1. 建議audio lead-in降低到1500ms，現在感覺有一點長了
2. "~" 這個符號單獨放在tag裡可能會有點問題吧

1. 00:07:423 (2) - 考慮挪到下個紅線？
2. 00:29:844 (4) - 第2個折返箭頭被(3)的分數擋住了
3. 01:50:686 - 這空拍聽著有點奇怪……既然前面一直都在下1/1的節奏了感覺這裡也沒必要刻意空一個出來，畢竟音樂沒有什麼明顯的變化……
4. 02:01:739 (4) - 建議加一次折返
5. 02:36:160 (2) - 這個建議拆成2個slider
6. 03:04:739 (3) - 移動到後面白線並且減少一次折返，既然你選擇跟vocal了那這裡感覺和vocal對齊比較好
7. 03:09:949 (4) - 這裡不建議用slider，過多的overlap是一方面，不是很好聽是另一方面，感覺一個note就足夠了

1. 00:01:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 這裡……發生什麼事情了……我覺得上來就突然下這種梗可能太難了吧……而且這一段可能用固定的節奏會相對更好一些？一下子很密然後又沒有什麼理由的突然放空拍感覺聽著很違和……
2. 00:05:528 (7) - 把前個slider延長到這裡
3. 00:09:160 (3) - 和開頭一樣的建議……確實不是很好聽建議還是調整下節奏&排版吧……
4. 00:42:002 (2) - 加個折返？
5. 00:43:265 (2) - ^
6. 01:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - 考慮把(2,4)換個位置變成順時針的旋轉？
7. 01:15:002 (3) - Ctrl+r？
8. 01:17:207 - 這裡加個Note吧？疊到01:17:370 (2) - 頭上
9. 01:30:318 - 這裡也是建議加note
10. 02:05:686 (3) - 折返箭頭被分數擋了好多
11. 02:22:739 (2,3) - 感覺先note再slider會舒服一些
12. 03:32:370 (1,2) - 這個位置感覺用一個折返slider更合適一點？
13. 03:44:844 (4,1) - 這個重疊感覺破壞flow了……不如這組combo從03:45:160 (2) - 的位置開始最後再轉回來？

1. 00:04:423 (1) - 感覺有些彆扭啊這裡應該是note+slider才對吧……
2. 01:10:581 (5,6) - 天這個跳……stream結束就是這間距太兇殘了……
3. 01:13:265 (2,3) - 這個也是建議note+slider
4. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡嘗試下
   1. 1st. 把3和5的位置交換
   2. 2nd. 把4和換位後的5的位置交換
5. 01:57:949 (3,4) - 這兩個打起來有點彆扭，建議弧度放成和(1,2)一樣吧
6. 01:59:844 (1) - 放到距離stream遠一些的地方吧，這個樣子很容易造成讀圖失誤
7. 03:25:423 - 從這裡開始我真的無法理解明明是最後的高潮很燃的地方卻要減速，太難受了……強烈建議改掉……

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue~
中文mod~~

General:

1. 建議audio lead-in降低到1500ms，現在感覺有一點長了
2. "~" 這個符號單獨放在tag裡可能會有點問題吧

全修了~
Normal:

1. 00:07:423 (2) - 考慮挪到下個紅線？
2. 00:29:844 (4) - 第2個折返箭頭被(3)的分數擋住了
3. 01:50:686 - 這空拍聽著有點奇怪……既然前面一直都在下1/1的節奏了感覺這裡也沒必要刻意空一個出來，畢竟音樂沒有什麼明顯的變化……
4. 02:01:739 (4) - 建議加一次折返
5. 02:36:160 (2) - 這個建議拆成2個slider
6. 03:04:739 (3) - 移動到後面白線並且減少一次折返，既然你選擇跟vocal了那這裡感覺和vocal對齊比較好
7. 03:09:949 (4) - 這裡不建議用slider，過多的overlap是一方面，不是很好聽是另一方面，感覺一個note就足夠了

Hard:

1. 00:01:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 這裡……發生什麼事情了……我覺得上來就突然下這種梗可能太難了吧……而且這一段可能用固定的節奏會相對更好一些？一下子很密然後又沒有什麼理由的突然放空拍感覺聽著很違和……
2. 00:05:528 (7) - 把前個slider延長到這裡
3. 00:09:160 (3) - 和開頭一樣的建議……確實不是很好聽建議還是調整下節奏&排版吧……
4. 00:42:002 (2) - 加個折返？
5. 00:43:265 (2) - ^
6. 01:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - 考慮把(2,4)換個位置變成順時針的旋轉？
7. 01:15:002 (3) - Ctrl+r？
8. 01:17:207 - 這裡加個Note吧？疊到01:17:370 (2) - 頭上
9. 01:30:318 - 這裡也是建議加note
10. 02:05:686 (3) - 折返箭頭被分數擋了好多
11. 02:22:739 (2,3) - 感覺先note再slider會舒服一些
12. 03:32:370 (1,2) - 這個位置感覺用一個折返slider更合適一點？
13. 03:44:844 (4,1) - 這個重疊感覺破壞flow了……不如這組combo從03:45:160 (2) - 的位置開始最後再轉回來？

Insane:

1. 00:04:423 (1) - 感覺有些彆扭啊這裡應該是note+slider才對吧……
2. 01:10:581 (5,6) - 天這個跳……stream結束就是這間距太兇殘了……
3. 01:13:265 (2,3) - 這個也是建議note+slider
4. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡嘗試下
   1. 1st. 把3和5的位置交換
   2. 2nd. 把4和換位後的5的位置交換
5. 01:57:949 (3,4) - 這兩個打起來有點彆扭，建議弧度放成和(1,2)一樣吧
6. 01:59:844 (1) - 放到距離stream遠一些的地方吧，這個樣子很容易造成讀圖失誤
7. 03:25:423 - 從這裡開始我真的無法理解明明是最後的高潮很燃的地方卻要減速，太難受了……強烈建議改掉……

差不多就這些了，總之加油～

Philippines wrote:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL

SPOILER

1. You suggest that you add spinners on some breaks.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL

SPOILER

1. 01:06:160 (4) - New combo. add~
   
   
2. 01:51:949 - You're missing a note here. Same at 01:57:002. add~
   
   
3. 02:07:265 - Add a spinner that ends at 02:09:002. no , because of the star
   
   
4. 03:04:897 (3) - Move this slider at 03:04:739, then add one more reverse.ok~

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXXHARD

SPOILER

1. 00:56:370 (1) - The Spacing from the previous note is too near.fix~
   
   
2. You're missing a note at 01:01:107 & 01:01:265.add
   
   
3. 01:31:739 - Spacing ~?!
   
   
4. You're missing notes also at 03:07:423 & 03:07:581.add~

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXLUNATIC

SPOILER

1. 01:07:265 (1) - Try to make a slider like the slider before this note. It fits more.I can't understand
   
   
2. I guess that's it. I'm lovin your jumps! <3Thanks

Leorda wrote:

Hello

[General]
* Add "succubus" to tags, since he arrange this song
* Add "frontier records" to tags, since this song is in album "Wind" and made by Frontier Records


[Normal]
01:06:634 (1) - Why new combo here?
01:34:265 (1) - The repeating slider is 1/2 overlapped by hitbursts. So it maybe 1/2 hidden for beginners, so just suggestion I guess
01:52:265 (1,2) - Anti-jump? I think should be avoided in Normal diff


[Hard]
01:07:107 (5,1) - Swap these new combo for new pattern?
01:31:739 (1) - Some players are expecting that this snap at red tick, but it's not. For prevent this, consider to move further away from them?
02:54:002 (4,1) - Swap these new combo for new pattern?


Always loving it

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Normal]
01:09:476 (1,2,3) - a little hard for normal changed~
01:49:739 (1) - also add whistle at this pattern seems fine no~
02:39:949 (1) - not very beauty for here fix~

[Hard]
00:14:528 (4) - it's better not to hide the end of slider no~
00:51:634 (1) - why use closer distance.useless changed~
1.5 sv seems not very good for this diff. 1.3 seems good Um...no,thanks

[Lunatic]
A lot of anti jumps um.....Seems good Thanks

Good job.

