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Breeze

tutuhaha wrote:

现在是负资产,我会努力的TAT
Normal
HP3 OD3 AP4吧....这才算normal啊.. :arrow: k

00:07:396 - slider在这里结束怎样?然后把Spinner拉到00:07619 :arrow: spinner是对应"白"字的长音
00:10:952 - 这个绿线改成50%吧 :arrow: 音量都加了10%
00:14:507 - 既然前面这段全是circle的话,试试吧接下来这段改成slider吧,长的短的都行,节奏一样容易使人厌倦 :arrow: 改slider节奏也一样啊:/
00:17:841 - 绿线=60%,太小声了
00:25:174 - 这段和00:14:507一样的理由,改改咯O(∩_∩)O
00:28:507 - 60%
00:34:953 - 这个拉条拉到这里,声音改成S50%后加finish :arrow: 这歌不适合加finish呢
00:35:396 - +circle+clap
00:42:507 - 拉条拉到这里结束然后+clap,原来那个多了一半节拍听着不舒服 :arrow: k
00:49:619 - +clap+circle :arrow: spinner后接note对于新手不好掌握,所以特意留了些时间
00:59:841 - ..一摸一样..还同一边?.....不好吧.... :arrow: 有改变一些排法
后面的感觉都和前面说的差不多
0 0这张是老图翻出来做的是把,可能要翻修很多..
这张图你可能在当时把节奏分的太清晰了,像是一块一块的地区规规矩矩的颜色
混杂起来吧,要不玩这个趣味性太低了

Hard
0 0这个就要开始各种加circle各种减circle了
以下只是建议,因为你的想法可能和我不一样,如果你有自己的想法就更好了
HP5 OD5 AP6
00:13:841 - +circle :arrow: k
00:14:507 - 改成拉条拉到00:14:952下个红线加circle下个白线加拉条结束在下个红线然后重复一下就到了下个白线然后红线+circle
下个白线拉条到下个白线终止 :arrow: 其实我这里就是刚开始节奏慢点,所以只是敲鼓点
00:18:507 - 0 0不建议这里用箭头重复还是直接拉到下个白线吧
00:20:285 - ^ :arrow: 感觉是3连音
00:28:285 - 0 0这个时间的前面一段随便跳一半改下节奏,随你咯前一半还是后一半 :arrow: 没懂什么意思
00:32:952 - 同00:18:507,假如要改的话+个circle在00:33:396
00:35:841 - 00:43:396 空的太有节奏了OTL,挑一些空的地方+circle吧... :arrow: 你们先现在都喜欢塞满note么:/ 慢慢点不也挺欢乐么,我都做休闲图的XD
然后后面的问题都和上面重复了
哦然后你一定要在这个后面加3连circle的话前面也最好加点后面突然出现1/4的3连circle太突然了
01:43:396 - 01:48:730 ///这个重叠真难看...真的 :arrow: 哈哈,以前实在不知道能怎么摆了,好吧,换用了现在都喜欢用的五角排法
02:35:841 - ....要叠就叠好点撒....还露个尾巴,,,,后面那个也一样 :arrow: 完全stack的话玩的时候很难看,这样玩的时候刚好
02:45:619 - ....太难看了...换个吧
02:50:952 - ////同上 :arrow: 咦,这个我觉得还好啊

音效太低了,,,提高点吧,,,,,加油咯
谢谢mod
Curisu
诶哟卧槽挖坟了?

My message is not short.

My message is nooooooooooot short ur suck!.
Curisu
卧槽Double post了求删

Your message is too short
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Normal]
01:43:396 (1,1) - what? I think this is unrankable

[Hard]
01:34:508 (1) - 1 gird left and 1grid down [gird snap : 3]

[Lks]
no comment

[Aho is hentai]
00:32:952 (4,1) - confusing me
02:54:508 (1,2) - (nazi) stack it....
Topic Starter
Breeze

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

[Normal]
01:43:396 (1,1) - what? I think this is unrankable :arrow: oops, fixed

[Hard]
01:34:508 (1) - 1 gird left and 1grid down [gird snap : 3] :arrow: fixed
thanks for your mod
akrolsmir
12nd map, osu need more Chinese song map
I agree- why so few Chinese songs when there are so many Chinese players? >:(

A quick AIBat check:
AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat.

