KuronumaSawako wrote:

Hi! Mod requested in my queue.

Cute music

[General]

1. [attachment=2:ea125]AIBAT1.jpg[/attachment:ea125]

BG is fine.

[Normal]

1. 00:55:441(x): Add a note here?

Added a slider.

1. 00:55:785(x): ^

^

1. 00:59:923(x): ^. If you did this: Would like to do this, but it increases star difficulty. >< One of the things I had to remove to lower the diff.
   
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   Spacing suggestion

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1. 01:01:303 (3): Del clap and add a whistle here, to match "woo-hoo!" of the music.

Prefer clap.

1. 01:04:061 (4,1): Spacing enter (4) and (1).

Not understanding this. There's also no (4)

1. 01:20:613 (3): Add a whistle in start of this slider to match "let's go!" of the music.

no.

1. 02:04:406 (x): Make something like this? Added a slider.
   
   SPOILER

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Nice Normal.

[meikyuu's Hard]

These will have to wait until she gets back.

1. 00:04:923 (5): This slider for me is a little...strange, replace for this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:09:234 (8,1,2): Don't make this in a map, is ugly x(
   Desinstack?

1. 00:10:096 (3,4,5): Remove clap in these three notes. Also, add whistle in (5) since you have already added whistle in (1) and (2)...also add whistle in 00:11:303 (2).

1. 00:11:647 (4): Del clap and add whistle in this note to match "let's go!".

1. 00:19:406 (4): Ugly slider... Make another? Like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:21:475(x): Add a note?

1. 00:25:268 (4,5): Same as in 00:09:234.

1. 00:32:337 (5): Make something like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:49:061 (5,6): Spacing between these two.

1. 01:38:199 (3,4,5): ^ three.

1. 01:40:268 (x): Make a break here.

Good diff

I'll don't mod Collab because break my "Don't post if you map have 3 minutes or more." But the draining time is 2:58. D:

Good map

• General

1. Nothing really. I'll only point out here that all the difficulties have different Kiai Times. They're inconsistent. You have to fix this. I'm not sure which Kiai sections you'll keep or not, just make sure that all the difficulties have the same Kiai Times.
   
   
2. It would be nice if you add an Easy diff since your Normal feels a bit challenging for beginners, and for being the most easiest diff of your mapset.

• [Normal]

1. 00:02:165 (2) - Spacing. This note is way too closer to (1). Fix this with Distance Snap.
2. 00:03:716 (1,2,3) - This pattern is not symmetrical at all. To make it perfectly simmetrical, you have to copy (1) replacing (3), press ctrl+H and after that ctrl+R. Doing this, the slider (1) and (3) will have the same shape, and the pattern will be perfectly symmetrical.
3. 00:07:682 (4,5) - This doesn't fit with the vocals. I suggest you to try this. It sounds and fits better:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:11:992 (1) - Spacing again.
5. 00:18:889 (1) - This new combo doesn't fit with the music at all, and it neither follow your previous combo pattern. I think you should remove new combo here and add it at 00:20:268 (2) instead.
6. 00:21:820 (3) - A new combo here would fit nice with the music. Also, if you do this, don't forget to add a new combo at 00:10:441 (3) too for consistency.
7. 00:23:027 (1) - And without doubt, spacing again lol. Do not desactivate Distance Snap in Normal and Easy difficulties. A change of spacing would be confusing for beginners and not-so experienced players. Also, take in mind that this is the most easiest difficulty of your mapset.. Sometimes.. a little jump in a Normal is ok, but it is not when your mapset doesn't have an [Easy].
8. 00:24:406 (1) - This new combo doesn't fit here with the vocals. You should add a new combo at the next slider rather than here.
9. 00:26:130 (3) - And for consistency again, you have to add a new combo here.
10. 00:29:923 (1) - This slider looks really weird. You should make it look like your other sliders.. perhaps like this..?:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:31:303 (3) - I find this combo long and unnecesary. I think it would be better if you add a new combo here.
12. 00:35:785 (1) - Good pattern but you didn't used distance snap here. This is another jump. Fix this with distance snap.
13. 00:37:165 (3) - For consitency again, you'll have to add a new combo here.
14. 00:41:303 (3) - ^
15. 00:43:027 (2) - This slider has too many repeats for a Normal difficulty in my opinion. I think that the player will think that the slider has 2 repeats like the previous one, and this would end being confusing. You can replace this slider with a long one without repeats or something.
16. 00:49:923 (3) - I don't find this stacking friendly for beginners. Perhaps move this note somewhere else?
17. 00:50:613 (1) - Spacing again.
18. 00:51:992 (3) - Just the same as I told you about 00:43:027 (2).
19. 00:54:751 (3) - ^
20. 01:04:406 (1,2) - This pattern looks weird. A curved and a stright slider doesn't look good. You should make (2) curved too.. like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:09:923 (1) - Spacing..
22. 01:55:441 (4) - Confusing. The player will think that this slider has 1 repeat like your previous ones.
23. 01:58:199 (3) - ^ But here.. He'll think that this one has 2.. You should replace 01:55:441 (4) with a long slider or something to avoid this kind of problems.
24. 02:00:958 (3,1) - ^ Again.
25. 02:11:819 (2,3,4) - A new combo at (4) would fit good with the music. Also, rather than this pattern, you should try this by copying the shape of (2) and replacing (4) with it, and also by moving (3) to the vertical axis:
    
    SPOILER

    
26. 02:15:785 (1) - Spacing again.. I'm not gonna point out any more spacing problems. Find them by yourself with distance snap activated.
27. 02:27:165 (4) - Perhaps add a new combo here? Sounds nice to me.
    
    This difficulty needs work. It can be improved a lot. Fix all spacing problems with distance snap, and try to make some creative patterns. I see that you like to make various slider shapes and all that stuff, but make good looking patterns with them. Do not place sliders with different and random shapes everywhere because that doesn't look good and 'artistic'.. rather than that, it ends up looking messy. Oh and also, you should finish this difficulty for consistency, since the other 2 diffs end at 03:14.

• [meiikyuu's Hard]

1. 00:01:992 (x) - How about adding a note here? It feel this part weird without a note here.
2. 00:04:751 (x) - ^
3. 00:09:234 (8) - You should add a new combo here and remove the new combo at 00:09:579 (1). It fits better in my opinion.
4. 00:10:785 (1) - This is a reall big jump for a Hard difficulty. I think you should reduce it.
5. 00:11:992 (x) - Perhaps add a note here? It sounds better to me. At least, if you don't do this, drag the start of the Break here.
6. 00:18:199 (4) - A bit sudden and big jump for a Hard. It would be better if you remove it.
7. 00:20:096 (5) - A new combo here fits nice with the music.
8. 00:24:406 (1) - It would be better if you remove nc here and add it to the next note instead. Fits way better with the vocals in my opinion.
9. 00:39:579 - I honestly don't understand this decrease of slider velocity. The song doesn't change in anything.. I find this unnecessary, plus the song already has a part that decrease the s.v next to this one at 00:44:579. That's why I see this pointless.
10. 00:59:406 (1) - Unnecessary new combo. You should remove it. Also, if you do this you should add a new combo at 01:01:303 (5).
11. 01:12:337 (5) - For consistency, add a new combo here and remove new combo at 01:13:199 (1).
12. 02:35:268 (1) - This slider doesn't look good. Maybe improve it a bit? Perhaps something like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:59:923 (7) - I suggest you to add a new combo here. Fits nice with the music and all.
14. 03:00:613 (3,4,1) - This rhythm doesn't fit with the vocals at all. I think that this sounds better:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 03:05:785 (8) - Nc here instead of being at the next note sounds better in my opinion.
16. 03:06:992 (5) - For combos consistency, you should add a nc here and remove nc at 03:07:682 (1).
17. 03:12:510 (4) - ^ nc here and remove nc at the next note.
    
    This difficulty can be improved a lot too, but it is a good difficulty, it only needs more mods and work to improve. You used in certain parts some stacking pattern that I find confusing but well, nothing, maybe it's just me, that's why I didn't mention that in the mod. Oh abd you may need help with hitsounds. They aren't placed in a regular way, they doesn't seem to be following something in special.

