Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there I can mod now, right?

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Everything seems to be fine here. Diff-specific mods now.

>Normal

1. 00:29:844 (4,1) - Some would expect the end of the "4" slider to be near the beginning of the "1" slider. Maybe make it like this? (There are two links on the word, btw.) change~
   

   416,152,29844,2,0,B|448:112|456:56,3,100,2|0|2|2

2. 00:56:528 - Break? no~ because add it , star will increase
3. 01:09:476 (1,2) - ...Are you sure this kind of pattern won't trip the players? i think there will difficult for players
4. 01:10:739 (1,2) - ^ ^
5. 01:55:739 - Add a note? no
6. 02:07:265 - Break? no,thanks~
7. 02:52:265 (4) - The placing feels so random. Maybe move it to the top-left? I only let it symmetrical
8. 03:05:370 - Break?no~thanks
9. 03:11:528 (3,4) - ...Eh? Why is the kick slider (...am I using the term right? :\)'s end points to the end of the previous slider?i can't understand

>Hard

1. 00:01:739 (3) - This circle is going to be covered by the hitburst of a previous note (I can't tell which one exactly). Might make some players confused.I think it no problem ? because this difficult is [Hard] . XD
2. 00:07:423 (7) - ^, except it is the slider's beginning that's being covered.^
3. 00:45:792 (2) - ^ (circle). Was about to point out this in "00:45:160 (4)", but I guess that's still readable.^
4. 00:58:976 - Break?add
5. 02:07:186 - ^^
6. 03:05:292 - ^^

>Lunatic

1. 01:10:739 (6,7,8) - I know this is Lunatic, but this kind of jump is... a bit too crazy, don't you think? (The previous jump wasn't really a problem, since there was already some short jumps to begin, but before this one, it was a short stream of circles.)Um...I also think this difficult have some terrible jump but , I look someone pass it lol .
2. 02:29:607 - Break?
3. 03:07:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jumpy pattern is EPICLY lunatic... and yet I love this i also think .XD
   and i also can't pass

Uh... yeah. I hope that helps. The song was awesome, btw. Nice choice.

Good luck on the way

1. 不要用下划线。。。

1. 01:14:055 (1) - not symmetrical
2. 01:16:739 (1) - remove nc

1. 00:18:476 (1) - 间距?
2. 02:45:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这几何跳有点太难...

1. 00:11:844 (5) - 这个放在(240,248)如何
2. 00:20:213 (7,8) - 在蓝色(1)上叠两个note? 感觉打得爽点wocuole
3. 00:42:792 (1) - 尾上clap去掉
4. 00:44:844 (1,2,3,4,5) - 早苗教你画星星
5. 。。好大的间距
6. 01:58:581 (5) - this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot261.jpg
7. 02:00:792 (3) - 间距怎么回事
8. 02:03:318 (3) - ^
9. 02:18:160 (4,4) - 1/2 slider?
10. 02:37:423 (1) - 叠起来。。

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from mod4mod

nice storyboardThanks

Tags

1. 不要用下划线。。。

change~

Normal

1. 01:14:055 (1) - not symmetricalfix~
2. 01:16:739 (1) - remove ncremoved~

Hard

1. 00:18:476 (1) - 间距??!
2. 02:45:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这几何跳有点太难...我想應該可以的XD

Lunatic

1. 00:11:844 (5) - 这个放在(240,248)如何
2. 00:20:213 (7,8) - 在蓝色(1)上叠两个note? 感觉打得爽点wocuole改了~
3. 00:42:792 (1) - 尾上clap去掉哎?!有嗎
4. 00:44:844 (1,2,3,4,5) - 早苗教你画星星畫星星~~~
5. 。。好大的间距恩...
6. 01:58:581 (5) - this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot261.jpgchange~
7. 02:00:792 (3) - 间距怎么回事改了
8. 02:03:318 (3) - ^^
9. 02:18:160 (4,4) - 1/2 slider?!?
10. 02:37:423 (1) - 叠起来。。我覺得這樣也不錯?!

that's all

Good luck~

1. 00:09:949 (3) - Hmm, judging from your previous finish hitsound pattern, I think it fits more if finish is on slider's start here, while a clap is on slider's end
2. 00:24:792 (4) - (optional) Use a repeating 3/4 slider here? I personally feel a whistle should be on 00:25:265
3. 00:27:318 (2) - (optional) Slider wave here? (I've seen Muya's Captivate -Sabaki- using a long cutting slider wave like this also, and it plays well):
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:28:581 (3) - Uh... Do you really need to silence the repeat? A whistle with ~20% volume gives a more authentic sound there imo
5. 00:42:160 (2,3) - Minor stuff, but move both one grid left to create a better blanket pattern here
6. 00:48:476 (4) - (optional) I think it's better to continue your encircle pattern here - even if you don't want to, adding a slight curve after the red waypoint of your current slider would still be cute :3
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:50:686 (3) - I think you overuse clap here imo, I highly suggest to remove the clap on slider's start - let your clap on 00:50:370 (2)'s end do it's magic here (:
8. 00:55:739 (4) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid down to encircle (3)'s end better?
9. 01:03:318 (2,3,1) - (optional) Hmm, I think it would be nice if you unstack (2,3) and let (1)'s end stacked below 01:02:055 (2), for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:17:213 (1) - Finish on slider's end here? I can hear a cymbal sound coming from the song
11. 01:33:002 (5) - I wonder, why not continue your pentagon pattern with (1,2,3,4) here? It won't be hard to do
12. 01:36:792 (1) - I highly recommend to reduce this slider by 1/2 and add note on 01:37:739 (x) with clap (it really improves your rhythm here)
13. 01:47:213 (2) - Remove the clap from the slider's body here
14. 01:54:476 (1) - Add finish here also? (your previous and next new combos are accompanied with finishes as well, except this one)
15. 02:02:055 (x) - Finish hitsound should be here instead of your next (1) - feels weird having a finish on the red tick on this song
16. 02:04:581 (1) - (optional) Encircle (2), as you mostly did before?
17. 02:17:213 (3) - Way too close to (2), for this case, just move it upward a bit along with your (4)
18. 02:25:423 (1) - (optional) Create a blanket slider like this? (even plays good with your next (2)!)
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 02:47:528 (1) - Again, finish should be on this slider's start instead of on (3)'s end
20. 03:04:739 (3) - Remove the clap on the slider's body, also (optional remove clap on the second slider repeat also to emphasize the finish on slider's end
21. 03:14:055 (2) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid down and the endpoint one grid right to make a tidier blanket with (1)
22. 03:35:528 (1,1) - Although new combo helps already, why not space them apart? Plays better imo
23. 03:44:528 (2,3) - (optional) Try this rhythm? Fits the ending guitar better imo:
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:00:792 (1) - Add finish on slider's end also? (because you did the same rhythm on 00:04:265 (3,4), and it sounds good with that extra finish)
2. 00:10:265 (1,2) - On sliderstreams like this, I prefer to tilt them a bit, because they will look/flow better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:13:897 (2,4) - I highly suggest to remove the clap on both slider's end to emphasize the claps on (3,5)
4. 00:31:107 (1,4) - Hmm, alter these two into slider waves? Long straight sliders like this don't build flow good enough imo
5. 00:45:949 (3) - (optional) Finish on slider's end here (instead of clap)?
6. 00:49:107 (1) - Clap on slider's end also, to unify the hitsounds with (5)?
7. 00:50:686 (6) - I personally feel it's better to use a single circle here instead. Also, if you do this, make sure (6,1,2)'s distance equal afterwards:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:581 (1) - It's closer to (6) rather than to (1). Is it intentional?
9. 01:05:213 (1) - Stack to (4)? (also, (optional) alternatively you can make this encircle your previous (1): )
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:07:107 (x) - Add note? There's a distinctive rhythm here
11. 01:18:476 (2,3,4) - (optional) I think it will play better if the symmetry is kept on (3,4) instead of creating a triangle pattern, it plays better before the break imo
12. 01:33:002 (1,3) - I highly recommend to continue on encircling (2) here, it's not that hard to do but increases your flow a lot here
13. 01:49:107 (4) - As your previous clap on (2) is placed on the red tick, move the clap here to slider's repeat also?
14. 01:54:160 (3) - I highly recommend to use finish on slider's end here instead of clap to emphasize a new part of the song
15. 01:59:134 (7) - (optional) Stack this below (5)? Will look tidier in play mode imo
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:06:476 (2) - Another finish on slider's end here sounds good, really (it's to continue your previous nearby finishes)
17. 02:15:949 (3) - (optional) Slight slider wave here? Cuts 02:15:476 (2) better imo
18. 02:26:055 (7) - Finish should be on this slider's start, instead of (6)
19. 02:27:318 (4) - I highly recommend to unstack this from (3) and put it below 02:26:055 (7)'s end instead - (3,4)'s stack will ruin the symmetry in play mode
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 02:51:002 (3) - Should be a clap on slider's start here to keep your clapping pattern consistent
21. 03:05:055 (3,4) - - Minor stuff, but move these a grid right to make the diamond pattern here tidier
22. 03:09:792 (4) - A bit hard to tell where's this slider will be going without snaking slider on, but that's not a big problem
23. 03:17:844 (1) - No finish on slider's start here? o.o
24. 03:22:266 (3) - Your previous 03:21:002 (3) doesn't have clap on its start, and I highly recommend to remove clap from this slider's start as well
25. 03:32:370 (5) - New combo here (it would be really tricky without a new combo guiding)

