MoonShade wrote:

Here is the rest:

Collab
00:56:130 (1) - add finish? okay.
01:19:406 (3) - and again, why not just ctr+j (1)? Quick and save. okay.
02:05:096 (1) - add finish?
02:41:647 (1) - I would space this slider ~0.50 away from the previous kickslider, first you did so with all the circles and the kickslider before and then you can also see the approach circle better okay.
I don't find the style allways attractive but that's not the point here. I think it hasn't got much real errors in it and can be played by a skilled player

I'll star you cause you two put effort in making that map and are clearly trying to improve it. Thanks for star! \o/

• Why are there duplicates of each BG? You should delete them if you're not using them.
  Kiai times should be consistent but since it's Collab I guess it's okay??

LunarSakuya wrote:

What is up

General

• Why are there duplicates of each BG? You should delete them if you're not using them. I changed from png to jpg. You need to delete and redownload.
  Kiai times should be consistent but since it's Collab I guess it's okay??they are consistent.

Normal
00:00:958 (1) - Add Finish at beginning okay.
00:02:165 (2) - Add Whistles to both ends no
00:03:716 (1) - Add Whistle at beginning ^
00:05:096 (1) - Add Whistle at end ^
(The beginning of the song seems a bit quiet? Consider putting whistles on a some of these, so I'll stop mentioning them in this diff lol) Changed to normal hitsounds with 60% vol.
00:35:785 (1) - Watch out for large distances in the easier diffs, may confuse new people Too many complaints, so fixed.

01:52:337 (2) - Move forward to red tick and shorten slider no
01:55:441 (4) - Add clap no
01:55:441 (4) - Remove combo there is no nc..

02:04:061 (2) - Replace by copy and pasting the slider before it, and adjust of course okay.
02:13:372 (4) - NC okay.
02:26:475 (4) - Move to the left a little so the slider before it makes a nicer blanket lol its fine.

Collab
00:17:337 (11) - NC? no.
00:24:234 (6) - Replace by copy & pasting the slider after it, and adjust nope.
00:35:182 (5,6) - I feel like these hitsounds stand out too much changed.
00:51:820 (5) - NC to signify big distance change okay.
01:08:716 (1,2,3,4) - Took me a couple tries to get this or it could be that I suck I hate to say, but...

02:18:199 (7,8) - Add claps
02:23:544 (9) - Make audio "Normal" at the end?


Good luck

Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,441,81130,640,640
 F,0,441,785,0,1
 F,0,80958,81130,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,91992,149751,640,640
 F,0,91992,92337,0,1
 F,0,149579,149751,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,149923,166647,640,640
 F,0,149923,150268,0,1
 F,0,166475,166647,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,171303,194234,640,640
 F,0,171303,171647,0,1
 F,0,194061,194234,1,0

Makar8000 wrote:

Here you go~

[attachment=0:6ebcf]images.zip[/attachment:6ebcf]

Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,441,81130,640,640
 F,0,441,785,0,1
 F,0,80958,81130,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,91992,149751,640,640
 F,0,91992,92337,0,1
 F,0,149579,149751,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,149923,166647,640,640
 F,0,149923,150268,0,1
 F,0,166475,166647,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,171303,194234,640,640
 F,0,171303,171647,0,1
 F,0,194061,194234,1,0

Oh, and I still plan to mod this after Lin =w=

mochi wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

Here you go~

[attachment=0:a4c7a]images.zip[/attachment:a4c7a]

Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,441,81130,640,640
 F,0,441,785,0,1
 F,0,80958,81130,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,91992,149751,640,640
 F,0,91992,92337,0,1
 F,0,149579,149751,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,149923,166647,640,640
 F,0,149923,150268,0,1
 F,0,166475,166647,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,171303,194234,640,640
 F,0,171303,171647,0,1
 F,0,194061,194234,1,0

Oh, and I still plan to mod this after Lin =w=

The SB load doesn't change even if I remove the SB elements while they're inactive.

1. Kill .osb if it is unnecessary (empty now)
2. Disalbe CountDown in all diffs
3. Uncheck Letterbox during breaks unless u need the effect
4. Please fix SliderMultiplier in Easy and Normal diff to 0.8 & 1.0 manually in osu file.

1. Under "mochitxt3.png"
   1. F,0,149751,166475,0
      F,0,166475,171303,0
      can be combined to one row:
      F,0,149751,171303,0
   2. F,0,91992,,0 is unnecessary, remove it.

1. The position of ur whistles is really mess...highly recommend to put them more consitent.
2. 00:04:751 (2) - this whistle heard off...remove it, or move this note to prev red line and then move (3) to prev red line....recommend the later way.
3. 00:33:372 (3) - move to prev red line and stack with (2), and then add a slider between 00:33:544 - 00:33:889.
4. 00:58:889 (1,2) - the rhythm is weird here, i suppose it's could be
   [attachment=0:97d50]7.jpg[/attachment:97d50]
5. 01:09:923 - ^
6. 01:20:096 (2) - add a repeat
7. 02:07:854 (1) - same as 00:58:889
8. 02:18:888 (1) - ^

1. 00:11:992 - drag ur break start here
2. 00:20:096 (5) - NC?
3. 00:34:406 (1,2) - (Nazi)Not stack well
4. 00:39:406 (7) - move a tick later and stack with next (1) to make a triplet from red-line is much better
5. 00:42:753 - add a spinner here if u don't know how to map it
6. 00:51:647 - add a note here?
7. 00:54:406 - ^
8. 01:48:544 (7) - Move next NC to here
9. 01:58:889 (8) - remove finish
10. 02:33:027 (3) - NC?
11. 02:45:958 - add a repeat slider from here to 02:46:303 - ?
12. 02:55:268 (2) - ctrl+r?

1. 00:02:682 (8,9) - remove (9) and add a repeat to (8)?
2. 00:14:061 (7) - change to a note?
3. 00:24:923 (2,3,4) - Bad pattern for confusing, highly recommend to change it.
4. 00:43:199 (4) - move to right to (3,5) - 400:160
5. 00:58:716 - add a note here to make a stream is better i suppose
6. 01:03:199 (3,4) - bad pattern
7. 01:15:096 (2,3,4,5) - bad pattern
8. 03:06:992 (1) - Ctrl+r

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue

General:

1. Kill .osb if it is unnecessary (empty now)
2. Disalbe CountDown in all diffs okay.
3. Uncheck Letterbox during breaks unless u need the effect okay.
4. Please fix SliderMultiplier in Easy and Normal diff to 0.8 & 1.0 manually in osu file.okay.

