Can't seem to download hard. Perhaps full submit again? Also is title being used in SB? Can't seem to find it.
Normal:
00:06:504 (1) - This is pretty inaudible. Perhaps raise the volume to 40%?
00:13:615 (3,1) - Err..perhaps space this properly? You spaced this as 1/1 but it's a 2/1 note so the spacing could be confusing on normal
00:32:281 (5) - NC here for consistency.
00:34:059 (9,10) - These notes are also hard to here. Perhaps 40% volume too?
00:39:393 (5) - NC here for consistency.
00:42:059 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:615 (5) - NC here for consistency
00:55:393 (9) - Perhaps you should unstack this note? Since it doesn't follow the same 1/2 stacks you did previously at 00:53:615 (5,6,7).
01:01:615 (4) - Since you were following the vocals, why don't you move this to 01:01:393 and extend to 01:02:504?
01:34:504 (4,5) - Raise the volume to 40%?
01:39:837 (5) - NC here for consistency.
01:40:726 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:42:504 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:54:059 (5) - NC for consistency
01:54:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
01:56:726 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:27:837 (1,2,3) - Raise volume to 40% since it's pretty hard to hear the sound?
02:33:170 (7) - NC for consistency.
02:35:837 (1) - Well...this kinda sucks. The slider ends where NC would be nice. Perhaps remove one reverse and start a slider at 02:36:726? If you do, NC at 02:36:726.
02:43:837 (1) - Perhaps you should space this one? I understand you're stacking 1/1s so it should be easy to follow, but since you spaced this one a bit, beginners could misread it.
02:47:393 (5) - NC for consistency.
02:48:282 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:50:059 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
LKs:
00:11:170 (1) - Perhaps you should delete this slider and add a note at 00:11:393 (x) instead. Right now, I think the note appears way too fast after a spinner. It appears 1/2 after a spinner ._.
00:24:281 (5) - I think the .5x slow down here ruins the flow since the vocals are still going at a constant pace. Perhaps change it back to 1x and add a note at 00:24:726 (5) ?
00:34:948 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think NC spam is needed here. Perhaps remove the NC on 00:35:170 (1,1) ?
00:42:948 (5,6) - I'm not sure about this jump. It doesn't really feel that fun to me. 222ms and a full screen jump.... Perhaps move it closer?
01:12:948 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency since you are NCing every 2 stanza.
01:15:837 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency.
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Hmm why did you do NC spam here? Perhaps every 2 stanza like what you've been doing is a lot better.
01:22:504 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from these.
01:24:281 (1,1) - Remove NC
01:35:615 (1,1,1) - Perhaps remove these 3 NC's also? I don't think they are needed.
01:43:393 (5,6) - Perhaps move these jumps little closer also? 222ms and full screen jump
01:57:615 (5) - Personally I think this repeating slider can be flow breaking. Perhaps remap this slider?
02:01:170 (5) - ^
02:03:393 (1) - Were you trying to make it in the middle? Well if so, move it one grid down
02:03:837 (1) - Remove NC?
02:32:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:34:726 (1) - ^
02:34:948 (1) - NC here.
02:35:837 (1) - Remove NC
02:37:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:39:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:282 (6) - Perhaps a slider here would fit more? Since that is what you've been doing during the chorus. And NC here.
02:44:504 (1) - Remove NC
Angelhoney:
I advise you to use tick rate 1 or tick rate 2. Tick rate 0.5 will not be supported in osz2 and is unrankable. Perhaps tick rate 2 would be nice since it will be the same for all diffs.
00:50:948 (1) - Remove NC? I think NCing every stanza is a lot better than half a stanza.
00:52:726 (1) - Remove NC. Same reason as above.
00:54:504 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:281 (1) - Remove NC?
00:57:170 (8) - And NC here instead? At the start of chorus?
00:59:837 (1) - Remove NC
01:00:726 (5) - And NC here at start of chorus?
01:57:615 (7) - NC at the start of chorus?
02:05:615 (1) - Remove NC? NCing every stanza seems better.
02:07:393 (1) - ^
02:08:726 (1,1,1) - ^
02:36:726 (7) - NC for the start of chorus?
02:39:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:281 (5) - And NC here?
02:44:726 (1) - Same here. Remove NC so you NC at every stanza instead?
02:46:504 (1) - ^
02:48:281 (1) - ^
02:50:059 (1) - Remove NC
02:50:948 (5) - And NC here at the start of chorus?
02:53:615 (1) - Remove NC
02:54:504 (5) - And NC here instead at the start of chorus?
._. NC mod? orz