Shinde wrote:

The color doesn't fill the hit circle the whole way and it bothers me. I has no photoshop though. Can you fix it? =x

Going back to modding it more. Expect an edit in ~20 minutes.

Edit:

Youngster
I didn't like some of the note placement. The spacing is fine, just.. Feels like some awkward, but with the circle size, I'm not sure you have a lot of options for placement so I don't know what to suggest. Some slight overlapping issues..

0:27:673 (3) - This slider bothers me a little. I don't like how it overlaps with the previous (2) and how it hides the (2) in the next combo. If this weren't an Easy difficulty I probably wouldn't be bothered by this.

Trainer
Sort of the same with note placement on this map. Like, the patterns seem to be going in circles, then it makes a sharp turn and goes elsewhere with the placement. That's the best I can explain it. The song's very basic, so again I'm not sure what to suggest. This is the only thing that's bothered me slightly though.

Elite 4
0:08:625 - (6) Align OCD. Right one on the grid?
0:12:434 - (5,6,7) Spaced one further apart each?
0:16:244 - (3,7) Realign? Either make a patern like |_ with it, or move (3,7) up+left like 6 each so it looks more triangular.
0:21:958 - (6) I'm thinking triangular alignment here. This works too, it's kinda V-eqsue.
0:30:530 - (5,6) Move both up one to keep spacing.
0:32:434 - (7) Round this combo out. Like it looks a bit flattened. Move the 6/7/8 to the left and readjust them a bit? Or you could give it more of a diamond shape.
0:40:053 - (1) Up one.

Champion
Handful of debatable alignment issues. Nothing important, all looks good.

General
I really don't see all that much. Other than the hitcircle overlay being a bit funky and that one slider in Youngster, I have no real problems with this beatmap. I already star'd so. Dx

Takuma wrote:

Ah, the memories.

First off, nice skin! Haha. But, the song really isn't that longer at all. Please consider mapping the full length of the song for all difficulty.

[Youngster]
To be honest the map is quite a mess. Maybe you could try different patterns or something to make it more interesting? As for the spacing and stuff, I have no complaints.

[Elite 4]
- I think you should name this to "Elite Four" rather than having the number, heh.
- Mind raising the overall difficulty and drain a bit?
00:19:10 (8) - New combo.
00:21:00 (5) - New combo.
00:21:95 (6) - New combo.
00:46:244 - Please don't be lazy and map the whole thing. ):

[Champion]
- I think you should raise the overall difficulty, circle size, and drain a bit.
00:46:244 - ))))):

Starred!

mtmcl wrote:

Bananananananana, I for one love modding new mappers' maps, cause they're almost always spaced very safely. Please have a bubble. This is step one in the BAT assembly line. In the next step, Remmy or SFG stands by the conveyor belt with a needle.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Youngster]
00:37:67 (1) - stacking
the only problem i have with this map is....its not really "fun." most of the time the notes are on every beat and only beats, and i think there were only like five exceptions to that...


[Trainer]
again, theres nothing technically wrong with this map but it feels monotonous - more like im playing Metronome than like im playing Osu!


[Elite 4]
00:03:38 (4,5,6) - whistles
00:03:86 (1) - finish
00:04:57 (3,5) - remove whistles
00:11:48 (1) - finish
00:12:19 (4) - try a whistle instead
00:15:29 (1,3,5,7) - finish
00:21:00 (1) - finish
00:32:19 (6) - remove finish
01:04:81 (1) - end with a finish
this is much better than the two preceding diffs btw :3


[Champion]
00:09:10 (6) - add a whistle
00:22:91 (1) - boring
this map is also kinda boring and repetitive...


bubble popped

CheeseWarlock wrote:

Is this any better than whatever program you're using to rotate? Paint.NET is what I used; it's a free download and it's very useful. It's still a bit blurry, but suck it up. It's going to be rotating too fast to notice anyway. And it's better than what you have now. Remember, each frame should be rotated by 36 degrees from the previous.

00:27:67 (3,4,5,6) - Ugly. The slider is still fading when you get to 6, and it's unexpected for 6 to be a slider. Going by Easy-mode standards, of course.

New combos are good from about 00:15:29 (1) - onward on Youngster, and good all through Trainer. Do Elite 4 and Champion the same way.

Aside from that, the map is pretty solid from a technical standpoint but it's not really anything special. All the beats are close to the previous ones, there are no interesting repeated patterns or particular tricks to the map. In a lot of places you didn't use distance snap, which is fine in itself, but it doesn't feel like you meant to or had any real reason to. Places like 00:36:00 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - on [Elite 4] are just kind of ugly because of that.

tieff wrote:

Random mod.
Decrease volume a bit?
Sorry, but some hitsounds feel kinda random.

[Youngster]
00:38:14 (2) - Clap.
00:39:10 (5) - Clap.

[Trainer]
00:35:05 (3) - Whistle.
00:36:00 (6) - Whistle.

[Elite 4]
00:26:24 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:26:72 (2) - Add new combo.

[Champion]
00:33:86 (4,5,6,7) - Nice. Use more beat like this.
00:34:57 (8) - New combo.
00:35:29 (1) - Remove new combo.

Star'd.