StoryBoard(Collab):

1. Under "mochitxt3.png"
   1. F,0,149751,166475,0
      F,0,166475,171303,0
      can be combined to one row:
      F,0,149751,171303,0
   2. F,0,91992,,0 is unnecessary, remove it.

Normal:

1. The position of ur whistles is really mess...highly recommend to put them more consitent.
2. 00:04:751 (2) - this whistle heard off...remove it, or move this note to prev red line and then move (3) to prev red line....recommend the later way. removed whistle.
3. 00:33:372 (3) - move to prev red line and stack with (2), and then add a slider between 00:33:544 - 00:33:889. okay.
4. 00:58:889 (1,2) - the rhythm is weird here, i suppose it's could be
   [attachment=0:7850a]7.jpg[/attachment:7850a] image fail. x.x
5. 01:09:923 - ^ ^
6. 01:20:096 (2) - add a repeat no.
7. 02:07:854 (1) - same as 00:58:889 same.
8. 02:18:888 (1) - ^ ^

Collab:

1. 00:02:682 (8,9) - remove (9) and add a repeat to (8)? no.
2. 00:14:061 (7) - change to a note? no.
3. 00:24:923 (2,3,4) - Bad pattern for confusing, highly recommend to change it. no one had problems with it.
4. 00:43:199 (4) - move to right to (3,5) - 400:160 okay.
5. 00:58:716 - add a note here to make a stream is better i suppose what? theres already a note there.
6. 01:03:199 (3,4) - bad pattern I like it :3
7. 01:15:096 (2,3,4,5) - bad pattern ^
8. 03:06:992 (1) - Ctrl+r

that's all and GL

SliderMultiplier:1

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue. Sorry for the long wait.

[General]
None

[Normal]
-Change slider Multiplier from 0.999999999999999 to 1. Already mentioned.

SliderMultiplier:1

[Collab]
-00:14:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream doesn't go to any sound.
-00:17:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
-00:18:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
-00:34:923 (4,5,6) - This is touching the HP bar.
-00:36:303 (5,6,7) - ^
-01:39:579 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:14:579.
- There are more ghost streams to list. That's basically what I found wrong with this difficulty, otherwise the map is okay. Insanes and collabs tend to be a bit overmapped anyways. Not a type of mapping style I would aim for in my mapping style.
-Reduce Approach Rate to 8? It's up to you though.

Good Map Overall.

SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999

SliderMultiplier:0.8

356,296,3716,6,0,B|316:360|256:316|256:316|196:364|156:296,1,240,0|2

312,116,32675,2,0,B|272:92|256:36|256:36|240:92|200:116,1,200,0|8

156,228,34054,6,0,B|192:288|256:296|320:288|356:228,1,240,0|8

312,208,73365,2,8,B|188:248|116:120|236:40|356:120|284:248|160:208,1,399.999999999999,8|8

184,268,119572,6,0,B|216:260|256:356|256:356|296:260|328:268,1,240,8|8

320,184,120951,2,0,B|276:197|256:97|256:97|232:197|184:181,1,240,0|8

ikari_kyon wrote:

- What ugly custom clap >_< dont fit to this pretty song.

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi /o/

General

- By concistant, use a different BG image on [neko's Easy] and [Normal], I though you cand find other cute BG :3 I'll ask neko.
- What ugly custom clap >_< dont fit to this pretty song.

Timing

- Is a bit late, use offset: -428 (-7 on current), dont forget to resnap all notes, green timelines and preview time. Check the mod first then change the offset please. Timing is fine.

[Normal]

- some stacks are not suitable, since you have some 1/2 starting on red ticks and some 1/1. Try to use stacks on [Normal] diffs on a common snapping.
- lazy hitsounds uh im bad at hitsounds ><

00:07:682 (4) - whistle
00:08:199 (5) - whistle at start and end of slider
00:09:234 (1) - whistle at start of slider
00:10:096 (2) - whistle
00:20:268 (1) - whistle at start of slider
00:20:958 (2) - ↑
00:30:958 (2,1) - 1/1 stack and 00:31:992 (2,3) - 1/2 stack, the player may think that the second also is 1/1.
00:50:613 (1) - whistle at end of slider
00:51:992 (3) - whistle on second repeat
00:53:372 (1) - whistle at end of slider
00:54:751 (3) - whistle at second repeat
01:36:130 (3,1) - overlap >_<
01:55:441 (4) - start is covered by 01:54:061 (2) hitburst its fine.
02:27:165 (1) - simmilar as up, also the stack is not perfect no idea what you mean. wrong note?

[Collab]

- I dont like collabs :v you should know that, but please, decrease the AR is so painful at this BPM AR is fine.

mochi wrote:

I'm ugly

ikari_kyon wrote:

mochi wrote:

I'm ugly

ikari_kyon wrote:

- What ugly custom clap >_< dont fit to this pretty song.

Melophobia wrote:

Hi

General
Title should be "Let's GO". Will change soon.
"☆ミ" means nothing, no need to romanize. i guess. current one looks odd

Artist:
Nakatsugawa Ui
Hinata Ibuki
Koumoto Madoka

http://puu.sh/iQrG

these are just character name,
so i'm not sure if they are suitable for the artist Trying to find the artists.. ><

Normal
00:38:889 (4) - finish to the end
00:50:613 (1) - finish to the beginning
01:43:027 - sounds better if here's a note with a finish, although it seems very hard to add.. < too hard to add.
01:58:199 (3,1) - spacing
02:00:958 (3,1) - ^
02:07:854 (1) - finish to the beginning

Collab

00:00:441 (1,2) - shouldnt these notes be soft sound?
00:00:958 (3) - finish to the beginning instead of clap
00:06:475 (3) - ^
00:13:027 (4) - clap to the beginning
00:14:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - no clap?
00:34:923 (4) - clap to the end instead of finish
01:09:923 (1) - finish to the beginning
02:46:130 (3) - finish to the end

good luck

inaba-tan wrote:

may i make taiko diff ?

hibino maki aoba ringo isuzu asuka

Melophobia wrote:

sorry for making useless post >_>

viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

please read this thread before full submission so that you make no mistake.

also, the artist, which i tell you, is character name therefore you should add name of voice actor to tags, i think

hibino maki aoba ringo isuzu asuka

of course no kds for this one :3

Byakugan249 wrote:

oh it'd look better if you can add the people who play as Ui, Hinata and Madoka as the singers and the characters on the tags. i find it odd that the characters' names are the singers.

