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L.E.D. - THE LAST STRIKER

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Nakagawa-Kanon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 4월 4일 수요일 at 오후 8:34:00

Artist: L.E.D.
Title: THE LAST STRIKER
Source: Beatmania IIDX
Tags: 17 SIRIUS 15 TROOPERS CS dksslqj Natteke inaba-tan Ra-s LED
BPM: 185
Filesize: 3517kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 530 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.51 stars, 89 notes)
  3. Hyper (5 stars, 339 notes)
  4. inaba's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 841 notes)
  5. Standard (3.94 stars, 155 notes)
Download: L.E.D. - THE LAST STRIKER
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last stalker.

Beginner - Ra-s
Hyper - Natteke
Natteke
yeahyeahyeahhh
BOOM
inaba-tan
rrtyui
yeah :)
Ra-s
bmin11
다른 맵은 몰라도 이건 순순히 무덤으로 가게하진 않겠다.
Ra-s
비기너 스탠다드 합본

비기너 스펠링 틀렸을껄 이건 알아서 고쳨ㅋㅋ

Download: 38867 LED - THE LAST STRIKER.zip
Muya
gogogogogogogo
Suimya
hey Kanon =v=

[General]

  1. do you need this osb file? if not then delete it and full submit~

[Beginner]

  1. 00:33:116 (2) - two grip to the right looks better~
  2. 00:38:305 (2) - 1 grip down~
  3. 00:46:089 (2) - spacing~
  4. 00:51:278 (2) - 1 grip down~
  5. 01:26:630 (1) - remove this NC~
  6. 01:36:359 (1,2) - 1 grip down~

[Standard]

  1. 00:24:359 (X) - add a note ~
  2. 00:28:251 (X) - ^

[Hyper]

Fine~

[Another]

Fine as well

nice map Kanon, GL with it ~ >A<"
Ra-s

-Sekai- wrote:

[Beginner]

  1. 00:33:116 (2) - two grip to the right looks better~
  2. 00:38:305 (2) - 1 grip down~
  3. 00:46:089 (2) - spacing~
  4. 00:51:278 (2) - 1 grip down~
  5. 01:26:630 (1) - remove this NC~ - Fixed
  6. 01:36:359 (1,2) - 1 grip down~ - Fixed
Thanks~

http://puu.sh/gE6z
http://puu.sh/gE9g
Pereira006
hello~~

IMO -> my opinions

General

you %b9%f7~1.jpg is 1024x640 should size to 1024x768

Some Suggestions
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Beginner

Will be nice if HP -1 IMO

on you osu.notepad you have check at "SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999" change like 0.8 and save

00:04:251 (3,2) - I not like the (3) is overlaps with 00:06:197 (2) should put another place or try 00:05:549 (1,2,3) change place or something also if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:08:143 (1).
00:08:143 (1) - this slider is almost hidden with Skin HP drain that very hard read should be more grid dowm if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:09:441 (2)
00:24:359 (1,2) - ugly overlaps just need clean overlaps like this http://puu.sh/gEaM
00:30:197 (1,1) - IMO This part is hard for this beginner because newbie player can't pass
00:31:495 (1) - Add Finish only start slider
00:57:441 (1) - same what happened 00:08:143 (1) should be grid dowm as this is hard read approeach

stuff cool
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Standard

SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 same happened "beginner"

00:31:495 this is need add note and add finish because here have aswome ryhthm but probraly will be hard because is near spinner but you decided IMO
00:41:873 (1) - add finish
01:02:630 (3) - I feel this is need new combo IMO

stuff aswome
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Hyper

01:59:873 - add spinner and end at 02:03:603 to same all diffs ?

fine
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inaba's taiko

I don mod taiko but
01:59:873 (1) - end here at 02:03:603 to same all diff?
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Another

okay.face stuff cool
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that all i think
good luck and bye bye
Mitsuneko
Couldn't find stuff. Hope this gets ranked. Star~
Suimya
y u no give me kudosu =3=

baka Kanon~ i mean hentai kanon
ouranhshc
just stoppin' by. Add led to the tags since you can't search for L.E.D.
Ra-s

Pereira006 wrote:

Beginner

Will be nice if HP -1 IMO - Fixed

on you osu.notepad you have check at "SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999" change like 0.8 and save - Fixed

00:04:251 (3,2) - I not like the (3) is overlaps with 00:06:197 (2) should put another place or try 00:05:549 (1,2,3) change place or something also if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:08:143 (1).
00:08:143 (1) - this slider is almost hidden with Skin HP drain that very hard read should be more grid dowm if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:09:441 (2)
00:24:359 (1,2) - ugly overlaps just need clean overlaps like this http://puu.sh/gEaM - Fixed
00:30:197 (1,1) - IMO This part is hard for this beginner because newbie player can't pass - Fixed
00:31:495 (1) - Add Finish only start slider - Fixed
00:57:441 (1) - same what happened 00:08:143 (1) should be grid dowm as this is hard read approeach - Fixed

stuff cool
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You modded previous version of my diff...;_;

Thanks~
http://puu.sh/gKzw
Louis Cyphre
mod4mod.

