Ah, Vermillion city... Do you know it's called Aranciopoli in the Italian Pokèmon game? (it's something like Orange burg...)
Trainer
[00:03:410] (1) finish here
[00:11:020] (1, 2) finsh on 1st, clap on 2nd!
[00:11:955] (3, 4) end these sliders with a finish!
[00:18:644] (2) another finish here
[00:20:942] (7) apply whistle or finish sounds on all this slider
[00:25:553] (3, 4) whistle on the slider, finish on the beat!
[00:30:526] (1, 2) for these sliders, follow a "rhythm chart" like this: clap-whistle, clap-whistle
[00:41:000] (4) whistle on the start, clap on the end!
Elite 4
[General] sometimes beats are too near from each others; try to space some of them depending of the song's rhythm...
[00:00:960] (5) for example, move this beat a bit distant from the others of the combo series
[00:03:282] (5, 6, 7) it's a bit confusing this passage.. move down these three beats
[00:08:068] add a beat a little before the 4th beat; plus, move the 6th beat a little further from the others!
[00:14:438] add a beat here OR create a slider starting from 7th beat and ending here
[00:30:566] add another beat here!
Champion
[00:00:800] (4) remove the clap here (I'll post more sound tips later...)
A GREAT start for a new mapper; good job!
I'll post the 8th star, now it's up to you!
Trainer
[00:03:410] (1) finish here
[00:11:020] (1, 2) finsh on 1st, clap on 2nd!
[00:11:955] (3, 4) end these sliders with a finish!
[00:18:644] (2) another finish here
[00:20:942] (7) apply whistle or finish sounds on all this slider
[00:25:553] (3, 4) whistle on the slider, finish on the beat!
[00:30:526] (1, 2) for these sliders, follow a "rhythm chart" like this: clap-whistle, clap-whistle
[00:41:000] (4) whistle on the start, clap on the end!
Elite 4
[General] sometimes beats are too near from each others; try to space some of them depending of the song's rhythm...
[00:00:960] (5) for example, move this beat a bit distant from the others of the combo series
[00:03:282] (5, 6, 7) it's a bit confusing this passage.. move down these three beats
[00:08:068] add a beat a little before the 4th beat; plus, move the 6th beat a little further from the others!
[00:14:438] add a beat here OR create a slider starting from 7th beat and ending here
[00:30:566] add another beat here!
Champion
[00:00:800] (4) remove the clap here (I'll post more sound tips later...)
A GREAT start for a new mapper; good job!
I'll post the 8th star, now it's up to you!