Makar8000 wrote:

[General]

1. 'Tis fine.

[Normal]

1. Not bad o: Most of these are nazi suggestions~
2. 00:43:027 (2) - Finish at the end.
3. 00:45:441 (2) - Blanket (1) o.ob.
4. 00:47:854 (1) - Blanket (4) in the previous combo.
5. 00:54:751 (3) - Shorten this so there is only one repeat and add a note at 00:55:785? Did everything except this.
6. 01:00:096 (2) - Oh God please fix this slider orz http://puu.sh/j1wv.
7. 01:05:613 (2) - Move this back so it isn't touching (1).
8. 01:46:475 (2) - Try to get this to blanket (3) better?
9. 01:54:751 (3) - Clap at the start?
10. 01:55:441 (4) - Clap at the end? You might might also want to add a note (or extend the slider to have another repeat) and add a clap to it.
11. 01:57:510 (2) - Clap at the start.
12. 01:59:579 (1) - Finish at the start.
13. 02:02:337 (1) - ^
14. 02:07:854 (1) - ^
15. 02:10:419 - Do the same thing I suggested in the previous Kiai to this one (or just copy paste everything again lolol).
16. 02:46:475 - Add a timing point here to switch to soft hitsounds.
17. 02:47:682 (1) - Remove new combo.
18. 02:58:889 (1) - Move this over to the left instead of doing a blanket since its it partially covered by a previous slider :<
19. 02:53:372 (1) - Remove new combo.
20. 02:56:130 (1) - ^
21. 02:58:889 (1) - ^
22. 03:01:647 (1) - ^
23. 03:07:854 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
24. 03:09:923 (1) - Remove new combo.
25. 03:12:165 (1) - ^

[Collab]

1. The intro (00:00:441-00:10:613) seems overmapped but I guess its fine.
2. 00:15:441 (5,6) - Inconsistent spacing in the stream. No clue how this .......
3. Imo Mythol should try to follow mochi's hitsound pattern, its a lot better lol. Nope. Mine are waaaaay better.
4. You should still fix the storyboard so that you make new instances of the images each time you actually need them.

I was told to wait on the hard so ill look at it later~

Leorda wrote:

Hi

General
* Remove the countdown and Letterbox in Breaks for all diff for consistency on each diff Done.. T_T
* Inconsistent kiai time, you might want to check them Sorry about this... I don't know what neko is doing T_T

Normal
00:10:441 (1) - Why new combo?
00:58:889 (1) - Why finish at end slider?
01:01:647 (1) - Make a same slider as 01:02:854 (2)? (Nazi) Its fine.
01:59:579 (1,2,3) - These pattern is doesn't follow to vocal. Consider to make a timing pattern like this one http://puu.sh/j78P I'd like to keep it simple, and its also consistent with similar situations.
02:16:130 (2) - I think it's better if you using a wave slider for this

Ganbatteh

inaba-tan wrote:

finish x3

Leorda wrote:

General
* Remove the countdown and Letterbox in Breaks for all diff for consistency on each diff
* Inconsistent kiai time, you might want to check them

mochi wrote:

Leorda wrote:

General
* Remove the countdown and Letterbox in Breaks for all diff for consistency on each diff
* Inconsistent kiai time, you might want to check them

MYTHOL! i told you to fix this like 10 times now orz

biwako wrote:

mod from queue~

[General]
[inaba's Taiko] has different timing, Countdown and LetterboxInBreaks
add "inaba-tan" tag to Hard diff
add mochi's previous name to tag?

fixed all except timing, I'll let him do that.

[Normal]
00:30:958 (2) - spacing
01:56:820 (1) - ^

fixed all.

[Collab]
00:11:992 - add finish
00:58:889 - add finish
01:19:406 (3,4,5) - add whistle instead of clap
01:20:268 - remove clap
01:20:613 - add clap
02:29:923 - add finish
02:33:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/256980 this part is sound like above so follow this rhythm?
02:46:475 - add finish
fixed all.
also, This diff max score should be under 18m if you don't want this diff to APP

Fenya wrote:

Hi

General:
The offset of the 4 standard diff, have offset "-421" and the offset of Taiko diff is "940" ... That can't be, all diff must have the same offset. Will talk to inaba~

Normal:
The hit sound whistle in some parts may sound annoying to the ear... imo
00:03:716 (1,3) - (Personal Opinion)It would be more beautiful if you let them so: http://puu.sh/jkYP ? okay.
00:04:751 (2) - spacing ignored for symmetry.
00:43:027 (2) - 3rd slidertick unnecessary nope.

Collab:
Good diff :3
00:03:716 (2) - 1 grid down?
00:08:372 (4,5) - 1 grid up?
00:41:303 (2) - move to: http://puu.sh/jlfN
00:43:372 (5) - 1 grid left
00:52:682 (3) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlhO
00:52:854 (4) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlhR
00:53:027 (5) - Move to http://puu.sh/jli7
00:53:199 (6) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlia
01:04:061 (4,5,6) - 1 grid down
01:13:544 (2) - ^
01:40:010 (9) - 1 grid up
03:02:337 (6) - 1 grid down?
03:14:061 (T) - What is the purpose the kiai here? if not, delete it. Final kiai fountain to end the song.

