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marshallracer

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi ^^
sorry, i'm late to mod this.

marshall_racer's Easy
00:18:717 (3) - at behind add a finish sound? yep
02:02:121 (1) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/828X nah, this would be kinda too big then
02:18:717 (3,4,5) - overlap them? hmm ... I'll leave them like that for now
03:08:504 (1) - i suggest, move to other place, because i will make Beginner confused. ok
03:34:036 (1) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/82an nah, CXu made a nice one which I won't touch anymore <.<
04:03:398 (3) - at behind add a finish sound? ok
04:08:504 (1) - at behind add a whistle sound? dunno if it's just me, but that sounds strange there recheking 3 times, my ears are useless ... done
Thanks :3

Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
CXu

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi ^^ - Hi :)
sorry, i'm late to mod this. - np, np~~

marshall_racer's Easy
00:18:717 (3) - at behind add a finish sound?
02:02:121 (1) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/828X
02:18:717 (3,4,5) - overlap them?
03:08:504 (1) - i suggest, move to other place, because i will make Beginner confused.
03:34:036 (1) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/82an
04:03:398 (3) - at behind add a finish sound?
04:08:504 (1) - at behind add a whistle sound?

Normal
  1. Slider Velocity change to 1.50 - 1.60? maybe better then 1.80.
  2. Circle Size change to the large?
^Let me keep these settings for now. If it's really bad, I'll consider changing though
01:00:046 (4) - a bit hard to hit for NORMAL players, try to use the previous slider end at here? - It is? :<
01:07:706 (4) - same as above, delete this slider and use the previous slider end at here and make a one repeating? if you accept this, then 01:08:185 (4) change to a circle. - Yes, fixed
01:22:227 (2) - change to a circle? - I think this is fine
01:22:706 (3) - this slider start from 01:22:546 ? - ^
02:02:121 (1,2,3) - change them like this? --> http://puu.sh/82cl - Actually, yes!
02:08:025 (5) - delete this slider, and make the previous slider one repeating? - ^
02:10:738 (5) - change to a circle? - Fine imo
02:11:217 (1) - this slider start from 02:11:057 - ? - ^
02:22:546 (1) - this slider at 02:23:185 - add a custom 1 sound? - Thought i'd refrain from using slider-tick sounds :p
02:24:940 (1) - change to a circle at 02:25:100 - ? - I think this is fine
02:26:217 (3) - ^ 02:26:376 - ? - ^
02:29:568 (4) - this slider end at 02:30:206 - ? - Idk, I like it this way better
02:30:525 (5) - change to a two circle? - ^
02:45:366 (1) - delete this circle - Keeping this
02:45:525 (2,3,4) - same as 02:02:121. --> http://puu.sh/82cl - Changed, but not as you suggested~
03:16:961 (3) - delete this circle - Keeping this
03:21:110 (6) - ^ or change to slider to 03:21:270 ? - ^
03:25:259 (1) - delete this circle - ^
03:27:174 (4) - ^ - ^
03:46:642 (1) - change to a circle at 03:46:802 - ? - ^
03:47:919 (3) - ^ 03:48:078 ? - ^
04:09:781 (1) - very ugly of this slider. please, make it beautiful. - Do tell me where the problem is, and I will fix it. I don't see how it is ugly though.

Hard
00:55:419 (4,5,6) - make them a bit curve? - Straight they are and straight they go~~ Leaving as is
00:57:334 (x) - add a circle? - No, it's a pause I want to keep here
01:24:302 (1) - remove this New Combo - Keeping a pattern, so keeping this
01:25:100 (4) - add a New Combo? - ^
01:31:403 (9) - upward 1 grid? x:200 y:324 - Should be fine how it is now imo.
03:17:759 (5) - add a New Combo - Yes, added
04:06:429 (7,8) - overlap at the previous note. - Fixed somehow I think
04:08:823 (1,1) - remove this New Combo - No
04:09:781 (1) - same as NORMAL. make it more beautiful. - As Normal.
@nice difficulty.

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Nice mapset~! Hope can fast to Rank. - Thanks :D
Good Luck ;)
Thanks for modding and star~~ :D
Metro
boh
Topic Starter
CXu
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Barney Stinson
YAAAY sorry for delay!