1. 00:05:213 (3) - (optional) Add finish on slider's start as well?
2. 00:15:949 (1,3,4) - This stack looks weird in play mode. I suggest to create a triangle jump here, to avoid such stack:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:265 (4) - Should be moved one grid right so (3,4,5,6)'s spacing equal
4. 00:20:686 (3) - Hmm, imo you're overusing clap here, it's better to use claps only on (1,2)
5. 00:46:265 (5) - No finish here? @_@
6. 00:46:581 (1,1) - (optional) Tilt them both facing each other's (2)? Looks better imo
7. 00:52:581 (3,3,3) - Remove claps on these three? I personally feel it's not a good place for clap here
8. 00:59:686 (3) - I think you're too forcing symmetry here, try to create a jump like below. Plays better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:06:634 (1) - (optional) I think it's better if you curve this also, like what you did on your next (1)
10. 01:12:792 (1) - (optional) Alter the slider like this? It encircles (5) better, thus it doesn't really affect gameplay here
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:37:423 (3) - I highly recommend to remove the sliderwhistle, it sounds abrupt here
12. 01:48:792 (3) - To add more power from the hitsound, add clap also to this slider's end?
13. 01:59:055 (3) - (optional) Try to remove the clap here, to get a fresher hitsound here
14. 02:02:055 (4) - I highly recommend to move this 1/2 later, as it follows the music much better
15. 02:12:160 (1) - Is it intentional to encircle (3) like this? I think it's better to encircle it normally...
16. 02:26:844 (2) - Add two extra repeats? Fits the background drums imo
17. 02:29:213 (1,2,3) - I think it's much better if you create a triangle jump here instead of repeating slider. If you don't wanna follow, I still highly recommend to place your note on 02:27:318 (3)'s position:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:40:581 (3) - I highly recommend to move this 1/2 earlier, to follow the background drums better
19. 02:51:476 (2) - Minor stuff, but move the first waypoint two grids up and the second waypoint two grids right to encircle (3) better
20. 03:16:660 (3) - Same as 01:59:055 (3)
21. 03:23:686 (3) - Not perfectly stacked to (6) - barely noticeable though
22. 03:29:528 (2) - (optional) Try this? Fits more rather than that straight slider imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
23. 03:42:318 (5) - Perhaps finish on slider's start also (considering the position of your previous finishes)?

1. Missing SB Elements untitled.jpg 这货在osb里有在你文件夹里没有
2. lead-in不一样 Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: - [Hard] : 1000 - [Lunatic] : 2000 - [Normal] : 1000
3. 个人感觉combo colour太浅了不合背景 不如

Niva wrote:

Hello, l1106188~
I want to do mod4mod (as you stated in queue)...

[General]

-> Hmm, remove "~" from tags? (osu! web search can't search for tags less than 3 characters)R~
-> Also, lead-in time in Lunatic is different (set it to 1000 because it starts on the same point with Normal and Hard)fix~

[Normal]

1. 00:09:949 (3) - Hmm, judging from your previous finish hitsound pattern, I think it fits more if finish is on slider's start here, while a clap is on slider's end
2. 00:24:792 (4) - (optional) Use a repeating 3/4 slider here? I personally feel a whistle should be on 00:25:265
3. 00:27:318 (2) - (optional) Slider wave here? (I've seen Muya's Captivate -Sabaki- using a long cutting slider wave like this also, and it plays well):
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:28:581 (3) - Uh... Do you really need to silence the repeat? A whistle with ~20% volume gives a more authentic sound there imo
5. 00:42:160 (2,3) - Minor stuff, but move both one grid left to create a better blanket pattern here
6. 00:48:476 (4) - (optional) I think it's better to continue your encircle pattern here - even if you don't want to, adding a slight curve after the red waypoint of your current slider would still be cute :3
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:50:686 (3) - I think you overuse clap here imo, I highly suggest to remove the clap on slider's start - let your clap on 00:50:370 (2)'s end do it's magic here (:
8. 00:55:739 (4) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid down to encircle (3)'s end better?
9. 01:03:318 (2,3,1) - (optional) Hmm, I think it would be nice if you unstack (2,3) and let (1)'s end stacked below 01:02:055 (2), for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:17:213 (1) - Finish on slider's end here? I can hear a cymbal sound coming from the song
11. 01:33:002 (5) - I wonder, why not continue your pentagon pattern with (1,2,3,4) here? It won't be hard to do
12. 01:36:792 (1) - I highly recommend to reduce this slider by 1/2 and add note on 01:37:739 (x) with clap (it really improves your rhythm here)
13. 01:47:213 (2) - Remove the clap from the slider's body here
14. 01:54:476 (1) - Add finish here also? (your previous and next new combos are accompanied with finishes as well, except this one)
15. 02:02:055 (x) - Finish hitsound should be here instead of your next (1) - feels weird having a finish on the red tick on this song
16. 02:04:581 (1) - (optional) Encircle (2), as you mostly did before?
17. 02:17:213 (3) - Way too close to (2), for this case, just move it upward a bit along with your (4)
18. 02:25:423 (1) - (optional) Create a blanket slider like this? (even plays good with your next (2)!)
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 02:47:528 (1) - Again, finish should be on this slider's start instead of on (3)'s end
20. 03:04:739 (3) - Remove the clap on the slider's body, also (optional remove clap on the second slider repeat also to emphasize the finish on slider's end
21. 03:14:055 (2) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid down and the endpoint one grid right to make a tidier blanket with (1)
22. 03:35:528 (1,1) - Although new combo helps already, why not space them apart? Plays better imo
23. 03:44:528 (2,3) - (optional) Try this rhythm? Fits the ending guitar better imo:
    
    SPOILER

    

[Hard]

1. 00:00:792 (1) - Add finish on slider's end also? (because you did the same rhythm on 00:04:265 (3,4), and it sounds good with that extra finish)
2. 00:10:265 (1,2) - On sliderstreams like this, I prefer to tilt them a bit, because they will look/flow better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:13:897 (2,4) - I highly suggest to remove the clap on both slider's end to emphasize the claps on (3,5)
4. 00:31:107 (1,4) - Hmm, alter these two into slider waves? Long straight sliders like this don't build flow good enough imo
5. 00:45:949 (3) - (optional) Finish on slider's end here (instead of clap)?
6. 00:49:107 (1) - Clap on slider's end also, to unify the hitsounds with (5)?
7. 00:50:686 (6) - I personally feel it's better to use a single circle here instead. Also, if you do this, make sure (6,1,2)'s distance equal afterwards:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:581 (1) - It's closer to (6) rather than to (1). Is it intentional?
9. 01:05:213 (1) - Stack to (4)? (also, (optional) alternatively you can make this encircle your previous (1): )
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:07:107 (x) - Add note? There's a distinctive rhythm here
11. 01:18:476 (2,3,4) - (optional) I think it will play better if the symmetry is kept on (3,4) instead of creating a triangle pattern, it plays better before the break imo
12. 01:33:002 (1,3) - I highly recommend to continue on encircling (2) here, it's not that hard to do but increases your flow a lot here
13. 01:49:107 (4) - As your previous clap on (2) is placed on the red tick, move the clap here to slider's repeat also?
14. 01:54:160 (3) - I highly recommend to use finish on slider's end here instead of clap to emphasize a new part of the song
15. 01:59:134 (7) - (optional) Stack this below (5)? Will look tidier in play mode imo
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:06:476 (2) - Another finish on slider's end here sounds good, really (it's to continue your previous nearby finishes)
17. 02:15:949 (3) - (optional) Slight slider wave here? Cuts 02:15:476 (2) better imo
18. 02:26:055 (7) - Finish should be on this slider's start, instead of (6)
19. 02:27:318 (4) - I highly recommend to unstack this from (3) and put it below 02:26:055 (7)'s end instead - (3,4)'s stack will ruin the symmetry in play mode
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 02:51:002 (3) - Should be a clap on slider's start here to keep your clapping pattern consistent
21. 03:05:055 (3,4) - - Minor stuff, but move these a grid right to make the diamond pattern here tidier
22. 03:09:792 (4) - A bit hard to tell where's this slider will be going without snaking slider on, but that's not a big problem
23. 03:17:844 (1) - No finish on slider's start here? o.o
24. 03:22:266 (3) - Your previous 03:21:002 (3) doesn't have clap on its start, and I highly recommend to remove clap from this slider's start as well
25. 03:32:370 (5) - New combo here (it would be really tricky without a new combo guiding)

[Lunatic]

1. 00:05:213 (3) - (optional) Add finish on slider's start as well?
2. 00:15:949 (1,3,4) - This stack looks weird in play mode. I suggest to create a triangle jump here, to avoid such stack:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:265 (4) - Should be moved one grid right so (3,4,5,6)'s spacing equal
4. 00:20:686 (3) - Hmm, imo you're overusing clap here, it's better to use claps only on (1,2)
5. 00:46:265 (5) - No finish here? @_@
6. 00:46:581 (1,1) - (optional) Tilt them both facing each other's (2)? Looks better imo
7. 00:52:581 (3,3,3) - Remove claps on these three? I personally feel it's not a good place for clap here
8. 00:59:686 (3) - I think you're too forcing symmetry here, try to create a jump like below. Plays better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:06:634 (1) - (optional) I think it's better if you curve this also, like what you did on your next (1)
10. 01:12:792 (1) - (optional) Alter the slider like this? It encircles (5) better, thus it doesn't really affect gameplay here
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:37:423 (3) - I highly recommend to remove the sliderwhistle, it sounds abrupt here
12. 01:48:792 (3) - To add more power from the hitsound, add clap also to this slider's end?
13. 01:59:055 (3) - (optional) Try to remove the clap here, to get a fresher hitsound here
14. 02:02:055 (4) - I highly recommend to move this 1/2 later, as it follows the music much better
15. 02:12:160 (1) - Is it intentional to encircle (3) like this? I think it's better to encircle it normally...
16. 02:26:844 (2) - Add two extra repeats? Fits the background drums imo
17. 02:29:213 (1,2,3) - I think it's much better if you create a triangle jump here instead of repeating slider. If you don't wanna follow, I still highly recommend to place your note on 02:27:318 (3)'s position:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:40:581 (3) - I highly recommend to move this 1/2 earlier, to follow the background drums better
19. 02:51:476 (2) - Minor stuff, but move the first waypoint two grids up and the second waypoint two grids right to encircle (3) better
20. 03:16:660 (3) - Same as 01:59:055 (3)
21. 03:23:686 (3) - Not perfectly stacked to (6) - barely noticeable though
22. 03:29:528 (2) - (optional) Try this? Fits more rather than that straight slider imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
23. 03:42:318 (5) - Perhaps finish on slider's start also (considering the position of your previous finishes)?

