诶哟卧槽挖坟了?
My message is not short.
My message is nooooooooooot short ur suck!.
My message is not short.
My message is nooooooooooot short ur suck!.
thanks for your modNakagawa-Kanon wrote:
[Normal]
01:43:396 (1,1) - what? I think this is unrankable oops, fixed
[Hard]
01:34:508 (1) - 1 gird left and 1grid down [gird snap : 3] fixed
12nd map, osu need more Chinese song mapI agree- why so few Chinese songs when there are so many Chinese players?
48,304,117619,2,0,B|-1:233|32:160,1,140,0|802:12:730 (3) - Looks a bit sharp, try making with 4 nodes instead of 3
56,120,118286,2,0,B|112:8|288:8|344:120,1,350
Thanks for your modakrolsmir wrote:
[Difficulty: Normal]
Snapping:
00:54:509 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:55:398 (9) - Unsnapped circle. oops, fixed
Consider adding the kiai time to all difficulties, and make sure to take care of those two unsnapped notes in Normal. I don't like KIAI, sorry
[General]
Given the song and the fact that you start a lot of new combos on short white ticks rather than long ones, I think that though the timing is fine, the offset should be shifted to 5619 so that the metronome starts with the downbeat. change to 285
[Normal]
The combos are really long for a Normal diff, I would have them show up every 2 measures instead of every 4.
(for example, NC on 00:32:286 (5) and 00:39:397 (5).) I like it (゚´Д`゚)
00:25:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Either move (1,2) or (5,6) left 1 grid, so that the spacing here is consistent fixed
00:57:175 (3) - Adjust so that it forms a more circular shape with (4)? fixed someway
01:57:619 (3) - Same as above. Try this:48,304,117619,2,0,B|-1:233|32:160,1,140,0|802:12:730 (3) - Looks a bit sharp, try making with 4 nodes instead of 3 fixed someway
56,120,118286,2,0,B|112:8|288:8|344:120,1,350
02:14:508 (3) - ^ ^
02:32:286 (6,7) - Make these two exact copies of each other (they're not right now, flip one over the y-axis to check) done
02:50:064 (1,3,5) - ^ These 3 I looked fine
[Hard]
00:11:397 (1,2) - Move these two right 1 grid so that spacing is consistent (similar to in Normal)
00:14:508 (1) - Move right 1 grid for the same reason all fixed
01:22:730 (4,5) - Spaced too close fixed
02:08:286 (1,2,1,2) - Instead of linear sliders here, how about something more interesting? A lot of the other sliders in this difficulty look really cool. I want to keep this, sorry
02:37:397 (5) - You can make this symmetric by going into grid level 3, and moving the 2nd and 4th nodes 1 grid right. (then copy for 02:40:953 (5)) emm, it looked fine enough for me
I thought the SB in the beginning was pretty cool, and the patterns and sliders you used were designed pretty well. The guest difficulties had their own different feels, but I could also seem some aspects that were constant throughout all the diffs. Starred! thanks
(Also, I was wondering, Breeze, could you recheck my map at some point? Thanks a lot!)
Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osuakrolsmir wrote:
[LKs]
00:21:841 (2,4,6,2,4) - Drag down 1 or 2 grids so that the spacing is consistent? but if that, the spacing between white colors will become inconsistent
00:56:286 (1,2,3,4) - IMO this would look cooler if (4) was flipped over the x-axis nah, i was concentrating on y-axis as you have seen
01:56:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is close, but isn't exactly a perfect pentagon. I'd suggest taking (2), and using copies rotated at 72 degrees for the others so that the spacing and shape is perfect. Same for the one right after. ok
为啥只有我的diff的qihanzhang wrote:
all be suggestions~
lks
00:35:837 (2) - 拆成两个circle,“不”音短 但circle没有流动感
00:36:726 (1) - ^
00:47:170 (4) - 提前半拍结束再在原来的结尾放circle 想法不错 有设计
00:48:281 (6) - 去掉,spinner在这里开始、 确实有点短 但也不用去掉6 向前一点
01:04:726 - 加个circle 为啥
01:19:615 (5) - 去掉 那间距怎么弄
01:21:393 (6) - ^
为啥只有我的diff的 我都是随便选一个难度mod的...这是我能pass的最高难度LKs wrote:
01:04:726 - 加个circle 为啥在原来的结尾处加finish会很奇怪,新的这个就自然点(当然是个人感觉)
01:19:615 (5) - 去掉 那间距怎么弄01:19:170 (3,4)重合试一下
01:21:393 (6) - ^
谢谢modspboxer3 wrote:
Hi~微風
給點建議~~
[整體]
不加個kiai?
02:08:281 - 02:29:170 - 我整個很有感覺好想做閃阿lol((slap 个人感觉KIAI太瞎眼
[Normal]
星數超過3星了啦>_< 尝试再降低难度...
01:00:726 (3,4) - 這兩個用對秤過去後用ctrl + R 翻過去會比較好看 实际上就是翻过去的啊...