General: Fine everything

Hard
59:568: Remove new combo here and
1:00:206: Here.
Make new combo at: 1:00:884
1:24:302: YAH. remove new combo dude.
1:26:536 1:28:770 2:24:781 2:30:046 2:45:366 2:47:759 2:50:472: Same here and other patterns like those ones.
4:09:781: when I saw that slider my face looked like http://puu.sh/dAGI

Normal
27:653 (1) (2) (3) (4): Spaaacing.
1:11:057 LOOL. Don't offend, but I think this form is awful. Just try with http://puu.sh/dAHe
1:25:100 If I were you, I'd remove this "jump". It's slow, but someone could moan
1:28:929 (1) (2) (3) (4): Spaaacing.
2:02:440 Imo, this clap doesn't fit. Feel free to not follow this suggestion, it's ur map after all xD
2:51:908 Dude, spacing <3

Easy
Nothing at all. HUHUHUUUUUUUUU (remembering Lazy song. I know, I'm stupid)

Finished here! Hope my mod was helpful, if it wasn't helpful just don't kudosu me.
marshallracer

Barney Stinson wrote:

Easy
Nothing at all. HUHUHUUUUUUUUU (remembering Lazy song. I know, I'm stupid)
kidding?
I LOVE (YOU) BARNEY <3
Topic Starter
CXu

Barney Stinson wrote:

YAAAY sorry for delay!

General: Fine everything

Hard
59:568: Remove new combo here and
1:00:206: Here.
Make new combo at: 1:00:884 - No, this should be fine as it is. There is a slight spacing change too, and I think the new combo fits well for this part.
1:24:302: YAH. remove new combo dude.
1:26:536 1:28:770 2:24:781 2:30:046 2:45:366 2:47:759 2:50:472: Same here and other patterns like those ones. - Intentional new combos, which I'm keeping :P
4:09:781: when I saw that slider my face looked like http://puu.sh/dAGI - :)

Normal
27:653 (1) (2) (3) (4): Spaaacing.- Uh? It's nice and fine :p
1:11:057 LOOL. Don't offend, but I think this form is awful. Just try with http://puu.sh/dAHe - Well, it kinda looked good in some other pattern that I changed :P Changed~
1:25:100 If I were you, I'd remove this "jump". It's slow, but someone could moan- Lol moan. Well I think it's fine so keeping it as it is for now
1:28:929 (1) (2) (3) (4): Spaaacing.- No :D
2:02:440 Imo, this clap doesn't fit. Feel free to not follow this suggestion, it's ur map after all xD - Random clap that was supposed to be on the next tick. Fixed, thanks :)
2:51:908 Dude, spacing <3 - It's cool~~ <3

Easy
Nothing at all. HUHUHUUUUUUUUU (remembering Lazy song. I know, I'm stupid)

Finished here! Hope my mod was helpful, if it wasn't helpful just don't kudosu me.
Thanks for modding :)
kriers

Metro wrote:

boh
Miya
Hi, m4m :3

General
  1. I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh
Easy
  1. 00:21:270 (1) - Following your previous whistle rythim, i believe you should add a whistle here at the repeat to keep the consistencies. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the whistle from 00:23:185 (2)
  2. 00:24:461 (4) - ^ and please remove whistle from 00:25:100 (1) - endpoint.
  3. 00:27:015 (3) - ^
  4. 01:09:142 (2) - Move to x:328 y:144 to make this circle more balance between the 2 sliders.
  5. 01:29:568 - Add a timing point for custome slider tick please to keep the consistencies.
  6. 02:02:121 (1) - Maybe you can place this slider to center and make the shape more symetrical.
  7. 03:34:036 (1) - This slider can be more symetrical too.
Normal
  1. 00:21:908 (3) - I think whistle sound here is overused if i compare it to your previous whistle rythim. So i suggest to remove the whistle.
  2. 00:23:823 (3) - Maybe you should add a whistle here at the endpoint to keep the consistencies of whistle rythim.
  3. 00:27:733 - It's overused timing point imo. You should delete it.
  4. 00:28:211 - ^
  5. 00:28:371 - ^
  6. 00:28:850 - ^
  7. 00:29:009 - ^
  8. 00:29:488 - ^
  9. 00:29:648 - ^
  10. 01:04:036 (2) - You should add a clap here at the startpoint since i hear a clap sound from the music at this spot.
  11. 01:07:227 (3) - This slider really should end at 01:07:866 so you can add a clap at it's endpoint. Don't forget to fix the spacing with 01:08:504 (4) - if you do this.
  12. 01:29:089 to 01:30:924 - It's overused timing point again, you really should delete it >.<
  13. 02:16:163 (3) - You should add a clap here at the endpoint since there is a clap sound from the music at this spot.
  14. 02:30:924 to 02:32:201 - Again, overused timing point.
  15. 02:35:312 (1) - Could you make this slider endpoint doesn't touch the 02:36:270 (2)? It's not good to see imo. Make it blanket is more good. :)
  16. 03:23:823 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here since it still on the same pattern.
  17. 03:23:983 - Overused timing point.
  18. 04:09:781 (1) - This slider is unrankable, the path overlap itself. Rather than slider, maybe you can map this part.
Hard
  1. 01:29:249 (1) - I don't think new combo is needed here since it still on the same pattern and the same beat. If you follow this, perhaps you can add a new combo here : 01:30:206 (4) -
  2. 03:20:312 (1) - ^
  3. 03:23:185 (3) - ^
  4. 03:59:568 (1) - I don't think finish sound is fit here. I suggest to remove it.
  5. 04:09:781 (1) - Unrankable slider again like hard diff.
Ok, that's all from me. :)
Good luck~
Miya
Sorry double post >.<
marshallracer

Miya wrote:

Hi, m4m :3

General
  1. I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh
Easy
  1. 00:21:270 (1) - Following your previous whistle rythim, i believe you should add a whistle here at the repeat to keep the consistencies. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the whistle from 00:23:185 (2)
  2. 00:24:461 (4) - ^ and please remove whistle from 00:25:100 (1) - endpoint.
  3. 00:27:015 (3) - ^
  4. 01:09:142 (2) - Move to x:328 y:144 to make this circle more balance between the 2 sliders.
  5. 01:29:568 - Add a timing point for custome slider tick please to keep the consistencies. nah, it doesn't fit there
  6. 02:02:121 (1) - Maybe you can place this slider to center and make the shape more symetrical.
  7. 03:34:036 (1) - This slider can be more symetrical too. it IS symmetrical ;_;
done! o/

Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
CXu

Miya wrote:

Hi, m4m :3

General
  1. I found inconsistencies at kiai time, perhaps you can look it here : http://puu.sh/ecKh
- Right, fixed that in Marshall's diff

Normal
  1. 00:21:908 (3) - I think whistle sound here is overused if i compare it to your previous whistle rythim. So i suggest to remove the whistle. - Fixed
  2. 00:23:823 (3) - Maybe you should add a whistle here at the endpoint to keep the consistencies of whistle rythim. - Yes ok.
  3. 00:27:733 - It's overused timing point imo. You should delete it.
  4. 00:28:211 - ^
  5. 00:28:371 - ^
  6. 00:28:850 - ^
  7. 00:29:009 - ^
  8. 00:29:488 - ^
  9. 00:29:648 - ^ - Good point, fixed all.
  10. 01:04:036 (2) - You should add a clap here at the startpoint since i hear a clap sound from the music at this spot. - oops, missed that one
  11. 01:07:227 (3) - This slider really should end at 01:07:866 so you can add a clap at it's endpoint. Don't forget to fix the spacing with 01:08:504 (4) - if you do this. - I think this is fine. It's fine to go away from the clap-pattern now and then like this imo.
  12. 01:29:089 to 01:30:924 - It's overused timing point again, you really should delete it >.< - yeah, they're from [Hard], which is why they are there xD Deleted~~
  13. 02:16:163 (3) - You should add a clap here at the endpoint since there is a clap sound from the music at this spot. - Yes, missed this one too <<
  14. 02:30:924 to 02:32:201 - Again, overused timing point. - Boh fixed
  15. 02:35:312 (1) - Could you make this slider endpoint doesn't touch the 02:36:270 (2)? It's not good to see imo. Make it blanket is more good. :) - Yes :D
  16. 03:23:823 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here since it still on the same pattern. - Keeping it because I like it xD/b]
  17. 03:23:983 - Overused timing point. [b]kiaifountain
  18. 04:09:781 (1) - This slider is unrankable, the path overlap itself. Rather than slider, maybe you can map this part. - I am going to keep this, because well, I just don't believe this slider is that hard to read.
Hard
  1. 01:29:249 (1) - I don't think new combo is needed here since it still on the same pattern and the same beat. If you follow this, perhaps you can add a new combo here : 01:30:206 (4) -
  2. 03:20:312 (1) - ^
  3. 03:23:185 (3) - ^ - All of these are intentional. First one is because of the "come on" and all that stuff. 2nd because it kinda leads you from the first combo to the next one, and the last one because it just fits imo :p
  4. 03:59:568 (1) - I don't think finish sound is fit here. I suggest to remove it. - I think it fit's well, so keeping it
  5. 04:09:781 (1) - Unrankable slider again like hard diff. - Again, I'd rather not remove this.
Ok, that's all from me. :)
Good luck~
Thanks a lot for modding :D
Miya
Umm about that unrankable slider, i have ask it to Odaril and he said it's unrankable too >.<
Better to map that part before other MAT/BAT said the same thing.