That's it from me, I hope it helps~

My map's link is on your queue - good luck :3

LKs wrote:

General

1. Missing SB Elements untitled.jpg 这货在osb里有在你文件夹里没有fix~
2. lead-in不一样 Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: - [Hard] : 1000 - [Lunatic] : 2000 - [Normal] : 1000fix~
3. 个人感觉combo colour太浅了不合背景 不如changed~

Normal

00:04:897 (3) - 不要finishok~
00:08:370 (1) - 避免一个1/2的范围内出现两个finish 同理之后ok~
00:21:002 (1) - 开头不要用太鼓kat音 thanks
00:50:686 (3) - 不要clapok~
01:10:739 (1) - 头whistle尾finishfix~
01:16:739 (5) - 这两个NC不太好 这里不用了ok~

Hard

00:32:370 (2,3) - 我推荐这么做 前一一格然后加一个notefix~
00:51:002 (1) - clap 不要finishno~
02:46:739 (2,3) - 你把3slider放在2note前面多舒服ok~

Lunatic

00:21:002 (1,2) - 既然是luna难度 那么我觉得在12这种节奏之间放个note也是没问题的!
01:00:634 (5) - 后两个折返加whistle note7加whistleno~

还好 Good luck for ranking

Black → Suggestion.

Blue → If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.

Red → Please change the absolute.

Combo1 : 174,87,0
Combo2 : 187,0,0
Combo3 : 157,60,255

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

Very late.. sorry

request from my queue

Black → Suggestion.

Blue → If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.

Red → Please change the absolute.

[General]

●Song Setup > Colours > http://puu.sh/l6BU

Combo1 : 174,87,0
Combo2 : 187,0,0
Combo3 : 157,60,255

change ~

[Normal]

●Song Setup > Difficulty > AR-1 or -2. OD+1. HP+1 fix~
●Song Setup > Advanced > Stack Leniency : 3 → 7 change pleasefix~~
●02:18:160 (4) - spacingfix~
●01:06:634 (1) - Remove a new combo ok
●01:33:002 (5) - 1 grid downok
●03:16:581 (3) - ^^

[Hard]

●Song Setup > Advanced > Stack Leniency : 3 → 7 change please fix~
●00:17:686 (8) - Move (x:328 y:388)no
-00:18:634 (2) - Move (x:336 y:192) no thanks~
-00:19:107 (3) - Move (x:328 y:388)no~thank you

[Lunatic]

●OD+1?add~
●fine~

Revengexsoyah wrote:

~Only Suggestion~

-General

u need [Easy] for rank this map (this is the critera ranker)
I can't make easy,lol

[Normal]
00:59:213: add break time
02:07:423: ^
03:05:528: ^
If i add , the star will exceed 3 stars
[Hard]
so fine
Thanks~
[Lunatic]
01:19:107: o shiet xDD u can fix this spacing ???fix~
O shit so fucking hard xDD
Yes ... I also think,XD..


star

• [General]

1. What does lightning.jpg's purpose?

• [Normal]

1. Make the Hitcircle larger..-1 CS
   
2. 00:59:213 (x) - Add a break here
3. 02:01:107 (1) - Remove NC here
4. 02:07:423 (x) - Add a break here
5. 03:05:528 (x) - ^
6. 03:20:370 (1) - NC here
7. 03:21:634 (3) - Remove NC
8. 03:22:739 (5) - NC here

• [Hard]

1. 00:38:686 (x) - a 1.50 slider speed here is very fast for hard.Try removing those timing points? imo
2. 01:03:949 (1) - Add finish on the head of the slider
3. 02:09:634 (1) - Since it's the first part of the kiai.Add a Finish on the first part of the slider
4. 02:38:686 (3) - Remove NC
5. 03:07:739 (1) - Add finish on the head of this slider
6. 03:09:002 (1) - Add finish.Well this is the last kiai part so let's add some finish
7. 03:10:265 (1) - Add finish on the head of this slider
8. 03:11:528 (1) - ^
9. 03:14:055 (2) - ^
10. 03:19:107 (1) - ^
11. 03:20:370 (1) - ^
12. 03:21:634 (1) - ^

• [Lunatic]

1. 02:29:213 (1) - Delete this slider
2. 02:57:949 (1) - Why is this too close to 02:57:634 (1)? Make a distance on this this note
3. 03:07:739 - 03:25:423 - Just like what i said in hard.Add more finsih

Genkishi wrote:

• [General]

1. What does lightning.jpg's purpose?

• [Normal]

1. Make the Hitcircle larger..-1 CS
   
2. 00:59:213 (x) - Add a break here
3. 02:01:107 (1) - Remove NC here
4. 02:07:423 (x) - Add a break here
5. 03:05:528 (x) - ^
6. 03:20:370 (1) - NC here
7. 03:21:634 (3) - Remove NC
8. 03:22:739 (5) - NC here

fix~ except break time ~ because add the star will excess 3

• [Hard]

1. 00:38:686 (x) - a 1.50 slider speed here is very fast for hard.Try removing those timing points? imo
2. 01:03:949 (1) - Add finish on the head of the slider
3. 02:09:634 (1) - Since it's the first part of the kiai.Add a Finish on the first part of the slider
4. 02:38:686 (3) - Remove NC
5. 03:07:739 (1) - Add finish on the head of this slider
6. 03:09:002 (1) - Add finish.Well this is the last kiai part so let's add some finish
7. 03:10:265 (1) - Add finish on the head of this slider
8. 03:11:528 (1) - ^
9. 03:14:055 (2) - ^
10. 03:19:107 (1) - ^
11. 03:20:370 (1) - ^
12. 03:21:634 (1) - ^

I only fix a little~ I think add so finish in there will feel strange

• [Lunatic]

1. 02:29:213 (1) - Delete this slider
2. 02:57:949 (1) - Why is this too close to 02:57:634 (1)? Make a distance on this this note
3. 03:07:739 - 03:25:423 - Just like what i said in hard.Add more finsih

fix~

That's All!

ax_pokl wrote:

[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
[Genearal]
good map~.
the red color is too dark.
[Hard]
approach rate => 8
01:16:423 (4,1) - hard to read. 我覺得還可以XD
00:05:528 (7,1) - no nc? hard to read. 不了~謝謝
00:21:002 (1) - ..!?
02:26:686 (1,2,3) - this three notes have same distance can be confused.修好了~
03:37:739 (2,1) - no stack?no~
[Lunatic]
Hp rate => 6?我覺得這難度讓它2一點xD
00:11:528 (3,4,5,6) - it's hard to read.(do not stack?.)no~
00:13:423 (1,2) - (same)^
03:04:264 (5) - no return here?no~
03:13:423 (3,1) - (reverse?)Thanks~
[Normal]
approach rate => 4?改了~
00:41:213 (1,3) - not same? make it same?no~
00:50:686 (3,1) - conbine them?no~
01:08:370 (2,1) - (jump it?)no~
01:47:213 (2,1) - (jump it?)no~
02:06:476 (3,1) - (add a spinner here?)no~Thanks
[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
（没看到你会中文。）

forevehappy wrote:

[Norma]

沒什麼大問題

[Hard]

+模式DT後顯得太快了

AR7差不多
改了~
Lunatci:

00:33:318(4)-沒蓋好 FIX~

02:40:186(2)-放在藍線上? 我是打算配合電吉他聲音~

小弟我第一次mod有很多不清楚的地方

東方觸圖又要增加拉~:D

要加油喔!

聲音部分改天在mod..

l1106188 wrote:

forevehappy wrote:

[Norma]

沒什麼大問題

[Hard]

+模式DT後顯得太快了

AR7差不多
[/color]
Lunatci:

00:33:318(4)-沒蓋好 FIX~

02:40:186(2)-放在藍線上? 我是打算配合電吉他聲音~

小弟我第一次mod有很多不清楚的地方

東方觸圖又要增加拉~:D

要加油喔!

聲音部分改天在mod..

謝謝你的modding!
這是善良圖 xD!(不過我好像無法pc...)
Upload!!!

forevehappy wrote:

02:39:949 - 有蓋在藍線上的那段 (1.2) - (1)結尾拉到原來(2)的藍線 (2)從藍線往後調一格到白線上，結尾再拉到下一個白線上

我覺得這樣比較適合...

突然有時間可以mod(吃飯去...)

Jacob wrote:

Hello! From my M4M queue.

[Normal]

00:59:055 (X) - Looks awkward without a spinner or a break. add,the star will...
01:53:528 (2) - Spacing.fix~
02:07:265 (X) - Looks odd without spinner or break.will ... 3 more stars
02:14:055 (4) - Really confusing for new players. Unstack this from under the sliders. fix~
02:21:949 (4) - Clap add~
03:05:370 (X) - Awkward without a break or a spinner.XD
03:23:528 (2) - Delete NCD~

[Hard]

02:27:318 (4) - I hit this note too late and missed. Fix the spacing.fix~?
03:12:949 (1) - Read this as a jump - fix the spacing.?!

[Lunatic]

Looks nice. I can't mod what I can't play, though.

