[General]

• sb\congratz.png has a storyboard code in it, but the file is not present in the folder.
• Generally, only 3 different slider speeds should be used.

[0108 style]

00:27:743 (6) - The bottom of this slider goes just slightly off the screen which is unrankable.
00:29:779 (1) - Delete NC. I don't find any significant change in the song that would require an NC.
00:33:208 (1) - ^
00:36:636 (1) - ^
00:54:315 (4) - Whistle at the head of the slider.
00:54:529 (5) - ^
01:24:636 (1) - Delete NC
01:28:065 (1) - ^
01:31:494 (1) - ^
01:42:422 (3) - Whistle at both the beginning and end of the slider.
02:33:208 (4) - Delete NC
02:36:636 (1) - ^

THIS MAP IS PERFECT HOW YOU GUYS DARE MOD IT YOU CAN'T MOD GOD.

Ok?

Wishy22 wrote:

THIS MAP IS PERFECT HOW YOU GUYS DARE MOD IT YOU CAN'T MOD GOD.

Ok?

Haha, the map is good. All of the mods are just suggestions to make it even better than perfect.

SO WILL THIS BE BETTER THAN GOD????

Oh my god SO GOOD.

ooh 0108 strikes again! anyways let's see that I can find. was gonna mod this yesterday but i was too lazy

General:
I see 2 osb files. delete the nanahosi 1 and do a full submission. idk what that's doing there. guessing that's a song.

0108 Style:
i suggest that you add a blue combo color to match Miku's hair, or replace the green combo color for a blue combo color. after all almost all of the BG is blue. here's the blue i suggest you use to replace the green combo color

Combo2 : 255,255,128

I think increasing the Hp by 1 will give a better challenge to players. HP5 looks too easy as it barely decreases.
00:22:922 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals are still going. the next note should be a NC because of new lyrics.
00:46:172 (5) - i think that this slider can look a bit nicer than this.
01:13:494 (6) - hmm i think making this symmetrical would be nice but if you ignore this, make (8) a curved slider kind of like this. if you do this move combos 1-4 down a bit to avoid the slight overlap.
01:22:601 (5) - can you try to move this down a bit because it's touching the ho bar and the score. if you can't, ignore this.
01:57:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ik you can do better than this because this looks too easy as it's stacked in 1 place and kind of boring. to make it challenging for players, I suggest that you do an anti jump for these notes, if you ignore this, then space out these notes to make it a bit interesting.
02:38:243 (7) - a NC here because it's following instrumental.
02:39:743 (1) - same as 00:22:922
02:48:636 (7) - same as 02:38:243 because of new lyrics.
02:48:851 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above.
03:07:922 (2) - move this up because when i moved it up and tried to move it back down, it won't let me. i'm guessing it's because of the area.
03:09:208 (4) - since it's near the end, how about spacing this out to test the players reaction to the note? something like this
I really like how the eyes blinked at the end.

This is the best I can do. Star and GL

Jacob wrote:

[General]

• sb\congratz.png has a storyboard code in it, but the file is not present in the folder.
• Generally, only 3 different slider speeds should be used.

[0108 style]

00:27:743 (6) - The bottom of this slider goes just slightly off the screen which is unrankable.
00:29:779 (1) - Delete NC. I don't find any significant change in the song that would require an NC.
00:33:208 (1) - ^
00:36:636 (1) - ^
00:54:315 (4) - Whistle at the head of the slider.
00:54:529 (5) - ^
01:24:636 (1) - Delete NC
01:28:065 (1) - ^
01:31:494 (1) - ^
01:42:422 (3) - Whistle at both the beginning and end of the slider.
02:33:208 (4) - Delete NC
02:36:636 (1) - ^

some changed!!thanks!!

Byakugan249 wrote:

ooh 0108 strikes again! anyways let's see that I can find. was gonna mod this yesterday but i was too lazy

General:
I see 2 osb files. delete the nanahosi 1 and do a full submission. idk what that's doing there. guessing that's a song.

