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KOKIA - EXES_COSMOFLIPS/.

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Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Beren
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月1日 at 14:28:39

Artist: KOKIA
Title: EXEC_COSMOFLIPS/.
Source: Ar tonelico III
Tags: pieces qoga knell of ar ciel tyria Kiiwa vivicat Bless DarkRingSystem
BPM: 152
Filesize: 9927kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Aoto (4.89 stars, 407 notes)
  2. Finnel (4.24 stars, 284 notes)
  3. Saki (1.79 stars, 165 notes)
  4. Tiria (3.48 stars, 192 notes)
Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS/.
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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アルトネリコ3 世界终焉の引鉄は少女の诗が弾く

KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS/.

Saki - Beren

Tiria - DarkRingSystem

Finnel - vivicat ＆ Bless

Aoto - Beren ＆ Kiiwa
Last edited by Beren , edited 42 times in total.
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless
;)
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
vivicat
奇葩少女beren
求神sb
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
Bereeeeeen~
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
[Aoto]

00:23:949 (10) - I think it would sound better if you removed this circle and made the slider a bit longer to 00:23:949-
01:29:476 - 01:43:982 - this part is a little softer than the previous one, try reducing the volume of hitclaps, they are kinda too loud right now
02:52:370 (3) - hitclap sounds weird here
02:53:949 (7) - and here
02:55:528 (3) - and also here

that's all, awesome sb and interesting beatmap, good work on hitsounds!
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
offset:-5.
SB is awesome.
don't kud.
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
[General]
To be honest , I prefer preview point at 00:46:647~

[Saki]
Ahhh , at least AR +2 , OD +2 please.
And HP -1?
00:06:976 (1) remove finish?
00:07:370 (2) maybe add finish on slider start?
00:46:252 (T) snap the inherit section to 00:46:449
00:46:844 (1) can you put the center? because too short between the spinner and the silder for easy...
01:15:265 (1) ^
01:37:469 (T) snap the inherit section to 01:37:370
02:51:581 (1) add finish?
03:20:002 (5) new combo?
03:20:002 (5,6,7) why so silent? I prefer soft-hitsound claps at this part.

[Finnel]
AR seems a bit fast (for me). I suggest AR -1.
00:46:844 (1) add finish on silder start?
02:10:528 (9) add finish?
02:23:160 (1) make silent this spinner end.
02:51:581 (1) add finish on silder start?
03:04:212 (3) ^

[Aoto]
00:27:107 (8) Hmmm , invisible for me (particular , reverse arrow) because of (6).
I think you should change position like this.
SPOILER
00:46:449 (1) remove finish?
00:46:844 (3) add finish on silder start?
02:41:318 (5) new combo?

nice map & awesome SB :3
good luck ;)
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
resnap the first note at all diff plz 00:01:049 (1) - ---> 00:01:050 (1) -
add audio lead-in at least 1 second plz, it has a little lag when start playing map especially in Finnel

Don't have any issues in note pattern, I test playing and get a few slips. Nice SB too

no kuds
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Hi :)
Don't forget that everything are only suggestions.

[General]

Well, I'm not a fan of some sliders, which looks a bit weird to me, but I guess it's okay...
Your mp3's is 320kbps which is not rankable, you need a 192kbps mp3 :<
So : here's a new mp3 for you ! :D

http://www.mediafire.com/?xgzbfatmalv65sw

New offset : 1030

[Aoto]

00:42:892 (2) - Half of this slider is hidden by the previous one, I don't think this is a good idea.
02:49:207 (5) - New combo since you are using a higher spacing.

[Finnel]

03:12:892 (4,1) - Stack them properly under the end of (3)

Hehe, this map is pretty nice, especially the sb ;)
~Starz'd !
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
很棒的图 没发现什么问题 =v=
y u c a
844 posts
Joined April 2009
y u c a
awesome sb~ >~<//

General

green lines dtill cant resnap :!:

Saki

00:21:556 (1) - add finish
00:34:187 (2) - ^
01:56:293 (7) - put under the (6)?
03:03:793 (1) - remove finish
03:04:187 (1) - add finish


Finnel

00:21:556 (1) - add finish
00:34:187 (1) - add finish
00:40:306 (6) - add NC1clap
00:43:661 (6) - ^
01:35:766 (3) - remove clap and add finish
02:51:556 (1) - add finish
03:04:187 (3) - ^


Aoto

00:07:345 (3) - add finish
01:31:029 (1) - remove new combo
01:32:608 (5) - new combo
01:34:187 (1) - remove new combo
01:35:766 (3) - new combo
01:57:872 (1) - add finish
02:08:135 (2) - add NC1clap

good map~~good luck!
Aleksart
616 posts
Joined January 2011
Aleksart
Hi. Has casually found your song.Very much it is pleasant to me
All is very well made.
Upsets only a current absence Kiai-time. Boringly without it :(
Try to add though on the song end 03:04:187 - 03:19:187 ;)
Very class SB :) good job
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Beren

