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DJ Okawari - Luv Letter

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IceBeam
nice in general

[Calm]
01:10:011 (1) - I quiet don't get why reverses are on the red ticks. it doesn's sound right..and looks like you was lazy to map this part so you filled it with a reverse-slider :p I'd like you to make something better
01:52:959 (1) - well,I got your idea,but I'd rather shorten this slider by 1/2 (01:53:590)
03:11:274 (1,2) - it's a bit our of whole mapping style,you didn't placed object closer then 1/2 yet,so I'd just continue this slider up to 03:12:538
03:21:380 (1) - and here,you could shorten it by 1/2,though this one is less evil
03:39:064 (1) - shape doesn't look cute honestly :<

also,this slowdown part is a bit awkward,as the sliders are slowdowned but objects are spaced out of 1x,so technically all these objects are "jumps",though it's not hard in any case to play

[Quiet]
probably you shouldn't use 1/4 rhytm so much in the diff next to beginner,but at least it fits well

02:38:432 (1,2,1,2) - I'd change them to simple reverse-sliders

[Romantic]
00:27:695 (1) - why no start this spinner as in other diffs? it'd make better score spread I think
01:08:748 (1) - that was akward to me :| shorthen this slider to 01:09:380 and then make a reverse-slider if you want to keep those notes?
02:15:695 (1) - dat slider 8-)
02:37:485 (5) - shorten this slider to 02:37:801 and add a note to 02:37:959 (6)? sounds more right to me
02:42:538 (5,6) - ^
03:04:959 (3) - fix spacing,it looks like 1/2 here
03:52:959 (1) - start spinner from here? bpm changes a lot,but you can't see/feel it as the notes are stacked

[Spinboxer]
you shouldn't silence notes,as it's required to have all notes to be heard clearly
so,please,fix all section with volume below 20% (exceptions are spinners)

01:07:485 (5) - mind on moving it a little farther to show 1/1 space clearly?
01:37:801 (4,5,1) - not pretty sure of these,hm..maybe clear them a out a little more by doing suck kind of stack or anything else?
02:41:590 (1,2,3) - make an equal spacing between them?
03:02:432 (1,2,1,2) - shouldn't it be like this? D: swtiched (1)
03:07:485 (1) - mind on increasing distance? looks a bit close to previous object

[Posthumous]
well,I think we can't actually use tickrate 4 here,as the score is near 18 mil..
so I don't know,it will cause some issues,w/o a doubt,so better change it back to 2,and in SB's diff as well,for consistency

well,I won't say anything new - overmapped ;)
so I actually have no idea how to mod it,so let's leave it as it is
spboxer3

IceBeam wrote:

[Spinboxer]
you shouldn't silence notes,as it's required to have all notes to be heard clearly
so,please,fix all section with volume below 20% (exceptions are spinners)

01:07:485 (5) - mind on moving it a little farther to show 1/1 space clearly? sure
01:37:801 (4,5,1) - not pretty sure of these,hm..maybe clear them a out a little more by doing suck kind of stack or anything else? sure

02:41:590 (1,2,3) - make an equal spacing between them? umm.. I don't like this~so... sorry :P
03:02:432 (1,2,1,2) - shouldn't it be like this? D: swtiched (1) ok
03:07:485 (1) - mind on increasing distance? looks a bit close to previous object ok
Download: DJ Okawari - Luv Letter (nold_1702) [Spinboxer].osu
Topic Starter
Ulysses

IceBeam wrote:

nice in general

[Calm]
01:10:011 (1) - I quiet don't get why reverses are on the red ticks. it doesn's sound right..and looks like you was lazy to map this part so you filled it with a reverse-slider :p I'd like you to make something better
01:52:959 (1) - well,I got your idea,but I'd rather shorten this slider by 1/2 (01:53:590)
03:11:274 (1,2) - it's a bit our of whole mapping style,you didn't placed object closer then 1/2 yet,so I'd just continue this slider up to 03:12:538
03:21:380 (1) - and here,you could shorten it by 1/2,though this one is less evil
03:39:064 (1) - shape doesn't look cute honestly :<

also,this slowdown part is a bit awkward,as the sliders are slowdowned but objects are spaced out of 1x,so technically all these objects are "jumps",though it's not hard in any case to play