0108 Style:
i suggest that you add a blue combo color to match Miku's hair, or replace the green combo color for a blue combo color. after all almost all of the BG is blue. here's the blue i suggest you use to replace the green combo color

Combo2 : 255,255,128

no,because It is difficult to look at the same color.
I think increasing the Hp by 1 will give a better challenge to players. HP5 looks too easy as it barely decreases.
00:22:922 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals are still going. the next note should be a NC because of new lyrics.
00:46:172 (5) - i think that this slider can look a bit nicer than this.
01:13:494 (6) - hmm i think making this symmetrical would be nice but if you ignore this, make (8) a curved slider kind of like this. if you do this move combos 1-4 down a bit to avoid the slight overlap.
01:22:601 (5) - can you try to move this down a bit because it's touching the ho bar and the score. if you can't, ignore this.
01:57:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ik you can do better than this because this looks too easy as it's stacked in 1 place and kind of boring. to make it challenging for players, I suggest that you do an anti jump for these notes, if you ignore this, then space out these notes to make it a bit interesting.
02:38:243 (7) - a NC here because it's following instrumental.
02:39:743 (1) - same as 00:22:922
02:48:636 (7) - same as 02:38:243 because of new lyrics.
02:48:851 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above.
03:07:922 (2) - move this up because when i moved it up and tried to move it back down, it won't let me. i'm guessing it's because of the area.
03:09:208 (4) - since it's near the end, how about spacing this out to test the players reaction to the note? something like this
I really like how the eyes blinked at the end.

This is the best I can do. Star and GL

some changed!! thanks!!

これは良い曲・・・
valさんがんばて！>w<

You know that i love you, val?

DoKoLP wrote:

You know that i love you, val?

Who does not?^^

Some Suggestion.~

0108 style

1. 00:01:601 (4) - Remove the 3rd Slider Point.
2. 00:10:172 (5) - Move the 2nd Slider Point one Grid to the left [Gril lvl: 3]
3. 00:24:315 (8) - ^
4. 00:29:993 (1) - ^
5. 01:32:565 (1,2,3,4) - straight Jumps are bored. Try make This
6. 01:34:708 (6) - Move the 2nd Slider Point to x:152|y:128 [Grid lvl: 3]
7. 02:31:279 (5,6) - Touching is Bad...
8. 02:39:422 (4) - Move the 2nd Slider Point one grid Down [Grid lvl: 3]

wow wow awesome

VAL-SAMA HAVE ALL MY KUDOSU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xdddddDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Wishy22 wrote:

VAL-SAMA HAVE ALL MY KUDOSU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xdddddDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

thanks!!

Cool Map..!

Very nice difficult but also creative map, added some kudosu stars. Go get two bubbles! ~

Awesome map val, really fun to play

Just a suggestion.
01:39:428 (6) - I think it's better if you put a new combo here.
02:45:374 - Completely silence the end of the slider.

OMG.many stars.thanks!!

もう星２２個か...

7 Kudos is all what i can give you <3
Awesome Map <3

ShadowSoul wrote:

7 Kudos is all what i can give you <3
Awesome Map <3

@_@

thanks!!

err why is the bpm still doubled
also 03:26:571 (1) - there is no way you can use that it is far to scrunched.

ztrot wrote:

err why is the bpm still doubled

But 280 makes way more sense than 140, due to the rhythm track being played so fast.

[0108 Style]
00:09:214 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:428 (2) - NC <- try these? Makes more sense in following rhythm section since Miku hasn't begun singing yet.
00:27:749 (6) - Try end point x:412 y:316 to lead into 00:28:499 (1) - better?

Love the map P:

太鼓で使うをありがとうございました！
Diffはいいですか？
Please delete the SB in the Taiko diff~

Hope you like it. =w=

Edit: If you care for lower Taiko players, I would also make an easier diff. for you.



Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu

ztrot wrote:

err why is the bpm still doubled

it's not doubled, 280 is the actual bpm. listen to the snaredrum. if it was 140, the snare drum woul appear 1 white section later

00:31:928 (1,2,3) - Spacing looks just wrong, don't know if you intended to do this (http://puu.sh/nWsq). Maybe it's just me but it looks like 3 is way further from 2 than 2 from 1. Try making 2 get somewhat centered.

00:32:571 (1,2,3) - Same as ^. If your select the whole pattern and do Ctrl+H, you'll see 00:32:571 (1) - should be one grid higher to match the other pattern. Guess it is copy paste but still that hit should be a little higher. (Or so it looks :p)

owo

This map is freaking awesome!!(even if i can't play it) Good luck val! You goy my star! :3

the health drain is funny ._.

cute map and cute taiko

Amazing map o.o

only thing 00:06:214 (3) - Can be hard to see when using HD without memorizing it , but it's not really a problem ~@.@~

MOAR KUDOSUUUUuuUuuu.