Alexart wrote:

Hi. Has casually found your song.Very much it is pleasant to me
All is very well made.
Upsets only a current absence Kiai-time. Boringly without it :(
Try to add though on the song end 03:04:187 - 03:19:187 ;)
Very class SB :) good job
I hate KIAI :o
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
先射 反正又不要钱 XD
Aleksart
616 posts
Joined January 2011
Aleksart

Beren wrote:

Alexart wrote:

Hi. Has casually found your song.Very much it is pleasant to me
All is very well made.
Upsets only a current absence Kiai-time. Boringly without it :(
Try to add though on the song end 03:04:187 - 03:19:187 ;)
Very class SB :) good job
I hate KIAI :o
:(
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
神sb..

总体来说..找不出什么问题来的..

Saki

前面5个的finish 可以 25% 40% 50% 50% 65%的音量试试（其实变化不大。。）。。

AR+1 OD+1

fine

Finnel

前两个clap 30% 40%?

00:16:434 - x:272 y:120
00:16:632 - x:320 y:64
03:18:408 - finish

个人看法。。

02:38:539 移到后面红线 并且clap音

其余。。。

00:48:408 - 上移一格（lv3）
01:27:882 - 右上角的waypoint右移两格 使其平衡？
02:00:645 - 1,2 右一格（lv3）

Aoto

开始同Saki

00:10:118 - 30% volume
00:13:276 - ^

其余不错

其他

02:38:539 - x 404 y 348
02:38:737 - x 316 y 324
02:38:934 - x 304 y 232
03:07:158 - x 304 y 244
03 07 355 - x 212 y 252

射不出星...暂时
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
:)
Special Normal diff~

Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS. (Beren) [Normal].osu
注意sb编码 我写在了osu文件里面了
难度名随意

因为图层的问题 做了图层位置的修改
↓
Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS. (Beren).osb
两个一起使用

记得先备份XD <3 Good luck~

Last edited by DarkRingSystem , edited 1 time in total.
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
My mod is here Beren :3

general;
- fine

saki;
- 00:07:355 >> start the new combo here instead ?
- 00:29:855 >> clap ?
- 00:39:724 >> remove clap, add it on the end instead
- 00:46:237 >> finish ?
- 00:56:303 >> new combo
- 00:58:671 >> finish with 30% volume ?
- 02:07:355 >> new combo ?
- 02:49:197 >> remove a repeat

finnel;
- 00:19:197 >> remove clap
- 01;38:145 >> finish ?
- 02:07:947 >> add a note ?
- 02:49:789 >> add a note with whistle ?
- 00:23:737 >> end (9) here
- 00:41:105 >> end (4) here
- 00:58:671 >> finish with 30% volume ?

aoto;
- 00:23:737 >> end (9) here
- 00:41:105 >> end (4) here
- 00:58:671 >> finish with 30% volume ?

* star
Bessy
145 posts
Joined September 2009
Bessy
Hi~you can lean on me
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
:)
Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS. (Beren) [Normal].osu

