1. Advent (1.99 stars, 105 notes)
2. Final Vent (2.68 stars, 205 notes)
3. Sword Vent (1.44 stars, 64 notes)

hillaryzx wrote:

thanks....can somebody give an example of normal ver. of this song....pls, it help me a lot...

ryuki-m1.jpg -> Ryuki-1.jpg
kamen rider ryuki op-alive a life.flv_xvid.avi -> Kamen Rider Ryuki Opening HD_xvid_xvid.avi

hillaryzx wrote:

(Don't forget move inherited timing sections and resnapping)

Can teach me about this.....
because i still don't know all about this.....
thanks again...

SPOILER

And if everything seems okay, I'll start making Taiko diff for this and cheer up ranked :3

hillaryzx wrote:

How to change the title????

hillaryzx wrote:

Make sure the "Web" menu is enabled (not greyed out)

where it is?????......

1. First, delete the extra .osb file (the one with Kamen Rider Ryuki Op in it)
2. Next, set the preview time on all of them to 29661.
3. Remove the countdown in Sword Vent.
4. Start the Timing Section in Final Vent at 00:00:090 instead of 00:00:100.
5. Remove the kiai time in Final Vent that starts at 00:56:457.
6. Resnap Final Vent.

1. Are the different combo colors intentional? If not, standardize them.
2. Move the kiais on all difficulties that start on 01:05:230 to 01:05:232.
3. My timing isn't perfect, but I think the offset should be set to something like 65 instead of 90 on all diffs

1. set the preview time for Samuel's diff, and fix the tags there. Also, add Samuel to all tags. And fix the capitalization; his diff should be "Samuel's Vent" with capital "V".
2. You seem to have missed removing the extra .osb file last time, make sure to do so.
3. For some reason his offset is set to 1775, which is identical to 60. So make the offset on ALL difficulties 00:00:060 (not just Advent). Then resnap notes.
4. You'll probably want to fix the kiai times after that since they'll be 30 ms off (I found a quicker way to do so with AIBat, after you're done adjusting the offsets.)
5. Recalculate the slider lengths on Final Vent because the ends are not snapped.

1. Try and keep a consistent spacing throughout the map; it varied from like .8x to .6x. Make sure distance snap is on when you're mapping easier diffs.
2. Your combos are far too long for an easy or normal diff; they should also be consistent. I went for about every 2 measures (8 beats)
3. 00:01:774 (1,2,3) - These are timed wrongly; it should not be snapped to 1/3rd time but rather just normal 1/4ths like so:
   
4. 00:08:631 (1) - End this on the long white tick.
5. 00:13:774 (6) - NC
6. 00:14:631 (8,9,1) - The spacing between 8 and 9 should be about the same as the spacing between 9 and 1.
7. 00:15:917 (1) - Not NC
8. 00:17:202 (7) - NC
9. 00:18:917 (5) - Move it right one grid so the spacing between all the sliders is equal
10. 00:20:631 (5) - NC
11. 00:24:488 - it really felt like there should have been a note here, but it'd be too soon after the spinner... perhaps remove the spinner and put in patterns.
12. 00:28:345 (8) - Start this 1/2 beat earlier on the red tick. Also NC.
13. 00:33:488 (1) - Not NC (the vocals here are a pickup to the downbeat), so the NC goes at:
14. 00:34:345 (7) - NC here
15. The placement for the next few notes starting from here make little sense. Here's how I would place them:
    
    Note the new combo. Make sure to space properly.
16. 00:40:345 (1) - Delete this and make the next note NC
17. Actually the placements here don't make sense to me either. Try this:
    
18. And next, starting from 00:44:631 (1)
    
19. 00:51:060 (8,9,10) - Do what I did earlier, like:
    
    Again note the NC
20. 00:54:060 (1) - Delete this and make the next note NC. Make sure it's a red NC xD.
21. 01:00:917 (1,2,3,4) - Move these notes all 1/4 back so the match up with white ticks. Also, make some kind of pattern out of them.
    

