00:16:670 – probably add a slider or spinner from 00:16:670 to 00:17:768 following voice, so is normal
00:55:999 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – make them curvier, 3 is weird right now imo

Sakura Hana wrote:

Oh hi again!
[General]
SB/Lyrics-bd.png is not used anywhere Deleted

[Hard]
00:04:963 (3) - Slider start and end are overlapping.

Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.

Well it says "path" and the slider is actually followable from start to end, because of the slighty distance. Like this it's actually unrankable

00:36:243 (3) - slider repeat covered by spinnerosu (the skin thingy) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122059 see as i was there, i made placement better

Ok that wasnt much, lol

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.

Well it says "path" and the slider is actually followable from start to end, because of the slighty distance. Like this it's actually unrankable

284,168,4963,6,0,B|272:148|240:148|212:156|200:192|212:228|240:236|272:236|284:216,1,179.999995529651,0|2

1. Devi sistemare le linee verdi, forse hai modificato precedentemente l'offset e non le hai fixate.
   Per esempio guarda il kiai time nella difficoltà di Mok o nella Normal, settallo bene sul beat (1)

1. 00:14:109 (3) - Aggiungi whistle alla fine dello slider
2. 00:35:694 (5) - Finish
3. 00:36:060 (1) - Migliora il blanket, in modo tale che il beat non si sovrapponga allo slider.
4. 00:41:548 (4) - Usa un finish piuttosto, o se vuoi lasciare il clap impostalo normal e non soft
5. 00:57:646 (6) - New combo? Leva il whistle suona malissimo IMO Piuttosto aggiungi finish no?
6. 01:05:694 (6) - Togli il whistle dallo slider, addalo solo all'inizio e alla fine
7. 01:10:816 (1) - Togli il whistle alla fine?
8. 01:15:207 (4) - No whistle
9. 01:15:572 (1) - Whistle
10. 01:16:304 (3) - ^
11. 01:16:670 (4) - Finish?
12. 01:17:036 (5) - Invece del clap metti il whistle
13. 01:19:231 (5,1) - Finish ad entrambi?

1. 00:32:768 Omg perchè questo buco? Aggiungi spinner o cosa
2. 00:38:621 (5) - New combo
3. 00:40:451 (1) - No new combo
4. 00:41:365 Aggiungi circle?
5. 00:41:548 (5) - New combo
6. 00:56:548 (1) - Terminalo sulla linea bianca grande, precisamente in 00:59:109
7. 01:06:426 (1) - Finish?
8. 01:07:890 (6) - ^
9. 01:14:475 (9) - Aggiungi whistle sul repeat, rimuove il whistle alla fine che suona male
10. 01:18:133 (1) - Finish
11. 01:19:597 (6) - ^
12. 01:21:060 (11) - New combo
13. 01:21:426 (1) - No new combo
14. 01:26:822 (1) - Fallo iniziare sulla linea bianca.

1. 00:15:572 (2) - Clap alla fine?
2. 00:18:133 (1) - Aggiungerei finish
3. 01:10:633 (1) - Terminalo in 01:11:914

1. Cicle size +1
2. 01:26:731 (1) - Fallo iniziare sulla linea bianca; 01:26:914

1. 00:13:012 (3,4,5) - I don't like this "crooked" style, could you make it linear?
2. 01:26:822 (1) - Start in on the white big line?

General:
Devi sistemare le linee verdi, forse hai modificato precedentemente l'offset e non le hai fixate. non è obbligatorio... è obbligatorio solo nei casi in cui sia significativo: kiai start/end, hitsound solo in un punto e simili
Per esempio guarda il kiai time nella difficoltà di Mok o nella Normal, settallo bene sul beat (1) me l'ero dimenticato

Normal:

00:15:572 (2) - Clap alla fine? ho tolto i clap, da li... danno un pò di pesantezza..
00:18:133 (1) - Aggiungerei finish
01:10:633 (1) - Terminalo in 01:11:914 Nosense, sto seguendo la voce
Buona questa

Hard:
Cicle size +1 Potevo capire in un Insane, ma CS + 1 è troppo piccolo per una Hard, anche per me
01:26:731 (1) - Fallo iniziare sulla linea bianca; 01:26:914 attualmente, è meglio così...

