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ok.Starrodkirby86 wrote:
Hello~
I can't give a complete modding considering you still have a long ways to go.
First things first, I'll answer all your questions:
1. are my beats well-placed?
Not bad for a newbie! However, they are not intuitive enough to stand up on its own, unfortunately. I recommend you turning on Distance Snap. This will make the notes equidistant depending on its timing. This makes it look prettier, work well, and etc. Your spacing isn't bad though right now. (In a way)
2. is it too short?
It's a fine length. There's a beatmap that's like 30 seconds. This works just fine.
3. what difficulty would you consider this?
I would consider it being a [Hard] or an [Insane] (A really easy one though).
My own comments...This song is too repetitive for its own good. I wouldn't have an issue with this regularly, but the volume for the song is so high that its instruments kind of rape my ears...
I recommend you ending at 00:45:71 (x). Where you end right now is VERY unfulfilling.
That is one cool skin. Is that one of the available skins on here or did you make it yourself?
I think you should change artist...Find the one who did this version of Vermillion City. I know it's not the original. If you can't find it, simply change it to Junichi Masuda. Then do a Full Resubmission.
If you found this post helpful, please give kudosu! To give kudosu, click on the link below my contact information on this post that says 'No kudosu given yet, Award kudosu', or something of that nature.
Good luck.
yea, i use XiStyle as my default, so i thought it would look good.Starrodkirby86 wrote:
Wow...you borrowed quite a lot of stuff.
If you're planning to make an easier difficulty, just follow a 1/1 (or quarter beat) pattern with an occasional 1/2 (or eighth) here and there. Don't forget about them sliders, yeah yeah. It's best to play easier difficulties in other beatmaps too to get a feel of them; same goes for whatever other difficulties you're hunting down for.
o tyvm.EBAfan101 wrote:
I would make this a little longer. I am not much of a mod dude, but here are some tips?
Add a spinner at the end of songs.
Add an easy difficulty
Trainer: Great...
Elite Four: I am not sure if it's me, but I think the spacing is a little off. Some beats are... eh... but yeah, they are fine
Champion: Fine
Great job! Great skin BTW =) Starred!
Yeah try to loop it. The skin is fine, the HP is... yeah so edit that a little.Maybe add the Green, yellow, and red color, similar to Pokemon =)BananasGoMoo wrote:
o tyvm.EBAfan101 wrote:
I would make this a little longer. I am not much of a mod dude, but here are some tips?
Add a spinner at the end of songs.
Add an easy difficulty
Trainer: Great...
Elite Four: I am not sure if it's me, but I think the spacing is a little off. Some beats are... eh... but yeah, they are fine
Champion: Fine
Great job! Great skin BTW =) Starred!
also im going to add Youngster Mode (easy) and Gym (medium-hard) Mode.
also i'll look at E4 Spacing. It was the first one i did, so it probably is off a little.
EDIT: should i add more to the skin? like the HP bar, and other things?
EDIT2: i could also loop the song again to make it ~45sec longer. then i could add more beats.
EDIT3: fixed spacing on E4 Mode.
EBAfan101 wrote:
Yeah try to loop it. The skin is fine, the HP is... yeah so edit that a little.Maybe add the Green, yellow, and red color, similar to Pokemon =)BananasGoMoo wrote:
o tyvm.EBAfan101 wrote:
I would make this a little longer. I am not much of a mod dude, but here are some tips?
Add a spinner at the end of songs.
Add an easy difficulty
Trainer: Great...
Elite Four: I am not sure if it's me, but I think the spacing is a little off. Some beats are... eh... but yeah, they are fine
Champion: Fine
Great job! Great skin BTW =) Starred!
also im going to add Youngster Mode (easy) and Gym (medium-hard) Mode.
also i'll look at E4 Spacing. It was the first one i did, so it probably is off a little.
EDIT: should i add more to the skin? like the HP bar, and other things?
EDIT2: i could also loop the song again to make it ~45sec longer. then i could add more beats.
EDIT3: fixed spacing on E4 Mode.
