1. 00:09:949 (3) - Hmm, judging from your previous finish hitsound pattern, I think it fits more if finish is on slider's start here, while a clap is on slider's end
2. 00:24:792 (4) - (optional) Use a repeating 3/4 slider here? I personally feel a whistle should be on 00:25:265
3. 00:27:318 (2) - (optional) Slider wave here? (I've seen Muya's Captivate -Sabaki- using a long cutting slider wave like this also, and it plays well):
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:28:581 (3) - Uh... Do you really need to silence the repeat? A whistle with ~20% volume gives a more authentic sound there imo
5. 00:42:160 (2,3) - Minor stuff, but move both one grid left to create a better blanket pattern here
6. 00:48:476 (4) - (optional) I think it's better to continue your encircle pattern here - even if you don't want to, adding a slight curve after the red waypoint of your current slider would still be cute :3
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:50:686 (3) - I think you overuse clap here imo, I highly suggest to remove the clap on slider's start - let your clap on 00:50:370 (2)'s end do it's magic here (:
8. 00:55:739 (4) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid down to encircle (3)'s end better?
9. 01:03:318 (2,3,1) - (optional) Hmm, I think it would be nice if you unstack (2,3) and let (1)'s end stacked below 01:02:055 (2), for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:17:213 (1) - Finish on slider's end here? I can hear a cymbal sound coming from the song
11. 01:33:002 (5) - I wonder, why not continue your pentagon pattern with (1,2,3,4) here? It won't be hard to do
12. 01:36:792 (1) - I highly recommend to reduce this slider by 1/2 and add note on 01:37:739 (x) with clap (it really improves your rhythm here)
13. 01:47:213 (2) - Remove the clap from the slider's body here
14. 01:54:476 (1) - Add finish here also? (your previous and next new combos are accompanied with finishes as well, except this one)
15. 02:02:055 (x) - Finish hitsound should be here instead of your next (1) - feels weird having a finish on the red tick on this song
16. 02:04:581 (1) - (optional) Encircle (2), as you mostly did before?
17. 02:17:213 (3) - Way too close to (2), for this case, just move it upward a bit along with your (4)
18. 02:25:423 (1) - (optional) Create a blanket slider like this? (even plays good with your next (2)!)
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 02:47:528 (1) - Again, finish should be on this slider's start instead of on (3)'s end
20. 03:04:739 (3) - Remove the clap on the slider's body, also (optional remove clap on the second slider repeat also to emphasize the finish on slider's end
21. 03:14:055 (2) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid down and the endpoint one grid right to make a tidier blanket with (1)
22. 03:35:528 (1,1) - Although new combo helps already, why not space them apart? Plays better imo
23. 03:44:528 (2,3) - (optional) Try this rhythm? Fits the ending guitar better imo:
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:00:792 (1) - Add finish on slider's end also? (because you did the same rhythm on 00:04:265 (3,4), and it sounds good with that extra finish)
2. 00:10:265 (1,2) - On sliderstreams like this, I prefer to tilt them a bit, because they will look/flow better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:13:897 (2,4) - I highly suggest to remove the clap on both slider's end to emphasize the claps on (3,5)
4. 00:31:107 (1,4) - Hmm, alter these two into slider waves? Long straight sliders like this don't build flow good enough imo
5. 00:45:949 (3) - (optional) Finish on slider's end here (instead of clap)?
6. 00:49:107 (1) - Clap on slider's end also, to unify the hitsounds with (5)?
7. 00:50:686 (6) - I personally feel it's better to use a single circle here instead. Also, if you do this, make sure (6,1,2)'s distance equal afterwards:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:581 (1) - It's closer to (6) rather than to (1). Is it intentional?
9. 01:05:213 (1) - Stack to (4)? (also, (optional) alternatively you can make this encircle your previous (1): )
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:07:107 (x) - Add note? There's a distinctive rhythm here
11. 01:18:476 (2,3,4) - (optional) I think it will play better if the symmetry is kept on (3,4) instead of creating a triangle pattern, it plays better before the break imo
12. 01:33:002 (1,3) - I highly recommend to continue on encircling (2) here, it's not that hard to do but increases your flow a lot here
13. 01:49:107 (4) - As your previous clap on (2) is placed on the red tick, move the clap here to slider's repeat also?
14. 01:54:160 (3) - I highly recommend to use finish on slider's end here instead of clap to emphasize a new part of the song
15. 01:59:134 (7) - (optional) Stack this below (5)? Will look tidier in play mode imo
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:06:476 (2) - Another finish on slider's end here sounds good, really (it's to continue your previous nearby finishes)
17. 02:15:949 (3) - (optional) Slight slider wave here? Cuts 02:15:476 (2) better imo
18. 02:26:055 (7) - Finish should be on this slider's start, instead of (6)
19. 02:27:318 (4) - I highly recommend to unstack this from (3) and put it below 02:26:055 (7)'s end instead - (3,4)'s stack will ruin the symmetry in play mode
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 02:51:002 (3) - Should be a clap on slider's start here to keep your clapping pattern consistent
21. 03:05:055 (3,4) - - Minor stuff, but move these a grid right to make the diamond pattern here tidier
22. 03:09:792 (4) - A bit hard to tell where's this slider will be going without snaking slider on, but that's not a big problem
23. 03:17:844 (1) - No finish on slider's start here? o.o
24. 03:22:266 (3) - Your previous 03:21:002 (3) doesn't have clap on its start, and I highly recommend to remove clap from this slider's start as well
25. 03:32:370 (5) - New combo here (it would be really tricky without a new combo guiding)