[All .osu Files]
Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [AngelHoney] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:36:230, ends on 01:36:286

- [Hard] :

- [LKs] :

- [Normal] :


[Difficulty: AngelHoney]
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:36:230, ends on 01:36:286


[Difficulty: Normal]
Snapping:
00:54:509 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:55:398 (9) - Unsnapped circle.

Consider adding the kiai time to all difficulties, and make sure to take care of those two unsnapped notes in Normal.

[General]
Given the song and the fact that you start a lot of new combos on short white ticks rather than long ones, I think that though the timing is fine, the offset should be shifted to 5619 so that the metronome starts with the downbeat.

[Normal]
The combos are really long for a Normal diff, I would have them show up every 2 measures instead of every 4.
(for example, NC on 00:32:286 (5) and 00:39:397 (5).)

00:25:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Either move (1,2) or (5,6) left 1 grid, so that the spacing here is consistent
00:57:175 (3) - Adjust so that it forms a more circular shape with (4)?
01:57:619 (3) - Same as above. Try this:
48,304,117619,2,0,B|-1:233|32:160,1,140,0|8
56,120,118286,2,0,B|112:8|288:8|344:120,1,350
02:12:730 (3) - Looks a bit sharp, try making with 4 nodes instead of 3
02:14:508 (3) - ^
02:32:286 (6,7) - Make these two exact copies of each other (they're not right now, flip one over the y-axis to check)
02:50:064 (1,3,5) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:397 (1,2) - Move these two right 1 grid so that spacing is consistent (similar to in Normal)
00:14:508 (1) - Move right 1 grid for the same reason
01:22:730 (4,5) - Spaced too close
02:08:286 (1,2,1,2) - Instead of linear sliders here, how about something more interesting? A lot of the other sliders in this difficulty look really cool.
02:37:397 (5) - You can make this symmetric by going into grid level 3, and moving the 2nd and 4th nodes 1 grid right. (then copy for 02:40:953 (5))

[LKs]
00:21:841 (2,4,6,2,4) - Drag down 1 or 2 grids so that the spacing is consistent?
00:56:286 (1,2,3,4) - IMO this would look cooler if (4) was flipped over the x-axis
01:56:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is close, but isn't exactly a perfect pentagon. I'd suggest taking (2), and using copies rotated at 72 degrees for the others so that the spacing and shape is perfect. Same for the one right after.

[AngelHoney]
00:33:175 (1,2) - Er, please don't do this because it's really hard to tell that the sliders slow down here. Use normal slider velocity, or at the very least have a warning.
01:19:397 (1,2) - ^
01:23:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space out this pattern evenly?
02:47:397 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These notes seemed like they had no pattern...

I thought the SB in the beginning was pretty cool, and the patterns and sliders you used were designed pretty well. The guest difficulties had their own different feels, but I could also seem some aspects that were constant throughout all the diffs. Starred!

(Also, I was wondering, Breeze, could you recheck my map at some point? Thanks a lot!)
Topic Starter
Breeze

akrolsmir wrote:

[Difficulty: Normal]
Snapping:
00:54:509 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:55:398 (9) - Unsnapped circle. :arrow: oops, fixed

Consider adding the kiai time to all difficulties, and make sure to take care of those two unsnapped notes in Normal. :arrow: I don't like KIAI, sorry

[General]
Given the song and the fact that you start a lot of new combos on short white ticks rather than long ones, I think that though the timing is fine, the offset should be shifted to 5619 so that the metronome starts with the downbeat. :arrow: change to 285

[Normal]
The combos are really long for a Normal diff, I would have them show up every 2 measures instead of every 4.
(for example, NC on 00:32:286 (5) and 00:39:397 (5).) :arrow: I like it (゚´Д`゚)