[General]
set Audio Lead-in to 2.5 seconds.
disable countdown in all difficulties?
Background size is wrong, current: 1024x640, should be: 1024:768 (4:3).
useless osb file, etc.
"17,15,CS" are 'unsearchable', they don't need to be in tags.
Use same count and length of kiai mod in all difficulties (except taiko)
Use same count and length of breaks in all difficulties (except taiko)
Use same colors in all difficulties.



[Another]
01:03:603 (10) - new combo

[Standard]
01:55:170 (2,1,2) - avoid please 1/2 rhythm. 01:55:170 (2) - add 1 more repeat, then 01:56:630 (1) - add note here, 01:56:630 (1) - then double repeat slider extend 01:58:738 - .

[Beginner]
that slider ticks...
00:41:873 (1) - this is really awkward
01:06:846 (2) - ^
01:37:657 (3) - ^

nice map.
Ra-s

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Beginner]
that slider ticks...
00:41:873 (1) - this is really awkward
01:06:846 (2) - ^
01:37:657 (3) - ^
All Fixed!

Thanks~

http://puu.sh/gLMo

(General부분은 알아서 바꿔줘. 앞으로 계속)
Spectator
Good map~
kosiga
hi~ Nakagawa-Kanon :)

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[Beginner]
  1. 00:26:954 (1) - why use DS 0.80x ? I think it is better to the same DS(1.0x)
  2. 00:31:170 (1) - ^
  3. 00:45:116 (1,2) - more symmetric slider. like this http://puu.sh/gQvg ↓ code. free to use
    188,124,45116,6,0,B|212:88|256:80|300:88|324:124,1,160,0|0
    308,204,46089,2,0,B|292:228|256:236|220:228|204:204,2,120,8|0|0
  4. 01:04:251 (2) - grid down. x200,y84
  5. 01:10:738 (1) - add clap to end of the slider ? this is Intentional ?
  6. 01:23:387 (1) - Suggestion of the form. Ctrl+H,R form. http://puu.sh/gQBA
  7. 01:46:738 (1) - spacing too far (1.16x) DS 1.0x is better. because this diff is easy
  8. 01:59:711 (1) - It's too loud volume IMO><. Suggestion: gradually lower the volume
[Standard]
  1. 00:17:873 (1) - add finish
  2. 00:25:981 (3) - slider end 00:26:305.( and add finish to end of the slider ? ) I think that this matches me ><
  3. 01:14:143 - Break Time start - move to 01:13:170. like this : http://puu.sh/gQNq
  4. 01:31:170 (3) - add NC ?
  5. 01:33:765 (1) - add finish
  6. 01:46:901 (1) - spacing too far ? (1.26x)
  7. 01:59:873 (1) - same Normal diff 01:59:711
[Hyper]
  1. nothing KIAI TIME ?
  2. 00:54:846 (1) - Suggestion of the form. Ctrl+R http://puu.sh/gQYy
  3. 01:24:522 (6) - add NC
  4. 01:29:711 (4) - add NC ?
  5. 01:48:684 (3) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/gR1v
[Another]
  1. 00:17:873 (1) - add finish
  2. 00:31:495 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
  3. 00:34:819 (3) - rhythm does not match for me :( Suggestion of the rhythm: move to 00:34:738 http://puu.sh/gR6a
  4. 01:33:765 (1) - add finish
  5. 01:59:792 (1) - same Normal diff 01:59:711
that' all ~

good map ~ star☆~ :D

Good luck ~ :)
S h i o n
hi :)

Normal
01:59:062 (1,2,3) - try this


Hard
01:08:954 (4,1) - adjust the shape of the sliders , make them more perfect~

Insane
00:22:738 (3,4,5,6) - kinda weird ryhthm It's okay when I play.
00:48:927 (3) - make the spacing smaller like other same patterns you've made and redo the shape maybe?

