is really great.

Have a star and a star icon

btw: may I use your skin elements on my map? Like your hitcircle and sliderball design

1. As Normal diff uses too much 1/2 rhythm, you are better to do an Easy diff (or to make Normal more easier). It looks like Hard- or Normal+. And you have just one diff for newbies.
2. And why normal has tick rate 2, while hard has 1?

1. Again, as I said in General, you used too many 1/2 rhythms for Normal. Please, try to make it easier to look like 'Normal-easiest diff'
2. 00:16:774 - 00:25:371 - decrease the volume (~40%)
3. 00:23:657 (2) - I would better put an new combo after such a beautiful symmetrical slider
4. 00:32:228 (1) - finish here as you have one on 00:27:657 (4) -
5. 01:17:943 (1,2,3,4) - make a square
6. 01:20:228 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too much 1/2. Try this (look at the time panel):
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:33:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - again, too much 1/2. Maybe continue 01:29:371 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern?
8. 01:38:514 - why there is no kiai as in Hard :<
9. 01:38:800 (2,3) - I don't like in what way (2) overlaps the beginning of (3). Do this:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:41:086 (1,2) - ^
11. 01:43:371 (1,2) - ^
12. 02:01:953 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1/2 yeah. 02:02:238 (2) - at least remove it
13. 02:05:953 (1,2,3,4) - use soft hitsound
14. 02:10:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whyyyy too much 1/2? :С try to use 02:15:381 (1,2,3) - this rhythm, it's easy and cool.
15. 02:37:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    
    Good diff, but little hard. Remove some 1/2 rhythms and it will be ok!

1. 00:16:774 - 00:25:371 - decrease the volume (~40%)
2. 00:52:799 (1) - finish here, as 00:48:228 (1) -
3. 00:55:085 (1) - ^ as 00:50:514 (1) -
4. 00:57:371 (1) - ^
5. 00:59:657 (2) - ^
6. 01:30:514 (7) - maybe make kiai on every such note? o3o (01:31:657 (7) - 01:32:800 (7) - 01:33:942 (7) - 01:35:085 (7) - 01:36:228 (7) - 01:37:371 (7) - )
7. 02:12:809 (1) - remove clap
   
   SO AWESOME MAP!

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello.
Hallo.

General

1. As Normal diff uses too much 1/2 rhythm, you are better to do an Easy diff (or to make Normal more easier). It looks like Hard- or Normal+. And you have just one diff for newbies. Idk but imo normal is pretty easy.
2. And why normal has tick rate 2, while hard has 1? It's maybe little strange but 2 tr prefectly fits to normal and no-good for hard as for me lol.

Hard

1. 00:16:774 - 00:25:371 - decrease the volume (~40%) +
2. 00:52:799 (1) - finish here, as 00:48:228 (1) - +
3. 00:55:085 (1) - ^ as 00:50:514 (1) - +
4. 00:57:371 (1) - ^ +
5. 00:59:657 (2) - ^ +
6. 01:30:514 (7) - maybe make kiai on every such note? o3o (01:31:657 (7) - 01:32:800 (7) - 01:33:942 (7) - 01:35:085 (7) - 01:36:228 (7) - 01:37:371 (7) - ) Imo fountains is not cute enough to use them so often.
7. 02:12:809 (1) - remove clap I like this clap.
   
   SO AWESOME MAP!

Serj Tankian <3
I love this, good luck >w<

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Normal

1. Again, as I said in General, you used too many 1/2 rhythms for Normal. Please, try to make it easier to look like 'Normal-easiest diff'
2. 00:16:774 - 00:25:371 - decrease the volume (~40%) Done
3. 00:23:657 (2) - I would better put an new combo after such a beautiful symmetrical slider Done
4. 00:32:228 (1) - finish here as you have one on 00:27:657 (4) - Done
5. 01:17:943 (1,2,3,4) - make a square Disaggree
6. 01:20:228 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too much 1/2. Try this (look at the time panel):
   
