Haruka wrote:

What an interesting choice of song to map; Serj's work both solo and with System of a Down is just amazing.
I'm here on behalf of this queue. Makar and I swapped a mod each due to problems, so I hope I'll suffice!

[General]

1. What a beautiful skin; very fitting for the map.
2. According to wiki, this song is alternative rock and progressive metal specifically. Do what you will, but I suggest you at least tag metal since you already have rock tagged.
3. I see you tagged system. If you're going to do this, also tag: of a down and SOAD.
4. You must include a difficulty under 3 stars. Without this, your map is currently unrankable, so please include an easy diff.
5. Other than that, the song folder looks clear~

[Yli's Normal]

1. Nice use of slider art and symmetry; it really fits the music!
2. Usually the whistle hitsound is horrifying to hear, but it's used very pleasantly here~
3. What a splendid difficulty to play! It's fun and creative, and I can't mod it at all.

[Hard]

1. 01:29:657 - The accents in these next few streams would play awesome with jumps, considering this is the hardest difficulty in the mapset. For example, stacking (7) under (1) of the next stream might be fun in the first 3 [line] streams, and last 3.
2. 01:38:514 (1) - What you did in this whole lalala part was great.

Very fun and cleverly composed mapset; seems close to bubbling, so goodluck on your ventures!
Also, sorry this mod wasn't very helpful. I would like to earn my kd if you feel I don't deserve it by looking at that easy when you're done~

spboxer3 wrote:

:idea: general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. the easiest diff is 3.02 stars. It's potential unrankable issue. you should avoid it. This is not a problem, I asked BAT already.

Hard

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. unused green line (It's not effect to player. but I suggest you should to remove it):
   02:03:666 Oh, yep, removed

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 00:21:657 (2,3,5,6) - sound like use soft-normal and 00:22:228 (4) - add whistle is better.
2. 02:27:666 (4) - inconsistency hitsound for previous part. finish at slider head and remove slider end's finish.
3. 02:36:809 (4) - same as 02:27:666 (4) -
   I don't feel like I want to change hitsounds, thanks for suggestions!

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. no place to criticize.

red is unrankable issue. bule is recommended to fix. Black is just suggestion.

good luck~ star!!

Midasmens wrote:

Hi~ Midas here....
Request from my queue

General
Nothing~ lol

Yli's Normal
Nice Slider..... :3
And I can't find anything...Good map!!!

Hard
01:09:371 (7) - up 1 grid
01:10:799 (3) - right 1 grid

OK~~Your map is so good and I try my best to find something Hope I can help you...
Sky is over~~
٩(๑´･ᴗ･`๑)۶

Shulin wrote:

All suggestions based on playing your map ~

Easy:

1. There's a lot of 1/1 single notes in this diff that are kind of boring like 00:34:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:20:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm sure you can do something more creative with these ^_^Oh, that easy diff btw

00:29:382 (2) - I'm pretty sure this will be really confusing for a new player. The ticks don't show where the slider goes and it overlaps on itself. I'd recommend using a different shape. I don't feel problem with this.
02:44:811 (1) - This slider shape is will probably be confusing for new players, especially at this SV. Use a different shape? I don't feel problem with this.

Yli's Normal:

00:41:382 (1) - Remove normal whistle from the end?
00:42:525 (3) - ^
00:45:954 (1) - Whistle the whole slider except the end, like 00:50:525 (1) -
00:47:097 (2) - Remove whistle, it sounds odd imo.
00:51:668 (2) - ^
01:49:954 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:097 (3,4,1,2) - Overlap is kind of confusing imo, I think it'd play better spaced out more. Also the combo pattern here is strange compared to the rest of this section.
02:21:954 (1) - Remove new combo.