01:04:281 - Break 從這裡開始? k
[Hard]
01:42:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形狀有些跑掉了 fixed
01:04:281 - 同Normal k
Thanks for the star ><Mok wrote:
Map is already fine to me, so there's nothing to add more. :3
Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osuspboxer3 wrote:
[LKs >w<]
00:23:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5)的間距好像有些跑掉 这是一个渐大的间距..不够明显? 改了下
01:57:615 (5) - 可以加幾條綠線讓聲音漸遠嗎 現在這樣給人感覺有些奇怪呢 好
02:01:170 (5) - ^
Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osuxierbaliti wrote:
-lks-
01:34:281 - 在这+个circle叠在01:34:504 (1)上怎么样? ok
谢谢modxierbaliti wrote:
-General-
既然没有丫大哥的diff了那么把他从tag里移除吧. done
-Normal-
为了符合新规定ODHP-1? k
00:34:059 (9) - nazi spacing lol Isn't it right?
nice diff :3
-Hard-
02:04:726 - break 应该从这开始吧? 从你前面那个break的设置来看应该是需要 k
thanks for your check, changed nothing so no kds, sorrySapphireGhost wrote:
Looked interesting so I dropped by.
[General]
- I'm pretty sure you could reduce the SB Load. The SB Load Guide has some advice about this as you can see in Tip One, where you can disable the background image, and have the other ones be called into the storyboard. You could also benefit from Tip Two, some of your lyrics seem to have a bit more transparency than needed. Background just be hidden by few second, and I think it takes much more time to remake lyric elements other than keep it for now, just for saving few kb space :/ Sounds stupid
- Letterboxing doesn't do much to the BG other than cutting off a bit of her leg. I'd advise just removing it. I prefer to letterbox effect, it looked like a real "break" time
- You could possibly cut the mp3. It's a good unmapped 25~ seconds that take up filespace. If one like this song, he can just save this mp3 but not search a full ver. one
[Normal]
02:29:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo could be getting a bit long for [Normal]. I feel it's fine
02:42:504 (3,1) - Spacing is very awkward here. keep it for now, if someone else mentioned this, I'll think about changing them
I got a bit tired, but hopefully this should cover most of the stuff I wanted to point out.
Will upload after LKs and AHO check their own diff.Raging Bull wrote:
Can't seem to download hard. Perhaps full submit again? Also is title being used in SB? Can't seem to find it.
I redownload it once and I can see hard, then. maybe there's something wrong when you download
Normal:
00:06:504 (1) - This is pretty inaudible. Perhaps raise the volume to 40%? I make this on purpose, and there is no drum sound in background music, so I use low volume and I like it
00:13:615 (3,1) - Err..perhaps space this properly? You spaced this as 1/1 but it's a 2/1 note so the spacing could be confusing on normal It's more close and 2 beats space, so it should be more easy to hit IMO, oh well, changed it anyway
00:32:281 (5) - NC here for consistency. nah, I use new combo with vocal
00:34:059 (9,10) - These notes are also hard to here. Perhaps 40% volume too? same reason as 00:06:504 (1)
00:39:393 (5) - NC here for consistency. nah
00:42:059 (1) - Remove NC why? because it's only 1 combo? but new lyric starts here :/
00:53:615 (5) - NC here for consistency nah, and I can't see what's the difference if I NC here
00:55:393 (9) - Perhaps you should unstack this note? Since it doesn't follow the same 1/2 stacks you did previously at 00:53:615 (5,6,7). You're right, but is this really that hard to read?
01:01:615 (4) - Since you were following the vocals, why don't you move this to 01:01:393 and extend to 01:02:504? I want follow clap here
01:34:504 (4,5) - Raise the volume to 40%? nah
01:39:837 (5) - NC here for consistency.
01:40:726 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:42:504 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:54:059 (5) - NC for consistency
01:54:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
01:56:726 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:27:837 (1,2,3) - Raise volume to 40% since it's pretty hard to hear the sound?
02:33:170 (7) - NC for consistency.
02:35:837 (1) - Well...this kinda sucks. The slider ends where NC would be nice. Perhaps remove one reverse and start a slider at 02:36:726? If you do, NC at 02:36:726. I think it's fine
02:43:837 (1) - Perhaps you should space this one? I understand you're stacking 1/1s so it should be easy to follow, but since you spaced this one a bit, beginners could misread it. OK, then
02:47:393 (5) - NC for consistency.
02:48:282 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:50:059 (1) - Remove NC for consistency. Sorry, I won't accept NC mod since I use NC follow vocal
._. NC mod? orz
OK, then. I'll full-submit later, thanks.Raging Bull wrote:
I asked Sakura to download and she couldn't get hard diff. Perhaps I'll ask few more opinion?
