Miya wrote:

Hi, m4m :3

General

1. I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh

- Right, fixed that in Marshall's diff

Normal

1. 00:21:908 (3) - I think whistle sound here is overused if i compare it to your previous whistle rythim. So i suggest to remove the whistle. - Fixed
2. 00:23:823 (3) - Maybe you should add a whistle here at the endpoint to keep the consistencies of whistle rythim. - Yes ok.
3. 00:27:733 - It's overused timing point imo. You should delete it.
4. 00:28:211 - ^
5. 00:28:371 - ^
6. 00:28:850 - ^
7. 00:29:009 - ^
8. 00:29:488 - ^
9. 00:29:648 - ^ - Good point, fixed all.
10. 01:04:036 (2) - You should add a clap here at the startpoint since i hear a clap sound from the music at this spot. - oops, missed that one
11. 01:07:227 (3) - This slider really should end at 01:07:866 so you can add a clap at it's endpoint. Don't forget to fix the spacing with 01:08:504 (4) - if you do this. - I think this is fine. It's fine to go away from the clap-pattern now and then like this imo.
12. 01:29:089 to 01:30:924 - It's overused timing point again, you really should delete it >.< - yeah, they're from [Hard], which is why they are there xD Deleted~~
13. 02:16:163 (3) - You should add a clap here at the endpoint since there is a clap sound from the music at this spot. - Yes, missed this one too <<
14. 02:30:924 to 02:32:201 - Again, overused timing point. - Boh fixed
15. 02:35:312 (1) - Could you make this slider endpoint doesn't touch the 02:36:270 (2)? It's not good to see imo. Make it blanket is more good. - Yes
16. 03:23:823 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here since it still on the same pattern. - Keeping it because I like it xD/b]
17. 03:23:983 - Overused timing point. [b]kiaifountain
18. 04:09:781 (1) - This slider is unrankable, the path overlap itself. Rather than slider, maybe you can map this part. - I am going to keep this, because well, I just don't believe this slider is that hard to read.

Hard

1. 01:29:249 (1) - I don't think new combo is needed here since it still on the same pattern and the same beat. If you follow this, perhaps you can add a new combo here : 01:30:206 (4) -
2. 03:20:312 (1) - ^
3. 03:23:185 (3) - ^ - All of these are intentional. First one is because of the "come on" and all that stuff. 2nd because it kinda leads you from the first combo to the next one, and the last one because it just fits imo :p
4. 03:59:568 (1) - I don't think finish sound is fit here. I suggest to remove it. - I think it fit's well, so keeping it
5. 04:09:781 (1) - Unrankable slider again like hard diff. - Again, I'd rather not remove this.

Ok, that's all from me.
Good luck~

1. Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there.
2. Consider adding "ending" to Tag?

1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better?
4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
6. 03:23:823 - ^
7. 04:14:887 - ^

1. 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs?
2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool.

1. 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them?
2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange.

Hinsvar wrote:

marshall_racer's Easy

1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better?
4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
6. 03:23:823 - ^
7. 04:14:887 - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. - Hya ~~ Time to finally fix this mod. Sorry it took so long xD

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there. - It's the full song though, so does this still have to be in the source?
2. Consider adding "ending" to Tag? - ^

>marshall_racer's Easy

1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better?
4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
6. 03:23:823 - ^
7. 04:14:887 - ^

>Normal

1. 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs? - Well, I just like it for no reason xD
2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool. - <3

>Hard

1. 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them? - Because I like it Well it's mostly for HP recovery before the long slider.
2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange. ;_;

Overall, I think the beatmap is great. Nothing confusing or looking bad, just a hitsound suggestion and rants from me. And yes, this song is cool.

Good luck on the way

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner?


[Normal]
00:16:163 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning) - Ah, oops. Curved the slider a bit~
01:56:376 (3) - You forgot to put normal sampleset for tail slider- Yupp, you're right. Fixed~
02:29:568 (4) - End it at 02:30:206?- I probably had some deep meaning ending the slider there, but I don't remember it now, so changed.
04:04:355 (3,1) - Not stack correctly with tail slider at gameplay - Hmm, I think i got it fixed.


[Hard]
00:24:302 (7) - Remove repeating slider and add 00:25:100 for better rhythm - I like this like it is actually. I'm following that long sound in the background xD
01:43:610 - Add note here and add clap? - There is a stop here in the lyrics, and I want to add this stop into the mapping, so no changes


Once you done, PM me for recheck

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^ ughh, getting creative and instantly everyone getting picky ... well, ok
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner? because I changed it to one long one x3

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing

IceBeam wrote:

hi again!

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing

[Normal]
03:41:695 - there's very obvious bass note,could you add an object? it confuses me :s - Sure xD

[Hard]
01:08:504 (8) - here too,though it plays fine,but still can resist to skip bass notes :s - I really want to just follow the vocals here

that's what disturbed me the most,the rest is good!

IceBeam wrote:

ranked!

CXu rejected to add a source,so we decided to set J-Hip-Hop genre

CXu wrote:

Waitwhat just happened

LunarSakuya wrote:

i finish hard and suddenly

Dangaard wrote:

I'm very sorry, but most parts of the map are not snapped correctly. The main rhythm of the song and lyrics is in 1/6 snap, so I'm afraid you have to rework most of your map, including spacing for the correct snap.

CXu wrote:

Dangaard wrote:

I'm very sorry, but most parts of the map are not snapped correctly. The main rhythm of the song and lyrics is in 1/6 snap, so I'm afraid you have to rework most of your map, including spacing for the correct snap.

And this hinders playability and enjoyment of the map? Just wondering. I've known that the rhythm is mainly 1/6 for a while, but really, the patterns I've used mostly doesn't fit with 1/6 (yes I did try) and I do think the map plays fine even in 1/4.
If there are any parts that feels horribly wrong when you play, then I'll gladly fix that, but I don't think the 1/4 makes the map iorhjerioh8ih38 or anything. Then again, whatever is my opinion worth here, lol.