1. cesc's Easy (2,46 stars, 113 notes)
2. Hard (4,86 stars, 247 notes)
3. Mok's visionS (4,31 stars, 163 notes)
4. Nekoo's Insane (4,99 stars, 257 notes)
5. Normal (4,14 stars, 159 notes)
6. Shalon's Taiko (5 stars, 375 notes)

ziin wrote:

artist: kawada mami - unless you have a really good reason to keep it this way (considering you changed it for "no buts"). If you do put it in the first post so it doesn't come up again. want to see if someone does receive the "Unconsistent" Bubble pop
if you do change the artist, change the title too: "See visionS". Otherwise it's not worth a full resubmit.

[normal+]
00:04:939 (9) - why the slow?
00:09:329 (10,11) - these and the notes before it would probably sound better ending on the beat removed the 9, the slider represent the sing
00:16:646 (3) - no beat here since you're mapping to the lyrics, or maybe a long slider to 00:18:109 (1)? it's mapped to the guitar too
00:20:853 (1) - start slider on 00:21:036 and add a note at 00:20:853
00:22:134 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/SAR
00:23:780 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ewwwww. do something completely different. long slider were too easy, syllabyc mapping were too hard, just changed the pattern
00:47:561 (3) - would sound better without the 4th repeat, and it repeats a bunch toggled one repeat on the other one too

[hard]
00:04:939 (9) - why the slow? Fits better here, but I still don't see why it's necessary. it fits
00:09:512 (9,11) - very confusing jumps
00:22:500 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/SBe
00:23:780 (1) - slider
00:27:256 (4,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/SBp etc...
00:59:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/SBy if not, they're not snapped right it wasn't snapped right >:<
01:06:219 (1) - this isn't getting ranked

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[normal+]
00:23:780 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ewwwww. do something completely different. long slider were too easy, syllabyc mapping were too hard, just changed the pattern

[hard]
00:59:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/SBy if not, they're not snapped right it wasn't snapped right >:<

ziin wrote:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[normal+]
00:23:780 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ewwwww. do something completely different. long slider were too easy, syllabyc mapping were too hard, just changed the pattern

[hard]
00:59:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/SBy if not, they're not snapped right it wasn't snapped right >:<

[normal+]
00:23:780 - http://puu.sh/SEQ is this too hard? If so, you've got the rhythm starting on red, white, then red again. It sounds weird.
thank, didn't thought of this pattern

[hard]
00:38:414 (1) - ack I keep missing this jump
00:41:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is awkward every time I play it.
00:43:353 (7) - copy/paste 8, then mirror.
00:50:670 (6) - snap
00:54:878 (10) - ^
00:59:085 - end of 3 isn't snapped right, and I really didn't like 4 and 5 which have nothing in the background to support them. It doesn't even end on a white beat...
01:02:195 (10) - found another snap, along with bad spacing.
01:06:219 (1,2) - switch these.

256,312,6402,5,0
376,256,6768,1,0
376,128,7134,1,0
256,72,7500,1,0
136,128,7866,1,0
136,256,8232,1,0
256,312,8597,1,0

ziin wrote:

I hope you don't mind me constantly re-modding; every time I play it, it seems like I find something strange with it, and nobody else seems to be modding yet. Maybe you like the map , that time

[hard]
00:06:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not really symmetrical, so here's some which are:

256,312,6402,5,0
376,256,6768,1,0
376,128,7134,1,0
256,72,7500,1,0
136,128,7866,1,0
136,256,8232,1,0
256,312,8597,1,0

00:28:719 (4) - these still sound weird maybe this is what you wanted? http://puu.sh/THi
00:31:646 (4) - ^ changed it in another mode ( listened to the song at 25% vel and vocally mapped )
01:14:634 (4) - I want to hit this at 01:14:451
01:23:780 (9) - new combo? mmm... no i did it at (6) and at (12)
01:25:792 (13,14) - switch these?

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Maybe you like the map , that time

-kevincela- wrote:

Mia mod~

[Normal+]

00:02:744(5):Allungare la nota fino al tick bianco,eliminando la nota 6? il 5 è "through" il 6 è "the"
00:25:792(4):Mettilo sotto lo slider - meglio com'è ora
00:28:719(4):^ - ^
00:31:646(4):^ - ^
01:03:475:Aggiungi una nota Qui segue la voce, quindi non serve

[Hard]

00:15:914(2):Rimuovi,e copia lo slider 1,incollalo, e lo giri(CTRL+H) dovrebbe essere molto meglio così
00:28:719(4):Perchè non rimpiazzi lo slider con una nota? 3 = na 4 = i (gorgheggio)
00:31:646(4):^ ^
00:35:670 a 00:41:341:A me questa parte è un può fuori tmpo,poi non so che cosa ne pensano gli altri,comunque puoi lasciarlo così per ora dovrebbe essere meglio ora >,<
01:14:451(4):Allunga lo slider fino il tick bianco meglio come ho corretto ora , il ritmo è migliore così

Per finire,ecco una stella,hai fatto davvero un bel lavoro haku

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

uh?
già l'ho fatto >.<

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal +]
Claps don't really fit..
00:22:134 (4) - First time I though there will be a single circle,not a slider.It's almost hidden,you know.Could you change to a better way?
The main problem is in hitsounds,I wouldn't use claps,and add some more whistles.

[Hard]
Again,I can't hear any hitsounds at the beginning,they're really few..Please,add some whistles at least.
00:18:658 (3) - Move to 00:18:841. added note on 00:18:841
00:43:353 (9,10) - Almost unreadable to me. uh?
1,2 Velocity for Hard is kinda..low.Such a low velocity/spacing makes map hard to read.

uh? Mok Hard have the same slider velocity and even lower spacing, low velocity slider pretty fit that song...

1. Meh, it has a few "jumps" that I wouldn't use on an Easy, but, whatever~~ (I said "jumps" because they aren't too extreme either)
2. 26:890 (4) ~ 29:085 (4) - This looks a bit confusing for a noob imo.

1. I think just [Normal] is ok.
2. 08:963 (8) - 1 grid down and 1 grid left. It will result in a more equilateral triangle pattern
3. 52:866 (1) ~ 54:512 (4) - This looks pretty ugly imo. And I can't think of any way to solve it at the moment :/.

1. 13:902 (5) - Well maybe this could be more symmetrical:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Just noticed this on this diff but I didn't hear many hitsounds until 35:853. USE HITSOUNDS. A few whistles should do~~ Something similar as in [Nekoo's Insane]

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi!

[Normal+]

1. I think just [Normal] is ok.
2. 08:963 (8) - 1 grid down and 1 grid left. It will result in a more equilateral triangle pattern
   
3. 52:866 (1) ~ 54:512 (4) - This looks pretty ugly imo. And I can't think of any way to solve it at the moment :/. if graphically, i've arleady chenged it a bit in Kuroneko-sHerald mod

[Hard]

1. Just noticed this on this diff but I didn't hear many hitsounds until 35:853. USE HITSOUNDS. A few whistles should do~~ Something similar as in [Nekoo's Insane]

Have a star.