Sorry double post >.<
done! o/Miya wrote:
Hi, m4m :3
GeneralEasy
- I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh
- 00:21:270 (1) - Following your previous whistle rythim, i believe you should add a whistle here at the repeat to keep the consistencies. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the whistle from 00:23:185 (2)
- 00:24:461 (4) - ^ and please remove whistle from 00:25:100 (1) - endpoint.
- 00:27:015 (3) - ^
- 01:09:142 (2) - Move to x:328 y:144 to make this circle more balance between the 2 sliders.
- 01:29:568 - Add a timing point for custome slider tick please to keep the consistencies. nah, it doesn't fit there
- 02:02:121 (1) - Maybe you can place this slider to center and make the shape more symetrical.
- 03:34:036 (1) - This slider can be more symetrical too. it IS symmetrical ;_;
Thanks a lot for moddingMiya wrote:
Hi, m4m :3
General- Right, fixed that in Marshall's diff
- I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh
NormalHard
- 00:21:908 (3) - I think whistle sound here is overused if i compare it to your previous whistle rythim. So i suggest to remove the whistle. - Fixed
- 00:23:823 (3) - Maybe you should add a whistle here at the endpoint to keep the consistencies of whistle rythim. - Yes ok.
- 00:27:733 - It's overused timing point imo. You should delete it.
- 00:28:211 - ^
- 00:28:371 - ^
- 00:28:850 - ^
- 00:29:009 - ^
- 00:29:488 - ^
- 00:29:648 - ^ - Good point, fixed all.
- 01:04:036 (2) - You should add a clap here at the startpoint since i hear a clap sound from the music at this spot. - oops, missed that one
- 01:07:227 (3) - This slider really should end at 01:07:866 so you can add a clap at it's endpoint. Don't forget to fix the spacing with 01:08:504 (4) - if you do this. - I think this is fine. It's fine to go away from the clap-pattern now and then like this imo.
- 01:29:089 to 01:30:924 - It's overused timing point again, you really should delete it >.< - yeah, they're from [Hard], which is why they are there xD Deleted~~
- 02:16:163 (3) - You should add a clap here at the endpoint since there is a clap sound from the music at this spot. - Yes, missed this one too <<
- 02:30:924 to 02:32:201 - Again, overused timing point. - Boh fixed
- 02:35:312 (1) - Could you make this slider endpoint doesn't touch the 02:36:270 (2)? It's not good to see imo. Make it blanket is more good. - Yes
- 03:23:823 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here since it still on the same pattern. - Keeping it because I like it xD/b]
- 03:23:983 - Overused timing point. [b]kiaifountain
- 04:09:781 (1) - This slider is unrankable, the path overlap itself. Rather than slider, maybe you can map this part. - I am going to keep this, because well, I just don't believe this slider is that hard to read.
Ok, that's all from me.
- 01:29:249 (1) - I don't think new combo is needed here since it still on the same pattern and the same beat. If you follow this, perhaps you can add a new combo here : 01:30:206 (4) -
- 03:20:312 (1) - ^
- 03:23:185 (3) - ^ - All of these are intentional. First one is because of the "come on" and all that stuff. 2nd because it kinda leads you from the first combo to the next one, and the last one because it just fits imo :p
- 03:59:568 (1) - I don't think finish sound is fit here. I suggest to remove it. - I think it fit's well, so keeping it
- 04:09:781 (1) - Unrankable slider again like hard diff. - Again, I'd rather not remove this.
Good luck~
left the kiai flashes since they make some parts look epic and are cool (as long as CXu agrees with me)Hinsvar wrote:
marshall_racer's Easy
- 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
- 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
- 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better?
- 01:59:568 (3) - ^
- 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
- 03:23:823 - ^
- 04:14:887 - ^
Thanks for modding, Not changing much though. I'll be checking with other people if I have to add Naruto to tags. I want to consider this mapping a Home Made Kazoku song instead of a full version of a Naruto ending :pHinsvar wrote:
Hi there. - Hya ~~ Time to finally fix this mod. Sorry it took so long xD
*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.
>General>marshall_racer's Easy
- Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there. - It's the full song though, so does this still have to be in the source?
- Consider adding "ending" to Tag? - ^
>Normal
- 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
- 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
- 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better?
- 01:59:568 (3) - ^
- 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
- 03:23:823 - ^
- 04:14:887 - ^
>Hard
- 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs? - Well, I just like it for no reason xD
- 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool. - <3
Overall, I think the beatmap is great. Nothing confusing or looking bad, just a hitsound suggestion and rants from me. And yes, this song is cool.
- 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them? - Because I like it Well it's mostly for HP recovery before the long slider.
- 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange. ;_;
Good luck on the way
Thanks for moddingLeorda wrote:
Hi there
[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner?
[Normal]
00:16:163 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning) - Ah, oops. Curved the slider a bit~
01:56:376 (3) - You forgot to put normal sampleset for tail slider- Yupp, you're right. Fixed~
02:29:568 (4) - End it at 02:30:206?- I probably had some deep meaning ending the slider there, but I don't remember it now, so changed.
04:04:355 (3,1) - Not stack correctly with tail slider at gameplay - Hmm, I think i got it fixed.
[Hard]
00:24:302 (7) - Remove repeating slider and add 00:25:100 for better rhythm - I like this like it is actually. I'm following that long sound in the background xD
01:43:610 - Add note here and add clap? - There is a stop here in the lyrics, and I want to add this stop into the mapping, so no changes
Once you done, PM me for recheck
Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osuLeorda wrote:
Hi there
[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^ ughh, getting creative and instantly everyone getting picky ... well, ok
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner? because I changed it to one long one x3
whoops ^^''IceBeam wrote:
[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing
Thanks! \o (Oh right, should I kudosu you for this too? That is, if I should kudosu a recheck/remod thing xD)IceBeam wrote:
hi again!
[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing
[Normal]
03:41:695 - there's very obvious bass note,could you add an object? it confuses me :s - Sure xD
[Hard]
01:08:504 (8) - here too,though it plays fine,but still can resist to skip bass notes :s - I really want to just follow the vocals here
that's what disturbed me the most,the rest is good!
w-w-wait a second, for real now? o.o'IceBeam wrote:
ranked!
CXu rejected to add a source,so we decided to set J-Hip-Hop genre
ninja unrank /o/CXu wrote:
Waitwhat just happened
And this hinders playability and enjoyment of the map? Just wondering. I've known that the rhythm is mainly 1/6 for a while, but really, the patterns I've used mostly doesn't fit with 1/6 (yes I did try) and I do think the map plays fine even in 1/4.Dangaard wrote:
I'm very sorry, but most parts of the map are not snapped correctly. The main rhythm of the song and lyrics is in 1/6 snap, so I'm afraid you have to rework most of your map, including spacing for the correct snap.
It might be playable with 1/4 snap, but still music is the basic of this game. Mapping means to follow the music and eventually expand it with some extras, but the main rhythm should be present.CXu wrote:
And this hinders playability and enjoyment of the map? Just wondering. I've known that the rhythm is mainly 1/6 for a while, but really, the patterns I've used mostly doesn't fit with 1/6 (yes I did try) and I do think the map plays fine even in 1/4.Dangaard wrote:
I'm very sorry, but most parts of the map are not snapped correctly. The main rhythm of the song and lyrics is in 1/6 snap, so I'm afraid you have to rework most of your map, including spacing for the correct snap.
If there are any parts that feels horribly wrong when you play, then I'll gladly fix that, but I don't think the 1/4 makes the map iorhjerioh8ih38 or anything. Then again, whatever is my opinion worth here, lol.