I ignored almost all NC suggestions you gave me i should say sorryRaging Bull wrote:
LKs:
00:11:170 (1) - Perhaps you should delete this slider and add a note at 00:11:393 (x) instead. Right now, I think the note appears way too fast after a spinner. It appears 1/2 after a spinner ._. hehe, no
00:24:281 (5) - I think the .5x slow down here ruins the flow since the vocals are still going at a constant pace. Perhaps change it back to 1x and add a note at 00:24:726 (5) ? i don't think a .5x slow down ruins a flow
00:34:948 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think NC spam is needed here. Perhaps remove the NC on 00:35:170 (1,1) ? ok
00:42:948 (5,6) - I'm not sure about this jump. It doesn't really feel that fun to me. 222ms and a full screen jump.... Perhaps move it closer? if you can't even enjoy this, i should sadly tell you a fact: you will miss a mass of maps, what a pity
01:12:948 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency since you are NCing every 2 stanza. it plays well
01:15:837 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency.
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Hmm why did you do NC spam here? Perhaps every 2 stanza like what you've been doing is a lot better. hehe
01:22:504 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from these.
01:24:281 (1,1) - Remove NC
01:35:615 (1,1,1) - Perhaps remove these 3 NC's also? I don't think they are needed. ok
01:43:393 (5,6) - Perhaps move these jumps little closer also? 222ms and full screen jump
01:57:615 (5) - Personally I think this repeating slider can be flow breaking. Perhaps remap this slider? what do you mean!?
02:01:170 (5) - ^
02:03:393 (1) - Were you trying to make it in the middle? Well if so, move it one grid down no im not trying to do that
02:03:837 (1) - Remove NC?
02:32:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:34:726 (1) - ^
02:34:948 (1) - NC here.
02:35:837 (1) - Remove NC
02:37:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:39:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:282 (6) - Perhaps a slider here would fit more? Since that is what you've been doing during the chorus. And NC here.
02:44:504 (1) - Remove NC
I could play that jump, but that jump just makes no sense. But it's your choice to keep it.LKs wrote:
Raging Bull wrote:
LKs:
00:42:948 (5,6) - I'm not sure about this jump. It doesn't really feel that fun to me. 222ms and a full screen jump.... Perhaps move it closer? if you can't even enjoy this, i should sadly tell you a fact: you will miss a mass of maps, what a pity
Breeze wrote:
Removed AHO's diff. as his willing
And map uploaded
Thanks Andrea, wait for Lks's reply thenosuplayer111 wrote:
[General]
You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" into the folder. Please make sure to add it and do a full submission. okay
Disable the Letterbox during breaks on every difficulty, since you have a storyboard. okay, then
[Normal]
Remove AngelHoney from the tags, since you also removed his difficulty. Removed
There are some really long combos on this difficulty, and it's totally not good for the easiest difficulty to have them so long. changed some
00:33:615 (8,9,10) - Fix the spacing between these notes in a better way. okay
[Hard]
Remove AngelHoney from the tags, since you also removed his difficulty. done
The offset on this difficulty is different from the others. Please change it to 282 and resnap all notes, green lines, etc. done
01:04:281 (x) - Make this break start here like you did on Normal difficulty. done
02:04:726 (x) - ^ done
all fixed except 01:57:615 (5)&02:01:170 (5)osuplayer111 wrote:
[b][LKs]
00:35:615 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:837 (2) - New combo.
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This new combo spam is pointless.
01:30:948 (1) - Also, this single combo looks weird compared to the rest of the map.
01:36:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:36:281 (2) - New combo.
01:57:615 (5) - Too many repeats on this slider, it's really boring imo.
01:59:837 (1) - Same as 01:30:948.
02:01:170 (5) - Same as 01:57:615.
02:03:393 (1) - Once again, same as 01:30:948.
02:04:726 (x) - Make this break start here like you did on Normal difficulty.
02:36:726 (1) - Why again a single combo? Looks so weird, really.
02:38:504 (1) - ^
02:57:393 (1,2) - Center them a bit more for a perfect ending? Better imo.
Thanks for your modGarven wrote:
[General]
Combo colors not the same in Hard compared to Normal. fixed
Think you could get the SB to start with the white BG instead of flashing the image underneath first, then going to white? ;w; But I like the effect it flashing with the music, anywany I turned on epilepsy warning
[Normal]
The new combos feel a little inconsistent. You have some that are two measures long and some that are only one measure long. Makes the phrases feel a little off. Emm, I feel it's fine, just because some combo is a bit long lol
01:01:615 (4) - This slider shape is kinda weird. Better to do a copy/paste of the 3 and h-flip it k
01:04:281 - Extend break to here k
01:35:393 (5) - Even though it's a Normal, I don't recommend stacking under slider ends for the easiest of the set. changed
02:10:059 (1) - Remove new combo k
02:53:615 (1) - Maybe extend the end of the spinner to 02:58:059 - ? Where it ends now feels like there's going to be more afterward instead of a more conclusive beat. nice idea, changed
[Hard]
The really short combos for the sake of the patterns feels forced. You could do a lot of these while keeping a consistent combo change. Changed short combo, make them at least a bar for each combo
01:34:504 (1) - Not aligned very well fixed
02:36:282 (2) - Stacking makes this positioned weird. changed
02:39:837 (2) - ^ ^
02:53:615 (1) - Same comment from Normal fixed