Hi, m4m :3
General
Good luck~
General
- I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh
- 00:21:270 (1) - Following your previous whistle rythim, i believe you should add a whistle here at the repeat to keep the consistencies. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the whistle from 00:23:185 (2)
- 00:24:461 (4) - ^ and please remove whistle from 00:25:100 (1) - endpoint.
- 00:27:015 (3) - ^
- 01:09:142 (2) - Move to x:328 y:144 to make this circle more balance between the 2 sliders.
- 01:29:568 - Add a timing point for custome slider tick please to keep the consistencies.
- 02:02:121 (1) - Maybe you can place this slider to center and make the shape more symetrical.
- 03:34:036 (1) - This slider can be more symetrical too.
- 00:21:908 (3) - I think whistle sound here is overused if i compare it to your previous whistle rythim. So i suggest to remove the whistle.
- 00:23:823 (3) - Maybe you should add a whistle here at the endpoint to keep the consistencies of whistle rythim.
- 00:27:733 - It's overused timing point imo. You should delete it.
- 00:28:211 - ^
- 00:28:371 - ^
- 00:28:850 - ^
- 00:29:009 - ^
- 00:29:488 - ^
- 00:29:648 - ^
- 01:04:036 (2) - You should add a clap here at the startpoint since i hear a clap sound from the music at this spot.
- 01:07:227 (3) - This slider really should end at 01:07:866 so you can add a clap at it's endpoint. Don't forget to fix the spacing with 01:08:504 (4) - if you do this.
- 01:29:089 to 01:30:924 - It's overused timing point again, you really should delete it >.<
- 02:16:163 (3) - You should add a clap here at the endpoint since there is a clap sound from the music at this spot.
- 02:30:924 to 02:32:201 - Again, overused timing point.
- 02:35:312 (1) - Could you make this slider endpoint doesn't touch the 02:36:270 (2)? It's not good to see imo. Make it blanket is more good.
- 03:23:823 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here since it still on the same pattern.
- 03:23:983 - Overused timing point.
- 04:09:781 (1) - This slider is unrankable, the path overlap itself. Rather than slider, maybe you can map this part.
- 01:29:249 (1) - I don't think new combo is needed here since it still on the same pattern and the same beat. If you follow this, perhaps you can add a new combo here : 01:30:206 (4) -
- 03:20:312 (1) - ^
- 03:23:185 (3) - ^
- 03:59:568 (1) - I don't think finish sound is fit here. I suggest to remove it.
- 04:09:781 (1) - Unrankable slider again like hard diff.
Good luck~