Nekoo's Insane:

00:13:012 (3,4,5) - I don't like this "crooked" style, could you make it linear?
01:26:822 (1) - Start in on the white big line?

artpiggo wrote:

Hard
AR+1
00:26:914 (2) - (392,240) thank for the idea
01:03:499 (1,1,2,3) - why don't make it straight up ?.?
01:23:804 (4) - maybe add clap sound in the slider tick ? Added, even if somebody hate it

Other is already in fine pattern now. recommend to add some slider tick rate sound. This will make this map more valuable

(Off-Topic) Unfortunately,You may have to make this map perfect than previous ranked ones, so that you can get this map ranked. Just try your best. Don't make the star received from everyone waste. Well, the ignorethis version didn't actually make sense for me at all, it didn't follow the flow of the music and was boringly overmapped, plus it was composed off 2 difficulty, the 2 of them being boring. It's surely better than one. The other version is [Full ver.]

8.5/10.

[Hard]

00:47:768 (6) - add NC. NC'd before that point anyway

[Normal]

00:03:865 (7) - add NC. i NC'ed the hit before anyway
01:02:036 (5) - ^ i'm following voice for NC's
01:26:731 (1) - end to here 01:29:383.

General:
Audio Lead-In 2 It's Fine

Normal:
First of all this Normal is quite difficult
Circle Size -1
You are using a lot of kick sliders and you also are stacking the notes a lot of times.
This is not recomended in Easy and Normal Sure? it's quite easy.. and aren't kick slider positioned in a intuitive manner?
00:16:670: Finish Hitsound ok...

Hard:
Circle Size -1 no.
00:16:487 (3): Finish Hitsound quiteno sense to add it there

[Shalon's Taiko]
Shouldn't it be [Shalon]'s Taiko?

if i add the [] the Storyboard don't work
(by far i'm not at home as now, so it's the only thing I can say)

[General]
'Index' can be removed from tags, I guess since it's inside the Source already. D: they won't know the motive. PROJECT INDEX is one of the producer of Toaru Majutsu No Index (like how "Dark Assembly" was in Disgaea anime)

[Normal]
high slider tick rate x__x it's consistent
But everything is fine here.

[Hard]
I'd increase the Circle Size by 1, but since you already rejected it elsewhere.. (?.?)
00:35:694 (1,2,3,4) - somehow it's hard to read or it's just me. ?.?
Can't find anything else.

aabc271 wrote:

Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Shalon's Taiko]

00:55:451 - ( 106 ~ 112 ) This 1/6 stream seems sudden and random for me. I would use ooooo ( 1/4 ) instead ~

Suggested patterns

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:05:694 - ( x ) Add o o ( 1/2 ) ?

00:12:646 - ( 1 ~ 4 ) o o o o ?

00:18:133 - ( 20 ~ 27 ) o o o o o o o o ?

00:26:914 - ( x ) Add o ?

00:29:841 - ( x ) Add o ?

00:45:938 - ( 63 ) Blue note ?

The map is nice overall ~

Nice use of breaks :3

Rating : 8.5/10

Star and good luck ~

SapphireGhost wrote:

[General]
- Tags are slightly inconsistent right now. Make sure they're all the same. (Mok's Vision had the order of the last two tags reverted...)
- There's something in the storyboard about "followpoint-.png" that doesn't appear to be doing anything. Probably remove/fix this.
- I'd suggest using Slider Tick Rate 2 (on the difficulties that aren't already using it) for the usual reasons, (less empty sliders, appropriate HP recovery during sliders, more readable speed changes, makes the player follow the track more closely) but in the end it's your choice. (totally not copy-pasted from another mod)