Hard:

00:20:811 (5) - Finish? +
00:21:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too much whistle. Remove whistle from the red ticks? +
00:55:097 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't understand why the spacing slows down here. This part could do with some jumps or patterns similar to the previous section to make it more fun. Thats hard not insane so i decide to add not so much jumps
01:06:525 (1) - to 01:17:668 (4) - Have you considered using custom hitsounds here so you can combine normal hit and soft whistle? Right now the change between normal and soft hitsounds seems strange because you can clearly hear the drum in the background. Yep, i like how this part sounds.
01:17:954 (1) - Move this down about 5 squares (grid 4). It feels too close to 01:17:668 (4) - right now. +
01:45:382 (5,6,7) - Why not use the same rhythm as 01:38:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here? It will make a better ending for this section imo. I want to end this sections that way.
02:02:811 - Note? +
02:03:382 - ^ +
02:44:811 (1) - Ticks sound too loud! Around 50-60% volume sounds good imo. +

Good luck!

Cilvery wrote:

Hi~ <request from my queue>

[Easy]
00:48:239 - add finish +

00:58:525 - ^ +

02:07:668 - add clap That sounds strange for me.

02:33:382 - add finish +

02:51:668 - volume: 5% 5% unrankable

[Hard]
02:07:668 - add clap same as easy

02:51:668 - volume: 5% same as easy
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good map XD

little a hitsound mod!

good luck~

RusselG wrote:

Hi!

[Hard]
00:27:097 (5) - make this a clap
00:33:954 (5) - ^
00:50:240 (8) - ^
00:54:811 (4) - ^
01:19:668 (2) - make this a finish
01:29:382 (1) - make this a clap
01:30:525 (7) - make this finish+clap
01:31:668 (7) - ^
01:32:811 (7) - ^
01:33:954 (7) - ^
01:35:097 (7) - ^
01:36:240 (7) - ^
01:37:382 (7) - ^

SakiK wrote:

hi~ here my mod from que

nice skin>< cool ! Thanks
[Easy]

00:17:954 (2) - why only here used different DS?should change(same　pattern,01:39:668 (3,4) -here is use 1,0DS) wow, fixed
00:19:097 (1,2,3) - add whistel 1,3 and rm 2. same before 00:16:811 (1,2) - pattern changed in this way (1 - -)(1 - 3)
01:42:525 (1,2) - this stack is confused beginner player leave as it is for now, but noted
02:07:097 (2) - change normal hit sound only slider end, I think more fix to sound +

[Hard]

HP or OD +1 6\5\7\6 seems fine for me

00:59:382 (1) - rm NC and NC 00:59:668 (2) - here +
02:07:382 (5) - slider end,same as Easy +

nice map~ good luck!

Bobo wrote:

Hey there! From my queue ~

[General]

Kiai inconsistancy; In diffs [Easy] and [Hard] there is kiai time from 01:29:382 to 01:29:668.
This is not found in [Normal], please fix this. Oh, it was on not downbeat, how I missed that, fixed.

I like the skin elements :3

[Easy]

01:57:382 (1) - I've been told that most new players tend to let go after the first slider repeat, how about breaking this into 2 seperate sliders to avoid this issue? +
02:33:382 (1) - Same here. +

[Hard]

02:17:668 (2,3,4,5,6) - Could you try tweak this a little bit so that it makes a more regular looking pentagon? Also, I'd stack (7) with (2), in my opinion it looks better. That not a pentagon, just flow. And I think placement is ok.

Really really nice map! You've just won yourself a star.
Good luck getting ranked!

ikari_kyon wrote:

hello

[Hard]