Sorry, but I ignored everything, since it looks like pure nazi modding.
Used most out of boredom. Ignored everything relating to the star jump. You have good eyes.....
Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something~
Sorry for my bad English, good luck

Fenya wrote:

Collab:
Good diff :3
00:03:716 (2) - 1 grid down?
00:08:372 (4,5) - 1 grid up?
00:41:303 (2) - move to: http://puu.sh/jlfN
00:43:372 (5) - 1 grid left
00:52:682 (3) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlhO
00:52:854 (4) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlhR
00:53:027 (5) - Move to http://puu.sh/jli7
00:53:199 (6) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlia
01:04:061 (4,5,6) - 1 grid down
01:13:544 (2) - ^
01:40:010 (9) - 1 grid up
03:02:337 (6) - 1 grid down?
03:14:061 (T) - What is the purpose the kiai here? if not, delete it.

Sorry, but I ignored everything, since it looks like pure nazi modding.

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something~
Sorry for my bad English, good luck

S h i a wrote:

that's all~ nice sliders <3

1. Double check your Tags and make sure them are perfectly the same
2. -4ms on offest （-425）

xcherry wrote:

taiko bg? ;w; *stares at inaba* If you want, I can get someone around to making one for you if you wish. inaba is using meiikyuu's background right now, which breaks the fact that all diffs have different bgs.

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
try to compress your sb a bit =w=?

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Mythol ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file and full submit.

[Collab]

1. 00:11:473 - Maybe add a note,have vocal to here.

okay.

[meiikyuu's Hard]

1. 00:34:059 (4,1,2) - Try rerfect stack end point.
2. 00:40:783 (4) - Add new combo.

[Normal]

1. 01:02:680 - Add a note to here,sound much better.

sorry no.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~
Good luck ~

Laurier wrote:

sorry for late mod

nc=new combo

Easy
00:41:990 (5) - nazi stack on 00:40:266 (1) end
00:53:370 (1)~ try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/kJau
01:07:163 (3) - nc
01:09:921 (7) - ^
01:56:818 (1,2) - 1grid left.((2)stack on 01:56:128 (4))

Normal
AR-1?
00:20:956 (2) - It's a ok but my opinion,it is too hard for new players. Because change to 2 sliders? no.
00:33:197 (3) - don't stack this. stack on slider end is too hard for new players.
00:47:852 (5) - nc
01:43:025 (5) - dont stack this
02:08:887 - add note?

inaba's taiko
相変わらず難しい


Hard
00:09:232 (8) - nc and next note remove nc
00:39:232 (10,11,12) - this stream is looks bad a little. try this? http://puu.sh/kJfm
01:46:818 (6) - try this http://puu.sh/kJfE
02:55:266 (2) - nazi stack on (1)end

collab
AR9? I think AR 8 is better... no.
00:15:094 (1,1,1) - remove nc ok.

1. As we discussed in game, the source for it is incorrect. It's actually Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi. Not Hoshizora he Kakaru Hashi

1. 02:07:852 (inaba's Taiko)-This timing point where the 2nd kiai time starts is not snapped properly on the white tick. Fix that.
2. 02:29:921 (inaba's Taiko)-This timing point where the 2nd kiai time ends is not snapped properly on the white tick. Fix that.
3. 02:51:990 (neko's Easy, Normal, meiikyuu's Hard and Collab)-This timing point where the 3rd kiai time begins, it's kind of premature to start it off here. :/ See where the 3rd kiai time starts off in inana's Taiko which is on 02:57:508? I strongly suggesting using that time length. It's better there.
4. 02:57:508 (Normal and inaba's Taiko)-This timing point where the 3rd kiai time starts is not snapped properly on the white tick. Fix that.
5. 03:14:059 (inaba's Taiko)-This timing point where the 3rd kiai time ends is not snapped properly on the white tick. Fix that.

1. 00:03:714 (1)-A whistle on the beginning would sound great really. A perhaps add a finish on the end? It sure does sound like it.
2. 00:28:542 (1, 2)-Here's a mapping pattern that I think is better and easier in my opinion. Remove the repeat on the 1st slider, bring slider 2 on 00:29:232 and then add a repeat on slider 2. Should be something like this. o: The spacing pattern and slider shape is up to you. Oh and perhaps add a finish on the beginning of slider 1 and add a finish on the repeat of slider 2? (:
3. 00:34:059 (1)-Sounds like there should be a finish on the beginning. Consider adding one in.
4. 00:37:163 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
5. 00:39:232 (5)-I think you forgot to add a clap here.
6. 00:41:990 (5)-^
7. 00:42:335 (1)-I thought there was suppose to be a finish here? ): It sure does sound like it.
8. 00:58:887 (1)-^ ):
9. 01:04:404 (1)-Consider adding a finish on the beginning.
10. 01:09:921 (1)-^
11. 01:18:197 (1)-Would sound great if there was a finish here.
12. 01:43:025 (1, 3)-On slider 1, a clap on the beginning doesn't sound right. Replace it with a finish. It sounds better. Also, a clap on the end doesn't sound right too. Remove it. As for slider 3, both claps on the beginning and end doesn't sound right. ): Remove them.
13. 01:45:439 (1, 3, 4)-On sliders 1 and 3, I was expecting claps on the beginning and end points. Guess not. :/ It would sound great if you do. As for slider 4, a clap on the end would sound nice.
14. 01:51:301 (1)-Care to explain why there isn't a finish here? ):
15. 02:07:508 (1)-To be honest, a clap here sounds better than a finish.
16. 02:18:887 (1)-It would be best if you added a finish here.
17. 02:24:404 (1)-Consider adding a finish on the beginning.
18. 02:30:266 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7)-Slider 1 is a bit far from the center of the spinner. Try to keep it close so a beginner will be able to read that after clearing through a spinner. Oh and about objects 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7. Try to put in more effort with the hitsounds. ):
19. 02:46:473 (1)-Perhaps a finish here would sound great?
20. 02:54:059 (4)-Forgot to add a clap on the end.
21. 03:08:542 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting.

1. 00:53:025 (4)-A clap here would sound fitting?
2. 00:55:783 (4)-^
3. 01:18:197 (1)-Would sound great if there was a finish here.
4. 01:34:749 (1)-While using the distance snap, move this note one grid to the left. It's a minor fixing with the spacing
5. 01:43:025 (5)-A finish here sounds fitting?
6. 01:51:301 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound great.
7. 01:59:577 to 02:04:749-There are objects that do need claps. Please put them in.
8. 02:15:783 (3)-A clap here would sound great?
9. 02:24:404 (1)-Consider adding a finish on the beginning.
10. 03:04:749 (4)-A whistle would sound alright here?
11. 03:07:852 (6)-A finish sounds fitting on the end in my opinion.