• [Collab]

1. 00:02:682 (1) - I think that if you remove nc here and add it at 00:03:372 (10) instead fits better with the vocals.
   
   Well nothing else in special to say. I dislike modding collabs. I feel some parts a bit overmapped.. like 01:09:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1). Overall, a good difficulty.

Kei wrote:

Hello! Here's my mod, just as you requested. Woohoo! :3 Fast reply go!:

• General

1. Nothing really. I'll only point out here that all the difficulties have different Kiai Times. They're inconsistent. You have to fix this. I'm not sure which Kiai sections you'll keep or not, just make sure that all the difficulties have the same Kiai Times. Changed.
   
   
2. It would be nice if you add an Easy diff since your Normal feels a bit challenging for beginners, and for being the most easiest diff of your mapset.

No need.

• [Normal]

1. 00:02:165 (2) - Spacing. This note is way too closer to (1). Fix this with Distance Snap. okay.
2. 00:03:716 (1,2,3) - This pattern is not symmetrical at all. To make it perfectly simmetrical, you have to copy (1) replacing (3), press ctrl+H and after that ctrl+R. Doing this, the slider (1) and (3) will have the same shape, and the pattern will be perfectly symmetrical. fixed.
3. 00:07:682 (4,5) - This doesn't fit with the vocals. I suggest you to try this. It sounds and fits better: no change.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:11:992 (1) - Spacing again. Nothing wrong with it.
5. 00:18:889 (1) - This new combo doesn't fit with the music at all, and it neither follow your previous combo pattern. I think you should remove new combo here and add it at 00:20:268 (2) instead. okay.
6. 00:21:820 (3) - A new combo here would fit nice with the music. Also, if you do this, don't forget to add a new combo at 00:10:441 (3) too for consistency. okay
7. 00:23:027 (1) - And without doubt, spacing again lol. Do not desactivate Distance Snap in Normal and Easy difficulties. A change of spacing would be confusing for beginners and not-so experienced players. Also, take in mind that this is the most easiest difficulty of your mapset.. Sometimes.. a little jump in a Normal is ok, but it is not when your mapset doesn't have an [Easy]. okay.
8. 00:24:406 (1) - This new combo doesn't fit here with the vocals. You should add a new combo at the next slider rather than here. Removed NC, but added somewhere else.
9. 00:26:130 (3) - And for consistency again, you have to add a new combo here. No need because of ^
10. 00:29:923 (1) - This slider looks really weird. You should make it look like your other sliders.. perhaps like this..?: okay.
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:31:303 (3) - I find this combo long and unnecesary. I think it would be better if you add a new combo here. okay.
12. 00:35:785 (1) - Good pattern but you didn't used distance snap here. This is another jump. Fix this with distance snap. no.
13. 00:37:165 (3) - For consitency again, you'll have to add a new combo here. okay.
14. 00:41:303 (3) - ^ ^
15. 00:43:027 (2) - This slider has too many repeats for a Normal difficulty in my opinion. I think that the player will think that the slider has 2 repeats like the previous one, and this would end being confusing. You can replace this slider with a long one without repeats or something. Long slider.
16. 00:49:923 (3) - I don't find this stacking friendly for beginners. Perhaps move this note somewhere else? okay.
17. 00:50:613 (1) - Spacing again. It's not illegal for normals to have jumps.
18. 00:51:992 (3) - Just the same as I told you about 00:43:027 (2). It's fine.
19. 00:54:751 (3) - ^ ^
20. 01:04:406 (1,2) - This pattern looks weird. A curved and a stright slider doesn't look good. You should make (2) curved too.. like this: okay.
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:09:923 (1) - Spacing.. okay.
22. 01:55:441 (4) - Confusing. The player will think that this slider has 1 repeat like your previous ones. Changed to 1 repeat.
23. 01:58:199 (3) - ^ But here.. He'll think that this one has 2.. You should replace 01:55:441 (4) with a long slider or something to avoid this kind of problems.
24. 02:00:958 (3,1) - ^ Again. ^
25. 02:11:819 (2,3,4) - A new combo at (4) would fit good with the music. Also, rather than this pattern, you should try this by copying the shape of (2) and replacing (4) with it, and also by moving (3) to the vertical axis: Looks good.
    
    SPOILER

    
26. 02:15:785 (1) - Spacing again.. I'm not gonna point out any more spacing problems. Find them by yourself with distance snap activated. Fixed.
27. 02:27:165 (4) - Perhaps add a new combo here? Sounds nice to me. okay.
    
    This difficulty needs work. It can be improved a lot. Fix all spacing problems with distance snap, and try to make some creative patterns. I see that you like to make various slider shapes and all that stuff, but make good looking patterns with them. Do not place sliders with different and random shapes everywhere because that doesn't look good and 'artistic'.. rather than that, it ends up looking messy. Oh and also, you should finish this difficulty for consistency, since the other 2 diffs end at 03:14.

I will finish it. T_T

• [meiikyuu's Hard] Once again, these will have to wait.

1. 00:01:992 (x) - How about adding a note here? It feel this part weird without a note here.
2. 00:04:751 (x) - ^
3. 00:09:234 (8) - You should add a new combo here and remove the new combo at 00:09:579 (1). It fits better in my opinion.
4. 00:10:785 (1) - This is a reall big jump for a Hard difficulty. I think you should reduce it.
5. 00:11:992 (x) - Perhaps add a note here? It sounds better to me. At least, if you don't do this, drag the start of the Break here.
6. 00:18:199 (4) - A bit sudden and big jump for a Hard. It would be better if you remove it.
7. 00:20:096 (5) - A new combo here fits nice with the music.
8. 00:24:406 (1) - It would be better if you remove nc here and add it to the next note instead. Fits way better with the vocals in my opinion.
9. 00:39:579 - I honestly don't understand this decrease of slider velocity. The song doesn't change in anything.. I find this unnecessary, plus the song already has a part that decrease the s.v next to this one at 00:44:579. That's why I see this pointless.
10. 00:59:406 (1) - Unnecessary new combo. You should remove it. Also, if you do this you should add a new combo at 01:01:303 (5).
11. 01:12:337 (5) - For consistency, add a new combo here and remove new combo at 01:13:199 (1).
12. 02:35:268 (1) - This slider doesn't look good. Maybe improve it a bit? Perhaps something like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:59:923 (7) - I suggest you to add a new combo here. Fits nice with the music and all.
14. 03:00:613 (3,4,1) - This rhythm doesn't fit with the vocals at all. I think that this sounds better:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 03:05:785 (8) - Nc here instead of being at the next note sounds better in my opinion.
16. 03:06:992 (5) - For combos consistency, you should add a nc here and remove nc at 03:07:682 (1).
17. 03:12:510 (4) - ^ nc here and remove nc at the next note.
    
    This difficulty can be improved a lot too, but it is a good difficulty, it only needs more mods and work to improve. You used in certain parts some stacking pattern that I find confusing but well, nothing, maybe it's just me, that's why I didn't mention that in the mod. Oh abd you may need help with hitsounds. They aren't placed in a regular way, they doesn't seem to be following something in special.

• [Collab]

1. 00:02:682 (1) - I think that if you remove nc here and add it at 00:03:372 (10) instead fits better with the vocals. okay.
   
   Well nothing else in special to say. I dislike modding collabs. I feel some parts a bit overmapped.. like 01:09:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1). no.
   Overall, a good difficulty.

Sorry for the long mod >.< but it is for the good of your mapset. I hope this was helpful. Good luck!

Yucali wrote:

Hi there :3
There's my mod, as requested in my queue~ Here I go!



Normal~

Why there's a part with kiai that is not mapped? If the map finish at 02:29:923 I think you should remove it, but I noticed that the Hard diff and the Collab are about 3 minutes long, so I suggest to finish this map too :3 Will do.

00:06:992 (3) - Move this slider 3 grid down (grid level 4) than fix 00:07:682 (4) below. okay.