cool
Ra-s

kosiga wrote:

[Beginner]
  1. 00:26:954 (1) - why use DS 0.80x ? I think it is better to the same DS(1.0x)
  2. 00:31:170 (1) - ^
  3. 00:45:116 (1,2) - more symmetric slider. like this http://puu.sh/gQvg ↓ code. free to use
    188,124,45116,6,0,B|212:88|256:80|300:88|324:124,1,160,0|0
    308,204,46089,2,0,B|292:228|256:236|220:228|204:204,2,120,8|0|0
  4. 01:04:251 (2) - grid down. x200,y84
  5. 01:10:738 (1) - add clap to end of the slider ? this is Intentional ?
  6. 01:23:387 (1) - Suggestion of the form. Ctrl+H,R form. http://puu.sh/gQBA
  7. 01:46:738 (1) - spacing too far (1.16x) DS 1.0x is better. because this diff is easy
  8. 01:59:711 (1) - It's too loud volume IMO><. Suggestion: gradually lower the volume
Thanks~

http://puu.sh/gSk5
jossieP
hi, Im surprised that a requirement to mod you is not having a ranked map =v=

[Another]

00:10:657 - this timeline should be the same volume of the first (70% volume) just for keep the volume
00:28:332 (7) - a clap here would keep the pattenr used on the end of 00:25:332 (4)
00:31:009 (11) - finish increase the bass effect and leave a nice effect for incoming notes
00:36:116 (3) - this note should be on previous white tick 00:36:035 < here, just following the song, stack it at end of 00:35:711 (2) if you have moved
00:39:927 (3) - simmilar as up ↑
00:52:170 - why volume decrease? the sound of 70% was so nice >:
00:54:198 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ok this pattern is just so weird, let me explain, we have 3 doubles on back and a stream starting on a blue tick, a common way would be move 00:54:279 (7) to 00:54:359 and delete 00:54:441 (8), of course making a nice jump on (6,7)
and incoming streams are just stream, dont follow the song, but you are not changing it anyway.
01:12:846 (9) - finish for accentuate the bass effect
01:33:278 (6) - ↑
01:33:441 (7) - ↑ on start of slider
nice whistles on kiai <:

[Hyper]

00:10:657 - this timeline should be the same volume of the first (70% volume) just for keep the volume
00:41:549 (4) - no finish on end of slider, its sounding bad >_<

[inaba's taiko]

- the "t" from taiko must be on caps > "inaba's Taiko"
- and normalize the volume of all timelines? there is a 60% volume and a 5% (I think 5% is not rankable, but not sure at all)

01:12:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - this combo must be kkkkkkkkkkd, since the last note feels on an lower level

[Standard]

- nothing to say, just many 1/2 slider changes on kiai

00:10:657 - this timeline should be the same volume of the first (70% volume) just for keep the volume

[Beginner]

- aproach rate is not too high?

00:10:657 - this timeline should be the same volume of the first (70% volume) just for keep the volume
01:10:738 (1) - god, the claps was almos silent on previous patterns, and this sounds so bad on end of slider >_<
01:34:414 (1) - gets covered by hitburst of previous spinner.
01:37:657 (3) - no finish on start/repeat/end of slider
01:51:927 (1) - finish on repeat
01:57:116 (1) - no whistle on this note give a nice 3 - 0 - 3 - 0 hitsound effect since the spinner have no hitobject where it start*
Ra-s

ikari_kyon wrote:

[Beginner]

- aproach rate is not too high?

00:10:657 - this timeline should be the same volume of the first (70% volume) just for keep the volume
01:10:738 (1) - god, the claps was almos silent on previous patterns, and this sounds so bad on end of slider >_<
01:34:414 (1) - gets covered by hitburst of previous spinner.
01:37:657 (3) - no finish on start/repeat/end of slider
01:51:927 (1) - finish on repeat
01:57:116 (1) - no whistle on this note give a nice 3 - 0 - 3 - 0 hitsound effect since the spinner have no hitobject where it ends
Thanks~

http://puu.sh/h0b0
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~
     
    General :
     
  1. Delete .osb files in the folder ( Full Submit )
  2. Use the same kiai time in all osu standard diff ( except Taiko )
     
    Beginner :
     
  3. 00:48:684 (2) - Spacing~
  4. 01:51:927 (1) - add finish end
     
    Standard :
     
  5. Looks good for me ~
     
    Hyper :
     
  6. You forgot to add kiai time ~
     
    Another :
     
  7. Looks good for me ~
     
    inaba's taiko :
     
  8. Use the same volume in all Inherited Timing
  9. 00:18:684 (1,1) - dk?
     
    You must to read~!
    red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.
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Nice map!!!~ I can't say many thing sorry :(
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3
Ra-s

bossandy wrote:

  • Beginner :
     
  1. 00:48:684 (2) - Spacing~
  2. 01:51:927 (1) - add finish end
All Fixed

Thanks~
http://puu.sh/h8yr
Lucy-Kaede
Hey! Mod from my queue.

