- t e n n y a - wrote:

nyahoo from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion

[General]
add ZUN on the tags?

[Easy]
- 02:15:319 : maybe move this into 02:15:634 and remove the reverse? since nonstop hit is kinda hard for an easy player

[Normal]
AR -1?
- 00:36:161 : finish?

[Hard]
- 00:10:266 1,2 : make them reverse once? since its too hard for hard player and the bpm is fast too o v o i think okay~

[Lunatic]
- 00:57:003 : make this behind combo 4 at 00:56:213 ?
- 01:33:634 : nc?
- 01:43:740 : nc?

thats all I can find, rank good luck ^ o ^

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

herp

[Easy]
00:00:833 (1) - Add Finish at the Start Point. fix~
00:02:056 (2,3,4) - Flow is very disturbed, it looks like a Jump, even it is not one. fix~
01:03:950 (1) - Please hold here 1/1 beat. Because nothing of the Music or the voice fits with the Slider. I follow the drum
01:14:056 (1) - ^ ^
01:33:634 (2) - IMO the Whistle sounds weird and should be removed. remove~
02:12:161 (1) - Same like 01:03:950 (1). follow drum~
02:22:266 (1) - ^ ^
02:39:634 (3) - Place it at x:192 y:60, looks better with the curve. ok~
02:50:056 (1) - Remove Clap from the Middle Point, it does not fit there. ok~
03:04:898 (2) - Form it to a 1/2 Slider. Fits better with the Voice. But it's up to you, because the current slider is also fine. i not change
03:10:266 (1) - Same like 01:03:950 (1).follow drum
03:20:371 (1) - ^^

[Normal]
00:01:465 (2,3) - The (3) is not readable, so move the (3) somewhere, but do not stack it. fix~
00:48:477 (4) - This buckling could irritate beginners. So do something here. k~
00:50:371 (2,3) - This could be too fast. fix~
01:13:424 (3,4,1) - Feels too fast to play. Please remove (4). remove~
01:31:424 (4) - You should remove Whistle because it sounds off from the rhythm. remove~
01:49:424 (3) - NC k
01:49:740 (1) - Remove NC k
01:53:213 - I suggest to add a Circle here to fill this empty part. k
01:54:477 (1,2) - Remove the Reverse Arrow at (1), delete (2) and set from 01:55:108 to 01:55:740 a Slider, the singer hold her voice so you could also do this with a Slider. Anyway, it should look like this: http://puu.sh/HFej k
03:36:792 (1) - NC isn't neccessary. fix~

[Hard]
The whole seems like an easy Insane, obviously. The AR should be AR7 and not 8, the SV is IMO a bit high and they are parts like 00:44:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) it let looks like Insane-related. fix~
01:31:740 (1) - Remove Whistle from the Slider, but please hold the Whistle at the Start. k
01:32:371 (3) - ^ but remove only from the Start Point the Whistle. k~

[Lunatic]
Looks fine.

I strongly suggest to make Hard easier. Because to make a new Diff for it would be not so good and you would need to get some more mods again for the diff. i will recheck ~

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Easy
Nice for me

Normal
01:40:582 (3,4) - ctrl + r k
03:22:740 (1) - change slider's shape? no :3 i think okay~

Hard
01:01:108 (1,2) - change to slider? no~
01:39:319 (1) - add whistle like 01:39:950 (3) - this slider no
01:40:582 (5) - add whistle start of slider k
02:09:319 (1,2) - change to slider? k
02:46:898 (3) - ctrl + r and check distacne no,because the distance 1/1
03:07:424 (1,2) - change to slider? no~

Lunatic
01:33:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think square pattern is so difficult on this part k~change
i think on this part song looks down so how about pentagon pattern or star pattern?
01:43:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - like this
01:59:134 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - check distance fix~
02:03:319 (3) - add finish k
02:16:898 (3,4) - I think there are no reason to change distacne suddenly, both parts have similar song sound
how about trying other pattern? I follow the singer with jump :3

good luck

Andrea wrote:

Yeah, it's much better now!

Re-Bubbled~

Flask wrote:

恭喜終於要rank啦~~~

abalee wrote:

I will rank it.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

恭喜06188神mapper wwwwwwww

L_P wrote:

这图好长历史，真恭喜呵呵

阿爸人好，顺便rank我的

Flask wrote:

不公平 太快了!

R e d wrote:

Ar 7 on Hard? 190 bpm's with "high" slider speed Confuse all people!! I really hope this get fixed to Ar 8
but ok Yeah ~ I know ..., thank you

Edit: gratz for the ranking