1. 00:05:213 (3) - (optional) Add finish on slider's start as well?
2. 00:15:949 (1,3,4) - This stack looks weird in play mode. I suggest to create a triangle jump here, to avoid such stack:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:265 (4) - Should be moved one grid right so (3,4,5,6)'s spacing equal
4. 00:20:686 (3) - Hmm, imo you're overusing clap here, it's better to use claps only on (1,2)
5. 00:46:265 (5) - No finish here? @_@
6. 00:46:581 (1,1) - (optional) Tilt them both facing each other's (2)? Looks better imo
7. 00:52:581 (3,3,3) - Remove claps on these three? I personally feel it's not a good place for clap here
8. 00:59:686 (3) - I think you're too forcing symmetry here, try to create a jump like below. Plays better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:06:634 (1) - (optional) I think it's better if you curve this also, like what you did on your next (1)
10. 01:12:792 (1) - (optional) Alter the slider like this? It encircles (5) better, thus it doesn't really affect gameplay here
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:37:423 (3) - I highly recommend to remove the sliderwhistle, it sounds abrupt here
12. 01:48:792 (3) - To add more power from the hitsound, add clap also to this slider's end?
13. 01:59:055 (3) - (optional) Try to remove the clap here, to get a fresher hitsound here
14. 02:02:055 (4) - I highly recommend to move this 1/2 later, as it follows the music much better
15. 02:12:160 (1) - Is it intentional to encircle (3) like this? I think it's better to encircle it normally...
16. 02:26:844 (2) - Add two extra repeats? Fits the background drums imo
17. 02:29:213 (1,2,3) - I think it's much better if you create a triangle jump here instead of repeating slider. If you don't wanna follow, I still highly recommend to place your note on 02:27:318 (3)'s position:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:40:581 (3) - I highly recommend to move this 1/2 earlier, to follow the background drums better
19. 02:51:476 (2) - Minor stuff, but move the first waypoint two grids up and the second waypoint two grids right to encircle (3) better
20. 03:16:660 (3) - Same as 01:59:055 (3)
21. 03:23:686 (3) - Not perfectly stacked to (6) - barely noticeable though
22. 03:29:528 (2) - (optional) Try this? Fits more rather than that straight slider imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
23. 03:42:318 (5) - Perhaps finish on slider's start also (considering the position of your previous finishes)?

1. Missing SB Elements untitled.jpg 这货在osb里有在你文件夹里没有
2. lead-in不一样 Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: - [Hard] : 1000 - [Lunatic] : 2000 - [Normal] : 1000
3. 个人感觉combo colour太浅了不合背景 不如

Niva wrote:

Hello, l1106188~
I want to do mod4mod (as you stated in queue)...

[General]

-> Hmm, remove "~" from tags? (osu! web search can't search for tags less than 3 characters)R~
-> Also, lead-in time in Lunatic is different (set it to 1000 because it starts on the same point with Normal and Hard)fix~

[Normal]

1. 00:09:949 (3) - Hmm, judging from your previous finish hitsound pattern, I think it fits more if finish is on slider's start here, while a clap is on slider's end
2. 00:24:792 (4) - (optional) Use a repeating 3/4 slider here? I personally feel a whistle should be on 00:25:265
3. 00:27:318 (2) - (optional) Slider wave here? (I've seen Muya's Captivate -Sabaki- using a long cutting slider wave like this also, and it plays well):
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:28:581 (3) - Uh... Do you really need to silence the repeat? A whistle with ~20% volume gives a more authentic sound there imo
5. 00:42:160 (2,3) - Minor stuff, but move both one grid left to create a better blanket pattern here
6. 00:48:476 (4) - (optional) I think it's better to continue your encircle pattern here - even if you don't want to, adding a slight curve after the red waypoint of your current slider would still be cute :3
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:50:686 (3) - I think you overuse clap here imo, I highly suggest to remove the clap on slider's start - let your clap on 00:50:370 (2)'s end do it's magic here (:
8. 00:55:739 (4) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid down to encircle (3)'s end better?
9. 01:03:318 (2,3,1) - (optional) Hmm, I think it would be nice if you unstack (2,3) and let (1)'s end stacked below 01:02:055 (2), for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:17:213 (1) - Finish on slider's end here? I can hear a cymbal sound coming from the song
11. 01:33:002 (5) - I wonder, why not continue your pentagon pattern with (1,2,3,4) here? It won't be hard to do
12. 01:36:792 (1) - I highly recommend to reduce this slider by 1/2 and add note on 01:37:739 (x) with clap (it really improves your rhythm here)
13. 01:47:213 (2) - Remove the clap from the slider's body here
14. 01:54:476 (1) - Add finish here also? (your previous and next new combos are accompanied with finishes as well, except this one)
15. 02:02:055 (x) - Finish hitsound should be here instead of your next (1) - feels weird having a finish on the red tick on this song
16. 02:04:581 (1) - (optional) Encircle (2), as you mostly did before?
17. 02:17:213 (3) - Way too close to (2), for this case, just move it upward a bit along with your (4)
18. 02:25:423 (1) - (optional) Create a blanket slider like this? (even plays good with your next (2)!)
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 02:47:528 (1) - Again, finish should be on this slider's start instead of on (3)'s end
20. 03:04:739 (3) - Remove the clap on the slider's body, also (optional remove clap on the second slider repeat also to emphasize the finish on slider's end
21. 03:14:055 (2) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid down and the endpoint one grid right to make a tidier blanket with (1)
22. 03:35:528 (1,1) - Although new combo helps already, why not space them apart? Plays better imo
23. 03:44:528 (2,3) - (optional) Try this rhythm? Fits the ending guitar better imo:
    