01:04:061 (3)[/b] - I think this part is quite...antiaestetic, try to change it, maybe with a curved slider! It's fine.

♣

Despite the normal hitsounds sounds quite good in the map I suggest you to take a look for some nice whistle (if you like I can post some) If it's not too much trouble.




meiikyuu's Hard~ Soon!

00:07:682 (4) - Again, as in the normal diff, those slider above the other one looks really ugly in my opinion >_<

00:18:716 - Add a note?

00:24:406 (1) - Maybe you should remove it

00:30:268 (7) - Change this slider like here? Obviously if you do, don't forget to fix the other notes nearby

00:38:889 (3) - I suggest to add the triplet here and delete the one at 00:39:234 (5,6,7) - (mean something like this here)

01:20:096 (3,4,5) - Try to put the notes like this example here I think it's nice to see this way instead of stack one above the onthers :3

01:40:268 - Add a mini-break?

01:40:268 - Add a clap and remove the clap here 02:10:785 (3)

02:59:234 (6) - Try to change this slider, don't look good as it is now >_<

♣

Here it is, I think this map needs more mods, but it's also enjoyable the way it is, so keep up!




Collab~

AR -1? AR 9 is fine.

01:01:992 (4) - & 01:02:165 (5) - I suggest to change it, This is my mapping style.

02:20:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)[/b] - and 02:22:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why add those streams? >_< I think that they don't fit with the song. Talked over with mochi, he thinks its fine. I know he adds waaay too many streams, but that's just his style.

♣

Above all, great collab, I love it!


That's all, I hope it will help you :3

Yucali wrote:

Here for you :3

[from Natteke's UserPage]

Clap Packs:

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(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Snare Packs:

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(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Cymbal Pack:

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(Link)

Percussion Pack:

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(Link)

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

From my modding queue
Very nice song :3

[normal]
OD +1
02:30:228 dont this break, add notes at least not so long
03:14:389 is this end of song? theres still time for more notes
Generally nothing else good map here
[hard]
HP Drain +1
00:09:563 (1) Remove new combo
00:10:076 (3) new combo here
02:42:542 add another spinner? or extend spinner
03:14:389 same as normal
[Collab]
HP +1
AR -1
00:25:081 (3) this note is confusing because ar is fast
01:51:111 (2) i thought this is slider mistaken (3) as note
02:38:886 ~02:41:004 5 new combo in 3second?
03:14:136 same as other 2 difficulty

end of mod kd if helpful.

nekonomitsu wrote:

Here's my diff .
It's cute map ^_^

suirenn05 wrote:

hello~Mythol:D MOD></


neko's Easy
✩00:59:234(2)-2grid outer?
✩01:01:303(5)-Delete to the circle.
✩01:09:923(1)-How about putting in a circle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247105
✩01:37:854(2)-1grid right
✩02:10:268(4)-1grid down?
✩02:40:613(3)-How about putting in a circle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247107
✩02:59:923(3)-2grid down



Normal Used some..
✩00:17:165(4)-How about putting in a circle? http://puu.sh/hz5l
✩00:24:406(3)-1grid left
✩00:29:579(2)-1grid down
✩00:33:372(3)-4grid down
✩00:41:303(1)-How about putting in a circle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247112
✩01:10:613(2)-1grid outer
✩01:30:785(1)-1grid right
✩02:00:613(2)-^
✩02:13:027(3)-2grid down
✩02:21:674(1)-1grid outer
✩02:47:165(2)-1grid down
✩02:58:889(1)-1grid left
✩03:01:674(1)-1grid right?
✩03:04:406(3)-1grid down
✩03:05:785(1)-1grid outer
✩03:08:889(2)-1grid right
✩03:09:923(1)-2grid left?
✩03:11:303(1)-2grid down




I am sorry to be poor at Mod　TAT

Nice MAP<3 hehe:)

suirenn05 wrote:

hello~Mythol:D MOD></


neko's Easy
✩00:59:234(2)-2grid outer? Ok
✩01:01:303(5)-Delete to the circle. No. I'll leave it there
✩01:09:923(1)-How about putting in a circle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247105 There already is a circle there o.o
✩01:37:854(2)-1grid right Ok
✩02:10:268(4)-1grid down? Ok
✩02:40:613(3)-How about putting in a circle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247107 Again, there's a circle there.
✩02:59:923(3)-2grid down Nope :T

Hello~ I`m Newbie guy~

Collab diff~

00:07:682 (1) - : add whistle

00:16:130 (7) - : move x:460 y:280

00:16:647 (8) - : move 332, 48

00:24:923 (2,3,4) - : so hard;;

00:26:647 (4) - : delete clap

00:52:854 (8,10) - : ^

01:01:992 (4,5) - : so hard

01:03:199 (3,4) - : ^

01:03:889 (3,6) - : delete clap

01:08:199 (5) - : ^

01:15:096 (2,3,4,5) - : so hard

01:19:234 (2) - : delete clap

01:20:096 (5) - : ^

02:32:165 (6) - : delete whistle

02:34:751 (9) - : delete clap

02:37:337 (1) - : ^

02:38:027 (3) - : ^

02:40:958 (5) - : so many whistle plz fix..

Hard

00:05:441 (7) - delete clap

00:08:544 (6) - : ^

00:09:751 (2) - : ^

00:10:268 (4) - : ^

00:17:337 (1,2,3,4) - : change!! it's not insane

00:19:234 (3) - : delete clap

00:22:165 (3) - : ^

00:33:544 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - : change

00:55:785 (4) - : delete clap

00:58:889 (1) - : cancel new combo

01:01:992 (6) - : delete whistle

01:03:372 (4) - : delete clap

01:09:061 (6) - : ^

01:40:268 - : spin or break time

01:45:096 (4) - : delete clap

02:04:406 (6,8) - : ^

02:09:406 (4) - : ^

02:26:476 (2,4) - :^

02:34:923 (6) - : ^

02:37:854 (4) - : ^ and whistle

W h i t e wrote:

Hello~ I`m Newbie guy~

Collab diff~

00:07:682 (1) - : add whistle okay.

00:16:130 (7) - : move x:460 y:280 okay.

00:16:647 (8) - : move 332, 48 okay.

00:24:923 (2,3,4) - : so hard;; thats good!

00:26:647 (4) - : delete clap okay.

00:52:854 (8,10) - : ^ okay.

01:01:992 (4,5) - : so hard good.

01:03:199 (3,4) - : ^ ^

01:03:889 (3,6) - : delete clap no

01:08:199 (5) - : ^ there is no clap.

01:15:096 (2,3,4,5) - : so hard

01:19:234 (2) - : delete clap okay.

01:20:096 (5) - : ^ okay.

02:32:165 (6) - : delete whistle okay.

02:34:751 (9) - : delete clap okay.

02:37:337 (1) - : ^ okay.

02:38:027 (3) - : ^ okay.

02:40:958 (5) - : so many whistle plz fix.. okay.

hu!! thx!

winber1 wrote:

sorry for being a little late.

long mod, a lot of suggestions.

Collab

00:04:579 (5,1) - would look better if combo 5 and 1 were perfectly parallel okay.
00:05:182 (2) - i would delete this note. it doesn't fit imo. also i feel that its more interesting if you didn't have the stream and just space the next notely evenly imo. okay.
00:05:958 (6) - here you could consider replacing this slider with a small triplet stream. okay.
00:11:647 (5) - some reason i really want to add a new combo here, but that's up to you no
00:16:647 (8,9,10) - http://puu.sh/hNyO this sounds better to me (add a finish to the end of combo 10). Slight change.
00:31:992 (3) - i read this perfectly fine, but you could still consider adding a new combo to emphasize the change in spacing. okay.
01:59:579 (7) - new combo?
02:45:958 (4) - a new combo would fit to match your previous ones. it would also be nice if 02:45:958 (1,2,3) - was symmetrical about the y-axis. it looks a little weird by itself like that. okay.
03:13:372 (2) - would have more impact if there were a note and slider imo. http://puu.sh/hNAn i kinda just put them in a random spot but yea, this rhythm feels better to me.