00:25:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Either move (1,2) or (5,6) left 1 grid, so that the spacing here is consistent :arrow: fixed
00:57:175 (3) - Adjust so that it forms a more circular shape with (4)? :arrow: fixed someway
01:57:619 (3) - Same as above. Try this:
48,304,117619,2,0,B|-1:233|32:160,1,140,0|8
56,120,118286,2,0,B|112:8|288:8|344:120,1,350
02:12:730 (3) - Looks a bit sharp, try making with 4 nodes instead of 3 :arrow: fixed someway
02:14:508 (3) - ^ :arrow: ^
02:32:286 (6,7) - Make these two exact copies of each other (they're not right now, flip one over the y-axis to check) :arrow: done
02:50:064 (1,3,5) - ^ :arrow: These 3 I looked fine

[Hard]
00:11:397 (1,2) - Move these two right 1 grid so that spacing is consistent (similar to in Normal)
00:14:508 (1) - Move right 1 grid for the same reason :arrow: all fixed
01:22:730 (4,5) - Spaced too close :arrow: fixed
02:08:286 (1,2,1,2) - Instead of linear sliders here, how about something more interesting? A lot of the other sliders in this difficulty look really cool. :arrow: I want to keep this, sorry
02:37:397 (5) - You can make this symmetric by going into grid level 3, and moving the 2nd and 4th nodes 1 grid right. (then copy for 02:40:953 (5)) :arrow: emm, it looked fine enough for me

I thought the SB in the beginning was pretty cool, and the patterns and sliders you used were designed pretty well. The guest difficulties had their own different feels, but I could also seem some aspects that were constant throughout all the diffs. Starred! :arrow: thanks

(Also, I was wondering, Breeze, could you recheck my map at some point? Thanks a lot!)
Thanks for your mod
LKs

akrolsmir wrote:

[LKs]
00:21:841 (2,4,6,2,4) - Drag down 1 or 2 grids so that the spacing is consistent? but if that, the spacing between white colors will become inconsistent
00:56:286 (1,2,3,4) - IMO this would look cooler if (4) was flipped over the x-axis nah, i was concentrating on y-axis as you have seen
01:56:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is close, but isn't exactly a perfect pentagon. I'd suggest taking (2), and using copies rotated at 72 degrees for the others so that the spacing and shape is perfect. Same for the one right after. ok
Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osu
Banana
all be suggestions~
lks
00:35:837 (2) - 拆成两个circle,“不”音短
00:36:726 (1) - ^
00:47:170 (4) - 提前半拍结束再在原来的结尾放circle
00:48:281 (6) - 去掉,spinner在这里开始、
01:04:726 - 加个circle
01:19:615 (5) - 去掉
01:21:393 (6) - ^
LKs

qihanzhang wrote:

all be suggestions~
lks
00:35:837 (2) - 拆成两个circle,“不”音短 但circle没有流动感
00:36:726 (1) - ^
00:47:170 (4) - 提前半拍结束再在原来的结尾放circle 想法不错 有设计
00:48:281 (6) - 去掉,spinner在这里开始、 确实有点短 但也不用去掉6 向前一点
01:04:726 - 加个circle 为啥
01:19:615 (5) - 去掉 那间距怎么弄
01:21:393 (6) - ^
为啥只有我的diff的 :?
Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osu
Banana

LKs wrote:

01:04:726 - 加个circle 为啥在原来的结尾处加finish会很奇怪,新的这个就自然点(当然是个人感觉)
01:19:615 (5) - 去掉 那间距怎么弄01:19:170 (3,4)重合试一下
01:21:393 (6) - ^
为啥只有我的diff的 :?我都是随便选一个难度mod的...这是我能pass的最高难度 :o
[/quote]
spboxer3
Hi~微風 :)
給點建議~~

[整體]
不加個kiai?
02:08:281 - 02:29:170 - 我整個很有感覺好想做閃阿lol((slap

[Normal]
星數超過3星了啦>_<
01:00:726 (3,4) - 這兩個用對秤過去後用ctrl + R 翻過去會比較好看
01:04:281 - Break 從這裡開始?