    SPOILER

    

[Hard]

1. 00:00:792 (1) - Add finish on slider's end also? (because you did the same rhythm on 00:04:265 (3,4), and it sounds good with that extra finish)
2. 00:10:265 (1,2) - On sliderstreams like this, I prefer to tilt them a bit, because they will look/flow better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:13:897 (2,4) - I highly suggest to remove the clap on both slider's end to emphasize the claps on (3,5)
4. 00:31:107 (1,4) - Hmm, alter these two into slider waves? Long straight sliders like this don't build flow good enough imo
5. 00:45:949 (3) - (optional) Finish on slider's end here (instead of clap)?
6. 00:49:107 (1) - Clap on slider's end also, to unify the hitsounds with (5)?
7. 00:50:686 (6) - I personally feel it's better to use a single circle here instead. Also, if you do this, make sure (6,1,2)'s distance equal afterwards:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:581 (1) - It's closer to (6) rather than to (1). Is it intentional?
9. 01:05:213 (1) - Stack to (4)? (also, (optional) alternatively you can make this encircle your previous (1): )
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:07:107 (x) - Add note? There's a distinctive rhythm here
11. 01:18:476 (2,3,4) - (optional) I think it will play better if the symmetry is kept on (3,4) instead of creating a triangle pattern, it plays better before the break imo
12. 01:33:002 (1,3) - I highly recommend to continue on encircling (2) here, it's not that hard to do but increases your flow a lot here
13. 01:49:107 (4) - As your previous clap on (2) is placed on the red tick, move the clap here to slider's repeat also?
14. 01:54:160 (3) - I highly recommend to use finish on slider's end here instead of clap to emphasize a new part of the song
15. 01:59:134 (7) - (optional) Stack this below (5)? Will look tidier in play mode imo
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:06:476 (2) - Another finish on slider's end here sounds good, really (it's to continue your previous nearby finishes)
17. 02:15:949 (3) - (optional) Slight slider wave here? Cuts 02:15:476 (2) better imo
18. 02:26:055 (7) - Finish should be on this slider's start, instead of (6)
19. 02:27:318 (4) - I highly recommend to unstack this from (3) and put it below 02:26:055 (7)'s end instead - (3,4)'s stack will ruin the symmetry in play mode
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 02:51:002 (3) - Should be a clap on slider's start here to keep your clapping pattern consistent
21. 03:05:055 (3,4) - - Minor stuff, but move these a grid right to make the diamond pattern here tidier
22. 03:09:792 (4) - A bit hard to tell where's this slider will be going without snaking slider on, but that's not a big problem
23. 03:17:844 (1) - No finish on slider's start here? o.o
24. 03:22:266 (3) - Your previous 03:21:002 (3) doesn't have clap on its start, and I highly recommend to remove clap from this slider's start as well
25. 03:32:370 (5) - New combo here (it would be really tricky without a new combo guiding)

[Lunatic]

1. 00:05:213 (3) - (optional) Add finish on slider's start as well?
2. 00:15:949 (1,3,4) - This stack looks weird in play mode. I suggest to create a triangle jump here, to avoid such stack:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:265 (4) - Should be moved one grid right so (3,4,5,6)'s spacing equal
4. 00:20:686 (3) - Hmm, imo you're overusing clap here, it's better to use claps only on (1,2)
5. 00:46:265 (5) - No finish here? @_@
6. 00:46:581 (1,1) - (optional) Tilt them both facing each other's (2)? Looks better imo
7. 00:52:581 (3,3,3) - Remove claps on these three? I personally feel it's not a good place for clap here
8. 00:59:686 (3) - I think you're too forcing symmetry here, try to create a jump like below. Plays better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:06:634 (1) - (optional) I think it's better if you curve this also, like what you did on your next (1)
10. 01:12:792 (1) - (optional) Alter the slider like this? It encircles (5) better, thus it doesn't really affect gameplay here
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:37:423 (3) - I highly recommend to remove the sliderwhistle, it sounds abrupt here
12. 01:48:792 (3) - To add more power from the hitsound, add clap also to this slider's end?
13. 01:59:055 (3) - (optional) Try to remove the clap here, to get a fresher hitsound here
14. 02:02:055 (4) - I highly recommend to move this 1/2 later, as it follows the music much better
15. 02:12:160 (1) - Is it intentional to encircle (3) like this? I think it's better to encircle it normally...
16. 02:26:844 (2) - Add two extra repeats? Fits the background drums imo
17. 02:29:213 (1,2,3) - I think it's much better if you create a triangle jump here instead of repeating slider. If you don't wanna follow, I still highly recommend to place your note on 02:27:318 (3)'s position:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:40:581 (3) - I highly recommend to move this 1/2 earlier, to follow the background drums better
19. 02:51:476 (2) - Minor stuff, but move the first waypoint two grids up and the second waypoint two grids right to encircle (3) better
20. 03:16:660 (3) - Same as 01:59:055 (3)
21. 03:23:686 (3) - Not perfectly stacked to (6) - barely noticeable though
22. 03:29:528 (2) - (optional) Try this? Fits more rather than that straight slider imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
23. 03:42:318 (5) - Perhaps finish on slider's start also (considering the position of your previous finishes)?