1. 建議audio lead-in降低到1500ms，現在感覺有一點長了
2. "~" 這個符號單獨放在tag裡可能會有點問題吧

1. 00:07:423 (2) - 考慮挪到下個紅線？
2. 00:29:844 (4) - 第2個折返箭頭被(3)的分數擋住了
3. 01:50:686 - 這空拍聽著有點奇怪……既然前面一直都在下1/1的節奏了感覺這裡也沒必要刻意空一個出來，畢竟音樂沒有什麼明顯的變化……
4. 02:01:739 (4) - 建議加一次折返
5. 02:36:160 (2) - 這個建議拆成2個slider
6. 03:04:739 (3) - 移動到後面白線並且減少一次折返，既然你選擇跟vocal了那這裡感覺和vocal對齊比較好
7. 03:09:949 (4) - 這裡不建議用slider，過多的overlap是一方面，不是很好聽是另一方面，感覺一個note就足夠了

1. 00:01:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 這裡……發生什麼事情了……我覺得上來就突然下這種梗可能太難了吧……而且這一段可能用固定的節奏會相對更好一些？一下子很密然後又沒有什麼理由的突然放空拍感覺聽著很違和……
2. 00:05:528 (7) - 把前個slider延長到這裡
3. 00:09:160 (3) - 和開頭一樣的建議……確實不是很好聽建議還是調整下節奏&排版吧……
4. 00:42:002 (2) - 加個折返？
5. 00:43:265 (2) - ^
6. 01:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - 考慮把(2,4)換個位置變成順時針的旋轉？
7. 01:15:002 (3) - Ctrl+r？
8. 01:17:207 - 這裡加個Note吧？疊到01:17:370 (2) - 頭上
9. 01:30:318 - 這裡也是建議加note
10. 02:05:686 (3) - 折返箭頭被分數擋了好多
11. 02:22:739 (2,3) - 感覺先note再slider會舒服一些
12. 03:32:370 (1,2) - 這個位置感覺用一個折返slider更合適一點？
13. 03:44:844 (4,1) - 這個重疊感覺破壞flow了……不如這組combo從03:45:160 (2) - 的位置開始最後再轉回來？

1. 00:04:423 (1) - 感覺有些彆扭啊這裡應該是note+slider才對吧……
2. 01:10:581 (5,6) - 天這個跳……stream結束就是這間距太兇殘了……
3. 01:13:265 (2,3) - 這個也是建議note+slider
4. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡嘗試下
   1. 1st. 把3和5的位置交換
   2. 2nd. 把4和換位後的5的位置交換
5. 01:57:949 (3,4) - 這兩個打起來有點彆扭，建議弧度放成和(1,2)一樣吧
6. 01:59:844 (1) - 放到距離stream遠一些的地方吧，這個樣子很容易造成讀圖失誤
7. 03:25:423 - 從這裡開始我真的無法理解明明是最後的高潮很燃的地方卻要減速，太難受了……強烈建議改掉……

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue~
中文mod~~

General:

1. 建議audio lead-in降低到1500ms，現在感覺有一點長了
2. "~" 這個符號單獨放在tag裡可能會有點問題吧

全修了~
Normal:

1. 00:07:423 (2) - 考慮挪到下個紅線？
2. 00:29:844 (4) - 第2個折返箭頭被(3)的分數擋住了
3. 01:50:686 - 這空拍聽著有點奇怪……既然前面一直都在下1/1的節奏了感覺這裡也沒必要刻意空一個出來，畢竟音樂沒有什麼明顯的變化……
4. 02:01:739 (4) - 建議加一次折返
5. 02:36:160 (2) - 這個建議拆成2個slider
6. 03:04:739 (3) - 移動到後面白線並且減少一次折返，既然你選擇跟vocal了那這裡感覺和vocal對齊比較好
7. 03:09:949 (4) - 這裡不建議用slider，過多的overlap是一方面，不是很好聽是另一方面，感覺一個note就足夠了

Hard:

1. 00:01:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 這裡……發生什麼事情了……我覺得上來就突然下這種梗可能太難了吧……而且這一段可能用固定的節奏會相對更好一些？一下子很密然後又沒有什麼理由的突然放空拍感覺聽著很違和……
2. 00:05:528 (7) - 把前個slider延長到這裡
3. 00:09:160 (3) - 和開頭一樣的建議……確實不是很好聽建議還是調整下節奏&排版吧……
4. 00:42:002 (2) - 加個折返？
5. 00:43:265 (2) - ^
6. 01:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - 考慮把(2,4)換個位置變成順時針的旋轉？
7. 01:15:002 (3) - Ctrl+r？
8. 01:17:207 - 這裡加個Note吧？疊到01:17:370 (2) - 頭上
9. 01:30:318 - 這裡也是建議加note
10. 02:05:686 (3) - 折返箭頭被分數擋了好多
11. 02:22:739 (2,3) - 感覺先note再slider會舒服一些
12. 03:32:370 (1,2) - 這個位置感覺用一個折返slider更合適一點？
13. 03:44:844 (4,1) - 這個重疊感覺破壞flow了……不如這組combo從03:45:160 (2) - 的位置開始最後再轉回來？

Insane:

1. 00:04:423 (1) - 感覺有些彆扭啊這裡應該是note+slider才對吧……
2. 01:10:581 (5,6) - 天這個跳……stream結束就是這間距太兇殘了……
3. 01:13:265 (2,3) - 這個也是建議note+slider
4. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡嘗試下
   1. 1st. 把3和5的位置交換
   2. 2nd. 把4和換位後的5的位置交換
5. 01:57:949 (3,4) - 這兩個打起來有點彆扭，建議弧度放成和(1,2)一樣吧
6. 01:59:844 (1) - 放到距離stream遠一些的地方吧，這個樣子很容易造成讀圖失誤
7. 03:25:423 - 從這裡開始我真的無法理解明明是最後的高潮很燃的地方卻要減速，太難受了……強烈建議改掉……

差不多就這些了，總之加油～

Philippines wrote:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL

SPOILER

1. You suggest that you add spinners on some breaks.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL

SPOILER

1. 01:06:160 (4) - New combo. add~
   
   
2. 01:51:949 - You're missing a note here. Same at 01:57:002. add~
   
   
3. 02:07:265 - Add a spinner that ends at 02:09:002. no , because of the star
   
   
4. 03:04:897 (3) - Move this slider at 03:04:739, then add one more reverse.ok~

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXXHARD

SPOILER

1. 00:56:370 (1) - The Spacing from the previous note is too near.fix~
   
   
2. You're missing a note at 01:01:107 & 01:01:265.add
   
   
3. 01:31:739 - Spacing ~?!
   
   
4. You're missing notes also at 03:07:423 & 03:07:581.add~

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXLUNATIC

SPOILER

1. 01:07:265 (1) - Try to make a slider like the slider before this note. It fits more.I can't understand
   
   
2. I guess that's it. I'm lovin your jumps! <3Thanks

Leorda wrote:

Hello

[General]
* Add "succubus" to tags, since he arrange this song
* Add "frontier records" to tags, since this song is in album "Wind" and made by Frontier Records


[Normal]
01:06:634 (1) - Why new combo here?
01:34:265 (1) - The repeating slider is 1/2 overlapped by hitbursts. So it maybe 1/2 hidden for beginners, so just suggestion I guess
01:52:265 (1,2) - Anti-jump? I think should be avoided in Normal diff


[Hard]
01:07:107 (5,1) - Swap these new combo for new pattern?
01:31:739 (1) - Some players are expecting that this snap at red tick, but it's not. For prevent this, consider to move further away from them?
02:54:002 (4,1) - Swap these new combo for new pattern?


Always loving it

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Normal]
01:09:476 (1,2,3) - a little hard for normal changed~
01:49:739 (1) - also add whistle at this pattern seems fine no~
02:39:949 (1) - not very beauty for here fix~

[Hard]
00:14:528 (4) - it's better not to hide the end of slider no~
00:51:634 (1) - why use closer distance.useless changed~
1.5 sv seems not very good for this diff. 1.3 seems good Um...no,thanks

[Lunatic]
A lot of anti jumps um.....Seems good Thanks

Good job.

Mio_chan wrote:

Here is my mod~ Don't give kudosu if you find this not useful

General
Rest time of each difficulty is different. It is better to make it the same, especially in normal difficulty

Normal
01:31:739 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not symmetric, maybe you can do this part in grid level 4

Hard
OD +1 ?
Suggestion: I think you can make this difficulty easier. (lower the max score to about 10m)
00:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - This is really confusing. Change it to this?

SPOILER

00:08:370 (1) at x=256, y=112 00:08:528 (2) starts at x=336, y=64 00:09:318 (3) at x=256, y=24

00:18:476 (1) - This is quite confusing since AR is only 7, stack this to 00:18:634 (2)? or make it without changing the DS
00:58:581 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:01:107 (1) - ^
02:06:160 (1) - The new combo here is not the same in the 1st verse, make it the same.
02:09:634 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:14:844 (1) - ^
02:57:634 (1,2,3) - It does not look nice. Change it to this?

SPOILER

03:07:423 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:12:949 (1) - ^
03:23:055 (1) - ^

Lunatic
AR +1 ?
The maximum score is a bit high (19.5m), it is rankable, but the recommended one is 18m. Just reminding you for this
Hum...I have asked this problem . A BAT respond me is 20m now? or I wrong .
01:06:634 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:16:739 (1) - ^
01:19:107 (1) - ^
01:49:423 (1) - ^
02:24:949 (1) - ^
02:40:739 (3,4) - This jump is hard to read, at least for me

Revengexsoyah wrote:

Hi. emmm i can make a taiko diffie ?

Regou wrote:

把每個diff的SV提高吧
舉個例,Lunatic目前的SV是1.4,把它調成2.1,然後在慢的部份用x0.66/x0.67 slider speed...?

Koro McAlpine wrote:

* = After that, check the spacing to make sure what it needs to be fixed.

[Normal]

00:48:476 (4) - Moving to x:408 y:72 is better to me.*
01:13:107 (2) - Moving to x:144 y:112 is better to me.*
01:17:213 (1) - Spacing.*
01:32:686 (4) - This could be better if you move this to x:132 y:42.*
01:35:528 (2) - Move one grid down.*
02:45:002 (1) - Moving to x:344 y:184 is better to me.*
03:25:107 (3) - Move one grid up.

[Hard]

00:39:002 (2) - Move this to x:300 y:27?
00:40:265 (2) - Move this to x:211 y:354?
00:58:107 (6) - This could be better if you move this to x:248 y:256.