Edit : why unrankable? Take a look on picture below



At first moment i saw this i feel confused of the slider, which one direction the ball will go the upside part (the blue line) or the down part (green one)? This is break the rule which every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. >.<
Topic Starter
CXu
Them mmsliders... I'll see if I can come up with something. I am still a bit against them being unrankable, because, well, you can see the difference with peppysliders, and therefore mmsliders = bad design imo. I'll see.
Miya
the design is not bad, it's good imo :D
But that part makes me confused ;_; especially when you encounter it for the first time.
Well, let's see if you can come up with something new :)
Hinsvar
Hi there.

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there.
  2. Consider adding "ending" to Tag?
>marshall_racer's Easy
  1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
  2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better? :P
  4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
  5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  6. 03:23:823 - ^
  7. 04:14:887 - ^
>Normal
  1. 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs?
  2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool.
>Hard
  1. 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them?
  2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange.
Overall, I think the beatmap is great. Nothing confusing or looking bad, just a hitsound suggestion and rants from me. And yes, this song is cool.

Good luck on the way ;)
marshallracer

Hinsvar wrote:

marshall_racer's Easy
  1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
  2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better? :P
  4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
  5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  6. 03:23:823 - ^
  7. 04:14:887 - ^
left the kiai flashes since they make some parts look epic and are cool (as long as CXu agrees with me)

Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
CXu

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. - Hya ~~ Time to finally fix this mod. Sorry it took so long xD

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Add Naruto Shippuuden to the Source column. This song was used as the first ending there. - It's the full song though, so does this still have to be in the source?
  2. Consider adding "ending" to Tag? - ^
>marshall_racer's Easy
  1. 00:24:461 (4) - Whistle?
  2. 00:30:206 - ...Why is there a short kiai time? I think it looks pretty unfitting. (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  3. 01:57:015 (1) - Can this be shaped better? :P
  4. 01:59:568 (3) - ^
  5. 03:13:610 - Short kiai time again? (Occured @ Normal and Hard too.)
  6. 03:23:823 - ^
  7. 04:14:887 - ^
>Normal
  1. 04:08:504 (1,1,1) - Why are there NCs? - Well, I just like it for no reason xD
  2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This slider looks funny, yet cool. - <3
>Hard
  1. 04:08:823 (1,1,1) - ...NCs again? Care to explain why this place (and the one at Normal) is full of them? - Because I like it :D Well it's mostly for HP recovery before the long slider.
  2. 04:09:781 (1) - ...This looks very large. Don't know why, but it looks strange. ;_;
Overall, I think the beatmap is great. Nothing confusing or looking bad, just a hitsound suggestion and rants from me. And yes, this song is cool.