Normal

00:00:958 - needs to be soft hitsounds imo. okay.
00:00:958 (1) - sounds better if it ended on 00:01:475. yes i know u have to remaked the slider http://puu.sh/hNF7 its fine.
00:03:716 (1,2,1) - something similar to above? ^
00:34:751 (2,1) - i wouldn't make a jump here ^
01:10:613 (2,3) - don't put this jump here. Woops spacing fail.
01:12:682 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:15:441 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:19:751 (1,2) - this stack is usually confusing for beginners. keep it you wish, but i am just saying. moved.
02:19:579 - same thing here with all the jumps. sorry fixed T_T

Easy is going over my 10 minute limit, but nothing looks really weird in that diff

hope this helps~~

Thanks for modding.

MoonShade wrote:

Here is the rest:

Collab
00:56:130 (1) - add finish? okay.
01:19:406 (3) - and again, why not just ctr+j (1)? Quick and save. okay.
02:05:096 (1) - add finish?
02:41:647 (1) - I would space this slider ~0.50 away from the previous kickslider, first you did so with all the circles and the kickslider before and then you can also see the approach circle better okay.
I don't find the style allways attractive but that's not the point here. I think it hasn't got much real errors in it and can be played by a skilled player

I'll star you cause you two put effort in making that map and are clearly trying to improve it. Thanks for star! \o/

• Why are there duplicates of each BG? You should delete them if you're not using them.
  Kiai times should be consistent but since it's Collab I guess it's okay??

LunarSakuya wrote:

What is up

General

• Why are there duplicates of each BG? You should delete them if you're not using them. I changed from png to jpg. You need to delete and redownload.
  Kiai times should be consistent but since it's Collab I guess it's okay??they are consistent.

Normal
00:00:958 (1) - Add Finish at beginning okay.
00:02:165 (2) - Add Whistles to both ends no
00:03:716 (1) - Add Whistle at beginning ^
00:05:096 (1) - Add Whistle at end ^
(The beginning of the song seems a bit quiet? Consider putting whistles on a some of these, so I'll stop mentioning them in this diff lol) Changed to normal hitsounds with 60% vol.
00:35:785 (1) - Watch out for large distances in the easier diffs, may confuse new people Too many complaints, so fixed.

01:52:337 (2) - Move forward to red tick and shorten slider no
01:55:441 (4) - Add clap no
01:55:441 (4) - Remove combo there is no nc..

02:04:061 (2) - Replace by copy and pasting the slider before it, and adjust of course okay.
02:13:372 (4) - NC okay.
02:26:475 (4) - Move to the left a little so the slider before it makes a nicer blanket lol its fine.

Collab
00:17:337 (11) - NC? no.
00:24:234 (6) - Replace by copy & pasting the slider after it, and adjust nope.
00:35:182 (5,6) - I feel like these hitsounds stand out too much changed.
00:51:820 (5) - NC to signify big distance change okay.
01:08:716 (1,2,3,4) - Took me a couple tries to get this or it could be that I suck I hate to say, but...

02:18:199 (7,8) - Add claps
02:23:544 (9) - Make audio "Normal" at the end?


Good luck

Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,441,81130,640,640
 F,0,441,785,0,1
 F,0,80958,81130,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,91992,149751,640,640
 F,0,91992,92337,0,1
 F,0,149579,149751,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,149923,166647,640,640
 F,0,149923,150268,0,1
 F,0,166475,166647,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,171303,194234,640,640
 F,0,171303,171647,0,1
 F,0,194061,194234,1,0

Makar8000 wrote:

Here you go~

[attachment=0:6ebcf]images.zip[/attachment:6ebcf]

Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,441,81130,640,640
 F,0,441,785,0,1
 F,0,80958,81130,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,91992,149751,640,640
 F,0,91992,92337,0,1
 F,0,149579,149751,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,149923,166647,640,640
 F,0,149923,150268,0,1
 F,0,166475,166647,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,171303,194234,640,640
 F,0,171303,171647,0,1
 F,0,194061,194234,1,0

Oh, and I still plan to mod this after Lin =w=

mochi wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

Here you go~

[attachment=0:a4c7a]images.zip[/attachment:a4c7a]

Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,441,81130,640,640
 F,0,441,785,0,1
 F,0,80958,81130,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,91992,149751,640,640
 F,0,91992,92337,0,1
 F,0,149579,149751,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mytholtxt33.png",640,480
 MX,0,149923,166647,640,640
 F,0,149923,150268,0,1
 F,0,166475,166647,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,BottomRight,"mochitxt3.png",640,480
 MX,0,171303,194234,640,640
 F,0,171303,171647,0,1
 F,0,194061,194234,1,0

Oh, and I still plan to mod this after Lin =w=

The SB load doesn't change even if I remove the SB elements while they're inactive.

1. Kill .osb if it is unnecessary (empty now)
2. Disalbe CountDown in all diffs
3. Uncheck Letterbox during breaks unless u need the effect
4. Please fix SliderMultiplier in Easy and Normal diff to 0.8 & 1.0 manually in osu file.

1. Under "mochitxt3.png"
   1. F,0,149751,166475,0
      F,0,166475,171303,0
      can be combined to one row:
      F,0,149751,171303,0
   2. F,0,91992,,0 is unnecessary, remove it.

1. The position of ur whistles is really mess...highly recommend to put them more consitent.
2. 00:04:751 (2) - this whistle heard off...remove it, or move this note to prev red line and then move (3) to prev red line....recommend the later way.
3. 00:33:372 (3) - move to prev red line and stack with (2), and then add a slider between 00:33:544 - 00:33:889.
4. 00:58:889 (1,2) - the rhythm is weird here, i suppose it's could be
   [attachment=0:97d50]7.jpg[/attachment:97d50]
5. 01:09:923 - ^
6. 01:20:096 (2) - add a repeat
7. 02:07:854 (1) - same as 00:58:889
8. 02:18:888 (1) - ^

1. 00:11:992 - drag ur break start here
2. 00:20:096 (5) - NC?
3. 00:34:406 (1,2) - (Nazi)Not stack well
4. 00:39:406 (7) - move a tick later and stack with next (1) to make a triplet from red-line is much better
5. 00:42:753 - add a spinner here if u don't know how to map it
6. 00:51:647 - add a note here?
7. 00:54:406 - ^
8. 01:48:544 (7) - Move next NC to here
9. 01:58:889 (8) - remove finish
10. 02:33:027 (3) - NC?
11. 02:45:958 - add a repeat slider from here to 02:46:303 - ?
12. 02:55:268 (2) - ctrl+r?

1. 00:02:682 (8,9) - remove (9) and add a repeat to (8)?
2. 00:14:061 (7) - change to a note?
3. 00:24:923 (2,3,4) - Bad pattern for confusing, highly recommend to change it.
4. 00:43:199 (4) - move to right to (3,5) - 400:160
5. 00:58:716 - add a note here to make a stream is better i suppose
6. 01:03:199 (3,4) - bad pattern
7. 01:15:096 (2,3,4,5) - bad pattern
8. 03:06:992 (1) - Ctrl+r

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue

General:

1. Kill .osb if it is unnecessary (empty now)
2. Disalbe CountDown in all diffs okay.
3. Uncheck Letterbox during breaks unless u need the effect okay.
4. Please fix SliderMultiplier in Easy and Normal diff to 0.8 & 1.0 manually in osu file.okay.

StoryBoard(Collab):

1. Under "mochitxt3.png"
   1. F,0,149751,166475,0
      F,0,166475,171303,0
      can be combined to one row:
      F,0,149751,171303,0
   2. F,0,91992,,0 is unnecessary, remove it.