Thank you.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

MY taiko (4 hours make it this )


bye good luck

l1106188 wrote:

Revengexsoyah wrote:

MY taiko (4 hours make it this )


bye good luck

Um...
I have to sorry to you ...that
the TK have some place ... i feel strange
I will ask for TK friend QAQ
sorry ><

Revengexsoyah wrote:

what ? u say me "sure" and i make

fuck

1. 01:16:423 - miss a note
2. 02:24:713 (12) - remove this note , it is excess
3. 02:42:476 - 02:45:007 - this continuous blow should change , or will let TK player feel uncomfortable
4. 02:55:107 - 02:57:318 - also ^
   
5. 02:52:739 (1) - the spinner should start at 02:52:897
6. 03:22:739 - add a note
7. 03:22:896 (1) - should remove
8. 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - ^ remove
   
9. 03:45:476 (17) - add finish

bossandy wrote:

IRC mod ???

18:37 <l1106188> : 老大救星出現了 (早灣QAQ)
18:38 <bossandy> : 诶
18:38 <l1106188> : 怎麼辦 老大現在有空嗎
18:38 <bossandy> : 怎麼了?
18:39 <l1106188> : 之前有人問我說可不可以做tk難度 我說可以 他做了之後 我看auto君打 感覺到有奇怪的地方
18:39 <l1106188> : 可是我不會看TK QAQ
18:39 <l1106188> : 因為這樣 我還沒上傳 他的tk難度 好像生氣了 QAQ
18:39 <bossandy> : 哦
18:39 <bossandy> : 我來看看
18:39 <bossandy> : 哪首歌?
18:39 <l1106188> : t/62924/start=60
18:39 *l1106188 is listening to (Le Ciel - Feather)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37033]
18:39 <l1106188> : 這首 QAQ
18:40 <l1106188> : 也不敢問阿三醬 因為阿三醬 之前跟我說他暫時不接mod 所以不敢問 ><"
18:40 <bossandy> : 嗯恩
18:40 <bossandy> : 等等喔
18:41 <l1106188> : 恩QAQ
18:43 <bossandy> : 先玩玩看
18:43 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:47 <bossandy> : 其實還好呢
18:47 <l1106188> : 讓我感覺奇怪的地方是
18:48 <l1106188> : 第一次副歌 跟結尾 QAQ 老大覺得呢?
18:48 <bossandy> : 我看看
18:49 <bossandy> : 哦
18:49 <bossandy> : 有地方缺note
18:49 <bossandy> : 01:16:423 少了哥note
18:50 <bossandy> : 還有要把SB從TK diff理刪除
18:50 <bossandy> : 然後個別加到每個diff
18:50 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:52 <bossandy> : 02:24:634 (11) - 這多餘的
18:52 <l1106188> : 恩!
18:52 <l1106188> : 我會告訴他 XD
18:52 <bossandy> : 你把02:24:634 (11) - 刪除後 比較容易聽的出來
18:52 <bossandy> : 02:23:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
18:53 <bossandy> : ^^^這才對
18:54 <bossandy> : 順便跟他說那團坑爹的連打也改一下
18:54 <l1106188> : lol
18:54 <l1106188> : 坑爹要怎麼轉成英文 ?
18:54 <l1106188> : XD
18:54 <bossandy> : xDD
18:55 <l1106188> : lol google翻譯 翻不出來 壞掉了
18:55 <bossandy> : 02:52:739 (1) -
18:55 <bossandy> : 這個spinner
18:55 <bossandy> : 02:52:897<<<應該是從這開始
18:55 <bossandy> : 聽guitar聲就知道了
18:56 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:56 <l1106188> : 老大有翻譯機嗎
18:56 <bossandy> : 沒有>_<
18:57 <bossandy> : 03:22:739 這裡加個note 跟這vocal
18:57 <bossandy> : 如果有加note
18:57 <bossandy> : 03:22:896 (1) - 刪除
18:57 <l1106188> : 恩
18:58 <bossandy> : 他上線的話跟我說
18:58 <bossandy> : 我跟他說一些話
18:58 <l1106188> : lol 外國人
18:58 <bossandy> : 知道:D
18:58 <bossandy> : 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - 刪除
18:58 <bossandy> : 沒音樂了
18:58 <l1106188> : 我在努力轉成英文當中 ..
18:59 <l1106188> : 蓮打怎麼翻 XD
18:59 <bossandy> : 不知道>_<
18:59 <bossandy> : 通常多說這傳連打打起來太難來是什麼的
18:59 <bossandy> : 都*
18:59 <bossandy> : 串*
18:59 <bossandy> : 03:45:476 (17) - 加finish
18:59 <l1106188> : 老大修正了兩個字 (超毆
18:59 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:59 <bossandy> : xDD
19:00 <bossandy> : 差不多了
19:00 <bossandy> : 還有把Setting都置中
19:00 <l1106188> : 他應該是直接副致我的lunatic
19:00 <l1106188> : 因為載副歌有看到影子 lol 他沒改好
19:00 <bossandy> : 那就沒關係了~
19:01 <l1106188> : XD
19:01 <l1106188> : 話說老大說的那串連打是指
19:01 <l1106188> : 02:42:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) -
19:01 <bossandy> : 嗯
19:01 <l1106188> : 還有這一串 ? 02:55:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) -
19:01 <l1106188> :
19:01 <bossandy> : BPM都190了 在這樣下去會搞成App
19:02 <bossandy> : 嗯
19:02 <l1106188> : 恩~ 老大 太謝謝你了 QAQ
19:02 <bossandy> : xDD
19:02 <l1106188> : 話說 這圖我擔心真的會變成app XD
19:02 <bossandy> : xDD
19:02 <l1106188> : 老大之前土潮的sv1.4 我改了 lol
19:03 <bossandy> : Taiko好像只能用1.4或1.6現在
19:03 <l1106188> : 不過那串蓮級要怎麼改?
19:03 <bossandy> : 看他本人的意願摟
19:03 <l1106188> : 恩~
19:03 <l1106188> : 那要說 這是 unrankable 嗎 ?
19:03 <bossandy> : 好 savelog~
19:04 <bossandy> : 不是
19:04 <l1106188> : 恩~
19:04 <bossandy> : 只是會讓Taiko player feel bad >_<

加油吧!!!~~

l1106188 wrote:

Revengexsoyah wrote:

what ? u say me "sure" and i make

fuck

Calm down
I had asked for TK friend and want to tell you ( like irc mod ?)
and i have submited
He say ~

1. 01:16:423 - miss a note
2. 02:24:713 (12) - remove this note , it is excess
3. 02:42:476 - 02:45:007 - this continuous blow should change , or will let TK player feel uncomfortable
4. 02:55:107 - 02:57:318 - also ^
   
5. 02:52:739 (1) - the spinner should start at 02:52:897
6. 03:22:739 - add a note
7. 03:22:896 (1) - should remove
8. 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - ^ remove
   
9. 03:45:476 (17) - add finish

Revengexsoyah wrote:

i clean my diffie

i center notes and put colors for combos

PD: DL this not the previous

bye

Revengexsoyah wrote:

and again
ty for help

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

- you can remove sliderborder and spinner colour in the taiko diff
- There are a lot of unsnapped slider in hard and lunatic as shown by AI

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:03:318 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:07:423 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:08:528 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:10:897 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:160 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:17:686 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:31:107 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:370 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:844 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:634 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:35:528 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:36:160 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:37:423 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

[Lunatic]
00:08:370 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:160 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:17:686 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:581 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).

- imo 1500ms lead-in may not be enough, try 2000ms.
- SB in taiko diff don't really work. You can copy all stuffs in .osb, paste it under events in ALL solo diffs (not taiko diff) and that would remove SB from taiko diff.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

All fixed from mod of wmfchris
Thanks 4 all

[attachment=0:e5bd5]Le Ciel - Feather (l1106188) [soyaH's Taiko Oni].osu[/attachment:e5bd5]



EDIT: i forget something now yes xD

1. 00:35:528 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
2. 02:26:844 (2) - 这个折返slider玩的时候不太容易看清, 前面的hitburst挡住了太多
   
3. 03:09:792 (4) - 这种真的是不太建议把slider放在前面note的hitburst之下, 很容易看花
   

Breeze wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:35:528 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
2. 02:26:844 (2) - 这个折返slider玩的时候不太容易看清, 前面的hitburst挡住了太多
   [attachment=1:40944]1.png[/attachment:40944]
3. 03:09:792 (4) - 这种真的是不太建议把slider放在前面note的hitburst之下, 很容易看花
   [attachment=0:40944]2.png[/attachment:40944]

其他没什么, 个人并不是特别喜欢AR9的图spacing比较大jump还比较多, AR9本身反应时间就很短, 大spacing的连打加上突然的大jump打起来感觉太难了, 而且也不是特别舒服, 当然这只是我个人的感觉

• 
  Offset +10.
  
  I guess you added wrong file "normal-slidertick.wav". This file is same as "normal-sliderslide.wav".

• 
  I think this diff is a bit difficult as the easiest diff.

1. 01:10:265 (1,2) - Wrong spacing here.

1. 02:27:318 (4) - it's kinda hard to read this note. How about place it like below?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:57:634 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's not so good idea that changing SV here. It makes the player be confused.
3. 03:37:423 (1,2) - This narrow spacing is...not good.
4. 03:45:160 (2,4) - Try Ctrl+R on these notes. The flow will be better imo.

1. 00:44:055 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too difficult pattern especially 00:45:634 (1,2,3,4,5). Please add some sliders to make it easier.
2. 01:09:476 (6,7) - This jump is too...far. It can be fun even if you reduce the spacing here.
3. 01:10:739 (6,7) - ^
4. 01:12:634 (6) - I know why you put a note like this, but it's too far from 01:12:792 (1) so not fun to play. How about stacking it with 01:11:528 (1)'s top?
5. 01:15:160 (6) - ^ also too far.
6. 01:43:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's hard to read them. And just having wide spacing is not so fun to play. Try to make the variation of spacing like below.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:54:160 (3,4,5) - The spacing is too wide. Try to reduce it.
8. 02:02:213 (5) - Remove a note because you didn't add notes in other time(02:00:949, 02:03:476).
9. 02:26:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel these notes doesn't fit the music well. Try the pattern below.
   