done 难度名你来定~

记得保证 osb里面不要有以下代码

Sample,171566,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",50

:roll: good luck
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
LRC-Mod
20:48 <cmn_891127> : aoto
20:48 <cmn_891127> : 00:22:553 (4) -
20:49 <cmn_891127> : 这个六边形，我觉得应该从5那个位置开始，4放在最后
20:49 <cmn_891127> : 我说的摆放
20:50 <Beren> : O,O我看看
20:52 <Beren> : 这样9一出来8还没消失
20:54 <cmn_891127> : 那最后三个左下，右，右上？
20:55 <Beren> : 瞎了..你等我摆摆看 好复杂
20:55 <cmn_891127> : 用ctrl + r颠倒顺序就好了
20:56 <Beren> : ok~
20:58 <cmn_891127> : 00:22:553 (4) -
20:58 <cmn_891127> : 对其一下
20:59 <Beren> : 恩
20:59 <cmn_891127> : 在01:49:691 这点先下一个，然后移到后面
21:00 <Beren> : 恩
21:01 <cmn_891127> : 02:48:408 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 扭曲了
21:01 <Beren> : O.O没扭曲
21:01 <cmn_891127> : 而且02:48:013 (4) - 这么近好么
21:02 <Beren> : 恩 故意的
21:05 <cmn_891127> : finnel
21:05 <cmn_891127> : 00:46:829 (1,2,3,4) - 这个要对称么
21:05 <cmn_891127> : ar要不要加一格？
21:06 <Beren> : 不用吧 她排版一直这样的
21:06 <cmn_891127> : 01:34:197 (1) -
21:06 <cmn_891127> : 从这里开始声音好小啊
21:06 <Beren> : ..collab换人了
21:07 <Beren> : 我改一下吧
21:08 <cmn_891127> : 02:07:355 (3,4,5,6) -
21:08 <cmn_891127> : 这里好容易看错啊
21:09 <cmn_891127> : 02:23:145 (1) - 关于SB
21:09 <cmn_891127> : 我觉得应该在转盘前消失掉
21:09 <Beren> : 为什么O.O
21:10 <cmn_891127> : 因为转盘突然把标题遮住好诡异
21:10 <cmn_891127> : 02:22:355 (1) - 从这点消失多好啊
21:10 <Beren> : 打水果的看会更诡异lol
21:10 <cmn_891127> : 这倒是
21:12 <cmn_891127> : 我感觉finnel应该比aoto难啊
21:12 <Beren> : 没啊 finnel
21:12 <Beren> : 是hard
21:13 <cmn_891127> : 错觉了
21:13 <cmn_891127> : tiria
21:14 <cmn_891127> : 00:44:066 (1) - 这个不紧跟着前面么
21:14 <Beren> : 嗯~
21:16 <cmn_891127> : 01:37:947 (2) - 容易在这里断，不过我感觉这样也挺好的
21:16 <Beren> : 这个我跟DRS说过 他说他找人测过没问题
21:18 <cmn_891127> : 02:10:118 (1) - 这个我感觉在这点放一个circle，slider从02:10:513 (1) - 开始
21:18 <cmn_891127> : 02:12:882 (4) - 这个结尾处的音效好诡异
21:19 <Beren> : lol
21:20 <cmn_891127> : 这几个结尾的音效都很诡异，我觉得可以用轻一点的，要不就在长线处加
21:22 <Beren> : 恩，等会让他自己看~
21:23 <cmn_891127> : 02:51:566 (？) - 这是神马
21:23 <Beren> : ..我也不知道
21:23 <cmn_891127> : 是大神那个皮肤的么？
21:24 <Beren> : 他弄的吧 不清楚
21:24 <cmn_891127> : 03:23:145 (3) - 好丑
21:26 <Beren> : ..他的他自己改~一会让他看
21:28 <cmn_891127> : saki
21:28 <cmn_891127> : 01:44:855 (1) -
21:28 <cmn_891127> : 这个很奇怪
21:28 <Beren> : 怎么奇怪了
21:29 <cmn_891127> : 改成一个覆盖的circle?
21:30 <Beren> : 覆盖的circle?
21:30 <cmn_891127> : 不要折返，slider后移1/1
21:31 <Beren> : 01:44:855呢
21:31 <cmn_891127> : 01:44:855 (1) - circle
21:31 <cmn_891127> : 01:45:250 (1) - slider
21:32 <Beren> : ..有区别吗
21:32 <cmn_891127> : 个人喜好。。。
21:32 <Beren> : = =b
21:33 <cmn_891127> : 没有问题了
21:33 <Beren> : 谢谢~
21:37 <cmn_891127> : 还有一个SB的小建议
21:37 <cmn_891127> : Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
21:37 <cmn_891127> : 可以考虑用in/out
21:39 <Beren> : 恩O.O
音乐真的超好听。。。
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
LRC-Mod
thx~

update~
Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS. (Beren) [Tiria].osu
Nadina120
135 posts
Joined March 2010
Nadina120
i very much enjoyed playing this map and the song is amazing
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
irc req from kiiwa

[General]

太懒了不看了=_=

[Saki]

00:16:829 (5) - NC
00:24:724 (5) - ^
01:48:408 (6) - ^
01:54:724 (5) - ^
02:01:040 (5) - ^

[DRS]

01:53:539 (4) - 没对好

[Finnel]
00:01:040 (1) - 一开始声音有点响，降点volume吧
02:07:750 (1) - NC吧，有点杀初见

最后一个难度找不出问题嗯:<

好图可惜没有多少星星我就不射了<3

EDIT：竟然有2KD。那就补射一个
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
from kiiwa's irc req.

很喜欢beren的图 无论SB还是图本身 都很喜欢!!