Normal:

1. The position of ur whistles is really mess...highly recommend to put them more consitent.
2. 00:04:751 (2) - this whistle heard off...remove it, or move this note to prev red line and then move (3) to prev red line....recommend the later way. removed whistle.
3. 00:33:372 (3) - move to prev red line and stack with (2), and then add a slider between 00:33:544 - 00:33:889. okay.
4. 00:58:889 (1,2) - the rhythm is weird here, i suppose it's could be
   [attachment=0:7850a]7.jpg[/attachment:7850a] image fail. x.x
5. 01:09:923 - ^ ^
6. 01:20:096 (2) - add a repeat no.
7. 02:07:854 (1) - same as 00:58:889 same.
8. 02:18:888 (1) - ^ ^

Collab:

1. 00:02:682 (8,9) - remove (9) and add a repeat to (8)? no.
2. 00:14:061 (7) - change to a note? no.
3. 00:24:923 (2,3,4) - Bad pattern for confusing, highly recommend to change it. no one had problems with it.
4. 00:43:199 (4) - move to right to (3,5) - 400:160 okay.
5. 00:58:716 - add a note here to make a stream is better i suppose what? theres already a note there.
6. 01:03:199 (3,4) - bad pattern I like it :3
7. 01:15:096 (2,3,4,5) - bad pattern ^
8. 03:06:992 (1) - Ctrl+r

that's all and GL

SliderMultiplier:1

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue. Sorry for the long wait.

[General]
None

[Normal]
-Change slider Multiplier from 0.999999999999999 to 1. Already mentioned.

SliderMultiplier:1

[Collab]
-00:14:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream doesn't go to any sound.
-00:17:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
-00:18:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
-00:34:923 (4,5,6) - This is touching the HP bar.
-00:36:303 (5,6,7) - ^
-01:39:579 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:14:579.
- There are more ghost streams to list. That's basically what I found wrong with this difficulty, otherwise the map is okay. Insanes and collabs tend to be a bit overmapped anyways. Not a type of mapping style I would aim for in my mapping style.
-Reduce Approach Rate to 8? It's up to you though.

Good Map Overall.

SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999

SliderMultiplier:0.8

356,296,3716,6,0,B|316:360|256:316|256:316|196:364|156:296,1,240,0|2

312,116,32675,2,0,B|272:92|256:36|256:36|240:92|200:116,1,200,0|8

156,228,34054,6,0,B|192:288|256:296|320:288|356:228,1,240,0|8

312,208,73365,2,8,B|188:248|116:120|236:40|356:120|284:248|160:208,1,399.999999999999,8|8

184,268,119572,6,0,B|216:260|256:356|256:356|296:260|328:268,1,240,8|8

320,184,120951,2,0,B|276:197|256:97|256:97|232:197|184:181,1,240,0|8

ikari_kyon wrote:

- What ugly custom clap >_< dont fit to this pretty song.

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi /o/

General

- By concistant, use a different BG image on [neko's Easy] and [Normal], I though you cand find other cute BG :3 I'll ask neko.
- What ugly custom clap >_< dont fit to this pretty song.

Timing

- Is a bit late, use offset: -428 (-7 on current), dont forget to resnap all notes, green timelines and preview time. Check the mod first then change the offset please. Timing is fine.

[Normal]

- some stacks are not suitable, since you have some 1/2 starting on red ticks and some 1/1. Try to use stacks on [Normal] diffs on a common snapping.
- lazy hitsounds uh im bad at hitsounds ><

00:07:682 (4) - whistle
00:08:199 (5) - whistle at start and end of slider
00:09:234 (1) - whistle at start of slider
00:10:096 (2) - whistle
00:20:268 (1) - whistle at start of slider
00:20:958 (2) - ↑
00:30:958 (2,1) - 1/1 stack and 00:31:992 (2,3) - 1/2 stack, the player may think that the second also is 1/1.
00:50:613 (1) - whistle at end of slider
00:51:992 (3) - whistle on second repeat
00:53:372 (1) - whistle at end of slider
00:54:751 (3) - whistle at second repeat
01:36:130 (3,1) - overlap >_<
01:55:441 (4) - start is covered by 01:54:061 (2) hitburst its fine.
02:27:165 (1) - simmilar as up, also the stack is not perfect no idea what you mean. wrong note?

[Collab]

- I dont like collabs :v you should know that, but please, decrease the AR is so painful at this BPM AR is fine.

mochi wrote:

I'm ugly

ikari_kyon wrote:

mochi wrote:

I'm ugly

ikari_kyon wrote:

- What ugly custom clap >_< dont fit to this pretty song.

Melophobia wrote:

Hi

General
Title should be "Let's GO". Will change soon.
"☆ミ" means nothing, no need to romanize. i guess. current one looks odd

Artist:
Nakatsugawa Ui
Hinata Ibuki
Koumoto Madoka

http://puu.sh/iQrG

these are just character name,
so i'm not sure if they are suitable for the artist Trying to find the artists.. ><

Normal
00:38:889 (4) - finish to the end
00:50:613 (1) - finish to the beginning
01:43:027 - sounds better if here's a note with a finish, although it seems very hard to add.. < too hard to add.
01:58:199 (3,1) - spacing
02:00:958 (3,1) - ^
02:07:854 (1) - finish to the beginning

Collab

00:00:441 (1,2) - shouldnt these notes be soft sound?
00:00:958 (3) - finish to the beginning instead of clap
00:06:475 (3) - ^
00:13:027 (4) - clap to the beginning
00:14:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - no clap?
00:34:923 (4) - clap to the end instead of finish
01:09:923 (1) - finish to the beginning
02:46:130 (3) - finish to the end

good luck

inaba-tan wrote:

may i make taiko diff ?

hibino maki aoba ringo isuzu asuka

Melophobia wrote:

sorry for making useless post >_>

viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

please read this thread before full submission so that you make no mistake.

also, the artist, which i tell you, is character name therefore you should add name of voice actor to tags, i think

hibino maki aoba ringo isuzu asuka

of course no kds for this one :3

Byakugan249 wrote:

oh it'd look better if you can add the people who play as Ui, Hinata and Madoka as the singers and the characters on the tags. i find it odd that the characters' names are the singers.

Makar8000 wrote:

[General]

1. 'Tis fine.

[Normal]

1. Not bad o: Most of these are nazi suggestions~
2. 00:43:027 (2) - Finish at the end.
3. 00:45:441 (2) - Blanket (1) o.ob.
4. 00:47:854 (1) - Blanket (4) in the previous combo.
5. 00:54:751 (3) - Shorten this so there is only one repeat and add a note at 00:55:785? Did everything except this.
6. 01:00:096 (2) - Oh God please fix this slider orz http://puu.sh/j1wv.
7. 01:05:613 (2) - Move this back so it isn't touching (1).
8. 01:46:475 (2) - Try to get this to blanket (3) better?
9. 01:54:751 (3) - Clap at the start?
10. 01:55:441 (4) - Clap at the end? You might might also want to add a note (or extend the slider to have another repeat) and add a clap to it.
11. 01:57:510 (2) - Clap at the start.
12. 01:59:579 (1) - Finish at the start.
13. 02:02:337 (1) - ^
14. 02:07:854 (1) - ^
15. 02:10:419 - Do the same thing I suggested in the previous Kiai to this one (or just copy paste everything again lolol).
16. 02:46:475 - Add a timing point here to switch to soft hitsounds.
17. 02:47:682 (1) - Remove new combo.
18. 02:58:889 (1) - Move this over to the left instead of doing a blanket since its it partially covered by a previous slider :<
19. 02:53:372 (1) - Remove new combo.
20. 02:56:130 (1) - ^
21. 02:58:889 (1) - ^
22. 03:01:647 (1) - ^
23. 03:07:854 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
24. 03:09:923 (1) - Remove new combo.
25. 03:12:165 (1) - ^

[Collab]

1. The intro (00:00:441-00:10:613) seems overmapped but I guess its fine.
2. 00:15:441 (5,6) - Inconsistent spacing in the stream. No clue how this .......
3. Imo Mythol should try to follow mochi's hitsound pattern, its a lot better lol. Nope. Mine are waaaaay better.
4. You should still fix the storyboard so that you make new instances of the images each time you actually need them.