That's it from me, I hope it helps~

My map's link is on your queue - good luck :3

LKs wrote:

General

1. Missing SB Elements untitled.jpg 这货在osb里有在你文件夹里没有fix~
2. lead-in不一样 Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: - [Hard] : 1000 - [Lunatic] : 2000 - [Normal] : 1000fix~
3. 个人感觉combo colour太浅了不合背景 不如changed~

Normal

00:04:897 (3) - 不要finishok~
00:08:370 (1) - 避免一个1/2的范围内出现两个finish 同理之后ok~
00:21:002 (1) - 开头不要用太鼓kat音 thanks
00:50:686 (3) - 不要clapok~
01:10:739 (1) - 头whistle尾finishfix~
01:16:739 (5) - 这两个NC不太好 这里不用了ok~

Hard

00:32:370 (2,3) - 我推荐这么做 前一一格然后加一个notefix~
00:51:002 (1) - clap 不要finishno~
02:46:739 (2,3) - 你把3slider放在2note前面多舒服ok~

Lunatic

00:21:002 (1,2) - 既然是luna难度 那么我觉得在12这种节奏之间放个note也是没问题的!
01:00:634 (5) - 后两个折返加whistle note7加whistleno~

还好 Good luck for ranking

Black → Suggestion.

Blue → If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.

Red → Please change the absolute.

Combo1 : 174,87,0
Combo2 : 187,0,0
Combo3 : 157,60,255

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

Very late.. sorry

request from my queue

Black → Suggestion.

Blue → If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.

Red → Please change the absolute.

[General]

●Song Setup > Colours > http://puu.sh/l6BU

Combo1 : 174,87,0
Combo2 : 187,0,0
Combo3 : 157,60,255

change ~

[Normal]

●Song Setup > Difficulty > AR-1 or -2. OD+1. HP+1 fix~
●Song Setup > Advanced > Stack Leniency : 3 → 7 change pleasefix~~
●02:18:160 (4) - spacingfix~
●01:06:634 (1) - Remove a new combo ok
●01:33:002 (5) - 1 grid downok
●03:16:581 (3) - ^^

[Hard]

●Song Setup > Advanced > Stack Leniency : 3 → 7 change please fix~
●00:17:686 (8) - Move (x:328 y:388)no
-00:18:634 (2) - Move (x:336 y:192) no thanks~
-00:19:107 (3) - Move (x:328 y:388)no~thank you

[Lunatic]

●OD+1?add~
●fine~

Revengexsoyah wrote:

~Only Suggestion~

-General

u need [Easy] for rank this map (this is the critera ranker)
I can't make easy,lol

[Normal]
00:59:213: add break time
02:07:423: ^
03:05:528: ^
If i add , the star will exceed 3 stars
[Hard]
so fine
Thanks~
[Lunatic]
01:19:107: o shiet xDD u can fix this spacing ???fix~
O shit so fucking hard xDD
Yes ... I also think,XD..


star

• [General]

1. What does lightning.jpg's purpose?

• [Normal]

1. Make the Hitcircle larger..-1 CS
   
2. 00:59:213 (x) - Add a break here
3. 02:01:107 (1) - Remove NC here
4. 02:07:423 (x) - Add a break here
5. 03:05:528 (x) - ^
6. 03:20:370 (1) - NC here
7. 03:21:634 (3) - Remove NC
8. 03:22:739 (5) - NC here

• [Hard]

1. 00:38:686 (x) - a 1.50 slider speed here is very fast for hard.Try removing those timing points? imo
2. 01:03:949 (1) - Add finish on the head of the slider
3. 02:09:634 (1) - Since it's the first part of the kiai.Add a Finish on the first part of the slider
4. 02:38:686 (3) - Remove NC
5. 03:07:739 (1) - Add finish on the head of this slider
6. 03:09:002 (1) - Add finish.Well this is the last kiai part so let's add some finish
7. 03:10:265 (1) - Add finish on the head of this slider
8. 03:11:528 (1) - ^
9. 03:14:055 (2) - ^
10. 03:19:107 (1) - ^
11. 03:20:370 (1) - ^
12. 03:21:634 (1) - ^

• [Lunatic]

1. 02:29:213 (1) - Delete this slider
2. 02:57:949 (1) - Why is this too close to 02:57:634 (1)? Make a distance on this this note
3. 03:07:739 - 03:25:423 - Just like what i said in hard.Add more finsih

Genkishi wrote:

• [General]

1. What does lightning.jpg's purpose?

• [Normal]

1. Make the Hitcircle larger..-1 CS
   
2. 00:59:213 (x) - Add a break here
3. 02:01:107 (1) - Remove NC here
4. 02:07:423 (x) - Add a break here
5. 03:05:528 (x) - ^
6. 03:20:370 (1) - NC here
7. 03:21:634 (3) - Remove NC
8. 03:22:739 (5) - NC here

fix~ except break time ~ because add the star will excess 3

• [Hard]