Good luck on the way ;)
Thanks for modding, Not changing much though. I'll be checking with other people if I have to add Naruto to tags. I want to consider this mapping a Home Made Kazoku song instead of a full version of a Naruto ending :p
Topic Starter
CXu
Posting so the map doesn't randomly go to graveyard because I forget or smth
Leorda
Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner?


[Normal]
00:16:163 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)
01:56:376 (3) - You forgot to put normal sampleset for tail slider
02:29:568 (4) - End it at 02:30:206?
04:04:355 (3,1) - Not stack correctly with tail slider at gameplay


[Hard]
00:24:302 (7) - Remove repeating slider and add 00:25:100 for better rhythm
01:43:610 - Add note here and add clap?


Once you done, PM me for recheck
Topic Starter
CXu

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner?


[Normal]
00:16:163 (2) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning) - Ah, oops. Curved the slider a bit~
01:56:376 (3) - You forgot to put normal sampleset for tail slider- Yupp, you're right. Fixed~
02:29:568 (4) - End it at 02:30:206?- I probably had some deep meaning ending the slider there, but I don't remember it now, so changed.
04:04:355 (3,1) - Not stack correctly with tail slider at gameplay - Hmm, I think i got it fixed.


[Hard]
00:24:302 (7) - Remove repeating slider and add 00:25:100 for better rhythm - I like this like it is actually. I'm following that long sound in the background xD
01:43:610 - Add note here and add clap? - There is a stop here in the lyrics, and I want to add this stop into the mapping, so no changes :D


Once you done, PM me for recheck
Thanks for modding :D
marshallracer

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[marshall_racer's Easy]
01:53:185 - Add note here?
01:55:738 - ^ ughh, getting creative and instantly everyone getting picky ... well, ok
02:16:163 (4) - Make a same slider as 02:14:887 (3) for better pattern? (Nazi)
03:49:993 (1,1) - What's the point having 2 spinner? because I changed it to one long one x3
Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osu
Leorda
Good job~

Bubbled


To next modder
: the falling star slider is fine, so it's easily to play it
Topic Starter
CXu
Yay \:D/
IceBeam
hi again! :D

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing

[Normal]
03:41:695 - there's very obvious bass note,could you add an object? it confuses me :s

[Hard]
01:08:504 (8) - here too,though it plays fine,but still can resist to skip bass notes :s

that's what disturbed me the most,the rest is good!
marshallracer

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing
whoops ^^''
fixed :3

Download: Home Made Kazoku - Nagareboshi ~Shooting Star~ (CXu) [marshall_racer's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
CXu

IceBeam wrote:

hi again! :D

[Easy]
01:54:461 (1) - whyyy,please fix spacing

[Normal]
03:41:695 - there's very obvious bass note,could you add an object? it confuses me :s - Sure xD

[Hard]
01:08:504 (8) - here too,though it plays fine,but still can resist to skip bass notes :s - I really want to just follow the vocals here :(

that's what disturbed me the most,the rest is good!
Thanks! \o (Oh right, should I kudosu you for this too? That is, if I should kudosu a recheck/remod thing xD)
IceBeam
ranked! ;)

CXu rejected to add a source,so we decided to set J-Hip-Hop genre
marshallracer

IceBeam wrote:

ranked! ;)

CXu rejected to add a source,so we decided to set J-Hip-Hop genre
w-w-wait a second, for real now? o.o'
Topic Starter
CXu
yay \:D/
spboxer3
gratz~
Topic Starter
CXu
Waitwhat just happened
kriers

CXu wrote:

Waitwhat just happened
ninja unrank /o/
Nardoxyribonucleic
The beatmap becomes not approved @@
LunarSakuya
i finish hard and suddenly
---Assault[K]---
ninja unrank. and i had to S it before it got unranked xD
---Assault[K]---

LunarSakuya wrote:

i finish hard and suddenly
same here
Miya
Maybe some BAT didn't approve it because the source and the artist name.
Topic Starter
CXu
Ooooor it's probably the last slider
Dangaard
I'm very sorry, but most parts of the map are not snapped correctly. The main rhythm of the song and lyrics is in 1/6 snap, so I'm afraid you have to rework most of your map, including spacing for the correct snap.
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