[Hard]
01:42:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形狀有些跑掉了
01:04:281 - 同Normal

[LKs >w<]
00:23:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5)的間距好像有些跑掉
01:57:615 (5) - 可以加幾條綠線讓聲音漸遠嗎 現在這樣給人感覺有些奇怪呢
02:01:170 (5) - ^

[AHO]
01:35:170 (4) - 拿掉它我認為會比較符合節奏 看你摟:)
02:11:837 - AHO的版本我會建議這邊補完 因為節奏很滿突然在這邊空白有一點可惜:(
02:32:726 (4,2) - stack他吧
Mok
Map is already fine to me, so there's nothing to add more. :3
Topic Starter
Breeze

spboxer3 wrote:

Hi~微風 :)
給點建議~~

[整體]
不加個kiai?
02:08:281 - 02:29:170 - 我整個很有感覺好想做閃阿lol((slap :arrow: 个人感觉KIAI太瞎眼

[Normal]
星數超過3星了啦>_< :arrow: 尝试再降低难度...
01:00:726 (3,4) - 這兩個用對秤過去後用ctrl + R 翻過去會比較好看 :arrow: 实际上就是翻过去的啊...
01:04:281 - Break 從這裡開始? :arrow: k

[Hard]
01:42:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形狀有些跑掉了 :arrow: fixed
01:04:281 - 同Normal :arrow: k
谢谢mod

Mok wrote:

Map is already fine to me, so there's nothing to add more. :3
Thanks for the star ><
LKs

spboxer3 wrote:

[LKs >w<]
00:23:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5)的間距好像有些跑掉 这是一个渐大的间距..不够明显? 改了下
01:57:615 (5) - 可以加幾條綠線讓聲音漸遠嗎 現在這樣給人感覺有些奇怪呢
02:01:170 (5) - ^
Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osu
xierbaliti
-General-
既然没有丫大哥的diff了那么把他从tag里移除吧.

-Normal-
为了符合新规定ODHP-1?
00:34:059 (9) - nazi spacing lol

nice diff :3

-Hard-
02:04:726 - break 应该从这开始吧? 从你前面那个break的设置来看应该是需要

-lks-
01:34:281 - 在这+个circle叠在01:34:504 (1)上怎么样?

-AHO-
哦草
LKs

xierbaliti wrote:

-lks-
01:34:281 - 在这+个circle叠在01:34:504 (1)上怎么样? ok
Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osu
Topic Starter
Breeze

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
既然没有丫大哥的diff了那么把他从tag里移除吧. :arrow: done

-Normal-
为了符合新规定ODHP-1? :arrow: k
00:34:059 (9) - nazi spacing lol :arrow: Isn't it right?

nice diff :3

-Hard-
02:04:726 - break 应该从这开始吧? 从你前面那个break的设置来看应该是需要 :arrow: k
谢谢mod
xierbaliti
All looks good now. So bubbled.

nice map anyway, good luck.
SapphireGhost
Looked interesting so I dropped by.

[General]
- I'm pretty sure you could reduce the SB Load. The SB Load Guide has some advice about this as you can see in Tip One, where you can disable the background image, and have the other ones be called into the storyboard. You could also benefit from Tip Two, some of your lyrics seem to have a bit more transparency than needed.
- Letterboxing doesn't do much to the BG other than cutting off a bit of her leg. I'd advise just removing it.
- You could possibly cut the mp3. It's a good unmapped 25~ seconds that take up filespace.

[Normal]
02:29:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo could be getting a bit long for [Normal].
02:42:504 (3,1) - Spacing is very awkward here.

[LKs]
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too many new combos here, perhaps do a (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) sort of thing?
02:04:726 - Long break, if you're not going to map through part of it then drag break to here.

[AngelHoney]
01:04:281 - Drag break to here!
02:11:837 - ^

I got a bit tired, but hopefully this should cover most of the stuff I wanted to point out.
Topic Starter
Breeze

SapphireGhost wrote:

Looked interesting so I dropped by.