19:11 <Roddie> : mind if we can do irc modding?
19:11 <Roddie> : on map?
19:11  *Roddie is editing (Hibino Maki, Aoba Ringo & Isuzu Asuka - Let's GO)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43834]
19:11 <Roddie> : on your diff? o:
19:11 <meiikyuu> : yes sure ^^ giv me a sec
19:12 <Roddie> : alright, let me know when you're ready
19:12 <meiikyuu> : ok rdy
19:13 <Roddie> : 00:05:439 (7, 8)-
19:13 <Roddie> : did you leave the spacing like this spaced out on purpose?
19:13 <meiikyuu> : yeahh.. do u think i should fit them with the rest of the combo>
19:15 <Roddie> : yea
19:15 <meiikyuu> : ok
19:17 <Roddie> : lovely
19:17 <Roddie> : osu crashed on me
19:18 <Roddie> : alright, now that i'm back, lets continue
19:18 <Roddie> : 00:17:508 (2, 3)-
19:18 <meiikyuu> : lol np
19:18 <Roddie> : can you make these sliders have a sharper curve? ):
19:18 <meiikyuu> : o
19:18 <Roddie> : they just don't look right
19:18 <meiikyuu> : lol ok
19:18 <meiikyuu> : and brb one min
19:22 <meiikyuu> : ok
19:23 <Roddie> : 00:23:025 (1)-
19:23 <Roddie> : perhaps add a finish here?
19:24 <meiikyuu> : done
19:25 <Roddie> : 00:42:335 (1)-
19:25 <Roddie> : here as well?
19:27 <Roddie> : also
19:27 <Roddie> : 00:46:301 (3)-
19:27 <Roddie> : I see that you were using a finish on the slider body :3
19:27 <Roddie> :   wait...
19:27 <Roddie> : nevermind~
19:27 <Roddie> : it actually fits o.o
19:27 <meiikyuu> : xD
19:28 <Roddie> : 01:04:404 (1)
19:29 <Roddie> : consider adding a finish here.
19:29 <meiikyuu> : ok
19:30 <Roddie> : 01:15:956 (4)-
19:30 <Roddie> : try this have this go in to a proper curve
19:30 <Roddie> : like this
19:30 <Roddie> : http://puu.sh/kOmU
19:33 <Roddie> : 01:20:611 (6)-
19:34 <Roddie> : care to explain why there isn't a finish on the end? ):
19:34 <Roddie> : 01:37:508 (1)-
19:35 <Roddie> : A finish here sounds alright?
19:35 <meiikyuu> : oh sure
19:36 <Roddie> : 02:05:094 (1)-
19:36 <Roddie> : this spinner before the 2nd kiai time has a finish here
19:36 <Roddie> : while the previous one doesn't
19:36 <Roddie> : before the 1st kiai time
19:36 <Roddie> : so... add that finish there just to keep consistent
19:37 <meiikyuu> : k :)
19:37 <Roddie> : 02:13:370 (1)-
19:37 <Roddie> : a finish would be alright here?
19:37 <meiikyuu> : k
19:38 <Roddie> : 02:39:577 (1, 2, 3, 4)-
19:38 <Roddie> : I like what you did there
19:39 <meiikyuu> : thanks ^^
19:39 <Roddie> : but it would be better if you use the distance snap and place those sliders behind another
19:39 <Roddie> : know what I mean?
19:39 <Roddie> : oops
19:40 <Roddie> : another or each other
19:40 <Roddie> : w/e works
19:40 <meiikyuu> : i see, ill try it out
19:40 <Roddie> : like this for example
19:40 <Roddie> : http://puu.sh/kOrz
19:41 <Roddie> : it's a bit easier to read that way
19:43 <meiikyuu> : hmm does straight line not work ? ;_;
19:43 <Roddie> : hm?
19:43 <Roddie> : you mean the anchor?
19:44 <Roddie> : or the spacing pattern?
19:44 <meiikyuu> : like what i have now generally
19:44 <Roddie> : okay?
19:45 <Roddie> : can you show me an image?
19:45 <Roddie> : i'm not really sure what you mean ._.
19:45 <meiikyuu> : k one sec
19:45 <meiikyuu> : http://puu.sh/kOtP
19:47 <Roddie> : it's the same formation you have now
19:47 <Roddie> : okay
19:48 <Roddie> : i'm sorry but I still don't understand ._.
19:48 <meiikyuu> : lol im just asking if its alright if i keep it the way it is 
19:48 <meiikyuu> : but if you rlly feel i should change it ill do it
19:48 <Roddie> : oh
19:48 <Roddie> : well that's up to you
19:49 <Roddie> : i'm just suggesting a pattern that might be better for you
19:49 <Roddie> : but if not, then it's alright
19:49 <meiikyuu> : oh okay, ty
19:49 <Roddie> : alright then
19:50 <Roddie> : 02:40:956 (1)-
19:50 <Roddie> : sounds like there should be a finish here
19:50 <Roddie> : consider adding one in
19:50 <meiikyuu> : done :)
19:52 <Roddie> : oh damn...
19:53 <Roddie> : there are quite a lot of errors i just spotted ):
19:53 <Roddie> : 00:00:956 (1)-
19:53 <Roddie> : this slider end point is not snapped properly
19:53 <Roddie> : ._.
19:54 <Roddie> : on the white tick
19:54 <Roddie> : 00:01:473 (2)-
19:54 <Roddie> : pretty much the same thing but snap the end point on the red tick
19:55 <Roddie> : 02:20:611 (4)-
19:55 <Roddie> : Same thing here
19:55 <meiikyuu> : woah
19:55 <Roddie> : 02:28:025 (3)-
19:56 <Roddie> : snap the end point properly on the white tick
19:56 <Roddie> : and finally
19:56 <Roddie> : 02:27:680 (2)-
19:56 <Roddie> : the same thing here
19:56 <Roddie> : and that's it
19:56 <Roddie> : almost over looked them xD
19:56 <Roddie> : that would have been a very serious problem ):
19:57 <meiikyuu> : tyvm lol
19:58 <Roddie> : alright and that's about it
19:58 <Roddie> : you're all set on your difficulty