1. 00:38:686 (x) - a 1.50 slider speed here is very fast for hard.Try removing those timing points? imo
2. 01:03:949 (1) - Add finish on the head of the slider
3. 02:09:634 (1) - Since it's the first part of the kiai.Add a Finish on the first part of the slider
4. 02:38:686 (3) - Remove NC
5. 03:07:739 (1) - Add finish on the head of this slider
6. 03:09:002 (1) - Add finish.Well this is the last kiai part so let's add some finish
7. 03:10:265 (1) - Add finish on the head of this slider
8. 03:11:528 (1) - ^
9. 03:14:055 (2) - ^
10. 03:19:107 (1) - ^
11. 03:20:370 (1) - ^
12. 03:21:634 (1) - ^

I only fix a little~ I think add so finish in there will feel strange

• [Lunatic]

1. 02:29:213 (1) - Delete this slider
2. 02:57:949 (1) - Why is this too close to 02:57:634 (1)? Make a distance on this this note
3. 03:07:739 - 03:25:423 - Just like what i said in hard.Add more finsih

fix~

That's All!

ax_pokl wrote:

[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
[Genearal]
good map~.
the red color is too dark.
[Hard]
approach rate => 8
01:16:423 (4,1) - hard to read. 我覺得還可以XD
00:05:528 (7,1) - no nc? hard to read. 不了~謝謝
00:21:002 (1) - ..!?
02:26:686 (1,2,3) - this three notes have same distance can be confused.修好了~
03:37:739 (2,1) - no stack?no~
[Lunatic]
Hp rate => 6?我覺得這難度讓它2一點xD
00:11:528 (3,4,5,6) - it's hard to read.(do not stack?.)no~
00:13:423 (1,2) - (same)^
03:04:264 (5) - no return here?no~
03:13:423 (3,1) - (reverse?)Thanks~
[Normal]
approach rate => 4?改了~
00:41:213 (1,3) - not same? make it same?no~
00:50:686 (3,1) - conbine them?no~
01:08:370 (2,1) - (jump it?)no~
01:47:213 (2,1) - (jump it?)no~
02:06:476 (3,1) - (add a spinner here?)no~Thanks
[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
（没看到你会中文。）

forevehappy wrote:

[Norma]

沒什麼大問題

[Hard]

+模式DT後顯得太快了

AR7差不多
改了~
Lunatci:

00:33:318(4)-沒蓋好 FIX~

02:40:186(2)-放在藍線上? 我是打算配合電吉他聲音~

小弟我第一次mod有很多不清楚的地方

東方觸圖又要增加拉~:D

要加油喔!

聲音部分改天在mod..

l1106188 wrote:

forevehappy wrote:

[Norma]

沒什麼大問題

[Hard]

+模式DT後顯得太快了

AR7差不多
[/color]
Lunatci:

00:33:318(4)-沒蓋好 FIX~

02:40:186(2)-放在藍線上? 我是打算配合電吉他聲音~

小弟我第一次mod有很多不清楚的地方

東方觸圖又要增加拉~:D

要加油喔!

聲音部分改天在mod..

謝謝你的modding!
這是善良圖 xD!(不過我好像無法pc...)
Upload!!!

forevehappy wrote:

02:39:949 - 有蓋在藍線上的那段 (1.2) - (1)結尾拉到原來(2)的藍線 (2)從藍線往後調一格到白線上，結尾再拉到下一個白線上

我覺得這樣比較適合...

突然有時間可以mod(吃飯去...)

Jacob wrote:

Hello! From my M4M queue.

[Normal]

00:59:055 (X) - Looks awkward without a spinner or a break. add,the star will...
01:53:528 (2) - Spacing.fix~
02:07:265 (X) - Looks odd without spinner or break.will ... 3 more stars
02:14:055 (4) - Really confusing for new players. Unstack this from under the sliders. fix~
02:21:949 (4) - Clap add~
03:05:370 (X) - Awkward without a break or a spinner.XD
03:23:528 (2) - Delete NCD~

[Hard]

02:27:318 (4) - I hit this note too late and missed. Fix the spacing.fix~?
03:12:949 (1) - Read this as a jump - fix the spacing.?!

[Lunatic]

Looks nice. I can't mod what I can't play, though.

1. 建議audio lead-in降低到1500ms，現在感覺有一點長了
2. "~" 這個符號單獨放在tag裡可能會有點問題吧

1. 00:07:423 (2) - 考慮挪到下個紅線？
2. 00:29:844 (4) - 第2個折返箭頭被(3)的分數擋住了
3. 01:50:686 - 這空拍聽著有點奇怪……既然前面一直都在下1/1的節奏了感覺這裡也沒必要刻意空一個出來，畢竟音樂沒有什麼明顯的變化……
4. 02:01:739 (4) - 建議加一次折返
5. 02:36:160 (2) - 這個建議拆成2個slider
6. 03:04:739 (3) - 移動到後面白線並且減少一次折返，既然你選擇跟vocal了那這裡感覺和vocal對齊比較好
7. 03:09:949 (4) - 這裡不建議用slider，過多的overlap是一方面，不是很好聽是另一方面，感覺一個note就足夠了