I did arleady use Slider tick 2 in my difficulties only(you could add that to their diff's mod)

[Hard]
00:08:987 (1,2,3) - I don't think most people will complain about this being a hidden repeat arrow, but you might want to change it just to make sure. it isn't hidden while playing (it appear to be hidden only editor-wise)
00:23:804 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing change is sort of awkward and unexpected here. Why not just put (2,3,4) in a stack? stacking would make only a more ugly antijump... so i manually stacked them with smaller spacing

[Normal]
00:47:585 (3,4) - I don't really like this pattern as, due to the spacing, one might think you're supposed to press (4) 1/2 after (3) (like at 01:06:243 (1,2) ) when in fact, you're supposed to press it 1/1 after (3). Try to rearrange a bit to be less confusing? It's an even good way to say "You should've follow music in front off what you saw" to the players.
changed to simil mirror (5) anyway
00:50:512 (3,4) - Same applies for here. ^
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo is sort of long compared to the others, see if it can be split up somehow? Andjusted NC in that part in Hard too
01:10:633 (1) - Same thing about the short spinner as in [Nekoo's Insane]. Moreso here as this is a [Normal].
Weìre following voice if you though about it ^-^" ( it's the "saaaaa" gorgheggio )


Yeah so, I think that's it. PM me after you and guest mappers have made fixes.

00:15:572 (5) - It might be a bit hard to tell how to follow this loop for a new player. (See http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168559) Try to use a simpler shape? i do think it's more of a skin-based problem, derived from mmslider1 ( not default and mmslider2 ) so it isn't so hard...
00:36:060 (1,2) - I'd sort of prefer if these were spaced more regularly and less confusingly, even though it makes a nice circle. It is the same distance of a Stack, however.
00:57:646 (1) - Same thing about loops here, moreso because two of the ticks overlap. as the slider speed is quite low and the time seeing the tick is quite high. So it isn't a problem.
01:18:133 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This bit, while not much so, does seem a bit disproportionately difficult compared to the rest of the map. Try to simplify it a little? (For example, avoid the 1/2s.) it isn't so hard(neither so easy). It's just a bit harder to play, but neither so much hard. Plus the mapper didn't accept it precedently.

• 00:26:914 (1) - Whistle on slider's end?
  00:28:560 (3) - Whistle on slider's start?
  00:57:646 (6) - If you look carefully slider tick #1 and #3 isn't stacked perfectly orz. Barely noticeable though
  01:25:816 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if these three forms an arc, but still in a symmetry, like this:
  
  SPOILER

  

• 00:02:768 (5) - New combo here? 9 feels too much for a Normal imo
  00:09:353 (1) - I think it's better if this slider encircles the previous (8). You can arrange like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:25:816 (4,1) - idk why... I don't think stack looks good here (manual stacking might work better though)
  00:29:658 (1) - Same as above
  00:36:060 (1,2,3) - For a Normal, I think it's too hectic to place 1/2 triples right after spinner orz (considering the recovery time)
  00:44:475 (2,3) - Curve these two? (just to sweeten up the map, yeah :3)
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:47:585 (3) - Make this repeat facing left? It's tricking my eye orz
  00:50:512 (3) - Same as above, but facing right
  00:54:902 (5) - New combo here?
  01:16:304 (3) - Make this repeat facing down? xD

• 00:01:487 (2,3) - Whistle? :3
  00:06:426 (1,..) - Try this rhythm? (see the timeline)
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:24:353 (3,1) - The slider tick is not in the center... Not a big problem though~
  00:32:402 (4) - Uh... Tricky I should say, at first I thought it was a 1/4 short-slider
  00:41:365 (4) - Move 1/2 earlier? Fits the music more imo
  00:49:963 (9) - Add finish here?
  01:08:987 (10) - ...I think the finish sound should be here rather than (9)
  01:11:548 (4) - Err... compare with the spacing from (2) to (3), it's different:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:24:902 (4,5,6) - Add whistle on (4) and (6), and remove the whistle from (5)?