Mio_chan wrote:

Here is my mod~ Don't give kudosu if you find this not useful

General
Rest time of each difficulty is different. It is better to make it the same, especially in normal difficulty

Normal
01:31:739 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not symmetric, maybe you can do this part in grid level 4

Hard
OD +1 ?
Suggestion: I think you can make this difficulty easier. (lower the max score to about 10m)
00:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - This is really confusing. Change it to this?

SPOILER

00:08:370 (1) at x=256, y=112 00:08:528 (2) starts at x=336, y=64 00:09:318 (3) at x=256, y=24

00:18:476 (1) - This is quite confusing since AR is only 7, stack this to 00:18:634 (2)? or make it without changing the DS
00:58:581 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:01:107 (1) - ^
02:06:160 (1) - The new combo here is not the same in the 1st verse, make it the same.
02:09:634 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:14:844 (1) - ^
02:57:634 (1,2,3) - It does not look nice. Change it to this?

SPOILER

03:07:423 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:12:949 (1) - ^
03:23:055 (1) - ^

Lunatic
AR +1 ?
The maximum score is a bit high (19.5m), it is rankable, but the recommended one is 18m. Just reminding you for this
Hum...I have asked this problem . A BAT respond me is 20m now? or I wrong .
01:06:634 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:16:739 (1) - ^
01:19:107 (1) - ^
01:49:423 (1) - ^
02:24:949 (1) - ^
02:40:739 (3,4) - This jump is hard to read, at least for me

Revengexsoyah wrote:

Hi. emmm i can make a taiko diffie ?

Regou wrote:

把每個diff的SV提高吧
舉個例,Lunatic目前的SV是1.4,把它調成2.1,然後在慢的部份用x0.66/x0.67 slider speed...?

Koro McAlpine wrote:

* = After that, check the spacing to make sure what it needs to be fixed.

[Normal]

00:48:476 (4) - Moving to x:408 y:72 is better to me.*
01:13:107 (2) - Moving to x:144 y:112 is better to me.*
01:17:213 (1) - Spacing.*
01:32:686 (4) - This could be better if you move this to x:132 y:42.*
01:35:528 (2) - Move one grid down.*
02:45:002 (1) - Moving to x:344 y:184 is better to me.*
03:25:107 (3) - Move one grid up.

[Hard]

00:39:002 (2) - Move this to x:300 y:27?
00:40:265 (2) - Move this to x:211 y:354?
00:58:107 (6) - This could be better if you move this to x:248 y:256.

Thank you.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

MY taiko (4 hours make it this )


bye good luck

l1106188 wrote:

Revengexsoyah wrote:

MY taiko (4 hours make it this )


bye good luck

Um...
I have to sorry to you ...that
the TK have some place ... i feel strange
I will ask for TK friend QAQ
sorry ><

Revengexsoyah wrote:

what ? u say me "sure" and i make

fuck

1. 01:16:423 - miss a note
2. 02:24:713 (12) - remove this note , it is excess
3. 02:42:476 - 02:45:007 - this continuous blow should change , or will let TK player feel uncomfortable
4. 02:55:107 - 02:57:318 - also ^
   
5. 02:52:739 (1) - the spinner should start at 02:52:897
6. 03:22:739 - add a note
7. 03:22:896 (1) - should remove
8. 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - ^ remove
   
9. 03:45:476 (17) - add finish

bossandy wrote:

IRC mod ???