General
Combo colours: Hyper has different combo colours to the rest, you should make them the same as other diffs ^^
Taiko is different too.. but it's taiko ;)

Kiai: Hyper has no kiai time please make a kiai time for this difficulty that starts on 01:33:765, ends on 01:54:522, to keep consistent kiai times. Your map may not be able to be ranked without it.

Beginner
01:02:630 (1) - The red anchor point is noticeable in-game.
Heres 2 options you could use:
Pointy

128,128,62630,6,0,B|67:110|67:76|67:41|128:24,2,160,4|0|0

Personally, I like this second one:
smooth

128,120,62630,6,0,B|72:104|72:64|72:24|128:8,2,160,4|0|0

01:37:657 (3) - You could make this similar to the above "smooth" slider if you like. Fine as is though. Just think it goes nicer with combo's like
01:40:251 (2,3) - that fit well together.

Standard
00:02:468 (1) - This sounds much better at 00:02:305!
00:25:332 (2) - The repeat is mapped in 1/3, doesn't really suit the song in my opinion. Guess it sound's okay because of the hitsounds though.

Hyper
01:53:062 (5) - The top of this note briefly touches the hp bar, bring it down by 1-2 grids to avoid?

Another
Nice streaming ^^

Well, the mapset is pretty good for now. Looks to be it unless I find something when I quickly go over it again.
Leorda
Annyong

Standard

00:21:765 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug
00:31:819 (1) - ^
00:30:197 (1) - Extend this into long white tick for following instruments?
00:56:143 (2) - Make parallel (Nazi)
01:36:522 (1,2,3,4) - Would be good if you remove whistle on each slider
01:45:441 (4) - Remove whistle?
01:46:901 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue as 01:36:522 (1,2,3,4)


Hyper

00:10:738 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:11:062 (2) - New combo?
00:13:332 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:13:657 (2) - New combo?
00:25:657 (2) - Move to 00:25:576 for following instruments?


Sorry, can't find something wrong
Ra-s
Sallad4ever
ok then

[General]
  1. Just like ouran said before, add led on the tags so it's easier to search for this map
  2. Please add Oni on the taiko diff
  3. Add timing sections to fade out the last spinner on every diff to lower the spinner bonus sound. I suggest this volume setting
    1. 02:01:008 - Add timing section with 60% volume
    2. 02:01:657 - ^ 50% volume
    3. 02:02:305 - ^ 40% volume
    4. 02:02:954 - ^ 30% volume
[Beginner]
  1. 00:21:116 - Add timing section to increase the volume of this section to 60% Current volume are way too low compare to the music (or use 70% volume for this then use 80% volume for 00:30:197)
  2. 00:30:197 - Replace this timing section to 00:31:495
  3. 00:52:251 - Remove this timing section. The previous section pretty much have the same intensity so the lower volume is strange
  4. 01:23:387 (1) - Add finish?
  5. The claps on the kiai time is very random and it don't sound very good. Try to use a clap pattern like 2/1 clap pattern even if not every object will get a clap. It's better than the random clap use
[Standard]
  1. 00:52:170 - Remove this timing section. The reason is the same as 00:52:251 on Beginner
  2. 01:52:090 (1) - Sounds better if you remove the whistle from the slider slide
[Hyper]
  1. 01:48:684 (3) - Add whistle at the repeat?
[Another]
  1. 00:28:900 (1,2) - It's better if if you just remove the 1/4 jump and make it like the other pattern like 00:25:332 (4,5), 00:33:116 (2,3), etc
  2. 00:47:062 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:52:414 (1) - Unnecessary NC, please remove it
  4. 01:52:414 (1) - ^
  5. 01:52:900 (1) - ^
The fact that you only made one diff (and it's the normal diff) and because the diff name doesn't have the creator name on it, looks like all the diff is made by you,this made me cringe a bit. Well it's still within the rule so it's ok I guess
Nice map, call me back later after you got more mods on the taiko (try to get lepidon, arken, or wmfchris to mod the taiko)
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