Is this the problem you've been having?BananasGoMoo wrote:
ty everyone who's replied so far.
also, Starrodkirby, my sliders are wierd because sometimes when i save they cange randomly, and i don't understand why. but i'm going to work on fixing everything you said so far.
0_o wrote:
Is this the problem you've been having?BananasGoMoo wrote:
ty everyone who's replied so far.
also, Starrodkirby, my sliders are wierd because sometimes when i save they cange randomly, and i don't understand why. but i'm going to work on fixing everything you said so far.
Not a bad map for a first timer, I'll give it a formal mod later.
teehee!Starrodkirby86 wrote:
its instruments kind of rape my ears...
fufe wrote:
Rapid modding actionactionaction.
champion
00:03:33 (5,6,7,8) - This sounds off to me. Try reversing it - moving the sliders to where 5 is. then put 5 in the empty space. It should match the music better?
00:19:04 (9,1) - unfair jump.
00:36:66 (8) - spacing.. kinda.
00:41:66 (4,5) - reverse order again.
elite-
00:02:61 (4,5,6,7,1) - move around so they dont overlap? Generally i think it is preferable you do not do partial overlaps when you dont need to.
trainer-
00:10:23 (6) - sounds terrible =x
00:20:95 - still sounds nasty to me =( i like my suggestion. If you insist on keepthing this way at least move 00:21:90 (1) - up 1/2
would you like me to do a spacing runthrough for you and give you the .osu's?
Mafiamaster wrote:
Wow, this is really good for it being your first map~
Your beats are way too early so change the offset to 60, then resnap.
i'll get to looking into your suggestions in a minute, but i'm posting to say i changed the reverse arrow to porygon, and i would like to know if thats better.CheeseWarlock wrote:
Informal BAT modding time 'cause it's Pokemon RBY music~
First, let's tackle the skinning. The XiStyle stuff makes no sense here. Even if you like it, it doesn't really fit at all. There's no reason to force the skin OR put some of the graphics in the folder. Especially the hitcircleoverlay, it looks terrible over the Pokeballs. Steal the one from Elite Beat Osu! or something. In conclusion: let the user have their skin of choice. FOR FREEDOM AND GLORY!
Your skinning is pretty good, though. The Clefairy doesn't really work well, I find: it doesn't stand out enough and Clefairy doesn't exactly scream "reverse". And the Oddish spins fully twice, then starts going around again before jerking back to an upright position, and it does all that 3 times every second. Smooth out the transition; make each frame rotated 36 degrees from the last. And you could choose a new Pokemon too; a Raichu/Pikachu/Voltorb sliderball and a Magnemite reversearrow would go well with Vermilion city's Lt. Surge and his electric-types.
As for the mapping, it lacks spice. Especially on the easier difficulties: the mapping is so straightforward that it could be pretty much any 126 BPM song. And the harder difficulties lack challenge; the only places Champion ever messes me up are spots like 00:08:15 (1,2,3,4,5) - where the mapping doesn't even really fit the music. I agree that Champion's hits are spaced too close together. You might want to increase the slider velocity in your harder difficulties- it'll bump up the auto-spacing even if you don't change the Distance Spacing Multiplier.
The offset feels better to me at 54.
Last note: Your new combos are pretty random a lot of the time. If you have any formal musical training, you should try to align it to phrases in the music. Or if that doesn't make sense to you: In this song, every fourth beat (every beat that has the different-sounding metronome tick) is a place where you CAN (not SHOULD or MUST) put a new combo.
Included is a small example of where to place new combos, and some ideas for when to place beats to keep easier difficulties fun. (And it's spaced out more, too, but yours doesn't have to be.)
Download the Pokemon skin, and install it (put it in osu!/Skins). In your map, go to Song Setup. In the Storyboarding tab set Pokemon as the preferred skin. Then delete the skin stuff in your folder.BananasGoMoo wrote:
also about the skin, i might do more pokemon music so i want a skin i can use for multiple pokemon songs. so i don't want to do specifically electric, or something.
eh, i like mine overall better, but i like those numbers, do you think they'll look better for numbers? like the beat-hitting ones.strager wrote:
Download the Pokemon skin, and install it (put it in osu!/Skins). In your map, go to Song Setup. In the Storyboarding tab set Pokemon as the preferred skin. Then delete the skin stuff in your folder.BananasGoMoo wrote:
also about the skin, i might do more pokemon music so i want a skin i can use for multiple pokemon songs. so i don't want to do specifically electric, or something.