10. 03:08:370 (5) - Add new combo to make it easier to read notes.
11. 03:09:633 (5) - ^
12. 03:17:212 (9) - Add new combo, and remove new combo from 03:17:370 (1).

1. 00:21:002 (T) - 0.50xSV is too slow imo. There is a big gap with 1.00xSV.
2. 01:11:370 (T) - Don't separate a KIAI in a short term on the taiko diff.
3. 02:19:660 (T) - ^
4. 03:17:765 (T) - ^

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry for taking long time.

[General]

• 
  Offset +10.
  
  I guess you added wrong file "normal-slidertick.wav". This file is same as "normal-sliderslide.wav".

[Normal]

• 
  I think this diff is a bit difficult as the easiest diff.

1. 01:10:265 (1,2) - Wrong spacing here.

[Hard]

1. 02:27:318 (4) - it's kinda hard to read this note. How about place it like below?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:57:634 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's not so good idea that changing SV here. It makes the player be confused.
3. 03:37:423 (1,2) - This narrow spacing is...not good.
4. 03:45:160 (2,4) - Try Ctrl+R on these notes. The flow will be better imo.

[Lunatic]

1. 00:44:055 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too difficult pattern especially 00:45:634 (1,2,3,4,5). Please add some sliders to make it easier.
2. 01:09:476 (6,7) - This jump is too...far. It can be fun even if you reduce the spacing here.
3. 01:10:739 (6,7) - ^
4. 01:12:634 (6) - I know why you put a note like this, but it's too far from 01:12:792 (1) so not fun to play. How about stacking it with 01:11:528 (1)'s top?
5. 01:15:160 (6) - ^ also too far.
6. 01:43:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's hard to read them. And just having wide spacing is not so fun to play. Try to make the variation of spacing like below.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:54:160 (3,4,5) - The spacing is too wide. Try to reduce it.
8. 02:02:213 (5) - Remove a note because you didn't add notes in other time(02:00:949, 02:03:476).
9. 02:26:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel these notes doesn't fit the music well. Try the pattern below.
   
10. 03:08:370 (5) - Add new combo to make it easier to read notes.
11. 03:09:633 (5) - ^
12. 03:17:212 (9) - Add new combo, and remove new combo from 03:17:370 (1).

That's it!
Not bad, but some patterns still need improving more in Lunatic.

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Irc mod ~

DarknessAngel wrote:

IRC MOD ~

SPOILER

10:55 <l1106188> : 闇天使 灣早 OAO~~
10:55 <DarknessAngel> : 早
10:55 <DarknessAngel> : 看到你才發現我忘了那回事
10:55 <DarknessAngel> : 現在來不？
10:55 <l1106188> : 可以>"<
11:01 <DarknessAngel> : 01:39:959 (5) - cril + R 打起來更舒服
11:02 <l1106188> : fix~
11:03 <DarknessAngel> : 02:02:380 - 啊 同樣的地方耶
11:03 <DarknessAngel> : 之前提到的不適當加速
11:03 <l1106188> : 恩~
11:05 <DarknessAngel> : 02:27:170 (6) - 強烈建議分開 在連打之後又作停頓會讓SS覺發飆的..
11:05 <DarknessAngel> : 啊 沒說清楚
11:05 <DarknessAngel> : "不要重疊"
11:05 <l1106188> : XD?!
11:05 <DarknessAngel> : 這樣
11:05 <l1106188> : 恩~
11:05 <l1106188> : 分開了 ~ OwO
11:09 <DarknessAngel> : 03:21:644 (1) - 這裡我大概會斷
11:10 <DarknessAngel> : 03:21:328 (4,1) - 把這間距弄大點
11:10 <l1106188> : stack 呢?
11:10 <DarknessAngel> : 跳躍之後又是急停 我個人覺得分開會更有feel
11:10 <l1106188> : 恩
11:11 <DarknessAngel> : 03:21:644 (1,2,3) - 最好這3個保持間距一致
11:11 <DarknessAngel> : 感覺比較有氣勢點 做個大間距什麼的
11:12 <l1106188> : fix~
11:13 <l1106188> : 大間距阿 loool
11:13 <l1106188> : 我是看看 (被打
11:13 <l1106188> : 好了 XD
11:15 <DarknessAngel> : 我在看你的圖的時候 其實可以預想我玩的時候會有多艱難呢 因為一下子跳躍一下子急停
11:15 <DarknessAngel> : 卻沒有能夠明顯能判斷這些東西的依據 再來又是AR9 反應時間很短暫..
11:15 <DarknessAngel> : 我舉個例子
11:15 <l1106188> : loool
11:16 <DarknessAngel> : 03:42:486 (8,1) - 停頓 03:43:591 (3,4) - 加速
11:17 <DarknessAngel> : 卻都同間距呢
11:17 <DarknessAngel> : 改了估計很麻煩 沒有要你改 只是希望能注意一下~
11:17 <l1106188> : 恩 >~<
11:17 <l1106188> : 我想說這樣會比較觸
11:17 <l1106188> : (被打
11:18 <l1106188> : 我本來是想改ar8
11:18 <l1106188> : 可是 改成ar8之後 發現 我很不習慣 .. 有點奇怪的感覺
11:18 <l1106188> : 所以又改回ar9 loool
11:18 <DarknessAngel> : 觸 也不是這樣分的啦 像很多觸圖overlap和cofusing apacing 卻很難打
11:19 <DarknessAngel> : AR9那個沒要你改啊lol
11:19 <l1106188> : loool
11:19 <DarknessAngel> : 剛剛只是感想 評論
11:20 <DarknessAngel> : 我繼續看
11:21 <l1106188> : 恩~~
11:22 <DarknessAngel> : 00:34:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這些whistle音量-10% ?
11:22 <DarknessAngel> : 畢竟這段的音樂是最小聲的(又有一堆哨聲)呢
11:23 <l1106188> : okay~
11:25 <l1106188> : 可是做完之後才發現 沒梗改了
11:26 <DarknessAngel> : 00:44:065 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 這個只是提一下 為什麼不讓flow呈8字形呢？
11:26 <DarknessAngel> : 現在這個有點拗手
11:27 <l1106188> : 也對
11:29 <DarknessAngel> : 02:09:959 (2) - finish消掉 其他的kai我沒看到你加 只有這裡有
11:31 <DarknessAngel> : 03:00:486 - 啊 又是這加速
11:32 <DarknessAngel> : 好了嗎？
11:33 <l1106188> : 不行 那個8自行我放棄
11:33 <l1106188> : 我改成別的 loool
11:34 <DarknessAngel> : 結果你還是改了啊lol 跟你說提一下而已嘛
11:34 <DarknessAngel> : 那我繼續囉？
11:35 <l1106188> : 恩~
11:36 <DarknessAngel> : 03:45:170 (1,2) - ctrl + R ? 這逆時針三角跳會更來勁 你試試
11:36 <l1106188> : 真的耶 loool
11:40 <DarknessAngel> : 02:33:802 (5) - NC個 你這段幾乎都短NC 所以加在這裡剛好
11:41 <DarknessAngel> : 02:45:644 (5) - 加NC幫助判斷？
11:42 <l1106188> : 好了~
11:42 <DarknessAngel> : 03:04:749 (5) - 加NC在這裡強調跳躍
11:43 <l1106188> : fix >"<
11:44 <DarknessAngel> : 恩 就這樣吧
11:44 <l1106188> : okay ~

• 
  Taiko has different offset. Please fix it.

1. 32.png
   Current img shows
   "
   ｜
   筋
   の
   欲
   望
   "
   but it should be
   "
   一
   筋
   の
   欲
   望
   "
   as correct Japanese.

1. 00:29:854 (4) - Please don't stack it because the repeat is coverd by a hitburst.

1. 00:00:801 (1) - Extend it to 00:00:959.
2. 01:59:144 (7) - It's a bit hard to read this note since the repeat is kinda hidden by a hitburst. Hum, place it at x:256, y:312?
3. 03:37:591 (x) - Add a note here to make this pattern be same as 03:39:959 (1,2,3).

1. 03:30:012 (4) - There is no sound in the back so it's better to remove this note. The gameplay will be better.
2. 03:34:907 (x) - Consider to add a note here to follow the music.(stack with (5))

Suzully wrote:

Recheck since Lunatic diff has been remapped.

[General]

• 
  Taiko has different offset. Please fix it.

1. 32.png
   Current img shows
   "
   ｜
   筋
   の
   欲
   望
   "
   but it should be
   "
   一
   筋
   の
   欲
   望
   "
   as correct Japanese.

[Normal]

1. 00:29:854 (4) - Please don't stack it because the repeat is coverd by a hitburst.

[Hard]

1. 00:00:801 (1) - Extend it to 00:00:959.
2. 01:59:144 (7) - It's a bit hard to read this note since the repeat is kinda hidden by a hitburst. Hum, place it at x:256, y:312?
3. 03:37:591 (x) - Add a note here to make this pattern be same as 03:39:959 (1,2,3).