18:11 <Roddie> : let's get started
18:12 <Mythol> : k
18:12 <Roddie> : there is quite a problem with collab
18:12 <Roddie> : it's a bit overmapped 
18:13 <Roddie> : and to be quite honest, most of the rhythm patterns you put in don't make sense to me :/
18:13 <Mythol> : first map ._.
18:13 <Roddie> : i noticed
18:13 <Roddie> : well, here's a couple of things I can tell you
18:14 <Roddie> : 1st, do you think this map would be fun for everybody else?
18:14 <Roddie> : that is overmapped like this?
18:14 <Mythol> : yeah
18:14 <Roddie> : really?
18:15 <Roddie> : well, i don't find this fun to play on :/
18:15 <Roddie> : in fact, it's a bit frustrating
18:15 <Mythol> : its fun for me ._.
18:15 <Roddie> : for you
18:16 <Mythol> : so my parts are overmapped?
18:16 <Mythol> : because I know alot of mochi's are, but he wants to keep it like that
18:16 <Roddie> : in the beginning, yes ):
18:16 <Mythol> : well I can fix them if its that bad o.o
18:17 <Roddie> : look, the way i say overmapped is that you put in to many notes after another and it really doesn't follow the 
18:17 <Roddie> : rhythm of the song
18:17 <Roddie> : i have seen a lot of maps that do that 
18:17 <Roddie> : it disappoints me really ):
18:17 <Roddie> : and i'm sure other players would feel the same way
18:18 <Roddie> : not everything in mapping can really really hard without a good reason
18:18 <Roddie> : you know?
18:18 <Mythol> : yeah
18:18 <Roddie> : look, just see this out
18:19 <Roddie> : a map that goes with the flow of the song can lead to much success :)
18:20 <Mythol> : im not disagreeing with you :P
18:20 <Mythol> : i just need to know which parts you think are overmapped so I can change
18:20 <Roddie> : oh sorry, i got carried away
18:20 <Mythol> : lol np~
18:20 <Roddie> : it's just that, maps that I see overmapped
18:21 <Roddie> : that's something I really like to talk about with the mapper
18:21 <Roddie> : anyway
18:22 <Roddie> : 00:14:577 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6)-
18:22 <Roddie> : does this really make sense?
18:23 <Mythol> : I'll change xD
18:25 <Roddie> : okay
18:25 <Roddie> : just remember
18:25 <Roddie> : follow the flow of the song
18:26 <Roddie> : 00:35:439 (6, 7)-
18:26 <Roddie> : i suggest you remove the 6th note
18:27 <Mythol> : there is no 6th note =/
18:27 <Roddie> : oh oops
18:27 <Roddie> : i edit out myself
18:27 <Roddie> : sry
18:27 <Roddie> : 00:35:439 (1, 2)-
18:28 <Roddie> : I suggest you delete the 1st note
18:28 <Mythol> : done
18:28 <Roddie> : and use a distance snap on the next note after so you can space it out and put a new combo there
18:28 <Roddie> : that should follow the vocals nicely (:
18:28 <Roddie> : know what I mean?
18:29 <Mythol> : yeah
18:29 <Mythol> : bye bye pattern :(
18:29 <Roddie> : hey, i'm trying to help your map play better
18:29 <Mythol> : lol
18:29 <Roddie> : don't feel disappointed
18:29 <Roddie> : i'm trying to do the best I can
18:30 <Roddie> : so your map doesn't play a bad ):
18:31 <Roddie> : no offense
18:31 <Mythol> : nahh keep going please :D
18:31 <Roddie> : 00:42:335 (1)-
18:31 <Roddie> : forgot to add a finish here?
18:31 <Mythol> : added
18:32 <Roddie> : 00:58:887 (1)-
18:32 <Roddie> : Perhaps put a new combo here since the first chorus begins?
18:33 <Mythol> : ok
18:34 <Roddie> : 01:00:094 (1, 2, 3, 4)-
18:34 <Mythol> : overmap right ._.
18:34 <Roddie> : a note triplet on 1, 2, and 3 is really not necesarry and it's not fitting too ):
18:34 <Mythol> : replaced with slider
18:35 <Roddie> : okay
18:35 <Roddie> : and space the 4th note out
18:35 <Roddie> : 01:00:439-
18:36 <Mythol> : k
18:36 <Roddie> : 01:08:197 (5, 6, 7)-
18:36 <Roddie> : pretty much the same thing here
18:37 <Roddie> : the 6th and 7th notes after the 5th slider's end point
18:37 <Mythol> : yeah
18:37 <Mythol> : i removed 6 to fix..
18:37 <Mythol> : removed clap on 7 too
18:38 <Roddie> : 01:14:577-
18:38 <Roddie> : a new combo here is not necessary
18:38 <Roddie> : 01:15:266-
18:38 <Mythol> : NC there
18:38 <Mythol> : yup
18:38 <Roddie> : this object here however, does need a new combo
18:38 <Roddie> : okay~
18:41 <Roddie> : 01:18:197 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5)-
18:41 <Roddie> : ._.
18:42 <Mythol> : on it~
18:42 <Roddie> : 01:39:577 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)-
18:43 <Roddie> : i know this is mochi's part
18:43 <Roddie> : but this doesn't make sense :/
18:43 <Roddie> : not following the flow of the song very well ._.
18:43 <Mythol> : he loves his streams :P
18:43 <Roddie> : is he here?
18:44 <Mythol> : no
18:44 <Roddie> : let me see...
18:44 <Roddie> : damn it :/
18:44 <Mythol> : but he wont remove
18:44 <Mythol> : ALOT of other ppl complained about the streams
18:44 <Mythol> : he has no intention of changing them :P
18:44 <Roddie> : then that's his own fault?
18:44 <Roddie> : *sigh*
18:44 <Mythol> : =/
18:45 <Roddie> : fine, but we'll see if a lot of modders do complain about it
18:45 <Roddie> : you'll see
18:46 <Mythol> : x.x
18:46 <Roddie> : you know, i thought he would gain a bit more experience on the maps he just got ranked
18:46 <Roddie> : but it doesn't show ):
18:46 <Roddie> : anyway
18:46 <Roddie> : 01:59:577-
18:47 <Roddie> : i do believe that this does need a new combo
18:47 <Mythol> : I'll change for now, and tell him about it when he gets on
18:48 <Roddie> : 02:07:852-
18:48 <Roddie> : same thing here because the 2nd chorus starts
18:48 <Mythol> : 02:08:714 (1) - remove this nc
18:48 <Mythol> : and add 02:09:059 (3) -  ?
18:48 <Roddie> : oh very good
18:48 <Roddie> : i was going to mention that :)
18:49 <Roddie> : 02:20:094 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8)-
18:49 <Roddie> : i know he loves using streams
18:49 <Roddie> : but i just don't think putting a stream here makes sense :/
18:50 <Mythol> : I'll tell him..
18:50 <Roddie> : okay~
18:50 <Roddie> : 02:22:852 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8,)-
18:51 <Roddie> : same thing here.
18:51 <Mythol> : k
18:51 <Roddie> : oh look, now i'm in your part :D
18:52 <Mythol> : D:
18:52 <Roddie> : 02:34:059 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8)-
18:52 <Roddie> : this is okay
18:52 <Roddie> : this follows the song pretty well
18:52 <Roddie> : (:
18:52 <Mythol> : \o/
18:53 <Roddie> : 02:38:887-
18:53 <Roddie> : whoa
18:53 <Roddie> : that's a quite a stream
18:53 <Roddie> : and it's fitting
18:53 <Roddie> : :D
18:54 <Mythol> : xD
18:54 <Roddie> : 02:57:508-
18:54 <Roddie> : okay, i'll be posting about the timing points after this
18:54 <Roddie> : but right know, put a new combo here
18:55 <Mythol> : okay.
18:55 <Roddie> : well, after i finish with irc modding
18:55 <Roddie> : you'll see
18:55 <Roddie> : lol
18:55 <Mythol> : mhmm
18:55 <Roddie> : and that's it
18:55 <Roddie> : you're done
18:56 <Mythol> : yayy \:D/
18:56 <Roddie> : there are some finishes that were needed that I probably missed
18:56 <Roddie> : so, watch out for those, alright?
18:56 <Mythol> : ok