1. Combos are too long again
2. 00:01:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, fix the timing, it should be on the 1/4 instead of 1/3rd
3. 00:13:344 (4) - NC
4. 00:16:916 (5) - Snapped improperly again; move to the next red tick.
5. 00:17:201 (6) - NC
6. What is this overmapping, and improperly on 1/3rd again? None of any of this song is in 1/3rd, so you shouldn't be mapping like that.
   Try this instead:
   
7. 00:24:059 (10) - NC
8. 00:24:916 (1) - Not NC
9. 00:25:487 (5) - Again with the mistaken 1/3rd. Move to the next red tick.
10. 00:30:916 (2) - Erm, just make this symmetric.
11. 00:34:344 (6) - NC
12. 00:37:059 (1) - Not NC. Mistaken 1/3rd. Move to the next red tick.
13. 00:44:630 (1,2) - Spaced way too far
14. 00:48:059 (5) - NC
15. 00:50:201 (5) - Start this 1/2 beat later on the red tick. Also, NC.
16. 00:51:487 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This feels overmapped, and it's also spaced very badly. Just map the way you've been doing for consistency.
17. 00:55:773 (8) - Move 1/2 beat earlier

1. I'm not going to point out where all the NC's should go this time; just try to keep them consistent as I have been showing for the last two diffs.
2. 00:11:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space these out evenly.
3. 00:22:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Stream feels random and out of place
4. 00:24:917 (2,4,6) - Make these copies of 1,3,5; right now the angle between them is weird.

1. Please put in like 2 seconds of audio lead in, else everyone automatically misses the first notes.
2. OD -1?
3. 00:21:382 (3) - Delete this note?
4. 00:51:489 (6) - a 3/4ths long slider feels out of place, consider just making it 1/2.
5. 01:05:203 - Don't use red timing sections to make slow sliders; instead, use a green timing point with slider velocity of 0.5x.

hillaryzx wrote:

I already done the removal, you can check by downloading it... Also what kiai times is the best in the song?

Hi. Here's your mod. <3

GENERAL

1. Your first Kiai should start at 00:30:917. Second Kiai at 00:44:631.
   
   
2. Remove the two green lines on the end of the song. Kiai is not made for fountains.

Sword Vent

1. 00:12:488 - 1 grid down.
   
   
2. 00:14:202 - (2,3,4,5,6) 1 grid up.
   
   
3. 00:55:988 - New combo.

ADVENT

1. Approach Rate +1
   
   
2. 00:12:917 - Spacing is not consistent. Move (3) at x:376 y:300.
   
   
3. 00:34:345 - Move this closer to the previous note.

The rest is a bit fine. Good luck getting it ranked. <3

• 
  The artist should be "Matsumoto Rika".
  
  Remove "Kamen Rider", "rica matsumoto" and "ryuki" from tags because they are already added in the source.
  
  Some KIAIs are not snapped and inconsistent.
  
  Set preview time on [Samuel's Vent] as well as others.

• 
  Green lines are not snapped. Please resnap all.
  SV1.40 is too high as easiest diff.

1. 00:01:774 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is too confusing for newbie. Try the one below.
   
2. 00:03:488 (1) - It's hard to read this note because it's hidden by previous notes.
3. 00:34:345 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
4. 00:48:488 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 00:54:917 (2,3,4,1) - ^
6. 01:04:345 (1) - This spinner is too short as easiest diff. How about changing it to slider or something else?

• 
  HP-1.
  Green lines are not snapped. Please resnap all.

1. 00:25:131 (3,4,5) - Too near from (2). Move them further.
2. 00:30:917 (2) - Add finish.
3. 00:37:131 (4,5,6,7) - Oh...spacing is broken. You should change the pattern of formation.
4. 00:38:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's not good idea that stacking 6 circles unless it's stream.
5. 00:40:560 (8) - Doesn't follow the music. Move it to 00:40:345.
6. 00:46:131 (3) - Too near from (2).

• 
  HP-1.
  Green lines are not snapped. Please resnap all.
  In KIAI, you overused finish sound. Please add it to only suitable places.

1. 00:13:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's not good to stack 5 circles unless it's stream.
2. 00:19:774 (1,2,3,4) - In consistent spacing. Try to move (1,2) to right by 1 grid.
3. 00:22:774 (1) - Move right by 1 grid.
4. 00:22:988 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Clap sounds don't fit the music well. Use clap at (4,8), and remove clap from rest.
5. 00:26:631 (6) - Add a repeat. It will make better flow imo.
6. 00:30:917 (2) - Add finish.
7. 00:31:131 (3) - Remove finish.
8. 00:31:345 (4) - ^
9. 00:54:917 (6) - Add new combo, and remove new combo from 00:55:131 (1).
10. 01:04:559 (4,5) - Move left by 1 grid.