I was told to wait on the hard so ill look at it later~

Leorda wrote:

Hi

General
* Remove the countdown and Letterbox in Breaks for all diff for consistency on each diff Done.. T_T
* Inconsistent kiai time, you might want to check them Sorry about this... I don't know what neko is doing T_T

Normal
00:10:441 (1) - Why new combo?
00:58:889 (1) - Why finish at end slider?
01:01:647 (1) - Make a same slider as 01:02:854 (2)? (Nazi) Its fine.
01:59:579 (1,2,3) - These pattern is doesn't follow to vocal. Consider to make a timing pattern like this one http://puu.sh/j78P I'd like to keep it simple, and its also consistent with similar situations.
02:16:130 (2) - I think it's better if you using a wave slider for this

Ganbatteh

inaba-tan wrote:

finish x3

Leorda wrote:

General
* Remove the countdown and Letterbox in Breaks for all diff for consistency on each diff
* Inconsistent kiai time, you might want to check them

mochi wrote:

Leorda wrote:

General
* Remove the countdown and Letterbox in Breaks for all diff for consistency on each diff
* Inconsistent kiai time, you might want to check them

MYTHOL! i told you to fix this like 10 times now orz

biwako wrote:

mod from queue~

[General]
[inaba's Taiko] has different timing, Countdown and LetterboxInBreaks
add "inaba-tan" tag to Hard diff
add mochi's previous name to tag?

fixed all except timing, I'll let him do that.

[Normal]
00:30:958 (2) - spacing
01:56:820 (1) - ^

fixed all.

[Collab]
00:11:992 - add finish
00:58:889 - add finish
01:19:406 (3,4,5) - add whistle instead of clap
01:20:268 - remove clap
01:20:613 - add clap
02:29:923 - add finish
02:33:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/256980 this part is sound like above so follow this rhythm?
02:46:475 - add finish
fixed all.
also, This diff max score should be under 18m if you don't want this diff to APP

Fenya wrote:

Hi

General:
The offset of the 4 standard diff, have offset "-421" and the offset of Taiko diff is "940" ... That can't be, all diff must have the same offset. Will talk to inaba~

Normal:
The hit sound whistle in some parts may sound annoying to the ear... imo
00:03:716 (1,3) - (Personal Opinion)It would be more beautiful if you let them so: http://puu.sh/jkYP ? okay.
00:04:751 (2) - spacing ignored for symmetry.
00:43:027 (2) - 3rd slidertick unnecessary nope.

Collab:
Good diff :3
00:03:716 (2) - 1 grid down?
00:08:372 (4,5) - 1 grid up?
00:41:303 (2) - move to: http://puu.sh/jlfN
00:43:372 (5) - 1 grid left
00:52:682 (3) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlhO
00:52:854 (4) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlhR
00:53:027 (5) - Move to http://puu.sh/jli7
00:53:199 (6) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlia
01:04:061 (4,5,6) - 1 grid down
01:13:544 (2) - ^
01:40:010 (9) - 1 grid up
03:02:337 (6) - 1 grid down?
03:14:061 (T) - What is the purpose the kiai here? if not, delete it. Final kiai fountain to end the song.

Sorry, but I ignored everything, since it looks like pure nazi modding.
Used most out of boredom. Ignored everything relating to the star jump. You have good eyes.....
Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something~
Sorry for my bad English, good luck

Fenya wrote:

Collab:
Good diff :3
00:03:716 (2) - 1 grid down?
00:08:372 (4,5) - 1 grid up?
00:41:303 (2) - move to: http://puu.sh/jlfN
00:43:372 (5) - 1 grid left
00:52:682 (3) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlhO
00:52:854 (4) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlhR
00:53:027 (5) - Move to http://puu.sh/jli7
00:53:199 (6) - Move to http://puu.sh/jlia
01:04:061 (4,5,6) - 1 grid down
01:13:544 (2) - ^
01:40:010 (9) - 1 grid up
03:02:337 (6) - 1 grid down?
03:14:061 (T) - What is the purpose the kiai here? if not, delete it.

Sorry, but I ignored everything, since it looks like pure nazi modding.

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something~
Sorry for my bad English, good luck

S h i a wrote:

that's all~ nice sliders <3

1. Double check your Tags and make sure them are perfectly the same
2. -4ms on offest （-425）

xcherry wrote:

taiko bg? ;w; *stares at inaba* If you want, I can get someone around to making one for you if you wish. inaba is using meiikyuu's background right now, which breaks the fact that all diffs have different bgs.

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
try to compress your sb a bit =w=?

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Mythol ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file and full submit.

[Collab]

1. 00:11:473 - Maybe add a note,have vocal to here.

okay.

[meiikyuu's Hard]

1. 00:34:059 (4,1,2) - Try rerfect stack end point.
2. 00:40:783 (4) - Add new combo.

[Normal]

1. 01:02:680 - Add a note to here,sound much better.

sorry no.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~
Good luck ~

Laurier wrote:

sorry for late mod

nc=new combo

Easy
00:41:990 (5) - nazi stack on 00:40:266 (1) end
00:53:370 (1)~ try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/kJau
01:07:163 (3) - nc
01:09:921 (7) - ^
01:56:818 (1,2) - 1grid left.((2)stack on 01:56:128 (4))

Normal
AR-1?
00:20:956 (2) - It's a ok but my opinion,it is too hard for new players. Because change to 2 sliders? no.
00:33:197 (3) - don't stack this. stack on slider end is too hard for new players.
00:47:852 (5) - nc
01:43:025 (5) - dont stack this
02:08:887 - add note?

inaba's taiko
相変わらず難しい


Hard
00:09:232 (8) - nc and next note remove nc
00:39:232 (10,11,12) - this stream is looks bad a little. try this? http://puu.sh/kJfm
01:46:818 (6) - try this http://puu.sh/kJfE
02:55:266 (2) - nazi stack on (1)end

collab
AR9? I think AR 8 is better... no.
00:15:094 (1,1,1) - remove nc ok.

1. As we discussed in game, the source for it is incorrect. It's actually Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi. Not Hoshizora he Kakaru Hashi

1. 02:07:852 (inaba's Taiko)-This timing point where the 2nd kiai time starts is not snapped properly on the white tick. Fix that.
2. 02:29:921 (inaba's Taiko)-This timing point where the 2nd kiai time ends is not snapped properly on the white tick. Fix that.
3. 02:51:990 (neko's Easy, Normal, meiikyuu's Hard and Collab)-This timing point where the 3rd kiai time begins, it's kind of premature to start it off here. :/ See where the 3rd kiai time starts off in inana's Taiko which is on 02:57:508? I strongly suggesting using that time length. It's better there.
4. 02:57:508 (Normal and inaba's Taiko)-This timing point where the 3rd kiai time starts is not snapped properly on the white tick. Fix that.
5. 03:14:059 (inaba's Taiko)-This timing point where the 3rd kiai time ends is not snapped properly on the white tick. Fix that.

1. 00:03:714 (1)-A whistle on the beginning would sound great really. A perhaps add a finish on the end? It sure does sound like it.
2. 00:28:542 (1, 2)-Here's a mapping pattern that I think is better and easier in my opinion. Remove the repeat on the 1st slider, bring slider 2 on 00:29:232 and then add a repeat on slider 2. Should be something like this. o: The spacing pattern and slider shape is up to you. Oh and perhaps add a finish on the beginning of slider 1 and add a finish on the repeat of slider 2? (:
3. 00:34:059 (1)-Sounds like there should be a finish on the beginning. Consider adding one in.
4. 00:37:163 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
5. 00:39:232 (5)-I think you forgot to add a clap here.
6. 00:41:990 (5)-^
7. 00:42:335 (1)-I thought there was suppose to be a finish here? ): It sure does sound like it.
8. 00:58:887 (1)-^ ):
9. 01:04:404 (1)-Consider adding a finish on the beginning.
10. 01:09:921 (1)-^
11. 01:18:197 (1)-Would sound great if there was a finish here.
12. 01:43:025 (1, 3)-On slider 1, a clap on the beginning doesn't sound right. Replace it with a finish. It sounds better. Also, a clap on the end doesn't sound right too. Remove it. As for slider 3, both claps on the beginning and end doesn't sound right. ): Remove them.
13. 01:45:439 (1, 3, 4)-On sliders 1 and 3, I was expecting claps on the beginning and end points. Guess not. :/ It would sound great if you do. As for slider 4, a clap on the end would sound nice.
14. 01:51:301 (1)-Care to explain why there isn't a finish here? ):
15. 02:07:508 (1)-To be honest, a clap here sounds better than a finish.
16. 02:18:887 (1)-It would be best if you added a finish here.
17. 02:24:404 (1)-Consider adding a finish on the beginning.
18. 02:30:266 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7)-Slider 1 is a bit far from the center of the spinner. Try to keep it close so a beginner will be able to read that after clearing through a spinner. Oh and about objects 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7. Try to put in more effort with the hitsounds. ):
19. 02:46:473 (1)-Perhaps a finish here would sound great?
20. 02:54:059 (4)-Forgot to add a clap on the end.
21. 03:08:542 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting.