Black → Suggestion.

Blue → If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.

Red → Please change the absolute.

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

request from my queue

Black → Suggestion.

Blue → If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.

Red → Please change the absolute.

[General]

●fine~

[Normal]

●00:33:197 (3) - spacing
●01:43:025 (5) - ^
●01:52:335 (2) - ^
●00:03:714 (1) - Add finish (start)
●00:14:749 (1) - Move (x:352 y:312)
●00:41:645 (4) - ^ (x:256 y:256)
●01:54:059 (1) - Add finish (start)
●02:46:473 (1) - whistle → finish change
●Placement a little more cleanly

[Collab]

●AR9...I think I do not fit. AR8 change?
●I think this is a good map

good luck~

388,296,3714,6,0,B|328:356|256:272|256:272|183:360|105:290,2,320,6|0|4

1. I hate negative Offsets, they're so strange...song starting before playing nngh... use 956(Use current time on next big white tick)?

1. many Many MANY symmetry issues like 00:03:714. Please correct them, they usually don't even change your map placement, but make it so much better to see (so correcting them don't make you edit most map and isn't so hard). Use Ctrl+H and Ctr+J to control all type of simmetry
2. You are following the drum and voice, and that could be a bit confusive some times
3. 00:02:335 (2) - It sound off, move to 00:02:163 (2) -
4. 01:50:611 (3,4) - Jump not for easies
5. 02:04:404 (1) - Start from 02:04:577 (1) - (same end)
6. 02:14:059 (2) - Move to 02:13:887 (2) - you wanted to follow that note, right?
7. 02:22:335 (2) - There are other before that i didn'w said... anyway, make it start from 02:22:163 (2) (same end)
8. 02:27:163 (1) - taking a note so early after a spinner is maybe really hard for newbies, make it end on 02:29:577
9. 02:49:921 (2) - Move to 02:49:835 (2) -
10. 02:50:094 (x) - Add note (you can use a slider starting from ^ and ending there)
11. 02:51:990 (1) - Drum end 1/2 before, Voice 1/2 after... watcha followin'? (if drum, make 02:52:852 (2,3,4) - start 1/2 before, same end for 4)

1. Use tick rate 2 can be a better idea, only a few red ticks doesn't stay that good, but you'll got some more slider following music better
2. There are pretty many many time a note like 00:24:404 (3) can be substituted by 2 notes like
   
3. You seem to be afraid of red ticks notes in Normal levels
4. 00:03:714 (1,2,3,1) - Well, i do thinkn like this is better (follow more voice...)
   
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5. 00:20:266 (1) - Blanket 00:18:887 (2) - end
   
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• Well I can't mod Taikos so good, but I have a suggestion to remove Taikos Spinner unreliabilty :

1. 03:29:232 (1) - Make it end in 03:30:094, it make sense and make the spinner that is played perfectly end at a more correct point(as now this spinner count 3 hits

1. You generally obtain a better flow with curves in softer song, strange shapes in happy songs and shaped squary in harder songs, this is soft and happy...
2. 00:19:404 (4) - Flow better musically and graphically as a blanket or a curve
   
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3. 00:23:370 (3,4,5) - Make it curve gradually
   
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4. 00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flow better as a curve
   
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   03:03:542 (4) - You did something like this some times... why don't make them blanketed?
   