[Lunatic]

1. 03:30:012 (4) - There is no sound in the back so it's better to remove this note. The gameplay will be better.
2. 03:34:907 (x) - Consider to add a note here to follow the music.(stack with (5))

Luantic became much better than before! You did nice work on remapping it.
But sadly, I cannot bubble this map for now because [Normal] is hard as the easiest diff.
If you make an easy diff, I can bubble so call me back again :3

DarknessAngel wrote:

MOD in IRC for Easy diff
Well done with it ~ '

SPOILER

21:37 <DarknessAngel> : 00:46:275 - 這裡加個note
21:37 <DarknessAngel> : 節奏會好點
21:37 <l1106188> : 恩~
21:37 <DarknessAngel> : 啊對了 NC要在這note上 下一個刪掉
21:38 <DarknessAngel> : 我覺得這EZ好很多
21:38 <l1106188> : !
21:38 <l1106188> : 節奏不會很奇怪嗎 loool
21:39 <DarknessAngel> : 01:54:486 - 這也是
21:39 <DarknessAngel> : 加個
21:39 <DarknessAngel> : 節奏不會怪啊
21:39 <l1106188> : 果然 !!XDD
21:39 <l1106188> : 我已經先加好了 XD
21:40 <DarknessAngel> : 為了好改點 把01:53:538 (2) - 翻轉過來
21:40 <DarknessAngel> : 哦~
21:41 <l1106188> : 修好了 OwO
21:41 <DarknessAngel> : 02:06:802 (4) - nazi一下 往上一格
21:41 <l1106188> : nazi ? loool
21:41 <DarknessAngel> : 比較漂亮ww
21:41 <DarknessAngel> : 微小的東西~
21:42 <l1106188> : 好了 >w<
21:42 <l1106188> : 整個break time 跟 normal 一模一樣 XDD..
21:44 <DarknessAngel> : 03:17:854 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - 把整個part移到 (x:348,y:248)
21:45 <DarknessAngel> : 03:17:854 (1) - 原因是note碰到slider身上 不好看
21:45 <l1106188> : 恩恩~
21:45 <l1106188> : loool 那後面有一個要改了
21:45 <DarknessAngel> : 為了方便點 就移動整個大串
21:45 <l1106188> : 改好了 XD
21:46 <DarknessAngel> : 03:23:854 (1) - ctrl + J後擺好
21:46 <DarknessAngel> : 尾部交錯在一起也不好看
21:47 <l1106188> : 好哩
21:48 <DarknessAngel> : 03:42:486 (2) - 把這slider弄彎 剛好圍繞在03:43:117 (1)的起始點旁邊 這樣好看點
21:49 <l1106188> : okay~~
21:50 <DarknessAngel> : 01:14:065 (1,2,3,1,2) - 把整個part往下一格
21:51 <l1106188> : okay~
21:51 <DarknessAngel> : 01:12:802 (3,4,1) - 讓這3個呈等間距
21:51 <DarknessAngel> : ↑那是原因
21:51 <l1106188> : 原來如此 loool
21:54 <DarknessAngel> : OD和HP建議再多加1格
21:55 <l1106188> : 2.07 stars loool
21:55 <l1106188> : 那我上船囉 >w<
21:55 <DarknessAngel> : 上吧~

忘記給你射個星了lol

Suzully wrote:

About taiko.
Please snap greaan lines correctly. And don't separate a KIAI. Remove last note 03:45:644 (2).

There aren't any issues in this mapset, so I can bubble after this fix!

Suzully wrote:

Finally, bubbled!

TicClick wrote:

You know what, this is pretty good!

Andrea wrote:

[Easy]

AR is kinda too high for an Easy right now, reduce it by 1 tick at least.

[Hard]

AR is kinda too high for a Hard right now, reduce it by 1 tick at least.

00:01:275 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:328 (1) - ^
00:51:328 (2,1) - Weird anti-jump.
01:15:012 (3,4) - ^
02:06:959 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:14:854 (1) - ^
02:46:907 (3,1) - Weird anti-jump, again.
02:57:328 (4,1) - ^
02:57:959 (2,3) - ^
02:59:223 (2,3) - ^
03:12:959 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:23:065 (1) - ^
03:30:959 (1) - ^
03:34:117 (4,5) - This spacing is totally wrong.

[Lunatic]

01:53:854 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:54:012 (2) - New combo.
01:59:144 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:16:591 (3) - New combo.
02:17:223 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:39:959 (1,2) - Sounds bad and doesn't follow anything.
03:02:696 (1) - This slider can be made much better.
03:17:223 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:26:696 (5) - New combo due to the jump.
03:30:486 (1,2,3,4) - This is confusing as hell.
03:43:117 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

This map still need lots of work, sorry to say that but it's true. okay...

Also, the timing is pretty weird, you might ask someone to double check that as well, please.

pimpG wrote:

irc timing help request

518 bpm 190
2056 bpm 190

good luck

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii again ~
Requested in-game ~


[Easy]
02:55:424 (1) - Line with 02:54:161 (2)
02:56:687 (2) - Line with 02:52:898 (1)
I can't understand QAQ

[Normal]
- Approrach Rate -1 fix~
00:58:266 (3) - Move to 00:58:582 and remove the reverse arrow ?no~ i think okay?!
01:44:371 (1) - Rotate it by 15 and move some points to make it around 01:43:108 (5) changed~
02:06:477 (3) - Move to 02:06:792 and remove the reverse arrow? neither
03:18:161 (1) - Make the end of the slider meet with 03:16:266 (2) okay~


[Hard]
00:02:529 (1) - Place where 00:01:307 (2) was.[/color]
00:12:003 (3) - Make the end of the slider meet 00:10:266 (1).fixed~
01:59:134 (7) - Make this a straight slider.no~QAQ
02:48:003 (2) - Placement ~okay!

Well mapped as always ~
Good luck ~ >w<

pimpG wrote:

hi

no kudos lol! i no see this

general

sorry i was a bit sleepy when i timed this map

offset 515 (-3)
offset 2048 (-8)
I think your first timing much precise

easy

00:06:477 (1) - remove finish ?
00:07:424 (2) - ^
00:09:003 (1) - ^
00:09:950 (2) - ^
00:25:424 (2) - remove whistle?
00:31:108 (1) - add finish at start?add~
00:31:108 - i think you should stop the taiko custom hisounds here
00:31:108 (1,2,1) - remove whiltle from slider body?
00:35:529 (3) - remove whistle?
00:36:161 (1,2,1) - remove whiltle from slider body?
01:09:003 (1,2) - remove whistle at the slider end?
01:31:108 (2) - remove whistle?
01:33:634 (2) - ^
01:38:687 (2) - remove finish at the end?
01:43:740 (3) - remove whistle?
03:40:582 (1) - remove finish from repeat?

normal

00:04:907 (3) - remove finish?
00:06:486 (1) - ^
00:07:433 (2,3) - ^
00:09:959 (4) - ^
00:31:108 - i think you should stop the taiko custom hisounds here
01:09:950 (2) - remove whistle?
01:11:213 (3) - ^
01:47:213 (2) - remove whistles?
01:48:477 (1) - ^
02:09:634 (1) - remove finish at repeat
02:47:529 (1) - remove finish
02:53:687 (2,3) - remove whistles
03:21:634 (3,4,5) - this overlap is a bit confusing maybe?fix~

hard

00:05:845 (1234561234) - too many finishes
01:29:845 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - strange whistle pattern imo
01:46:898 (1,2,3,4) - remove whistles?
02:02:371 (1) - remove finish?
02:05:687 (3,4,5) - too many finishes


lunatic

00:31:108 - i think you should stop the taiko custom hisounds here

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 4
  • 02:05:529 (2) - Move this circle to the right.
  
  SPOILER

  

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • 01:44:371 (1) - Make this slider more symmetrical.
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 01:46:582 (3) - Move this circle a bit up.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:13:424 (x) - Add a circle.

• • 03:37:582 (x) - Add a circle.

1. 00:21:003 - 00:29:845 - Hmm... it would be better if you apply Whistles in a 2/1 rhythm (if you don't understand, add Whistles on the sliders' repeat too).
2. 00:41:529 (2,3) - I can't understand what are you trying to follow here. I suggest you to place this 1/1 beat later (to put it simply, move these two together at once, to the point where (2) is on 00:41:845). If you're doing this, don't forget to move 00:44:056 (1) somewhere so the spacing will be consistent. If you don't, add a circle on 00:42:477 and 00:43:740.
3. 00:46:582 (2,3) - ^ (Similar case.)
4. 01:38:687 (2) - Move it to (400,144), and then drag the last anchor point to (328,108)? The end of this slider will point 01:39:319 (1), which looks better than the current state, which looks pretty random. A picture if you want.
5. 01:47:529 (2) - Make it a 2/1 slider that doesn't repeat and a circle 1/1 beat after?
6. 01:49:740 (2,3) - Similar to 00:41:529 (2,3).
7. 01:54:477 (1,2) - What's with this overlap? Try to avoid things like this.
8. 01:54:792 (2,3) - Similar to 00:41:529 (2,3).
9. 03:45:003 (2) - Begin this 1/1 beat earlier (03:44:687)? The end should be the same, so it will repeat four times if you're doing it according to this mod. Sounds far more fitting to me.

1. 00:42:477 (3) - I guess using a 1/1 slider that repeats once and a circle 1/1 beat after (just like00:41:213 (1,2)) wouldn't hurt, and I think it's better than a 1/1 slider that repeats twice, but... I guess you have no need to change that.
2. 00:50:371 (2,3,1) - Don't really like how these objects overlap...
3. 00:53:845 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:55:740 (4) - Replace this into a 1/1 circle triplet (3 circles, you know), NC the last one, and remove the NC on 00:57:003 (1). The NC placement seems to be more natural that way.
5. 00:57:950 - Add a circle? Feels weird to keep a 2/1 rhythm here.
6. 01:29:213 - What's with the sudden '1/1-slider-that-repeats-twice' spam (well, not really; you're not using it all the time, there's just a bit too many) from here? It's fine, I know, but you can just split them into a slider and a circle right?
7. 01:48:477 (2) - Using a 1/1 slider that repeats once and then a circle 1/1 beat after feels... better. I can't find a better word for this, dang it.
8. 02:00:161 - Add a circle?
9. 02:00:477 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats once?
10. 02:01:424 - Add a circle?
11. 02:01:740 (4) - Make this repeat once more?
12. 02:02:371 (1) - Remove Finish?
13. 02:02:687 - Make a 1/2 slider?
14. 02:03:003 (2) - ^ (+ Repeat it once.)
15. 02:03:950 - Add a circle? (Blue = You're supposed to do all of them at once, but if you don't want one or two, as long as it still flows well, have it your way. Sorry for being somewhat arrogant and made you basically remapped this part with my suggestions (if you're doing them, anyway), but... the rhythm is just THAT weird here, IMO)
16. 02:58:582 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you following the claps on the first and third white tick anyway... They sound weird, you know.