[General]
- I'm pretty sure you could reduce the SB Load. The SB Load Guide has some advice about this as you can see in Tip One, where you can disable the background image, and have the other ones be called into the storyboard. You could also benefit from Tip Two, some of your lyrics seem to have a bit more transparency than needed. :arrow: Background just be hidden by few second, and I think it takes much more time to remake lyric elements other than keep it for now, just for saving few kb space :/ Sounds stupid
- Letterboxing doesn't do much to the BG other than cutting off a bit of her leg. I'd advise just removing it. :arrow: I prefer to letterbox effect, it looked like a real "break" time
- You could possibly cut the mp3. It's a good unmapped 25~ seconds that take up filespace. :arrow: If one like this song, he can just save this mp3 but not search a full ver. one

[Normal]
02:29:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo could be getting a bit long for [Normal]. :arrow: I feel it's fine
02:42:504 (3,1) - Spacing is very awkward here. :arrow: keep it for now, if someone else mentioned this, I'll think about changing them

I got a bit tired, but hopefully this should cover most of the stuff I wanted to point out.
thanks for your check, changed nothing so no kds, sorry
AngelHoney
http://puu.sh/5o8J o.o/

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Your message is too short.
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Your message is too short.
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oops..已經泡了麽D:...
xierbaliti
ok, rebubbled :P                                    
Raging Bull
Can't seem to download hard. Perhaps full submit again? Also is title being used in SB? Can't seem to find it. :(

Normal:
00:06:504 (1) - This is pretty inaudible. Perhaps raise the volume to 40%?
00:13:615 (3,1) - Err..perhaps space this properly? You spaced this as 1/1 but it's a 2/1 note so the spacing could be confusing on normal
00:32:281 (5) - NC here for consistency.
00:34:059 (9,10) - These notes are also hard to here. Perhaps 40% volume too?
00:39:393 (5) - NC here for consistency.
00:42:059 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:615 (5) - NC here for consistency
00:55:393 (9) - Perhaps you should unstack this note? Since it doesn't follow the same 1/2 stacks you did previously at 00:53:615 (5,6,7).
01:01:615 (4) - Since you were following the vocals, why don't you move this to 01:01:393 and extend to 01:02:504?
01:34:504 (4,5) - Raise the volume to 40%?
01:39:837 (5) - NC here for consistency.
01:40:726 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:42:504 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:54:059 (5) - NC for consistency
01:54:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
01:56:726 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:27:837 (1,2,3) - Raise volume to 40% since it's pretty hard to hear the sound?
02:33:170 (7) - NC for consistency.
02:35:837 (1) - Well...this kinda sucks. The slider ends where NC would be nice. Perhaps remove one reverse and start a slider at 02:36:726? If you do, NC at 02:36:726.
02:43:837 (1) - Perhaps you should space this one? I understand you're stacking 1/1s so it should be easy to follow, but since you spaced this one a bit, beginners could misread it.
02:47:393 (5) - NC for consistency.
02:48:282 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:50:059 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.

LKs:
00:11:170 (1) - Perhaps you should delete this slider and add a note at 00:11:393 (x) instead. Right now, I think the note appears way too fast after a spinner. It appears 1/2 after a spinner ._.
00:24:281 (5) - I think the .5x slow down here ruins the flow since the vocals are still going at a constant pace. Perhaps change it back to 1x and add a note at 00:24:726 (5) ?
00:34:948 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think NC spam is needed here. Perhaps remove the NC on 00:35:170 (1,1) ?
00:42:948 (5,6) - I'm not sure about this jump. It doesn't really feel that fun to me. 222ms and a full screen jump.... Perhaps move it closer?
01:12:948 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency since you are NCing every 2 stanza.
01:15:837 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency.
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Hmm why did you do NC spam here? Perhaps every 2 stanza like what you've been doing is a lot better.
01:22:504 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from these.
01:24:281 (1,1) - Remove NC
01:35:615 (1,1,1) - Perhaps remove these 3 NC's also? I don't think they are needed.
01:43:393 (5,6) - Perhaps move these jumps little closer also? 222ms and full screen jump
01:57:615 (5) - Personally I think this repeating slider can be flow breaking. Perhaps remap this slider?
02:01:170 (5) - ^
02:03:393 (1) - Were you trying to make it in the middle? Well if so, move it one grid down
02:03:837 (1) - Remove NC?
02:32:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:34:726 (1) - ^
02:34:948 (1) - NC here.
02:35:837 (1) - Remove NC
02:37:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:39:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:282 (6) - Perhaps a slider here would fit more? Since that is what you've been doing during the chorus. And NC here.
02:44:504 (1) - Remove NC