1. 00:01:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 這裡……發生什麼事情了……我覺得上來就突然下這種梗可能太難了吧……而且這一段可能用固定的節奏會相對更好一些？一下子很密然後又沒有什麼理由的突然放空拍感覺聽著很違和……
2. 00:05:528 (7) - 把前個slider延長到這裡
3. 00:09:160 (3) - 和開頭一樣的建議……確實不是很好聽建議還是調整下節奏&排版吧……
4. 00:42:002 (2) - 加個折返？
5. 00:43:265 (2) - ^
6. 01:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - 考慮把(2,4)換個位置變成順時針的旋轉？
7. 01:15:002 (3) - Ctrl+r？
8. 01:17:207 - 這裡加個Note吧？疊到01:17:370 (2) - 頭上
9. 01:30:318 - 這裡也是建議加note
10. 02:05:686 (3) - 折返箭頭被分數擋了好多
11. 02:22:739 (2,3) - 感覺先note再slider會舒服一些
12. 03:32:370 (1,2) - 這個位置感覺用一個折返slider更合適一點？
13. 03:44:844 (4,1) - 這個重疊感覺破壞flow了……不如這組combo從03:45:160 (2) - 的位置開始最後再轉回來？

1. 00:04:423 (1) - 感覺有些彆扭啊這裡應該是note+slider才對吧……
2. 01:10:581 (5,6) - 天這個跳……stream結束就是這間距太兇殘了……
3. 01:13:265 (2,3) - 這個也是建議note+slider
4. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡嘗試下
   1. 1st. 把3和5的位置交換
   2. 2nd. 把4和換位後的5的位置交換
5. 01:57:949 (3,4) - 這兩個打起來有點彆扭，建議弧度放成和(1,2)一樣吧
6. 01:59:844 (1) - 放到距離stream遠一些的地方吧，這個樣子很容易造成讀圖失誤
7. 03:25:423 - 從這裡開始我真的無法理解明明是最後的高潮很燃的地方卻要減速，太難受了……強烈建議改掉……

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue~
中文mod~~

General:

1. 建議audio lead-in降低到1500ms，現在感覺有一點長了
2. "~" 這個符號單獨放在tag裡可能會有點問題吧

全修了~
Normal:

1. 00:07:423 (2) - 考慮挪到下個紅線？
2. 00:29:844 (4) - 第2個折返箭頭被(3)的分數擋住了
3. 01:50:686 - 這空拍聽著有點奇怪……既然前面一直都在下1/1的節奏了感覺這裡也沒必要刻意空一個出來，畢竟音樂沒有什麼明顯的變化……
4. 02:01:739 (4) - 建議加一次折返
5. 02:36:160 (2) - 這個建議拆成2個slider
6. 03:04:739 (3) - 移動到後面白線並且減少一次折返，既然你選擇跟vocal了那這裡感覺和vocal對齊比較好
7. 03:09:949 (4) - 這裡不建議用slider，過多的overlap是一方面，不是很好聽是另一方面，感覺一個note就足夠了

Hard:

1. 00:01:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 這裡……發生什麼事情了……我覺得上來就突然下這種梗可能太難了吧……而且這一段可能用固定的節奏會相對更好一些？一下子很密然後又沒有什麼理由的突然放空拍感覺聽著很違和……
2. 00:05:528 (7) - 把前個slider延長到這裡
3. 00:09:160 (3) - 和開頭一樣的建議……確實不是很好聽建議還是調整下節奏&排版吧……
4. 00:42:002 (2) - 加個折返？
5. 00:43:265 (2) - ^
6. 01:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - 考慮把(2,4)換個位置變成順時針的旋轉？
7. 01:15:002 (3) - Ctrl+r？
8. 01:17:207 - 這裡加個Note吧？疊到01:17:370 (2) - 頭上
9. 01:30:318 - 這裡也是建議加note
10. 02:05:686 (3) - 折返箭頭被分數擋了好多
11. 02:22:739 (2,3) - 感覺先note再slider會舒服一些
12. 03:32:370 (1,2) - 這個位置感覺用一個折返slider更合適一點？
13. 03:44:844 (4,1) - 這個重疊感覺破壞flow了……不如這組combo從03:45:160 (2) - 的位置開始最後再轉回來？

Insane:

1. 00:04:423 (1) - 感覺有些彆扭啊這裡應該是note+slider才對吧……
2. 01:10:581 (5,6) - 天這個跳……stream結束就是這間距太兇殘了……
3. 01:13:265 (2,3) - 這個也是建議note+slider
4. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡嘗試下
   1. 1st. 把3和5的位置交換
   2. 2nd. 把4和換位後的5的位置交換
5. 01:57:949 (3,4) - 這兩個打起來有點彆扭，建議弧度放成和(1,2)一樣吧
6. 01:59:844 (1) - 放到距離stream遠一些的地方吧，這個樣子很容易造成讀圖失誤
7. 03:25:423 - 從這裡開始我真的無法理解明明是最後的高潮很燃的地方卻要減速，太難受了……強烈建議改掉……

差不多就這些了，總之加油～

Philippines wrote:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL

SPOILER

1. You suggest that you add spinners on some breaks.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL

SPOILER

1. 01:06:160 (4) - New combo. add~
   
   
2. 01:51:949 - You're missing a note here. Same at 01:57:002. add~
   
   
3. 02:07:265 - Add a spinner that ends at 02:09:002. no , because of the star
   
   
4. 03:04:897 (3) - Move this slider at 03:04:739, then add one more reverse.ok~

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXXHARD

SPOILER

1. 00:56:370 (1) - The Spacing from the previous note is too near.fix~
   
   
2. You're missing a note at 01:01:107 & 01:01:265.add
   
   
3. 01:31:739 - Spacing ~?!
   
