Looked interesting so I dropped by.
[General]
- I'm pretty sure you could reduce the SB Load. The SB Load Guide has some advice about this as you can see in Tip One, where you can disable the background image, and have the other ones be called into the storyboard. You could also benefit from Tip Two, some of your lyrics seem to have a bit more transparency than needed.
- Letterboxing doesn't do much to the BG other than cutting off a bit of her leg. I'd advise just removing it.
- You could possibly cut the mp3. It's a good unmapped 25~ seconds that take up filespace.
[Normal]
02:29:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo could be getting a bit long for [Normal].
02:42:504 (3,1) - Spacing is very awkward here.
[LKs]
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too many new combos here, perhaps do a (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) sort of thing?
02:04:726 - Long break, if you're not going to map through part of it then drag break to here.
[AngelHoney]
01:04:281 - Drag break to here!
02:11:837 - ^
I got a bit tired, but hopefully this should cover most of the stuff I wanted to point out.
[General]
- I'm pretty sure you could reduce the SB Load. The SB Load Guide has some advice about this as you can see in Tip One, where you can disable the background image, and have the other ones be called into the storyboard. You could also benefit from Tip Two, some of your lyrics seem to have a bit more transparency than needed.
- Letterboxing doesn't do much to the BG other than cutting off a bit of her leg. I'd advise just removing it.
- You could possibly cut the mp3. It's a good unmapped 25~ seconds that take up filespace.
[Normal]
02:29:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo could be getting a bit long for [Normal].
02:42:504 (3,1) - Spacing is very awkward here.
[LKs]
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too many new combos here, perhaps do a (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) sort of thing?
02:04:726 - Long break, if you're not going to map through part of it then drag break to here.
[AngelHoney]
01:04:281 - Drag break to here!
02:11:837 - ^
I got a bit tired, but hopefully this should cover most of the stuff I wanted to point out.