Angelhoney:
I advise you to use tick rate 1 or tick rate 2. Tick rate 0.5 will not be supported in osz2 and is unrankable. Perhaps tick rate 2 would be nice since it will be the same for all diffs.
00:50:948 (1) - Remove NC? I think NCing every stanza is a lot better than half a stanza.
00:52:726 (1) - Remove NC. Same reason as above.
00:54:504 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:281 (1) - Remove NC?
00:57:170 (8) - And NC here instead? At the start of chorus?
00:59:837 (1) - Remove NC
01:00:726 (5) - And NC here at start of chorus?
01:57:615 (7) - NC at the start of chorus?
02:05:615 (1) - Remove NC? NCing every stanza seems better.
02:07:393 (1) - ^
02:08:726 (1,1,1) - ^
02:36:726 (7) - NC for the start of chorus?
02:39:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:281 (5) - And NC here?
02:44:726 (1) - Same here. Remove NC so you NC at every stanza instead?
02:46:504 (1) - ^
02:48:281 (1) - ^
02:50:059 (1) - Remove NC
02:50:948 (5) - And NC here at the start of chorus?
02:53:615 (1) - Remove NC
02:54:504 (5) - And NC here instead at the start of chorus?


._. NC mod? orz
Topic Starter
Breeze

Raging Bull wrote:

Can't seem to download hard. Perhaps full submit again? Also is title being used in SB? Can't seem to find it. :(
:arrow: I redownload it once and I can see hard, then. maybe there's something wrong when you download

Normal:
00:06:504 (1) - This is pretty inaudible. Perhaps raise the volume to 40%? :arrow: I make this on purpose, and there is no drum sound in background music, so I use low volume and I like it
00:13:615 (3,1) - Err..perhaps space this properly? You spaced this as 1/1 but it's a 2/1 note so the spacing could be confusing on normal :arrow: It's more close and 2 beats space, so it should be more easy to hit IMO, oh well, changed it anyway
00:32:281 (5) - NC here for consistency. :arrow: nah, I use new combo with vocal
00:34:059 (9,10) - These notes are also hard to here. Perhaps 40% volume too? :arrow: same reason as 00:06:504 (1)
00:39:393 (5) - NC here for consistency. :arrow: nah
00:42:059 (1) - Remove NC :arrow: why? because it's only 1 combo? but new lyric starts here :/
00:53:615 (5) - NC here for consistency :arrow: nah, and I can't see what's the difference if I NC here
00:55:393 (9) - Perhaps you should unstack this note? Since it doesn't follow the same 1/2 stacks you did previously at 00:53:615 (5,6,7). :arrow: You're right, but is this really that hard to read?
01:01:615 (4) - Since you were following the vocals, why don't you move this to 01:01:393 and extend to 01:02:504? :arrow: I want follow clap here
01:34:504 (4,5) - Raise the volume to 40%? :arrow: nah
01:39:837 (5) - NC here for consistency.
01:40:726 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:42:504 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:54:059 (5) - NC for consistency
01:54:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
01:56:726 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:27:837 (1,2,3) - Raise volume to 40% since it's pretty hard to hear the sound?
02:33:170 (7) - NC for consistency.
02:35:837 (1) - Well...this kinda sucks. The slider ends where NC would be nice. Perhaps remove one reverse and start a slider at 02:36:726? If you do, NC at 02:36:726. :arrow: I think it's fine
02:43:837 (1) - Perhaps you should space this one? I understand you're stacking 1/1s so it should be easy to follow, but since you spaced this one a bit, beginners could misread it. :arrow: OK, then
02:47:393 (5) - NC for consistency.
02:48:282 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:50:059 (1) - Remove NC for consistency. :arrow: Sorry, I won't accept NC mod since I use NC follow vocal
._. NC mod? orz
Will upload after LKs and AHO check their own diff.
thanks for your mod
Raging Bull
I asked Sakura to download and she couldn't get hard diff. Perhaps I'll ask few more opinion?