• 
  The pattern of formation is very simple and not following the music so much.

1. 00:15:917 (3,4,5) - I think quick triple doesn't fit here. Remove (4)?
2. 00:44:632 (1) - Add finish.
3. 00:50:417 (5) - Add new combo, and remove new combo from 00:50:632 (1).
4. 01:05:203 (1) - This slider is too long. It's a good idea to make unique shape slider though, this is not fun to play because of length. I recommend you to replace it with spinner.

• [General]

1. Kiai is inconsistent. Please make them all the same for all diffs.
2. Preview point is also inconsistent. Please make them all the same for all diffs.
3. Audio track lead-in is also inconsistent. Please make them all the same for all diffs.
   
   [Sword Vent]
4. 00:03:488 (1) - Put "finish".
5. 00:12:488 (3) - Remove "finish".
6. 00:15:488 (4) - Replace "clap" with "finish".
7. 00:15:917 (5) - Remove "clap".
8. 00:16:345 (6) - Replace "finish" with "whistle".
9. 00:17:202 (1) - Put a "finish" on start and "clap" on end.
10. 00:18:060 (2) - Put a "clap" on end.
11. 00:18:917 (3) - Remove "clap" on start and put at the end.
12. 00:19:774 (4) - Put a "clap" on end.
13. 00:20:631 (1) - Remove "whistle".
14. 00:21:060 (2) - Replace "whistle" with "clap".
15. 00:21:488 (3) - Remove "whistle".
16. 00:21:917 (4) - Make it look better like this: (as shown on the pic below)
    
17. 00:32:417 (4) - Move this to "00:32:202".
18. 00:35:845 (4) - Move this to "00:35:631".
19. 00:51:059 (2,3) - Is this a jump? Please fix spacing because it is not necessary to put a jump on a normal diff.
    
    [Advent]
20. 00:16:559 (4,5) - Replace "finish" with "clap".
21. 00:18:488 (1) - This spinner is kinda irrelevant; It feels weird to put a spinner here. Replace it with some notes.
22. 00:26:845 (2) - Remove "whistle".
23. 00:27:274 (4) - Remove "finish".
24. 00:30:917 (2) - This slider looks ugly ._.
    
    [Final Vent]
25. 00:03:060 (4,6,5,7) - Remove "finish"
26. 00:18:274 (1) - This spinner is kinda irrelevant; It feels weird to put a spinner here. Replace it with some notes.
    
    [Samuel's Vent]
27. 00:30:489 (10) - Put "clap".
28. 00:44:203 (10) - ^
29. 01:05:203 (1) - Replace this with a spinner.

hillaryzx wrote:

argh.... I click give kudosu without thinking.... (spacing out)...
give star, samuel?

1. Uncheck Letterbox During Breaks because of the video.
2. Preview time is not consistent in all diff, unrankable, please fix it.
3. Recommend to make SliderTickRate 2 in all diffs.
4. The star rate of lowest diff is over 3, it may cause ur mapset unrankable.
5. Set audio lead-in to 1 (1000ms) in Advent and Final Vent.

1. HP-1, OD-1. I suppose it should be a normal diff, so suggest to reduce them
2. 00:16:559 (4,5) - stack them?
3. 00:17:202 (1,2,3,4) - the approach circles 're nearly invisible here due to the video, suggest to change a combo color.
4. 00:27:060 (3) - remove clap?
5. 00:45:702 (2) - stack it with the end of (1)?
6. 00:48:274 - i suppose u miss a note here~
7. 00:51:488 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for a normal diff, highly recommend to change some of them to slider
8. 01:01:774 (4) - stack?
9. 01:02:631 (7) - ^

1. 00:11:845 (2,3,4,5) - invisible approach circles
2. 00:28:131 (2) - remove whistle?

1. HP-2, OD-2, highly recommend to do so. The bpm is not fast enough for such a high HP, and the OD make it worse. I always suggest not to make HP+AR+OD > 24.
2. 00:03:274 (6) - remove it? i suppose it's better to leave a blank here~
3. 00:15:702 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - invisible approach circles