1. 00:53:025 (4)-A clap here would sound fitting?
2. 00:55:783 (4)-^
3. 01:18:197 (1)-Would sound great if there was a finish here.
4. 01:34:749 (1)-While using the distance snap, move this note one grid to the left. It's a minor fixing with the spacing
5. 01:43:025 (5)-A finish here sounds fitting?
6. 01:51:301 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound great.
7. 01:59:577 to 02:04:749-There are objects that do need claps. Please put them in.
8. 02:15:783 (3)-A clap here would sound great?
9. 02:24:404 (1)-Consider adding a finish on the beginning.
10. 03:04:749 (4)-A whistle would sound alright here?
11. 03:07:852 (6)-A finish sounds fitting on the end in my opinion.

19:11 <Roddie> : mind if we can do irc modding?
19:11 <Roddie> : on map?
19:11  *Roddie is editing (Hibino Maki, Aoba Ringo & Isuzu Asuka - Let's GO)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43834]
19:11 <Roddie> : on your diff? o:
19:11 <meiikyuu> : yes sure ^^ giv me a sec
19:12 <Roddie> : alright, let me know when you're ready
19:12 <meiikyuu> : ok rdy
19:13 <Roddie> : 00:05:439 (7, 8)-
19:13 <Roddie> : did you leave the spacing like this spaced out on purpose?
19:13 <meiikyuu> : yeahh.. do u think i should fit them with the rest of the combo>
19:15 <Roddie> : yea
19:15 <meiikyuu> : ok
19:17 <Roddie> : lovely
19:17 <Roddie> : osu crashed on me
19:18 <Roddie> : alright, now that i'm back, lets continue
19:18 <Roddie> : 00:17:508 (2, 3)-
19:18 <meiikyuu> : lol np
19:18 <Roddie> : can you make these sliders have a sharper curve? ):
19:18 <meiikyuu> : o
19:18 <Roddie> : they just don't look right
19:18 <meiikyuu> : lol ok
19:18 <meiikyuu> : and brb one min
19:22 <meiikyuu> : ok
19:23 <Roddie> : 00:23:025 (1)-
19:23 <Roddie> : perhaps add a finish here?
19:24 <meiikyuu> : done
19:25 <Roddie> : 00:42:335 (1)-
19:25 <Roddie> : here as well?
19:27 <Roddie> : also
19:27 <Roddie> : 00:46:301 (3)-
19:27 <Roddie> : I see that you were using a finish on the slider body :3
19:27 <Roddie> :   wait...
19:27 <Roddie> : nevermind~
19:27 <Roddie> : it actually fits o.o
19:27 <meiikyuu> : xD
19:28 <Roddie> : 01:04:404 (1)
19:29 <Roddie> : consider adding a finish here.
19:29 <meiikyuu> : ok
19:30 <Roddie> : 01:15:956 (4)-
19:30 <Roddie> : try this have this go in to a proper curve
19:30 <Roddie> : like this
19:30 <Roddie> : http://puu.sh/kOmU
19:33 <Roddie> : 01:20:611 (6)-
19:34 <Roddie> : care to explain why there isn't a finish on the end? ):
19:34 <Roddie> : 01:37:508 (1)-
19:35 <Roddie> : A finish here sounds alright?
19:35 <meiikyuu> : oh sure
19:36 <Roddie> : 02:05:094 (1)-
19:36 <Roddie> : this spinner before the 2nd kiai time has a finish here
19:36 <Roddie> : while the previous one doesn't
19:36 <Roddie> : before the 1st kiai time
19:36 <Roddie> : so... add that finish there just to keep consistent
19:37 <meiikyuu> : k :)
19:37 <Roddie> : 02:13:370 (1)-
19:37 <Roddie> : a finish would be alright here?
19:37 <meiikyuu> : k
19:38 <Roddie> : 02:39:577 (1, 2, 3, 4)-
19:38 <Roddie> : I like what you did there
19:39 <meiikyuu> : thanks ^^
19:39 <Roddie> : but it would be better if you use the distance snap and place those sliders behind another
19:39 <Roddie> : know what I mean?
19:39 <Roddie> : oops
19:40 <Roddie> : another or each other
19:40 <Roddie> : w/e works
19:40 <meiikyuu> : i see, ill try it out
19:40 <Roddie> : like this for example
19:40 <Roddie> : http://puu.sh/kOrz
19:41 <Roddie> : it's a bit easier to read that way
19:43 <meiikyuu> : hmm does straight line not work ? ;_;
19:43 <Roddie> : hm?
19:43 <Roddie> : you mean the anchor?
19:44 <Roddie> : or the spacing pattern?
19:44 <meiikyuu> : like what i have now generally
19:44 <Roddie> : okay?
19:45 <Roddie> : can you show me an image?
19:45 <Roddie> : i'm not really sure what you mean ._.
19:45 <meiikyuu> : k one sec
19:45 <meiikyuu> : http://puu.sh/kOtP
19:47 <Roddie> : it's the same formation you have now
19:47 <Roddie> : okay
19:48 <Roddie> : i'm sorry but I still don't understand ._.
19:48 <meiikyuu> : lol im just asking if its alright if i keep it the way it is 
19:48 <meiikyuu> : but if you rlly feel i should change it ill do it
19:48 <Roddie> : oh
19:48 <Roddie> : well that's up to you
19:49 <Roddie> : i'm just suggesting a pattern that might be better for you
19:49 <Roddie> : but if not, then it's alright
19:49 <meiikyuu> : oh okay, ty
19:49 <Roddie> : alright then
19:50 <Roddie> : 02:40:956 (1)-
19:50 <Roddie> : sounds like there should be a finish here
19:50 <Roddie> : consider adding one in
19:50 <meiikyuu> : done :)
19:52 <Roddie> : oh damn...
19:53 <Roddie> : there are quite a lot of errors i just spotted ):
19:53 <Roddie> : 00:00:956 (1)-
19:53 <Roddie> : this slider end point is not snapped properly
19:53 <Roddie> : ._.
19:54 <Roddie> : on the white tick
19:54 <Roddie> : 00:01:473 (2)-
19:54 <Roddie> : pretty much the same thing but snap the end point on the red tick
19:55 <Roddie> : 02:20:611 (4)-
19:55 <Roddie> : Same thing here
19:55 <meiikyuu> : woah
19:55 <Roddie> : 02:28:025 (3)-
19:56 <Roddie> : snap the end point properly on the white tick
19:56 <Roddie> : and finally
19:56 <Roddie> : 02:27:680 (2)-
19:56 <Roddie> : the same thing here
19:56 <Roddie> : and that's it
19:56 <Roddie> : almost over looked them xD
19:56 <Roddie> : that would have been a very serious problem ):
19:57 <meiikyuu> : tyvm lol
19:58 <Roddie> : alright and that's about it
19:58 <Roddie> : you're all set on your difficulty