18:37 <l1106188> : 老大救星出現了 (早灣QAQ)
18:38 <bossandy> : 诶
18:38 <l1106188> : 怎麼辦 老大現在有空嗎
18:38 <bossandy> : 怎麼了?
18:39 <l1106188> : 之前有人問我說可不可以做tk難度 我說可以 他做了之後 我看auto君打 感覺到有奇怪的地方
18:39 <l1106188> : 可是我不會看TK QAQ
18:39 <l1106188> : 因為這樣 我還沒上傳 他的tk難度 好像生氣了 QAQ
18:39 <bossandy> : 哦
18:39 <bossandy> : 我來看看
18:39 <bossandy> : 哪首歌?
18:39 <l1106188> : t/62924/start=60
18:39 *l1106188 is listening to (Le Ciel - Feather)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37033]
18:39 <l1106188> : 這首 QAQ
18:40 <l1106188> : 也不敢問阿三醬 因為阿三醬 之前跟我說他暫時不接mod 所以不敢問 ><"
18:40 <bossandy> : 嗯恩
18:40 <bossandy> : 等等喔
18:41 <l1106188> : 恩QAQ
18:43 <bossandy> : 先玩玩看
18:43 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:47 <bossandy> : 其實還好呢
18:47 <l1106188> : 讓我感覺奇怪的地方是
18:48 <l1106188> : 第一次副歌 跟結尾 QAQ 老大覺得呢?
18:48 <bossandy> : 我看看
18:49 <bossandy> : 哦
18:49 <bossandy> : 有地方缺note
18:49 <bossandy> : 01:16:423 少了哥note
18:50 <bossandy> : 還有要把SB從TK diff理刪除
18:50 <bossandy> : 然後個別加到每個diff
18:50 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:52 <bossandy> : 02:24:634 (11) - 這多餘的
18:52 <l1106188> : 恩!
18:52 <l1106188> : 我會告訴他 XD
18:52 <bossandy> : 你把02:24:634 (11) - 刪除後 比較容易聽的出來
18:52 <bossandy> : 02:23:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
18:53 <bossandy> : ^^^這才對
18:54 <bossandy> : 順便跟他說那團坑爹的連打也改一下
18:54 <l1106188> : lol
18:54 <l1106188> : 坑爹要怎麼轉成英文 ?
18:54 <l1106188> : XD
18:54 <bossandy> : xDD
18:55 <l1106188> : lol google翻譯 翻不出來 壞掉了
18:55 <bossandy> : 02:52:739 (1) -
18:55 <bossandy> : 這個spinner
18:55 <bossandy> : 02:52:897<<<應該是從這開始
18:55 <bossandy> : 聽guitar聲就知道了
18:56 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:56 <l1106188> : 老大有翻譯機嗎
18:56 <bossandy> : 沒有>_<
18:57 <bossandy> : 03:22:739 這裡加個note 跟這vocal
18:57 <bossandy> : 如果有加note
18:57 <bossandy> : 03:22:896 (1) - 刪除
18:57 <l1106188> : 恩
18:58 <bossandy> : 他上線的話跟我說
18:58 <bossandy> : 我跟他說一些話
18:58 <l1106188> : lol 外國人
18:58 <bossandy> : 知道:D
18:58 <bossandy> : 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - 刪除
18:58 <bossandy> : 沒音樂了
18:58 <l1106188> : 我在努力轉成英文當中 ..
18:59 <l1106188> : 蓮打怎麼翻 XD
18:59 <bossandy> : 不知道>_<
18:59 <bossandy> : 通常多說這傳連打打起來太難來是什麼的
18:59 <bossandy> : 都*
18:59 <bossandy> : 串*
18:59 <bossandy> : 03:45:476 (17) - 加finish
18:59 <l1106188> : 老大修正了兩個字 (超毆
18:59 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:59 <bossandy> : xDD
19:00 <bossandy> : 差不多了
19:00 <bossandy> : 還有把Setting都置中
19:00 <l1106188> : 他應該是直接副致我的lunatic
19:00 <l1106188> : 因為載副歌有看到影子 lol 他沒改好
19:00 <bossandy> : 那就沒關係了~
19:01 <l1106188> : XD
19:01 <l1106188> : 話說老大說的那串連打是指
19:01 <l1106188> : 02:42:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) -
19:01 <bossandy> : 嗯
19:01 <l1106188> : 還有這一串 ? 02:55:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) -
19:01 <l1106188> :
19:01 <bossandy> : BPM都190了 在這樣下去會搞成App
19:02 <bossandy> : 嗯
19:02 <l1106188> : 恩~ 老大 太謝謝你了 QAQ
19:02 <bossandy> : xDD
19:02 <l1106188> : 話說 這圖我擔心真的會變成app XD
19:02 <bossandy> : xDD
19:02 <l1106188> : 老大之前土潮的sv1.4 我改了 lol
19:03 <bossandy> : Taiko好像只能用1.4或1.6現在
19:03 <l1106188> : 不過那串蓮級要怎麼改?
19:03 <bossandy> : 看他本人的意願摟
19:03 <l1106188> : 恩~
19:03 <l1106188> : 那要說 這是 unrankable 嗎 ?
19:03 <bossandy> : 好 savelog~
19:04 <bossandy> : 不是
19:04 <l1106188> : 恩~
19:04 <bossandy> : 只是會讓Taiko player feel bad >_<

