ooh 0108 strikes again! anyways let's see that I can find. was gonna mod this yesterday but i was too lazy
General:
I see 2 osb files. delete the nanahosi 1 and do a full submission. idk what that's doing there. guessing that's a song.
0108 Style:
i suggest that you add a blue combo color to match Miku's hair, or replace the green combo color for a blue combo color. after all almost all of the BG is blue. here's the blue i suggest you use to replace the green combo color
00:22:922 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals are still going. the next note should be a NC because of new lyrics.
00:46:172 (5) - i think that this slider can look a bit nicer than this.
01:13:494 (6) - hmm i think making this symmetrical would be nice but if you ignore this, make (8) a curved slider kind of like this. if you do this move combos 1-4 down a bit to avoid the slight overlap.
01:22:601 (5) - can you try to move this down a bit because it's touching the ho bar and the score. if you can't, ignore this.
01:57:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ik you can do better than this because this looks too easy as it's stacked in 1 place and kind of boring. to make it challenging for players, I suggest that you do an anti jump for these notes, if you ignore this, then space out these notes to make it a bit interesting.
02:38:243 (7) - a NC here because it's following instrumental.
02:39:743 (1) - same as 00:22:922
02:48:636 (7) - same as 02:38:243 because of new lyrics.
02:48:851 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above.
03:07:922 (2) - move this up because when i moved it up and tried to move it back down, it won't let me. i'm guessing it's because of the area.
03:09:208 (4) - since it's near the end, how about spacing this out to test the players reaction to the note? something like this
I really like how the eyes blinked at the end.
This is the best I can do. Star and GL

General:
I see 2 osb files. delete the nanahosi 1 and do a full submission. idk what that's doing there. guessing that's a song.
0108 Style:
i suggest that you add a blue combo color to match Miku's hair, or replace the green combo color for a blue combo color. after all almost all of the BG is blue. here's the blue i suggest you use to replace the green combo color
Combo2 : 255,255,128I think increasing the Hp by 1 will give a better challenge to players. HP5 looks too easy as it barely decreases.
00:22:922 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals are still going. the next note should be a NC because of new lyrics.
00:46:172 (5) - i think that this slider can look a bit nicer than this.
01:13:494 (6) - hmm i think making this symmetrical would be nice but if you ignore this, make (8) a curved slider kind of like this. if you do this move combos 1-4 down a bit to avoid the slight overlap.
01:22:601 (5) - can you try to move this down a bit because it's touching the ho bar and the score. if you can't, ignore this.
01:57:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ik you can do better than this because this looks too easy as it's stacked in 1 place and kind of boring. to make it challenging for players, I suggest that you do an anti jump for these notes, if you ignore this, then space out these notes to make it a bit interesting.
02:38:243 (7) - a NC here because it's following instrumental.
02:39:743 (1) - same as 00:22:922
02:48:636 (7) - same as 02:38:243 because of new lyrics.
02:48:851 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above.
03:07:922 (2) - move this up because when i moved it up and tried to move it back down, it won't let me. i'm guessing it's because of the area.
03:09:208 (4) - since it's near the end, how about spacing this out to test the players reaction to the note? something like this
I really like how the eyes blinked at the end.
This is the best I can do. Star and GL