• 00:21:060 (2) - Create a slider wave here perhaps?
  00:26:731 (1,2,3) - Err... These three... Is the spacing increase intentional? Not that hard to read though
  00:29:658 (1,2,3) - Same as above
  00:37:158 (2) - Weirdly overlapping (4) imo. Try to curve like this perhaps:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:38:438 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm perhaps (look at the timeline) :
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:46:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Will be tricky for Hidden mod players orz. Plays well though
  00:57:097 (8) - One grid left?
  01:08:255 (2) - Finish here instead of clap?
  01:25:085 (5,1) - Spaced too close? Not a big problem though

• 00:19:963 (7) - Curve it slightly upward? It will give flow imo:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:55:085 (9) - Not symmetrical with (7)... Is it intentional?
  00:59:475 (2,6) - Add whistle?
  
  ...can't mod this diff much >_< Great diff :3

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Forum PM ~

[General]
-> Move the preview point ~ -50ms manually perhaps? The vocal is quite cut with the current preview point
-> Snap the kiai time (begin: 60572 | end: 86914)

[cesc's Easy]

• 00:26:914 (1) - Whistle on slider's end?
  00:28:560 (3) - Whistle on slider's start?
  00:57:646 (6) - If you look carefully slider tick #1 and #3 isn't stacked perfectly orz. Barely noticeable though
  01:25:816 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if these three forms an arc, but still in a symmetry, like this:
  
  SPOILER

  

[Normal]

• 00:02:768 (5) - New combo here? 9 feels too much for a Normal imo
  00:09:353 (1) - I think it's better if this slider encircles the previous (8). You can arrange like this: had another idea...
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:25:816 (4,1) - idk why... I don't think stack looks good here (manual stacking might work better though)
  00:29:658 (1) - Same as above
  00:36:060 (1,2,3) - For a Normal, I think it's too hectic to place 1/2 triples right after spinner orz (considering the recovery time) I'm pretty bastard :3. Anyway, normal players can play these things
  --
  I had redone this part , but was re-placed by the old version
  --

...I have to off atm.
Will mod the remaining diffs tomorrow by editing post :3

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Forum PM ~

[Mok's visionS]

• 00:01:487 (2,3) - Whistle? :3
  00:06:426 (1,..) - Try this rhythm? (see the timeline)
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:24:353 (3,1) - The slider tick is not in the center... Not a big problem though~
  00:32:402 (4) - Uh... Tricky I should say, at first I thought it was a 1/4 short-slider
  00:41:365 (4) - Move 1/2 earlier? Fits the music more imo
  00:49:963 (9) - Add finish here?
  01:08:987 (10) - ...I think the finish sound should be here rather than (9)
  01:11:548 (4) - Err... compare with the spacing from (2) to (3), it's different:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:24:902 (4,5,6) - Add whistle on (4) and (6), and remove the whistle from (5)?

...I have to off atm.
Will mod the remaining diffs tomorrow by editing post :3

Niva wrote:

[Hard]

• 00:21:060 (2) - Create a slider wave here perhaps?
  00:26:731 (1,2,3) - Err... These three... Is the spacing increase intentional? Not that hard to read though Yep :3
  00:29:658 (1,2,3) - Same as above
  00:37:158 (2) - Weirdly overlapping (4) imo. Try to curve like this perhaps: did other things :3
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:38:438 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm perhaps (look at the timeline) : (uh, i did this by correcting the other thing :3
  SPOILER

  
  00:46:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Will be tricky for Hidden mod players orz. Plays well though i know :3
  00:57:097 (8) - One grid left?
  01:08:255 (2) - Finish here instead of clap?
  01:25:085 (5,1) - Spaced too close? Not a big problem though

Thank for the mod :3

Also, just realized this : idk why, but for me the singer sings "You're my ideal" rather than "You are my ideal" >_<
Good luck ~