加油吧!!!~~

l1106188 wrote:

Revengexsoyah wrote:

what ? u say me "sure" and i make

fuck

Calm down
I had asked for TK friend and want to tell you ( like irc mod ?)
and i have submited
He say ~

1. 01:16:423 - miss a note
2. 02:24:713 (12) - remove this note , it is excess
3. 02:42:476 - 02:45:007 - this continuous blow should change , or will let TK player feel uncomfortable
4. 02:55:107 - 02:57:318 - also ^
   
5. 02:52:739 (1) - the spinner should start at 02:52:897
6. 03:22:739 - add a note
7. 03:22:896 (1) - should remove
8. 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - ^ remove
   
9. 03:45:476 (17) - add finish

Revengexsoyah wrote:

i clean my diffie

i center notes and put colors for combos

PD: DL this not the previous

bye

Revengexsoyah wrote:

and again
ty for help

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

- you can remove sliderborder and spinner colour in the taiko diff
- There are a lot of unsnapped slider in hard and lunatic as shown by AI

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:03:318 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:07:423 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:08:528 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:10:897 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:160 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:17:686 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:31:107 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:370 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:844 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:634 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:35:528 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:36:160 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:37:423 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

[Lunatic]
00:08:370 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:15:160 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:17:686 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:581 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).

- imo 1500ms lead-in may not be enough, try 2000ms.
- SB in taiko diff don't really work. You can copy all stuffs in .osb, paste it under events in ALL solo diffs (not taiko diff) and that would remove SB from taiko diff.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

All fixed from mod of wmfchris
Thanks 4 all

[attachment=0:e5bd5]Le Ciel - Feather (l1106188) [soyaH's Taiko Oni].osu[/attachment:e5bd5]



EDIT: i forget something now yes xD

1. 00:35:528 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
2. 02:26:844 (2) - 这个折返slider玩的时候不太容易看清, 前面的hitburst挡住了太多
   
3. 03:09:792 (4) - 这种真的是不太建议把slider放在前面note的hitburst之下, 很容易看花
   

Breeze wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:35:528 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
2. 02:26:844 (2) - 这个折返slider玩的时候不太容易看清, 前面的hitburst挡住了太多
   [attachment=1:40944]1.png[/attachment:40944]
3. 03:09:792 (4) - 这种真的是不太建议把slider放在前面note的hitburst之下, 很容易看花
   [attachment=0:40944]2.png[/attachment:40944]

其他没什么, 个人并不是特别喜欢AR9的图spacing比较大jump还比较多, AR9本身反应时间就很短, 大spacing的连打加上突然的大jump打起来感觉太难了, 而且也不是特别舒服, 当然这只是我个人的感觉

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  Offset +10.
  
  I guess you added wrong file "normal-slidertick.wav". This file is same as "normal-sliderslide.wav".

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  I think this diff is a bit difficult as the easiest diff.

1. 01:10:265 (1,2) - Wrong spacing here.

1. 02:27:318 (4) - it's kinda hard to read this note. How about place it like below?
   
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2. 02:57:634 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's not so good idea that changing SV here. It makes the player be confused.
3. 03:37:423 (1,2) - This narrow spacing is...not good.
4. 03:45:160 (2,4) - Try Ctrl+R on these notes. The flow will be better imo.