18:11 <Roddie> : let's get started
18:12 <Mythol> : k
18:12 <Roddie> : there is quite a problem with collab
18:12 <Roddie> : it's a bit overmapped 
18:13 <Roddie> : and to be quite honest, most of the rhythm patterns you put in don't make sense to me :/
18:13 <Mythol> : first map ._.
18:13 <Roddie> : i noticed
18:13 <Roddie> : well, here's a couple of things I can tell you
18:14 <Roddie> : 1st, do you think this map would be fun for everybody else?
18:14 <Roddie> : that is overmapped like this?
18:14 <Mythol> : yeah
18:14 <Roddie> : really?
18:15 <Roddie> : well, i don't find this fun to play on :/
18:15 <Roddie> : in fact, it's a bit frustrating
18:15 <Mythol> : its fun for me ._.
18:15 <Roddie> : for you
18:16 <Mythol> : so my parts are overmapped?
18:16 <Mythol> : because I know alot of mochi's are, but he wants to keep it like that
18:16 <Roddie> : in the beginning, yes ):
18:16 <Mythol> : well I can fix them if its that bad o.o
18:17 <Roddie> : look, the way i say overmapped is that you put in to many notes after another and it really doesn't follow the 
18:17 <Roddie> : rhythm of the song
18:17 <Roddie> : i have seen a lot of maps that do that 
18:17 <Roddie> : it disappoints me really ):
18:17 <Roddie> : and i'm sure other players would feel the same way
18:18 <Roddie> : not everything in mapping can really really hard without a good reason
18:18 <Roddie> : you know?
18:18 <Mythol> : yeah
18:18 <Roddie> : look, just see this out
18:19 <Roddie> : a map that goes with the flow of the song can lead to much success :)
18:20 <Mythol> : im not disagreeing with you :P
18:20 <Mythol> : i just need to know which parts you think are overmapped so I can change
18:20 <Roddie> : oh sorry, i got carried away
18:20 <Mythol> : lol np~
18:20 <Roddie> : it's just that, maps that I see overmapped
18:21 <Roddie> : that's something I really like to talk about with the mapper
18:21 <Roddie> : anyway
18:22 <Roddie> : 00:14:577 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6)-
18:22 <Roddie> : does this really make sense?
18:23 <Mythol> : I'll change xD
18:25 <Roddie> : okay
18:25 <Roddie> : just remember
18:25 <Roddie> : follow the flow of the song
18:26 <Roddie> : 00:35:439 (6, 7)-
18:26 <Roddie> : i suggest you remove the 6th note
18:27 <Mythol> : there is no 6th note =/
18:27 <Roddie> : oh oops
18:27 <Roddie> : i edit out myself
18:27 <Roddie> : sry
18:27 <Roddie> : 00:35:439 (1, 2)-
18:28 <Roddie> : I suggest you delete the 1st note
18:28 <Mythol> : done
18:28 <Roddie> : and use a distance snap on the next note after so you can space it out and put a new combo there
18:28 <Roddie> : that should follow the vocals nicely (:
18:28 <Roddie> : know what I mean?
18:29 <Mythol> : yeah
18:29 <Mythol> : bye bye pattern :(
18:29 <Roddie> : hey, i'm trying to help your map play better
18:29 <Mythol> : lol
18:29 <Roddie> : don't feel disappointed
18:29 <Roddie> : i'm trying to do the best I can
18:30 <Roddie> : so your map doesn't play a bad ):
18:31 <Roddie> : no offense
18:31 <Mythol> : nahh keep going please :D
18:31 <Roddie> : 00:42:335 (1)-
18:31 <Roddie> : forgot to add a finish here?
18:31 <Mythol> : added
18:32 <Roddie> : 00:58:887 (1)-
18:32 <Roddie> : Perhaps put a new combo here since the first chorus begins?
18:33 <Mythol> : ok
18:34 <Roddie> : 01:00:094 (1, 2, 3, 4)-
18:34 <Mythol> : overmap right ._.
18:34 <Roddie> : a note triplet on 1, 2, and 3 is really not necesarry and it's not fitting too ):
18:34 <Mythol> : replaced with slider
18:35 <Roddie> : okay
18:35 <Roddie> : and space the 4th note out
18:35 <Roddie> : 01:00:439-
18:36 <Mythol> : k
18:36 <Roddie> : 01:08:197 (5, 6, 7)-
18:36 <Roddie> : pretty much the same thing here
18:37 <Roddie> : the 6th and 7th notes after the 5th slider's end point
18:37 <Mythol> : yeah
18:37 <Mythol> : i removed 6 to fix..
18:37 <Mythol> : removed clap on 7 too
18:38 <Roddie> : 01:14:577-
18:38 <Roddie> : a new combo here is not necessary
18:38 <Roddie> : 01:15:266-
18:38 <Mythol> : NC there
18:38 <Mythol> : yup
18:38 <Roddie> : this object here however, does need a new combo
18:38 <Roddie> : okay~
18:41 <Roddie> : 01:18:197 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5)-
18:41 <Roddie> : ._.
18:42 <Mythol> : on it~
18:42 <Roddie> : 01:39:577 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9)-
18:43 <Roddie> : i know this is mochi's part
18:43 <Roddie> : but this doesn't make sense :/
18:43 <Roddie> : not following the flow of the song very well ._.
18:43 <Mythol> : he loves his streams :P
18:43 <Roddie> : is he here?
18:44 <Mythol> : no
18:44 <Roddie> : let me see...
18:44 <Roddie> : damn it :/
18:44 <Mythol> : but he wont remove
18:44 <Mythol> : ALOT of other ppl complained about the streams
18:44 <Mythol> : he has no intention of changing them :P
18:44 <Roddie> : then that's his own fault?
18:44 <Roddie> : *sigh*
18:44 <Mythol> : =/
18:45 <Roddie> : fine, but we'll see if a lot of modders do complain about it
18:45 <Roddie> : you'll see
18:46 <Mythol> : x.x
18:46 <Roddie> : you know, i thought he would gain a bit more experience on the maps he just got ranked
18:46 <Roddie> : but it doesn't show ):
18:46 <Roddie> : anyway
18:46 <Roddie> : 01:59:577-
18:47 <Roddie> : i do believe that this does need a new combo
18:47 <Mythol> : I'll change for now, and tell him about it when he gets on
18:48 <Roddie> : 02:07:852-
18:48 <Roddie> : same thing here because the 2nd chorus starts
18:48 <Mythol> : 02:08:714 (1) - remove this nc
18:48 <Mythol> : and add 02:09:059 (3) -  ?
18:48 <Roddie> : oh very good
18:48 <Roddie> : i was going to mention that :)
18:49 <Roddie> : 02:20:094 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8)-
18:49 <Roddie> : i know he loves using streams
18:49 <Roddie> : but i just don't think putting a stream here makes sense :/
18:50 <Mythol> : I'll tell him..
18:50 <Roddie> : okay~
18:50 <Roddie> : 02:22:852 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8,)-
18:51 <Roddie> : same thing here.
18:51 <Mythol> : k
18:51 <Roddie> : oh look, now i'm in your part :D
18:52 <Mythol> : D:
18:52 <Roddie> : 02:34:059 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8)-
18:52 <Roddie> : this is okay
18:52 <Roddie> : this follows the song pretty well
18:52 <Roddie> : (:
18:52 <Mythol> : \o/
18:53 <Roddie> : 02:38:887-
18:53 <Roddie> : whoa
18:53 <Roddie> : that's a quite a stream
18:53 <Roddie> : and it's fitting
18:53 <Roddie> : :D
18:54 <Mythol> : xD
18:54 <Roddie> : 02:57:508-
18:54 <Roddie> : okay, i'll be posting about the timing points after this
18:54 <Roddie> : but right know, put a new combo here
18:55 <Mythol> : okay.
18:55 <Roddie> : well, after i finish with irc modding
18:55 <Roddie> : you'll see
18:55 <Roddie> : lol
18:55 <Mythol> : mhmm
18:55 <Roddie> : and that's it
18:55 <Roddie> : you're done
18:56 <Mythol> : yayy \:D/
18:56 <Roddie> : there are some finishes that were needed that I probably missed
18:56 <Roddie> : so, watch out for those, alright?
18:56 <Mythol> : ok