   
4. You're missing notes also at 03:07:423 & 03:07:581.add~

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXLUNATIC

SPOILER

1. 01:07:265 (1) - Try to make a slider like the slider before this note. It fits more.I can't understand
   
   
2. I guess that's it. I'm lovin your jumps! <3Thanks

Leorda wrote:

Hello

[General]
* Add "succubus" to tags, since he arrange this song
* Add "frontier records" to tags, since this song is in album "Wind" and made by Frontier Records


[Normal]
01:06:634 (1) - Why new combo here?
01:34:265 (1) - The repeating slider is 1/2 overlapped by hitbursts. So it maybe 1/2 hidden for beginners, so just suggestion I guess
01:52:265 (1,2) - Anti-jump? I think should be avoided in Normal diff


[Hard]
01:07:107 (5,1) - Swap these new combo for new pattern?
01:31:739 (1) - Some players are expecting that this snap at red tick, but it's not. For prevent this, consider to move further away from them?
02:54:002 (4,1) - Swap these new combo for new pattern?


Always loving it

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Normal]
01:09:476 (1,2,3) - a little hard for normal changed~
01:49:739 (1) - also add whistle at this pattern seems fine no~
02:39:949 (1) - not very beauty for here fix~

[Hard]
00:14:528 (4) - it's better not to hide the end of slider no~
00:51:634 (1) - why use closer distance.useless changed~
1.5 sv seems not very good for this diff. 1.3 seems good Um...no,thanks

[Lunatic]
A lot of anti jumps um.....Seems good Thanks

Good job.

Mio_chan wrote:

Here is my mod~ Don't give kudosu if you find this not useful

General
Rest time of each difficulty is different. It is better to make it the same, especially in normal difficulty

Normal
01:31:739 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not symmetric, maybe you can do this part in grid level 4

Hard
OD +1 ?
Suggestion: I think you can make this difficulty easier. (lower the max score to about 10m)
00:08:370 (1,2,3,4) - This is really confusing. Change it to this?

SPOILER

00:08:370 (1) at x=256, y=112 00:08:528 (2) starts at x=336, y=64 00:09:318 (3) at x=256, y=24

00:18:476 (1) - This is quite confusing since AR is only 7, stack this to 00:18:634 (2)? or make it without changing the DS
00:58:581 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:01:107 (1) - ^
02:06:160 (1) - The new combo here is not the same in the 1st verse, make it the same.
02:09:634 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:14:844 (1) - ^
02:57:634 (1,2,3) - It does not look nice. Change it to this?

SPOILER

03:07:423 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:12:949 (1) - ^
03:23:055 (1) - ^

Lunatic
AR +1 ?
The maximum score is a bit high (19.5m), it is rankable, but the recommended one is 18m. Just reminding you for this
Hum...I have asked this problem . A BAT respond me is 20m now? or I wrong .
01:06:634 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:16:739 (1) - ^
01:19:107 (1) - ^
01:49:423 (1) - ^
02:24:949 (1) - ^
02:40:739 (3,4) - This jump is hard to read, at least for me

Revengexsoyah wrote:

Hi. emmm i can make a taiko diffie ?

Regou wrote:

把每個diff的SV提高吧
舉個例,Lunatic目前的SV是1.4,把它調成2.1,然後在慢的部份用x0.66/x0.67 slider speed...?

Koro McAlpine wrote:

* = After that, check the spacing to make sure what it needs to be fixed.

[Normal]

00:48:476 (4) - Moving to x:408 y:72 is better to me.*
01:13:107 (2) - Moving to x:144 y:112 is better to me.*
01:17:213 (1) - Spacing.*
01:32:686 (4) - This could be better if you move this to x:132 y:42.*
01:35:528 (2) - Move one grid down.*
02:45:002 (1) - Moving to x:344 y:184 is better to me.*
03:25:107 (3) - Move one grid up.

[Hard]

00:39:002 (2) - Move this to x:300 y:27?
00:40:265 (2) - Move this to x:211 y:354?
00:58:107 (6) - This could be better if you move this to x:248 y:256.

Thank you.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

MY taiko (4 hours make it this )


bye good luck

l1106188 wrote:

Revengexsoyah wrote:

MY taiko (4 hours make it this )


bye good luck

Um...
I have to sorry to you ...that
the TK have some place ... i feel strange
I will ask for TK friend QAQ
sorry ><

Revengexsoyah wrote:

what ? u say me "sure" and i make

fuck

1. 01:16:423 - miss a note
2. 02:24:713 (12) - remove this note , it is excess
3. 02:42:476 - 02:45:007 - this continuous blow should change , or will let TK player feel uncomfortable
4. 02:55:107 - 02:57:318 - also ^
   
5. 02:52:739 (1) - the spinner should start at 02:52:897
6. 03:22:739 - add a note
7. 03:22:896 (1) - should remove
8. 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - ^ remove
   
9. 03:45:476 (17) - add finish

bossandy wrote:

IRC mod ???