1. 00:44:055 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too difficult pattern especially 00:45:634 (1,2,3,4,5). Please add some sliders to make it easier.
2. 01:09:476 (6,7) - This jump is too...far. It can be fun even if you reduce the spacing here.
3. 01:10:739 (6,7) - ^
4. 01:12:634 (6) - I know why you put a note like this, but it's too far from 01:12:792 (1) so not fun to play. How about stacking it with 01:11:528 (1)'s top?
5. 01:15:160 (6) - ^ also too far.
6. 01:43:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's hard to read them. And just having wide spacing is not so fun to play. Try to make the variation of spacing like below.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:54:160 (3,4,5) - The spacing is too wide. Try to reduce it.
8. 02:02:213 (5) - Remove a note because you didn't add notes in other time(02:00:949, 02:03:476).
9. 02:26:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel these notes doesn't fit the music well. Try the pattern below.
   
10. 03:08:370 (5) - Add new combo to make it easier to read notes.
11. 03:09:633 (5) - ^
12. 03:17:212 (9) - Add new combo, and remove new combo from 03:17:370 (1).

1. 00:21:002 (T) - 0.50xSV is too slow imo. There is a big gap with 1.00xSV.
2. 01:11:370 (T) - Don't separate a KIAI in a short term on the taiko diff.
3. 02:19:660 (T) - ^
4. 03:17:765 (T) - ^

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry for taking long time.

[General]

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  Offset +10.
  
  I guess you added wrong file "normal-slidertick.wav". This file is same as "normal-sliderslide.wav".

[Normal]

• 
  I think this diff is a bit difficult as the easiest diff.

1. 01:10:265 (1,2) - Wrong spacing here.

[Hard]

1. 02:27:318 (4) - it's kinda hard to read this note. How about place it like below?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:57:634 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's not so good idea that changing SV here. It makes the player be confused.
3. 03:37:423 (1,2) - This narrow spacing is...not good.
4. 03:45:160 (2,4) - Try Ctrl+R on these notes. The flow will be better imo.

[Lunatic]

1. 00:44:055 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too difficult pattern especially 00:45:634 (1,2,3,4,5). Please add some sliders to make it easier.
2. 01:09:476 (6,7) - This jump is too...far. It can be fun even if you reduce the spacing here.
3. 01:10:739 (6,7) - ^
4. 01:12:634 (6) - I know why you put a note like this, but it's too far from 01:12:792 (1) so not fun to play. How about stacking it with 01:11:528 (1)'s top?
5. 01:15:160 (6) - ^ also too far.
6. 01:43:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's hard to read them. And just having wide spacing is not so fun to play. Try to make the variation of spacing like below.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:54:160 (3,4,5) - The spacing is too wide. Try to reduce it.
8. 02:02:213 (5) - Remove a note because you didn't add notes in other time(02:00:949, 02:03:476).
9. 02:26:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel these notes doesn't fit the music well. Try the pattern below.
   
10. 03:08:370 (5) - Add new combo to make it easier to read notes.
11. 03:09:633 (5) - ^
12. 03:17:212 (9) - Add new combo, and remove new combo from 03:17:370 (1).

That's it!
Not bad, but some patterns still need improving more in Lunatic.

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Irc mod ~

DarknessAngel wrote:

IRC MOD ~

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10:55 <l1106188> : 闇天使 灣早 OAO~~
10:55 <DarknessAngel> : 早
10:55 <DarknessAngel> : 看到你才發現我忘了那回事
10:55 <DarknessAngel> : 現在來不？
10:55 <l1106188> : 可以>"<
11:01 <DarknessAngel> : 01:39:959 (5) - cril + R 打起來更舒服
11:02 <l1106188> : fix~
11:03 <DarknessAngel> : 02:02:380 - 啊 同樣的地方耶
11:03 <DarknessAngel> : 之前提到的不適當加速
11:03 <l1106188> : 恩~
11:05 <DarknessAngel> : 02:27:170 (6) - 強烈建議分開 在連打之後又作停頓會讓SS覺發飆的..
11:05 <DarknessAngel> : 啊 沒說清楚
11:05 <DarknessAngel> : "不要重疊"
11:05 <l1106188> : XD?!
11:05 <DarknessAngel> : 這樣
11:05 <l1106188> : 恩~
11:05 <l1106188> : 分開了 ~ OwO
11:09 <DarknessAngel> : 03:21:644 (1) - 這裡我大概會斷
11:10 <DarknessAngel> : 03:21:328 (4,1) - 把這間距弄大點
11:10 <l1106188> : stack 呢?
11:10 <DarknessAngel> : 跳躍之後又是急停 我個人覺得分開會更有feel
11:10 <l1106188> : 恩
11:11 <DarknessAngel> : 03:21:644 (1,2,3) - 最好這3個保持間距一致
11:11 <DarknessAngel> : 感覺比較有氣勢點 做個大間距什麼的
11:12 <l1106188> : fix~
11:13 <l1106188> : 大間距阿 loool
11:13 <l1106188> : 我是看看 (被打
11:13 <l1106188> : 好了 XD
11:15 <DarknessAngel> : 我在看你的圖的時候 其實可以預想我玩的時候會有多艱難呢 因為一下子跳躍一下子急停
11:15 <DarknessAngel> : 卻沒有能夠明顯能判斷這些東西的依據 再來又是AR9 反應時間很短暫..
11:15 <DarknessAngel> : 我舉個例子
11:15 <l1106188> : loool
11:16 <DarknessAngel> : 03:42:486 (8,1) - 停頓 03:43:591 (3,4) - 加速
11:17 <DarknessAngel> : 卻都同間距呢
11:17 <DarknessAngel> : 改了估計很麻煩 沒有要你改 只是希望能注意一下~
11:17 <l1106188> : 恩 >~<
11:17 <l1106188> : 我想說這樣會比較觸
11:17 <l1106188> : (被打
11:18 <l1106188> : 我本來是想改ar8
11:18 <l1106188> : 可是 改成ar8之後 發現 我很不習慣 .. 有點奇怪的感覺
11:18 <l1106188> : 所以又改回ar9 loool
11:18 <DarknessAngel> : 觸 也不是這樣分的啦 像很多觸圖overlap和cofusing apacing 卻很難打
11:19 <DarknessAngel> : AR9那個沒要你改啊lol
11:19 <l1106188> : loool
11:19 <DarknessAngel> : 剛剛只是感想 評論
11:20 <DarknessAngel> : 我繼續看
11:21 <l1106188> : 恩~~
11:22 <DarknessAngel> : 00:34:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這些whistle音量-10% ?
11:22 <DarknessAngel> : 畢竟這段的音樂是最小聲的(又有一堆哨聲)呢
11:23 <l1106188> : okay~
11:25 <l1106188> : 可是做完之後才發現 沒梗改了
11:26 <DarknessAngel> : 00:44:065 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 這個只是提一下 為什麼不讓flow呈8字形呢？
11:26 <DarknessAngel> : 現在這個有點拗手
11:27 <l1106188> : 也對
11:29 <DarknessAngel> : 02:09:959 (2) - finish消掉 其他的kai我沒看到你加 只有這裡有
11:31 <DarknessAngel> : 03:00:486 - 啊 又是這加速
11:32 <DarknessAngel> : 好了嗎？
11:33 <l1106188> : 不行 那個8自行我放棄
11:33 <l1106188> : 我改成別的 loool
11:34 <DarknessAngel> : 結果你還是改了啊lol 跟你說提一下而已嘛
11:34 <DarknessAngel> : 那我繼續囉？
11:35 <l1106188> : 恩~
11:36 <DarknessAngel> : 03:45:170 (1,2) - ctrl + R ? 這逆時針三角跳會更來勁 你試試
11:36 <l1106188> : 真的耶 loool
11:40 <DarknessAngel> : 02:33:802 (5) - NC個 你這段幾乎都短NC 所以加在這裡剛好
11:41 <DarknessAngel> : 02:45:644 (5) - 加NC幫助判斷？
11:42 <l1106188> : 好了~
11:42 <DarknessAngel> : 03:04:749 (5) - 加NC在這裡強調跳躍
11:43 <l1106188> : fix >"<
11:44 <DarknessAngel> : 恩 就這樣吧
11:44 <l1106188> : okay ~