Topic Starter
Breeze

Raging Bull wrote:

I asked Sakura to download and she couldn't get hard diff. Perhaps I'll ask few more opinion?
OK, then. I'll full-submit later, thanks.
Shiirn
0.5 tick rate is also unrankable now, just sayin'. (re: angelhoney)

And you don't even use any sliders longer than 1/1, why would you make it 0.5 anyway whhhhhyyyyy
AngelHoney
ty

Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
LKs
me cry :?
之前军训期间上网无力 看来似乎不用看那个mod了?
LKs

Raging Bull wrote:

LKs:
00:11:170 (1) - Perhaps you should delete this slider and add a note at 00:11:393 (x) instead. Right now, I think the note appears way too fast after a spinner. It appears 1/2 after a spinner ._. hehe, no
00:24:281 (5) - I think the .5x slow down here ruins the flow since the vocals are still going at a constant pace. Perhaps change it back to 1x and add a note at 00:24:726 (5) ? i don't think a .5x slow down ruins a flow
00:34:948 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think NC spam is needed here. Perhaps remove the NC on 00:35:170 (1,1) ? ok
00:42:948 (5,6) - I'm not sure about this jump. It doesn't really feel that fun to me. 222ms and a full screen jump.... Perhaps move it closer? if you can't even enjoy this, i should sadly tell you a fact: you will miss a mass of maps, what a pity
01:12:948 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency since you are NCing every 2 stanza. it plays well
01:15:837 (1) - Remove this NC for consistency.
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Hmm why did you do NC spam here? Perhaps every 2 stanza like what you've been doing is a lot better. hehe
01:22:504 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from these.
01:24:281 (1,1) - Remove NC
01:35:615 (1,1,1) - Perhaps remove these 3 NC's also? I don't think they are needed. ok
01:43:393 (5,6) - Perhaps move these jumps little closer also? 222ms and full screen jump
01:57:615 (5) - Personally I think this repeating slider can be flow breaking. Perhaps remap this slider? what do you mean!?
02:01:170 (5) - ^
02:03:393 (1) - Were you trying to make it in the middle? Well if so, move it one grid down no im not trying to do that
02:03:837 (1) - Remove NC?
02:32:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
02:34:726 (1) - ^
02:34:948 (1) - NC here.
02:35:837 (1) - Remove NC
02:37:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:39:393 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:282 (6) - Perhaps a slider here would fit more? Since that is what you've been doing during the chorus. And NC here.
02:44:504 (1) - Remove NC
I ignored almost all NC suggestions you gave me i should say sorry
and thank you so much
Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osu
Raging Bull

LKs wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

LKs:
00:42:948 (5,6) - I'm not sure about this jump. It doesn't really feel that fun to me. 222ms and a full screen jump.... Perhaps move it closer? if you can't even enjoy this, i should sadly tell you a fact: you will miss a mass of maps, what a pity
I could play that jump, but that jump just makes no sense. But it's your choice to keep it.
Topic Starter
Breeze
Removed AHO's diff. as his willing
And map uploaded
xierbaliti

Breeze wrote:

Removed AHO's diff. as his willing
And map uploaded
:(

have a recheck just now, time to rebubble this!

good luck.
Andrea
[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" into the folder. Please make sure to add it and do a full submission.

Disable the Letterbox during breaks on every difficulty, since you have a storyboard.

[Normal]

Remove AngelHoney from the tags, since you also removed his difficulty.

There are some really long combos on this difficulty, and it's totally not good for the easiest difficulty to have them so long.


00:33:615 (8,9,10) - Fix the spacing between these notes in a better way.

[Hard]

Remove AngelHoney from the tags, since you also removed his difficulty.

The offset on this difficulty is different from the others. Please change it to 282 and resnap all notes, green lines, etc.


01:04:281 (x) - Make this break start here like you did on Normal difficulty.
02:04:726 (x) - ^


[LKs]

Remove AngelHoney from the tags, since you also removed his difficulty.