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   03:13:369 (3) - It's too short for that shape
   
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1. make the names come up with beats, or let the 1st be there before starting... it'll provide a better effect
2. The part after 02:46:128 is worth mapping, as you did map it in other difficulties, max draining time is 240 seconds, having 997 combos will make people angry to not reach 1000 combo for 3 notes too lol. and I don't think you will pass 20mil with 5 more seconds of map
3. Mythol
   
   1. 'll give you an important hint: try to not just map in 1/2, but put some stops, and decorate all with some slowdowns... try to make slider have sense: I did expect the slider being/starting/ending before/after. An example for the first combo, remember to put a 0.5x SVM section in 3 and 4
      
   2. (the second half of your part got that problem less)
4. mochi
   
   1. I don't think NCing in a crazy manner like that is effectively good
   2. Try to review some jumps, as most of them aren't easily readable
   3. Well, try to avoid overmapping too much... I know overmapping in the right way is good though... an example of non readable overmap is 01:43:714 (4,5,6,7,8,9), as the word she say start from (6) and in (5) there's no sustained voice. delete (5) and make 01:44:232 (9) Slider start from the ex-8 now-7. The are other notes-on-nothing like 02:16:732 (4), that are actually difficult to be in streams. Some streams are better as single sliders too as 02:20:611 (7,8,9), as example is better being a single slider starting from (7)

• 00:50:613
  01:59:579

1. To Kiddo-kun who undid some of my mods:
   Using red ticks that follow music IS better than white ticks that doesn't do so. In the cases I said, the voice AND the drums demanded Red ticks, which are by the way more intuitive that white in those point. Remember osu! shall be more dependent on music than ever. Your criticism ISN'T Constructive.
2. There aren't problem I can see anymore there, good work. Plus yeah, Kiddo-kun, using 1/2 in easies in part that it have sense means he's doing a good work.
3. Undo:
   

   • 00:03:714 (1,2) - (2) may be too hard to hit for beginners because the transition from white tick to red tick is rather sudden, move (2) so that it hits on 00:07:163 - instead.
   • 00:09:749 (2) - ^ Same here, please move it so that it hits on 00:09:921 -. And all over the map, some the transitions from 1/1 to 1/2 is rough and does not feel like it belongs in an Easy Difficulty. Go through the map and make sure everything runs smoothly.

   That's what I ask for

1. There are part that could have be more graphically fine, but that come with time (remember using Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J to check symmetry)
2. 01:04:404 (1) - Make this 1/2 longer plus... avoid the overlaps
   
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3. 01:07:163 (1) - You can follow music with this slider(Make sure the slider seem to tremble at the 2nd red tick)
   
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   01:15:439 (1) - It repeat nowhere like that.. plus like sound better
   

1. You really want to use all that spacing changes ? try to avoid non hinted jumps. especiall
2. 00:04:232 (4,5,6,7,8) - Rather not-so-intuitive. you can use a jump between (4) and (6) only deleting (5) ( there aren't hearable hints
3. 00:30:956 (5) - Rather badlooking overlap, blanket
   
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4. 00:36:818 (1) - ^
   
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   00:46:301 (3,4,5,6) - Correct the curve ( make (3) blanket more too)
   
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1. Could receive some graphical mods as some pattern can be refined much. (well-ordering, avoiding bad overlaps and so)
2. Could make use of tick rate 2
3. mythol
   
   1. 00:36:818 (1) - delete and move NC to 00:36:990 (5) - ( play better )
   2. 00:59:749 (4) - It feel better not stacked because of 00:58:887 (1,2)
   3. 01:08:542 (6) - You can delete this note ( play better )
   4. 01:09:232 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I can't seem to guess this stream as it's overmapped and long, if you make it shorter (01:09:232 (4,5,6,7,8) is an example
   5. You can use slowdowns in some part like 00:00:956 (3,4,5) - you can make them slower with a x0.5 section, remove one repeat on (3) and (5) (try at least ;D)
   6. 02:34:145 (2) - That's not in the synth neither drums
4. mochi
   
   1. I don't think NCing in a crazy manner like that is effectively good
   2. Try to review some jumps, as most of them aren't easily readable
   3. overmap is 01:43:714 (4,5,6,7,8,9), as the word she say start from (6) and in (5) there's no sustained voice. delete (5) and make 01:44:232 (9) Slider start from the ex-8 now-7. The are other notes-on-nothing like 02:16:732 (4), that are actually difficult to be in streams. Some streams are better as single sliders too as 02:20:611 (7,8,9), as example is better being a single slider starting from (7)
   4. I saw no mods there ._.

• 00:07:163 (2) - no, it just sounds bad, very bad. It's way more intuitive at 00:06:990
  00:09:921 (2) - same as above, more intuitive at 00:09:749
  00:40:266 (1) - extending this up to 00:40:783 and replacing the clap with a finish at the end of the slider would flow nicely and would be more consistent with the map. You'll have to remove 00:40:956 (2) if you do so and probably rearrange the pattern in some way.
  00:46:473 (2) - move to 00:46:301 (and fix spacing)
  00:47:852 (1) - remove a repetition, add a beat at 00:49:059 and 00:49:577
  00:55:439 (3) - make it 1/2 shorter
  00:50:611 (1) - make 1/2 longer; 00:51:128 (2) - delete; 00:51:473 - add a beat; 00:51:990 (3) - move at 00:51:818
  00:59:577 (3) - delete; 00:59:577 - add a beat; 01:00:266 (4) - move 1/2 before
  01:03:025 (2) - move 1/2 before
  01:04:404 (1) - make it 1/2 shorter
  01:58:197 (2) - sounds bad, it should start 1/2 earlier but you can't just move it because you still need a note at 01:58:887
  02:00:956 (2) - kinda similiar to above
  and so on... the song is the same after the first chorus so the same things apply.

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Blue : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
   　
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4. Delete .osb file in the folder ( Full Submit )
   　
   [ neko's Easy ]
   　
5. 00:10:266 (1) - I think this spinner start at 00:10:439, to follow the music
6. 00:41:990 (5) - left 1 grid
7. 02:37:852 (5) - Spacing issue
   　
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8. Nice diff ^_^
   　
   [ meiikyuu's Hard ]
   　
9. 01:15:352 (2) - Delete this note to follow the vocal?
10. 01:45:956 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I am very worried about this parttern
11. You must careful about your spacing , You change it too many times
    　
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12. 02:39:232 (1) - Remove NC
13. 02:39:921 (1) - ^
14. 02:40:611 (1) - ^
15. 02:40:956 (5) - NC
    　
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