18:37 <l1106188> : 老大救星出現了 (早灣QAQ)
18:38 <bossandy> : 诶
18:38 <l1106188> : 怎麼辦 老大現在有空嗎
18:38 <bossandy> : 怎麼了?
18:39 <l1106188> : 之前有人問我說可不可以做tk難度 我說可以 他做了之後 我看auto君打 感覺到有奇怪的地方
18:39 <l1106188> : 可是我不會看TK QAQ
18:39 <l1106188> : 因為這樣 我還沒上傳 他的tk難度 好像生氣了 QAQ
18:39 <bossandy> : 哦
18:39 <bossandy> : 我來看看
18:39 <bossandy> : 哪首歌?
18:39 <l1106188> : t/62924/start=60
18:39 *l1106188 is listening to (Le Ciel - Feather)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37033]
18:39 <l1106188> : 這首 QAQ
18:40 <l1106188> : 也不敢問阿三醬 因為阿三醬 之前跟我說他暫時不接mod 所以不敢問 ><"
18:40 <bossandy> : 嗯恩
18:40 <bossandy> : 等等喔
18:41 <l1106188> : 恩QAQ
18:43 <bossandy> : 先玩玩看
18:43 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:47 <bossandy> : 其實還好呢
18:47 <l1106188> : 讓我感覺奇怪的地方是
18:48 <l1106188> : 第一次副歌 跟結尾 QAQ 老大覺得呢?
18:48 <bossandy> : 我看看
18:49 <bossandy> : 哦
18:49 <bossandy> : 有地方缺note
18:49 <bossandy> : 01:16:423 少了哥note
18:50 <bossandy> : 還有要把SB從TK diff理刪除
18:50 <bossandy> : 然後個別加到每個diff
18:50 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:52 <bossandy> : 02:24:634 (11) - 這多餘的
18:52 <l1106188> : 恩!
18:52 <l1106188> : 我會告訴他 XD
18:52 <bossandy> : 你把02:24:634 (11) - 刪除後 比較容易聽的出來
18:52 <bossandy> : 02:23:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
18:53 <bossandy> : ^^^這才對
18:54 <bossandy> : 順便跟他說那團坑爹的連打也改一下
18:54 <l1106188> : lol
18:54 <l1106188> : 坑爹要怎麼轉成英文 ?
18:54 <l1106188> : XD
18:54 <bossandy> : xDD
18:55 <l1106188> : lol google翻譯 翻不出來 壞掉了
18:55 <bossandy> : 02:52:739 (1) -
18:55 <bossandy> : 這個spinner
18:55 <bossandy> : 02:52:897<<<應該是從這開始
18:55 <bossandy> : 聽guitar聲就知道了
18:56 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:56 <l1106188> : 老大有翻譯機嗎
18:56 <bossandy> : 沒有>_<
18:57 <bossandy> : 03:22:739 這裡加個note 跟這vocal
18:57 <bossandy> : 如果有加note
18:57 <bossandy> : 03:22:896 (1) - 刪除
18:57 <l1106188> : 恩
18:58 <bossandy> : 他上線的話跟我說
18:58 <bossandy> : 我跟他說一些話
18:58 <l1106188> : lol 外國人
18:58 <bossandy> : 知道:D
18:58 <bossandy> : 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - 刪除
18:58 <bossandy> : 沒音樂了
18:58 <l1106188> : 我在努力轉成英文當中 ..
18:59 <l1106188> : 蓮打怎麼翻 XD
18:59 <bossandy> : 不知道>_<
18:59 <bossandy> : 通常多說這傳連打打起來太難來是什麼的
18:59 <bossandy> : 都*
18:59 <bossandy> : 串*
18:59 <bossandy> : 03:45:476 (17) - 加finish
18:59 <l1106188> : 老大修正了兩個字 (超毆
18:59 <l1106188> : 恩~
18:59 <bossandy> : xDD
19:00 <bossandy> : 差不多了
19:00 <bossandy> : 還有把Setting都置中
19:00 <l1106188> : 他應該是直接副致我的lunatic
19:00 <l1106188> : 因為載副歌有看到影子 lol 他沒改好
19:00 <bossandy> : 那就沒關係了~
19:01 <l1106188> : XD
19:01 <l1106188> : 話說老大說的那串連打是指
19:01 <l1106188> : 02:42:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) -
19:01 <bossandy> : 嗯
19:01 <l1106188> : 還有這一串 ? 02:55:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) -
19:01 <l1106188> :
19:01 <bossandy> : BPM都190了 在這樣下去會搞成App
19:02 <bossandy> : 嗯
19:02 <l1106188> : 恩~ 老大 太謝謝你了 QAQ
19:02 <bossandy> : xDD
19:02 <l1106188> : 話說 這圖我擔心真的會變成app XD
19:02 <bossandy> : xDD
19:02 <l1106188> : 老大之前土潮的sv1.4 我改了 lol
19:03 <bossandy> : Taiko好像只能用1.4或1.6現在
19:03 <l1106188> : 不過那串蓮級要怎麼改?
19:03 <bossandy> : 看他本人的意願摟
19:03 <l1106188> : 恩~
19:03 <l1106188> : 那要說 這是 unrankable 嗎 ?
19:03 <bossandy> : 好 savelog~
19:04 <bossandy> : 不是
19:04 <l1106188> : 恩~
19:04 <bossandy> : 只是會讓Taiko player feel bad >_<

加油吧!!!~~

l1106188 wrote:

Revengexsoyah wrote:

what ? u say me "sure" and i make

fuck

Calm down
I had asked for TK friend and want to tell you ( like irc mod ?)
and i have submited
He say ~

1. 01:16:423 - miss a note
2. 02:24:713 (12) - remove this note , it is excess
3. 02:42:476 - 02:45:007 - this continuous blow should change , or will let TK player feel uncomfortable
4. 02:55:107 - 02:57:318 - also ^
   
5. 02:52:739 (1) - the spinner should start at 02:52:897
6. 03:22:739 - add a note
7. 03:22:896 (1) - should remove
8. 03:45:634 (1,2,3) - ^ remove
   
9. 03:45:476 (17) - add finish