1. 00:02:213 - You should really add a circle here, since the song clearly 'demands' it.
2. 00:58:582 (1,2) - Would be better if you remove the circle and make the slider repeat once more, right?
3. 01:59:845 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Huh? What's with all the copy-pasted stuff here? It would be fine if the parts are actually similar-sounding, but this... Dunno.
4. 02:35:845 (1,2) - Huh? They're perfectly following the music, but these sliders play weird... Must be because they repeat twice, which most players won't expect. Might be just me, though...
5. 02:45:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tapping the circles after the repeating sliders is just not right for me. Not sure why, but you might want to take a shot on this. Or maybe it's just me that suck...
6. 03:04:740 (1,2,3,4) - What about if you convert them into two 1/2 sliders? They flow better, really.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Easy]

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 4
  • 02:05:529 (2) - Move this circle to the right.
  
  SPOILER

  

[Normal]

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • 01:44:371 (1) - Make this slider more symmetrical. i change , but no change like this picture
  
  SPOILER

  

[Hard]

• • 01:46:582 (3) - Move this circle a bit up.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:13:424 (x) - Add a circle.

[Lunatic]

• • 03:37:582 (x) - Add a circle.

Nice beatmap, good job!

Hinsvar wrote:

...The bubble got popped?

Okay, let's get into this.

*Bolded = Unrankable/strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested/questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>Easy

1. 00:21:003 - 00:29:845 - Hmm... it would be better if you apply Whistles in a 2/1 rhythm (if you don't understand, add Whistles on the sliders' repeat too).
2. 00:41:529 (2,3) - I can't understand what are you trying to follow here. I suggest you to place this 1/1 beat later (to put it simply, move these two together at once, to the point where (2) is on 00:41:845). If you're doing this, don't forget to move 00:44:056 (1) somewhere so the spacing will be consistent. If you don't, add a circle on 00:42:477 and 00:43:740.i follow drum~
3. 00:46:582 (2,3) - ^ (Similar case.)
4. 01:38:687 (2) - Move it to (400,144), and then drag the last anchor point to (328,108)? The end of this slider will point 01:39:319 (1), which looks better than the current state, which looks pretty random. A picture if you want.
5. 01:47:529 (2) - Make it a 2/1 slider that doesn't repeat and a circle 1/1 beat after?
6. 01:49:740 (2,3) - Similar to 00:41:529 (2,3).
7. 01:54:477 (1,2) - What's with this overlap? Try to avoid things like this.
8. 01:54:792 (2,3) - Similar to 00:41:529 (2,3).
9. 03:45:003 (2) - Begin this 1/1 beat earlier (03:44:687)? The end should be the same, so it will repeat four times if you're doing it according to this mod. Sounds far more fitting to me.

>Normal

1. 00:42:477 (3) - I guess using a 1/1 slider that repeats once and a circle 1/1 beat after (just like00:41:213 (1,2)) wouldn't hurt, and I think it's better than a 1/1 slider that repeats twice, but... I guess you have no need to change that.
2. 00:50:371 (2,3,1) - Don't really like how these objects overlap...
3. 00:53:845 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:55:740 (4) - Replace this into a 1/1 circle triplet (3 circles, you know), NC the last one, and remove the NC on 00:57:003 (1). The NC placement seems to be more natural that way.
5. 00:57:950 - Add a circle? Feels weird to keep a 2/1 rhythm here.
6. 01:29:213 - What's with the sudden '1/1-slider-that-repeats-twice' spam (well, not really; you're not using it all the time, there's just a bit too many) from here? It's fine, I know, but you can just split them into a slider and a circle right?
7. 01:48:477 (2) - Using a 1/1 slider that repeats once and then a circle 1/1 beat after feels... better. I can't find a better word for this, dang it.
8. 02:00:161 - Add a circle?
9. 02:00:477 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats once?
10. 02:01:424 - Add a circle?
11. 02:01:740 (4) - Make this repeat once more?
12. 02:02:371 (1) - Remove Finish?
13. 02:02:687 - Make a 1/2 slider?
14. 02:03:003 (2) - ^ (+ Repeat it once.)
15. 02:03:950 - Add a circle? (Blue = You're supposed to do all of them at once, but if you don't want one or two, as long as it still flows well, have it your way. Sorry for being somewhat arrogant and made you basically remapped this part with my suggestions (if you're doing them, anyway), but... the rhythm is just THAT weird here, IMO)
16. 02:58:582 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why are you following the claps on the first and third white tick anyway... They sound weird, you know.

>Hard

1. 00:02:213 - You should really add a circle here, since the song clearly 'demands' it.
2. 00:58:582 (1,2) - Would be better if you remove the circle and make the slider repeat once more, right?
3. 01:59:845 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Huh? What's with all the copy-pasted stuff here? It would be fine if the parts are actually similar-sounding, but this... Dunno.
4. 02:35:845 (1,2) - Huh? They're perfectly following the music, but these sliders play weird... Must be because they repeat twice, which most players won't expect. Might be just me, though...
5. 02:45:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tapping the circles after the repeating sliders is just not right for me. Not sure why, but you might want to take a shot on this. Or maybe it's just me that suck...
6. 03:04:740 (1,2,3,4) - What about if you convert them into two 1/2 sliders? They flow better, really.

About Lunatic... I suppose it's fine as is.

Okay, okay. Let's roll again, I guess?

Good luck on the way... again

all fix!~thank you modding again Hinsvar

- t e n n y a - wrote:

nyahoo from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion

[General]
add ZUN on the tags?

[Easy]
- 02:15:319 : maybe move this into 02:15:634 and remove the reverse? since nonstop hit is kinda hard for an easy player

[Normal]
AR -1?
- 00:36:161 : finish?

[Hard]
- 00:10:266 1,2 : make them reverse once? since its too hard for hard player and the bpm is fast too o v o i think okay~

[Lunatic]
- 00:57:003 : make this behind combo 4 at 00:56:213 ?
- 01:33:634 : nc?
- 01:43:740 : nc?

thats all I can find, rank good luck ^ o ^

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

herp

[Easy]
00:00:833 (1) - Add Finish at the Start Point. fix~
00:02:056 (2,3,4) - Flow is very disturbed, it looks like a Jump, even it is not one. fix~
01:03:950 (1) - Please hold here 1/1 beat. Because nothing of the Music or the voice fits with the Slider. I follow the drum
01:14:056 (1) - ^ ^
01:33:634 (2) - IMO the Whistle sounds weird and should be removed. remove~
02:12:161 (1) - Same like 01:03:950 (1). follow drum~
02:22:266 (1) - ^ ^
02:39:634 (3) - Place it at x:192 y:60, looks better with the curve. ok~
02:50:056 (1) - Remove Clap from the Middle Point, it does not fit there. ok~
03:04:898 (2) - Form it to a 1/2 Slider. Fits better with the Voice. But it's up to you, because the current slider is also fine. i not change
03:10:266 (1) - Same like 01:03:950 (1).follow drum
03:20:371 (1) - ^^

[Normal]
00:01:465 (2,3) - The (3) is not readable, so move the (3) somewhere, but do not stack it. fix~
00:48:477 (4) - This buckling could irritate beginners. So do something here. k~
00:50:371 (2,3) - This could be too fast. fix~
01:13:424 (3,4,1) - Feels too fast to play. Please remove (4). remove~
01:31:424 (4) - You should remove Whistle because it sounds off from the rhythm. remove~
01:49:424 (3) - NC k
01:49:740 (1) - Remove NC k
01:53:213 - I suggest to add a Circle here to fill this empty part. k
01:54:477 (1,2) - Remove the Reverse Arrow at (1), delete (2) and set from 01:55:108 to 01:55:740 a Slider, the singer hold her voice so you could also do this with a Slider. Anyway, it should look like this: http://puu.sh/HFej k
03:36:792 (1) - NC isn't neccessary. fix~

[Hard]
The whole seems like an easy Insane, obviously. The AR should be AR7 and not 8, the SV is IMO a bit high and they are parts like 00:44:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) it let looks like Insane-related. fix~
01:31:740 (1) - Remove Whistle from the Slider, but please hold the Whistle at the Start. k
01:32:371 (3) - ^ but remove only from the Start Point the Whistle. k~

[Lunatic]
Looks fine.

I strongly suggest to make Hard easier. Because to make a new Diff for it would be not so good and you would need to get some more mods again for the diff. i will recheck ~

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Easy
Nice for me

Normal
01:40:582 (3,4) - ctrl + r k
03:22:740 (1) - change slider's shape? no :3 i think okay~

Hard
01:01:108 (1,2) - change to slider? no~
01:39:319 (1) - add whistle like 01:39:950 (3) - this slider no
01:40:582 (5) - add whistle start of slider k
02:09:319 (1,2) - change to slider? k
02:46:898 (3) - ctrl + r and check distacne no,because the distance 1/1
03:07:424 (1,2) - change to slider? no~

Lunatic
01:33:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think square pattern is so difficult on this part k~change
i think on this part song looks down so how about pentagon pattern or star pattern?
01:43:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - like this
01:59:134 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - check distance fix~
02:03:319 (3) - add finish k
02:16:898 (3,4) - I think there are no reason to change distacne suddenly, both parts have similar song sound
how about trying other pattern? I follow the singer with jump :3

good luck

Andrea wrote:

Yeah, it's much better now!

Re-Bubbled~

Flask wrote:

恭喜終於要rank啦~~~

abalee wrote:

I will rank it.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

恭喜06188神mapper wwwwwwww

L_P wrote:

这图好长历史，真恭喜呵呵

阿爸人好，顺便rank我的