Taiko wrote:

cute taiko

Are you f*cking serious? He called my taiko cute... what
I'm getting old

tion

i love this map <3

Verdisphena wrote:

tion

you can make CTB diff

uljjang wrote:

i love this map <3

<3

val0108 wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

tion

you can make CTB diff

forever unrankable lololol

eldnl wrote:

forever unrankable lololol

It's rankable atm.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22115

val0108 wrote:

eldnl wrote:

forever unrankable lololol

It's rankable atm.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22115

I think eldnl was not talking about the rankability of CTB diff itselff (he's a CTB player after all, so he already knows that ), but, oh well... if you have a CTB diff on your map, just be sure to make it mod here.

val0108 wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

tion

you can make CTB diff

/me cracks his neck

I'll not post here, I'll not post here.

DAMNIT !

Why so many people hate my diffs ._., anyways here is the diff
Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Verdi's CTB].osu
Val, if the diff cause you problems, delete it

Verdis

00:54:321 (2,3,4) Impossible to catch.

super impossible diff >~< I'm not sure about this

Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Verdi's CTB].osu

02:18:000 (1) - As can be mistaken for x1.0 speed.

Hory shit, Verdi...


That constant 1/4 hyperdashes can kill everybody... The difficulty has to be drastically reduced if you wanna get this diff rankable.

Rankable verdi ctb diff?
You serious? xD

Verdisphena wrote:

[attachment=0:93e5a]Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Verdi's CTB].osu[/attachment:93e5a]

omg...impossible...orz

val0108 wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

[attachment=0:f6d7b]Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Verdi's CTB].osu[/attachment:f6d7b]

omg...impossible...orz

Obvious Verdi map. They're always "impossible". D:

EDIT:

Okˊˋ nice..

Verdisphena wrote:

Why so many people hate my diffs ._.

This isn't hating dude ^^' Some are really fun but you just don't follow the rules :s

Verdisphena wrote:

Fuck the rules \o/

also superb map, keep it up.

This map is awesome...

Can I make a Rankable CTB diff?

Spectator wrote:

This map is awesome...

Can I make a Rankable CTB diff?

sure

I didn't quite like Scarlet Rose, but hey, you can have my star now, this is freaking awesome.

Why do I feel like joining this mapset... orz

Done

Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Special].osu

Spectator wrote:

Done

You need change the name of the Diff. at least ''Special CtB'' .. if i remember.. The ''name of the diff'' of a Special mode (Taiko, CtB) Need that for avoid confusions...
inb4 -Spec's CtB-

Hey val, I sadly won't be able to map for the next 3 to 4 weeks because of my exams. It's very important that I work hard to pass so I hope you wouldn't mind waiting a little longer to get this approved for my diff.

Here is a preview of what I've got so far:
Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Lesjuh style].osu

I'll finish it as soon as possible after my exams.

DaxMasterix wrote:

Spectator wrote:

Done

You need change the name of the Diff. at least ''Special CtB'' .. if i remember.. The ''name of the diff'' of a Special mode (Taiko, CtB) Need that for avoid confusions...
inb4 -Spec's CtB-

Spectator's Fruit Shredder

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ시ㅣ발 어떤 ㅄ이 이걸? ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Lesjuh wrote:

Hey val, I sadly won't be able to map for the next 3 to 4 weeks because of my exams. It's very important that I work hard to pass so I hope you wouldn't mind waiting a little longer to get this approved for my diff.

Here is a preview of what I've got so far:
[attachment=0:5ebea]Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Lesjuh style].osu[/attachment:5ebea]

I'll finish it as soon as possible after my exams.

okay,thanks.
I uploaded it,Please make it after DL.

good luck your exams.

can I add a CTB diff please??

shinjiko-san wrote:

can I add a CTB diff please??

already Spectator

okay

- Fixed Diff's name

- Fixed some parts

Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Spec's CTB].osu

Unbelievable map. Looking forward to seeing it become approved. Thank you for this piece of art.