That's assuming you want to use that Pokemon skin.
I'm not sure if you need permission to do that. Probably not, though, as you're not adding it to your map; you're "linking" it.
Youngster -> Trainer -> Elite 4 -> ChampionEBAfan101 wrote:
You might wanna change the difficulty "Trainer"
Make it a bit easier, it seems a bit like Normal, and it should be easy.
strager wrote:
Youngster -> Trainer -> Elite 4 -> ChampionEBAfan101 wrote:
You might wanna change the difficulty "Trainer"
Make it a bit easier, it seems a bit like Normal, and it should be easy.
Easy -> Normal -> Hard -> Insane
Trainer = Normal
Right?
I haven't looked at it but you may wanna move this to Pending.
updated, and ty.DJPop wrote:
~Youngster~
Very similar to Trainer.
~Trainer~
Fine.
~Elite 4~
Fine.
~Champion~
00:37:43 (5) - hard to see imo.
01:00:76 (1) - move starting point to 01:01:006
+Star
yes that was helpful.strager wrote:
Lots of modding in IRC, trying to get spacing down perfect. Weee~
oh thx for teh star.DeathxShinigami wrote:
Livin' in the California sun.~ On the road of looking good and to become another gym map to overcome.
thx for teh modding, now i need to edit it.Starrodkirby86 wrote:
[Youngster]:
00:03:86 (4) - Clap?
00:07:67 (1) - Clap?
00:08:62 (3) - Clap?
00:09:57 (5) - Clap?
00:10:53 (1) - Clap on all slider?
00:13:86 (2) - Clap?
00:16:72 (1) - Clap?
00:17:67 (3) - Clap?
00:18:62 (5) - Clap? I hope you see a pattern.
00:34:33 (3) - Clap?
[Trainer]:
00:21:95 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:91 (2) - New combo.
[Elite 4]:
00:07:19 (x) - Add beat?
00:38:14 (1,2,3,4) - Sloppy. ):
[Champion]:
00:03:86 (2) - Start of slider gets Clap?
00:58:86 (4) - Move 1 right on Grid Level 3.
Most of the hitsounds sound random or inconsistent. You might need to check up on that.
Wow, this beatmap has gone through a lot. Excellent work.
lol, u're funny. anyways, i'll update in a minute. or when i finish updating. lol.Lokamp wrote:
A new mod for a new mode! (Another bad joke, Lokamp...)
Youngster
[00:03:270] (3, 4) in order: whistle-clap!
[00:06:620] (3, 4) two finish here
[00:10:535] (7) with clap, whistle all over the slider
[00:11:907] (2, 3, 5, 1, 2, 3, 1) here's a bit difficult to explain: remove the clap from 2nd yellow, claps on 3rd yellow and orange and on 1st orange; whistle on 5th yellow, finish on 1st blue (remove claps from 2nd orange!)
[00:23:413] (1) whistle here
[00:25:699] (1, 2) finish or claps: choose!
[00:40:427] (2, 3, 4) three claps
[00:42:141] (5, 6, 7, 8) for the last four beats (add another one before the spinner) , whistle-finish-whistle-clap!
0_o wrote:
Wow, this has gotten SO much better since the last time I checked...
just a few things
Skin
The Clefairy is pretty hard to see, especially on the white hitcircles.
Trainer
It seems like for this whole difficulty the player is just going in circles Also, most of the notes tend be be around the top left. Try spreading your notes around the map a bit more, and while you're at it try to implement some patterns that don't make me dizzy
Elite Four
00:06:72 (5,6) - Spacing hiccup here
Champion
01:07:67 (1) - I think a finish is more appropriate here
Awesome job, have a star