00:35:615 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:837 (2) - New combo.
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This new combo spam is pointless.
01:30:948 (1) - Also, this single combo looks weird compared to the rest of the map.
01:36:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:36:281 (2) - New combo.
01:57:615 (5) - Too many repeats on this slider, it's really boring imo.
01:59:837 (1) - Same as 01:30:948.
02:01:170 (5) - Same as 01:57:615.
02:03:393 (1) - Once again, same as 01:30:948.
02:04:726 (x) - Make this break start here like you did on Normal difficulty.
02:36:726 (1) - Why again a single combo? Looks so weird, really.
02:38:504 (1) - ^
02:57:393 (1,2) - Center them a bit more for a perfect ending? Better imo.
Topic Starter
Breeze

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" into the folder. Please make sure to add it and do a full submission. :arrow: okay

Disable the Letterbox during breaks on every difficulty, since you have a storyboard. :arrow: okay, then

[Normal]

Remove AngelHoney from the tags, since you also removed his difficulty. :arrow: Removed

There are some really long combos on this difficulty, and it's totally not good for the easiest difficulty to have them so long.
:arrow: changed some

00:33:615 (8,9,10) - Fix the spacing between these notes in a better way. :arrow: okay

[Hard]

Remove AngelHoney from the tags, since you also removed his difficulty. :arrow: done

The offset on this difficulty is different from the others. Please change it to 282 and resnap all notes, green lines, etc.
:arrow: done

01:04:281 (x) - Make this break start here like you did on Normal difficulty. :arrow: done
02:04:726 (x) - ^
:arrow: done
Thanks Andrea, wait for Lks's reply then
LKs

osuplayer111 wrote:

[b][LKs]
00:35:615 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:837 (2) - New combo.
01:22:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This new combo spam is pointless.
01:30:948 (1) - Also, this single combo looks weird compared to the rest of the map.
01:36:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:36:281 (2) - New combo.
01:57:615 (5) - Too many repeats on this slider, it's really boring imo.
01:59:837 (1) - Same as 01:30:948.
02:01:170 (5) - Same as 01:57:615.
02:03:393 (1) - Once again, same as 01:30:948.
02:04:726 (x) - Make this break start here like you did on Normal difficulty.
02:36:726 (1) - Why again a single combo? Looks so weird, really.
02:38:504 (1) - ^
02:57:393 (1,2) - Center them a bit more for a perfect ending? Better imo.
all fixed except 01:57:615 (5)&02:01:170 (5)
thanks

Download: Yaxuan Xiao - Biao Bai (Breeze) [LKs].osu
Topic Starter
Breeze
Uploded
Andrea
Really sorry for the delay, seems like I forgot to recheck this >_< Everything seems good now, though.

Re-Bubbled~
Garven
[General]
Combo colors not the same in Hard compared to Normal.
Think you could get the SB to start with the white BG instead of flashing the image underneath first, then going to white?

[Normal]
The new combos feel a little inconsistent. You have some that are two measures long and some that are only one measure long. Makes the phrases feel a little off.
01:01:615 (4) - This slider shape is kinda weird. Better to do a copy/paste of the 3 and h-flip it
01:04:281 - Extend break to here
01:35:393 (5) - Even though it's a Normal, I don't recommend stacking under slider ends for the easiest of the set.
02:10:059 (1) - Remove new combo
02:53:615 (1) - Maybe extend the end of the spinner to 02:58:059 - ? Where it ends now feels like there's going to be more afterward instead of a more conclusive beat.

[Hard]
The really short combos for the sake of the patterns feels forced. You could do a lot of these while keeping a consistent combo change.
01:34:504 (1) - Not aligned very well
02:36:282 (2) - Stacking makes this positioned weird.
02:39:837 (2) - ^
02:53:615 (1) - Same comment from Normal

[LKs]
00:08:059 (1) - This feels better starting at 00:07:393 - with the bass
00:11:615 (2) - This note is covered by the osu! message after the spinner pretty badly.
02:58:059 - Add a note for the reasoning from the normal/hard?
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