[Quiet]
probably you shouldn't use 1/4 rhytm so much in the diff next to beginner,but at least it fits well

02:38:432 (1,2,1,2) - I'd change them to simple reverse-sliders

[Romantic]
00:27:695 (1) - why no start this spinner as in other diffs? it'd make better score spread I think
01:08:748 (1) - that was akward to me :| shorthen this slider to 01:09:380 and then make a reverse-slider if you want to keep those notes?
02:15:695 (1) - dat slider 8-)
02:37:485 (5) - shorten this slider to 02:37:801 and add a note to 02:37:959 (6)? sounds more right to me
02:42:538 (5,6) - ^
03:04:959 (3) - fix spacing,it looks like 1/2 here
03:52:959 (1) - start spinner from here? bpm changes a lot,but you can't see/feel it as the notes are stacked

[Spinboxer]
you shouldn't silence notes,as it's required to have all notes to be heard clearly
so,please,fix all section with volume below 20% (exceptions are spinners)

01:07:485 (5) - mind on moving it a little farther to show 1/1 space clearly?
01:37:801 (4,5,1) - not pretty sure of these,hm..maybe clear them a out a little more by doing suck kind of stack or anything else?
02:41:590 (1,2,3) - make an equal spacing between them?
03:02:432 (1,2,1,2) - shouldn't it be like this? D: swtiched (1)
03:07:485 (1) - mind on increasing distance? looks a bit close to previous object

[Posthumous]
well,I think we can't actually use tickrate 4 here,as the score is near 18 mil..
so I don't know,it will cause some issues,w/o a doubt,so better change it back to 2,and in SB's diff as well,for consistency

well,I won't say anything new - overmapped ;)
so I actually have no idea how to mod it,so let's leave it as it is
Fixed everything ><"
IceBeam
good luck then
Topic Starter
Ulysses

IceBeam wrote:

good luck then
Yoo!!
Garven
Did one small spinner-> note conversion in Calm.

Ranked!
Kurai
Congratulations ~
OnosakiHito
Congratulations ~
cRyo[iceeicee]
Overmap is your way ! :)

Graats !! \:D/
LKs
finally congrts
spboxer3
:P
Kert
Oh yes!
Graz \=w=/
ertyukjh010
Rank >< GJ

真心覺得好圖
Topic Starter
Ulysses
thank you!!!
DampfNudel
I have know it nold <33
Love ya :D xD :P :>
and your map ^-^
Topic Starter
Ulysses
><"thanks damp
Dino99
Congratz!!~~ ;)
Topic Starter
Ulysses
:>>
zenki0013
gratz! nice map!! GO on
Kite
congratulations !~
eveless
恭喜~
AIR315
Congratz~

:)
Gaba
Nice map, gratz.
Nanaya_cock
good
Topic Starter
Ulysses
:DD Thanks all
Maraiga
This map is absolutely amazing and fun to play. Grats (:
Topic Starter
Ulysses
: D D
NatsumeRin
congrats!
Topic Starter
Ulysses
LOL Thanks~
wule

Gaba wrote:

Nice map, gratz.
Topic Starter
Ulysses
: d d thank you><"
Shiirn
=|
Topic Starter
Ulysses

Shiirn wrote:

=|
:<<?
Coffeezi
nice map
=w=
kriers

Shiirn wrote:

=|
^
Topic Starter
Ulysses
What is the meanning of it :<...
Sun Rainbow
邪恶的NOLD终于被我超越了!!

。。。。。。
Topic Starter
Ulysses

Sun Rainbow wrote:

邪恶的NOLD终于被我超越了!!

。。。。。。
lol~竟然開easy...你嬴了Q_Q


這麼神奇的lol(其實不神奇ww
我們都不知如何玩ctb你竟然開nf 你比我更鬼觸><""
Sun Rainbow

nold_1702 wrote:

Sun Rainbow wrote:

邪恶的NOLD终于被我超越了!!

。。。。。。
lol~竟然開easy...你嬴了Q_Q


這麼神奇的lol(其實不神奇ww
我們都不知如何玩ctb你竟然開nf 你比我更鬼觸><""
承蒙夸奖,几个月没玩了呢CTB。>.<
Wishy
So, is the ranked version of this "overmapped" or it got "fixed"? Still the ranked version is great, if this is overmapping damn I fucking love it.
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