Red : Unrankable/error staff that you must fix them
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

  • [General]
  1. snap绿线
  2. [Finnel]的最后的spinner没有消音
  3. 02:51:566 - SB音效这个有点硬 应该换成更有气势一点的比如N:C1的clap
  • [Tiria]
  1. 00:37:355 (2,3,4) - ..这里发生了什么..试着把(3)向下1grid再向右1grid挪一下..test的时候因为stack的缘故我看到这里乱成一团了|||
    推荐坐标是x360，y208..然后(4)再对齐
  • [Finnel]
  1. 02:07:750 (1,2,3) - 诶？第一次打被骗在这里miss了D:
  • [Aoto]
  1. 00:46:829 (3,4) - 4有点看不清..
  • [SB]
    神SB:D (假note吓我一跳
  1. 嗯，把背景淡出去吧，可以减整整1.0的load呢。
    在//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)底下加一行，内容是

    Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
     S,0,-129,,0.625
     F,0,-129,1055,1,0
     ...
    这样如果你愿意，黑屏的元件都可以省了，因为淡出了BG的背景本身就是黑色的
  2. 此外想问一下为什么"Black Ring.png"的尺寸是800x600?
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Kiiwa asked me to mod this :P

General
the AudioLeadIn isn't the same in all diffs. open the .osu files manually and set it as 1000 in all diffs but [Finnel]
shouldn't the source be Ar Tonelico III?

[Saki]
00:43:671 (1) - the end of this spinner sounds a bit weird to me >_< it sounds better if you finish it 1/2 earlier, imo (and make its end silent)
01:37:355 (1) - omg 5 seconds on a spinner makes it reeally tiring (and boring) D: consider doing something else here
02:03:803 (1,2) - *nazi* consider making a curvy pattern on (1) -kinda like this http://puu.sh/d9A5- so (2) doesn't touch it
02:48:408 (4) - the rhythm kinda changes here so add new combo?
the following green points are unsnapped:
SPOILER
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[Tiria]
increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Diff. they're way too low for a Normal
00:57:092 (7,8) - *nazi* make (8) like this http://puu.sh/d9C4? fits better imo
03:17:224 (2) - *nazi* make it like this http://puu.sh/d9Dh?
again, unsnapped timing sections:
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also, that fake note is really confusing >< i'm not a big fan of keeping it, since this is a Normal diff. but yeah, you should check it with someone else

[Finnel]
00:30:250 (5) - *nazi* make it like this http://puu.sh/d9EE instead?
unsnapped timing sections:
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  1. 01:15:068
  2. 01:15:462
  3. 01:21:383
  4. 01:27:699
  5. 01:42:107
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  21. 03:24:344

[Aoto]
00:42:092 (1,2) - aaa (2) is pretty much hidden under (1) >_< use some other spacing?
01:44:954 - really unexpected speed up >_< consider making the SV for this slider x1,0 instead
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    lovely mapset! have a star
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
[Aoto]
01:17:816 (7) - 1 grid right
01:27:882 (1) - bad distance
01:45:447 (2) - hard to read,maybe usb new combo?

[Finnel]
00:29:263 (3) - the distance with 2and4 isn't very nice
00:30:842 (6) - same with 5and1
00:37:355 (1) - 1 grid up
00:38:539 (3) - ^when you finish it,redo this note
01:48:013 (1) - bad distance
02:10:513 (7) - you may put this note more upper
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
……kiiwa找我帮忙看我以为是外国mapper，结果是lol
那再加一点吧(英语苦逼<

Finnel里很多slide都拉的过分了一些，追求形状的话应该更加细致一点，也不用刻意追求各种样子，现在的感觉有点粗糙，有点反效果
Tiria的ar用的不是特别好，圈下来的太慢，slide有点偏快，note之间感觉挤得好紧

kds给上一个就好
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

Tiria
02:04:987 (3) - Try not to overlapped by previous slider too much (Nazi)
02:10:118 (1) - This slider is having too much repeating slider......
02:13:671 (1) - ^
02:39:329 (3) - New combo?
02:41:697 (6) - ^
02:48:408 (7) - Same issue as 02:10:118 (1)


Finnel
02:30:053 (2) - Move to another place? I feel I was miss this because it overlapped by hitbursts
02:36:368 (2) - ^
03:24:724 (1) - Why this spinner volume is not lower and lower?


Aoto
* Not sure about slider, but some slider is kinda unrankable. Just sayin'

00:42:882 (2) - Move further away from previous slider, because some player thought that it has another object in middle
00:46:829 (3) - Hmmm, I believe this slider is kinda unrankable because the tail slider is on the sliderpath, also, maybe the player will can't tell the path
01:45:053 (1) - This sudden slider speed can makes confusing for players
02:08:934 (1) - Unrankable slider, the players will can't tell the path, since the head slider is on the sliderpath (not sure if this right)
02:58:276 (2) - ^
03:19:197 (7) - New combo?
03:19:395 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:20:974 (1) - ^

Nice map~
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