Rank this already for Thor's sake

すごいマップだ・・・
[0108 style]
00:24:214(7) ずれてる？

osuyo wrote:

すごいマップだ・・・
[0108 style]
00:24:214(7) ずれてる？

00:24:321 (8,9,10,1) - ここを重ねてるので配置が若干左上に行くから、近づけてる

gpq123 wrote:

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ시ㅣ발 어떤 ㅄ이 이걸? ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

huh
just stfu
Translate : gpq123 said lollollollollol wtf which f***er made this?
come on this is great map

bbj0920 wrote:

gpq123 wrote:

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ시ㅣ발 어떤 ㅄ이 이걸? ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

huh
just stfu
Translate : gpq123 said lollollollollol wtf which f***er made this?
come on this is great map

I concur with the above statement.

You do some pretty badass maps val! keep the good work :3

h

I love this map and Spectator

Star~

Fix the drain on 0108 please, thanks

Qert wrote:

This is an amazing map.
Y U NO GET RANKED

'cause of lesjuh diff

Niice map val.


I got surprised about the length of the lesjuh's one lolz gj

OMG I need this map in approve now, its awesome!! Nice work, and btw Spec nice diff xD ExGon will beat your diff?

._.

Don't think so but is there a spot for a Guest Difficulty left?
*Since I tried on one just for the lulz and ended up mapping 45% in one session


Also, please set to WIP as long as Lesjuh's Diff is not finished~


*Well, finished in 2nd live session... god what did I just do

Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Jenny].osu

AR10, hitsounding changes & little stuffs; seems like it's better to read on 10 than 9, but well, even more speedy then

But since I'm still unsure about whether putting 10 or 9, here's another one with 9.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Jenny].osu


Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Jenny].osu

0108 style
00:44:999 - add beat? seems better for me for flow
00:51:857 - ^
02:48:428 - ^
02:55:285 - ^

great map!

lol

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[0108 style]

01:28:928 (4) - touch HP / Life bar?
01:38:571 (2) - ^
02:29:678 (5,6,7) - Ambiguous...
02:45:642 (2) - same as 01:28:928 -
02:54:857 (5) - ^
03:08:357 (4) - ^

So great '^'

sorry my mod is not helpful ;_;

02:51:321 (1,1,1) - I like it!


I like your maps.
this map too <3

Have a good time

Changed stacks, increased overall readability and playfeel, hope you like~

Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Jenny].osu

Defloration is missing:D

no no no no no, just can say, "STAR~" \:D/

Finished at last! Thanks for keeping the project on hold for a while val. I hope my diff is worth it >wwwwwwww<

Download: Hatsune Miku - Talent Shredder (val0108) [Lesjuh style].osu

ilu lesjuh have my babies

Damn, this needs to be approved asap.

approve dis gundam it

val0108 wrote:

Masturbation

YEAH

.

lolololz awesome beatmap nice job (′∀｀)d
Waitin' this to be approved

yeah!!.png

[General]

[0108 style]
02:47:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd remove the overlap between (2) and (4) here, you just need to move things around a little.

[Lesjuh style]
02:52:071 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). Derp.

[Spec's CTB]
I don't know much about CTB modding, but here are some things I noticed:
- Shouldn't there be hitsounds?
01:18:857 (1,1) - I think you should be following some part of the song, and there isn't any 1/4 here. Try a different pattern?
01:36:857 - Kiai should start here, not 01:36:910.
02:27:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - Similar to the above case, the 1/8 isn't represented in the song. If you follow the 1/6, you could come up with an interesting jump pattern.

I'd prefer to give bubble #2 or APP, if possible, but I guess that's it. It could also probably use some better taiko/CTB modding. Really good job overall!

Am I the only one seeing 0108's storyboard while playing Lesjuh's? I mean that "FL" effect on some sliders.

SapphireGhost wrote:

yeah!!.png

[General]

haha

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [0108 style] : 178928
- [Lesjuh style] : 178928
- [Ono's Taiko Oni] : 178922
- [Spec's CTB] : 178928
Might as well fix this, it'll just take a moment.

[0108 style]
02:47:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd remove the overlap between (2) and (4) here, you just need to move things around a little.

[Lesjuh style]
02:52:071 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). Derp.

All done

I'd prefer to give bubble #2 or APP, if possible, but I guess that's it. It could also probably use some better taiko/CTB modding. Really good job overall!

okay,I ask taiko/CTB mod thanks!!

Wishy22 wrote:

Am I the only one seeing 0108's storyboard while playing Lesjuh's? I mean that "FL" effect on some sliders.

Maybe reDL!!The problem is settled

Wow val thanks for making the flashlight SB for my diff too <3

I donate my remaining 4 kudosu to this map. Now let's approve it! o/