1. 00:25:382 - considereate to switch this timeline to normal soundset, the bass effect of finish will increase the rising up part of the song, also maybe whistle to end of slider (is back to soft soundset) and ↓ I don't feel that's needed.
2. 00:26:239 (2) - no whistle if you added the wistle to end of slider from up
3. 00:27:954 (2) - move the whistle to start of next slider? sounds nice on white tick Yep, but on red this is sounds so sexy.
4. 00:43:097 (7,8) - maybe make a slider instead this 2 circles, to support the guitar on this part, just maybe bum,bum,bum,bum I'll think about this
5. 00:43:668 - other thing to considerate, rise up the volume here to 100% then back to 65% on object (2), also if you like this you can apply to incoming finishes 100 is too loud
6. 00:58:954 (5) - there is non sound on the song that supports this circle, listen to 25% speed you will notice that vocal is just an extention of "li~" from (4) to (6) afford?
7. 01:01:954 - 100% volume? o:
8. 01:07:097 - maybe use a higher volume for soft soundset, since is moar soft, current 45% is pretty silent, try a volume of ~75~80% this apply for incoming soundset changes if you changed it That is idea, player must hear piano here.
9. 01:12:240 (1) - no finish, dont fit to your previous finish pattern Yep, not same pattern but this is no matter cuz finish here fits music.
10. 01:17:954 (1) - hmm, add soft soundset to repeat of this slider + whistle? also back to normal soundset on 01:18:811, for avoit that the tick have a different sound Whistles only on piano notes
11. 01:29:382 (1) - awesome soundset changes incomin, try 80% volume? Idk, this is maybe
12. 01:41:954 (5) - shorten this slider to 01:42:239 and add a circle where this ends originally? for me the streaming ends a bit suddenly, also that long slider may be a rest but as the bpm is low considerate to make it a stream This part is ok for me.
13. 01:42:525 (7) - the whistle on slider body sounds a bid bad, maybe remove it cuz it so long But this sounds so strong, eh.
14. 01:44:240 (4) - ↑
15. 01:45:382 (5) - ↑
16. 01:46:525 (7) - add a whistle to this, to end the whistleing just where that "lalalal~" vocal ends
17. 01:49:954 - normal soundset, part simmilar as previous awesome soundset change
18. 02:07:668 - maybe 60% volume +
19. 02:08:239 - maybe 100% volume and back to previous volume on next object

[Easy]

Maybe reduce AR to 2? its just me, I see that current is pretty fast 2\3\3\2 seems fine to me as a bad player lol

1. 00:29:382 (2) - considerate to change this to a moar simple shape, as beginners are not so experienced to this game, specially this slider, although you have used it on [Hard] and is used on [Yli's Normal], considerate this: the player cant see the arc on this, the slider border are hidden themself on the middle, ther is no hole on the middle, the slider ticks are a bit weird distributed (the slider is perfect but the ticks may counfuse some newbie players) just a considerate, no need to change Yep, but tick rate is so slow.
2. 00:54:525 (2) - avoid stacking please, for newbie players, you know, a simple fix may be this
   just place it on the right of everything+
3. 01:29:382 (1,2) - and incoming patterns may be a bit confusing too, but as are the same on every repetition and follows the song is ok, but a consideration: make a slider that start on (1) and ends where (2) does, is moar simple, no need to change! Leave this as it is for now, but take a note.
4. 01:42:525 (1) - no whistle on start/slider body/end of slider, why? well listen to 01:39:668 (3,4,5) But that's great, song lala changes a lil bit and hs
5. 01:44:239 (2) - no whistle on end of slider ↑
6. 01:45:382 (3) - ↑
7. 02:35:668 (3) - avoid stacking please ;_; Oh, that a tough spot
8. 02:40:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - to considerate this, 8 circles in a row may be tyring for newbies, though are 1/1 105 bpm 1/1 Ok, they must work to get better sometimes!
9. 02:44:811 (1) - that slider again, no need to change but read that consider

MoodyRPG wrote:

Wow.

General

• • Nothing wrong here

Easy

• - 02:08:239 (1) - Remove this new combo because doesn't fit well with the music
  - 02:14:525 (6) - Unstack this note because is hard to play for newbies players in my opinion idk why 2 circles confusing, slider+circle maybe, as for me when i was playing much worse (that was not so long ago) it was ok.
  - 02:35:668 (3) - Same ^
  - 02:42:525 (5) - If you follow the rhythm, add a new combo here

+

Yli's Normal

• -- Nice diff

Hard

• -- Pretty nice

And that's it. Good song btw

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Sieg ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. 01:01:240 (4) - Remove this circle sound much better here.

That's all ~ Very clean mapset and nice song !

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Aleks719 wrote:

Skin
Белые слайдер фоллоу поинты выглядят неочень с черными границами слайдеров и сёрклов.
Стрелка реверса выглядит огромной, было бы уместо сделать ее поменьше чуточку, ее уж делать черной - перебор

Yli's Normal
OD +1? OD3 seems low between od2 in Easy and od6 in Hard.
00:55:097 (5) - add sliderbody whistle, whistle in the start sounds lonely


Easy
01:24:811 (5) - нк сюда по вокалу
01:27:097 (1) - а отсюда убери нк