   SPOILER

   
   I don't think there are too many 1/2
7. 01:33:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - again, too much 1/2. Maybe continue 01:29:371 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern? Same
8. 01:38:514 - why there is no kiai as in Hard :< Because I don't see a Kiai here.
9. 01:38:800 (2,3) - I don't like in what way (2) overlaps the beginning of (3). Do this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   But I do --> no changes
10. 01:41:086 (1,2) - ^ ^
11. 01:43:371 (1,2) - ^ ^
12. 02:01:953 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1/2 yeah. 02:02:238 (2) - at least remove it Disaggree
13. 02:05:953 (1,2,3,4) - use soft hitsound There used to be Soft sampleset O.o Reput
14. 02:10:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whyyyy too much 1/2? :С try to use 02:15:381 (1,2,3) - this rhythm, it's easy and cool. Disaggree
15. 02:37:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
    
    Good diff, but little hard. Remove some 1/2 rhythms and it will be ok! I don't think it is that hard. Additional Osu says it is Star Rating 3,02, so it shall be okay.

CDFA wrote:

Normal:
00:59:657 (1,2,3,4,5) - The star is a bit unsymmetrical. I'm guessing it has something to do with 4 and 5. This is how it looks atm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326255
Well, it wasn't supposed to be a star, but fixed it anyway

CDFA wrote:

Time for some kawaii.

Overall
00:16:774 - The red sections here aren't neccesary! The song is straight 4/4, and there's no BPM change or anything.
I left this for now as it is.

Hurd:
01:52:095 (8) - Just make these into 2 notes I like this slider.
01:56:667 (8) - ^ same^
02:47:238 (1) - Add whistle? +

It definatley has gotten better since the last time I've modded it.

1. There's a lot of 1/1 single notes in this diff that are kind of boring like 00:34:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:20:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm sure you can do something more creative with these ^_^

Shulin wrote:

All suggestions based on playing your map ~
Yli's Normal:

00:41:382 (1) - Remove normal whistle from the end? It think the whistle fits here
00:42:525 (3) - ^ ^
00:45:954 (1) - Whistle the whole slider except the end, like 00:50:525 (1) - Done
00:47:097 (2) - Remove whistle, it sounds odd imo. Done
00:51:668 (2) - ^ ^
01:49:954 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
02:11:097 (3,4,1,2) - Overlap is kind of confusing imo, I think it'd play better spaced out more. Also the combo pattern here is strange compared to the rest of this section. Changed
02:21:954 (1) - Remove new combo. Done

Sieg wrote:

updated

edit:

Because of no further improvement and lack of mapping skill (I lost interest in this), map is officially dropped. Sorry.

Sieg wrote:

I don't feel I can finish this beatmap now, maybe later.

-Bakari- wrote:

:lol: так. речек.

[General]
киаи разные. это так и надо, да?
на начало ставь нормал секции, но очень тихии. так вроде лучше звучит. Софт там никак.

[Easy]
после какого-то одного спиннера, нету нового комбо на ноте. Анранк

~~~~~~~~
ну и если не лень, то можешь чекнуть все слайдеры,и все фигуры. хотя вроде они чистые.
у меня просто интернет вылетел, и нормальный модпост вместе с ним.

Собственно все. Надо бы и бабл выбить для карты

не думаю, что за столь "содержательный пост" стоит давать кд

Sieg wrote:

Hi, thanks for hs mod but no changes, these claps you suggested over soft sections and in middle part sounds really awkward.

Cilvery wrote:

[Yli's Normal]
00:24:668 - add whistle Done
00:59:668 - ^ Disaggree
02:07:668 - add clap Done

SakiK wrote:

[Yli's Normal]

fun slider /o/
00:47:097 (2) - add whistel like 00:45:954 (1) - Disaggree
00:51:668 (2) - ^ ^
00:55:097 (5) - NC Disaggree
01:49:954 (6) - ^ ^
01:54:525 (4) - ^ ^
02:17:382 (4) - ^ ^
02:21:954 (5) - ^ ^